内容正文:
北师大新版
Unit 1 Family
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·An Email Introducing Your Family
(写邮件介绍家人)
This Is My Family(短文介绍自己的家庭)
北师大新版初一上Unit1 Family
写作任务An Email Introducing Your Family/This Is My Family(写邮件介绍家人/短文介绍
自己的家庭)
一、
申题
1文体
邮件/短文(邮件的格式需有称呼、正文、祝福语、署名;短文则直接写正文)
2话题
向朋友或笔友介绍自己的家庭成员(姓名、年龄、职业、爱好、性格等)
3人称
以第一人称I/my为主,介绍家人时用he/she/they
4时态
一般现在时
5要点
,开头问候,点明写信/写短文的目的(例如:很高兴给你介绍我的家人)
,介绍2~4位家庭成员(爸爸、妈妈、兄弟姐妹等)
,每位成员至少说出一个特点(年龄、工作、爱好或性格)
,结尾表达对家人的爱或期待对方的回复
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
文章结构(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
问候+引出主题(我想向你介绍我的家庭)
段落
内容要点
中间
分条或分段介绍2~4位家庭成员,每段给出1~2个信息
结尾
总结家庭氛围(如:我们很幸福)十期待对方回信或祝福
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词family家庭;father爸爸;mother妈妈;brother兄弟;sister姐妹
词grandparent祖父母;parent父母;job工作;teacher老师;doctor医生
词student学生;hobby爱好;kind善良的;friendly友好的;happy幸福的
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
a family of four
四口之家
2
work as a...
从事..工作
3
like love doing sth.
喜欢做某事
4
be good at
擅长
5
help each other
互相帮助
6
have a great time
过得愉快
7
live with
和一起住
基础造句
□There are three people in my family,.我家有三口人。
2 My father is a doctor,He works in a hospital..我爸爸是一名医生,他在医院工作。
3 My mother likes cooking.She often cooks delicious food for us.我妈妈喜欢做饭,她经常为我们做美
味的食物。
4 I have a younger brother..He is very cute and friendly.我有一个弟弟,他非常可爱又友好。
5 We love each other and always help each other.我们彼此相爱,总是互相帮助。
四、好词好句
(便更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
cheerful
开朗的,快乐的
2
hard-working
勤劳的
3
patient
耐心的
序号
单词
释义
4
outgoing
外向的
5
humorous
幽默的
6
take care of
照顾
>
spend time together
起度过时光
加分句型
「介绍人数
There are...people in my family,my...and I.
介绍职业
My father works as a...and he is very busy but always cares about us.
介绍爱好
In his free time,he enjoys...
My sister is interested in...
表达感情
I love my family because they always support me.
No matter how busy we are,we always have dinner together.
结尾升华
This is my warm and happy family.I hope you can meet them one day.
Do you want to tell me about your family?I'm looking forward to your reply.
五、写作模板
(邮件版)
Dear
How are you?I'm writing to tell you about my family.
There are
people in my family:my
my
and I.My father is a
He likes_
My mother is
She is good at
I have a
(brother/sister).He/She is
years old and enjoys
We often
together.
I love my family very much.They make me feel warm and happy.
Please write back and tell me about your family.
Yours,
六、作文仿写
题目
假设你是李华,给你的笔友Ay写一封邮件介绍你的家庭成员。
范文
Dear Amy,
How are you?I'm writing to tell you about my family.
There are four people in my family:my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.My
father is a teacher.He works in a middle school.He likes reading books after work.My mother
is a doctor.She is very kind and patient.She takes good care of us.My brother is eight years
old.He is outgoing and loves playing football.We often go to the park together on weekends.
This is my warm and happy family.I love them very much.
Would you like to share something about your family?I'm looking forward to your email.
Yours,
Li Hua
说明
>若题目要求写短文(This Is My Family).,可将“Dear Amy"和结尾的“Yours,,Li Hua"去掉,直接以正文
形式呈现,并在最后加上一句总结。
>所有词汇和句式均控制在初一上难度,适合学生模仿与练习。
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1向笔友介绍家人
约94词
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to be your new pen pal.Now let me introduce my family.
I have a warm family of four.My father is a doctor and he works very hard.My mother is a
teacher;she is kind and patient.My younger sister is only six,and she loves drawing.As for
me,I'm a middle school student who enjoys reading.
Every weekend we often take a walk together.I feel lucky to have such a loving family.
What about yours?Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2向朋友介绍家人
约97词
Dear Sarah,
You asked about my family,so here is a short introd uction.
First,my father is a chef who cooks delicious food for us.Second,my mother is a nurse,and
she always cares about others.Third,I have an elder brother;he is a college student and
teaches me math sometimes.
My family is small but very close.We often watch movies or play board games on weekends.I
think family is the most important thing in life.
Hope to hear about yours soon.
Yours,
Amy