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高考英语二轮应用文复习之劳动吃苦主题
Writing 1 招募启事(菜园认领活动)
【试题创新】
植物园联合你校园艺社团推出菜园认领实践活动,学生可自由组队认领菜地开展耕种劳作。请为学校双语公众号撰写一篇英文招募启事,内容包括:
(1)招募对象;
(2)活动内容;
(3)报名时间与方式。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右;
(2)按启事格式作答。
参考词汇:植物园 the Botanical Garden
【经典范文】
Gardeners Wanted
Attention, all nature-loving students! We’re delighted to call on students of all grades to form teams and claim a piece of farmland in the Botanical Garden.
Participants will get a chance to grow various vegetables, cooperating to tend plants and gather harvests under professional guidance. It serves as a precious opportunity to get close to nature and taste the fruits of hard labor.
If you want to join this labor-filled journey, please follow our official public account and hand in your application form no later than next Friday. Let’s roll up our sleeves and start our planting adventure!
一、书面表达解析
本篇要求撰写公众号英文招募启事,交代招募对象、劳动实践内容以及报名渠道截止时间。行文要具备启事的号召力,突出劳动实践价值,体现吃苦精神与劳动意识,语言简洁有感染力。
二、写作思路
1. 启事开头:启事标题,发出号召,邀请各年级学生组队参与活动。
仿写句式:We’re delighted to call on students of all grades to form teams and claim…
2. 主体部分:介绍活动劳作内容,说明活动带来的劳动收获;说明报名途径与截止时间。
仿写句式:It serves as a precious opportunity to …
3. 结尾:简短呼吁,号召大家行动参与。
三、范文精讲
1.高级替换(以范文词汇为蓝本)
邀请:invite→call on
培养/照料:nurture→tend
收获:harvest→gather harvests
极好的:excellent→precious
2. 同义句转换
原句:If you want to join this labor-filled journey, please follow our official public account and hand in your application form no later than next Friday.
拓展句:Those who intend to take part in this labor-filled journey are supposed to follow our official public account and submit the application form by next Friday.(who引导定语从句改写)
3. 高级句型讲解
(1)Participants will get a chance to grow various vegetables, cooperating to tend plants and gather harvests under professional guidance.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
(2)It serves as a precious opportunity to get close to nature, taste the fruits of hard labor and master practical gardening skills.(运用了不定式作后置定语,多个并列不定式)
四、范文背诵模板
Attention, all ________! We’re delighted to call on students of all grades to form teams and claim ________.
Participants will get a chance to ________, cooperating to ________ under ________. It serves as a precious opportunity to ________, ________ and ________.
If you want to join this ________ journey, please ________ and ________ no later than ________. Let’s roll up our sleeves and start our adventure!
Writing 2 邀请信(参加劳动体验课)
【试题创新】
假定你是李华,本学期学校新开设劳动体验课程。请写一封邮件邀请你的外国留学生朋友Allen一起来参与体验,内容包括:
(1)课程主要内容;
(2)发出邀请。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,保证行文连贯。
【经典范文】
Dear Allen,
Our school has launched a labor‑experience course this semester, and I’m writing to invite you to experience it alongside me.
Aimed at enriching students’ after-school life and fostering our labor awareness, the course covers diverse hands‑on activities, gardening included. Most striking is the cooking session, where we can prepare traditional Chinese festival foods ranging from dumplings to mooncakes.
The course enables you to learn while having fun, offering you fresh insights into Chinese culture, which will definitely impress you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、书面表达解析
本篇为邮件邀请信,向外国友人介绍校内劳动体验课,介绍课程多样实践内容,发出邀请。写作要兼顾书信格式,突出劳动实践意义,同时渗透中国传统文化,句式丰富,逻辑流畅。
二、写作思路
1. 邮件开头:点明写信目的,发出邀请。
仿写句式:…has launched … this semester, and I’m writing to invite you to …
2. 主体部分:过去分词作目的状语点明课程开设目的;介绍课程两大板块园艺、烹饪;where 定语从句介绍烹饪课堂。
仿写句式:Aimed at …, the course covers diverse hands‑on activities, … included.
