内容正文:
污教新版
U1 Friendship
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write a post about your friend(写帖子介绍朋友)
河教新版初一上Unit 1 Friendship
军作任务
Write a post about your friend(写一篇帖子介绍朋友)
一、申题
1文体
社交平台帖子(非正式文体,无需书信格式;正文直接写,可加简单署名或呢昵称)
2话题
介绍你的一个朋友,包括外貌、性格、爱好、你们一起做的事等
3人称
以第一人称I/We为主,第三人称he/she为辅
4时态
一般现在时(描述朋友日常特点)+一般过去时(若回忆某次经历)
5要点
,开头点明介绍的朋友是谁(姓名、关系)
>描述外貌或性格(1~2点)
,描述共同爱好或一起做的事(1~2点)
,表达对朋友的感受(喜欢、感谢等)
6字数
60~100词(符合初一帖子篇幅)
二、文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
引人注意,直接说出你要介绍的朋友(如:Today i want to talk about my best
friend...)
中间
分23点介绍朋友的外貌/性格/爱好+具体事例或感受
段落
内容要点
结尾
总结朋友给你的感觉,或表达祝福/感谢
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词friend朋友;kind友善的;helpful乐于助人的;funny有趣的;smat聪明的;Iike喜欢;
together一起;share分享
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
y
best friend
最好的朋友
2
look like
看起来像.
3
be good at
擅长
4
play together
一起玩
help each other
互相帮助
6
have fun
玩得开心
>
talk about
谈论
基础造句
1She has long hair and big eyes.
2 He is very kind and always helps me with my homework.
3 We like playing basketball together after school.
4I enjoy talking with him because he is funny.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
cheerful
开朗的
2
patient
耐心的
3
talented
有扌华的
4
honest
诚实的
5
talented
有亨华的
6
mea ningful
有意义的
unforgettable
难忘的
加分句型
外貌描写句
She has a round face and always wears a big smile.
He is tall and strong,with short black hair.
性格描军句
What I like most about her is that she is always honest.
He is so patient that he never gets angry when I ask questions.
共同活动句
We often go to the library together and read our favourite books.
Last weekend,we went to the park and had a wonderful time.
总结感受句
I am lucky to have such a good friend.
She makes my school life more colourful and fun.
A true friend is like a sunshine in your life.
五、
写作模板
Post标题(可省略):My Best Friend
正文:
Today I want to share something about my friend,
First,let me tell you what he/she looks like
(外貌).He/She is very
(性
格).For example,(事例).
We like doing many things together.We usually
(活动1).Sometimes we
(2).I enjoy every moment with him/her because
(理由).
I feel happy to have such a wonderful friend.I hope our friendship will last forever.
六、作文仿写
范文
My Best Friend
Today I want to share something about my friend,Li Ming
First,let me tell you what he looks like.He is tall and has short black hair.He always wears
glasses and a big smile.He is very kind and helpful.For example,last week I had trouble with
my maths homework,and he spent half an hour explaining it to me.
We like doing many things together.We usually play basketball on the playground after
school.Sometimes we go to the library and read storybooks.I enjoy every moment with him
because he makes me laugh and learn.
I feel happy to have such a wonderful friend.I hope our friendship will last forever.
Tim
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍朋友的性格与爱好
约97词
My best friend is Li Ming.He is tall and wears glasses,with a warm smile.
He is kind and always ready to help others.
2 He loves reading and playing basketball.We often play together after school.
3 He is also good at English and often helps me with my homework.
I really enjoy spending time with him.He makes my school life more fun and meaningful.I
hope our friendship will last forever.
拓展范文2介绍朋友的特长与共同经历
约95词
I want to tell you about my friend Zhang Wei.
He is an outgoing boy with short black hair.
He is very talented in drawing and won several art prizes.
We often go to the library together and share our favorite books.
He is not only a good friend but also a great listener.Whenever I feel upset,he cheers me up.
I'm lucky to have a friend like him.