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高考英语应用文二轮复习之人际交往主题
Writing 1求助信(班级 "结对互助" 活动策划)
【试题创新】
假定你是红星中学高三(1)班班长李华,班级计划开展"结对互助"(Peer Tutoring Program)活动,帮助学习有困难的同学。你想请有相关组织经验的好友王明提供建议。请你用英文给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)介绍活动目的;
(2)请求具体建议;
(3)约定见面时间。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:结对互助 peer tutoring
【经典范文】
Dear Wang Ming,
I am writing to seek your advice on a peer-tutoring program our class plans to launch next month.Aimed at helping classmates who struggle with their studies, the program will pair top students with those in need.
As you have organized similar activities before, I would greatly appreciate it if you could share some practical suggestions, especially on how to match pairs effectively and monitor progress.Could we meet this Saturday afternoon to discuss the details? Please let me know what time suits you best.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、书面表达解析
本篇书面表达要求考生以班长李华的身份向好友求助,策划班级"结对互助"活动,要写出活动目的说明、请求建议的礼貌表达、时间约定。
二、写作思路
1.首段开门见山说明写信目的——就 "结对互助" 活动征求建议
仿写句式:I am writing to seek your advice on.../ I am writing to ask for your help with...
2.主体段:
①简述活动目的和形式;
②具体说明需要哪方面建议;③提出见面请求
仿写句式:Aimed at..., the program will...
I would greatly appreciate it if you could...
Could we meet...
3.结尾:表达期待回复
仿写句式:Looking forward to your reply.
I would appreciate an early reply.
三、范文精讲
1.高级替换
plans to launch→intends to initiate
struggle with their studies→encounter academic difficulties
practical suggestions→feasible recommendations
match pairs effectively→pair participants optimally
2.简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to seek your advice on a peer-tutoring program our class plans to launch next month.
拓展:I am writing to seek your advice on a peer-tutoring program that our class plans to launch next month.
3.高级句型讲解
(1)Aimed at helping classmates who struggle with their studies, the program will pair top students with those in need.
语法点:过去分词短语作状语(Aimed at...)+定语从句(who struggle with...)。过去分词短语置于句首表目的,简洁有力;定语从句补充说明先行词 classmates。
(2)As you have organized similar activities before, I would greatly appreciate it if you could share some practical suggestions, especially on how to match pairs effectively and monitor progress.
语法点:as 引导原因状语从句+I would appreciate it if...固定句型(it 作形式宾语)+"疑问词+不定式" 结构(how to match...)作介词 on 的宾语。
四、范文背诵模板
I am writing to ______(征求建议)on a peer tutoring program our class plans to launch next month.Aimed at ______(活动目的), the program will pair top students with those in need.
As you ______(对方优势), I would greatly appreciate it if you could ______(具体请求).Could we meet ______(时间)to discuss the details? Please let me know what time suits you best.
Looking forward to your reply.
Writing 2 感谢信(同桌互助情谊)
【试题创新】
假定你是红星中学学生李华,上周因感冒请假一周,返校后发现同桌陈静不仅帮你整理了各科笔记,还主动为你讲解落下的知识点。请你用英文给她写一封感谢信,内容包括:
(1)表达感谢;
(2)说明帮助的具体内容;
(3)你的感受。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【经典范文】
Dear Chen Jing,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your generous help during my absence last week.Having caught a bad cold, I had to stay at home for a whole week, worrying that I would fall far behind my classmates.
Much to my relief, you not only took detailed notes for every subject but also spent your break time patiently explaining the key points to me as soon as I returned.Your kindness has made me feel truly blessed to have such a considerate deskmate.I hope I can return the favor someday.
Thank you again from the bottom of my heart.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、书面表达解析
本篇书面表达要求考生以红星中学学生李华的身份,给同桌陈静写一封感谢信。写作背景为考生上周因感冒请假一周,返校后得知同桌不仅帮忙整理了各科笔记,还耐心讲解遗漏的知识点。文章需包含三点核心内容:真诚向同桌表达感谢、具体说明同桌给予的帮助、阐述自己的内心感受。
二、写作思路
1.首段直接表达感谢,点明事由
仿写句式:I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for.../ I am writing to thank you for...
2.主体:
①简述自己请假的背景和担忧;
仿写句式:Having caught..., I had to...
②具体说明对方的帮助行为;
仿写句式:Much to my relief, you not only...but also...
