2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---机舱里的善意暖流 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题的核心考点，涵盖情节发展、情感逻辑、语言运用等要素，通过文本分析（角色、时空线等）、细节问答、情节线梳理构建知识网络，以问题导向引导学生自主理解原文，形成从文本解读到续写创作的认知框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层任务设计，开篇设置细节问答自测题帮助学生定位薄弱环节，续写框架通过情节构造和情感线分析引导学生自主构建续写逻辑，培养语言能力和思维品质。每个模块配有句式分析和综合概括任务，助力学生个性化提升，教师可依据学情精准指导，提升备考实效。

　　阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 　　A flight attendant recently shared this heartwarming story, and it’s one that truly deserves to be told. 　　As the flight was boarding, a weak 94‑year‑old woman struggled to find her seat. She appeared confused and had difficulty navigating the narrow aisle. The flight attendant noticed her struggle and was about to assist when a gentleman seated in first class caught her attention. 　　With a kind smile, he asked, “Can you please put her in my seat? I’ll take hers.” Without hesitation, the man stood up and accompanied the flight attendant to the back of the plane, where the elderly woman was seated. When he offered his first‑class seat to her, she was overcome with emotion. “Never in my 94 years has someone done that for me,” she said, her voice trembling with gratitude. She gave him a big hug, tears welling up in her eyes. “Thank you, young man,” she added, clearly moved by the unexpected kindness. 　　The simple gesture had a ripple effect on the entire flight. The flight attendant described how the mood on the plane shifted as passengers witnessed the man’s act. 　　It was amazing how his thoughtful act changed the attitude of everyone on the flight. In a time when the world often feels overwhelming, this story is a beautiful reminder that even the smallest acts of kindness can have a profound impact. His selflessness not only made a 94‑year‑old woman’s day but also left a lasting impression on everyone who witnessed it. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； During the long‑distance flight, many passengers could not help thinking about the gentleman’s gesture.　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　When the plane landed safely, passengers got off one after another.　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　An elderly woman struggled to find her seat on the plane --- _________________ --- a gentleman offered his first-class seat selflessly --- _________________ --- the old woman was deeply grateful and moved --- _________________ --- the kind act warmed and influenced all passengers on board 4. 细节问答 　　What trouble did the 94-year-old woman have? ：___________________________________ 　　What kind thing did the gentleman do?：_________________________________ 　　How did the elderly woman react to the man’s kindness?：________________________________________________ 　　What influence did the gesture have on the flight?：__________________________________________ 　　What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　年迈老人登机后难以找到座位，行动艰难→_________________ →头等舱男士主动无私让座，调换位置→老人备受感动，含泪致谢拥抱→_________________ →善意在机舱产生连锁反应，温暖所有乘客→_________________ →（续写）飞行途中众人纷纷反思、传递善意→（续写）航班落地，温暖落幕，善意长存 6．情感线 　　Old woman: confused and helpless→___________→grateful and moved→___________ 　　Passengers: indifferent and ordinary→___________→warm and inspired→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句　　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　温情传递类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: During the long‑distance flight, many passengers could not help thinking about the gentleman’s gesture. 衔接句1——What changes happened to passengers? What warm acts appeared?　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: When the plane landed safely, passengers got off one after another. 衔接句2——How did people treat each other while getting off? What’s the theme ending?　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：在长途飞行中，许多乘客不禁想起这位男士的善举。 　　→①机舱氛围变得温暖柔和，人人心生善意→②_______________→③男士的小小善举悄然感染所有人； 第二段：飞机安全降落，乘客们陆续下机。 　　→①大家主动礼让老人，有序离场→②_______________________→③微小善意拥有巨大力量，温暖世间。 四. 段落续写 　　During the long‑distance flight, many passengers could not help thinking about the gentleman’s gesture.　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　When the plane landed safely, passengers got off one after another.　