圣诞前夕助人记-读后续写 课件-2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦读后续写核心考点，依据高考评价体系梳理了情节连贯、主题升华、关键线索运用三大考查要求，明确其25分的权重占比，归纳出人物心理描写、情节逻辑构建等常考题型，形成系统备考框架。 课件亮点在于“原文精读+逻辑链搭建+易错点警示”的实战策略，如引导学生分析流浪女士细节描写（语言能力）和100美元线索运用（思维品质），通过“三步情节法”解析范文，培养文化意识（善意主题）。特设易错点指南（如忽略线索、缺乏心理描写），帮助学生掌握续写技巧，教师可据此精准教学，提升备考效率。

At this festive time of the year when November turns to December and Christmas approaches, an incident from the past surfaces in my mind, a moment that inspired me to always seek out opportunities to lend a helping hand. It was nearly twenty years ago, a period when my children were still in their teenage years full of vitality and constantly evolving preferences. I had grown tired of attempting to predict their Christmas wishes, so each year, we took a long car trip to a Shopping Mall. There, I gave them each an envelope stuffed with cash, allowing them to choose exactly what their hearts desired. This specific year, I had thoughtfully saved an extra hundred dollars, intending to treat myself to a few gifts. However, as I walked the length of the Mall, I found myself unable to find anything that truly resonated(产生共鸣) with me. As we finally climbed into the car, ready to depart, I started the engine and began navigating towards the main road. It was then, amidst the hum of traffic and the glow of streetlights, that I caught sight of her — a homeless woman standing by the roadside. She looked much older than her age. She was dressed in a torn, threadbare coat. Her gray hair was tangled（缠结） and clumped together in a messy mass. Her face was chapped（皲裂的） from the winter wind. But the thing that struck me most was her eyes. She had the saddest eyes that I had ever seen. “Mom, look at that lady,” one of my children said softly, her voice tinged with concern. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “I see her,” I replied, slowing the car to a stop.   The woman hesitated for a moment, but eventually agreed. 原文主题： 圣诞前夕购物归来，偶遇无家可归的女士，内心触动，选择伸出援手 段首句： Para1：“I see her,” I replied, slowing the car to a stop. Para2：The woman hesitated for a moment, but eventually agreed. 词数要求：150词左右 一、第一步：带着学生读懂原文（阅读引导，课堂实操） Step1 快速扫读：抓取基础信息（2min） 请圈画出：时间、人物、背景、核心事件 1. When does the story happen? Christmas time / nearly twenty years ago，圣诞临近的冬日夜晚 2. Who are main characters? I（妈妈）、my teenage children、a homeless woman 3. Where do they meet the woman? on the roadside，开车离开商场的路边 4. What was the family’s original plan？ 原文：I saved an extra hundred dollars intending to treat myself to gifts 我本来留了额外100美元给自己买圣诞礼物。 板书关键词： Christmas；shopping‑mall；extra 100 dollars； homeless woman Step2 精读：抓人物描写+情绪伏笔（4min，最重要） ①流浪女士的处境（划出细节描写） torn, threadbare coat破旧单薄外套；hair tangled乱糟糟； face chapped from winter wind寒风冻裂脸颊；the saddest eyes 引导提问：从这些词看出什么？ 女人极度穷困寒冷，内心充满悲伤。 ②家人这边的情绪 my children said softly, her voice tinged with concern tinged with concern ：语气带着担忧，（孩子看到女士，心生同情） ③“我”的心理伏笔 I could find nothing resonated with me in the mall 我在商场找不到能让自己心动的礼物。 暗示：物质礼物无法带给我快乐，为后文把钱用来帮助别人埋下伏笔。 原文已经铺垫好三样东西： 1）环境：寒冬夜晚，女士饥寒交迫 2）情感：孩子同情，“我”对物质没有欲望 3）物件：我手里有额外100美元（续写一定要用上这个关键线索！很多学生容易漏掉！） Step3 研读两段段首句，划定续写边界（4min） 齐读两段开头，设置问题，明确逻辑链 Para1开头：“I see her,” I replied, slowing the car to a stop. 1. 车停下之后，逻辑顺序是什么？ 摇下车窗，搭话，了解处境，发出邀请（给钱/邀请同行） 2. 第一段结尾必须落到哪里？ 女士hesitate（犹豫），要写出她的顾虑：自卑、害羞、不敢轻易接受善意。 Para2开头：The woman hesitated for a moment, but eventually agreed. 1. agreed to what？👉同意接受我们的帮助（呼应第一段的邀请） 2. 手里关键道具extra hundred dollars在这里要用上！ 3. 第二段结尾要求：情绪升华，感悟圣诞真正的意义，不是物质礼物，而是善意给予。 二、第二步：搭建情节逻辑链 Para1逻辑链（停车之后） 停车→摇下车窗，和女士搭话→得知她无家可归，饥寒交迫→孩子劝说，我想起那预留的100美元，发出善意邀请→女士自卑顾虑，内心纠结犹豫（第一段结束） Para2逻辑链（同意之后） 女士终于答应→我拿出那原本给自己买礼物的100美元，给她；或是带她买保暖物品食物→女士感动落泪→感悟：圣诞真正的快乐不在于给自己买礼物，而在于给予善意，升华主题。 ⚠️【续写红线板书，提醒学生避坑】 坑1：忽略原文线索，忘记那100美元，只写口头安慰 坑2：女士直接开心接受，完全没有hesitate心理挣扎 坑3：偏离圣诞主题，结尾不做主题升华 坑4：情节跑偏：直接报警、直接赶走女士。 Para.1 “I see her,” I replied, slowing the car to a stop.We got out of the car and walked toward her after pulling over. We stepped down from the car and approached the poor woman. Fixing on the woman wrapped in a threadbare coat, I spotted her chapped face and tired-looking eyes, with immense sympathy welling up in my heart. It flashed through my mind that I had an extra hundred dollars intended for my own Christmas gifts. Rather than buying gifts for myself, I made up my mind to invite her home to spend Christmas Eve with our family. Hearing my warm invitation, her fingers clutched her shabby coat tightly, with a wave of shock and embarrassment sweeping over her. Ashamed of her messy appearance, she hung her head and sank into deep hesitation. 第一段 “我看见她了。”我答道，缓缓把车停下。我们走下车，向这位可怜的女士走近。望着裹着一件破旧外套的她，我看见她皲裂的脸庞和疲惫的双眼，心中涌起浓浓的同情。我脑海突然闪过念头：我手里留有原本给自己买圣诞礼物的一百美元。我决定不用这笔钱给自己购置礼物，而是邀请她到家里，和我们一家共度圣诞夜。听到我们热忱的邀请，她紧紧攥住身上破旧的外衣，震惊又窘迫的情绪席卷了她。因为自己狼狈不堪的模样，她垂下脑袋，陷入深深的犹豫。 Para.2 The woman hesitated for a moment, but eventually agreed.She climbed into our car timidly and followed us home. We ran a warm bath for her and purchased a set of brand-new warm clothes using my reserved money. After cleaning herself up and dressing in the new outfit, she looked totally refreshed. Later, we laid out a rich Christmas feast and enjoyed the big dinner side by side. At the sight of the steaming dishes and smiling faces around the table, the memory of my own lonely hard days came rushing back, making me realize kindness counts as the most precious holiday gift. Brilliant moonlight spilled across the quiet night sky. Yet it was the sincere warmth between strangers that truly illuminated the cold Christmas Eve. 第二段 女士犹豫片刻，最终答应了。她怯生生地上了我们的车，跟着我们回到家中。我们为她放好热水澡，用我预留的那笔钱买了一套崭新保暖的衣物。洗漱完毕换上新衣之后，她整个人精神焕发。之后，我们摆好丰盛的圣诞大餐，围坐在一起共享晚宴。望着桌上热气腾腾的饭菜和一张张笑脸，往昔孤单艰难的回忆涌上心头，让我懂得善意才是节日最珍贵的礼物。皎洁月光倾泻在寂静夜空，而真正点亮这个寒冷圣诞夜的，正是陌生人之间这份真挚的温情。 范文二 “I see her,” I replied, slowing the car to a stop. We rolled down the window and greeted her warmly. Fixing on the poor woman in a threadbare coat, I spotted her chapped face and tired look, with immense sympathy welling up in my heart. It flashed through my mind that I had an extra hundred dollars intended for my own Christmas gifts. Instead of buying presents for myself, I decided to invite her home to spend the festive night with us. Hearing my warm invitation, her fingers clutched her old coat tightly, with a wave of shock and gratitude sweeping over her. Ashamed of her messy appearance, she lowered her head and fell into deep hesitation. 第一段 “我看见她了。”我答道，缓缓停下车。我们摇下车窗，温柔地问候她。望着这位穿着破旧外套的可怜女士，我看见她干裂的脸庞和疲惫的神情，心中涌起无尽的同情。我脑海突然闪过一个念头：我原本留有一百美元给自己买圣诞礼物。我决定不用来买礼物，而是邀请她来家里共度佳节。听到我们温暖的邀请，她紧紧攥住破旧的衣服，震惊与感激交织的情绪席卷全身。因自己狼狈的模样感到羞愧，她低下了头，陷入深深的犹豫。 Para.2 The woman hesitated for a moment, but eventually agreed.She climbed into our car timidly and followed us home. We immediately prepared a warm bathroom for her and bought a set of brand-new warm clothes with my reserved money. After cleaning up and dressing neatly, she looked much more refreshed. We laid out delicious Christmas feast and enjoyed the dinner together happily. At the sight of the warm table and smiling faces, the memory of my lonely hard days came rushing back, making me realize kindness is the best festival gift. Brilliant moonlight spilled across the quiet sky. Yet it was the sincere warmth between strangers that truly illuminated the cold Christmas Eve. 第二段 女士犹豫片刻，最终答应了。她怯生生地上了车，随我们回到家中。我们立刻为她准备了热水澡，并用我预留的钱给她买了一套崭新的保暖衣物。洗漱完毕、换上新衣后，她整个人焕然一新。我们摆好丰盛的圣诞大餐，开心地围坐在一起共进晚餐。看着满桌温暖的饭菜和一张张笑脸，我瞬间想起自己曾经孤单艰难的岁月，深深明白善意才是最好的节日礼物。皎洁的月光洒满静谧的夜空。但真正点亮这个寒冷圣诞夜的，是陌生人之间真挚的温情。   $