Unit 1 第5课时 Writing(讲解课件)-【优翼·学练优】2026-2027学年八年级英语上册同步备课（外研版·新教材）

该初中英语课件围绕“写成功人士及分享评论”展开，以J.K.罗琳案例及视频导入，通过Pre-writing的信息搜索与图表规划（含挑战、克服方法等要点）搭建学习支架，衔接While-writing的范文写作与语言运用。 其亮点在于融合语言能力（范文引用名言及细节描述）、思维品质（分析人物挑战与成就的逻辑）和学习能力（写作步骤与自查要点），通过视频辅助、图表梳理及课堂分享，帮助学生提升写作与评价能力，教师可借助结构化流程高效开展教学。

While on a train at age twenty five, an idea struck. J. K. Rolling boy doesn't know he's a visit, going to visit school, not having a pen on her at the time, rolling SAT on the train. As the ideas came flooding in that night, SHE began writing her first book, Harry potter and the philosophers stone. SHE didn't know IT at the time, but years later, those very words would Spark the imagination of millions of children worldwide. Shortly after SHE began writing, however, her mother passed away. Roling had never been able to share with her mother the wonders of Harry potter. The years after her mother's death were hard for rolling. As a struggling writer, SHE married and had her first child. However, the marriage did not last long in her own words. This was when he entered the darkest period of her life and questioned whether he would get through IT. During this dark st. Period, rowling found comfort in her writing and went on to complete the Harry potter series. These dark years tested her in a strength, and much of the Harry potter stories were written during these years. Many of the characters and creatures in the books arose from this dark period of her life. SHE later reflect to the books wouldn't be what they are if SHE hadn't gone through this dark erst period of her life. Harry potter has since become a one of the best selling books series in history. The books have sold over four hundred million copies, and the movie series has growed five point three billion dollars in total. SHE now used this dark period as a guide for her to focus on the only work that matter to her being a mother and telling great stories in life. IT is not what happens to us that matters, but rather how we choose to interpret IT, what happens and therefore who we become. As a result, you know, you found the hidden wisdom in your deeper scar when you view IT as your greatest gift. President post, members of the half and CoOperation and the board of overseas members of the faculty, proud parents and above all, graduates. The first thing I would like to say is thank you. Not only his heart had given me an extraordinary honor, but the weeks of fear and north AI have endured at the thought of giving this commencement address have made me lose weight. A win win situation. Now all I have to do is take deep breath. Skin took the red banners and convinced ed myself than that I am at the world's largest GIF indoor reunion. Delivering a commencement address is a great responsibility, or so I thought, until I cast my mind back to my own graduation. The commencement speaker that day was the distinguished british philosopher barrenness marijuana. Reflecting on her speech has helped me enormously in writing this one, because IT turns out that I can't remember single words he said. This liberating discovery enables me to . proceed without . any fear that I might inadvertently influence you to abandon promising careers in business, the law or politics for the giddy delights of becoming a gay visit. You see, if all you remember in years to come is the gay visit joke. I've come out ahead of barrenness marijuana. Achieve goals, the first step to self improvement. Actually, I have wrapped my mind heart for what I ought to say to you today. I have asked myself what I wish I had known at my own graduation and what important lessons I have learned in the twenty one years that have expired between that day. And this, I have come up with two answers on this wonderful day, when we are gathered together to celebrate your academic success, I have decided to taught you about the benefits of failure. And as you stand on the thresh hold of what is sometimes called real life, I want to install the crucial importance of imagination, these missing cricks oc, or paradoxically, choices. But bear with me looking back at the twenty one year old that I was at graduation is a slightly uncomfortable experience for the forty two year old that he has become half my lifetime ago. I was striking an uneasy baLance between the ambition I had for myself and what those closest off to me expected of me. I was convinced that the only thing I wanted to do ever was right novels. However, my parents, both of whom came from impoverish backgrounds and neither of whom had been to college, took the view that my overactive imagination was an amusing personal cork that would never pay a mortgage or secure a pension. I know the irony strikes with the force of a cartoon non ville now, but so they hoped that I would take a occasion. Gree, I wanted to study english literature. A compromise was reached that, in retrospect, satisfied nobody. And I went up to study modern languages. Hardly had my parents car round of the corner at the end of the road than I ditched german and scuttled off down the classics corridor. I cannot remember telling my parents that I was studying in classics. They might well have found out for the first time on graduation day. Of all the subjects on this planet, I think they would have been hard put to name one less useful than greek method. Gy, when I came to securing the keys to an executive bathroom. Now I would like to make a clear in her ethical sis that I do not blame my parents for their point of view. There is an expiry date on blaming your parents for steering you in the wrong direction. The moment you are old enough to take the wheel, responsibility lies with you. What is more, I cannot criticize my parents for hoping that I would never experience poverty. They had been poor themselves, and I have since been poor. And I quite agree with them that IT is not an ennobling experience. Poverty and tails, fear and stress and sometimes depression IT means a thousand petty humiliations and hardships climbing out of poverty by your own efforts. That is something on which to pride yourself. But poverty itself is is romanized only by fools. What I feared most for myself at your age was not poverty, but failure at your age, in spite of a distinct lack of motivation. At the university, where I had spent far too long in the coffee bar writing stories and far too little time at lectures, I had a nap for passing examinations. And that for years had been the measure of success in my life and that of my peers. Now I am not done enough to suppose that because you are Young, gifted and well educated, you have never known hard break, hardship or hardship, talent and intelligence never yet inoculated anyone against the couples of the fate. And I do not for a moment suppose that everyone here has enjoyed an existence of unruffled college and contentment. However, the fact that you are graduating from harvard suggests that you are not very well acquainted with failure. You might be driven by a fear of failure quite as much as a desire for success. Indeed, your conception of failure might not be too far removed from the average person's a of success. So hi, have you already flown? Ultimately, we all . have to decide for ourselves what constitutes failure, but the world is quite eager to give you a set of criteria if you let IT. So I think it's fair to say that by any conventional measure and is seven years after my graduation day, I had failed on an epic scale. an exceptionally . short lived marriage had imploded, and I was jobless, a loan parent. And as poor as IT is possible to be in modern britain without being homeless. That fears that my parents had had for me and that I had had for myself had both come to pass. And by every usual standard, I was the biggest failure I knew. Now i'm not going to stand here and tell you that failure is fun. That period of my life was a dark one, and I had no idea that there was going to be what the press has been since represented as a kind of fairy tail resolution. I had no idea then how far the tunnel extended. And for a long time, any lie at the end of IT was a hope rather than a reality. So why do I talk about the benefits of failure? Simply because failure meant a stripping away of the inner sentiment, I stopped pretending to myself that I was anything other than what I was and began to direct all my energy into finishing the only work that mattered to me. Had I really succeeded at anything else, I might never have found the determination to succeed in the one arena where I believed I truly belonged. I was set free because my greatest fear had been realized, and I was still alive. And I still had a daughter who I adored. And I have an old typewriter and a big idea. And so rock bottom became the solid foundation on which I rebuilt my life. You might never fail on the scale lighted, but some failure in life is inevitable. IT is impossible to live without fAiling at something unless you live so cautiously that you might as well not have lived at all, in which case you fail by default. Failure gave me an . inner security that I had never taken by passing examinations. Failure taught me things about myself that I could have learned no other way. I discovered that I had a strong will and more discipline than I had expected. I also found out that I had friends whose value was truly above the Price of rubies. The knowledge that you have emerged wiser and stronger from setbacks means that you are ever after secure in your ability to survive. You will never truly know yourself or the strength of your relationships until both have been tested by adversity. Such knowledge is a true gift for all that. IT is painfully one, and IT has been worth more than any qualification I ever earned. So given a time Turner, I would tell my twenty one year old self that personal happiness lies in knowing that life is not a checklist of acquisition or achievement. Your qualifications, your cv are not your life, though you will meet many people of my age and older who confuse the two. Life is difficult and complicated, and beyond anyone's total control, and the humility to know that will enable you to survive its assist tudes. Now you might think that I chose my second theme, the importance of imagination because of the party played in rebuilding my life, but that is not holy, so that I personally will defend the value of bedtime stories to my last gasp. I have learned to value imagination in a much broader sense. Imagination is not only the uniquely human capacity to envision that which is not, and therefore the found of all invention and innovation in its arguably most transformative and revelry capacity. IT is the power that enables us to empathy with humans whose experiences we have never shared. One of the greatest formative experiences of my life proceeded Harry potter, though, had informed much of what I subsequently wrote in those books. This revelation came in the form of one of my earliest day jobs, though I was sloping off the right stories during my lunch showers. I paid the rent in my early twenties by working at the african research department of ammonites y internals headquarters in london. There, in my little office, I read hastily ly scribed letters smuggled out of totalitarian regimes by men and women who are risking imprisonment to inform the outside world of what was happening to them. I saw photographs of those who had disappeared without trace, sent to amnesty by their desperate families and friends. I read the testimony of torture of victims and saw pictures of their injuries. I open hands, written eye witness accounts of summary trials and executions, of kidnappings and rapes. Many of my co workers were x political prisoners, people who had been to been displaced from their homes or fled into workstand because they have the timing to speak against their governments. Visitors to our offices included those who have, who had come to give information or to try and find out what had happened to those who they had left behind. I shall never forget the african torture victim, a Young man no older than I was at the time, who had become mentally ill after all he had endured in his homeland. He trembled uncontrolled ably as he spoke to a video camera about the brutality inflicted upon him. He was a foot tall and than I was, and seemed as fragile as a child. I was given the job of eec, alting him back to the underground station afterwards. And this man whose life had been shattered by cruelty took my hand with exquisite courtesy and wish me future happiness. And as long as I live, I shall remember walking along an empty corridor and suddenly hearing from behind a closed door a scream of pain and horror, such as I have never heard since the door opened. And the researcher popped out her out her head and told me to run and make a hot drink for the Young man . sitting with her. He had just had to give him the news that in retaliation for his outspokenness against his country's regime, his mother had been seized and executed. Every day of my working week in my early twenties, I was reminded how incredibly fortunate I was to live in a country with a democratically elected government where legal representation and a public trial were the rights of everyone. Every day I saw more evidence about the evils human kind would inflict on their fellow to gain or maintain power. I began to have nightmares, literal nightmares, about some of the things I saw, heard and read. And yet I also . learned more about human goodness at the international than I had ever known before. Amnesty mobilizes. Thousands of people who have never been tortured or in prison for their beliefs to act on behalf of those who have the power of human empathy leading to collective action, saves lives and freeze prisoners. Ordinary people, whose personal well being and security are assured, joined together in huge numbers to save people they do not know and we'll never meet. My small participation in that process was one of the most humbling and inspiring experiences of my life. Unlike any other creature on this planet, human beings can learn and understand without having experienced. They can think themselves into other . people's places. Of course, this is a power like my brand of fictional magic that is moral. In neutral, one might use such an ability to manipulate or control just as much as to understand or sympathy. And many . prefer not to exercise their imaginations at all. They choose to remain comfortable ly within the bounds of their own experience. Never troubling to wonder how I would feel to have been born other than they are. They can refuse to hear screams or peer inside cages. They can close their minds and hearts to any suffering that does not touch them personally. They can refuse to know. I might be tempted to envy people who can live that way, except that I do not think they have any fewer nightmares than I do. Choosing to live in narrows spaces leads to a form of mental acrophobia, and that brings its own terrorist. I think the willfully and imaginative see more monsters. They are often more afraid. What is more? Those who choose not to emphasize, enable real monsters for without ever committing an act about write evil ourselves, we collude with IT through our own apathy. One of the many things I learned at the end of that classics corridor down, which i've ventured at the age of eighteen in search of something I could not then define, was this written by the greek for blue talk? What we achieve inwardly will change out of reality. That is an astonishing statement, and yet prove in a thousand times every day of our lives, IT expresses, in part our inevitable connection with the outside world the fact that we touch other people's lives simply by existing. But how much more are you half of graduates of two thousand and eight likely to touch other people's lives, your intelligence, your capacity for hard work, the education you have earned and received, give you une unique status and unique respons ibi lit, ie. S even your nationality set you apart. The great majority of you belong to the world's only remaining superpower. The way you vote, the way you live, the way you protest, the pressure you bring to bear on your government has an impact way beyond your borders. That is, your privilege and your burden. If you . choose to use . your status and influence to raise your voice on behalf of those who have no voice, if you choose to identify not only with the powerful, but with the powerless, if you retain the ability to imagine yourself into the lives of those who do not have your advantages, then IT will not only be your proud families who celebrate your existence, that thousands and millions of people reality you have helped change. We do not need magic to transform our world. We Carry all the power we need inside ourselves already. We have the power to imagine Better. I am, lady finished. I have one last hope for you, which is something that I already had at twenty one. The friends with who my SAT on graduation day have been my friends for life. They are my children's godparents, the people to whom have been able to turn in times of real trouble, people who have been kind enough not to sue me when I took their names for death threats. At our graduation, we were bound by enormous affection, by our shared experience of a time that could never come again, and of course, by the knowledge that we held certain photographic evidence that would be exceptionally valuable if any of us run for prime minister. So today I wish you nothing Better than similar friendships. And tomorrow I hope that even if you remember not a single word of mine, you remember those of sanka, another of those old romans I met when I fled down the classics corridor in retreat from from career ladder in search of ancient wisdom. As he's a tale, so is life. Not how long IT is, but how good IT is, is what matters. I wish you were very good lives. Thank you very much. Unit 1 This is me Writing Learning Objectives In this lesson, you will: 1.write about another successful person. 2.share your comments and ideas about this successful person. Lead in Do you know the following woman? What achievements has she made? She is J.K. Rowling. She wrote the Harry Potter Series which has become one of the best-selling book series in history. Here’s a video to help us know more about her. Pre-writing Write about a successful person. Search for information about a successful person and plan your passage with the chart. What challenges the person faced (doubts or fears) What the person did to overcome the challenges What the person achieved Your comments and ideas about this person Step ① What challenges the person faced (doubts or fears) Her mother passed away after she began writing. She was a single mother with little money. She faced unemployment and depression. Many publishers refused her book. People doubted her writing skills and thought that her story was too long and wouldn’t sell. What the person did to overcome the challenges She didn’t give up and kept writing. She believed in her story and kept sending it to publishers. What the person achieved Your comments and ideas about this person She’s strong and brave in face of difficulties. Hard work and belief in yourself can make dreams come true. Harry Potter has been one of the most successful book series ever. It has sold over 500 million copies. J.K. Rowling has been one of the richest and most famous authors in the world. While-writing Write about the person with the help of the chart. “Nothing is impossible, the word itself says ‘I'm possible’.” J.K. Rowling, the author of the Harry Potter series, proves this with her life story. Rowling faced many challenges. She was a single mother with little money, living in poverty. She even had to write in cafes because it was warmer there. When she first tried to publish Harry Potter, many publishers refused her. Many people thought her story about a boy wizard was too long or wouldn’t sell. Life was very hard for her at that time. Step② However, Rowling didn’t give up. She kept writing, even in cafes while her baby slept. She believed in her story and kept sending it to publishers. Finally, a small publisher accepted Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone. Today, Harry Potter has been one of the most successful book series ever. It has sold over 500 million copies and inspired movies, theme parks, and more. Rowling went from being poor to one of the richest authors in the world. J.K. Rowling’s story teaches us that failure is not the end. Even when life is difficult, we should keep trying. As she once said, "Rock bottom became the solid foundation on which I rebuilt my life." Like Su Bingtian, she proves that hard work and belief in yourself can make dreams come true. Check. 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