读后续写--风雪外卖员 课件 -2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦读后续写题型，依据高考评价体系梳理了情节连贯、人物描写、主题升华三大核心考点，通过真题分析明确情节合理性占40%、语言运用占35%的高频考点分布，归纳动作、神态、语言等常考描写手法，构建系统答题思路。 课件亮点在于“真题情境+微技能训练+素养融合”策略，如以“风雪外卖员”联考真题为载体，分解训练无灵主语、with复合结构等句式，培养学生语言能力与思维品质。提供“描写模板库”和“主题升华句式”，帮助学生掌握情节推进技巧，教师可据此开展分层教学，实现高效备考。

读后续写 --风雪外卖员 (2026.4八省八校T8高三联考) Story Time! 故事粗线条主线 作为外卖员的Jack，他谋生必要工具二手自行车不见了。 （着急/ 很心碎） 因未能及时送达订单，他登门向Ms White道歉。 （歉意/ 有担当） Ms White深受感动，发帖分享并表扬Jack的正直诚信。 （感动/ 明事理） 在广大网友的帮助下，Jack不仅受表扬，而且自行车失而复得...（开心） Step 3: story plot P1: Finally, breathless, Jack reached Ms. White’s doorstep and rang the bell. P2: Deeply moved, Ms. White decided to share the story online that night. para 1段意：登门道歉 para 2段意：帖子后续 1) face-to-face meet (动作/ 表情描写) 2) Jack’s apology (外貌/ 语言描写) 3) Ms White’s response (神态/ 语言描写) 1) Ms White’s attitude in the post (语言描写评价Jack的行为与品质) 2) The feedback (帖子后续反响) 3) Story’s ending and themes (E-bike的解决呼应与故事主旨升华) Let's write! P1: Finally, breathless, Jack reached Ms. White’s doorstep and rang the bell. step 4: sentence construction 1. face-to-face meet (动作/ 表情描写) 1.门突然打开（副词）。一看到杰克沾满泥污的鞋子，一股同情涌上怀特女士心头（一...就...） The door opened abruptly. A wave of sympathy flooded into her the instant she caught sight of his muddy shoes. step 4: sentence construction 2. Jack’s apology (外貌/ 情绪描写) 凛冽寒风见证了他疲惫的徒步（无灵主语），他手心冒汗，紧紧攥着奶茶与苹果（with复合结构）。满心羞愧，杰克勉强挤出一丝苦笑（过去分词做状语）。尽管身陷困境，他不愿将不幸归咎于被偷的电动车，也绝不给自己贴上不负责任的标签、漠视自己的责任（熟词生义）。 The bitter wind witnessed his exhausting walk, with his sweating palms tightly holding the tea and apples. Overwhelmed by shame, Jack forced a weak grin. Though trapped in a dilemma, he would never pin his misfortune on the stolen bike, nor would he label himself an irresponsible man or overlook his duty. P1: Finally, breathless, Jack reached Ms. White’s doorstep and rang the bell. step 4: sentence construction 3. Ms White’s response (神态/ 语言描写) 被他的诚信打动，怀特女士请他进屋，屋内的热水缓解了杰克的疲惫（熟词生义）。墙上一张便签写着“诚信为重”，恰恰映照出杰克的所作所为（熟词生义）。 Moved by his honesty, Ms. White invited him in, where hot water helped Jack recover from tiredness. A note on the wall read “Honesty matters”, mirroring exactly what Jack had done. P1: Finally, breathless, Jack reached Ms. White’s doorstep and rang the bell. step 4: sentence construction 1. Ms White’s attitude in the post (语言描写评价Jack的行为与品质) 她上传照片，记下全部细节，故事很快广为流传（熟词生义）。 She posted photos and recorded every detail, so the story soon went viral. P2: Deeply moved, Ms. White decided to share the story online that night. step 4: sentence construction 2.The feedback of the post (帖子后续反响) 许多网友高度赞扬杰克，希望承袭这份美德（熟词生义）。快递公司关注公众反馈，送给他一辆新车保障生计。 Many netizens spoke highly of Jack and hoped to inherit such virtue. The delivery firm monitored public feedback and offered him a new bike to secure his living. P2: Deeply moved, Ms. White decided to share the story online that night. step 4: sentence construction P2: Deeply moved, Ms. White decided to share the story online that night. 3. Story’s ending and themes (E-bike的解决呼应与故事主旨升华) 杰克把这份温暖结局归功于怀特女士的善意（熟词生义）。这件事提醒着他：诚信才最为可贵（强调句）。直到那一刻，杰克才明白美德的力量，这段记忆将永远镌刻在心底（only then 倒装）。 Jack owed this heartwarming ending to Ms. White’s kindness. The incident served as a reminder that it was honesty that truly counted. Only then did Jack realize how powerful good virtue could be, and the memory would stay fresh in his mind. Finally, breathless, Jack reached Ms. White’s doorstep and rang the bell. The door opened abruptly. A wave of sympathy flooded into her the instant she caught sight of his muddy shoes. The bitter wind witnessed his exhausting walk, with his sweating palms tightly holding the tea and apples（with复合结构）. Overwhelmed by shame, Jack forced a weak grin（过去分词做状语）. Though trapped in a dilemma, he would never pin his misfortune on the stolen bike, nor would he label himself an irresponsible man or overlook his duty（状从省略）. Moved by his honesty, Ms. White invited him in, where hot water helped Jack recover from tiredness（状从）. A note on the wall read “Honesty matters”, mirroring exactly what Jack had done（非谓，宾从）. Deeply moved by Jack’s action, Ms. White decided to share the story online that night.She posted photos and recorded every detail, so the story soon went viral. Many netizens spoke highly of Jack and hoped to inherit such virtue. The delivery firm monitored public feedback and offered him a new bike to secure his living. Jack owed this heart-warming ending to Ms. White’s kindness. The incident served as a reminder that it was honesty that truly counted（同位语从句，强调句）. Only then did Jack realize how powerful good virtue could be （倒装，宾从）, and the memory would stay fresh in his mind. 范文 SEE YOU! $