3. 结尾:说明课程带来的收获,期待回信。
三、范文精讲
1.高级替换(以范文词汇为蓝本)
开设:offers→has launched
培养:developing→fostering
各种各样的:a wide variety of→diverse
令人印象深刻的:impressive→striking
深刻理解:deep insight→fresh insights
2.同义句转换
原句:The course enables you to learn while having fun, offering you fresh insights into Chinese culture, which will definitely impress you.
拓展句:Offering you fresh insights into Chinese culture, the course lets you learn in a fun way, which won’t let you down.(现在分词作状语)
3. 高级句型讲解
(1)Aimed at enriching students’ after‑school life and fostering our labor awareness, the course covers diverse hands‑on activities, gardening included.(运用了过去分词作目的状语)
(2)Most striking is the cooking session, where we can prepare traditional Chinese festival foods ranging from dumplings to mooncakes.(运用了完全倒装句+where 定语从句+ranging from 分词作后置定语)
四、范文背诵模板
Our school has launched ________ this semester, and I’m writing to invite you to ________ alongside me.
Aimed at enriching students’ after-school life and fostering our labor awareness, the course covers diverse hands-on activities, ________ included. Most striking is the ________, where we can prepare ________ ranging from ________ to ________.
The course enables you to learn while having fun, offering you fresh insights into ________, which will definitely impress you. Looking forward to your reply.
Writing 3 调查报告(中小学生周末做家务劳动情况)
【试题创新】
请根据调查数据,为校英文报撰写一篇稿件,介绍中小学生周末家务劳动现状并发表你的个人看法。
总体情况
91.50% 中小学生会在周末做家务
家务技能占比
打扫卫生 85.50%;洗碗 81.60%;做饭 36.80%;农活 22.2%
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)适当补充细节,行文连贯。
【经典范文】
Nowadays, an increasing number of students help with housework on weekends. Statistics show that 91.50% of primary and secondary students help with housework in their spare weekend time.
When it comes to housework skills, 85.50% do cleaning and 81.60% wash dishes . By contrast, merely 36.80% are capable of cooking and only 22.2% can perform farm work, showing big differences in practical skills.
As we all know, labor creates happiness. From my perspective, we students ought to form the habit of doing housework and ease parents’ daily burden through practical labor.
一、书面表达解析
本篇为英文报调查类短文,需要客观转述调查数据,对比不同家务技能参与度,之后发表个人观点,倡导劳动习惯。写作注意数据表达准确,对比逻辑清晰,观点积极向上。
二、写作思路
1. 开头:总起,引出调查现象,交代整体调查数据。
仿写句式:Statistics show that…
2. 主体部分:When it comes to引出分类数据,使用对比衔接词体现家务能力差距。
仿写句式:When it comes to…, …. By contrast,…
3. 结尾:发表个人观点,阐述劳动价值,呼吁养成做家务的劳动习惯。
三、范文精讲
1. 高级替换(以范文词汇为蓝本)
越来越多:more and more→an increasing number of
就……而言:In terms of→When it comes to
仅仅:only→merely
减轻负担:reduce their burden→ease parents’ daily burden
2. 同义句转换
原句:Statistics show that 91.50% of primary and secondary students help with housework in their spare weekend time.
拓展句:According to the survey, 91.50% of primary and secondary students devote some weekend time to doing housework.(according to survey改写句式)
3. 高级句型讲解
(1)By contrast, merely 36.80% are capable of cooking and only 22.2% can perform farm work, showing big differences in practical skills.(运用了现在分词短语作非限制性定语)
(2)As we all know, labor creates happiness.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
四、范文背诵模板
Nowadays, an increasing number of students ________. Statistics show that ________.
When it comes to ________, ________ and ________ respectively. By contrast, merely ________ and only ________, showing ________.
As we all know, labor creates happiness. From my perspective, we students ought to form the habit of ________ and ease ________ through practical labor.
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