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Unit 1 Let’s Be Friends!
Reading for writing
Learning Objectives
通过本课的学习,学生能够:
基于写作目的、 文体和要求, 分析课文结构, 列出描述人物的内容要点;
绘制思维导图, 谋篇布局, 拟定框架, 完成写作任务;
通过自评和互评, 学会反思, 改进文章的结构、 内容和语言。
Reading for Writing
Introduce a person
name
age
hobby
class
look
personality
from
How to introduce your friends?
Before reading
Title
Beginning
Body
End
Reading
Activity 1 Analyze the text structure and find out the main idea of each paragraph.
Brief introduction
(简要介绍)
Specific introduction
(具体介绍)
Personal information
Hobbies
Comments/feelings
(评价/感受)
Reading
Analyze the text structure and find out the main idea of each paragraph.
What’s the title of the text?
My friend and I.
title
Why is the title named “ my friend and I ”not “I and my friend ”?
To show our respect for others.
Reading
beginning
title
What does Lingling say at first?
Who does Lingling introduce?
Hi,everyone!
每个人
every
+one
=everyone
Her good friend Xiao Ya.
Brief introduction(简要介绍)
Reading
beginning
title
body
Activity 1 Read the text and complete the thinking map.
Lingling
Xiao Ya
Class Six, Grade Seven
Beijing
quiet friendly
drawing pictures
reading books
Tianjin
beautiful
lovely
singing
listening to music
swimming
running
Reading
美丽的
图画
书
Tip: We can use double bubble maps(双气泡图) to
compare the similarities and differences between two people or things.
利用双气泡图去对比两个人或两件事之间的异同。
Reading
beginning
title
body
End
What does Lingling think of her friend?
Lingling thinks Xiao Ya is a great friend.She enjoys the time with her.
最好的
享受
时间
和
Why does Lingling enjoy the time with Xiao Ya?
They have different hobbies,but they also do many things together,such as swimming and running.
也
许多的
事情
这样
像
比如
Activity 2 Draw a thinking map about yourself and your friend.
I
My friend
Writing
————————
My name is ____________________________________
______________________________________________.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________.
I like _________________________________________.
We ___________________________________________.
_____ is a great friend! We ________________________.
Activity 3 Draft your essay about yourself and your friend.
Title
Beginning
Body
End
Writing
1. Hello/Hi, everyone! 2. My name is…/I am…
2. introduce...to...
From: I am from…/I come from. /She is from…/She comes from…
Age: I am...years old./ She is...years old.
Class/Grade: I am in Class ..., Grade .... / She is in Class ..., Grade ....
We are in the same class. /We are in different classes.
Hobby: She loves/likes/enjoys drawing pictures,reading books,
listening to music, running, cooking, singing.
We like doing many things together.
Personality: She is quiet( friendly/kind, nice, lovely...)
Looks: She is tall(short, slim, thin...).
a great friend; enjoy the time.
We are different, but we share and help each other.
Know more useful expressions.
Writing
Brief introduction
(简要介绍)
Specific introduction
(具体介绍)
Personal information
Hobbies
Comments/feelings
(评价/感受)
————————
My name is ____________________________________
______________________________________________.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________.
I like _________________________________________.
We ___________________________________________.
_____ is a great friend! We ________________________.
Activity 3 Introduce yourself and your friend.
Title
Beginning
Body
End
Writing
范例
My friend and I
My name is Yuanyuan. I have a good friend. Her name is Sally.
I’m from Wuhan. Sally is from Changsha.We are in Class Seven, Grade Seven. I am tall and friendly. She is a lovely and nice girl.
I like reading and dancing. She likes doing sports. We always do many things together, such as playing basketball and singing.
Sally is a great friend! We always have a good time. What about you and your friend?
Invite your partner to rate your final draft. Write 1 (more improvements needed), 2 (fair), 3 (good), or 4 (excellent) for the ratings.
How well can you ____________________?
express your view of making friends
use the thinking skill of describing a person
introduce your friends to others
organize ideas into a well-balanced structure
use the theme vocabulary of the unit
use the present simple tense
use punctuation
spell the words
1. everyone 只能用来指人;不能与介词of连用。
every one 既可指人,也可指物;可与介词 of连用。
班上的每一个人都很友好。___________________________________.
每一张画都很美。__________________________________________.
Everyone in the class is friendly
Every one of these pictures is beautiful
Language point
Hi,everyone!
2. too的用法
too 用于肯定句句末。
我也喜欢苹果。____________________.
I like apples, too
also 用于肯定句和疑问句中,放在be动词,助动词。
情态动词后,实义动词前。
我也能弹吉他。________________________.
I can also play the guitar
Language point
too和also的区别
1.too和also都表示“也”
用too, also填空
(1)He _______likes drawing.
(2)She is a teacher, _______.
(3)She is in Class 8, Grade 7, _______.
also
too
too
Language point
______________
______________
______________
Language point
many + 可数名词复数
many friends
many basketballs
many classmates
(1) such as+名词或名词短语,不能引导句子;
(2) such as+Ving(接动词必须加ing);
他们喜欢户外活动,比如徒步旅行,跑步和游泳。
They enjoy outdoor activities, such as___________,
_________and______________.
hiking
running
swimming
这有很多美味的水果,比如苹果、橙子和香蕉。
There are many delicious fruits, ______ _____,
apples, oranges ______bananas.
such
as
and
Language point
such as:例如
(3) such as不能放在句首。
(1) 跟着......, 和某人一起
汤姆经常和他的朋友们一起打篮球。
__________________________________________.
Tom often plays basketball with his friends
(2) 用某种工具
你可以用钢笔写字。
__________________________________________.
You can write with a pen
Language point
with prep.
Language point
and 和 with的区别
1.and和with都表示“和”
2.不同点:
位置不同:
and:放两个人中间:A and B
with:放后面:A + 动词… with B
Lingling enjoys the time with Xiao Ya.
Lingling and Xiao Ya enjoy the time together.
主语不同:
and 连接两个主语,主语是两个人,谓语动词用复数
with:真正的主语是前面的人。
Language point
用 and 和 with 填空
1.Tom Mike like running.
2.Tom, Mike, likes running.
and
with
3.She plays basketball her brother.
4.She her brother play basketball.
with
and
Summary
We learn:
1. the sample about the topic and the thinking skill of describing a person.:
2. how to make an outline for writing and focus on the topic.
3. how to check the spelling and grammar mistakes in our writing.
We can:
1. draw a thingking to finish the writing task.
2. evaluate our own and classmates’ writing to improve our writing ability.
基础作业
拓展作业
提升作业
再次润色后,发送
征文后到老师的
邮箱。
继续完善润色课堂的
我和我的朋友作文。
完成本课新单词短语抄写,英文每个5遍。
汉语1 遍。
Homework
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