Unit 3 Feelings and Emotions 写作精讲精练-2026-2027学年八年级英语上册单元话题写作精讲（北师大版）

北师大新版 Unit 3 Feelings and Emotions 初二上 写作精讲精练 写作话题·An Essay on an Emotional Experience (记叙一次情绪经历) 北师大新版初二上Unit3 Feelings and Emotions 写作任务An Essay on an Emotional Experience(记叙一次情绪经历) 一、审题 包文体 记叙文（叙事类短文），要求讲述一次具体的情绪体验过程 2话题 描述自己经历过的某种强烈情感（如快乐、悲伤、害怕、感动、愤怒等） 3人称 第一人称1为主（讲述自己的经历和感受） 4时态 一般过去时（描述事件经过）+一般现在时（结尾谈感悟或现状） 5要点 ，交代事件发生的时间、地点、起因（背景） ,描述事件经过，突出情绪变化的过程 ，写出当时的感受（身体反应、心理活动或具体表现） 〉结尾点明这次经历对你的影响或你从中获得的感悟 6字数 80~100词（初中标准要求） 二 文章结构（三段式） 段落 内容要点 开头 交代时间、地点、事件背景，引出当时的情绪 Last month,I took part in an English speech contest.I felt so nervous that my heart beat fast. 段落 内容要点 中间 详细描述事件经过，突出情绪如何产生、如何发展，以及你当时的具体表现或感受 可按时间顺序写：开始→过程中→高潮 结合动作、表情、心理活动等细节 结尾 总结这次经历，表达你从中获得的体会或成长 例如：Though I was scared at first,,I learned that trying bravely is more important than winning. 三、 核心组词造句 核心词汇 词情绪名称：happy,sad,angry,scared,excited,,nervous,.surprised,proud,moved 词情绪变化：feel,become,change,appear,,disappear 词动作表现：shake,cry,laugh,run away,hug,shout 词时间线索：last week,yesterday,one day,.at first,then,finally 常用短语 序号 短语 释义 1 feel+情绪形容词 感到… 2 be full of+情绪名词 充满… 3 can't help doing sth. 忍不住做某事 one of the most+形容词+ 最.…的经历之一 4 experiences 5 learn a lesson from... 从.中学到教训/道理 短语例句 1I felt very nervous before the exam. 2 My heart was full of fear. 3I couldn't help crying when I heard the bad news. 4 It was one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life. 5I learned a lesson from this emotional experience. 基础造句（一般过去时） 1 The moment I saw the result,I felt so excited that I jumped up and down. 2 When my best friend moved away,I felt sad and lonely. 3I was scared at first,but later I calmed down and finished the task. 四、好词好句（更详细） 高级好词 序号 单词 释义 y unforgettable 难忘的 2 emotional 情绪化的/感人的 3 overcome 克服（恐惧、困难等） 4 comfort 安慰 5 inspire 激励 o courage 勇气 7 relief 释然/解脱 加分句型 描述情绪产生的句型 ,A wave of+情绪名词+washed over me. A wave of panic washed over me when I realized I lost my wallet. ,I was filled with+情绪名词 I was filled with joy when I saw my parents waiting for me. ,The+情绪名词+was so strong that+句子 The fear was so strong that I couldn't say a word. 描写动作+情绪的复合句 Tears ran down my cheeks as i read the letter. My hands were shaking,and my voice was uncertain. I tried to hide my anger,but my face turned red. 结尾升华句型 This experience taught me that... This experience taught me that failure is not the end;it is a new beginning. Looking back,I realize that... Looking back,I realize that even sadness can make us stronger. From then on,I have learned to... From then on,I have learned to face difficulties with courage. 五、写作模板 Title(可自拟，如A Moment of Fear/My Happiest Day) Paragraph1(背景+情绪引出) Last (时间)，1 (事件)，At first,I felt (情绪) Paragraph2(经过+情绪变化+细节) When (具体情景)，1 (动作/反应).My (身体部位) (具体表现).I wanted to but Then, (转折/变化)，I started to feel (新的情绪) Paragraph3(感悟+结尾) This experience taught me that Now I believe 六、作文仿写 范文1 A Moment of Fear Last Tuesday,I had a test in biology class.When the teacher handed out the papers,I felt so nervous that my heart beat fast. When I saw the first question,my mind went blank.I tried to calm down,but my hands started shaking.I took a deep breath and told myself,"Just do your best."Slowly,I began to answer the questions.By the end of the exam,I was much more relaxed. This experience taught me that fear can make things worse,but staying calm can help a lot. Now I know how to control my feelings in difficult times. (93词) 范文2 My Happiest Day Last Saturday,my family held a small party for my mother's birthday.I had prepared a gift secretly for a whole week.At first,I was a little nervous because I was afraid my mother wouldn't like it. When I gave the gift to her,she opened it and smiled widely.She hugged me tightly and said, "Thank you,my dear!"I felt so happy that tears almost came to my eyes.Everyone clapped and laughed.The whole room was full of warmth and joy. That day made me realize that love and happiness come from sharing with the people we care about. (95词) 注意事项 √全文使用一般过去时，动词要变形（规则/不规则侧） ,情绪描写要具体，避免只用happy/sad等单调词汇，可结合动作、表情、心理词 ’结尾务必写出感悟或成长，这是本单元写作任务的核心要求 拓展范文背诵积累 拓展范文1 参加演讲比赛后的兴奋 约96词 Last week,I took part in an English speech contest.I was extremely nervous before going on stage.My heart raced and my palms sweated.But I took a deep breath and started speaking. To my surprise,the audience listened attentively,and I gradually became confident.After I finished,they applauded warmly.I felt a huge wave of joy and relief. This experience taught me that courage can turn fear into success.I will never forget that thrilling moment. 拓展范文2和朋友吵架后的难过与和解 约98词 Yesterday,I had a big quarrel with my best friend over a small misunderstanding.I felt angry and hurt,and we didn't talk for the whole afternoon. Later,I realized I was too stubborn.I decided to apologize sincerely.When I said sorry,she hugged me and we both cried. I felt a deep sense of relief and warmth.This experience showed me that friendship is more important than winning an arg ument.