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Unit 2 Festivals and holidays单元同步写作讲义
佳句仿写
【答案】
1. My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival.
2. We watch the moon and eat moon cakes on Mid-Autumn night.
3. Getting together with my family makes me feel warm.
(一)
【参考范文】
My Favorite Festival
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It usually falls in January or February.
Before the festival, my family always cleans the house carefully. On New Year’s Eve, we have a big dinner together and watch the Spring Festival Gala happily. During the festival, we visit our relatives and friends. Children can get lucky money from elders.
I like it best because it’s a time for family reunion. No matter where we’re, we always return home to celebrate it.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:事物介绍类说明文,全文以一般现在时为主
明确要点:点明最喜欢的节日+节日时间;详细介绍人们的庆祝方式;说明喜爱该节日的原因,突出团圆内涵
确定人称:第一人称(my/we)
注意事项:控制词数,不得透露真实信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开门见山,点明最喜欢的节日以及它到来的时间,使用时间状语
主体段:按照时间顺序分层描写节前、除夕夜、节日里的各类庆祝活动,加入地点、方式状语丰富句式
结尾段:阐述自己喜爱春节的核心理由,升华家庭团圆的主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:点明节日名称与时间
节日与时间:the Spring Festival/falls in January or February/usually comes in January or February every year/as the most important traditional festival in China/always takes place in the first two months of the lunar year等
要点二:分层介绍节日庆祝活动
节日活动:cleans the house carefully/have a big dinner together/watch the Spring Festival Gala happily/visit our relatives and friends/get lucky money from elders/every member of my family thoroughly cleans our house to sweep away bad luck/enjoy a rich family feast and watch the Spring Festival Gala with big smiles on our faces/to send our warm New Year greetings/receive red envelopes filled with lucky money as best wishes from the elder family members等
要点三:说明喜欢这个节日的原因
原因:a time for family reunion/No matter where we are, we always return home to celebrate it/stands for/the most precious thing to me/gives us a precious chance to stay with our whole family and share happy moments without busy work or study等
(二)
【参考范文】
A Special New Year Celebration
There are many special New Year celebrations around the world. My favourite one is the Spanish New Year celebration.
In Spain, people celebrate New Year’s Eve on December 31. When the clock strikes midnight, they eat 12 grapes. Each grape stands for a month of the year. Eating 12 grapes is believed to bring good luck for the new year.
I think this celebration is very interesting and fun. It’s a wonderful way to warmly welcome the new year.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍一个特别的新年庆祝活动(包含国家、时间、习俗);表达对该节日的看法
确定人称:以第三人称和第一人称为主
注意事项:内容完整;语言自然流畅;词数控制在80词左右
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:点出世界上有许多新年庆祝活动,并引出最喜欢的西班牙新年庆祝(Spanish New Year celebration)
中间:介绍该节日的国家(Spain)、时间(New Year’s Eve on December 31)以及核心习俗(eat 12 grapes at midnight)
结尾:总结感受,表达对该节日的看法(interesting and fun)
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:节日基本信息与习俗
国家时间:Spain/New Year’s Eve on December 31等
核心行为:When the clock strikes midnight, they eat 12 grapes等
寓意效果:Each grape stands for a month/bring good luck for the new year等
要点二:个人的看法与评价
情感态度:interesting/fun/wonderful等
具体说明:It’s a wonderful way to warmly welcome the new year等
(三)
【参考范文】
Dear Jenny,
How are you? I’m writing to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. It is on the 15th day of the eighth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. We also call it the Moon Festival. It has a history of more than 2,000 years. At first, it was to celebrate the harvest. On this day, families get together, have a big dinner, eat delicious mooncakes and watch the full moon.
I love the Mid-Autumn Festival very much. It is a warm and happy festival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤:
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:这是一篇电子邮件,用一般现在时和一般过去时。
明确要点:需要介绍中秋节的基本信息(日期、别称、历史等)、节日起源、节日的象征意义以及节日的活动等,表达自己对中秋节的喜爱之情。
确定人称:使用第一人称和第二人称相结合,“I”用于表达自己的感受,“you”用于和对方交流。
注意事项:语言表达要流畅自然,符合书信的格式和语气;介绍内容要准确清晰,能让对方较好地了解中秋节。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:通过问候引出要介绍的内容,即向对方介绍中国的中秋节。
主体段:详细介绍中秋节的日期、别称、历史、起源、象征意义以及节日活动等。
结尾段:表达自己对中秋节的喜爱之情,总结这是一个温暖快乐的节日。
[第三步:要点展示]
要点一:中秋节的基本信息
基本信息:on the 15th day of the eighth month in the Chinese lunar calendar/the Moon Festival/a history of more than 2,000 years/celebrate the harvest等
习俗:get together, have a big dinner/eat delicious mooncakes and watch the full moon/tell the story of Chang’e/admire the full moon and eat mooncakes等
要点二:表达自己对中秋节的喜爱之情
a warm and happy festival/makes me feel the warmth of family等
(四)
【参考范文】
My Favourite Festival — The Spring Festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is on the first day of the first lunar month.
There is a legend about Nian, a monster. People set off fireworks and hung red things to drive Nian away. Now people have many customs: they clean homes, make dumplings, give lucky money to children, and watch dragon dances.
It is a time for family reunion. I love the Spring Festival because I can stay with my family and have a great time.
【详解】写作步骤
【第一步:审题立意】
确定文体:介绍类英语短文,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:二选一(春节/端午节),包含节日时间、起源/传说、传统习俗,表达喜爱之情,词数80词左右
确定人称:第一人称李华
注意事项:语句通顺,语法准确
【第二步:构思布局】
开头:点明自己最喜爱的节日,交代节日具体时间
主体:讲述节日相关传说,介绍当地特色民俗活动
结尾:抒发个人喜爱这个节日的原因
【第三步:要点展开】
要点一:时间
on the first day of the first lunar month/lunar calendar/lunar New Year/New Year’s Eve等
要点二:传说
about Nian, a monster/set off fireworks and hung red things to drive Nian away/traditional story/red paper等
要点三:习俗
clean houses/make dumplings/give lucky money to children/watch dragon dances/have a big dinner/watch the Spring Festival Gala /set off fireworks/paste Spring Festival couplets等
要点四:喜爱原因
family reunion/stay with my family and have a great time/get together/happy atmosphere/relaxing等
(五)
【参考范文】
My Favorite Celebration
My favorite celebration is the Spring Festival. It is the most important festival in China.
I always celebrate it with my family. Before the festival, we clean our house and buy new clothes. On New Year’s Eve, we have a big family dinner and eat dumplings. During the festival, we visit relatives and friends. I can get red envelopes from my grandparents.
I love the Spring Festival because it brings my family together and makes me feel happy and warm.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍最喜欢的庆祝活动/节日是什么,如何庆祝以及写明喜欢的原因,三要点必须完整覆盖
确定人称:第一人称
注意事项:文中不得出现个人真实姓名、学校等信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,简单介绍自己最喜欢的节日
主体段:介绍庆祝节日做的具体活动,节日前的准备以及节日期间的活动等等
结尾段:总结感受,表达喜欢的原因
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:最喜欢的庆祝活动/节日
庆祝活动/节日选择:Spring Festival/Mid-Autumn Festival/Dragon Boat Festival等
要点二:过节的具体行为
节日前准备:clean our houses/buy new clothes/decorate the house等
节日期间具体活动:have a big family dinner/eat dumplings/visit relatives and friends/get red envelope/buy lots of delicious food/watch the Spring Festival Gala等
要点三:喜欢的原因
原因:bring family together/make me feel happy and warm/chat and share interesting stories等
(六)
【参考范文】
Our school did a survey about traditional Chinese festivals. Here are the results.
The Spring Festival is the most popular, chosen by over half (55%) of students. People love it for the big family dinners and lucky money. Popular activities include hanging red lanterns and watching the Spring Festival Gala. We always meet our relatives on the first day of the Spring Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival comes second (30%). Families enjoy reunions, eating mooncakes, sharing stories, and admiring the full moon.
Other festivals like the Dragon Boat Festival make up 15%. People watch dragon boat races and make zongzi during these times.
These festivals are important parts of our culture and bring people together.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:英语应用文,整体以一般现在时陈述客观调查结果为主;
明确要点:涵盖表格中不同传统节日的受欢迎占比、喜爱原因、对应庆祝活动,可适当发挥;
确定人称:第三人称为主(介绍调查数据结果);
注意事项:文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名,正文词数要求80词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
[第二步:构思布局]
采用三段式结构
开头段:题目已给出,引出本次中国传统节日调查的主题;
主体段:按照占比从高到低依次介绍不同节日的调查结果,清晰说明占比、喜爱原因、常见活动;
结尾段:题目已给出,总结中国传统节日的文化价值。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:春节的调查结果
The Spring Festival is the most popular, chosen by over half (55%) of students/55% of the students like the Spring Festival best/the big family dinners and lucky money/activities include hanging red lanterns and watching the Spring Festival Gala/People usually hang red lanterns and watch the Spring Festival Gala to celebrate it/more than half of the students/receive lucky money from elders/put up Spring Festival couplets/ set off fireworks/..
要点二:中秋节的调查结果
The Mid-Autumn Festival comes second (30%)/Families enjoy reunions, eating mooncakes, sharing stories, and admiring the full moon/30% of the students rank the Mid-Autumn Festival as their favorite/They enjoy family reunion and taste sweet mooncakes on that day/Common activities include enjoying the full moon and sharing traditional stories/one third of the surveyed students/get together with family members/admire the full moon/...
要点三:其他传统节日的调查结果
Other festivals like the Dragon Boat Festival make up 15%/People watch dragon boat races and make zongzi during these times/The rest 15% prefer other festivals like the Dragon Boat Festival/They love these festivals for special traditional dishes and interesting activities/commemorate Qu Yuan/...
(七)
【参考范文】
My Favourite Festival
My favourite festival is the Double Ninth Festival. It falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month. On this day, people show respect and love for the elderly. They climb mountains, enjoy Chongyang cakes, and spend time with family. I like this festival because it teaches us to care for older people. My grandparents live with us, and I always help them on that day. It makes me feel happy and proud.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:节日名称和日期、人们做什么活动、吃什么传统食物、喜欢这个节日的原因
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)和第三人称(people/they)
注意事项:从重阳节、圣诞节、胡里节、番茄节中选择一个,或选择一个熟悉的中国传统节日
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:点明最喜欢的节日名称和日期
主体段:描述节日活动(登山、吃重阳糕、陪伴家人)和传统食物
结尾段:说明喜欢的原因(学会关爱老人)并表达感受
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:节日名称和日期
节日名称:the Double Ninth Festival/the Spring Festival/the Mid-Autumn Festival/the Dragon Boat Festival/Christmas/Holi/Tomato Festival等
日期表达:falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month/comes in January or February/on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month/on December 25th等
要点二:节日活动
活动内容:show respect and love for the elderly/climb mountains/spend time with family/clean houses/get together/have a big dinner/watch lanterns/dragon boat races/throw colorful powder等
要点三:传统食物
食物名称:Chongyang cakes/dumplings/mooncakes/zongzi/rice dumplings/turkey等
要点四:喜欢的原因
原因表达:teaches us to care for older people/can spend time with family/enjoy delicious food/fun and exciting/learn about traditions等
感受表达:makes me feel happy and proud/feel warm and happy/feel excited/full of joy等
(八)
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.
Last year, I cleaned our house and bought a lot of food with my parents to get ready for it. This year, we are going to spend it at my grandparents’ home. We are going to watch the Spring Festival Gala and set off small fireworks, which are really fun.
We are going to make dumplings together. First, we mix meat and vegetables for the filling. Then, we put filling into the wrappers and fold them carefully. Finally, we boil them until they are ready.
I’m sure we will have a great time.
Welcome to China to enjoy the happiness of the Spring Festival!
Yours
Li Ming
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(书信),以回信形式介绍节日经历与计划,一般过去时(介绍去年准备活动),一般将来时(介绍今年计划),一般现在时(介绍制作步骤)
明确人称:第一人称(I, my, we)
核心要点:Last year:春节前的准备工作;This year:春节的地点、有趣/特别的活动、制作的食物及其简单烹饪过程
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称,100词左右
[第二步:构思布局]
开头段:呼应来信,总起说明春节的重要性
主体段:简述去年春节前的准备工作;详细说明今年春节的地点、特色活动、制作的食物及烹饪过程
结尾段:总结感受,发出邀请,呼应书信格式
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:去年的准备活动 (Last year)
活动内容:cleaned our house, bought a lot of food with my parents
目的/效果:to get ready for it
要点二:今年的春节计划 (This year)
地点:at my grandparents’ home
有趣/特别的活动:watch the Spring Festival Gala, set off small fireworks
制作的食物:dumplings
烹饪过程:
准备馅料:mix meat and vegetables for the filling
包饺子:put filling into the wrappers and fold them carefully
烹饪:boil them until they are ready
(九)
【参考范文】
Dear Tony,
Glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you about my favorite festival.
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It comes on the first day of the lunar new year. Before the festival, we put up Spring Festival couplets. On New Year's Eve, we have a big family dinner. We also set off fireworks at night. During the festival, we visit relatives and get lucky money. It is really a great chance for us to stay with our family members. We always have a good time and take many happy photos together.
I love it because it's a time for family reunion and full of joy.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:最喜爱的节日(时间、节前/节中活动、喜爱原因)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:表达流畅,语法正确,贴合节日主题,无无关内容
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,回应对方来信,引出自己最喜爱的节日
主体段:详细介绍节日的时间、节前及节中各类活动,描述节日场景
结尾段:总结节日的意义,说明自己喜爱这个节日的原因
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:最喜爱的节日及时间
节日选择:the Spring Festival/Mid-Autumn Festival/Dragon Boat Festival等
时间描述:on the first day of the lunar new year/on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month/on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month等
要点二:节日相关活动
节前活动:put up Spring Festival couplets/clean the house/buy new clothes等
除夕活动:have a big family dinner/watch the Spring Festival Gala等
节中活动:set off fireworks/visit relatives/get lucky money/take photos等
要点三:喜爱节日的原因
核心原因:family reunion/full of joy/have a good time等
补充说明:a great chance to stay with family members/feel warm and happy/create happy memories等
(十)
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m really happy to hear that you’ll spend the winter vacation in Jiangxi.
I’m writing to invite you to our school’s Spring Festival Cultural Experience Day. It will be held in the school hall from 2:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on February 10th.
There will be many interesting activities. You can learn to write spring couplets and experience the beauty of Chinese characters. You’ll also have a chance to make dumplings by yourself. It must be great fun! What’s more, we’ll watch a dragon dance show together. It is a traditional way to celebrate the New Year.
I’m sure you’ll enjoy these activities and learn more about Chinese culture. Looking forward to your coming. Please write back soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(电子邮件)
明确要点:活动时间、活动地点、活动内容(学写春联、包饺子、看舞龙表演)、邀请并期待回复
确定人称:第一人称(I)和第二人称(you)
注意事项:不得出现真实信息,开头结尾已给出,注意邀请信的礼貌语气和邮件格式
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,表达高兴心情并引出邀请
主体段:详细介绍活动时间、地点和具体内容
结尾段:表达期待和请求回复
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:活动基本信息
活动名称:Spring Festival Cultural Experience Day/Chinese New Year Culture Day等
活动时间:from 2:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on February 10th/on the afternoon of February 10th等
活动地点:in the school hall/at our school hall/in the meeting room等
要点二:活动内容一(学写春联)
活动描述:learn to write spring couplets/try writing spring couplets等
意义说明:experience the beauty of Chinese characters/learn about Chinese calligraphy等
要点三:活动内容二(包饺子)
活动描述:make dumplings by yourself/learn to make dumplings/try making dumplings等
感受表达:great fun/interesting/exciting/a good chance to learn等
要点四:活动内容三(看舞龙表演)
活动描述:watch a dragon dance together/enjoy a dragon dance show等
文化意义:a traditional way to celebrate the New Year/show traditional Chinese culture等
要点五:邀请与期待
邀请表达:I’m sure you’ll enjoy/I hope you can come/you will have a good time等
期待回复:Looking forward to your coming/Please write back soon/Hope to see you soon等
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$Unit 2 Festivals and holidays单元同步写作讲义
本单元主题属于 “人与社会” 范畴,聚焦中外传统节日与假期文化。
单元核心目标:学会介绍各类节日、节假日活动、节日习俗、个人过节经历,了解中西方节日文化差异,能用英语描述节日时间、特色食物、传统活动、节日意义,学会分享自己的假期安排与过节感受,培养文化理解与跨文化交际表达能力。
词汇积累
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1.festival 节日
2.holiday 假期
3.traditional 传统的
4.tradition 传统
5.celebrate v. 庆祝
6.celebration n. 庆典
7.lunar calendar 农历
8.Spring Festival 春节
9.Mid-Autumn Festival 中秋节
10.Dragon Boat Festival 端午节
11.Christmas 圣诞节
12.Halloween 万圣节
13.dumpling n. 饺子
14.moon cake 月饼
15.zongzi 粽子
16.get together 团聚
17.have a big dinner 吃大餐
18.set off fireworks 放烟花
19.watch the moon 赏月
20.visit relatives 走亲访友
21.take a trip 旅行
22.special adj. 特别的
23.meaningful 有意义的
24.during the holiday 在假期期间
25.wear masks 戴面具
26.exchange gifts 交换礼物
27.lucky money 压岁钱
28.family reunion 阖家团圆
句式积累
开头句:
1. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival.
我最喜欢的节日是春节。
2. There are many great festivals in China. Today I want to talk about the Mid-Autumn Festival.
中国有很多美好的节日,今天我想介绍中秋节。
3. My favourite holiday is the winter holiday. Let me tell you how I spend it.
我最喜欢的假期是寒假,我来跟你说说我的过节方式。
中间句:
1. We eat moon cakes and watch the bright moon with our family at night.
晚上我们和家人一起吃月饼、赏月。
2. The Dragon Boat Festival comes on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month.
端午节在农历五月初五。
3. On Christmas, families get together and exchange nice gifts.
圣诞节时,家人们团聚在一起交换精美礼物。
4. During the holiday, I usually go to travel with my parents.
假期里,我通常和父母一起出去旅行。
结尾句:
1. This festival always brings me warmth and happiness.
这个节日总能带给我温暖与快乐。
2. I love this festival because it lets us stay with our family.
我喜爱这个节日,因为它让我们能陪伴家人。
3. It’s a meaningful holiday for every Chinese person.
对每个中国人来说,这都是一个有意义的假期。
佳句仿写
1. 教材原句:My favourite sport is tennis.
仿写:我最喜欢的节日是中秋节。
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2. 教材原句:We have a big dinner on New Year’s Eve.
仿写:我们中秋晚上一起赏月吃月饼。
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3. 教材原句:This activity makes me very happy.
仿写:和家人团聚让我感到温暖。
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典例
假如你是 Li Hua,请根据提示,写一篇短文介绍中国的春节,词数 60–80 词。
提示要点:
1. 时间:农历新年,中国最重要的节日
2. 活动:全家团聚、吃年夜饭、放烟花、收压岁钱
3. 你的感受:喜爱春节,享受和家人在一起的时光
开头已给出,不计入总词数:
My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival.
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审题
①题材:节日介绍类说明文
②人称、时态:第一人称 + 第三人称;介绍习俗用一般现在时
③注意:覆盖全部提示要点,可适当补充细节,语句通顺,区分中西节日词汇,注意节日专有名词大写。
谋篇布局
开头
点明春节是中国最重要、我最喜欢的传统节日
中间
介绍春节时间、全家年夜饭、放烟花、收压岁钱等传统活动
结尾
表达自己对春节的喜爱,说明节日的意义
佳作展示
My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. It’s the most important festival in China and it comes on the first day of the lunar year. Before the festival, my family always get together and have a big delicious dinner. We set off fireworks after dinner. Kids can get lucky money from grandparents. I always have great fun during the festival.I love the Spring Festival because it gives us a chance to stay with all our family members.
佳作赏析
亮点词汇:
①lunar year 农历新年
②get together 团聚
③set off fireworks 放烟花
④ lucky money 压岁钱
高分句型:
① It’s the most important festival in China and it comes on the first day of the lunar year.(并列句,介绍节日时间与地位)
② I love the Spring Festival because it gives us a chance to stay with all our family members.(because 引导原因状语从句,升华节日意义)
(一)
(26-27八上·全国·单元测试)
请以My Favorite Festival为题,写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的节日。
提示:
1. 你最喜欢的节日是什么,它在什么时候;
2. 人们通常怎样庆祝这个节日;
3. 你为什么喜欢这个节日。
要求:60-80词,语句通顺,语法正确,适当使用状语,如时间状语、地点状语、方式状语等。
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(二)
(26-27八上·全国·课后作业)
假如你是李华,请你以“A Special New Year Celebration”为题,写一篇短文,介绍世界上一个特别的新年庆祝活动。
要求:
1. 包含该节日的国家、时间、习俗;
2. 表达你对这个节日的看法;
3. 词数80左右,语句通顺,语法正确。
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(三)
(26-27八上·全国·课后作业)
假如你是李华,请你给你的外国朋友Jenny写一封邮件,介绍中国的中秋节。
要求:
1. 包含中秋节的时间、别称、历史、习俗;
2. 表达你对中秋节的喜爱;
3. 词数80左右,语句通顺,语法正确。
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(四)
(26-27八上·全国·课后作业)
假如你是李华,请你以“My Favourite Festival”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的节日 (春节/端午节二选一)。
要求:
1.包含节日的时间、起源/传说、习俗;
2.表达你对这个节日的喜爱;
3.词数80左右,语句通顺,语法正确。
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(五)
(26-27八上·全国·单元测试)
以My Favorite Celebration为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
要点:
1. 你最喜欢的庆祝活动/节日是什么;
2. 你通常如何庆祝(和谁一起、做什么、吃什么);
3. 喜欢它的原因。
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(六)
(25-26八上·河北保定·期中)
你的学校组织了一份关于中国传统文化的问卷调查,请你根据调查结果写一份英语报告。Survey Results on Traditional Chinese Festivals
The Spring Festival
The Mid-Auturnn Festival
Other festivals
(Dragon Boat Festival,…)
Favourite festival
55%
30%
15%
Reasons
big dinners, lucky money
family reunions, mooncakes
special dishes
Activities
hang red lanterns, watch the Spring Festival Gala (晚会)…
share stories, enjoy the full moon...
watch dragon boat races. make zongzi...
注意:
1. 短文须包含以上信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Our school did a survey about traditional Chinese festivals. Here are the results.
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These festivals are important parts of our culture and bring people together.
(七)
(26-27八上·全国·课后作业)
题目:My Favourite Festival
请从本课学到的节日(重阳节、圣诞节、胡里节、番茄节)中选择一个你最喜欢的,或者选择一个你熟悉的中国传统节日,写一篇短文。内容应包括:
1. 节日名称和日期
2. 人们做什么活动
3. 吃什么传统食物(如果有)
4. 你为什么喜欢这个节日
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(八)
(25-26八上·江西赣州·期末)
假如你是 Li Ming,你的笔友Tom对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣,他想了解你和家人过春节的情况。请根据表格内容给Tom写一封回信。
Last year
What things did you do before the Spring Festival to prepare for it?
This year
Where are you going to spend the Spring Festival ?
What interesting or special things are you going to do?
What food are you going to make? Introduce the cooking process simply.
要求:
1.词数:100词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不出现本人的真实姓名和所在学校的名称;
3.要求要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.
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Welcome to China to enjoy the happiness of the Spring Festival!
Yours
Li Ming
(九)
(25-26八上·河南周口·期末)
假设你是李雷,你的美国笔友Tony发来邮件,询问你最喜欢的节日。请你根据以下提示,给他回一封邮件。提示:
你最喜欢的节日是春节;
节日的时间:农历正月初一;
节日的活动:贴春联、吃年夜饭、放烟花、拜年、收压岁钱【lucky money】;
你喜欢这个节日的原因:和家人团聚【reunite】,充满欢乐。
要求:
邮件内容须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确;
词数:80-100词左右;
开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
Glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you about my favorite festival.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Lei
(十)
(25-26八上·江西吉安·期末)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter寒假要来江西,你计划邀请他参加你校的“中国传统节日——春节文化体验日”活动,请根据以下要点写一封100词左右的邮件:
要点如下:
1. 活动时间:2月10日下午2:00-5:00
2. 活动地点:学校礼堂
3. 活动内容:学写春联、包饺子、看舞龙表演
4. 邀请他参加并期待回复
要求:
·词数100左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
·要点齐全,可适当发挥;
·语言通顺,语法正确,书写工整。
词汇提示:春节文化体验日—Spring Festival Cultural Experience Day,春联—spring couplet,舞龙表演—dragon dance show
Dear Peter,
I’m really happy to hear that you’ll spend the winter vacation in Jiangxi.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
$Unit 2 Festivals and holidays 单元同步写作讲义
本单元主题属于 “人与社会” 范畴,聚焦中外传统节日与假期文化。
单元核心目标:学会介绍各类节日、节假日活动、节日习俗、个人过节经历,了解中西方节日文化差异,能用英语描述节日时间、特色食物、传统活动、节日意义,学会分享自己的假期安排与过节感受,培养文化理解与跨文化交际表达能力。
词汇积累
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1.festival 节日
2.holiday 假期
3.traditional 传统的
4.tradition 传统
5.celebrate v. 庆祝
6.celebration n. 庆典
7.lunar calendar 农历
8.Spring Festival 春节
9.Mid-Autumn Festival 中秋节
10.Dragon Boat Festival 端午节
11.Christmas 圣诞节
12.Halloween 万圣节
13.dumpling n. 饺子
14.moon cake 月饼
15.zongzi 粽子
16.get together 团聚
17.have a big dinner 吃大餐
18.set off fireworks 放烟花
19.watch the moon 赏月
20.visit relatives 走亲访友
21.take a trip 旅行
22.special adj. 特别的
23.meaningful 有意义的
24.during the holiday 在假期期间
25.wear masks 戴面具
26.exchange gifts 交换礼物
27.lucky money 压岁钱
28.family reunion 阖家团圆
句式积累
开头句:
1. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival.
我最喜欢的节日是春节。
2. There are many great festivals in China. Today I want to talk about the Mid-Autumn Festival.
中国有很多美好的节日,今天我想介绍中秋节。
3. My favourite holiday is the winter holiday. Let me tell you how I spend it.
我最喜欢的假期是寒假,我来跟你说说我的过节方式。
中间句:
1. We eat moon cakes and watch the bright moon with our family at night.
晚上我们和家人一起吃月饼、赏月。
2. The Dragon Boat Festival comes on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month.
端午节在农历五月初五。
3. On Christmas, families get together and exchange nice gifts.
圣诞节时,家人们团聚在一起交换精美礼物。
4. During the holiday, I usually go to travel with my parents.
假期里,我通常和父母一起出去旅行。
结尾句:
1. This festival always brings me warmth and happiness.
这个节日总能带给我温暖与快乐。
2. I love this festival because it lets us stay with our family.
我喜爱这个节日,因为它让我们能陪伴家人。
3. It’s a meaningful holiday for every Chinese person.
对每个中国人来说,这都是一个有意义的假期。
佳句仿写
1. 教材原句:My favourite sport is tennis.
仿写:我最喜欢的节日是中秋节。
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2. 教材原句:We have a big dinner on New Year’s Eve.
仿写:我们中秋晚上一起赏月吃月饼。
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3. 教材原句:This activity makes me very happy.
仿写:和家人团聚让我感到温暖。
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【答案】
1. My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival.
2. We watch the moon and eat moon cakes on Mid-Autumn night.
3. Getting together with my family makes me feel warm.
典例
假如你是 Li Hua,请根据提示,写一篇短文介绍中国的春节,词数 60–80 词。
提示要点:
1. 时间:农历新年,中国最重要的节日
2. 活动:全家团聚、吃年夜饭、放烟花、收压岁钱
3. 你的感受:喜爱春节,享受和家人在一起的时光
开头已给出,不计入总词数:
My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival.
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审题
①题材:节日介绍类说明文
②人称、时态:第一人称 + 第三人称;介绍习俗用一般现在时
③注意:覆盖全部提示要点,可适当补充细节,语句通顺,区分中西节日词汇,注意节日专有名词大写。
谋篇布局
开头
点明春节是中国最重要、我最喜欢的传统节日
中间
介绍春节时间、全家年夜饭、放烟花、收压岁钱等传统活动
结尾
表达自己对春节的喜爱,说明节日的意义
佳作展示
My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. It’s the most important festival in China and it comes on the first day of the lunar year. Before the festival, my family always get together and have a big delicious dinner. We set off fireworks after dinner. Kids can get lucky money from grandparents. I always have great fun during the festival.I love the Spring Festival because it gives us a chance to stay with all our family members.
佳作赏析
亮点词汇:
①lunar year 农历新年
②get together 团聚
③set off fireworks 放烟花
④ lucky money 压岁钱
高分句型:
① It’s the most important festival in China and it comes on the first day of the lunar year.(并列句,介绍节日时间与地位)
② I love the Spring Festival because it gives us a chance to stay with all our family members.(because 引导原因状语从句,升华节日意义)
(一)
(26-27八上·全国·单元测试)
请以My Favorite Festival为题,写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的节日。
提示:
1. 你最喜欢的节日是什么,它在什么时候;
2. 人们通常怎样庆祝这个节日;
3. 你为什么喜欢这个节日。
要求:60-80词,语句通顺,语法正确,适当使用状语,如时间状语、地点状语、方式状语等。
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【参考范文】
My Favorite Festival
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It usually falls in January or February.
Before the festival, my family always cleans the house carefully. On New Year’s Eve, we have a big dinner together and watch the Spring Festival Gala happily. During the festival, we visit our relatives and friends. Children can get lucky money from elders.
I like it best because it’s a time for family reunion. No matter where we’re, we always return home to celebrate it.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:事物介绍类说明文,全文以一般现在时为主
明确要点:点明最喜欢的节日+节日时间;详细介绍人们的庆祝方式;说明喜爱该节日的原因,突出团圆内涵
确定人称:第一人称(my/we)
注意事项:控制词数,不得透露真实信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开门见山,点明最喜欢的节日以及它到来的时间,使用时间状语
主体段:按照时间顺序分层描写节前、除夕夜、节日里的各类庆祝活动,加入地点、方式状语丰富句式
结尾段:阐述自己喜爱春节的核心理由,升华家庭团圆的主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:点明节日名称与时间
节日与时间:the Spring Festival/falls in January or February/usually comes in January or February every year/as the most important traditional festival in China/always takes place in the first two months of the lunar year等
要点二:分层介绍节日庆祝活动
节日活动:cleans the house carefully/have a big dinner together/watch the Spring Festival Gala happily/visit our relatives and friends/get lucky money from elders/every member of my family thoroughly cleans our house to sweep away bad luck/enjoy a rich family feast and watch the Spring Festival Gala with big smiles on our faces/to send our warm New Year greetings/receive red envelopes filled with lucky money as best wishes from the elder family members等
要点三:说明喜欢这个节日的原因
原因:a time for family reunion/No matter where we are, we always return home to celebrate it/stands for/the most precious thing to me/gives us a precious chance to stay with our whole family and share happy moments without busy work or study等
(二)
(26-27八上·全国·课后作业)
假如你是李华,请你以“A Special New Year Celebration”为题,写一篇短文,介绍世界上一个特别的新年庆祝活动。
要求:
1. 包含该节日的国家、时间、习俗;
2. 表达你对这个节日的看法;
3. 词数80左右,语句通顺,语法正确。
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【参考范文】
A Special New Year Celebration
There are many special New Year celebrations around the world. My favourite one is the Spanish New Year celebration.
In Spain, people celebrate New Year’s Eve on December 31. When the clock strikes midnight, they eat 12 grapes. Each grape stands for a month of the year. Eating 12 grapes is believed to bring good luck for the new year.
I think this celebration is very interesting and fun. It’s a wonderful way to warmly welcome the new year.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍一个特别的新年庆祝活动(包含国家、时间、习俗);表达对该节日的看法
确定人称:以第三人称和第一人称为主
注意事项:内容完整;语言自然流畅;词数控制在80词左右
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:点出世界上有许多新年庆祝活动,并引出最喜欢的西班牙新年庆祝(Spanish New Year celebration)
中间:介绍该节日的国家(Spain)、时间(New Year’s Eve on December 31)以及核心习俗(eat 12 grapes at midnight)
结尾:总结感受,表达对该节日的看法(interesting and fun)
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:节日基本信息与习俗
国家时间:Spain/New Year’s Eve on December 31等
核心行为:When the clock strikes midnight, they eat 12 grapes等
寓意效果:Each grape stands for a month/bring good luck for the new year等
要点二:个人的看法与评价
情感态度:interesting/fun/wonderful等
具体说明:It’s a wonderful way to warmly welcome the new year等
(三)
(26-27八上·全国·课后作业)
假如你是李华,请你给你的外国朋友Jenny写一封邮件,介绍中国的中秋节。
要求:
1. 包含中秋节的时间、别称、历史、习俗;
2. 表达你对中秋节的喜爱;
3. 词数80左右,语句通顺,语法正确。
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【参考范文】
Dear Jenny,
How are you? I’m writing to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. It is on the 15th day of the eighth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. We also call it the Moon Festival. It has a history of more than 2,000 years. At first, it was to celebrate the harvest. On this day, families get together, have a big dinner, eat delicious mooncakes and watch the full moon.
I love the Mid-Autumn Festival very much. It is a warm and happy festival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤:
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:这是一篇电子邮件,用一般现在时和一般过去时。
明确要点:需要介绍中秋节的基本信息(日期、别称、历史等)、节日起源、节日的象征意义以及节日的活动等,表达自己对中秋节的喜爱之情。
确定人称:使用第一人称和第二人称相结合,“I”用于表达自己的感受,“you”用于和对方交流。
注意事项:语言表达要流畅自然,符合书信的格式和语气;介绍内容要准确清晰,能让对方较好地了解中秋节。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:通过问候引出要介绍的内容,即向对方介绍中国的中秋节。
主体段:详细介绍中秋节的日期、别称、历史、起源、象征意义以及节日活动等。
结尾段:表达自己对中秋节的喜爱之情,总结这是一个温暖快乐的节日。
[第三步:要点展示]
要点一:中秋节的基本信息
基本信息:on the 15th day of the eighth month in the Chinese lunar calendar/the Moon Festival/a history of more than 2,000 years/celebrate the harvest等
习俗:get together, have a big dinner/eat delicious mooncakes and watch the full moon/tell the story of Chang’e/admire the full moon and eat mooncakes等
要点二:表达自己对中秋节的喜爱之情
a warm and happy festival/makes me feel the warmth of family等
(四)
(26-27八上·全国·课后作业)
假如你是李华,请你以“My Favourite Festival”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的节日 (春节/端午节二选一)。
要求:
1.包含节日的时间、起源/传说、习俗;
2.表达你对这个节日的喜爱;
3.词数80左右,语句通顺,语法正确。
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【参考范文】
My Favourite Festival — The Spring Festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is on the first day of the first lunar month.
There is a legend about Nian, a monster. People set off fireworks and hung red things to drive Nian away. Now people have many customs: they clean homes, make dumplings, give lucky money to children, and watch dragon dances.
It is a time for family reunion. I love the Spring Festival because I can stay with my family and have a great time.
【详解】写作步骤
【第一步:审题立意】
确定文体:介绍类英语短文,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:二选一(春节/端午节),包含节日时间、起源/传说、传统习俗,表达喜爱之情,词数80词左右
确定人称:第一人称李华
注意事项:语句通顺,语法准确
【第二步:构思布局】
开头:点明自己最喜爱的节日,交代节日具体时间
主体:讲述节日相关传说,介绍当地特色民俗活动
结尾:抒发个人喜爱这个节日的原因
【第三步:要点展开】
要点一:时间
on the first day of the first lunar month/lunar calendar/lunar New Year/New Year’s Eve等
要点二:传说
about Nian, a monster/set off fireworks and hung red things to drive Nian away/traditional story/red paper等
要点三:习俗
clean houses/make dumplings/give lucky money to children/watch dragon dances/have a big dinner/watch the Spring Festival Gala /set off fireworks/paste Spring Festival couplets等
要点四:喜爱原因
family reunion/stay with my family and have a great time/get together/happy atmosphere/relaxing等
(五)
(26-27八上·全国·单元测试)
以My Favorite Celebration为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
要点:
1. 你最喜欢的庆祝活动/节日是什么;
2. 你通常如何庆祝(和谁一起、做什么、吃什么);
3. 喜欢它的原因。
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【参考范文】
My Favorite Celebration
My favorite celebration is the Spring Festival. It is the most important festival in China.
I always celebrate it with my family. Before the festival, we clean our house and buy new clothes. On New Year’s Eve, we have a big family dinner and eat dumplings. During the festival, we visit relatives and friends. I can get red envelopes from my grandparents.
I love the Spring Festival because it brings my family together and makes me feel happy and warm.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍最喜欢的庆祝活动/节日是什么,如何庆祝以及写明喜欢的原因,三要点必须完整覆盖
确定人称:第一人称
注意事项:文中不得出现个人真实姓名、学校等信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,简单介绍自己最喜欢的节日
主体段:介绍庆祝节日做的具体活动,节日前的准备以及节日期间的活动等等
结尾段:总结感受,表达喜欢的原因
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:最喜欢的庆祝活动/节日
庆祝活动/节日选择:Spring Festival/Mid-Autumn Festival/Dragon Boat Festival等
要点二:过节的具体行为
节日前准备:clean our houses/buy new clothes/decorate the house等
节日期间具体活动:have a big family dinner/eat dumplings/visit relatives and friends/get red envelope/buy lots of delicious food/watch the Spring Festival Gala等
要点三:喜欢的原因
原因:bring family together/make me feel happy and warm/chat and share interesting stories等
(六)
(25-26八上·河北保定·期中)
你的学校组织了一份关于中国传统文化的问卷调查,请你根据调查结果写一份英语报告。Survey Results on Traditional Chinese Festivals
The Spring Festival
The Mid-Auturnn Festival
Other festivals
(Dragon Boat Festival,…)
Favourite festival
55%
30%
15%
Reasons
big dinners, lucky money
family reunions, mooncakes
special dishes
Activities
hang red lanterns, watch the Spring Festival Gala (晚会)…
share stories, enjoy the full moon...
watch dragon boat races. make zongzi...
注意:
1. 短文须包含以上信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Our school did a survey about traditional Chinese festivals. Here are the results.
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These festivals are important parts of our culture and bring people together.
【参考范文】
Our school did a survey about traditional Chinese festivals. Here are the results.
The Spring Festival is the most popular, chosen by over half (55%) of students. People love it for the big family dinners and lucky money. Popular activities include hanging red lanterns and watching the Spring Festival Gala. We always meet our relatives on the first day of the Spring Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival comes second (30%). Families enjoy reunions, eating mooncakes, sharing stories, and admiring the full moon.
Other festivals like the Dragon Boat Festival make up 15%. People watch dragon boat races and make zongzi during these times.
These festivals are important parts of our culture and bring people together.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:英语应用文,整体以一般现在时陈述客观调查结果为主;
明确要点:涵盖表格中不同传统节日的受欢迎占比、喜爱原因、对应庆祝活动,可适当发挥;
确定人称:第三人称为主(介绍调查数据结果);
注意事项:文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名,正文词数要求80词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
[第二步:构思布局]
采用三段式结构
开头段:题目已给出,引出本次中国传统节日调查的主题;
主体段:按照占比从高到低依次介绍不同节日的调查结果,清晰说明占比、喜爱原因、常见活动;
结尾段:题目已给出,总结中国传统节日的文化价值。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:春节的调查结果
The Spring Festival is the most popular, chosen by over half (55%) of students/55% of the students like the Spring Festival best/the big family dinners and lucky money/activities include hanging red lanterns and watching the Spring Festival Gala/People usually hang red lanterns and watch the Spring Festival Gala to celebrate it/more than half of the students/receive lucky money from elders/put up Spring Festival couplets/ set off fireworks/..
要点二:中秋节的调查结果
The Mid-Autumn Festival comes second (30%)/Families enjoy reunions, eating mooncakes, sharing stories, and admiring the full moon/30% of the students rank the Mid-Autumn Festival as their favorite/They enjoy family reunion and taste sweet mooncakes on that day/Common activities include enjoying the full moon and sharing traditional stories/one third of the surveyed students/get together with family members/admire the full moon/...
要点三:其他传统节日的调查结果
Other festivals like the Dragon Boat Festival make up 15%/People watch dragon boat races and make zongzi during these times/The rest 15% prefer other festivals like the Dragon Boat Festival/They love these festivals for special traditional dishes and interesting activities/commemorate Qu Yuan/...
(七)
(26-27八上·全国·课后作业)
题目:My Favourite Festival
请从本课学到的节日(重阳节、圣诞节、胡里节、番茄节)中选择一个你最喜欢的,或者选择一个你熟悉的中国传统节日,写一篇短文。内容应包括:
1. 节日名称和日期
2. 人们做什么活动
3. 吃什么传统食物(如果有)
4. 你为什么喜欢这个节日
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【参考范文】
My Favourite Festival
My favourite festival is the Double Ninth Festival. It falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month. On this day, people show respect and love for the elderly. They climb mountains, enjoy Chongyang cakes, and spend time with family. I like this festival because it teaches us to care for older people. My grandparents live with us, and I always help them on that day. It makes me feel happy and proud.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:节日名称和日期、人们做什么活动、吃什么传统食物、喜欢这个节日的原因
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)和第三人称(people/they)
注意事项:从重阳节、圣诞节、胡里节、番茄节中选择一个,或选择一个熟悉的中国传统节日
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:点明最喜欢的节日名称和日期
主体段:描述节日活动(登山、吃重阳糕、陪伴家人)和传统食物
结尾段:说明喜欢的原因(学会关爱老人)并表达感受
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:节日名称和日期
节日名称:the Double Ninth Festival/the Spring Festival/the Mid-Autumn Festival/the Dragon Boat Festival/Christmas/Holi/Tomato Festival等
日期表达:falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month/comes in January or February/on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month/on December 25th等
要点二:节日活动
活动内容:show respect and love for the elderly/climb mountains/spend time with family/clean houses/get together/have a big dinner/watch lanterns/dragon boat races/throw colorful powder等
要点三:传统食物
食物名称:Chongyang cakes/dumplings/mooncakes/zongzi/rice dumplings/turkey等
要点四:喜欢的原因
原因表达:teaches us to care for older people/can spend time with family/enjoy delicious food/fun and exciting/learn about traditions等
感受表达:makes me feel happy and proud/feel warm and happy/feel excited/full of joy等
(八)
(25-26八上·江西赣州·期末)
假如你是 Li Ming,你的笔友Tom对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣,他想了解你和家人过春节的情况。请根据表格内容给Tom写一封回信。
Last year
What things did you do before the Spring Festival to prepare for it?
This year
Where are you going to spend the Spring Festival ?
What interesting or special things are you going to do?
What food are you going to make? Introduce the cooking process simply.
要求:
1.词数:100词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不出现本人的真实姓名和所在学校的名称;
3.要求要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.
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Welcome to China to enjoy the happiness of the Spring Festival!
Yours
Li Ming
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.
Last year, I cleaned our house and bought a lot of food with my parents to get ready for it. This year, we are going to spend it at my grandparents’ home. We are going to watch the Spring Festival Gala and set off small fireworks, which are really fun.
We are going to make dumplings together. First, we mix meat and vegetables for the filling. Then, we put filling into the wrappers and fold them carefully. Finally, we boil them until they are ready.
I’m sure we will have a great time.
Welcome to China to enjoy the happiness of the Spring Festival!
Yours
Li Ming
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(书信),以回信形式介绍节日经历与计划,一般过去时(介绍去年准备活动),一般将来时(介绍今年计划),一般现在时(介绍制作步骤)
明确人称:第一人称(I, my, we)
核心要点:Last year:春节前的准备工作;This year:春节的地点、有趣/特别的活动、制作的食物及其简单烹饪过程
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称,100词左右
[第二步:构思布局]
开头段:呼应来信,总起说明春节的重要性
主体段:简述去年春节前的准备工作;详细说明今年春节的地点、特色活动、制作的食物及烹饪过程
结尾段:总结感受,发出邀请,呼应书信格式
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:去年的准备活动 (Last year)
活动内容:cleaned our house, bought a lot of food with my parents
目的/效果:to get ready for it
要点二:今年的春节计划 (This year)
地点:at my grandparents’ home
有趣/特别的活动:watch the Spring Festival Gala, set off small fireworks
制作的食物:dumplings
烹饪过程:
准备馅料:mix meat and vegetables for the filling
包饺子:put filling into the wrappers and fold them carefully
烹饪:boil them until they are ready
(九)
(25-26八上·河南周口·期末)
假设你是李雷,你的美国笔友Tony发来邮件,询问你最喜欢的节日。请你根据以下提示,给他回一封邮件。提示:
你最喜欢的节日是春节;
节日的时间:农历正月初一;
节日的活动:贴春联、吃年夜饭、放烟花、拜年、收压岁钱【lucky money】;
你喜欢这个节日的原因:和家人团聚【reunite】,充满欢乐。
要求:
邮件内容须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确;
词数:80-100词左右;
开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
Glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you about my favorite festival.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Lei
【参考范文】
Dear Tony,
Glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you about my favorite festival.
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It comes on the first day of the lunar new year. Before the festival, we put up Spring Festival couplets. On New Year's Eve, we have a big family dinner. We also set off fireworks at night. During the festival, we visit relatives and get lucky money. It is really a great chance for us to stay with our family members. We always have a good time and take many happy photos together.
I love it because it's a time for family reunion and full of joy.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:最喜爱的节日(时间、节前/节中活动、喜爱原因)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:表达流畅,语法正确,贴合节日主题,无无关内容
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,回应对方来信,引出自己最喜爱的节日
主体段:详细介绍节日的时间、节前及节中各类活动,描述节日场景
结尾段:总结节日的意义,说明自己喜爱这个节日的原因
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:最喜爱的节日及时间
节日选择:the Spring Festival/Mid-Autumn Festival/Dragon Boat Festival等
时间描述:on the first day of the lunar new year/on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month/on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month等
要点二:节日相关活动
节前活动:put up Spring Festival couplets/clean the house/buy new clothes等
除夕活动:have a big family dinner/watch the Spring Festival Gala等
节中活动:set off fireworks/visit relatives/get lucky money/take photos等
要点三:喜爱节日的原因
核心原因:family reunion/full of joy/have a good time等
补充说明:a great chance to stay with family members/feel warm and happy/create happy memories等
(十)
(25-26八上·江西吉安·期末)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter寒假要来江西,你计划邀请他参加你校的“中国传统节日——春节文化体验日”活动,请根据以下要点写一封100词左右的邮件:
要点如下:
1. 活动时间:2月10日下午2:00-5:00
2. 活动地点:学校礼堂
3. 活动内容:学写春联、包饺子、看舞龙表演
4. 邀请他参加并期待回复
要求:
·词数100左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
·要点齐全,可适当发挥;
·语言通顺,语法正确,书写工整。
词汇提示:春节文化体验日—Spring Festival Cultural Experience Day,春联—spring couplet,舞龙表演—dragon dance show
Dear Peter,
I’m really happy to hear that you’ll spend the winter vacation in Jiangxi.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m really happy to hear that you’ll spend the winter vacation in Jiangxi.
I’m writing to invite you to our school’s Spring Festival Cultural Experience Day. It will be held in the school hall from 2:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on February 10th.
There will be many interesting activities. You can learn to write spring couplets and experience the beauty of Chinese characters. You’ll also have a chance to make dumplings by yourself. It must be great fun! What’s more, we’ll watch a dragon dance show together. It is a traditional way to celebrate the New Year.
I’m sure you’ll enjoy these activities and learn more about Chinese culture. Looking forward to your coming. Please write back soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(电子邮件)
明确要点:活动时间、活动地点、活动内容(学写春联、包饺子、看舞龙表演)、邀请并期待回复
确定人称:第一人称(I)和第二人称(you)
注意事项:不得出现真实信息,开头结尾已给出,注意邀请信的礼貌语气和邮件格式
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,表达高兴心情并引出邀请
主体段:详细介绍活动时间、地点和具体内容
结尾段:表达期待和请求回复
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:活动基本信息
活动名称:Spring Festival Cultural Experience Day/Chinese New Year Culture Day等
活动时间:from 2:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on February 10th/on the afternoon of February 10th等
活动地点:in the school hall/at our school hall/in the meeting room等
要点二:活动内容一(学写春联)
活动描述:learn to write spring couplets/try writing spring couplets等
意义说明:experience the beauty of Chinese characters/learn about Chinese calligraphy等
要点三:活动内容二(包饺子)
活动描述:make dumplings by yourself/learn to make dumplings/try making dumplings等
感受表达:great fun/interesting/exciting/a good chance to learn等
要点四:活动内容三(看舞龙表演)
活动描述:watch a dragon dance together/enjoy a dragon dance show等
文化意义:a traditional way to celebrate the New Year/show traditional Chinese culture等
要点五:邀请与期待
邀请表达:I’m sure you’ll enjoy/I hope you can come/you will have a good time等
期待回复:Looking forward to your coming/Please write back soon/Hope to see you soon等
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