Unit 1 The Changing World 单元话题书面表达-2026-2027学年九年级英语上册单元练习（人教版）

**基本信息** 围绕“变化”主题的初中英语书面表达专项单元卷，含10道题，适配Unit 1复习，聚焦语言能力与思维品质培养，通过真实情境提升表达与分析对比能力。 **题型特征** |题型|题量/分值|知识覆盖|命题特色| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |书面表达|10题|涵盖家乡、城市、个人、社会等多维度变化描述，涉及过去与现在对比、时态运用（一般过去时/现在完成时）及观点表达|情境具时代性（如“绿水青山就是金山银山”环保主题、科技发展）；问题分基础（必拿分，如家乡变化要点写作）与重难（高分突破，如多维度对比邮件）梯度；契合核心素养，提升语言表达能力与逻辑思维品质|

Unit 1 The Changing World 单元话题书面表达练习 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 时代变迁 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．某英文网站正在举办以 “Changes in My Hometown” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文介绍你家乡的变化，参加此次活动。要点提示： 1. 家乡过去的样子（道路、房屋、休闲活动）； 2. 家乡现在发生的变化； 3. 你的感受与愿望。 要求： 1. 词数：80 词左右； 2. 必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，时态恰当。 Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想了解你家乡的变化。请你写一篇80‑100词的英语短文，介绍家乡过去和现在的变化。 要点提示： 1. 过去：房子旧，道路窄，出行不方便； 2. 现在：高楼多，道路宽阔，环境变好； 3. 你的感受。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．近几年来，随着国家的快速发展，我们居住的城市发生了很大变化，人们的生活方式也相应地改变，同时也带来一些环境问题。请根据以下提示，以“Changes of My City”为题，写一篇英语作文，讲述城市的变化及人民生活水平的提高并写出你对城市未来的期望。 In the past Now Transportation buses, bikes e-bikes, e-cars, subway Life services Leisure activity shop in markets, watch TV at home, play cards.. online shopping, play in community squares, travel abroad Living environment dirty rivers, few trees clean, flowers... Problem and expectation（期望） …… 要求 1）内容完整，意思连贯语句通顺，书写规范； 2）字数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes of My City In recent years, with the rapid development of our country, great changes have taken place in the city we live in. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．改革开放以来，中国从开启新时期到跨入新世纪，从站上新起点到进入新时代，人民生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。请你以“Changes in People’s Lives”为题，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈新时代人们的生活变化。内容包括： 1. 饮食习惯； 2. 休闲活动； 3. 对阅读和旅游的看法。 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：entertainment (n. 娱乐), gain (v. 获得), reform and opening-up (改革开放) Changes in People’s Lives Hello, everybody! Today I’d like to say something about people’s lives in the new era. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．春去冬来，现在你已经进入到九年级，初中生活就快结束了。回想过去两年的学习和生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？也成长了许多？请你就此写一篇英语短文，谈一谈这两年多，你身上发生了哪些变化以及你对这些变化的看法。 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80～100。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．中国的新面貌令世界震惊，请按照写作要求，围绕living conditions, technologies和the environment三个方面，以“New Looks in China”为题写一篇英语短文，说说你感受到的身边变化，向你校校报投稿。 写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息； 2. 文章需包括所给要点，条理清晰，语句通顺，可适当发挥； 3. 词数不少于90，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 New Looks in China China has shown new looks to the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．随着社会的不断进步、科学技术的迅猛发展，我们的生活也在迅速变化着。请你以Changes in People’s Life为题，根据下列写作要点写一篇短文，介绍生活中联系方式、交通、住房等方面发生的变化。 写作要点：1. What was People’s life like in the past? 2. What’s People’s life like now? 3. What brings the changes? 写作要求：1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3. 词数80-120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in People’s Life Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the last few years. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．少年智则国智，少年强则国强。作为祖国未来的接班人，青少年的健康成长尤为重要。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己初中三年的成长变化。请你根据以下提示，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。 1．要点：(1)What did you use to be? (2)What are you like now? (3)How do you feel about these changes? 2．要求：(1)文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；(2)词数100左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 重难语篇练习 9．假设你是李华。你的小学同学Wei Ming跟随父母去了外地读书，最近和你取得了联系。他发来电子邮件询问你最近几年的改变，请你根据表格内容给他回复邮件。 要求：(1) 文中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名； (2) 语言通顺，表达正确； (3) 过去和现在的对比 (外貌，性格，爱好，学习方法等)； (4) 词数：80词左右。 In the past Now 1. short, heavy, didn’t wear glasses 2. shy and quiet 3. didn’t like fruit,vegetables and milk, unhealthy 4. didn’t like playing sports 5. found math difficult, failed the math exams 6. didn’t like reading 1. tall, be of medium build, wear glasses 2. outgoing and popular 3. don’t like junk food, healthy 4. like swimming and playing basketball 5. learn math well 6. like reading all kinds of books Dear Wei Ming, I’m very glad to hear from you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Hua 10．“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护。假设你是阳光中学的李华, 你校英语俱乐部正以“The Great Changes in My Hometown”为主题进行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文参加活动，介绍家乡的环境变化，并描绘自己对美好未来的期待。提示： 要求：(1)短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； (3)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My hometown has changed greatly these years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 The Changing World 单元话题书面表达练习 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 时代变迁 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．某英文网站正在举办以 “Changes in My Hometown” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文介绍你家乡的变化，参加此次活动。要点提示： 1. 家乡过去的样子（道路、房屋、休闲活动）； 2. 家乡现在发生的变化； 3. 你的感受与愿望。 要求： 1. 词数：80 词左右； 2. 必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，时态恰当。 Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. In the past, my hometown was a small quiet village. The roads were narrow and dirty. People lived in old small houses and had few leisure activities. They mostly stayed at home in their free time. But now everything is different. Wide roads with green trees have been built. People have moved into bright apartment buildings. There is a new park where people can take walks and do sports. I feel happy for these changes. I hope my hometown will become even more beautiful in the future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：围绕“Changes in My Hometown”，完整覆盖3个写作要点（家乡过去的样子、现在的变化、感受与愿望），词数80词左右 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得出现真实人名、校名，全文连贯通顺，开头已给出不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构 开头段：题目已给出引入，点明家乡发生了巨大变化 主体段一：介绍家乡过去的居住、交通、环境情况 主体段二：介绍家乡现在在居住、交通、环境上的变化 结尾段：表达自己的感受与对家乡未来的美好愿望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡过去的样子 核心词汇：a small quiet village/old small houses/narrow and dirty roads/few leisure activities/few buses/ride bikes/walk/rubbish everywhere/small and quiet town/poor living conditions/inconvenient traffic/poor environment 要点二：家乡现在的变化 核心词汇： Wide roads with green trees/bright apartment buildings/a new park where people can take walks and do sports/new flats/wide roads/many buses/taxis/shared bikes/many parks/better environment/modern buildings/convenient public transport/improved living conditions/green and clean 要点三：感受与愿望 核心词汇：feel happy/hometown will become even more beautiful/in the future/be proud of/make progress/bright future/develop better 2．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想了解你家乡的变化。请你写一篇80‑100词的英语短文，介绍家乡过去和现在的变化。 要点提示： 1. 过去：房子旧，道路窄，出行不方便； 2. 现在：高楼多，道路宽阔，环境变好； 3. 你的感受。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Dear Peter My hometown has changed a great deal in the past few years. In the past, there were many simple old houses and narrow dirty roads. It was really not convenient for local people to go out for work or travel. Now, lots of bright tall buildings have appeared everywhere. The roads are wide and clean. The whole environment becomes much fresher and better than before. I am very happy and proud to see these great changes. I sincerely hope my hometown will become more beautiful in the near future. Yours Li Hua 【详解】写作要点 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（电子邮件），以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍家乡过去样貌；描述家乡如今的变化；表达个人感受与展望 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数控制在80-100词，完成今昔对比 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起，点明家乡近些年发生巨大变化 主体段：对比描述家乡过去的面貌与现在全新的景象 结尾段：抒发个人感受，展望家乡未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：描述家乡过去样貌 过去景象：old houses/narrow roads/inconvenient to go out/long-distance travel等 要点二：描述家乡现在的变化 现在景象：tall buildings/wide roads/better environment/green trees on both sides等 要点三：抒发个人感受 内心感受：feel proud of my hometown/be pleased with changes/hope for a more lively future等 3．近几年来，随着国家的快速发展，我们居住的城市发生了很大变化，人们的生活方式也相应地改变，同时也带来一些环境问题。请根据以下提示，以“Changes of My City”为题，写一篇英语作文，讲述城市的变化及人民生活水平的提高并写出你对城市未来的期望。 In the past Now Transportation buses, bikes e-bikes, e-cars, subway Life services Leisure activity shop in markets, watch TV at home, play cards.. online shopping, play in community squares, travel abroad Living environment dirty rivers, few trees clean, flowers... Problem and expectation（期望） …… 要求 1）内容完整，意思连贯语句通顺，书写规范； 2）字数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes of My City In recent years, with the rapid development of our country, great changes have taken place in the city we live in. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Changes of My City     In recent years, with the rapid development of our country, great changes have taken place in the city we live in.      In the past, people went out by buses or bikes. Now, e-bikes, e-cars and subways are common. People used to shop in markets and watch TV at home. But now they enjoy online shopping, play in community squares and even travel abroad. Besides, rivers were dirty and there were few trees. Now the city is clean with many flowers.      But pollution from traffic is still a problem. I hope our city will become greener and more beautiful. I believe everyone will live a happier life here. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 明确要点：对比过去和现在在交通、生活服务和居住环境上的变化，指出问题并表达对城市未来的期望。 确定人称：第三人称和第一人称（I） 注意事项：字数80词左右。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总述城市发生了巨大变化。 主体段：分三个方面（交通、生活服务/休闲、居住环境）进行对比描述。 结尾段：指出问题并表达期望。 [第三步，要点展开] 要点一：对比交通的变化 交通的变化：In the past, people went out by buses or bikes. Now, e-bikes, e-cars and subways are common./means of transport/convenient/It has made our travel more efficient./Smart traffic offers us more choices. 要点二：对比生活服务的变化 生活服务的变化：People used to shop in markets and watch TV at home. But now they enjoy online shopping, play in community squares and even travel abroad./online shopping and square dancing are popular today/play in community squares/travel abroad/daily life/leisure activities/People’s lifestyles have changed a lot./Online shopping has become a new trend. 要点三：对比居住环境的变化 居住环境的变化：Besides, rivers were dirty and there were few trees. Now the city is clean with many flowers./living conditions/surroundings/fresh air/The city now looks like a big garden. 要点四：指出问题并表达期望 问题：pollution from traffic is still a problem/traffic brings some environmental problems 期待：I hope our city will become greener and more beautiful. I believe everyone will live a happier life here./It is important to protect the environment./I dream of living in a city with clean and beautiful surroundings. 4．改革开放以来，中国从开启新时期到跨入新世纪，从站上新起点到进入新时代，人民生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。请你以“Changes in People’s Lives”为题，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈新时代人们的生活变化。内容包括： 1. 饮食习惯； 2. 休闲活动； 3. 对阅读和旅游的看法。 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：entertainment (n. 娱乐), gain (v. 获得), reform and opening-up (改革开放) Changes in People’s Lives Hello, everybody! Today I’d like to say something about people’s lives in the new era. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes in People’s Lives Hello, everybody! Today I’d like to say something about people’s lives in the new era. Since the reform and opening-up, great changes have taken place in our daily life. Firstly, people’s eating habits have become healthier. They pay more attention to a balanced diet with fresh vegetables and fruits. Secondly, people can spend more time and money on sports, education and entertainment. People’s lives become more colorful. Lastly, reading and traveling are now considered to be important ways to relax and gain knowledge. Many people enjoy reading e-books and taking trips during holidays. These changes show that people’s lives are becoming more colorful. Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：发言稿，议论文，以一般现在时、现在完成时为主 明确要点：①饮食习惯；②休闲活动；③对阅读和旅游的看法 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：词数约80词，不得透露真实姓名及学校名称    [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：使用题目给出的开头句，引出话题，点明新时代生活发生巨大变化 主体段：分别介绍饮食习惯、休闲活动，阐述对阅读和旅游的看法 结尾段：总结感受，收尾致谢    [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：饮食习惯 eating habits/balanced diet/fresh vegetables and fruitshealthy/nutritious/keep fit/take in等 要点二：休闲活动 sports/education/entertainment/colorful/spare time/relax oneself/develop hobbies/take exercise等    要点三：对阅读和旅游的看法 relax/gain knowledge/read e‑books/take trips/holidays/open up one’s eyes/learn about the world/enrich one’s life等 5．春去冬来，现在你已经进入到九年级，初中生活就快结束了。回想过去两年的学习和生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？也成长了许多？请你就此写一篇英语短文，谈一谈这两年多，你身上发生了哪些变化以及你对这些变化的看法。 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80～100。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version:     How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school. My life has changed a lot.     I used to be a bit shy and didn’t like to communicate with others. Also my grades were just so-so. But now I take part in many clubs and interesting school activities. I’ve made lots of friends, and we study, exercise and chat together. My grades have improved greatly and I’m much more confident.     I really value these changes in myself, and I believe I will become better and better in the future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，核心用used to 一般过去时对比过去，一般现在时写当下，结尾可用一般将来时写愿望 明确要点：① 清晰写出升入初中这两年里，你身上发生的具体变化； ② 表达你对于这些自身变化的想法、感受与评价 确定人称：全文使用第一人称I/my 注意事项：不得出现真实人名、学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，感叹时光流逝，点明已经就读初中两年，总述自己成长、改变了很多 主体段：分前后对比两层书写 第一层：介绍刚上初中时自己的缺点、旧状态； 第二层：对应写出现在发生了哪些具体转变，搭配小事例支撑内容 结尾段：表达对这些改变的看法，总结收获，对之后的学习生活做出简单展望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：开头感叹 How time flies/Time goes so fast/It has been two years since I entered middle school等 要点二：过去性格 used to be shy/didn’t like to communicate/kept quiet in class/afraid of speaking in public等 要点三：过去学习 grades were just so-so/didn’t do well in some subjects/found it hard to keep up等 要点四：过去其他方面 had few friends/rarely joined activities/lacked confidence等 要点五：现在变化1——性格与社交 take part in clubs and activities/made lots of friends/study/exercise/chat together等 要点六：现在变化2——学习 grades have improved greatly/become much more confident/dare to ask questions等 要点七：现在变化3——其他拓展 learn to work with others/become more responsible/enjoy school life more等 要点八：对变化的看法 value these changes/proud of myself/believe I will become better/growth is a wonderful journey等 6．中国的新面貌令世界震惊，请按照写作要求，围绕living conditions, technologies和the environment三个方面，以“New Looks in China”为题写一篇英语短文，说说你感受到的身边变化，向你校校报投稿。 写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息； 2. 文章需包括所给要点，条理清晰，语句通顺，可适当发挥； 3. 词数不少于90，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 New Looks in China China has shown new looks to the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： New Looks in China China has shown new looks to the world. Since the reform and opening-up of our country, our living conditions have greatly improved. Most of us have moved into comfortable houses. More than enough food and clothes can satisfy people’s needs. What’s more, technologies have developed quickly. For example, high-speed trains or cars are much faster than before. At the same time, the government has taken measures to protect the environment. Therefore, the air has become fresh and the water has become clean. In a word, the environment has changed for the better. Thanks to the government, our life has become better and we are facing a brighter future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：校报投稿说明文，以现在完成时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：生活条件；科技发展；生态环境 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、学校、地名等个人信息，覆盖全部三点要求，词数≥90 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明改革开放后中国呈现全新面貌，引出下文变化 主体段：分三层依次描写生活条件、科技发展、环境改善三大变化 结尾段：感恩政策，总结生活向好，展望光明未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：生活条件 move into comfortable houses/more than enough food and clothes/satisfy people’s needs/live a rich life/convenient daily life/own big bright flats等 要点二：科技发展 develop quickly/high-speed train/much faster than before/smart electronic products/travel around easily/online payment等 要点三：环境改善 take measures to protect the environment/fresh air/clean water/change for the better/plant more trees/cut down pollution/live in a pleasant world等 要点四：结尾升华 thanks to the government/become much better/face a brighter future/witness great changes等 7．随着社会的不断进步、科学技术的迅猛发展，我们的生活也在迅速变化着。请你以Changes in People’s Life为题，根据下列写作要点写一篇短文，介绍生活中联系方式、交通、住房等方面发生的变化。 写作要点：1. What was People’s life like in the past? 2. What’s People’s life like now? 3. What brings the changes? 写作要求：1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3. 词数80-120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in People’s Life Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the last few years. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Changes in People’s Life Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the last few years. In the past, people kept in touch with relatives and friends mainly by sending letters. Children used to go to school by bike. Big families had to share small rooms. Now people can talk to others by telephone or on the Internet at home. Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars. More and more people live in big and bright apartments with several rooms. The fast development of science and technology brings all these great changes. In a word, people live better than before. They are living happily and comfortably in their daily life. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：这是一篇对比说明文，用一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：介绍生活中联系方式、交通、住房等方面发生的变化，以及引起这些变化的原因 确定人称：第三人称（they） 注意事项：短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，引出生活发生巨大改变的话题 主体段：对比介绍过去的生活与现在的生活，以及引起变化的根源 结尾段：总结全文，抒发生活变美好的感受 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去的生活 联系方式：people kept in touch with relatives and friends mainly by sending letters/people communicated with each other mainly by writing letters and posting postcards等 交通方式：Children used to go to school by bike/They went out by bike or on foot等 住房方面：Big families had to share small rooms/Most family lived in small old houses等 要点二：现在的生活 联系方式：people can talk to others by telephone or on the Internet at home/people can talk to others by email, wechat or QQ等 交通方式：Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars/There are buses, cars and high-speed trains for us to travel等 住房方面：More and more people live in big and bright apartments with several rooms/Lots of people move into big bright houses with new furniture等 要点三：变化的根源 The fast development of science and technology brings all these great changes/Social progress makes our life totally different等 要点四：表达感受 They are living happily and comfortably in their daily life/Our lives become much more comfortable and convenient等 8．少年智则国智，少年强则国强。作为祖国未来的接班人，青少年的健康成长尤为重要。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己初中三年的成长变化。请你根据以下提示，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。 1．要点：(1)What did you use to be? (2)What are you like now? (3)How do you feel about these changes? 2．要求：(1)文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；(2)词数100左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Some Changes in My Life Since entering junior high, I have changed a lot. I used to be shy and quiet, often afraid to answer questions in class. I also used to spend too much time playing games. Now, I am more confident and active. I often raise my hand to share my ideas. I have developed good study habits and learned to manage my time wisely. I also enjoy sports and team activities. I feel proud of these changes. They help me grow stronger and wiser. As a teenager, I realize that our growth matters to our country. I will keep improving myself and work hard for a brighter future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：过去的状态、现在的状态、对这些变化的感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出初中后自己变化很大 主体段：分别介绍过去和现在的状态 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去的状态 性格特点：shy and quiet/timid and reserved/introverted and silent等 行为表现：afraid to answer questions in class/hesitant to speak up in public/reluctant to participate in activities等 时间分配：spend too much time playing games/waste a lot of time watching TV/spend excessive time on social media等 要点二：现在的状态 性格特点：confident and active/outgoing and energetic/bold and lively等 行为表现：raise my hand to share my ideas/take the initiative to express opinions/actively participate in discussions等 习惯养成：developed good study habits/formed healthy living habits/cultivated effective learning methods等 时间管理：learned to manage my time wisely/mastered the skill of time management/became good at organizing my schedule等 兴趣爱好：enjoy sports and team activities/love reading and artistic pursuits/be fond of outdoor adventures等 要点三：对这些变化的感受 情感态度：feel proud of these changes/be satisfied with my progress/grateful for the transformation等 成长意义：They help me grow stronger and wiser/They make me more mature and capable/They contribute to my personal development等 未来展望：I will keep improving myself and work hard for a brighter future/I will strive for continuous self-improvement and pursue a better life/I will persist in enhancing myself and create a promising tomorrow等 重难语篇练习 9．假设你是李华。你的小学同学Wei Ming跟随父母去了外地读书，最近和你取得了联系。他发来电子邮件询问你最近几年的改变，请你根据表格内容给他回复邮件。 要求：(1) 文中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名； (2) 语言通顺，表达正确； (3) 过去和现在的对比 (外貌，性格，爱好，学习方法等)； (4) 词数：80词左右。 In the past Now 1. short, heavy, didn’t wear glasses 2. shy and quiet 3. didn’t like fruit,vegetables and milk, unhealthy 4. didn’t like playing sports 5. found math difficult, failed the math exams 6. didn’t like reading 1. tall, be of medium build, wear glasses 2. outgoing and popular 3. don’t like junk food, healthy 4. like swimming and playing basketball 5. learn math well 6. like reading all kinds of books Dear Wei Ming, I’m very glad to hear from you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 例文 Dear Wei Ming, I’m very glad to hear from you. I have changed a lot over the years. Firstly, I used to be short and heavy, but now I’m tall and of medium build. I also wear glasses. Secondly, I was shy and quiet, but now I’m more outgoing. Thirdly, I didn’t like healthy food or sports before, but now I enjoy swimming and basketball. Besides, I found math difficult in the past, but now I learn it well by doing more exercises. Finally, I like reading all kinds of books. These changes make me healthier and happier. Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件，以一般过去时为主（描述已发生的活动），夹杂一般现在时（表达感想） 明确要点：同学们的作品、最有趣的作品、你的感想 确定人称：第一人称（I/we/our）+ 第二人称（you/your，对笔友说） 注意事项：词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数；不得出现真实姓名及学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构（不含已给出的开头和结尾）： 开头段：承接已给出的问候，引出活动名称和总体感受 主体段：①介绍同学们的各类作品 ②点明最有趣的作品并描述其特点 结尾段：表达感想（活动的意义），并向笔友发出展望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：同学们的作品 活动名称：“Turn Waste into Treasure” creative handicraft competition/waste recycling contest/creative DIY competition等 作品举例：pencil holders from plastic bottles, lamps from used boxes, a toy car from old CDs/bags from old clothes/flowers from waste bottles/pens from cans等 描述词：amazing/creative/wonderful/fantastic/surprising等 要点二：最有趣的作品 作品描述：a beautiful dress made of waste newspapers and plastic bags/a robot made of old keys/a bag made of old jeans等 评价用语：looked really fashionable/was very creative/was the most popular/looked cool等 要点三：你的感想 意义评价：meaningful/useful/educational/unforgettable等 具体感悟：helped us realize that rubbish can be reused creatively/taught us to protect the environment/made us know the value of waste/encouraged us to think creatively等 展望邀请：I hope we can do something like this together someday/I wish you could join us next time/Let’s try it together等 10．“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护。假设你是阳光中学的李华, 你校英语俱乐部正以“The Great Changes in My Hometown”为主题进行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文参加活动，介绍家乡的环境变化，并描绘自己对美好未来的期待。提示： 要求：(1)短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； (3)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My hometown has changed greatly these years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My hometown has changed greatly these years. In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty, and the air wasn’t fresh. There were few trees, so birds seldom came. But now, everything has changed! The roads have become clean and wide, with colorful flowers on both sides. We’ve planted many trees, and the air is fresh again. Birds sing in the green parks every morning. In the future, I hope my hometown will be more beautiful. Maybe we’ll have more bike paths to protect the environment. Factories will use clean energy, and rivers will be clearer. I believe “green mountains are gold mountains” will come true here! Let’s work together to make it happen. 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，用一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时 明确要点：过去和现在的环境状况，对家乡美好未来的期待 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明核心主题——家乡近些年发生巨大的变化 主体段：今昔对比，描述过去落后的环境状况和现在家乡环境改善后的结果 结尾段：展望未来，表达对家乡变得更加美丽和生活更加美好的期待 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：过去的环境 the roads were narrow and dirty/the air wasn’t fresh/There were few trees/birds seldom came/Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere等 要点二：现在的环境 The roads have become clean and wide/with colorful flowers on both sides/We’ve planted many trees/the air is fresh again/Birds sing in the green parks every morning/The mountains have turned greener, the rivers are cleaner and the sky is bluer等 要点三：未来的展望 美好期望：I hope my hometown will be more beautiful/I hope our living environment will get much better等 提出建议：Maybe we’ll have more bike paths to protect the environment/Factories will use clean energy/rivers will be clearer/we will set up more community gardens等 信心表达：I believe “green mountains are gold mountains” will come true here/I believe the future of my hometown will be better and better等 发出呼吁：Let’s work together to make it happen/Let’s take small actions together to protect our lovely hometown等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $