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Unit 1 You and Me
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Reply to one of the posts looking for friends(回复寻友帖子)
Unit 1 You and Me
写作任务Reply to one of the posts looking for friends(回复寻友帖子)
一、审题
包文体
回复帖子(相当于一封简短的电子邮件或信件),需包含:
>称呼(对发帖人,如Dear…)
,正文(介绍自己、表达交友意愿)
,结尾礼貌语(如Hope to hear from you soon.)
>署名(你的名字)
2话题
在论坛/班级留言板上看到有人想交朋友,写回复介绍自己,表示愿意成为朋友。
3人称
>介绍自己:第一人称1
,跟对方交流:第二人称you
4时态
,一般现在时(介绍基本情况、兴趣爱好)
>可适当用一般将来时(如I hope we can.)
⑤要点
〉①问候并说明看到帖子
,②简单自我介绍(姓名、年龄、班级等)
,③介绍自己的兴趣爱好或性格特点
,④表达希望成为朋友,并询问对方或邀请回复
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、文章结构(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
问候+说明看到帖子,表明想交朋友
中间
介绍自己(姓名、年龄、爱好、性格等)
结尾
表达期待,邀请对方回复或一起活动
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词friend朋友
hobby爱好ike喜欢
词introduce介绍
same相同的
different不同的
词interesting有趣的
outgoing外向的kind善良的
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
make friends
交朋友
be interested in
对感兴趣
3
love doing love to do
喜欢做.…
the same hobby
相同的爱好
5
in my free time
在我的空闲时间
6
look forward to
期待
基础造句
1 I'm a student and I'm 12 years old.
2 I like playing basketball and reading books.
3 I want to be your friend because we have the same hobby.
4 Do you like playing chess too?
四、好词好句(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
friendly
友好的
2
helpful
乐于助人的
3
active
活跃的
4
share
分享
序号
单词
释义
5
common
共同的
加分句型
自我介绍
Let me introduce myself.My name is...
I'm from Class 1,Grade 7.
表达兴趣
I'm really into...
I spend a lot of time on...
表达交友意愿(含长句)
I think we can be good friends because we both enjoy...
It would be great to have a friend who likes the same things as me.
结尾升华句
I hope we can meet soon and have fun together.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
五、导作模板
Dear
I saw your post about looking for friends.I'd like to be your friend!
Let me introduce myself.My name is.I'm
years old and I'm in Class
Grade 7.I love
(hobby)and I often
in my free time.I'm also
(character,e.g.,friendly/outgoing)person.
I think we have a lot in common.What do you like?I hope we can be good friends.
Yours,
六、作文仿写
题目
你在学校论坛看到一条帖子:“Hi,'m new here.I want to make some friends.I like sports and
music.Who wants to be my friend?"
请写一篇回复。
范文
Dear new friend,
I saw your post and I really want to be your friend!
Let me introduce myself.My name is Li Hua.I'm 13 years old and I'm in Class 3,Grade 7.I
love sports,especially basketball.I also enjoy playing the guitar in my free time.I think we
have the same hobbies!
I'm a friendly and outgoing boy.I like talking and playing with others.What about you?Maybe
we can play basketball together after school.
I'm looking forward to your reply.Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
(字数:约100词)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1回复寻友帖:寻找笔友
约97词
Dear Tom,
I saw your post looking for a pen pal.I would be happy to be your friend!Let me introd uce
myself.
First,I am a 14-year-old boy who loves reading and playing basketball.Second,I enjoy
learning about different cultures,so writing letters is perfect for me.Third,I suggest we write
to each other once a week and share our daily life.
I believe we will have a lot to talk about.Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2
回复寻友帖:寻找学习伙伴
约94词
Dear Lisa,
I read your post about finding a study partner.I am also looking for someone to study with!
Here is my idea.
1 We can make a weekly plan and share goals every Monday.
2 We should check each other's progress every Friday and give advice.
Let's use video calls to discuss difficult subjects like math or English.
I am sure we will both improve with teamwork.Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Wang Fang