读后续写之情绪描写 课件-2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦“读后续写之情绪描写”专题，依据高考评价体系明确情节逻辑发展与情感生动表达两大核心考查要求，通过梳理情绪描写的动词（如flood over）、形容词（如guilty）及句式结构（done/adj+sb do sth），归纳读后续写中“情感推动情节”的常考题型，体现高考备考的针对性与实用性。 课件亮点在于“词汇积累-句式运用-情境实战”的系统性训练，结合高考读后续写真题情境（如Merida与母亲和解故事），以语言能力和思维品质素养为导向，指导学生运用“a wave of+情感名词”等句式精准刻画情绪，设“情节-情感双线预测”环节帮助掌握逻辑衔接技巧，助力学生提升写作得分率，为教师提供高效复习教学的清晰路径。

年级：高三 上课内容：读后续写之情绪描写 课型：写作课 PPT模板下载：www.1ppt.com/moban/ 行业PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 节日PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/jieri/ PPT素材下载：www.1ppt.com/sucai/ PPT背景图片：www.1ppt.com/beijing/ PPT图表下载：www.1ppt.com/tubiao/ 优秀PPT下载：www.1ppt.com/xiazai/ PPT教程： www.1ppt.com/powerpoint/ Word教程： www.1ppt.com/word/ Excel教程：www.1ppt.com/excel/ 资料下载：www.1ppt.com/ziliao/ PPT课件下载：www.1ppt.com/kejian/ 范文下载：www.1ppt.com/fanwen/ 试卷下载：www.1ppt.com/shiti/ 教案下载：www.1ppt.com/jiaoan/ 字体下载：www.1ppt.com/ziti/ Merida was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn't help weeping when she thought of the scolding(责骂) from her mother. Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh, yes…but I don’t have money on me,” she replied. “That’s nothing. I'll treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Merida cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly. “Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Merida. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger! Hearing the words, the seller smiled, "Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?” Merida sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered Mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home, Merida made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Approaching the doorway, Merida took a deep breath. ________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________ A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Learning Objectives By the end of the class, you will be able to: ◉1.continue writing through plot and emotion; ◉2.improve the ability of emotion description; ◉3.realize mother’s love and learn to be grateful. 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PPT模板下载：www.1ppt.com/moban/ 行业PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 节日PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/jieri/ PPT素材下载：www.1ppt.com/sucai/ PPT背景图片：www.1ppt.com/beijing/ PPT图表下载：www.1ppt.com/tubiao/ 优秀PPT下载：www.1ppt.com/xiazai/ PPT教程： www.1ppt.com/powerpoint/ Word教程： www.1ppt.com/word/ Excel教程：www.1ppt.com/excel/ 资料下载：www.1ppt.com/ziliao/ PPT课件下载：www.1ppt.com/kejian/ 范文下载：www.1ppt.com/fanwen/ 试卷下载：www.1ppt.com/shiti/ 教案下载：www.1ppt.com/jiaoan/ 字体下载：www.1ppt.com/ziti/ ① Beginning ② Development ③ Climax ④ Later Development ⑤ Ending ?______ Read for plot(情节) One afternoon, Merida ________ with her mother. The ______ words reminded Merida of what her mother had done. Finally, Merida felt regretful and decided to _______________. quarreled The seller gave her _______________ when Merida was hungry. a bowl of noodles make an apology seller’s Prediction PPT模板下载：www.1ppt.com/moban/ 行业PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 节日PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/jieri/ PPT素材下载：www.1ppt.com/sucai/ PPT背景图片：www.1ppt.com/beijing/ PPT图表下载：www.1ppt.com/tubiao/ 优秀PPT下载：www.1ppt.com/xiazai/ PPT教程： www.1ppt.com/powerpoint/ Word教程： www.1ppt.com/word/ Excel教程：www.1ppt.com/excel/ 资料下载：www.1ppt.com/ziliao/ PPT课件下载：www.1ppt.com/kejian/ 范文下载：www.1ppt.com/fanwen/ 试卷下载：www.1ppt.com/shiti/ 教案下载：www.1ppt.com/jiaoan/ 字体下载：www.1ppt.com/ziti/ what(action) how(emotion) writing skills She ran out of the house angrily She couldn’t help weeping when... As..., she cried silently. “...I was just touched by your kindness!” Merida sat there, speechless and numb with shock. Merida made up her mind to make an apology to her mother. Read for emotion angry v. + adverb( emotion) sad v.(emotion)+adv. touched be + pp.(emotion)+by shocked sb do sth+adj.(emotion)+ adj.(emotion)with/in+ noun(emotion) regretful actions to reveal Prediction ? angrily weeping cried was touched by with shock Theme: Realising mother’s love and learning to be grateful PPT模板下载：www.1ppt.com/moban/ 行业PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 节日PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/jieri/ PPT素材下载：www.1ppt.com/sucai/ PPT背景图片：www.1ppt.com/beijing/ PPT图表下载：www.1ppt.com/tubiao/ 优秀PPT下载：www.1ppt.com/xiazai/ PPT教程： www.1ppt.com/powerpoint/ Word教程： www.1ppt.com/word/ Excel教程：www.1ppt.com/excel/ 资料下载：www.1ppt.com/ziliao/ PPT课件下载：www.1ppt.com/kejian/ 范文下载：www.1ppt.com/fanwen/ 试卷下载：www.1ppt.com/shiti/ 教案下载：www.1ppt.com/jiaoan/ 字体下载：www.1ppt.com/ziti/ Build up the word bank 惯用动词 seize 抓住 swallow吞噬 flood over淹没 sweep over席卷 wash over 涌上心头 well up 涌上心头 adj adv. n. angry angrily anger sad sadly sadness/sorrow scared / fear/scare shocked shockingly shock/surprise excited excitedly excitement happy happily happiness/delight guilty guiltily guilt proud proudly pride ... 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Buried in ______(tear), the daughter lay on the table,shoulders __________(shake). Mom gently patted her on the back. Suddenly, _________________________( 一股愧疚感涌上心头) the daughter. She stood up and _______ (hug) Mom tightly, their hearts filled with ________ (warm). Worried regretful tears shaking a wave of guilt flooded over hugged warmth PPT模板下载：www.1ppt.com/moban/ 行业PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 节日PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/jieri/ PPT素材下载：www.1ppt.com/sucai/ PPT背景图片：www.1ppt.com/beijing/ PPT图表下载：www.1ppt.com/tubiao/ 优秀PPT下载：www.1ppt.com/xiazai/ PPT教程： www.1ppt.com/powerpoint/ Word教程： www.1ppt.com/word/ Excel教程：www.1ppt.com/excel/ 资料下载：www.1ppt.com/ziliao/ PPT课件下载：www.1ppt.com/kejian/ 范文下载：www.1ppt.com/fanwen/ 试卷下载：www.1ppt.com/shiti/ 教案下载：www.1ppt.com/jiaoan/ 字体下载：www.1ppt.com/ziti/ Approaching the doorway, Merida took a deep breath. A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Who touched Merida? Group work: Design the story What did Merida/her mother do ? How did she/her mother feel? Writing skills for emotion: 1.feeling words(adj./adv./v./n.) 2. done/adj/feeling+adj., + sb do sth. 3. a burst/wave/feeling/sense of + n.(emotion)+ flood/swept over sb PPT模板下载：www.1ppt.com/moban/ 行业PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 节日PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/jieri/ PPT素材下载：www.1ppt.com/sucai/ PPT背景图片：www.1ppt.com/beijing/ PPT图表下载：www.1ppt.com/tubiao/ 优秀PPT下载：www.1ppt.com/xiazai/ PPT教程： www.1ppt.com/powerpoint/ Word教程： www.1ppt.com/word/ Excel教程：www.1ppt.com/excel/ 资料下载：www.1ppt.com/ziliao/ PPT课件下载：www.1ppt.com/kejian/ 范文下载：www.1ppt.com/fanwen/ 试卷下载：www.1ppt.com/shiti/ 教案下载：www.1ppt.com/jiaoan/ 字体下载：www.1ppt.com/ziti/ Show Time! Of course you can have your own different plot! Post-writing PPT模板下载：www.1ppt.com/moban/ 行业PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 节日PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/jieri/ PPT素材下载：www.1ppt.com/sucai/ PPT背景图片：www.1ppt.com/beijing/ PPT图表下载：www.1ppt.com/tubiao/ 优秀PPT下载：www.1ppt.com/xiazai/ PPT教程： www.1ppt.com/powerpoint/ Word教程： www.1ppt.com/word/ Excel教程：www.1ppt.com/excel/ 资料下载：www.1ppt.com/ziliao/ PPT课件下载：www.1ppt.com/kejian/ 范文下载：www.1ppt.com/fanwen/ 试卷下载：www.1ppt.com/shiti/ 教案下载：www.1ppt.com/jiaoan/ 字体下载：www.1ppt.com/ziti/ Assessment Standards Scores(1-5) Develop the story logically and reasonably. 1 2 3 4 5 The continuation is highly integrated with original context. 1 2 3 4 5 Use rich and vivid words for emotion. 1 2 3 4 5 Use complex sentences, grammatical structures and fluent handwriting. 1 2 3 4 5 Convey the virtues of Chinese nation. 1 2 3 4 5 PPT模板下载：www.1ppt.com/moban/ 行业PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 节日PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/jieri/ PPT素材下载：www.1ppt.com/sucai/ PPT背景图片：www.1ppt.com/beijing/ PPT图表下载：www.1ppt.com/tubiao/ 优秀PPT下载：www.1ppt.com/xiazai/ PPT教程： www.1ppt.com/powerpoint/ Word教程： www.1ppt.com/word/ Excel教程：www.1ppt.com/excel/ 资料下载：www.1ppt.com/ziliao/ PPT课件下载：www.1ppt.com/kejian/ 范文下载：www.1ppt.com/fanwen/ 试卷下载：www.1ppt.com/shiti/ 教案下载：www.1ppt.com/jiaoan/ 字体下载：www.1ppt.com/ziti/ write vividly read quickly think logically plot line mnd map emotion line prediction Build up word bank Summary: Choose proper (feeling) words Use rich sentence patterns Theme: realizing mother’s love and learning to be grateful story mountain mind map PPT模板下载：www.1ppt.com/moban/ 行业PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 节日PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/jieri/ PPT素材下载：www.1ppt.com/sucai/ PPT背景图片：www.1ppt.com/beijing/ PPT图表下载：www.1ppt.com/tubiao/ 优秀PPT下载：www.1ppt.com/xiazai/ PPT教程： www.1ppt.com/powerpoint/ Word教程： www.1ppt.com/word/ Excel教程：www.1ppt.com/excel/ 资料下载：www.1ppt.com/ziliao/ PPT课件下载：www.1ppt.com/kejian/ 范文下载：www.1ppt.com/fanwen/ 试卷下载：www.1ppt.com/shiti/ 教案下载：www.1ppt.com/jiaoan/ 字体下载：www.1ppt.com/ziti/ Assignment 1.Use the writing skills we have learned today to complete the rest of the story. 2.Edit(修改) and polish(润色) the article and hand it in. 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