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　A gentleman：无私善良、乐于助人、不求回报的暖心乘客；a 94-year-old elderly woman：年迈体弱、懂得感恩的老人；passengers & flight attendant：被善意感染、见证温暖的旁观者 2．视角 　　第三人称 3．时空线 　　An elderly woman struggled to find her seat on the plane --- a kind gentleman noticed her trouble --- a gentleman offered his first-class seat selflessly --- the man’s generous act surprised everyone --- the old woman was deeply grateful and moved --- the kind act produced a positive ripple effect --- the kind gesture warmed and influenced all passengers on board 4. 细节问答 　　What trouble did the 94-year-old woman have? ：She was weak and confused, struggling to find her seat and walk in the narrow aisle. 　　What kind thing did the gentleman do?：He voluntarily offered his comfortable first-class seat to the elderly woman and took her ordinary seat instead. 　　How did the elderly woman react to the man’s kindness?：She was extremely moved, hugged the man tightly and expressed sincere gratitude with tearful eyes. 　　What influence did the gesture have on the flight?：It changed the atmosphere on the plane, inspired all passengers and spread kindness everywhere. 　　What does the story tell us?：Small and selfless acts of kindness are powerful, which can warm others, spread positive energy and change the atmosphere around us. 5．情节线 　　年迈老人登机后难以找到座位，行动艰难→空乘准备上前帮扶→头等舱男士主动无私让座，调换位置→老人备受感动，含泪致谢拥抱→男士不求回报、温柔坦然→善意在机舱产生连锁反应，温暖所有乘客→机舱氛围悄然改变，满是温情→（续写）飞行途中众人被感染，彼此友善相待→（续写）航班落地有序礼让，善意圆满传递 6．情感线 　　Old woman: confused and helpless→surprised and touched→grateful and moved→warm and blessed 　　Passengers: indifferent and ordinary→shocked and moved→warm and inspired→kind and gentle（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：一架航班上，一位男士主动为年迈体弱的老人让出珍贵的头等舱座位，这份无私的小小善举产生连锁效应，温暖了整架飞机的乘客，传递了世间温情。 　　英文：A man selflessly offered his first-class seat to a weak and confused elderly woman on a flight. This small kind act created a warm ripple effect, touched all passengers on board and spread positive warmth. 8. 句式 　　状语从句：As the flight was boarding, a weak 94‑year‑old woman struggled to find her seat. 　　非谓语动词：She appeared confused and had difficulty navigating the narrow aisle. 　　宾语从句：The flight attendant described how the mood on the plane shifted. 　　定语从句：It was amazing how his thoughtful act changed the attitude of everyone on the flight. 9. 本文主题 　　温情传递类：小小善意拥有巨大力量，善意可相互感染、层层传递，温暖他人、治愈世界。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: During the long‑distance flight, many passengers could not help thinking about the gentleman’s gesture. 衔接句1——What changes happened to passengers? What warm acts appeared? 　　Passengers were deeply inspired, treating each other politely and helping one another voluntarily, making the whole flight full of warmth. Paragraph 2: When the plane landed safely, passengers got off one after another. 衔接句2——How did people treat each other while getting off? What’s the theme ending? 　　All passengers offered to help the elderly woman and behaved politely, proving that kindness is contagious and can brighten the whole world. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：在长途飞行中，许多乘客不禁想起这位男士的善举。 　　→①机舱氛围变得温暖柔和，人人心生善意→②乘客们彼此礼让、互帮互助→③男士的小小善举悄然感染所有人； 第二段：飞机安全降落，乘客们陆续下机。 　　→①大家主动礼让老人，有序离场→②善意悄然传递，温暖整段旅途→③微小善意拥有巨大力量，温暖世间。 四. 段落续写（范文） 　　During the long‑distance flight, many passengers could not help thinking about the gentleman’s gesture. The previous indifference faded away completely, and the whole cabin was filled with warmth and harmony. Passengers became more polite and considerate. Some offered snacks and drinks to others, while others volunteered to help tidy up luggage. The gentleman just sat quietly in the ordinary seat, wearing a peaceful smile, never taking his kind deed seriously. His modesty and kindness touched everyone on the plane deeply. 　　When the plane landed safely, passengers got off one after another. Instead of rushing hurriedly as usual, everyone lined up orderly and voluntarily made way for the elderly woman. Several passengers helped her carry her luggage and walked her slowly out of the cabin. Witnessing all these warm scenes, the flight attendant was greatly moved. She realized that kindness is indeed contagious. A single selfless act can light up a whole journey and spread endless warmth to the world. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $