2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---善意的抉择 导学案

该高中英语高考续写专题导学案系统覆盖情节逻辑构建、人物情感分析、文本结构梳理等核心考点，通过角色定位、时空线梳理、细节问答等模块搭建知识网络，以问题导向设计任务链，引导学生自主推导故事发展脉络，形成续写题的整体解题框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维进阶设计，如文本分析中的情感线填空、情节构造衔接句任务，培养学生语言能力与思维品质。续写框架提供方法指导，学生可通过范文对比自主反思，教师能依据学情精准辅导，有效提升学生自主复习效率与高考应试能力。

　　阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 　　We lived in Cleveland, Ohio. One afternoon a couple of summers ago, just as the sky was darkening, a woman I didn’t know stood sinking in our doorway, holding the screen door open. I saw the silhouette (轮廓) of her head through the window. She didn’t feel well at all. So, I wondered, what should I do now? 　　This moment of decision had happened to me before. For nineteen years, we’ve lived at the exit of a highway, which often leads exhausted cars to our house. These travelers have all asked for little things, such as the phone, a glass of water, or even directions. All have been strangers to me. 　　Nowadays, we live in a world full of suspicion. Conventional wisdom advises that to act as a good person is to be naive and risk terrible consequences. News is full of stories about victims who unintentionally endanger themselves. There is no doubt that those are true stories, but the lesson goes against my belief. Sometimes to do the right thing, you must take risks. Must we fear all of those whom we don’t know? Is our own personal safety always the important consideration? 　　Our location forces me to make difficult choices. The highway makes it impossible to ignore the world and relationship to it. When someone approaches us for help, I have to decide: Do I help them or not? 　　I believe rejecting others who need help endangers me, too. I’d rather risk my physical safety than my peace of mind. I’d rather live my life acting out of mercy than save it by living in uneasiness. 　　So when the woman was sinking like the sun on my front doorstep, I made my choice. 　　I opened the door. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 　　Paragraph 1： The moment I opened the door, the woman nearly fell forward. 　　Paragraph 2： Several days later, there was a knock at our door again. 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　A weak stranger appeared at the author’s doorway at dusk --- _________________ --- the author often faced choices of helping strangers --- _________________ --- the world is full of suspicion and people fear risks --- _________________ --- the author chose kindness and decided to open the door 4. 细节问答 　　Why did the stranger come to the author’s doorway? ：___________________________________ 　　What difficult choice does the author often face?：_________________________________ 　　What is people’s common attitude towards helping strangers?：________________________________________________ 　　What belief does the author hold?：__________________________________________ 　　What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　黄昏时分，一位陌生女子虚弱地倚靠在作者家门口→_________________ →家住高速出口的作者常年面临帮扶陌生人的抉择→_________________ →当下社会充满猜忌，人们因害怕风险不敢行善→作者坚守本心，宁愿冒险也要坚守善意→_________________ →（续写）作者开门帮扶女子，悉心照料使其好转→（续写）女子登门致谢，作者更加坚定行善的信念 6．情感线 　　I：hesitant and confused→___________→firm and persistent→___________→peaceful and convinced（续写） 　　The woman: weak and desperate→___________→grateful and sincere 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　善意抉择类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The moment I opened the door, the woman nearly fell forward. 衔接句1——What did the author do to help the woman? What was the woman’s situation? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Several days later, there was a knock at our door again. 衔接句2——Why did the woman come again? What lesson did the author learn?　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我一打开门，女人几乎向前扑倒。 　　→①我及时扶住女子，将她搀扶进屋休息→②_______________→③女子诉说困境，真诚表达谢意； 第二段：几天后，家门口再次传来敲门声。 　　→①女子专程登门，携带礼物致谢→②____________________→③坚定初心，明白善意永远值得坚守。 四. 段落续写 　　The moment I opened the door, the woman nearly fell forward.　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Several days later, there was a knock at our door again. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　I：坚守善意、内心坚定、敢于选择善良的主人公；a strange woman：旅途疲惫、身体不适、知恩图报的求助陌生人 2．视角 　　第一人称 3．时空线 　　A weak stranger appeared at the author’s doorway at dusk --- the author lived at a highway exit and often met strangers in need --- the author often faced choices of helping strangers --- the whole society was full of suspicion and people feared risks --- the author stuck to his belief in kindness --- the author chose kindness and decided to open the door 4. 细节问答 　　Why did the stranger come to the author’s doorway? ：She felt terribly unwell and exhausted, needing help at dusk. 　　What difficult choice does the author often face?：He has to decide whether to help unfamiliar strangers in need or protect himself and refuse them. 　　What is people’s common attitude towards helping strangers?：Most people are suspicious and afraid of risks, believing being kind is naive and dangerous. 　　What belief does the author hold?：He would rather risk physical safety than abandon kindness and live in uneasiness. 　　What does the story tell us?：Kindness needs courage. In a suspicious world, sticking to mercy can bring peace of mind and warm others. 5．情节线 　　黄昏时分，一位陌生女子虚弱地倚靠在作者家门口→女子身体不适，急需帮助→家住高速出口的作者常年面临帮扶陌生人的抉择→社会充斥猜忌，行善常被视作冒险之举→当下社会充满猜忌，人们因害怕风险不敢行善→作者坚守本心，宁愿冒险也要坚守善意、无愧内心→毅然开门选择相助→（续写）作者开门帮扶女子，悉心照料使其恢复体力→（续写）女子专程登门致谢，作者更加坚定行善的人生信条 6．情感线 　　I：hesitant and confused→rational and thoughtful→firm and persistent→warm and merciful→peaceful and convinced（续写） 　　The woman: weak and desperate→relieved and comfortable→grateful and sincere 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：在人人心存戒备、畏惧行善风险的社会环境下，主人公坚守善意本心，勇敢救助陌生的求助者，用温柔与果敢印证了善良的价值与力量。 　　英文：In a suspicious world where people fear taking risks to help strangers, the author stuck to his kind belief, bravely helped a weak stranger and proved the true value of kindness. 8. 句式 　　状语从句：Just as the sky was darkening, a woman stood sinking in our doorway. 　　定语从句：For nineteen years, we’ve lived at the exit of a highway, which often leads exhausted cars to our house. 　　宾语从句：Conventional wisdom advises that to act as a good person is to be naive. 　　非谓语动词：I saw the silhouette of her head through the window. 9. 本文主题 　　善意抉择类：善意需要勇气，纵使世间充满猜忌，坚守本心、温柔向善，方能无愧内心、温暖他人。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The moment I opened the door, the woman nearly fell forward. 衔接句1——What did the author do to help the woman? What was the woman’s situation? 　　The author supported the weak woman, offered her water and a seat, and learned about her tough situation after she regained energy. Paragraph 2: Several days later, there was a knock at our door again. 衔接句2——Why did the woman come again? What lesson did the author learn? 　　The woman returned to thank the author sincerely, and the meaningful experience made the author more firmly stick to his kind belief. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我一打开门，女人几乎向前扑倒。 　　→①我及时扶住女子，将她搀扶进屋休息→②悉心照料，女子慢慢恢复体力→③女子诉说困境，真诚表达谢意； 第二段：几天后，家门口再次传来敲门声。 　　→①女子专程登门，携带礼物致谢→②作者被对方的真诚打动→③坚定初心，明白善意永远值得坚守。 四. 段落续写（范文） 　　The moment I opened the door, the woman nearly fell forward. I quickly reached out to support her and helped her into the house. Judging from her pale face and weak breath, she was extremely exhausted from a long drive. I brought her a cup of warm water and arranged a comfortable chair for her to rest. After a while, she regained strength and explained that she had driven for hours and suddenly felt dizzy on the way. She thanked me repeatedly for my kindness. 　　Several days later, there was a knock at our door again. To my surprise, it was the same woman. She came with a basket of fresh fruits to express her sincere gratitude. She told me she had fully recovered and was deeply touched by my courage to help a stranger. This experience strengthened my belief that kindness is never naive. Even in a world full of suspicion, sincere mercy can warm others and bring lasting peace to our own hearts. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $