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Unit 4 Being a good learner单元同步写作讲义
本单元的主题属于 “人与自我” 范畴,围绕做优秀的学习者展开。
单元引导学生认识不同的学习风格,正视学习中遇到的困难,掌握科学高效的学习策略;学会描述学习方法、分享自身学习经验,会运用书信、短文、演讲稿等文体给他人提供学习建议;能够熟练使用情态动词should / can / must提建议,掌握It is + adj. + to do等重点句型。
词汇积累
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1.learner n. 学习者
2. learning style 学习风格
3. method /way n. 方法
4. take notes 记笔记
5. review lessons 复习功课
6. preview lessons 预习功课
7. make study plans 制定学习计划
8. build vocabulary 积累词汇
9. group‑study 小组学习
10. self‑study n. 自学
11. face challenges 面对学习挑战
12. learn from mistakes 从错误中学习
13. make progress 取得进步
14. practice makes perfect 熟能生巧
15. the secret to learning 学习的秘诀
16. pay attention to 集中注意力于
17. ask for help 求助
18. pronunciation n. 发音
19. confidence n. 信心
20. effective adj. 有效的
句式积累
开头句
1. Everyone has his own learning style.
每个人都有自己的学习风格。
2. Many students have trouble with their study.
很多学生在学习方面遇到困难。
3. As for me, I prefer self‑study instead of group‑study.
对我来说,比起小组学习,我更喜欢自学。
中间句
1. It’s important to take notes carefully in class.
课堂上认真记笔记是很重要的。
2. I find it helpful to make study plans every week.
我发现每周制定学习计划很有用。
3. When I meet difficult problems, I will ask my teachers or classmates for help.
当我遇到难题,我会向老师或者同学求助。
4. Good learners are not afraid of making mistakes.
优秀的学习者不怕犯错。
结尾句
1. If you keep working hard, you will make great progress soon.
如果你坚持努力,很快就会取得巨大进步。
2. I hope these suggestions can help you with your study.
希望这些建议可以对你的学习有所帮助。
3. Practice makes perfect. Never give up when you meet difficulties.
熟能生巧。遇到困难不要放弃。
佳句仿写
教材原句:The secret to language learning is listening more.
仿写:学好的秘诀是找到适合自己的学习风格。
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2. 教材原句:Studying with partners helps me understand lessons better.
仿写:记笔记帮助我记住课堂上的重点知识。
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3. 教材原句:Don’t be afraid of making mistakes in your study.
仿写:不要害怕向老师寻求学习方面的帮助。
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【答案】
1. The secret to learning well is to find your own learning style.
2. Taking notes helps me remember key knowledge in class.
3. Don’t be afraid of asking teachers for help with your study.
典例
假如你是 Li Hua,你的朋友 Tom 来信,说学习上遇到很多麻烦,找不到适合自己的学习方式,请你写一封回信,给他提供几条实用学习建议。
要求:
1. 词数 80‑100 词;
2. 包含记笔记、制定计划、不怕犯错三个要点,可适当拓展;
3. 语句通顺,逻辑清晰。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble with your study. Let me give you some useful advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
审题
①题材:书信建议类作文;
②人称、时态:以第二人称为主,描述通用学习方法,主要使用一般现在时;
③写作要点:记笔记、制定学习计划、不要害怕犯错;结尾给予鼓励。
谋篇布局
开头
收到来信,表达理解,引出下文学习建议
中间
分点给出记笔记、制定计划、不怕犯错的具体学习建议
结尾
总结建议,鼓励坚持努力,祝愿取得进步
佳作展示
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble with your study. Let me give you some useful advice.
First, you should take careful notes in class. It can help you review what you have learned. Second, it’s a good idea to make weekly study plans. Good plans make your study more effective. Third, don’t be afraid of making mistakes. You can learn a lot from them. Besides, you can turn to your teachers or classmates for help when you meet hard problems.
Practice makes perfect. If you keep trying, you will make great progress soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
佳作赏析
亮点词汇
① take careful notes 认真记笔记
② make weekly study plans 制定每周学习计划
③ make great progress 取得巨大进步
④ turn to sb. for help 向某人求助
高分句型
1. I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble with your study.(宾语从句固定句式)
2. It’s a good idea to make weekly study plans.(It is + n. + to do不定式作真正主语)
3. If you keep trying, you will make great progress soon.(if 引导条件状语从句,主将从现)
(一)
(26‑27 八年级上・全国・单元测试)
请以 **My Learning Style** 为题,写一篇短文,介绍你的学习风格。
提示:
1. 你的学习风格是什么(自学 / 小组学习);
2. 为什么你喜欢这种学习方式;
3. 这种学习方式带给你的帮助。
要求:60‑80 词,语句通顺,语法正确,可适当发挥。
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【参考范文】
My Learning Style
My learning style is self‑study.
I like studying alone because I can pay full attention to my lessons. I can make my own study plan and learn at my own pace. When I meet difficult points, I will think hard first and then look for help.
Self‑study makes me more independent. I can learn much knowledge by myself. I believe it is a good way for me to become a better learner.
【详解】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明性记叙文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:点明自己的学习风格;说明喜欢该方式的理由;介绍这种方式带来的帮助
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,点明自己的学习风格
主体段:具体阐述为什么喜欢这种学习风格,简单描述学习过程
结尾段:总结这种学习风格给自己带来的成长,表达感悟
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:点明学习风格
学习风格:self‑study(自学) /group‑study(小组学习)
要点二:喜欢该方式的理由
自学:pay full attention 集中全部注意力;make own study plan 制定自己的学习计划;learn at one’s own pace 按照自己节奏学习
小组学习:discuss problems together 一起讨论问题;learn from partners 向同伴学习
要点三:带来的帮助
make me more independent 让我更加独立;improve my skills 提升我的能力;help me make progress 帮助我取得进步
(二)
(26‑27 八年级上・全国・课后作业)
假如你是李华,请以 **How to Be a Good Learner** 为题写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 内容包含:找到适合自己的学习方式;课堂认真记笔记;敢于从错误中学习;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 词数 80 左右。
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【参考范文】
How to Be a Good Learner
What makes a good learner? Here is my advice.
First, you need to find your own learning style. Not everyone learns in the same way. Second, take notes carefully in class. It helps you review knowledge after class. Third, don’t fear mistakes. You can learn lots of useful lessons from your mistakes.
Besides, you should ask for help when you have hard problems. If you keep working hard, you will become a good learner step by step.
【详解】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文(提建议),用一般现在时
明确要点:找到适合自己的学习方式;课堂认真记笔记;敢于从错误中学习,适当补充拓展
确定人称:第二人称 you 为主
注意事项:包含全部要点,词数 80 左右,不出现真实个人信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
第一段:提出问题,引出下文如何成为优秀学习者
第二段:分点逐条给出学习建议
第三段:总结,鼓励坚持努力
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:找到适合自己的学习方式
find your own learning style;everyone has different ways to learn
要点二:课堂认真记笔记
take notes carefully in class;help you review knowledge
要点三:从错误中学习
don’t fear mistakes;learn lessons from mistakes
要点四:结尾总结建议
ask for help with hard problems;keep working hard;become better step by step
(三)
(25‑26 八年级上・河北石家庄・期中)
假设你是 Li Hua,你的笔友 Peter 来信说他学习效率不高,成绩进步很慢。请你给他回一封电子邮件,给他一些学习方面的建议。
1. 合理规划时间;
2. 课堂集中注意力,做好笔记;
3. 遇到难题主动求助,不要害怕犯错。
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯;
3. 词数 100 词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
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Dear Peter,
How are you? I’m sorry to know you have trouble making progress in your study. I’d like to give you some advice.
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Hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
How are you? I’m sorry to know you have trouble making progress in your study. I’d like to give you some advice.
First, you should plan your time well every day. Good time‑planning can make your study more efficient. Second, pay attention in class and take useful notes. You can go over your notes after class. Third, don’t be afraid of making mistakes. When you meet difficult problems, turn to teachers or classmates for help.
Practice makes perfect. Small efforts can bring big progress if you keep trying.
Hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文电子邮件,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:合理规划时间;课堂集中注意力、记笔记;遇到难题主动求助,不怕犯错
确定人称:以第二人称 you 为主,第一人称 I
注意事项:全部要点覆盖,适当拓展,词数 100 左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已经给出,表达对对方学习困境的理解,引出建议
主体段:分点给出三条学习建议,补充简单解释
结尾段:引用谚语,表达鼓励,使用已给结尾句
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:合理规划时间
plan your time well;good time‑planning;make study more efficient
要点二:课堂专注、记笔记
pay attention in class;take useful notes;go over notes after class
要点三:不怕犯错,主动求助
don’t be afraid of making mistakes;turn to teachers or classmates for help
要点四:结尾鼓励
Practice makes perfect;keep trying;small efforts bring big progress
(四)
(25‑26 八年级上・安徽蚌埠・期中)
学校英语角正在举办征文比赛,主题为**My Ways to Improve My Study**。请你写一篇短文参赛。
要点:
1. 课前预习,课后复习;
2. 善于向他人请教,不怕犯错;
3. 找到适合自己的学习方法;
4.……(补充一点)
要求:
1. 短文须包括所有提示要点,可适当拓展;
2. 内容连贯,语句通顺;
3. 词数 80 左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Ways to Improve My Study
As a middle‑school student, I want to keep improving my study.
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【参考范文】
My Ways to Improve My Study
As a middle‑school student, I want to keep improving my study.
First, I preview lessons before class and review what I’ve learned after class. It helps me get ready for new knowledge. Second, I’m not afraid of mistakes and I often ask others for advice. Third, I try to find my own suitable learning ways. Besides, I take notes carefully and make small study goals for myself.
I believe if I keep working hard, I will become a better learner.
【详解】
[写作步骤]
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性说明文,一般现在时为主
明确要点:课前预习课后复习;敢于请教、不怕犯错;找到适合自己的学习方法,自主补充一点
确定人称:第一人称 I
注意事项:要点齐全,不出现真实个人信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,点明主题
主体段:逐条介绍提升学习的具体做法
结尾段:表达自己对学习的信念
[第三步:要点展开]
要点:提升学习的方法
preview lessons before class 课前预习;review what I’ve learned after class 课后复习;ask others for advice 向别人请教;find suitable learning ways 找到合适的学习方法;take notes 记笔记;make small study goals 设立小学习目标
(五)
(26‑27 八年级上・全国・课后作业)
假如你是李华,请以 **Group‑study Helps Me a Lot** 为题,写一篇短文,介绍小组学习这种学习方式,说明它的优点,对你的帮助。
要求:
1. 包含:学习方式、优点、对你的帮助;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 词数 80 左右。
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【参考范文】
Group‑study Helps Me a Lot
My favourite way to learn is group‑study. It really helps me a lot.
In group study, we can discuss difficult problems together. We share different ideas and learn useful experience from each other. When I don’t understand something, my group partners can give me quick help.
Group‑study makes me more active in class. I become braver to share my thoughts. With my partners’ help, I make much progress in my subjects.
【详解】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:观点说明类说明文,一般现在时为主
明确要点:点明小组学习的学习方式;介绍小组学习的优点;写小组学习带给自己的帮助与成长
确定人称:第一人称 I
注意事项:控制词数,不出现真实个人信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开门见山,点明最喜欢小组学习
主体段:介绍小组学习的优势:一起讨论难题,互相分享想法,同伴互助
结尾段:写小组学习给自己性格、学习成绩带来的积极改变
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:点明学习方式
group‑study 小组学习
要点二:小组学习的优点
discuss difficult problems together 一起讨论难题;share different ideas 分享不同观点;learn experience from each other 互相借鉴经验;partners give help 同伴提供帮助
要点三:带来的帮助
become more active 变得更加积极;braver to share thoughts 敢于分享想法;make progress 取得进步
(六)
(26‑27 八年级上・全国・课后作业)
假设你是李明,你的朋友 Wang Wei 学习很努力,但是成绩一直不太理想,请你给他写一封建议信,帮他分析原因并给出学习建议。
要求:
1. 内容:分析可能的原因,给出 2‑3 条具体学习建议;
2. 时态正确,语句通顺,书写规范;
3. 词数:80‑100 词;
4. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Wei,
I’m sorry to hear that you work hard but you don’t get good grades.
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Li Ming
【参考范文】
Dear Wang Wei,
I’m sorry to hear that you work hard but you don’t get good grades.
Maybe you haven’t found your right learning style yet. Here are my suggestions. First, you should take notes in class and review them on time. Second, don’t just read books all the time. Try to think more and learn from your mistakes. Third, you can try group‑study to discuss problems with classmates.
Keep trying. Good methods will help you make progress little by little.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文建议信
明确要点:分析没有找到合适学习风格这一原因,给出 2‑3 条具体学习建议
确定人称:第一人称 (I, my),第二人称 (you, your)
注意事项:词数 80‑100 词,开头结尾已给,要点齐全
[第二步:构思布局]
开头段:已给出,对朋友的情况表达理解
主体段:简单分析原因,逐条给出学习建议
结尾段:给予鼓励
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:分析原因
haven’t found your right learning style 还没有找到适合自己的学习方式
要点二:建议 1
take notes in class;review them on time 课堂记笔记,及时复习
要点三:建议 2
think more;learn from your mistakes 多思考,从错误中学习
要点四:建议 3
try group‑study;discuss problems with classmates 尝试小组学习,和同学讨论问题
要点五:鼓励祝愿
keep trying;make progress little by little 坚持尝试,一点点取得进步
(七)
(24‑25 八年级上・安徽合肥・阶段检测)
假如你是来自英国的 Jack,上周你收到笔友李华的来信,他很努力但是做题速度慢,考试时间总是不够用。请你根据提示给他写一封回信,给他一些学习的建议。
提示:1. 课前预习,标记难点;2. 练习提升做题速度;3. 学会合理分配时间。
要求:1. 语句通顺,符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
2.80 词左右(作文的开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you can’t finish your test papers in time though you study hard.
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Yours,
Jack
【参考范文】
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you can’t finish your test papers in time though you study hard. Don’t worry. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, preview your lessons before class and mark difficult points. It will help you understand knowledge better. Second, do more exercises to improve your speed. Third, learn to plan your time well and spend proper time on each problem.
I believe you will make progress if you keep practicing. Good luck!
Yours,
Jack
【详解】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文建议信,一般现在时
明确要点:课前预习标记难点;练习提升做题速度;学会合理分配时间
确定人称:第一人称 I,第二人称 you
注意事项:要点齐全,词数 80 左右,语气鼓励安慰
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,安慰对方
主体段:分点给出三条对应的建议,简单解释好处
结尾段:表达信心和祝福
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:课前预习
preview lessons before class;mark difficult points
要点二:提升做题速度
do more exercises;improve your speed
要点三:合理分配时间
plan your time well;spend proper time on each problem
要点四:结尾鼓励
keep practicing;make progress
(八)
(25‑26 八年级上・江苏宿迁・期中)
学校英语周,你要做一篇题为 “How to Be an Excellent Learner” 的演讲稿,请根据提示完成演讲稿。
课堂
认真记笔记;集中注意力听讲
练习
多做练习,不要害怕犯错
复习
及时复习巩固知识
其他
找到适合自己的学习方式,坚持努力……
要求:
1. 表达中必须包含所给要点,省略号部分适当发挥增加细节,使短文流畅。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实的姓名和校名等。
3. 条理清晰,字迹工整。词数大约 90 词。
How to Be an Excellent Learner
Dear friends,
Do you want to become an excellent learner?
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【参考范文】
Dear friends,
Do you want to become an excellent learner?
Here I have some useful advice for you. In class, you should listen carefully and take useful notes. After class, do enough exercises and don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Remember to review your knowledge in time. What’s more, find your own suitable learning style. Different people learn in different ways.
Keep working hard every day, and you will make progress step by step.
Thank you!
【详解】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:演讲稿,一般现在时为主。
明确要点:课堂记笔记、专注听讲;多练习不怕犯错;及时复习;找到适合自己的学习方式。
确定人称:第二人称 (you)。
注意事项:词数 90 左右,不能出现真实个人信息。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:抛出问题,引出下文学习建议。
主体段:分层介绍课堂、课后练习、复习以及找到学习方式等建议。
结尾段:总结,发出呼吁鼓励坚持努力。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:课堂
listen carefully;take useful notes 认真听讲,记有用笔记
要点二:练习
do enough exercises;don’t be afraid of making mistakes 多练习,不怕犯错
要点三:复习
review your knowledge in time 及时复习知识
要点四:其他
find your own suitable learning style 找到适合自己的学习方式;keep working hard 坚持努力
要点五:结尾总结
make progress step by step 一步步取得进步
(九)
(25‑26 八年级上・陕西渭南・期末)
假如你是李华,你的外国朋友 Fred 想要提高英语,但是不知道如何选择学习方式。请你根据表格提示,写一封信给他介绍两种学习方式,并给出你的建议。
Learning ways
Advantages
self‑study
learn at your own pace, save time
group‑study
discuss problems, learn from partners
要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息;
4. 词数:不少于 60。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
Dear Fred,
How are you doing?I know you want to improve your English.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Fred,
How are you doing? I know you want to improve your English. Now let me introduce two learning ways to you.
Self‑study lets you learn at your own pace and it can save your time. Group‑study is also great. You can discuss problems and learn useful things from your partners. I think you can mix them. You can study by yourself most of the time and join group discussions when you meet hard problems.
I hope my advice can be helpful for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封建议介绍类书信;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:介绍自学、小组学习两种方式和各自优点,给出个人建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步:问候,点明写信目的;
第二步:按照表格介绍两种学习方式以及优势,给出自己的建议;
第三步:表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①at one’s own pace 按照自己的节奏
②discuss problems 讨论问题
③mix 混合,结合
[高分句型]
I think you can mix them.(宾语从句)
(十)
(26‑27 八年级上・安徽亳州・期中)
你们学校英语俱乐部要招募新成员,请你写一篇演讲稿参加竞选。
要点:
1. 自我介绍:性格,爱好(阅读英语读物);
2. 你的学习英语的两种方法;
3. 给俱乐部提一条小建议。
注意事项:
(1) 演讲稿需包括图中所有内容,并适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
(2) 词数 90 个左右,演讲稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3) 文中不得使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Ladies and gentlemen! I’m glad to be here to apply for the English club.
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So much for my speech, thanks for your listening!
【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen! I’m glad to be here to apply for the English club.
I am outgoing and I enjoy reading English articles in my free time. For English learning, I have two good ways. First, I take notes when I read and collect useful new words. Second, I practice speaking by talking with my classmates in English after class.
For our club, I have a small suggestion. We can hold sharing meetings so that we can exchange our learning experience with each other.
So much for my speech, thanks for your listening!
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:自我介绍,学习英语的方法,俱乐部建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开头已给出,表明演讲目的;
第二步:进行自我介绍,介绍自己学习英语的两种方法,对俱乐部提出建议;
第三步:结束语。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for 申请
②collect useful new words 积累有用的新词
③exchange learning experience 交流学习经验
[高分句型]
We can hold sharing meetings so that we can exchange our learning experience with each other.(so that 引导目的状语从句)
$Unit 4 Being a good learner单元同步写作讲义
本单元的主题属于 “人与自我” 范畴,围绕做优秀的学习者展开。
单元引导学生认识不同的学习风格,正视学习中遇到的困难,掌握科学高效的学习策略;学会描述学习方法、分享自身学习经验,会运用书信、短文、演讲稿等文体给他人提供学习建议;能够熟练使用情态动词should / can / must提建议,掌握It is + adj. + to do等重点句型。
词汇积累
1 / 1
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learner n. 学习者
2. learning style 学习风格
3. method /way n. 方法
4. take notes 记笔记
5. review lessons 复习功课
6. preview lessons 预习功课
7. make study plans 制定学习计划
8. build vocabulary 积累词汇
9. group‑study 小组学习
10. self‑study n. 自学
11. face challenges 面对学习挑战
12. learn from mistakes 从错误中学习
13. make progress 取得进步
14. practice makes perfect 熟能生巧
15. the secret to learning 学习的秘诀
16. pay attention to 集中注意力于
17. ask for help 求助
18. pronunciation n. 发音
19. confidence n. 信心
20. effective adj. 有效的
句式积累
开头句
1. Everyone has his own learning style.
每个人都有自己的学习风格。
2. Many students have trouble with their study.
很多学生在学习方面遇到困难。
3. As for me, I prefer self‑study instead of group‑study.
对我来说,比起小组学习,我更喜欢自学。
中间句
1. It’s important to take notes carefully in class.
课堂上认真记笔记是很重要的。
2. I find it helpful to make study plans every week.
我发现每周制定学习计划很有用。
3. When I meet difficult problems, I will ask my teachers or classmates for help.
当我遇到难题,我会向老师或者同学求助。
4. Good learners are not afraid of making mistakes.
优秀的学习者不怕犯错。
结尾句
1. If you keep working hard, you will make great progress soon.
如果你坚持努力,很快就会取得巨大进步。
2. I hope these suggestions can help you with your study.
希望这些建议可以对你的学习有所帮助。
3. Practice makes perfect. Never give up when you meet difficulties.
熟能生巧。遇到困难不要放弃。
佳句仿写
教材原句:The secret to language learning is listening more.
仿写:学好的秘诀是找到适合自己的学习风格。
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2. 教材原句:Studying with partners helps me understand lessons better.
仿写:记笔记帮助我记住课堂上的重点知识。
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3. 教材原句:Don’t be afraid of making mistakes in your study.
仿写:不要害怕向老师寻求学习方面的帮助。
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典例
假如你是 Li Hua,你的朋友 Tom 来信,说学习上遇到很多麻烦,找不到适合自己的学习方式,请你写一封回信,给他提供几条实用学习建议。
要求:
1. 词数 80‑100 词;
2. 包含记笔记、制定计划、不怕犯错三个要点,可适当拓展;
3. 语句通顺,逻辑清晰。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble with your study. Let me give you some useful advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
审题
①题材:书信建议类作文;
②人称、时态:以第二人称为主,描述通用学习方法,主要使用一般现在时;
③写作要点:记笔记、制定学习计划、不要害怕犯错;结尾给予鼓励。
谋篇布局
开头
收到来信,表达理解,引出下文学习建议
中间
分点给出记笔记、制定计划、不怕犯错的具体学习建议
结尾
总结建议,鼓励坚持努力,祝愿取得进步
佳作展示
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble with your study. Let me give you some useful advice.
First, you should take careful notes in class. It can help you review what you have learned. Second, it’s a good idea to make weekly study plans. Good plans make your study more effective. Third, don’t be afraid of making mistakes. You can learn a lot from them. Besides, you can turn to your teachers or classmates for help when you meet hard problems.
Practice makes perfect. If you keep trying, you will make great progress soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
佳作赏析
亮点词汇
① take careful notes 认真记笔记
② make weekly study plans 制定每周学习计划
③ make great progress 取得巨大进步
④ turn to sb. for help 向某人求助
高分句型
1. I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble with your study.(宾语从句固定句式)
2. It’s a good idea to make weekly study plans.(It is + n. + to do不定式作真正主语)
3. If you keep trying, you will make great progress soon.(if 引导条件状语从句,主将从现)
(一)
(26‑27 八年级上・全国・单元测试)
请以 **My Learning Style** 为题,写一篇短文,介绍你的学习风格。
提示:
1. 你的学习风格是什么(自学 / 小组学习);
2. 为什么你喜欢这种学习方式;
3. 这种学习方式带给你的帮助。
要求:60‑80 词,语句通顺,语法正确,可适当发挥。
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(二)
(26‑27 八年级上・全国・课后作业)
假如你是李华,请以 **How to Be a Good Learner** 为题写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 内容包含:找到适合自己的学习方式;课堂认真记笔记;敢于从错误中学习;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 词数 80 左右。
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(三)
(25‑26 八年级上・河北石家庄・期中)
假设你是 Li Hua,你的笔友 Peter 来信说他学习效率不高,成绩进步很慢。请你给他回一封电子邮件,给他一些学习方面的建议。
1. 合理规划时间;
2. 课堂集中注意力,做好笔记;
3. 遇到难题主动求助,不要害怕犯错。
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯;
3. 词数 100 词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
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Dear Peter,
How are you? I’m sorry to know you have trouble making progress in your study. I’d like to give you some advice.
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Hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
(25‑26 八年级上・安徽蚌埠・期中)
学校英语角正在举办征文比赛,主题为**My Ways to Improve My Study**。请你写一篇短文参赛。
要点:
1. 课前预习,课后复习;
2. 善于向他人请教,不怕犯错;
3. 找到适合自己的学习方法;
4.……(补充一点)
要求:
1. 短文须包括所有提示要点,可适当拓展;
2. 内容连贯,语句通顺;
3. 词数 80 左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Ways to Improve My Study
As a middle‑school student, I want to keep improving my study.
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(五)
(26‑27 八年级上・全国・课后作业)
假如你是李华,请以 **Group‑study Helps Me a Lot** 为题,写一篇短文,介绍小组学习这种学习方式,说明它的优点,对你的帮助。
要求:
1. 包含:学习方式、优点、对你的帮助;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 词数 80 左右。
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(六)
(26‑27 八年级上・全国・课后作业)
假设你是李明,你的朋友 Wang Wei 学习很努力,但是成绩一直不太理想,请你给他写一封建议信,帮他分析原因并给出学习建议。
要求:
1. 内容:分析可能的原因,给出 2‑3 条具体学习建议;
2. 时态正确,语句通顺,书写规范;
3. 词数:80‑100 词;
4. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Wei,
I’m sorry to hear that you work hard but you don’t get good grades.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Ming
(七)
(24‑25 八年级上・安徽合肥・阶段检测)
假如你是来自英国的 Jack,上周你收到笔友李华的来信,他很努力但是做题速度慢,考试时间总是不够用。请你根据提示给他写一封回信,给他一些学习的建议。
提示:1. 课前预习,标记难点;2. 练习提升做题速度;3. 学会合理分配时间。
要求:1. 语句通顺,符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
2.80 词左右(作文的开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you can’t finish your test papers in time though you study hard.
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Yours,
Jack
(八)
(25‑26 八年级上・江苏宿迁・期中)
学校英语周,你要做一篇题为 “How to Be an Excellent Learner” 的演讲稿,请根据提示完成演讲稿。
课堂
认真记笔记;集中注意力听讲
练习
多做练习,不要害怕犯错
复习
及时复习巩固知识
其他
找到适合自己的学习方式,坚持努力……
要求:
1. 表达中必须包含所给要点,省略号部分适当发挥增加细节,使短文流畅。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实的姓名和校名等。
3. 条理清晰,字迹工整。词数大约 90 词。
How to Be an Excellent Learner
Dear friends,
Do you want to become an excellent learner?
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(九)
(25‑26 八年级上・陕西渭南・期末)
假如你是李华,你的外国朋友 Fred 想要提高英语,但是不知道如何选择学习方式。请你根据表格提示,写一封信给他介绍两种学习方式,并给出你的建议。
Learning ways
Advantages
self‑study
learn at your own pace, save time
group‑study
discuss problems, learn from partners
要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息;
4. 词数:不少于 60。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
Dear Fred,
How are you doing?I know you want to improve your English.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(十)
(26‑27 八年级上・安徽亳州・期中)
你们学校英语俱乐部要招募新成员,请你写一篇演讲稿参加竞选。
要点:
1. 自我介绍:性格,爱好(阅读英语读物);
2. 你的学习英语的两种方法;
3. 给俱乐部提一条小建议。
注意事项:
(1) 演讲稿需包括图中所有内容,并适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
(2) 词数 90 个左右,演讲稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3) 文中不得使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Ladies and gentlemen! I’m glad to be here to apply for the English club.
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So much for my speech, thanks for your listening!
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