③表达内心感受
仿写句式:Your kindness has made me feel...
3.结尾再次致谢,表达回报意愿
仿写句式:
Thank you again from the bottom of my heart./ I hope I can return the favor someday.
三、范文精讲
1.高级替换
sincere gratitude→profound appreciation
generous help→invaluable assistance
absence→temporary leave
fall far behind→lag considerably behind
patiently explaining→meticulously clarifying
return the favor→reciprocate your kindness
2.简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your generous help during my absence last week.
拓展句:I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the generous help that you offered me when I was absent last week.
3.高级句型讲解
(1)Having caught a bad cold, I had to stay at home for a whole week, worrying that I would fall far behind my classmates.
语法点:现在分词完成式作原因状语(Having caught...)+现在分词作伴随状语(worrying that...)+宾语从句。两个非谓语结构叠加,句子紧凑且层次丰富。
(2)Much to my relief, you not only took detailed notes for every subject but also spent your break time patiently explaining the key points to me as soon as I returned.
语法点:much to one's relief 作评注性状语+not only...but also...并列结构+as soon as 引导时间状语从句。
四、范文背诵模板
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for ______(感谢事由).Having ______(原因 / 背景), I had to ______(行为), worrying that ______(担忧).
Much to my relief, you not only ______(帮助 1)but also ______(帮助 2).Your kindness has made me feel truly blessed to have such a considerate deskmate.I hope I can return the favor someday.
Thank you again from the bottom of my heart.
Writing 3 倡议书(共建和谐邻里社区)
【试题创新】
假定你是红星中学学生会主席李华,你校所在社区将举办 "和谐邻里节"(Harmonious Neighborhood Festival)。请你代表学生会写一封英语倡议书,呼吁同学们积极参与社区志愿服务,内容包括:
(1)活动背景与目的;
(2)倡议内容(至少两项);
(3)发出号召。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:倡议书 call to action
【经典范文】
Dear fellow students,
Our community will hold a "Harmonious Neighborhood Festival" next weekend, aiming to strengthen bonds among residents and create a warmer living environment.
On behalf of the Student Union, I call on everyone to take an active part in volunteer activities.First, we can visit elderly neighbors living alone, chatting with them and helping with housework.Second, we can organize a book-sharing corner in the community garden, encouraging children to exchange books and make new friends.
Small actions can make a big difference.Let's join hands to build a more harmonious community!
The Student Union
一、书面表达解析
本篇书面表达要求考生以红星中学学生会主席李华的身份,代表学生会写一封英文倡议书,号召同学们参加社区 “和谐邻里节” 志愿服务。内容需包括活动背景与目的、至少两项倡议内容以及发出号召。
二、写作思路
1.首段介绍活动背景与目的
仿写句式:Our community will hold..., aiming to.../ Aimed at..., our community will launch...
2.主体部分以学生会名义发出倡议,分点说明具体活动内容
仿写句式:On behalf of..., I call on everyone to...
3.结尾:用号召性语言结尾,呼吁共同参与
仿写句式:Small actions can make a big difference.
Let's join hands to...!
三、范文精讲
1.高级替换
hold→stage
strengthen bonds→foster closer ties
warmer living environment→more congenial living atmosphere
chatting with them→engaging them in conversation
join hands→unite our efforts
2.同义句转换
原句:On behalf of the Student Union, I call on everyone to take an active part in volunteer activities.
拓展句:Representing the Student Union, I call on everyone to take an active part in volunteer activities.
3.高级句型讲解
(1)Our community will hold a "Harmonious Neighborhood Festival" next weekend, aiming to strengthen bonds among residents and create a warmer living environment.
语法点:现在分词短语作目的状语(aiming to...),两个并列不定式(to strengthen...and create...)作介词宾语。
(2)First, we can visit elderly neighbors living alone, chatting with them and helping with housework.
语法点:现在分词作后置定语(living alone)修饰 neighbors+现在分词短语作伴随状语(chatting with...and helping with...)。一句中三处非谓语,体现句式多样性。
四、范文背诵模板
Our community will hold a "Harmonious Neighborhood Festival" next weekend, aiming to ______(活动目的).
On behalf of the Student Union, I call on everyone to take an active part in volunteer activities.First, we can ______(倡议 1).Second, we can ______(倡议 2).
Small actions can make a big difference.Let's join hands to build a more harmonious community!
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