续写：游戏还是朋友 课件-2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦读后续写专题，依据高考评价体系梳理了情节逻辑构建、语言运用规范、情感主题升华三大考查维度，通过5W+1H要素分析和伏笔线索提取，明确了“情节衔接”“情感升华”等高频考点分布，构建了完整的答题思路框架。 课件亮点在于“伏笔运用+语言仿写+范文精析”的备考策略，如以“游戏与友情”语篇为例，指导学生用only倒装句强化逻辑，仿写“diving into”结构提升语言能力，培养思维品质。特设“情节模板”和“错误警示”，帮助学生掌握得分技巧，教师可据此精准教学，助力高考冲刺。

读后续写： 要游戏还是要朋友？ Michael loved playing Legend of Starfell on his computer. Every day, he eagerly logged in, diving into the vibrant world of the game. He quickly became the expert among his friends, showing them the hidden tools and tricks he had discovered. Their game group chat always buzzed with excitement. However, one day while playing online, his enthusiasm turned into frustration. As he instructed his friends on what to do, he shouted at them when they made mistakes. “Michael, stop yelling,” his friend Mark said over the headset, sounding annoyed. “Yeah, I’m just trying to have fun here,” Jay added. Michael felt a wave of frustration wash over him. The joy of the game was slipping away, drowned out by the constant noise of his friends. After that incident, Michael decided to play on his own. He thought it would be better to focus without them. Often, he was deep into a game when his friends wanted to start a new one. Ignoring their messages, he continued his solo adventures. As summer vacation began, Michael spent entire days lost in Legend of Starfell. The game’s colorful landscapes and exciting quests pulled him in completely. Meanwhile, his friends made plans to hang out, but he chose to stay home and play games instead, thinking he was having more fun. By the end of summer, Michael’s progress had slowed. Even though he was ranked high, he couldn’t reach the “elite pro” level, and the game started to feel dull. The chat, once lively, had gone silent for weeks. His friends had stopped calling him, and when he tried to reach out, they were often busy or uninterested. As summer came to an end, Michael felt a deep sense of loneliness. He realized he had spent so much time gaming that he had nothing except tired eyes and a heavy heart. Feeling empty, he knew it was time for a change.____________________________________________ The game group chat lit up with their voices again. ________________________________________________ 情节要素(5W+1H)  Who：______________    When: _________________  Where: _________________ What(冲突/问题): _______________________________ Why:______________________________ How:  ______________________________ Michael, Mark, Jay every day→one day→after the incident→summer vacation began→by the end of summer Michael家里（电脑前，线上游戏世界） 对朋友大吼→疏远→孤独 真正的快乐来自于？ 游戏不顺,冲朋友发泄→认为独乐更好,疏远→慢慢丢失友情。 独自沉迷游戏→游戏变得乏味,朋友失联→空虚孤独,意识到问题,想改变。 全文伏笔汇总（续写可用线索） 伏笔1：Every day, he eagerly logged in, diving into the vibrant world of the game. Potential usage：呼应情节，退出游戏，陷入沉思 伏笔2：Their game group chat always buzzed with excitement.Potential usage：呼应情节，结尾群聊总要重新活跃。续写需要道歉和解。 伏笔3：After that incident, Michael decided to play on his own. He thought it would be better to focus without them. Potential usage：道歉的内容/事后的发现；句式it is best to do.../only when+倒装 伏笔4：关于游戏群聊的声音：buzz, noises, voice Potential usage：情绪走向何方？ 你的伏笔？ 情节构建  第一段（开头句：Feeling empty, he knew it was time for a change.） 任务：写内心反思 + 行动（见面） 1）心理： 2）动作： 3）对话/环境：（过渡到第二段） 第二段（开头句：The game group chat lit up with their voices again.） 任务：写回应、见面、升华主题 1）动作： 2）情绪： 3）升华：感悟——真正的快乐、朋友的重要性、长久的幸福...... 怎么用英语表达？ 语言构建  最近的记背/我擅长用的词汇和句型 Every day, he eagerly logged in, diving into the vibrant world of the game. 他迫不及待地登录进去，一头扎进了那个生机勃勃的游戏世界。 仿写练习  1. 每天下午,她都急切地查看check班级群聊,一头扎进最新八卦和作业提醒中。 Every afternoon, she eagerly checked the class group chat, diving into the latest gossip and homework reminders. 2. 每天中午，他们都兴奋地冲向食堂，一头扎进plung into午餐时分美味又混乱的场面中。 Every noon, they excitedly rushed to the canteen, plunging into the delicious chaos of lunchtime. 3. 每个课间，他们都迅速聚在窗边，一头扎进关于昨晚足球赛的热烈讨论中。 Every break, they quickly gathered by the window, diving into a heated discussion about the football game last night. 4. 每个周一，他都不情不愿地从床上爬起来，踏入又一个漫长的上课周。 Every Monday, he unwillingly dragged himself out of bed, stepping into another long week of classes. Their game group chat always buzzed with excitement. 他们的游戏群聊总是兴奋而热闹非凡。 仿写练习  1. 我们班微信群在晚自习课间总是因笑声而炸开了锅。 Our class WeChat group always exploded with laughter during the evening self-study break. 2. 奶奶家的餐桌总是因温暖和无尽的话匣子而嗡嗡作响。 The dinner table at my grandma's always hummed with warmth and endless chatter. 3. 那个空荡荡的聊天室终于因犹豫的“你好”和尴尬的表情包emojis而重新闪烁flick起来。 The empty chat room finally flickered back to life with hesitant hellos and awkward emojis. After that incident, Michael decided to play on his own. He thought it would be better to focus without them.那件事之后，迈克尔决定独自玩。他觉得没有他们在身边，自己更能集中注意力。 仿写练习  1. 那次家庭争吵之后，我姐姐决定去图书馆学习。她觉得没有他们在，学习会更安静、更专注。 After that family argument, my sister decided to study in the library. She thought it would be quieter to focus without them. 2. 短暂思考之后，迈克尔决定先主动联系。他觉得不多想、直接道歉反而会更勇敢。After a brief moment of thought, Michael decided to reach out first. He thought it would be braver to apologise without overthinking it. 常用句式之only倒装句  1. 只有当他不再把游戏当作一场单人竞赛时，他的排名才真正开始再次上升。 Only when he stopped treating the game as a solo race did his rank truly begin to climb again. 2. 只有当他放下骄傲，重新和朋友们并肩作战时，游戏才再次变得新鲜而激动人心——而且令人惊讶的是，他的升级速度比以往任何时候都快。 Only when he let go of his pride and played alongside his friends again did the game feel fresh and exciting once more — and surprisingly, his level went up faster than ever. 3. 只有当他意识到游戏不只是一个输赢的较量，更是与他人分享快乐时，他的技术才达到了一个全新的高度——而排名也就水到渠成了。 Only when he realised that the game wasn't about winning alone, but about sharing the joy with others, did his skills reach a whole new level — and his rank followed naturally. Para1: Feeling empty, he knew it was time for a change. Aware of his foolish behavior, Michael closed the game and sighed quietly. He eventually realized that his desire for game rankings had ruined his precious friendship. Determined to fix the relationship, he connected with his friends without hesitation, apologizing sincerely for his rude and bad-tempered behavior before. As was expected, his generous friends did not blame him at all and replied to him warmly. Later, Michael suggested meeting up in person to bond again, which was approved immediately. During the gathering, they shared sweet memories and made new plans for hiking, watching movies and studying together. Michael gradually understood that true happiness came from real friendship rather than virtual game achievements. 内心倍感空虚,他知道是时候做出改变了。意识到自己荒唐的所作所为,迈克尔关掉游戏、静静叹息。他终于明白,自己对游戏排名的执念毁掉了珍贵的友情。下定决心修复这段关系,他毫不犹豫地联系了朋友们,真诚为自己此前粗鲁、暴躁的行为道歉。正如他所料,大度的朋友们丝毫没有责怪他,反而热情地回复了他。之后迈克尔提议线下相聚、重归于好,大家立刻欣然同意。聚会期间,他们畅谈美好的回忆,约定了徒步、观影、共同学习的新计划。迈克尔渐渐懂得，真正的快乐来源于真实的友谊，而非虚拟的游戏成就。 Paragraph 2 The game group chat lit up with their voices again. Delighted and grateful, Michael began to cherish every chance to play and communicate with his friends. This time, he never shouted angrily but offered sincere encouragement in the game. His friends not only encouraged him to enjoy every moment of teamwork but also taught him proper ways to deal with daily activities - chatting, hanging out and shopping. Gradually, all of them witnessed a warm-hearted boy shaped by patience and carefulness. Even if they failed some game matches, they would laugh it off and comfort each other. The group chat was full of both game strategies and daily life shares. Michael came to a deep understanding that games were just entertain- ment, while friendship was the most precious treasure in his life. 游戏群聊再次热闹如初。满心喜悦、心怀感恩，迈克尔开始珍惜每一次和朋友玩耍、交流的机会。这一次，他不再暴躁吼叫，而是在游戏中给予大家真诚的鼓励。朋友们不仅鼓励他好好享受团队相处的每时每刻，还教会了他聊天、玩乐、逛街等各类日常活动的相处方式。渐渐地，所有人都见证了这个因耐心细致、变得内心温暖的男孩。即便输掉对局，他们也会一笑置之、彼此安慰。群聊里既有游戏攻略，也充满了日常点滴。迈克尔深刻领悟：游戏只是消遣，真挚的友情才是人生最珍贵的财富。 $