Unit2 Honesty 书面表达（专项训练）-2026-2027学年译林版（三起）英语六年级上册

**基本信息** 以“Honesty”为主题，通过三步法（审题-提纲-素材）构建书面表达体系，分层范文覆盖不同水平，强化语言能力与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作思路引导|1套|审题抓4要点（含义/事例/好处/做法）、搭建三段式提纲、核心短语句型分类|从“诚实概念”到“生活实例”再到“行动建议”，形成“定义-论证-应用”逻辑链| |范文示例|3篇（基础/进阶/拔高）|时态区分技巧（过去时叙事/现在时观点）、句式升级方法|通过词汇句式梯度设计，体现从基础表达到高阶思维的提升路径| |答题解析|1份|得分点（要点/时态/短语/词数）、高频易错点（冠词/动词时态）|聚焦语言准确性与规范性，强化学习能力中的策略运用| |拓展练习|1题|方法迁移应用（主题变式写作）|巩固“问题-影响-解决”表达框架，提升思维品质的迁移能力|

译林版（三起）新版六年级上册 书面表达 Unit2 Honesty  单元主题：Honesty 诚实 书面表达题目： 在我们生活中，诚实非常重要。请以 Honesty in my life 为题，写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1. 词数60‑80词； 2. 谈谈你对诚实的理解；结合生活事例；说说我们应该怎么做； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 ✍写作思路引导（给学生的思考提示） · 第一步：审题抓要点（4个得分点，写作必须全部覆盖） ① 诚实是什么（简单解释） ② 举1个生活小例子：做错事/犯错之后，说谎会怎样，讲真话会怎样 ③ 诚实的好处：收获信任、朋友 ④ 我们平时应当如何做（2条建议） · 第二步：搭建写作提纲 Para1开头：点题，Honesty is very important in our life. Para2中间：举事例，写自己或者同学犯错的小故事（一般过去时） Para3结尾：谈做法、总结感悟 · 第三步：本单元作文可用短语&句型（摘抄素材） 短语 1. tell the truth 讲真话 2. tell lies 说谎 3. make mistakes 犯错误 4. be honest to sb 对某人诚实 5. get others’ respect 得到别人的尊重 6. make more friends 交更多朋友 句型 1. Honesty is … 诚实是…… 2. When we make mistakes, we should … 当我们犯错时，我们应该…… 3. If we tell lies, people will not believe us. 如果我们说谎，人们将不会相信我们。 4. I think we should … 我认为我们应该…… ⚠时态提醒：描述过去发生的事例用一般过去时；观点、道理用一般现在时，考试高频易错！ · 范文1｜基础版（62词，适合基础薄弱学生，保底得分） Honesty in my life Honesty is very important in our life. It means we should tell the truth and not tell lies. Last week, I broke my deskmate’s pencil-box. I felt afraid at first. But I told him the truth and said sorry. He was not angry with me. I think when we make mistakes, we should be honest. Honesty can help us make more friends. · 范文2｜进阶版（74词，大多数学生，考试主流） Honesty in my life Honesty is one of the best virtues for us. It means we must tell the truth and be honest to people around us. Yesterday I made a mistake. I spilt water on my English book. I wanted to tell a lie, but I didn’t. I told my mother everything. She was not angry. She praised me for my honesty. If we often tell lies, nobody will believe us. When we do something wrong, please tell the truth. · 范文3｜拔高考试版（82词，冲高分，词汇句式丰富，适合优生） Honesty in my life Honesty plays an important role in our daily life. Being honest means telling the truth instead of telling lies, even when we are in trouble. Last month, I accidentally broke the window in our classroom. No one saw that. I felt so afraid. But I didn’t tell a lie. I told my teacher the truth and said sorry. My teacher said I was a brave and honest child. Telling lies will bring us more trouble. When we make mistakes, we should face them bravely. Honesty helps us win others’ respect and real friendship. ✍作文答题解析&评分要点（教师用） 得分点 1. 要点齐全：诚实含义 + 生活实例（过去时）+ 道理 + 做法建议 2. 时态区分：事例用一般过去时；观点道理用一般现在时 3. 使用单元核心短语：tell the truth / tell lies / make mistakes / be honest to 4. 词数控制60‑85之间 高频扣分易错点 1.  honest 前面冠词：an honest boy，不要写成a honest boy 2. tell lies固定短语，lie要用复数lies 3. 讲述过去事例动词要变过去式，很多学生写成原形 4. don’t / shouldn’t 后面用动词原形 ✨拓展练习题（给学生练笔） 备选作文题目二： 根据提示写短文，词数60‑80。 题目：Don’t tell lies 提示：1.说谎是坏习惯；2.说谎带来麻烦；3.犯错要讲真话；4.要做诚实的孩子。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文 Don’t tell lies Telling lies is a very bad habit in our life. If we often tell lies, other people will not believe us. It will bring us much trouble. When we make mistakes, we may feel afraid. But we should not tell lies. We need to tell the truth. Last week, I made a mistake. I didn’t lie to my parents. They were glad that I was honest. Try to be honest every day. Honesty can help us get real friendship and respect. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $