Unit 2 On the money 金钱（单元写作精练）英语新教材外研版九年级上册

**基本信息** 以“金钱”话题为核心，构建“词汇-句式-结构-应用”四维写作训练体系，通过四步法写作指导实现语言能力与理财思维的协同培养。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |词汇积累|18个核心短语|分类聚焦金钱用途与消费建议|从具体概念（压岁钱、存款）到行为策略（制订预算、捐款）| |句式积累|8个功能句（开头/中间/结尾）|提供主题引入、分点阐述、总结升华的固定表达|按写作逻辑链（引入-展开-总结）编排| |四步法写作|1个完整典例|审题→词汇→造句→成篇的渐进式写作流程|从文体分析到篇章构建，形成可迁移的写作框架| |提升练习|5篇情境写作（演讲稿/书信等）|结合when/where状语从句等语法点的综合应用|从基础表达到复杂情境，实现语言能力与思维品质的同步提升|

Unit 2 On the money金钱 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 话题范畴：人与自我，以“金钱”为话题，主要围绕金钱的用途、与金钱相关的故事及明智支配金钱等内容展开。 相关写作内容: 1描述个人对压岁钱或零花钱的支配情况; 2阐述对“正确金钱观”的理解; 3给出合理使用金钱的建议 【词汇积累】 1. 金钱用途 lucky money 压岁钱 moneybox 存钱罐 savings 存款 bank account 银行账户 school supplies 学习用品 daily needs 日常需求 donate to charities 向慈善机构捐款 selfimprovement 自我提升 spend…on… 把……花在……上 save for a rainy day 未雨绸缪 2. 消费建议 manage money wisely 明智地管理金钱 keep a record 做记录 allocate lucky money properly 合理分配压岁钱 make a budget 制订预算 save for longterm goals 为长期目标存钱 make a shopping list 列购物清单 develop good moneymanaging habits 养成良好的理财习惯 make a wise decision 做出明智的决定 【句式积累】 开头句 ①As teenagers, we should learn how to use our lucky money properly. 作为青少年，我们应当学会如何合理使用自己的压岁钱。 ②It’s important for us to learn to spend money wisely. 对我们来说，学会理性消费很重要。 中间句 ①We should divide our money into different parts for daily use, hobbies and savings. 我们应该把钱分成不同的部分，用于日常开销、爱好和储蓄。 ②We are supposed to save some money for sudden needs instead of spending it all. 我们应该存一些钱以备不时之需，而非全部花光。 ③It’s meaningful to donate some money to charities to help people in need. 捐一些钱给慈善机构来帮助有需要的人是很有意义的。 ④Don’t spend money on things you don’t really need. 不要把钱花在你并不真正需要的东西上。 结尾句 ①Let’s start by developing small habits of wise consumption—like making a budget, thinking twice before buying, and focusing on practical value. 让我们从培养明智消费的小习惯开始——比如制订预算、购物前三思以及关注实用价值。 ②In a word, we should spend money on what is necessary and helpful to our growth. 总之，我们应该把钱花在必要且有益于成长的事情上。 谚语 A penny saved is a penny earned. 省一分钱等于挣一分钱。 Put your hand no further than your sleeve will reach. 量入为出。 。 1. 点明主题：分享如何使用零花钱 I’d like to share my plan for… 2. 展开叙述：零花钱花在什么地方 To use my pocket money…First, I spend…on school supplies…; Besides, I plan to save…; Finally, I donate…to help… 3. 总结全文：明智地使用零花钱很重要 …is important for…It’s not just about…It’s about… 1. 开头：表明合理支配压岁钱的重要性 As middle school students, it’s important for us to learn to manage money and spend it wisely. 2. 中间：介绍自己如何支配压岁钱 I do manage my lucky money well. When I receive my lucky money each year, I divide it into…parts. I spend some on…, some on… and I save the rest. I also keep some money to… 3. 结尾：合理支配压岁钱的建议 First, make a budget before spending. Second, save a part regularly…Finally, the more we spend on…, the more…By doing so, we can… 为增强学生的理财意识,倡导理性消费，我校开展了主题为“I’m a Wise Money Manager”的评选活动。请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文介绍你每月零花钱的使用情况及理由，参与本次评选。内容包括: 1. 介绍你的零花钱主要用于哪些方面; 2. 解释你为什么要这样分配零花钱; 3. 管理好自己零花钱的意义。 I’m a Wise Money Manager It is very important for us to learn to manage pocket money. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四步法写作 1．◆第一步:思路剖析 (一)仔细审题 1)文体:介绍零花钱的使用情况及理由，是一篇____________; 2)人称:介绍自己零花钱的使用情况及理由，以____________为主; 3)时态:介绍每月零花钱的使用情况及理由，时态主要为____________。 (二)篇章布局 Beginning:引入主题—简要说明每月零花钱的整体分配原则; Body:具体阐述—详细介绍零花钱的主要用途,并逐一解释分配原因; Ending:表达感悟—总结管理零花钱的意义,强调理性消费与理财习惯对成长的重要性。 2．◆第二步:推敲词汇 ________________ 为明智地理财感到自豪 ________________ 学习如何理财 ________________ 把零花钱分成三个部分 ________________ 储蓄罐 ________________ 为未来的目标做准备 ________________ 被用于爱好 ________________ 不仅……而且…… ________________ 明白理财的价值 3．◆第三步:连词成句 1)作为一名中学生，我认真对待我的零花钱。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2)每个月拿到零花钱的时候，我把它分成三个部分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3)首先，我花了大约40%在书本之类的学习用品上。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4)最重要的一个原因是，我相信花钱在学习上是最好的选择。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5)管理零花钱教我学会如何提前计划和明智地消费。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．◆第四步：连句成篇 I’m a Wise Money Manager It is very important for us to learn to manage pocket money. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【基础必做】 一、汉译英 1. 压岁钱 2. 存钱罐 3. 存款 4. 银行账户 5. 学习用品 6. 日常需求 7. 向慈善机构捐款 8. 自我提升 9. 把……花在……上 10. 未雨绸缪 11. 明智地管理金钱 12. 做记录 13. 合理分配压岁钱 14. 制订预算 15. 为长期目标存钱 16. 列购物清单 17. 养成良好的理财习惯 18. 做出明智的决定 二、句子翻译： 1. 作为青少年，我们应当学会如何合理使用自己的压岁钱。 2. 对我们来说，学会理性消费很重要。 3. 我们应该把钱分成不同的部分，用于日常开销、爱好和储蓄。 4. 我们应该存一些钱以备不时之需，而非全部花光。 5. 捐一些钱给慈善机构来帮助有需要的人是很有意义的。 6. 不要把钱花在你并不真正需要的东西上。 7. 让我们从培养明智消费的小习惯开始——比如制订预算、购物前三思以及关注实用价值。 8. 总之，我们应该把钱花在必要且有益于成长的事情上。 【提升必做】 1．英语课上同学们正在进行主题为“学会理财，健康成长”的讨论。请你以“My Pocket Money”为题用英语写一篇演讲稿代表你的小组发言。内容包括: 1. 你是如何获得零花钱的(做家务、节日收到红包等)； 2. 你是如何使用零花钱的(买学习用品、为父母买礼物、捐给有需要的人等)； 3. 零花钱对你的意义。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Pocket Money Hello, everyone. I’m glad to talk about my pocket money here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你叫李华，你的朋友王明来信说他总是很快花完零花钱，感到很苦恼。请你给他写一封回信，给他一些关于如何管理零花钱的建议。 要求： 1. 至少给出三条建议，并适当说明理由。 2. 必须包含本单元所学内容：when/where状语从句，以及至少一个本单元的重点句型（如One of the best ways…/The+比较级…/Why don’t you…）。 3. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰，不少于80词。 4. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Wang Ming, I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your pocket money. Here is some advice for you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice can help you. Good luck with your money management! Yours, Li Hua 3．题目：My Experience of Managing Money 写作要求： 1. 简单介绍自己管理零花钱的经历与感受； 2. 结合本单元核心词汇：save, spend, budget, earn, pocket money, advice； 3. 词数80~100词，语句通顺，不出现真实校名与人名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是李华，你的英国网友Mary在网上发帖说，她每月有30英镑零花钱，但总是不到月底就花光了(can’t make ends meet)，她感到很苦恼。请你给她写一封回信，给出合理的理财建议，并分享你的经验。 内容包括： 1. 表示理解并安慰她； 2. 给出至少两条具体建议(如使用梦想罐、记账、先存后花等)； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mary, I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble managing your pocket money. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．假如你是李明，请以“My View on Money”为题写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 你对金钱的看法； 2. 如何合理理财； 3. 谈谈你的理财计划。 要求：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；100词左右；语句通顺，语法正确。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司zxxk.com 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 On the money金钱 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 话题范畴：人与自我，以“金钱”为话题，主要围绕金钱的用途、与金钱相关的故事及明智支配金钱等内容展开。 相关写作内容: 1描述个人对压岁钱或零花钱的支配情况; 2阐述对“正确金钱观”的理解; 3给出合理使用金钱的建议 【词汇积累】 1. 金钱用途 lucky money 压岁钱 moneybox 存钱罐 savings 存款 bank account 银行账户 school supplies 学习用品 daily needs 日常需求 donate to charities 向慈善机构捐款 selfimprovement 自我提升 spend…on… 把……花在……上 save for a rainy day 未雨绸缪 2. 消费建议 manage money wisely 明智地管理金钱 keep a record 做记录 allocate lucky money properly 合理分配压岁钱 make a budget 制订预算 save for longterm goals 为长期目标存钱 make a shopping list 列购物清单 develop good moneymanaging habits 养成良好的理财习惯 make a wise decision 做出明智的决定 【句式积累】 开头句 ①As teenagers, we should learn how to use our lucky money properly. 作为青少年，我们应当学会如何合理使用自己的压岁钱。 ②It’s important for us to learn to spend money wisely. 对我们来说，学会理性消费很重要。 中间句 ①We should divide our money into different parts for daily use, hobbies and savings. 我们应该把钱分成不同的部分，用于日常开销、爱好和储蓄。 ②We are supposed to save some money for sudden needs instead of spending it all. 我们应该存一些钱以备不时之需，而非全部花光。 ③It’s meaningful to donate some money to charities to help people in need. 捐一些钱给慈善机构来帮助有需要的人是很有意义的。 ④Don’t spend money on things you don’t really need. 不要把钱花在你并不真正需要的东西上。 结尾句 ①Let’s start by developing small habits of wise consumption—like making a budget, thinking twice before buying, and focusing on practical value. 让我们从培养明智消费的小习惯开始——比如制订预算、购物前三思以及关注实用价值。 ②In a word, we should spend money on what is necessary and helpful to our growth. 总之，我们应该把钱花在必要且有益于成长的事情上。 谚语 A penny saved is a penny earned. 省一分钱等于挣一分钱。 Put your hand no further than your sleeve will reach. 量入为出。 。 1. 点明主题：分享如何使用零花钱 I’d like to share my plan for… 2. 展开叙述：零花钱花在什么地方 To use my pocket money…First, I spend…on school supplies…; Besides, I plan to save…; Finally, I donate…to help… 3. 总结全文：明智地使用零花钱很重要 …is important for…It’s not just about…It’s about… 1. 开头：表明合理支配压岁钱的重要性 As middle school students, it’s important for us to learn to manage money and spend it wisely. 2. 中间：介绍自己如何支配压岁钱 I do manage my lucky money well. When I receive my lucky money each year, I divide it into…parts. I spend some on…, some on… and I save the rest. I also keep some money to… 3. 结尾：合理支配压岁钱的建议 First, make a budget before spending. Second, save a part regularly…Finally, the more we spend on…, the more…By doing so, we can… 为增强学生的理财意识,倡导理性消费，我校开展了主题为“I’m a Wise Money Manager”的评选活动。请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文介绍你每月零花钱的使用情况及理由，参与本次评选。内容包括: 1. 介绍你的零花钱主要用于哪些方面; 2. 解释你为什么要这样分配零花钱; 3. 管理好自己零花钱的意义。 I’m a Wise Money Manager It is very important for us to learn to manage pocket money. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四步法写作 1．◆第一步:思路剖析 (一)仔细审题 1)文体:介绍零花钱的使用情况及理由，是一篇____________; 2)人称:介绍自己零花钱的使用情况及理由，以____________为主; 3)时态:介绍每月零花钱的使用情况及理由，时态主要为____________。 (二)篇章布局 Beginning:引入主题—简要说明每月零花钱的整体分配原则; Body:具体阐述—详细介绍零花钱的主要用途,并逐一解释分配原因; Ending:表达感悟—总结管理零花钱的意义,强调理性消费与理财习惯对成长的重要性。 2．◆第二步:推敲词汇 ________________ 为明智地理财感到自豪 ________________ 学习如何理财 ________________ 把零花钱分成三个部分 ________________ 储蓄罐 ________________ 为未来的目标做准备 ________________ 被用于爱好 ________________ 不仅……而且…… ________________ 明白理财的价值 3．◆第三步:连词成句 1)作为一名中学生，我认真对待我的零花钱。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2)每个月拿到零花钱的时候，我把它分成三个部分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3)首先，我花了大约40%在书本之类的学习用品上。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4)最重要的一个原因是，我相信花钱在学习上是最好的选择。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5)管理零花钱教我学会如何提前计划和明智地消费。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．◆第四步：连句成篇 I’m a Wise Money Manager It is very important for us to learn to manage pocket money. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1． 说明文 第一人称 一般现在时 2． be proud of managing money wisely/take pride in managing money wisely learn how to manage money divide pocket money into three parts piggy bank prepare for future goals be used for hobbies not only... but also... understand the value of managing money 3． As a middle school student, I take my pocket money seriously. When I get my pocket money every month, I divide it into three parts. First, I spend about 40% on school things like books. One of the most important reasons is that I believe spending money on learning is the best choice. Managing pocket money teaches me to learn how to plan ahead and spend wisely. 4．范文： I’m a Wise Money Manager It is very important for us to learn to manage pocket money. As a middle school student, I take my pocket money seriously and I’m proud of being a wise money manager. When I get my pocket money every month, I divide it into three parts. First, I spend about 40% on school things like books. One of the most important reasons is that I believe spending money on learning is the best choice. Second, I save 30% in my piggy bank. This helps me prepare for unexpected needs and my future goals. Finally, the rest is used for hobbies or helping others, which makes my life colourful and meaningful. Managing pocket money teaches me to learn how to plan ahead and spend wisely. It not only develops my self-control but also helps me understand the value of managing money. 【详解】1．本文是一篇介绍零花钱使用情况及理由的文章，属于说明文，故第①空应填说明文。介绍自己的零花钱使用情况应用第一人称，故第②空填第一人称。介绍每月零花钱的使用情况及理由，时态主要为一般现在时，故第③空填一般现在时。 2． “为明智地理财感到自豪”译为be proud of managing money wisely/ take pride in managing money wisely；“学习如何理财”译为learn how to manage money；“把零花钱分成三个部分”译为divide pocket money into three parts；“储蓄罐”译为piggy bank；“为未来的目标做准备”译为prepare for future goals；“被用于爱好”译为be used for hobbies；“不仅……而且……”译为not only... but also...；“明白理财的价值”译为understand the value of managing money。 3． “作为一名中学生，我认真对待我的零花钱”译为As a middle school student, I take my pocket money seriously。主语“我”译为“I”，作主语；“认真对待”译为“take...seriously”，用一般现在时；“我的零花钱”译为“my pocket money”，作宾语。 “每个月拿到零花钱的时候，我把它分成三个部分”译为When I get my pocket money every month, I divide it into three parts。“当……的时候”用when引导时间状语从句；“拿到零花钱”译为“get my pocket money”；“分成”译为“divide into”。 “首先，我花了大约40%在书本之类的学习用品上”译为First, I spend about 40% on school things like books。“花费……在……上”用固定搭配“spend...on...”；“大约40%”译为“about 40%”；“书本之类的学习用品”译为“school things like books”。 “最重要的一个原因是，我相信花钱在学习上是最好的选择”译为One of the most important reasons is that I believe spending money on learning is the best choice。“最重要的一个原因”译为“one of the most important reasons”；“相信”译为“believe”，后接宾语从句；“花钱在学习上”译为“spending money on learning”，作从句主语；“最好的选择”译为“the best choice”。 “管理零花钱教我学会如何提前计划和明智地消费”译为Managing pocket money teaches me to learn how to plan ahead and spend wisely。“管理零花钱”用动名词短语作主语；“教某人做某事”用固定搭配“teach sb. to do sth.”；“如何提前计划”译为“how to plan ahead”；“明智地消费”译为“spend wisely”。 4．写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文（介绍零花钱使用情况） 时态：以一般现在时为主 明确要点： ①零花钱主要用途（学习用品、储蓄、爱好）； ②分配原因（投资学习、为未来准备、丰富生活）； ③管理零花钱的意义（学会规划、明智消费）。 确定人称：以第一人称“I”叙述。 注意事项：需包含题干中所有要点，不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引入主题——简要说明每月零花钱的整体分配原则。 主体段：具体阐述——详细介绍零花钱的主要用途，并逐一解释分配原因。 结尾段：表达感悟——总结管理零花钱的意义，强调理性消费与理财习惯对成长的重要性。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：零花钱用途 spend about 40% on school things like books/put 30% into my piggy bank/use the rest for hobbies like painting and reading/save half of it for future use/buy books and stationery/spend some on snacks and small gifts等 要点二：分配理由 spending money on study is the best choice/prepare for future goals/enjoy hobbies and relax/I want to be independent/I need to save for rainy days/I enjoy learning new skills等 要点三：管理零花钱的意义 teaches me how to plan ahead/helps me understand the value of money/good habits will help me in the future/makes me more responsible/helps me become a better person/prepares me for future life等 【基础必做】 一、汉译英 1. 压岁钱 2. 存钱罐 3. 存款 4. 银行账户 5. 学习用品 6. 日常需求 7. 向慈善机构捐款 8. 自我提升 9. 把……花在……上 10. 未雨绸缪 11. 明智地管理金钱 12. 做记录 13. 合理分配压岁钱 14. 制订预算 15. 为长期目标存钱 16. 列购物清单 17. 养成良好的理财习惯 18. 做出明智的决定 【参考答案】 1. lucky money 2. moneybox 3. savings 4. bank account 5. school supplies 6. daily needs 7. donate to charities 8. selfimprovement 9. spend…on… 10. save for a rainy day 11. manage money wisely 12. keep a record 13. allocate lucky money properly 14. make a budget 15. save for longterm goals 16. make a shopping list 17. develop good moneymanaging habits 18. make a wise decision 二、句子翻译： 1. 作为青少年，我们应当学会如何合理使用自己的压岁钱。 2. 对我们来说，学会理性消费很重要。 3. 我们应该把钱分成不同的部分，用于日常开销、爱好和储蓄。 4. 我们应该存一些钱以备不时之需，而非全部花光。 5. 捐一些钱给慈善机构来帮助有需要的人是很有意义的。 6. 不要把钱花在你并不真正需要的东西上。 7. 让我们从培养明智消费的小习惯开始——比如制订预算、购物前三思以及关注实用价值。 8. 总之，我们应该把钱花在必要且有益于成长的事情上。 【参考答案】 1. As teenagers, we should learn how to use our lucky money properly. 2. It’s important for us to learn to spend money wisely. 3. We should divide our money into different parts for daily use, hobbies and savings. 4. We are supposed to save some money for sudden needs instead of spending it all. 5. It’s meaningful to donate some money to charities to help people in need. 6. Don’t spend money on things you don’t really need. 7. Let’s start by developing small habits of wise consumption—like making a budget, thinking twice before buying, and focusing on practical value. 8. In a word, we should spend money on what is necessary and helpful to our growth. 【提升必做】 1．英语课上同学们正在进行主题为“学会理财，健康成长”的讨论。请你以“My Pocket Money”为题用英语写一篇演讲稿代表你的小组发言。内容包括: 1. 你是如何获得零花钱的(做家务、节日收到红包等)； 2. 你是如何使用零花钱的(买学习用品、为父母买礼物、捐给有需要的人等)； 3. 零花钱对你的意义。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Pocket Money Hello, everyone. I’m glad to talk about my pocket money here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Pocket Money Hello, everyone. I’m glad to talk about my pocket money here. I get pocket money mainly by doing chores at home, such as cleaning my room and washing dishes. Sometimes I get some as gifts during festivals. I use it in a planned way. I spend most on study supplies, like notebooks and pens. I also save a small amount monthly. When I have enough savings, I buy books I like or give small gifts to my parents on their birthdays. I also give some to charities. Pocket money is meaningful because it helps me manage money and become more independent. 【详解】写作步骤： 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：零花钱的获取途径、零花钱的使用方式、零花钱带来的收获感悟 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出话题，介绍零花钱的获取渠道 主体段：具体叙述零花钱的各项用途 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：零花钱的获取途径   do chores/do housework/clean my room/wash dishes/get gifts during festivals/earn/house‑work/reward等 要点二：零花钱的使用方式 study supplies/notebooks/pens/save a small amount monthly/buy favourite books/give small gifts to parents/give money to charities/budget/save‑up/donate/present等 要点三：零花钱带来的收获感悟 manage money/become more independent/teach me useful life skills/shape my good values/independent/responsible/value等 2．假设你叫李华，你的朋友王明来信说他总是很快花完零花钱，感到很苦恼。请你给他写一封回信，给他一些关于如何管理零花钱的建议。 要求： 1. 至少给出三条建议，并适当说明理由。 2. 必须包含本单元所学内容：when/where状语从句，以及至少一个本单元的重点句型（如One of the best ways…/The+比较级…/Why don’t you…）。 3. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰，不少于80词。 4. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Wang Ming, I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your pocket money. Here is some advice for you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice can help you. Good luck with your money management! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Possible Version: Dear Wang Ming, I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your pocket money. Here is some advice for you. First, why don’t you simply make a budget? Write down your income and plan your spending. When you have a clear plan, you will know where your money goes. Second, you should save money where you won’t spend it easily. For example, you can put your spare money into a moneybox or a bank account. The earlier you start saving, the more money you will have in the future. Third, one of the best ways to control spending is to set a goal. Think about something you really want, like a new laptop or a pair of shoes. When you want to buy something unnecessary, remind yourself of that goal. I hope my advice can help you. Good luck with your money management! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：一封回信，属于应用文中的书信类文体。时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：至少三条建议并说明理由，使用when/where状语从句及至少一个本单元重点句型（One of the best ways.../The+比较级.../Why don’t you...） 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第二人称（you）并用 注意事项：语句通顺，逻辑清晰，不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：表达遗憾与理解，引出建议 主体段：依次给出三条建议 结尾段：表达祝愿 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：给出管理零花钱的建议 制定预算：why don’t you simply make a budget/Write down your income and plan your spending/When you have a clear plan, you will know where your money goes/when you find you spend too much, you can cut it down等 存入不易取用之处：you should save money where you won’t spend it easily/you can put your spare money into a moneybox or a bank account/The earlier you start saving, the more money you will have in the future/put it in a piggy bank or a savings account等 设定目标控制消费：one of the best ways to control spending is to set a goal/Think about something you really want, like a new laptop or a pair of shoes/When you want to buy something unnecessary, remind yourself of that goal/make a list before you go shopping等 3．题目：My Experience of Managing Money 写作要求： 1. 简单介绍自己管理零花钱的经历与感受； 2. 结合本单元核心词汇：save, spend, budget, earn, pocket money, advice； 3. 词数80~100词，语句通顺，不出现真实校名与人名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Experience of Managing Money I get 60 yuan as pocket money every week. At first, I spent all of it on snacks and toys, which made me regret later. Then my teacher gave me advice on making a budget. Now, I save 20 yuan monthly and spend the rest on books and stationery. Last month, I even earned extra money by helping my neighbour walk his dog. Managing money not only helps me save for my dream mountain bike but also teaches me responsibility. I feel proud of learning this important skill. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，使用一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：管理零花钱的经历、个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（I /my） 注意事项：结合本单元核心词汇：save, spend, budget, earn, pocket money, advice；不出现真实校名与人名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，介绍日常零花钱，讲述从前乱花钱的经历 主体段：写他人给予理财建议，管理零花钱经历 结尾段：抒发个人感受，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：管理零花钱经历 最初阶段：spent all of it on snacks and toys/I wasted every cent on junk food and small gadgets/I used up every penny on snacks等 管理经历：save 20 yuan monthly and spend the rest on books and stationery/I made a budget to divide my pocket money/I keep some money in reserve each month等 要点二：理财感受 内心感受：teaches me responsibility/feel meaningful/feel it is a useful life skill等 4．假设你是李华，你的英国网友Mary在网上发帖说，她每月有30英镑零花钱，但总是不到月底就花光了(can’t make ends meet)，她感到很苦恼。请你给她写一封回信，给出合理的理财建议，并分享你的经验。 内容包括： 1. 表示理解并安慰她； 2. 给出至少两条具体建议(如使用梦想罐、记账、先存后花等)； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mary, I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble managing your pocket money. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文 Dear Mary, I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble managing your pocket money. Don’t worry. Many teenagers have the same problem. Here are some ideas that may help you. First, try using a dream tin. Write down what you really want on the tin, and put some money into it every time you receive your pocket money. This helps you save for important things instead of spending on unnecessary snacks. Second, keep a record of your spending. When you see where your money goes, you will find it easier to cut down useless costs. I believe you will learn to manage your money wisely and make ends meet soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（建议信），以一般现在时为主。 明确要点：表示理解并安慰Mary；给出两条理财建议；表达相信她能学会理性理财、收支平衡。 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第二人称（You）。 注意事项：书信格式规范，称呼、结束语齐全；内容要包括所有要点；语句通顺，语法正确。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：听闻 Mary 零花钱管理困难，进行安慰，引出下文建议； 主体段：分两点介绍打理零花钱的具体可行方法； 结尾段：表达信心，祝愿她学会理性理财，实现收支平衡。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：安慰对方，引出建议。 I’m sorry to hear that/I’m sorry to know that/Don’t worry./you don’t need to worry too much./Here are some ideas that may help you./I’d like to share some practical suggestions to help you solve the problem.等。 要点二：两条具体建议。 First, try using a dream tin./prepare a special dream tin and write down your long-expected wishes or important goals on the surface of it./Second, keep a record of your spending./make a simple monthly spending plan in advance/Before you spend money on something, try to distinguish between needs and wants.等。 要点三：表达祝愿。 I believe you will learn to manage your money wisely and make ends meet soon./I firmly believe that you will master the skill of managing money wisely, arrange your daily expenses properly and finally make ends meet perfectly.等。 5．假如你是李明，请以“My View on Money”为题写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 你对金钱的看法； 2. 如何合理理财； 3. 谈谈你的理财计划。 要求：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；100词左右；语句通顺，语法正确。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My View on Money Money is important in our life, but it’s not everything. We need money to buy necessary things like food and clothes, but we shouldn’t waste it on useless items. To use money wisely, I make a monthly budget for my pocket money. I save half of it and use the rest for books or stationery. Sometimes I help my parents with housework to get extra money. My future plan is to save up for a summer camp. I believe good money management can help me achieve my goals and live a stable life. 【详解】写作步骤   [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：议论文，时态用一般现在时 明确要点：对金钱的看法；  如何正确使用金钱；  谈谈个人的理财计划。 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；100词左右；语句通顺，语法正确。 [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构：   开头段：表示对金钱的看法； 主体段：如何正确使用金钱；   结尾段：谈谈个人的理财计划。 [第三步：要点展开]   要点一： 表示对金钱的看法 对金钱看法：Money is important in our life, but it’s not everything/Money is necessary for us.等   个人的观点：We need money to buy necessary things/we shouldn’t waste it on useless items/We should manage money wisely.等 要点二：如何正确使用金钱 正确使用金钱：make a monthly budget for my pocket money/save half of it and use the rest for books or stationery/help my parents with housework to get extra money/keep accounts/I save part of my pocket money every month/I don’t waste money on expensive snacks等 要点三：谈谈个人的理财计划 理财计划：My future plan is to save up for a summer camp/to help people in need等 个人观点：good money management can help me achieve my goals and live a stable life/In short, we should be the master of money, not its slave等 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司zxxk.com 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $