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专题九 心理情感描写——悲伤、沮丧和孤独
一、词汇积累
基础
进阶
高阶
sad adj. 悲伤的
sorrowful adj. 悲伤的
upset adj. 沮丧的
lonely adj. 孤独的
sadly adv. 悲伤地
sadness n. 悲伤
sorrow n. 悲痛
loneliness n. 孤独
depressed adj. 沮丧的
frustrated adj. 挫败的
depressing adj. 令人沮丧的
depression n. 抑郁
gloom n. 忧郁
isolation n. 孤立
spirit n. 情绪
mood n. 心情
a sense/wave of loneliness 一阵孤独感
a sense/wave of sadness 一阵悲伤
numb with sorrow 悲伤得麻木
on the verge of tears 快要哭了
in low spirits 情绪低落
an ocean of sadness 悲伤的海洋
sadness comes in waves 悲伤如潮涌
with a sinking heart 心情沉重
be immersed in sorrow 沉浸在悲痛中
二、佳句积累
【基础层】直接替换,即拿即用
1. He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静地站着,眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
2. She burst into tears and ran out of the room. 她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间。
3. She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands. 她掩面哭泣。
4. I tried to fight back tears. / My eyes were filled with tears. 我努力忍住眼泪。/ 我的眼里充满了泪水。
5. These days he was in low spirits. 这些日子他情绪低落。
6. A long silence fell between us. 我俩沉默了很长时间。
【进阶层】结构灵活,需要微调
7. I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
8. Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears. 她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。
9. A frown now stood on his face. 他皱起了眉头。
10. They sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他们坐在那里,带着一脸忧郁。
11. The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face. 这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
12. He brimmed over with sorrow when... 他满是悲伤……
【高阶层】修辞丰富,提升文采
13. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine. 听到这个消息,他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
14. They were immersed in sorrow. 他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
15. Depression settled over her like a heavy black cloud. 忧郁情绪就像一片沉重的乌云笼罩在她的心头。
16. A feeling of isolation swept over me. 一种孤独感忽然涌上我的心头。
三、句式归纳
① 用"泪水"表现悲伤
sb. + 泪水动作
He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
She burst into tears.
She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.
I tried to fight back tears.
核心动词语料:roll down 滚落; burst into tears 突然大哭; sob 啜泣; hide one's face 掩面; fight back tears 忍住眼泪; be filled with tears 充满泪水; be on the verge of tears 快要哭了; weep 哭泣
② 用"情绪笼罩"表现沮丧
情绪 + 动词 + sb.
Depression settled over her like a heavy black cloud.
A feeling of isolation swept over me.
A cloud of gloom cast over his face.
Sadness comes in waves.
核心动词语料:settle over 笼罩; sweep over 涌上; cast over 笼罩; brim over 充满; immerse in 沉浸; flood over 淹没; come in waves 如潮涌
③ 用"身体反应+环境"表现孤独
身体/环境 + 悲伤状态
Her hands were shaking.
He was in low spirits.
They sat there with glum looks.
A long silence fell between us.
核心动词语料:shake 颤抖; tremble 发抖; be in low spirits 情绪低落; pull a long face 拉长脸; hang one's head 垂下头; fall into silence 陷入沉默; feel numb 感到麻木; drag one's heavy legs 拖着沉重的腿
四、练习仿写
4.1 词汇运用
根据语境,选择恰当的词或短语完成句子。
① 他静静地站着,眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
He stood silently, ______ ______ ______ his cheeks.
② 她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间。
She ______ ______ ______ and ran out of the room.
③ 这些日子他情绪低落。
These days he was ______ ______ ______.
④ 一种孤独感忽然涌上我的心头。
A feeling of ______ ______ ______ me.
⑤ 忧郁情绪就像一片沉重的乌云笼罩在她的心头。
Depression ______ ______ her like a heavy black cloud.
4.2 情境仿写
① 教室里的每个人都在愉快地聊天,而简却一个人坐在那里不知所措。
Everyone in the classroom was chatting happily, ______ Jane sat there alone, at a loss.
② 悲伤和孤独的气氛笼罩着她。
______ ______ ______ and loneliness settled over her.
③ 简感到被冷落,孤独使她感到绝望。
Jane felt left out and was ______. / ______, Jane was getting desperate with loneliness.
④ 她从学校慢慢地骑车回家,心难过得麻木了。
She rode home from school slowly, ______.
⑤ 她把自己锁在房间里,沉浸在悲痛之中。
She locked herself in her room, ______.
⑥ 她很伤心,不知不觉哭了,眼泪止不住。
She felt so sad that she found herself crying unconsciously, ______.
⑦ 她静静地落泪,感觉这是她年轻的生命中最悲伤的时刻。
She wept quietly, ______ it was the saddest moment for her young life.
⑧ 听到她没获奖的消息,她心都沉了下去。
When she heard the news that she failed to win a prize, ______.
⑨ 她咬着下唇,心里很悲伤。
She bit her bottom lip, ______.
⑩ 她情绪低落,拖着两条沉重的腿,疲惫不堪地回到了家。
______, she dragged her heavy legs back home, tired out.
4.3 综合提升
情境:简在学校感到被同学们冷落,没有人愿意和她说话。放学后,她独自骑车回家,把自己锁在房间里,沉浸在悲伤和孤独中,眼泪止不住地流。
请用本专题所学词汇和句式,写一段80词左右的描写。
参考答案
4.1 词汇运用
① tears rolling down
② burst into tears
③ in low spirits
④ isolation swept over
⑤ settled over
4.2 情境仿写
① while / whereas
② A sense of sadness / A wave of sadness / A feeling of sadness
③ desperate with loneliness / Feeling left out / Left out
④ her heart numb with sorrow / with her heart numb with sorrow
⑤ immersed in sorrow / burying herself in sorrow
⑥ unable to stop her tears / tears streaming down uncontrollably
⑦ feeling / sensing
⑧ her heart sank / she felt her heart sink
⑨ sadness filling her heart / with sadness filling her heart
⑩ In low spirits / In an unpleasant mood / Feeling depressed
4.3 综合提升
Jane felt left out at school. No one was willing to talk to her. After school, she rode home slowly, her heart numb with sorrow. A feeling of isolation swept over her. Back home, she locked herself in her room, immersed in sorrow. She felt like she was floating in an ocean of sadness. Tears rolled down her cheeks uncontrollably. She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands, feeling that this was the saddest moment in her young life. These days she was in low spirits, and depression settled over her like a heavy black cloud.
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