Unit 3 Smart Learning（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材人教版九年级上册

本讲义聚焦“智慧学习”主题，围绕“人与自我”中“生活与学习”范畴，系统梳理学习方法介绍与体会分享的写作要点，涵盖说明文、应用文等体裁，明确人称（一/二人称）及时态（一般现在时为主）运用规范。通过“储素材”模块分类提供学习行为、英语专项、品质描述词等核心词汇，分功能呈现开头、中间、结尾句型及名言，结合佳句仿写与四种万能写作模板，搭建从词汇积累到篇章构建的完整学习支架。 该资料特色在于以核心素养为导向，通过“品范例”中基础版与提升版对比，引导学生运用“of great importance”“not only...but also...”等高级表达及“the+比较级”句型，提升语言能力与思维品质。“重实战”模块设计多样化写作任务，助力学生在应用中强化学习能力。课中为教师提供鲜活素材与结构化教学工具，提升授课效率，课后学生可借助模板与演练题自主练习，有效查漏补缺。

Unit 3 Smart Learning 单元同步写作讲义 本单元教材写作情境为“智慧学习”,属于 “人与自我” 主题范畴中 “生活与学习” 这一主题群,涉及子主题 “积极的学习体验,恰当的学习方法与策略,勤学善思”。常见的写作任务是介绍学习方法并分享学习体会。体裁多为说明文或电子邮件等应用文。写作时主要用第一人称I/we和第二人称you,在陈述自己的观点及提建议时应用一般现在时，表示祝愿及希望时可用祈使句或一般将来时。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 核心词汇 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. 学习行为 & 方式 take notes 记笔记 use flashcards 使用抽认卡 review key ideas 复习要点 do research projects 做研究项目 test myself 自我检测 watch learning videos 看学习视频 create mind maps 画思维导图 work in groups 小组合作 set learning goals 制定学习目标 2. 英语学习专项 look up words in a dictionary 查字典 keep a learning diary 写学习日记 speak English with classmates 和同学说英语 read aloud 大声朗读 repeat dialogues 复述对话 follow conversations 听懂对话 remember new words 记生词 grammar rules 语法规则 3. 品质 & 描述词 active learner 主动学习者 growth mindset 成长型思维 successful learner 优秀的学习者 step by step 一步步地 in part 部分地 in addition 此外 feedback 反馈 guidance 指导 4. 高频短语 connect...with... 把… 和… 联系起来 take advantage of 利用 lose heart 灰心 come across problems 遇到问题 put off 推迟 句型积累 [教材典句] ①Practice makes perfect. ②He suggested that learners should read and take notes very carefully,then summarize the key points. ③In addition,studies show that students learn more when they hang out with other students who are serious about study. ④By doing hands-on experiments,Peter finds that he can connect physics with something in real life. ⑤Reading is important for learning in general. 【开头型】 ① Everyone is born with the ability to learn. 每个人天生都具备学习的能力。 ② Good learning habits are the key to successful learning. 良好的学习习惯是高效学习的关键。 ③ It is important for us to learn wisely instead of studying hard blindly. 对我们来说，明智学习远比盲目苦学更重要。 ④ Many students have difficulties in learning and need good methods. 很多学生在学习中遇到困难，需要好的学习方法。 ⑤ I have some useful experience to share about smart learning.我有一些高效学习的有用经验可以分享。 【中间句】 ① We should create interest in our study to avoid getting bored. 我们应该培养学习兴趣，避免感到枯燥无聊。 ② It’s helpful to connect what we learn with interesting things. 将所学知识和有趣的事物结合起来大有裨益。 ③ We must pay full attention to knowledge when we study. 学习时我们必须全身心专注所学知识。 ④ Never be afraid of making mistakes and learn from them. 不要害怕犯错，要学会从错误中吸取教训。 ⑤ We need to keep practicing what we have learned every day. 我们需要每天坚持巩固所学的知识。 ⑥ Taking notes and drawing mind maps help us study better. 记笔记、画思维导图能帮助我们更好地学习。 ⑦ It’s necessary to review our knowledge after learning new things. 学习新知识后，复习巩固是很有必要的。 ⑧ We should ask questions and find out answers in time. 我们要主动提问，及时找出问题的答案。 ⑨ If you feel tired, you can change your study ways to relax. 如果学习疲惫，可以更换学习方式放松自己。 ⑩ Working with classmates helps us solve learning problems. 和同学合作学习，能帮助我们解决学习难题。 【结尾句 】 ① Good methods can make our learning more efficient and easy. 好的方法能让我们的学习更高效、更轻松。 ② Learning wisely helps us improve ourselves little by little. 智慧学习能帮助我们一点点提升自我。 ③ I believe we will learn better with good learning habits. 我相信拥有良好的学习习惯，我们会学得更好。 ④ Learning is a lifelong journey and we should keep learning. 学习是终身的旅程，我们应当坚持学习。 ⑤ Keep practicing and you will finally get good grades. 坚持勤学巧练，你终会取得优异的成绩。 【名言积累】 ① Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 ② Use it or lose it. 用进废退。 ③ No pain, no gain. 一分耕耘，一分收获。 ④ A good method is half the success. 好的方法是成功的一半。 ⑤ Learn wisely and learn well. 明智求学，笃学致远。 佳句仿写 11.English learning is very important to us.（用 of great importance升格） _________________________________________________________________ 2. 我很高兴能够给你一些关于如何学好英语的建议。 翻译： __________________________________________________________ 3.Ella wants to know Peter’s secret to learning physics well.【教材Section A 1c】 仿写：听一些有趣的东西是语言学习的秘诀。 _______________________________________________ 4.I study by reviewing my notes.【教材Section A 1d】 I repeat the dialogues from the films I like.【教材Section A 3a】 仿写：我计划通过跟读电影里的对话来改善我的发音。 _________________________________________________________________ 5 .The more we practise,the better we learn.【教材Section B 1b】 仿写：我说得越多,口语就会越好。 _________________________________________________________________ 6.It can help me with my reading skills and let me know different cultures. （用not only…but also…升格） _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ 7.It has improved local lives.【教材Section A 2c】 仿写：所有这些变化极大地改善了我的日常生活。 _________________________________________________________________ 8. 1.总的来说,我相信通过不懈努力,我能一步步提高我的英语成绩。 翻译： ___________________________________________________________ 9. 在充满学习的生活里,你会发现更多乐趣！【教材Section B 1b】 翻译： __________________________________________________ 万能写作模板 模板一：介绍各科学习方法 开头I have many useful ways to study different subjects. 中间I study ______ by ______. I think it helps me a lot. Besides, I also ______ when I study. It makes learning easier. 结尾Good learning methods are important. I will keep using these ways and make greater progress. 模板二：英语学习困难 + 解决办法 开头I have some trouble in learning English. I have several problems. 中间First, I can't ______. To solve this problem, I ______. Second, I am afraid of ______, so I often ______. 结尾I believe as long as I keep practising, my English will become better and better. 模板三：分享阅读习惯 开头I love reading very much. My love for reading starts from ______. 中间I usually read ______ (地点) in my free time. I like reading ______ (书籍类型). Every day, I spend some time reading quietly. 结尾Reading brings me happiness and knowledge. It also helps me with my schoolwork. I will keep reading all the time. 模板四：如何成为优秀学习者 开头Everyone wants to be a successful learner. Here is my advice. 中间First, you should have a growth mindset and believe in yourself. Second, ______ Don't be afraid of mistakes. 结尾Learning is a long journey. Enjoy it and you will get lots of fun. （Unit 3 Section B 3d ） 审题指导 1. 文体：应用文 2. 人称：第一人称 3.时态：以一般过去时为主 教材写作品读 My love for reading started with my father. When I was a kid,he often left storybooks on my desk. At first,I ①had trouble reading the words,so I asked my father for help. He taught me how to ②look up words in a dictionary and helped me understand long sentences.③Step by step,I could read by myself. Soon,I fell in love with the funny stories in them! After that,I ④took advantage of every free moment to read. I kept a storybook in my schoolbag for break time,and I developed a reading habit by spending 30 minutes reading before bedtime every night. Last term,I also ⑤came across some interesting science magazines in the school library. They ⑥opened up a world of mysteries and taught me fun facts about space and life on the earth. Now,I see reading as a part of daily life.⑦The more I read,the calmer and more relaxed I feel.⑧In addition,it also helps me ⑨build up my vocabulary,so I can use better words in my articles! I hope I can find more great books to read this year. What’s your favourite book?Tell me! Li Hua,aged 16 教材原句 ①【Section B 1b】However,many students do not realize this,and they have trouble learning.（have trouble doing sth.做某事有困难） ②【Section A 2a】look up words in a dictionary（look up 查阅；检查） ③【Section A 3a】I mean,you just have to take things step by step.（step by step 逐步地；循序渐进地） ④【Section B 1b】Take advantage of the best tools and resources to learn wisely and efficiently. （take advantage of 利用） ⑤【Section A 3a】But you see,I started out at zero and came across problems.［come across （偶然）遇见；发现］ ⑥【Section B 3a】Reading opened up new worlds and allowed me to discover new things for myself.（open up 打开；开放） ⑦【Section B 1b】The more we practise,the better we learn.（the+比较级,the+比较级 越……就 越……） ⑧【Section B 1b】In addition,studies show that… （in addition 另外；此外） ⑨【Section A 3a】Start simple and build up.（build up 增加；加强；创建） 假如你叫张丽,本周你班的英语角活动将围绕“My Plan for Learning English”这一话题展开讨论。请你准备一份100词左右的发言稿,从听、说、读、写这四个方面谈谈你的英语学习计划。 【基础版】 My Plan for Learning English I’m Zhang Li. I love English, and English learning is very important to us.Here’s my plan for learning English. First, listening to something interesting is the secret to language learning.I will listen to English songs to improve my listening and correct my pronunciation. Second,I have trouble speaking because my pronunciation is poor,so I plan to improve it by repeating dialogues from films.Besides,I will use my break time to practise speaking. I will be better at speaking if I speak more. Third,I plan to read newspapers and magazines in English.It can help me with my reading skills and let me know different cultures.Finally,I decide to keep a diary in English every day. Since grammar is also important for English writing,I’ll ask my English teacher for help. In general,I believe I can improve my English through hard work. That’s all. Thank you. 【提升版】 My Plan for Learning English I’m Zhang Li. I love English,and English learning is of great importance to us.Here’s my plan for learning English. First,listening to something interesting is the secret to language learning.I will listen to English songs to improve my listening as well as correct my pronunciation. Second,I have trouble speaking because of my poor pronunciation,so I plan to improve it by repeating dialogues from films.In addition,I will take advantage of my break time to practise speaking.The more I speak,the better I will be at speaking.Third,I plan to read newspapers and magazines in English.It can not only help me with my reading skills but also let me know different cultures.Finally,I decide to keep a diary in English every day. Since grammar is also important for English writing,I’ll ask my English teacher for help and get guidance from her. In general,I believe I can improve my English step by step through hard work.That’s all. Thank you. 对比维度 基础版 提升版 整体评价 要点完整，结构清晰，全部要点均覆盖；以简单句、基础连词为主，能够拿到基础分数；句式较为普通，部分表达平铺直叙，适合基础水平学生。 完整保留原文全部写作内容，只做语言升格；替换高级短语、优化句式结构，增加并列句型与比较级结构，句式更丰富，书面感更强，适合中档学生仿写拿高分。 开头部分 English learning is very important to us（英语学习对我们很重要） English learning is of great importance to us“be of great importance” 替换 very important，初中经典高级同义结构。 并列逻辑 improve my listening and correct my pronunciation（and 简单并列） improve my listening as well as correct my pronunciation用 as well as 优化并列表达，语言更多样。 原因表达 because my pronunciation is poor（because 引导原因状语从句） because of my poor pronunciationbecause of 后接名词短语，句式灵活，避免从句堆砌。 衔接词 Besides 此外 In addition 此外，书面替换，演讲稿书面表达更得体。 短语表达 use my break time 利用课间时间 take advantage of my break time高级短语：take advantage of 充分利用。 句式升级 I will be better at speaking if I speak more.if 条件句：如果我说得更多，我的口语会更好。 The more I speak, the better I will be at speaking.“the + 比较级，the + 比较级” 经典高分句型，表达更精炼有力。 并列句型 It can help me with my reading skills and let me know different cultures.简单 and 连接两个谓语。 It can not only help me with my reading skills but also let me know different cultures.not only…but also… 并列结构，增强文章层次感，考试高频加分句型。 细节扩充 I’ll ask my English teacher for help.只写向老师求助 I’ll ask my English teacher for help and get guidance from her.增加细节，语义更充实，内容不空洞。 结尾部分 I believe I can improve my English through hard work. I believe I can improve my English step by step through hard work.增加 step by step（一步步地），贴合学习计划主题，表意更贴切。 亮点词汇 important；have trouble doing；repeat dialogues；keep a diary 在原有词汇基础上新增：of great importance；as well as；because of；in addition；take advantage of；not only…but also…；step by step 高分句型 because 状语从句；if 条件状语从句 be of + 名词；the + 比较级，the + 比较级；not only…but also… 不足之处 连词种类单一；多处使用简单 if、and；部分句子缺少细节拓展；句式同质化较明显。 无语法错误；要点全部保留，句式升级到位；可再适当增加少量高级衔接词进一步拔高。 1．（25-26九年级上·湖北孝感·期中）为了让同学们能够更好地适应九年级的学习生活，做到劳逸结合，本周学校将组织同学们进行学习方法交流。请根据下面图示，以“How to Learn Wisely”为题写一篇演讲稿。 1. 语言连贯，层次清晰，可适度发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名； 3. 字数80-100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 In class Before exams How to learn wisely After class Ways to relax How to Learn Wisely Hello everyone. We are busier with our study these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（25-26九年级上·河南开封·期中）假定英语课上你们进行了关于“如何学习英语”的讨论，以下是部分讨论结果。请你从中选取一种，再补充一种你常用的方式，写一篇短文向你的同学推荐这两种方式并说明理由。 注意： 1. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 2. 词数100个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 There are many ways of learning English for us students. As for me, I always ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Different people have different ways of learning. There is always a best one for you. 3．（25-26九年级上·山东济宁·期末）某英文公众号正在举办以“Growth and Progress”为主题的征文活动，下设子主题“How My Learning Methods Changed My Life”。假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示信息，并结合你自身学习英语的经历撰写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1. 须包括以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息； 3. 100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 How My Learning Methods Changed My Life The way I learn English has completely changed, and it has made all the difference in my life.___________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（25-26九年级上·河南信阳·期末）假如你是李华，已升入高中，现应邀回校向同学们介绍英语学习方法。请你结合下图信息，以“To Be a Successful English Learner”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你的英语学习方法。 写作提示： 写作要求： 1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 To Be a Successful English Learner Good morning, everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today I want to show you some useful ways to learn English. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I truly hope these methods can be helpful to you. 5．（25-26九年级上·湖北武汉·期中）随着中国文化在国际上的影响力日益提升，“汉语热”持续升温。作为新时代的中学生，学好汉语、传承中华文化是我们的责任。请根据以下内容提示，以“My Chinese Learning”为题，写一篇演讲稿，准备在学校“爱我中华”主题活动中发言。 Why is it necessary to learn Chinese well? How do you usually learn Chinese? What is your special experience of learning Chinese? Please write more about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数100词左右（开头已给出的词不计入总词数）。 My Chinese Learning Dear teachers and classmates, I’m glad to be here telling you about my Chinese learning. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 6．（25-26九年级上·河南信阳·期中）阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请你结合下面信息，以“How reading improves my English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 ① improve my spoken English ② make my writing easier ③ develop my thinking ability …… 写作要求：1）文中须包含上面提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：improve 提高 How reading improves my English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（25-26九年级上·湖北·期中）假如你是王华，周末班上要举行学习方法交流会，你将作发言。在学习过程中，你有自己的学习方法，它有效地帮助你提高了学习成绩，让学习成为了一种享受。请按以下的提示和要求写一篇英语短文，和同学们分享一下你的学习方法： 注意：1.根据上图所给提示，适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假定你是李华，在学校举办的科技文化艺术节活动中，你打算参加以“Science and Technology Has Improved My English”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据思维导图提示，分享你的学习经历和感悟。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear friends, It’s my honor to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 8.为了了解学生课后英语学习的方式，你校对九年级学生开展了问卷调查。请你根据问卷调查结果和写作提示，以“Different Ways of Learning English After Class”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向英文报专栏投稿。 写作提示：1．简述调查结果，并分析科技对学生课后英语学习产生的影响； 2．谈谈这种学习现状的优点与存在的问题； 3．针对结果，给同学们提出两到三条合理利用科技、高效开展课后英语学习的建议。 写作要求：1．文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数100左右（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 Different Ways of Learning English After Class Our school did a survey on ninth-grade students’ after-class English learning ways. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9.．扇形图提示学校英语报就“The Use of AI Learning Tools”为主题进行了一次调查。假如你是校英语报编辑，请根据以下图表信息撰写一篇英文分析报告。 要求： 1．描述调查结果； 2．提出“人机协同”学习建议。 注意： 1．短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数80～100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 A Survey on the Use of AI Learning Tools Recently, our school English newspaper carried out a survey on the use of AI learning tools among students. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．学校英语论坛正在开展以“Learn Better, Be Smarter”为主题的分享活动。请你根据以下提示信息，分享你的英语学习方法及其效果，同时结合学习金字塔带给你的启示，谈谈你未来的英语学习策略及原因。 注意： (1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (2)词数：80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Learn Better, Be Smarter Hello, everyone. I’d like to share how I learn English. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 Smart Learning 单元同步写作讲义 本单元教材写作情境为“智慧学习”,属于 “人与自我” 主题范畴中 “生活与学习” 这一主题群,涉及子主题 “积极的学习体验,恰当的学习方法与策略,勤学善思”。常见的写作任务是介绍学习方法并分享学习体会。体裁多为说明文或电子邮件等应用文。写作时主要用第一人称I/we和第二人称you,在陈述自己的观点及提建议时应用一般现在时，表示祝愿及希望时可用祈使句或一般将来时。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 核心词汇 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. 学习行为 & 方式 take notes 记笔记 use flashcards 使用抽认卡 review key ideas 复习要点 do research projects 做研究项目 test myself 自我检测 watch learning videos 看学习视频 create mind maps 画思维导图 work in groups 小组合作 set learning goals 制定学习目标 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2. 英语学习专项 look up words in a dictionary 查字典 keep a learning diary 写学习日记 speak English with classmates 和同学说英语 read aloud 大声朗读 repeat dialogues 复述对话 follow conversations 听懂对话 remember new words 记生词 grammar rules 语法规则 3. 品质 & 描述词 active learner 主动学习者 growth mindset 成长型思维 successful learner 优秀的学习者 step by step 一步步地 in part 部分地 in addition 此外 feedback 反馈 guidance 指导 4. 高频短语 connect...with... 把… 和… 联系起来 take advantage of 利用 lose heart 灰心 come across problems 遇到问题 put off 推迟 句型积累 [教材典句] ①Practice makes perfect. ②He suggested that learners should read and take notes very carefully,then summarize the key points. ③In addition,studies show that students learn more when they hang out with other students who are serious about study. ④By doing hands-on experiments,Peter finds that he can connect physics with something in real life. ⑤Reading is important for learning in general. 【开头型】 ① Everyone is born with the ability to learn. 每个人天生都具备学习的能力。 ② Good learning habits are the key to successful learning. 良好的学习习惯是高效学习的关键。 ③ It is important for us to learn wisely instead of studying hard blindly. 对我们来说，明智学习远比盲目苦学更重要。 ④ Many students have difficulties in learning and need good methods. 很多学生在学习中遇到困难，需要好的学习方法。 ⑤ I have some useful experience to share about smart learning.我有一些高效学习的有用经验可以分享。 【中间句】 ① We should create interest in our study to avoid getting bored. 我们应该培养学习兴趣，避免感到枯燥无聊。 ② It’s helpful to connect what we learn with interesting things. 将所学知识和有趣的事物结合起来大有裨益。 ③ We must pay full attention to knowledge when we study. 学习时我们必须全身心专注所学知识。 ④ Never be afraid of making mistakes and learn from them. 不要害怕犯错，要学会从错误中吸取教训。 ⑤ We need to keep practicing what we have learned every day. 我们需要每天坚持巩固所学的知识。 ⑥ Taking notes and drawing mind maps help us study better. 记笔记、画思维导图能帮助我们更好地学习。 ⑦ It’s necessary to review our knowledge after learning new things. 学习新知识后，复习巩固是很有必要的。 ⑧ We should ask questions and find out answers in time. 我们要主动提问，及时找出问题的答案。 ⑨ If you feel tired, you can change your study ways to relax. 如果学习疲惫，可以更换学习方式放松自己。 ⑩ Working with classmates helps us solve learning problems. 和同学合作学习，能帮助我们解决学习难题。 【结尾句 】 ① Good methods can make our learning more efficient and easy. 好的方法能让我们的学习更高效、更轻松。 ② Learning wisely helps us improve ourselves little by little. 智慧学习能帮助我们一点点提升自我。 ③ I believe we will learn better with good learning habits. 我相信拥有良好的学习习惯，我们会学得更好。 ④ Learning is a lifelong journey and we should keep learning. 学习是终身的旅程，我们应当坚持学习。 ⑤ Keep practicing and you will finally get good grades. 坚持勤学巧练，你终会取得优异的成绩。 【名言积累】 ① Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 ② Use it or lose it. 用进废退。 ③ No pain, no gain. 一分耕耘，一分收获。 ④ A good method is half the success. 好的方法是成功的一半。 ⑤ Learn wisely and learn well. 明智求学，笃学致远。 佳句仿写 11.English learning is very important to us.（用 of great importance升格） _________________________________________________________________ 2. 我很高兴能够给你一些关于如何学好英语的建议。 翻译： __________________________________________________________ 3.Ella wants to know Peter’s secret to learning physics well.【教材Section A 1c】 仿写：听一些有趣的东西是语言学习的秘诀。 _______________________________________________ 4.I study by reviewing my notes.【教材Section A 1d】 I repeat the dialogues from the films I like.【教材Section A 3a】 仿写：我计划通过跟读电影里的对话来改善我的发音。 _________________________________________________________________ 5 .The more we practise,the better we learn.【教材Section B 1b】 仿写：我说得越多,口语就会越好。 _________________________________________________________________ 6.It can help me with my reading skills and let me know different cultures. （用not only…but also…升格） _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ 7.It has improved local lives.【教材Section A 2c】 仿写：所有这些变化极大地改善了我的日常生活。 _________________________________________________________________ 8. 1.总的来说,我相信通过不懈努力,我能一步步提高我的英语成绩。 翻译： ___________________________________________________________ 9. 在充满学习的生活里,你会发现更多乐趣！【教材Section B 1b】 翻译： __________________________________________________ 答案： 1.English learning is of great importance to us. 2.I’m glad to give you some advice on how to learn English well. 3.Listening to something interesting is the secret to language learning. 4.I plan to improve my pronunciation by repeating dialogues from films. 5.The more I speak, the better I will be at speaking. 6.It can not only help me with my reading skills but also let me know different cultures. 7.In general, I believe I can improve my English step by step through hard work. 8.You will find more joy in living a life with learning！ 万能写作模板 模板一：介绍各科学习方法 开头I have many useful ways to study different subjects. 中间I study ______ by ______. I think it helps me a lot. Besides, I also ______ when I study. It makes learning easier. 结尾Good learning methods are important. I will keep using these ways and make greater progress. 模板二：英语学习困难 + 解决办法 开头I have some trouble in learning English. I have several problems. 中间First, I can't ______. To solve this problem, I ______. Second, I am afraid of ______, so I often ______. 结尾I believe as long as I keep practising, my English will become better and better. 模板三：分享阅读习惯 开头I love reading very much. My love for reading starts from ______. 中间I usually read ______ (地点) in my free time. I like reading ______ (书籍类型). Every day, I spend some time reading quietly. 结尾Reading brings me happiness and knowledge. It also helps me with my schoolwork. I will keep reading all the time. 模板四：如何成为优秀学习者 开头Everyone wants to be a successful learner. Here is my advice. 中间First, you should have a growth mindset and believe in yourself. Second, ______ Don't be afraid of mistakes. 结尾Learning is a long journey. Enjoy it and you will get lots of fun. （Unit 3 Section B 3d ） 审题指导 1. 文体：应用文 2. 人称：第一人称 3.时态：以一般过去时为主 教材写作品读 My love for reading started with my father. When I was a kid,he often left storybooks on my desk. At first,I ①had trouble reading the words,so I asked my father for help. He taught me how to ②look up words in a dictionary and helped me understand long sentences.③Step by step,I could read by myself. Soon,I fell in love with the funny stories in them! After that,I ④took advantage of every free moment to read. I kept a storybook in my schoolbag for break time,and I developed a reading habit by spending 30 minutes reading before bedtime every night. Last term,I also ⑤came across some interesting science magazines in the school library. They ⑥opened up a world of mysteries and taught me fun facts about space and life on the earth. Now,I see reading as a part of daily life.⑦The more I read,the calmer and more relaxed I feel.⑧In addition,it also helps me ⑨build up my vocabulary,so I can use better words in my articles! I hope I can find more great books to read this year. What’s your favourite book?Tell me! Li Hua,aged 16 教材原句 ①【Section B 1b】However,many students do not realize this,and they have trouble learning.（have trouble doing sth.做某事有困难） ②【Section A 2a】look up words in a dictionary（look up 查阅；检查） ③【Section A 3a】I mean,you just have to take things step by step.（step by step 逐步地；循序渐进地） ④【Section B 1b】Take advantage of the best tools and resources to learn wisely and efficiently. （take advantage of 利用） ⑤【Section A 3a】But you see,I started out at zero and came across problems.［come across （偶然）遇见；发现］ ⑥【Section B 3a】Reading opened up new worlds and allowed me to discover new things for myself.（open up 打开；开放） ⑦【Section B 1b】The more we practise,the better we learn.（the+比较级,the+比较级 越……就 越……） ⑧【Section B 1b】In addition,studies show that… （in addition 另外；此外） ⑨【Section A 3a】Start simple and build up.（build up 增加；加强；创建） 假如你叫张丽,本周你班的英语角活动将围绕“My Plan for Learning English”这一话题展开讨论。请你准备一份100词左右的发言稿,从听、说、读、写这四个方面谈谈你的英语学习计划。 【基础版】 My Plan for Learning English I’m Zhang Li. I love English, and English learning is very important to us.Here’s my plan for learning English. First, listening to something interesting is the secret to language learning.I will listen to English songs to improve my listening and correct my pronunciation. Second,I have trouble speaking because my pronunciation is poor,so I plan to improve it by repeating dialogues from films.Besides,I will use my break time to practise speaking. I will be better at speaking if I speak more. Third,I plan to read newspapers and magazines in English.It can help me with my reading skills and let me know different cultures.Finally,I decide to keep a diary in English every day. Since grammar is also important for English writing,I’ll ask my English teacher for help. In general,I believe I can improve my English through hard work. That’s all. Thank you. 【提升版】 My Plan for Learning English I’m Zhang Li. I love English,and English learning is of great importance to us.Here’s my plan for learning English. First,listening to something interesting is the secret to language learning.I will listen to English songs to improve my listening as well as correct my pronunciation. Second,I have trouble speaking because of my poor pronunciation,so I plan to improve it by repeating dialogues from films.In addition,I will take advantage of my break time to practise speaking.The more I speak,the better I will be at speaking.Third,I plan to read newspapers and magazines in English.It can not only help me with my reading skills but also let me know different cultures.Finally,I decide to keep a diary in English every day. Since grammar is also important for English writing,I’ll ask my English teacher for help and get guidance from her. In general,I believe I can improve my English step by step through hard work.That’s all. Thank you. 对比维度 基础版 提升版 整体评价 要点完整，结构清晰，全部要点均覆盖；以简单句、基础连词为主，能够拿到基础分数；句式较为普通，部分表达平铺直叙，适合基础水平学生。 完整保留原文全部写作内容，只做语言升格；替换高级短语、优化句式结构，增加并列句型与比较级结构，句式更丰富，书面感更强，适合中档学生仿写拿高分。 开头部分 English learning is very important to us（英语学习对我们很重要） English learning is of great importance to us“be of great importance” 替换 very important，初中经典高级同义结构。 并列逻辑 improve my listening and correct my pronunciation（and 简单并列） improve my listening as well as correct my pronunciation用 as well as 优化并列表达，语言更多样。 原因表达 because my pronunciation is poor（because 引导原因状语从句） because of my poor pronunciationbecause of 后接名词短语，句式灵活，避免从句堆砌。 衔接词 Besides 此外 In addition 此外，书面替换，演讲稿书面表达更得体。 短语表达 use my break time 利用课间时间 take advantage of my break time高级短语：take advantage of 充分利用。 句式升级 I will be better at speaking if I speak more.if 条件句：如果我说得更多，我的口语会更好。 The more I speak, the better I will be at speaking.“the + 比较级，the + 比较级” 经典高分句型，表达更精炼有力。 并列句型 It can help me with my reading skills and let me know different cultures.简单 and 连接两个谓语。 It can not only help me with my reading skills but also let me know different cultures.not only…but also… 并列结构，增强文章层次感，考试高频加分句型。 细节扩充 I’ll ask my English teacher for help.只写向老师求助 I’ll ask my English teacher for help and get guidance from her.增加细节，语义更充实，内容不空洞。 结尾部分 I believe I can improve my English through hard work. I believe I can improve my English step by step through hard work.增加 step by step（一步步地），贴合学习计划主题，表意更贴切。 亮点词汇 important；have trouble doing；repeat dialogues；keep a diary 在原有词汇基础上新增：of great importance；as well as；because of；in addition；take advantage of；not only…but also…；step by step 高分句型 because 状语从句；if 条件状语从句 be of + 名词；the + 比较级，the + 比较级；not only…but also… 不足之处 连词种类单一；多处使用简单 if、and；部分句子缺少细节拓展；句式同质化较明显。 无语法错误；要点全部保留，句式升级到位；可再适当增加少量高级衔接词进一步拔高。 1．（25-26九年级上·湖北孝感·期中）为了让同学们能够更好地适应九年级的学习生活，做到劳逸结合，本周学校将组织同学们进行学习方法交流。请根据下面图示，以“How to Learn Wisely”为题写一篇演讲稿。 1. 语言连贯，层次清晰，可适度发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名； 3. 字数80-100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 In class Before exams How to learn wisely After class Ways to relax How to Learn Wisely Hello everyone. We are busier with our study these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Learn Wisely Hello everyone. We are busier with our study these days. Learning wisely is very important for us. Here are some of my suggestions. First, make a good study plan. Write down what you need to do each day. Second, pay full attention in class. After class, review lessons and finish homework on time. Before exams, go over key points to check weak knowledge. Also, don’t forget to take breaks and relax. Do some sports, or just have a good sleep. A clear mind helps you learn better. Finally, if you have problems, ask your teachers or classmates for help. Let’s learn wisely and enjoy our school life! Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：围绕课堂、课后、考前、放松方法四个板块分享高效学习方法，词数80-100，使用给定开头 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）、第二人称（you/your） 注意事项：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：采用题目给出固定开篇，点明智慧学习的重要性，引出建议 主体段：分课堂、课后、考前、放松方式四个维度依次给出学习建议 结尾段：发出倡议，搭配演讲标准结束语收尾 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：In class 课堂词汇：listen carefully/take notes/focus attention等 拓展词汇：raise questions in time等 实用句型：We should...in class to grasp key knowledge等 要点二：After class 课后词汇：make study plans/finish homework/ask for help等 拓展词汇：review knowledge points等 实用句型：It’s wise to arrange your daily tasks well等 要点三：Before exams 备考词汇：review lessons/sort out mistakes/check notes等 拓展词汇：do proper exercises等 实用句型：Spare time to review all key points before exams等 要点四：Ways to relax 放松词汇：do sports/have enough sleep/take short breaks等 拓展词汇：listen to light music等 实用句型：Relax properly to keep a clear mind for study等 2．（25-26九年级上·河南开封·期中）假定英语课上你们进行了关于“如何学习英语”的讨论，以下是部分讨论结果。请你从中选取一种，再补充一种你常用的方式，写一篇短文向你的同学推荐这两种方式并说明理由。 注意： 1. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 2. 词数100个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 There are many ways of learning English for us students. As for me, I always ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Different people have different ways of learning. There is always a best one for you. 【答案】例文 There are many ways of learning English for us students. As for me, I always do group work and listen to the teacher carefully. Doing group work is very important for us students. We are supposed to take part in group work actively. You know, we have a lot of activities in groups. We can help each other and learn from each other this way. Listening to the teacher carefully is also very important. If not, we can’t understand what the teacher is talking about. And we can’t finish homework, either. What’s more, listening carefully shows that we respect our teacher. Different people have different ways of learning. There is always a best one for you. Just keep trying and you will make great progress in English. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，时态主要为一般现在时 明确要点：从图中选取一种英语学习方法，并补充一种自己的方法，分别说明理由 确定人称：第一人称为主 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名等相关信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接开头，介绍自己两种学习英语的方式 主体段：重点介绍推荐这两种方式的理由 结尾段：总结，鼓励大家找到适合自己的学习方法 [第三步：要点展示] 要点一：从图中选取的方式 方式：do group work/take notes/use a dictionary等 理由：help each other and learn from each other/understand what the teacher has taught us better/help memorize new words等 要点二：你常用的方式 方式：listen to the teacher carefully/ask our teachers and classmates for help等 理由：understand what the teacher is talking about/show that we respect our teacher/solve problems in time等 3．（25-26九年级上·山东济宁·期末）某英文公众号正在举办以“Growth and Progress”为主题的征文活动，下设子主题“How My Learning Methods Changed My Life”。假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示信息，并结合你自身学习英语的经历撰写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1. 须包括以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息； 3. 100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 How My Learning Methods Changed My Life The way I learn English has completely changed, and it has made all the difference in my life.___________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How My Learning Methods Changed My Life The way I learn English has completely changed, and it has made all the difference in my life. I used to be afraid to speak English in public, and it was hard to remember new words. Later, I joined a study group which was started by my deskmate. I memorized words by making short sentences, so words were easily remembered in this way. I also watched English movies and took notes of useful phrases. Now, I am brave enough to speak English. My English has improved a lot, and I find that I can even talk with foreign visitors who come to our town. I know that proper methods are the key to success. I believe that we will make more progress. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般过去时和一般现在时结合 明确要点：过去学习英语的问题（害怕、记单词困难）、改变的方法（加入学习小组、通过特定方式记单词、看英语电影）、成果（勇敢、英语进步大）、感受（正确方法是成功的关键、表达相信会取得更多进步） 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实身份信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出英语学习方法的改变对生活产生影响 主体段：分别阐述过去的问题、改变的方法、取得的成果 结尾段：表达感受，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去学习英语的问题 害怕方面：used to be afraid to do sth.（过去害怕做某事），如“I used to be afraid to speak English in public”（我过去害怕在公共场合说英语） 记单词困难：it was hard to do sth.（做某事很困难），如“it was hard to remember new words”（记新单词很困难） 要点二：改变的方法 加入学习小组：join a study group（加入学习小组），如“I joined a study group which was started by my deskmate”（我加入了一个由同桌发起的学习小组） 记单词方式：memorize words by doing sth.（通过做某事记单词），如“I memorized words by making short sentences”（我通过造短句记单词） 看英语电影：watch English movies（看英语电影），如“I also watched English movies and took notes of useful phrases”（我也看英语电影并记录有用的短语） 要点三：取得的成果 勇敢方面：be brave enough to do sth.（足够勇敢做某事），如“Now, I am brave enough to speak English”（现在，我足够勇敢说英语） 英语进步：My... has improved a lot（我的……进步很大），如“My English has improved a lot”（我的英语进步很大）；talk with sb.（和某人交谈），如“I find that I can even talk with foreign visitors who come to our town”（我发现我甚至能和来我们镇的外国游客交谈） 要点四：感受 正确方法是成功的关键：proper methods are the key to success（正确的方法是成功的关键） 表达相信会取得更多进步：I believe that we will make more progress（我相信我们会取得更多进步） 4．（25-26九年级上·河南信阳·期末）假如你是李华，已升入高中，现应邀回校向同学们介绍英语学习方法。请你结合下图信息，以“To Be a Successful English Learner”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你的英语学习方法。 写作提示： 写作要求： 1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 To Be a Successful English Learner Good morning, everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today I want to show you some useful ways to learn English. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I truly hope these methods can be helpful to you. 【答案】 Good morning everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today I want to show you some useful ways to learn English. Firstly, you can develop some hobbies, such as listening to English songs, watching English movies and so on. They’re very helpful in improving listening and speaking abilities. When meeting new words, you should look them up in a dictionary. What’s more, keeping a diary about what happened during the day is the best way to improve your English writing skills. Thirdly, you should learn Chinese culture as well as Western culture, because language learning is always connected with culture. Last but not least, you may meet many difficulties on the road of learning English, but never be afraid of them and never give up. As long as you stick to it, you will make great progress! I truly hope these methods can be helpful to you. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时” ③提示：文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥。 【写作步骤】第一步，点明主旨，引入话题； 第二步，围绕主旨，从不同维度给出具体建议，并进行充分论证； 第三步，总结全文。 【亮点词汇】①what’s more更重要的是 ②be afraid of害怕 ③as well as也 ④make great progress取得巨大的进步 【亮点句型】①What’s more, keeping a diary about what happened during the day is the best way to improve your English writing skills. （动名词短语作主语） ②As long as you stick to it, you will make great progress!（as long as“只要”引导条件状语从句） 5．（25-26九年级上·湖北武汉·期中）随着中国文化在国际上的影响力日益提升，“汉语热”持续升温。作为新时代的中学生，学好汉语、传承中华文化是我们的责任。请根据以下内容提示，以“My Chinese Learning”为题，写一篇演讲稿，准备在学校“爱我中华”主题活动中发言。 Why is it necessary to learn Chinese well? How do you usually learn Chinese? What is your special experience of learning Chinese? Please write more about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数100词左右（开头已给出的词不计入总词数）。 My Chinese Learning Dear teachers and classmates, I’m glad to be here telling you about my Chinese learning. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】例文 My Chinese Learning Dear teachers and classmates, I’m glad to be here telling you about my Chinese Learning. I think learning Chinese well is very important to us. Firstly, China is developing fast, and Chinese is becoming more and more useful around the world. Secondly, it helps us understand our own culture better. I learn Chinese by reading more books and practicing writing every day. In class, I talk with my classmates about the classics and feel the beauty of the Chinese language. Once, I spent a week preparing a speech about my hometown. It was hard, but when I finished, I felt very proud. Chinese is a beautiful language. Let’s work together to learn it well and share it with the world! Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤           [第一步：审题立意]           确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主           明确要点：学好汉语的必要性，日常学习方法以及一次独特的汉语学习经历 确定人称：第一人称(I/My/We) 注意事项：不得透露真实个人信息，词数100词左右 [第二步：构思布局]           三段式结构：           开头段：引出本次演讲主题“我的汉语学习” 主体段：阐述学好汉语的意义与学习方法，讲述汉语学习经历 结尾段：升华主旨，呼吁同学们一起学好汉语、传播中华文化 [第三步：要点展开]           要点一：学好汉语的必要性 必要性：very important to us/more and more useful/understand our own culture/influence/civilization/value等      要点二：日常学习方法 学习方法：reading more books/practicing writing/talk with my classmates/take notes/recite poems/daily practice等      要点三：学习经历 学习经历：preparing a speech/It was hard/felt very proud/competition/achieve/rewarding等 6．（25-26九年级上·河南信阳·期中）阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请你结合下面信息，以“How reading improves my English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 ① improve my spoken English ② make my writing easier ③ develop my thinking ability …… 写作要求：1）文中须包含上面提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：improve 提高 How reading improves my English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How reading improves my English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. It gives me confidence when I talk in English. Secondly, reading helps make writing easier for me. When I do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelled correctly. So I make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develops my thinking ability. What I’ve read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more. What’s more, reading helps me develop a good habit of learning English. In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：阅读对英语学习的帮助（口语提升、写作提升、思维能力、学习习惯） 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：围绕"reading"这一核心展开，不得偏离主题 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，概括阅读在英语学习中的重要作用 主体段：分别介绍阅读对口语、写作、思维、习惯四个方面的帮助 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题——阅读带来快乐与兴趣 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：口语提升 核心表达：spoken English has greatly improved 拓展词汇：oral English, speaking skills, fluency, pronunciation, confidence 作用效果：It gives me confidence when I talk in English. / makes me more confident / improves my fluency 要点二：写作提升 核心表达：reading helps make writing easier 拓展词汇：spelling, grammar, vocabulary, sentence structure, accuracy 具体说明：reminds me how words are spelled correctly 作用效果：make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing / improves my writing accuracy 要点三：思维能力 核心表达：reading develops my thinking ability 拓展词汇：open-minded, think more, critical thinking, broaden horizons 具体说明：What I've read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more 作用效果：develops my thinking ability / broadens my mind 要点四：学习习惯 核心表达：reading helps me develop a good habit of learning English 拓展词汇：good habit, learning habit, self-discipline, consistency 作用效果：develop a good habit of learning English / form a regular study routine 要点五：总结升华 核心表达：reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest 拓展词汇：pleasure, satisfaction, passion, enthusiasm, fulfillment 句式结构：not only... but also...（并列结构） 作用效果：brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning 7．（25-26九年级上·湖北·期中）假如你是王华，周末班上要举行学习方法交流会，你将作发言。在学习过程中，你有自己的学习方法，它有效地帮助你提高了学习成绩，让学习成为了一种享受。请按以下的提示和要求写一篇英语短文，和同学们分享一下你的学习方法： 注意：1.根据上图所给提示，适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： As we all know, study methods are very important. One thing that helps me a lot is taking notes. I didn’t have the habit of taking notes in class before. So I always forgot what the teacher said and couldn’t finish the homework on time. Then I tried to take notes in class. I didn’t write down every word. Instead, I wrote down the important points. After class, I reviewed those notes. By taking notes, my grades improved a lot and I became more and more interested in studying. Studying with a good method can help us make progress. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，辅以一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先点明学习方法的重要性，并引出对自己帮助极大的方法——记笔记； 第二步，描述过去没有记笔记的问题，然后说明自己记笔记的具体做法； 第三步，阐述记笔记带来的成效，并总结良好学习方法的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①study method学习方法 ②take notes记笔记 ③on time按时 ④make progress取得进步 [高分句型] ①One thing that helps me a lot is taking notes.（that引导定语从句，修饰先行词one thing，点明核心学习方法） ②By taking notes, my grades improved a lot and I became more and more interested in studying.（by + 动名词短语作方式状语，明确成绩提升的原因） 7．假定你是李华，在学校举办的科技文化艺术节活动中，你打算参加以“Science and Technology Has Improved My English”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据思维导图提示，分享你的学习经历和感悟。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear friends, It’s my honor to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 【答案】 例文 Dear friends, It’s my honor to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you. In the past, I often forgot new words and my pronunciation was poor. I felt very upset and didn’t know what to do. But technology has helped me a lot. I use an e-dictionary to look up new words. I also learn English through apps to practice speaking and listening. I take online classes to improve my grammar. With technology, my English has improved greatly. I feel much more confident now. Technology is a powerful learning tool. Let’s make good use of it to learn better. Thank you for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（演讲稿），用一般过去时（叙述过去的困难）和一般现在时（描述科技帮助及感受） 明确要点：过去的困难（常忘记单词、发音差，感到非常沮丧不知所措）；科技帮助的方式（使用电子词典查单词、通过应用程序练习听说、上在线课程提高语法）；感受与感悟（英语进步很大，感到更自信，科技是强大的学习工具，好好利用它学得更好） 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：需包含所有要点，开头结尾已给出，词数80左右，注意演讲稿的交流感 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：已给出，引出话题，说明过去的困难（常忘单词、发音差，感到沮丧不知所措） 第二段：阐述科技帮助的方式（电子词典查词、应用程序练听说、在线课程提语法）及结果（英语进步大，更自信） 第三段：总结感悟（科技是强大的学习工具，好好利用学得更好）并致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去的困难 困难描述：often forgot new words/my pronunciation was poor/always had trouble remembering vocabulary/my spoken English was bad等 情绪表达：felt very upset and didn’t know what to do/got really frustrated and felt lost等 要点二：科技帮助的方式 方式一：use an e-dictionary to look up new words/use an electronic dictionary to check unfamiliar words quickly等 方式二：learn English through apps to practice speaking and listening/use mobile apps to improve my speaking and listening skills等 方式三：take online classes to improve my grammar/attend online courses to strengthen my grammar knowledge等 要点三：进步与感悟 进步表达：my English has improved greatly/I have made remarkable progress in English等 感受表达：feel much more confident now/feel way more confident than before等 感悟表达：Technology is a powerful learning tool/Technology serves as a powerful aid for learning等 呼吁：make good use of it to learn better/harness technology wisely to achieve better learning results等 8.为了了解学生课后英语学习的方式，你校对九年级学生开展了问卷调查。请你根据问卷调查结果和写作提示，以“Different Ways of Learning English After Class”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向英文报专栏投稿。 写作提示：1．简述调查结果，并分析科技对学生课后英语学习产生的影响； 2．谈谈这种学习现状的优点与存在的问题； 3．针对结果，给同学们提出两到三条合理利用科技、高效开展课后英语学习的建议。 写作要求：1．文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数100左右（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 Different Ways of Learning English After Class Our school did a survey on ninth-grade students’ after-class English learning ways. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Different Ways of Learning English After Class Our school did a survey on ninth-grade students’ after-class English learning ways. The results show that most students learn English with the help of technology. 75% of the students use English learning apps and 60% watch short English videos. Only 40% listen to English songs and just 10% read English books. Nowadays, technology greatly influences our English study. Digital tools make learning easy and fun, so most students prefer online ways. However, too many students only enjoy the relaxing online learning and ignore reading. We should use technology tools wisely. First, make good use of learning apps and videos to practice listening and speaking. Second, keep reading English books to improve vocabulary. Only in this way can we make great progress. 【详解】写作步骤   第一步：审题立意 确定文体：看图作文，用一般现在时 明确要点：根据柱状图数据简述课后英语学习方式的调查结果，分析科技带来的影响、优缺点，并提出合理利用科技学习英语的建议。 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：词数100左右，文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息 第二步：构思布局 三段式结构： 开头段：简述调查结果，列出使用APP、看短视频、听歌和看书的比例，并指出科技对学习影响很大 主体段：分析现状的优缺点，说明科技让学习更有趣便捷，但可能会忽略阅读 结尾段：提出合理利用科技和高效学习的建议 第三步：要点展开 要点一： 简述调查结果：do a survey/ninth-grade/English learning ways/result/with the help of/technology/use/learning apps/short English videos/listen to/songs/read books等 使用科技学英语的优点：nowadays/recently/greatly/influence/digital tools/easy and fun/prefer/would like/online等 使用科技学英语的缺点：however/only/enjoy/online learning/ignore/overlook等 要点二： 给出建议：better/should/use technology tools wisely/first/second/finally/make good use of/practice doing/depend on/keep reading等 总结：only in this way/balance/can/make great progress/improve a lot等 9.．扇形图提示学校英语报就“The Use of AI Learning Tools”为主题进行了一次调查。假如你是校英语报编辑，请根据以下图表信息撰写一篇英文分析报告。 要求： 1．描述调查结果； 2．提出“人机协同”学习建议。 注意： 1．短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数80～100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 A Survey on the Use of AI Learning Tools Recently, our school English newspaper carried out a survey on the use of AI learning tools among students. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】【参考范文】 A Survey on the Use of AI Learning Tools Recently, our school English newspaper carried out a survey on the use of AI learning tools among students. The results are as follows. We find that 75% of the students have used AI learning tools. Among those, 43% use AI as dictionaries. Besides, 32% let AI work as writing correction tools which improves their writing. However, 25% avoid using it as they fear that overusing AI may hurt their thinking ability. In my opinion, we can benefit a lot from using AI learning tools in our studies as long as we use them properly. We should use them to get some new ideas or solve difficult problems. But we should use our own brains to think and learn as well. This is the best way to improve our studies. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：调查报告（英文分析报告），以一般现在时、一般过去时为主，语气客观正式。 核心要点：描述扇形图的调查结果（学生使用 AI 学习工具的情况）、提出 “人机协同” 的学习建议 确定人称：第三人称客观描述和第一人称发表观点 注意事项：词数80-100，首句已给出不计入词数；不得透露真实信息。 [第二步：构思布局] 采用总分总结构： 开头段：已给出固定句，点明调查主题 主体段：描述调查结果（分三类学生的情况） 结尾段：总结观点，提出人机协同的学习建议，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：描述调查结果（Survey results） 用过AI：43% use AI as dictionaries/32% use AI to correct their compositions and improve writing efficiency/43% use AI dictionaries and find them helpful/while 32% use AI to improve their writing. 没用过AI：25% avoid using it as they fear that overusing AI may hurt their thinking ability/However, 25% still avoid it because they worry about its influence on independent thinking. 要点二：提出 “人机协同” 学习建议（Suggestions） 核心观点：can benefit a lot from using AI learning tools in our studies as long as we use them properly. /use AI tools properly. 具体建议：use them to get some new ideas or solve difficult problems/always use your own brain to think and practice./balance AI use with your own learning process./use them to get some new ideas or solve difficult problems. /but we should use our own brains to think and learn as well. 10．学校英语论坛正在开展以“Learn Better, Be Smarter”为主题的分享活动。请你根据以下提示信息，分享你的英语学习方法及其效果，同时结合学习金字塔带给你的启示，谈谈你未来的英语学习策略及原因。 注意： (1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (2)词数：80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Learn Better, Be Smarter Hello, everyone. I’d like to share how I learn English. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文1： Hello, everyone. I’d like to share how I learn English. I always learn English by listening to teachers carefully in class. I think I can understand what the English teacher says, but I don’t get good scores very often. I think I know the reason now. I may spend too much time on passive learning. For my English learning plan, I’d like to try active learning, like taking part in class discussions. By doing so, I can share my opinions with others and learn from other students. I hope I can learn English better and make greater progress. 例文2 Hello, everyone. I’d like to share how I learn English. I learn English by watching English movies. And I’ve greatly increased my vocabulary. In the future, I plan to improve my grammar. I want to try both passive and active learning methods. First, I want to read more books. I think it’s a good way to learn correct grammar. At the same time, I’ll try teaching others to practise what I have learned. In this way, I think I will be able to use grammar properly when I speak or write. I hope I can learn English better and make greater progress. 例文3 Hello, everyone. I’d like to share how I learn English. I learn English by listening to teachers carefully and I often take notes. I have made great progress. As for the future plan, first of all, I’ll keep listening carefully in class. I think it works for me. What’s more, I want to read more books. Besides, I enjoy reading on my own. I’m sure when I lose myself in reading, I can gain both joy and knowledge at the same time. I hope I can learn English better and make greater progress. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，用一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：英语学习方法和效果（主动学习、被动学习）、未来的英语学习策略及原因 确定人称：第一人称（I/my/me） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：介绍自己目前的英语学习方法以及取得的进步 主体段：结合学习金字塔，说明未来的学习策略是主动与被动相结合，并列举具体原因 结尾段：表达对未来学习的信心，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一： 学习方法：passive learning/active learning/I usually learn English by.../taking part in class discussions 取得进步：make progress/increase my vocabulary 要点二： 未来的学习策略：I’d like to try active learning/I’ll keep listening.../take notes 列举原因：I think it’s a good way to.../In this way/I think it works for me/I can gain both... 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $