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高考英语读后续写二轮复习之历险脱困主题
一、高分佳句必背
句1
The ice-cream truck was parked just around the corner, shining brilliantly in the sunlight, as if waiting to reward the three adventurers with a most generous treat for their patience and determination.
冰淇淋车就停在拐角处,在阳光下闪闪发光,好像在等着用最慷慨的款待来奖励这三个冒险者的耐心和决心。
【词汇升级】parked → stationed;shining brilliantly → gleaming;as if waiting → as though waiting
【句式点睛】现在分词短语shining brilliantly...作伴随状语;as if + 现在分词,相当于as if it were waiting...,为省略式状语从句;reward sb. with sth. for sth.因某事用某物奖励某人。
【举一反三】The cabin stood at the top of the hill, bathed in golden light, as if welcoming the weary travelers.
句2
Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.
我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一份特别的滋味,我将终生难忘。
【词汇升级】added a special taste to → lent a special flavor to;adventurous → daring / venturesome;all my life → for the rest of my life
【句式点睛】动名词的复合结构one's doing(Our being lost)作主语,比用从句更简洁;which引导定语从句修饰vacation。
【举一反三】His unexpected arrival added a delightful touch to the party which we would never forget.
句3
She taught me an important lesson that day — with a little encouragement, we can achieve extraordinary things.
那天她给我上了重要的一课——一点点鼓励,我们就能成就非凡。
【词汇升级】taught me an important lesson → gave me a valuable lesson;a little encouragement → a bit of encouragement;extraordinary → remarkable
【句式点睛】破折号引出解释说明;with引导条件/方式状语,表"只要有……",含蓄条件句。
【举一反三】He showed me that day — with a little courage, we can overcome any obstacle.
句4
Without her, I might not have been able to survive the dangerous snowstorm.如果没有她,我可能无法在这场危险的暴风雪中幸存下来。
【词汇升级】Without her → Had it not been for her;survive → weather / endure;dangerous → treacherous / perilous
【句式点睛】without引导含蓄虚拟条件,主句用might have done表示与过去事实相反的虚拟,读后续写结尾感恩/反思高频句型。
【举一反三】Without his guidance, I might never have discovered my passion for science.
二、情景演练
① Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. ________________________! It turns out that there's always a way out of any difficult situation ________________________.
最后,我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊!事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,就总有办法摆脱困境。
② My brother and I ________________________ and it was really a brand new weekend.
我和哥哥收获了一次有意义的探索,这真是一个全新的周末。
③ Although the weather condition was poor and the wind was still fierce, they didn't ________________________.
虽然天气状况很差,风也很猛烈,但他们并没有失去找到尼古拉斯并且他还活着的希望。
④ ________________________, they promised to be always with each other.
沐浴在温暖的阳光和温和的风中,他们承诺永远在一起。
★ 演练参考答案
① What an unforgettable experience;as long as we keep calm
② gained a meaningful exploration
③ lose hope of finding Nicholas alive
④ Bathed in the warm sunshine and gentle wind
三、创意语段积累
【场景:脱离险境】
When we finally came to the safety of the riverbank, the cold was rapidly creeping deep into my muscles. Then I felt a hand on my shoulder and looked up into his smiling face. I gathered my wits and dry firewood, and started a huge blaze. As I recounted my experience in the warmth of my sleeping bag, I wondered if I'd have survived if it had not been for Nick and his attitude.
当我们终于安全抵达河岸时,寒意迅速渗入我的肌肉,然后我感到一只手搭在我的肩膀上,我抬头看到了他微笑的脸。我鼓足勇气,收集干柴,生起一堆大火。当我在温暖的睡袋里讲述我的经历时,我在想,如果没有尼克和他的态度,我是否能活下来。
【场景:历险感悟】
A little adventurous as it was, this was the first time that I had realized my achievements could make my parents so happy and proud, which also boosted my confidence. It was this childhood adventure that made me understand nothing is impossible with all your efforts and devotion.
虽然有点冒险,但这是我第一次意识到我的成就可以让我的父母高兴和自豪,这也增强了我的信心。正是这次童年的冒险让我明白,只要努力和付出,没有什么是不可能的。
四、核心词块与背诵模板
核心词块
as if waiting to do 仿佛在等着做 add a special taste to 增添特别滋味 with a little encouragement 只要一点鼓励 achieve extraordinary things 成就非凡 without sb. 若没有某人 survive the snowstorm 在暴风雪中幸存 keep calm 保持冷静 a way out of difficulty 脱困之路 gather one's wits 鼓足勇气 nothing is impossible 没有什么不可能
背诵模板
______(环境/伴随描写), as if ______. Without ______, I might not have been able to ______. It turns out that there's always a way out as long as we ______.
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