内容正文:
Unit 1 You and Me
Section B What do we need to know about a new friend? (2a~2b)
主题情境·Andy给Pauline或Peter
回帖交朋友
七年级上
At the end of the class, we are able to:
1. use proper sentence structures to introduce ourselves;
2. complete our reply to Pauline or Peter to make friends.
Learning Objectives
There is a girl in the video. What is she doing? Let’s take a look.
点击播放视频
She is __________________. She wants to ______ _______ with others.
Name
Age
Country
Favourite food
Favourite color
Favourite animal
introducing herself
make
friends
Hope
Andy saw two posts on the school forum.
Pauline Lee
Hi, I’m Pauline Lee, and I’m 14 years old. I live in Singapore with my big family. I have a pet bird. It’s a parrot. Her name is Coco. She even speaks some Chinese! My favourite sport is tennis. I often play it with my friends after school. Do you want to be my friend?
1. What is the name of this girl?
3. Which country does she come from?
4. Who does she live with?
5. Does she have a pet?
2. How old is she?
6. What is her favorite sport?
7. What is she trying to do?
Read Pauline’s post and answer the questions.
name
age
family
pet
hope
Structure
Beginning
Body
Ending
country
Pauline Lee
Hi, I’m Pauline Lee, and I’m 14 years old. I live in Singapore with my big family. I have a pet bird. It’s a parrot. Her name is Coco. She even speaks some Chinese! My favourite sport is tennis. I often play it with my friends after school. Do you want to be my friend?
favourite sport
greetings
Read and think
Peter Brown
Hey there! My name is Peter Brown. I’m 13 years old. I’m from London, in the UK. Now, I live in Beijing with my parents. My favourite food is Beijing roast duck, and my favourite place is the Great wall! I like music and I play the guitar in the school band. Would you like to be my friend?
1. What is the name of this boy?
3. Which country does he come from?
4. Who does he live with?
2. How old is he?
5. What is his favorite food/place?
7. What is he trying to do?
6. What is his hobby?
Read Peter’s post and answer the questions.
name
age
family
favourite food/place
hope
Beginning
Body
Ending
country
hobby
greetings
Peter Brown
Hey there! My name is Peter Brown. I’m 13 years old. I’m from London, in the UK. Now, I live in Beijing with my parents. My favourite food is Beijing roast duck, and my favourite place is the Great Wall. I like music, and I play the guitar in the school band. Would you like to be my friend?
Structure
Read and think
Andy sat in front of the computer, thinking about how to introduce himself.
He is typing, and he sees his thoughts become words on the screen.
Name
Age
Country
Hobby/…
2a Write some sentences about yourself using the structures below.
· My name is ___________.
· I’m _______ years old.
· I live in __________.
· I love __________.
· My favourite food is ________________.
· My favourite sport is _____________.
· My favourite place is _______________
__________________________
· ...
name
age
country
hobby
favourite food
favourite sport
favourite place
Andy
13
Beijing
rock music
Kung Pao Chicken
badminton
China Science
and Technology Museum.
And then, Andy wrote a framework(框架) for replying(回复) to Peter. Because they have the same hobbies.
2b Complete your reply to Pauline or Peter
to make friends.
Andy
13
Beijing
playing the guitar
food
This shows that the message is a Reply (or Response) to the previous(先前的) messages.
Andy
Kung Pao Chicken
Name
Name
Age
Country/City
Hobby/Food/…
Hobby/Food/…
…
主题:文体:
人称:
时态:
自我介绍
应用文
第一人称
一般现在时
Hello, Peter! My name is Peter. I’m 12 years old. I live in Beijing. I’d like to be your friend. I love playing the guitar too. My favourite food is Kung Pao Chicken.
Please write to me.
Andy在校园贴吧上看到了Peter的帖子,想跟Peter交朋友。假如你是Andy Smith,请向Peter介绍你的基本信息、兴趣爱好等情况,写一篇英语短文介绍自己。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 注意语法、拼写和标点的正确使用;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
一阶:审好题,定方向
文体:应用文
主题:介绍自己
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
要点:①介绍自己的基本信息;②介绍自己的兴趣爱好;③其他
二阶:列框架,写句子
开头
介绍自己的基本信息
1. Hello, Peter! / Hi, Peter!
2. My name is.... / I’m....
3. My English name is....
4. I’m very happy to be here and introduce myself.
5. I’m very glad to tell you something about me.
中间
介绍年龄、爱好、性格等其他信息
关于年龄、家乡和家庭:
①I am...years old.
②I come from / I am from..., China.
③I live in...with my parents.
④I have a small/big family.
2.关于外貌与性格:
①I am a tall/short boy/girl.
②I have big eyes and black hair.
③I am an outgoing/friendly/quiet person.
3.关于爱好与特长:
①I like/love/enjoy (playing) basketball/...
②My favourite sport is....
③In my free time, I often read books/listen to music/....
④I am good at (playing) the piano/drawing/English/....
4.关于其他喜爱的事物:
①My favourite colour is blue/red/...
②My favourite food is dumplings/Pizza/noodles/...
③My favourite animal is dog/cat/...
结尾
总结与期望
1. All in all, / In a word/...
2. I am a nice and friendly boy/girl.
3. I hope we can be good friends.
4. Would you like to be my friend?
5. Please write to me soon!
此范文选自《初中英语 教材写作 名校满分作文与中考新方向》
Hello, Peter! I’m Andy Smith. My first name is Andy and my last name is Smith. I’m very happy to be here and introduce myself.
巧妙使用be happy to do sth 句型引出主题,承上启下,使文章过渡自然,表达紧凑
三阶:巧衔接,赏美文
I’m eleven years old and I am studying in Class 1, Grade 7 at Guang Ming Middle School. My phone number is 555-7824. I like reading books about history and trying different kinds of food. I also like sports, such as basketball and volleyball, because they help me stay strong and healthy.
I love music too! In my free time, I like listening to English songs. They help me relax and feel happy.
用because引导的原因状语从句扩写原因,使内容饱满
All in all, I’m an outgoing and friendly boy. Would you like to be my friend?
用all in all 总结,紧扣主题。类似表达还有in a word, in short, to sum up等。
I hope Peter and I can become good friends!
Checklist Point(s)
Content Greetings/Intention(意图) (2 points)
Name & age & country & family & pet & favorite sport/ food/place & hobby (3 points)
Hope (2 points)
Structure Beginning Body Ending (3 points)
Expressions Good expressions (2 points)
No mistakes (grammar, tense, spelling) (2 points)
Handwriting clean & tidy (1 point)
Check your partner’s article according to the checklist.
Writing: Write a reply to Pauline or Peter to make friends.
Summary
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