2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---加州山间难忘雪景之旅 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，系统梳理文本分析（角色、视角、时空线、情感线等）、情节构造、语言表达等要素，通过问题导向（如细节问答）和任务驱动（如情节线填空）引导学生自主构建“文本理解—情节发展—情感升华”的知识网络，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维品质培养，开篇设置文本分析自测任务（如角色定位、情感线梳理），学生通过完成细节问答和情节线填空诊断薄弱环节，结合续写框架中的衔接句设计提升逻辑思维与语言表达能力。每个模块配有范文对比与反思表，帮助学生个性化提升，教师可依据学情精准指导，有效培养学生自主复习能力与语言综合素养。

　　阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 　　Life in the countryside of central California was peaceful in the mid‑1940s. On a sunny winter day, our family decided to visit my oldest brother and his wife who were living in the higher foothills of the Sierra Nevada Mountains. 　　A trip to the mountains was rare (少见的) for us, so we all were excited as my two brothers, my mother and I got into the car. It was an amazing trip along a mountain road, and we enjoyed the scenery (风景) as we went. 　　Then, as we went higher up, it was snowing! It never snowed in the valley (山谷) where we lived. We wanted to see my brother and his wife, so we decided to go on. My brother who was driving found some tire (轮胎) chains, and after he put them on, we started up again. 　　However, the further we went, the deeper the snow got. When we finally reached our destination, we found we could drive only to within two blocks of their home. So we parked the car and started walking. When you’ve never been around snow, walking two blocks in knee‑deep snow is quite an experience. 　　But we took turns making a good path, each of us stepping in the footprints of those ahead of us. When we got to their house, they welcomed us at the door! We spent some time chatting. We threw snowballs and took pictures of our unexpected winter adventure. Now, some 60 years later, looking at those pictures brings back wonderful memories of that joyful trip, and the wonderful snowfall that made everything even more magical. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 　　Paragraph 1： Night fell soon and the heavy snow kept falling outside the house. 　　Paragraph 2： The next morning, we had to head back home. 　　Night fell soon and the heavy snow kept falling outside the house. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　The next morning, we had to head back home. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　The author’s family planned a mountain visit in winter --- _________________ --- it snowed heavily as they climbed higher --- _________________ --- they walked through deep snow to reach their brother’s home --- _________________ --- they enjoyed snow fun and took photos 4. 细节问答 　　Why was the family excited about the mountain trip? ：___________________________________ 　　What unexpected thing happened during the trip?：_________________________________ 　　How did they manage to move forward in the snow?：________________________________________________ 　　What did they do after arriving at the brother’s home?：__________________________________________ 　　What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　四十年代加州乡村生活平静，一家人计划山间探亲→_________________ →登山途中突遇大雪，山谷从未下雪的一家人倍感新奇→加装轮胎链继续前行，积雪越来越深→_________________ →弃车步行，相互帮扶踏雪前行→抵达兄长家欢聚，玩雪拍照、收获欢乐→_________________ →（续写）夜幕降临，大雪不停，屋内温馨相守→（续写）次日踏雪返程，留存美好回忆 6．情感线 　　Family: excited and expectant→___________→tired but curious→___________→joyful and warm→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　成长回忆类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Night fell soon and the heavy snow kept falling outside the house. 衔接句1——What did the family do at night? What was the atmosphere　　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The next morning, we had to head back home. 衔接句2——How was the road condition? How did they feel about this trip?　　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：夜幕很快降临，屋外大雪纷飞。 　　→①屋外白雪皑皑、夜色静谧，屋内温暖温馨→②_____________________→③全然忘却行路的疲惫，满心欢喜； 第二段：第二天早上，我们不得不启程回家。 　　→①清晨雪后美景纯净动人，道路依旧难行→②____________________→③难忘冬日奇遇，珍藏一生美好回忆。 四. 段落续写 　　Night fell soon and the heavy snow kept falling outside the house. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　The next morning, we had to head back home. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　The author’s family：热爱生活、团结互助、珍惜亲情的一家人；the oldest brother and his wife：热情好客、温暖体贴的兄长夫妇 2．视角 　　第一人称 3．时空线 　　The author’s family planned a mountain visit in winter --- they felt thrilled about the rare mountain trip --- it snowed heavily as they climbed higher --- they equipped tire chains and continued forward --- they walked through deep snow to reach their brother’s home --- they reunited happily and played with snow --- they enjoyed snow fun and took photos 4. 细节问答 　　Why was the family excited about the mountain trip? ：Because a trip to the mountains was rare for their family. 　　What unexpected thing happened during the trip?：It snowed heavily in the mountains, while it never snowed in their valley home. 　　How did they manage to move forward in the snow?：They put on tire chains for the car and took turns walking in the snow to make a path. 　　What did they do after arriving at the brother’s home?：They chatted happily, threw snowballs and took photos to record the special adventure. 　　What does the story tell us?：Unexpected experiences and family unity create precious lifelong memories, and small adventures make life more wonderful. 5．情节线 　　四十年代加州乡村生活平静，一家人计划山间探亲→难得的山间出行让全家满心期待→登山途中突遇大雪，山谷从未下雪的一家人倍感新奇→加装轮胎链继续前行，积雪越来越深，车辆无法通行→弃车步行，家人彼此帮扶、踏雪开路→抵达兄长家欢聚，玩雪拍照、收获欢乐→定格美好瞬间，珍藏旅途惊喜→（续写）夜幕降临，大雪不停，屋内温馨相守、闲谈欢聚→（续写）次日雪后初晴，众人小心返程，奇遇化作终生难忘的美好回忆 6．情感线 　　Family: excited and expectant→surprised and curious→tired but delighted→warm and joyful→blessed and grateful→cherished and unforgettable（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：加州一户人家冬日进山探亲，偶遇罕见大雪，历经踏雪前行的小小波折，在亲情与奇遇中收获欢乐，这段特别的冬日旅途成为数十年难忘的珍贵回忆。 　　英文：A California family went on a mountain visit in winter and encountered unexpected heavy snow. They overcame difficulties with teamwork and gained great joy, making the special winter trip a precious lifelong memory. 8. 句式 　　状语从句：As we went higher up, it was snowing. 　　非谓语动词：We wanted to see my brother and his wife, so we decided to go on. 　　定语从句：It never snowed in the valley where we lived. 　　宾语从句：looking at those pictures brings back wonderful memories of that joyful trip 9. 本文主题 　　成长回忆类：意外的旅途奇遇、温暖的亲情陪伴，会铸就人生中最珍贵、最难忘的美好回忆。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Night fell soon and the heavy snow kept falling outside the house. 衔接句1——What did the family do at night? What was the atmosphere? 　　The heavy snow blanketed the whole mountain, and the family stayed indoors, chatting and enjoying the warm reunion despite the terrible weather outside. Paragraph 2: The next morning, we had to head back home. 衔接句2——How was the road condition? How did they feel about this trip? 　　Though the snowy road was still tough, they traveled back safely with teamwork, keeping the wonderful winter adventure deeply in mind. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：夜幕很快降临，屋外大雪纷飞。 　　→①大雪覆盖山野，山间夜色静谧纯白→②一家人围坐屋内畅谈，尽享团圆温暖→③褪去旅途疲惫，沉醉于难得的雪景与欢聚； 第二段：第二天早上，我们不得不启程回家。 　　→①雪后山野景致绝美，道路依旧湿滑难行→②家人互帮互助，谨慎驾车步行返程→③奇遇温暖人心，成为跨越岁月的珍贵回忆。 四. 段落续写（范文） 　　Night fell soon and the heavy snow kept falling outside the house. The entire mountain was wrapped in thick white snow, creating a quiet and magical winter scene. Despite the rough weather outside, the house was filled with warmth and laughter. We sat around the fire, chatting about our interesting trip and sharing funny stories. My brother and sister-in-law prepared warm drinks and delicious snacks for us. We enjoyed the rare snowy night peacefully, feeling extremely grateful for this special reunion. 　　The next morning, we had to head back home. The snow finally stopped, and the sun shone brightly over the snow-covered mountains, making the scenery breathtakingly beautiful. The road was still slippery, so we walked carefully and helped each other all the way back to the car. Though the trip was tough and full of unexpected twists, it turned out to be the most unforgettable experience. Those precious moments and unique snowy scenery have remained fresh in my memory for over sixty years. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $