Unit 1 Period 4 Writing-【优学精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册教用Word（外研版）

Period 4　Writing 写作一　应用文写作(介绍新学校的日记) 假定你是高一学生李华，你进入高中已有一周，请根据下列提示用英语写一篇日记，介绍你新学校的情况。内容包括： 1.校园面貌； 2.同学情况； 3.校园生活。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Thursday, September 9thSunny _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 　审题谋篇 　遣词造句 巧妙对接单元词汇 1．senior high　　　　 高中 2．leave/make a(n)...impression on sb. 给某人留下一个……的印象 3．challenge n. 挑战 4．pressure n. 压力 5．confident adj. 有信心的，自信的 6．take part in various after-school activities 参加各种各样的课外活动 7．go all out 全力以赴 巧用单元句式、语法 [第一段]　简单介绍个人情况 1．从我升入高中以来，已经一周了。 It has been a week since I entered the senior high. [第二段]　对新学校、新同学的印象 2．新学校给我留下了深刻印象。 The new school leaves/makes a deep impression on me． 3．新校园绿树环绕，既大又漂亮。(with复合结构) The new campus is large and beautiful with a lot of green trees all around． 4．我们班有45名学生，我们都非常刻苦。(There be 句型) There are forty-five students in our class and we are all hard-working. 5．我们学校的操场很大，在那里我们可以参加各种各样的课外活动。 The playground in our school is big and we can take part in various after-school activities there. [第三段]　个人感受 6．我知道高中生活会充满压力与挑战。 I know senior high life will be full of pressure and challenges． 7．我决定全力以赴并勇敢面对它们。 I decide to go all out and face them bravely. 8．我相信我能够在这里取得巨大进步。 I am confident that I can make great progress here. 靓化表达促提升 9．用who引导的非限制性定语从句改写句4 There are forty-five students in our class，who are all hard-working. 10．用where引导的非限制性定语从句改写句5 The playground in our school is big，where we can take part in various after-school activities. 11．用although引导的让步状语从句合并句6和句7 Although I know senior high life will be full of pressure and challenges, I decide to go all out and face them bravely. 　衔接成篇 Thursday, September 9thSunny _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ One possible version： Thursday, September 9th Sunny It has been a week since I entered the senior high. The new school leaves/makes a deep impression on me. The new campus is large and beautiful with a lot of green trees all around. There are forty-five students in our class，who are all hard-working. The playground in our school is big，where we can take part in various after-school activities. Although I know senior high life will be full of pressure and challenges, I decide to go all out and face them bravely. I am confident that I can make great progress here. 假定你是李华，昨天参加了你校举办的以“我最喜欢的一本书”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语日记来记录此次活动，内容包括： 　 　1.描述比赛的情况； 　 　2.你的表现和感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．开头已给出，但不计入总词数； 3．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Friday, September 10thSunny Yesterday afternoon, I took part in the English speech contest held by my school. The topic is “The book I like best”． _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ One possible version： Friday, September 10thSunny Yesterday afternoon, I took part in the English speech contest held by my school. The topic is “The book I like best”． At first, I felt a little nervous, but at the thought of the words “I can do it”， I calmed down. Soon it was my turn. When I said “The book I like best is Three Days to See written by Helen Keller. From the book, I realize that it is important to live every day happily and fully，” my teachers and classmates cheered for me. I gained much confidence and went on doing my best. Finally I won the first prize. From this experience, I learned that I should try my best to do everything. I'll keep it in mind. 第一段 开门见山，简单介绍要叙述的事情 1.How time flies! It has been a week since I entered senior high. 时间过得真快！从我进入高中以来已经一周了。 2.This afternoon, I took part in a carefully organised activity on the theme of “Human Activity and Wildlife Protection” in the science museum.　今天下午，我在科学博物馆参加了一个精心组织的活动，其主题为“人类活动与野生动物保护”。 3.We have just finished our military training. I have to admit that I have so much to say！ 我们刚刚结束了军训，我不得不承认我有很多话要说！ 第二段 详细叙述事情发生的过程 1.Although we experienced many difficulties, none of us gave up. 虽然我们经历了很多困难，但没有一个人放弃。 2.Firstly, we watched the teacher doing it attentively and then it was our turn to do some practice.　首先，我们聚精会神地看着老师做，然后轮到我们做一些练习。 3.But, at first, I was afraid to have a try because I was worried that I couldn't make it. 但是，起初我害怕尝试，因为我担心自己做不好。 4.The foreign visitors were very surprised to find that I spoke English so fluently and we talked a lot about the history of the Great Wall. 外国游客很惊讶地发现我的英语说得如此流利，我们谈了很多关于长城的历史。 第三段 总结自己的感受及收获 1.It was not only an experience, but also a helpful lesson！ 这不仅是一次经历，也是一堂有益的课！ 2.All in all, I have benefited a lot from today's activity. 总之，我从今天的活动中获益良多。 3.Although the training is over, I have learned a lot which will be beneficial to my whole life.　虽然训练结束了，但我学到了很多让我受益终生的东西。 写作二　场景微续写(等待搭档的心路历程) ——有效强化教考衔接 词汇积累 [情感描写]　curious, eagerness, butterflies in one's stomach, panic, in panic, pressure, calm, frightened, look forward to [动作描写]　explore, organise, nudge, breathe, debate, argue, investigate, apply, graduate, go all out, refer to, struggle, exchange [人物描写]　impressive, confident, sharp, intelligent, volunteer 佳句积累 [动作描写]　I woke up early and rushed out of the door in my eagerness to get to know my new school. [情感描写]　When my English teacher stepped into the classroom, I was surprised to see the same man I had met earlier. [比喻]　I tried to turn on my brain but the engine just wouldn't start. [心理描写]　1.With butterflies in my stomach，I breathed deeply. 2.I had been too nervous to pay attention when he introduced himself！ [主旨升华]　So, give your friends a hand when they need it.And this will make you feel good，too. ——积累内化应用提升 [场景呈现]　老师正在分配小组合作的伙伴，“我”正在等待分配结果。等待结果时，“我”十分紧张、心里发慌，好奇搭档人选。但在得知搭档是之前合作愉快又很聪明的人时，“我”如释重负，并对合作很有信心。 第一步　完成句子 1．在等待结果时，我承受着巨大的压力。 While waiting for the result, I was under great pressure． 2．我非常紧张，以至于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。(so...that...) I was so anxious that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 3．我心里发慌，深深地吸了一口气让自己冷静下来。(with复合结构) With butterflies in my stomach, I took a deep breath to calm myself down． 4．我忍不住好奇我会与谁合作。 I couldn't help but be curious about whom I would be working with. 5．使我非常欣慰的是，我的搭档正是之前和我合作愉快的人，而且他很聪明，我的脸上立刻浮现出灿烂的笑容。 To my great relief, my partner was just the one I had worked well with before, and he was intelligent, a bright smile instantly appearing on my face. 6．我有信心能与我的搭档很好地合作。 I was confident that I could cooperate well with my partner. 第二步　连句成文 _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ One possible version： While waiting for the result, I was under great pressure. I was so anxious that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. With butterflies in my stomach, I took a deep breath to calm myself down.　Meanwhile, I couldn't help but be curious about whom I would be working with. To my great relief, my partner was just the one I had worked well with before, and he was intelligent, a bright smile instantly appearing on my face.I was confident that I could cooperate well with my partner. 短语必记 1.one's heart flies into one's mouth　心提到嗓子眼 2.with one's heart in one's mouth 提心吊胆地 3.a flood/wave of tension 一阵紧张 4.with/have butterflies in one's stomach心里发慌 5.tremble/shake with anxiety　因焦虑不安而颤抖 6.a nervous glance 紧张的一瞥 必背金句 1.With butterflies in his stomach, his heart pounding wildly and palms sweating, he was nearly breathless.(with复合结构)　 他心里七上八下， 心怦怦直跳， 手心冒汗， 几乎喘不过气来。 2.Every second felt like an hour, and I could hear the blood rushing in my ears.(夸张) 每一秒都像一个小时那样漫长，我能听到血液在耳中奔腾的声音。 3.When he called my name，my legs turned to jelly, and I had to force myself to take each step forward. (比喻) 当他叫我的名字时，我的腿软得像果冻，只能强迫自己一步步往前挪。 4.Trembling nervously, I bit my fingernails and kept my head down and my eyes fixed on the floor. (现在分词作状语)　 我紧张地颤抖着， 咬着指甲， 低着头， 眼睛盯着地板。 5.My heart in my mouth, I didn't move an inch, staring at what was happening.(独立主格结构) 我的心都提到了嗓子眼儿，一动不动， 盯着眼前正在发生的一切。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $