Unit 1 Section Ⅶ WRITING WORKSHOP & READING CLUB(Word学生用书)-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第一册(北师大版)
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摘要:
该高中英语导学案聚焦邀请信的阅读与写作,通过分析一封邀请担任演讲比赛评委的邮件,引导学生理解语篇主旨和细节,进而学习词汇精准运用、句式委婉表达、时态多样使用等语言要素,构建从输入到输出的写作学习支架。
资料亮点在于以真实语篇为载体,通过“学语言-学结构-练写作”的路径提升学生语言能力,提供从句子雏形到篇章的写作步骤指导及情感、动作等语料积累,培养学生分析组织语言的思维品质,知识要点解析助力自主学习,符合新课标语言能力、思维品质和学习能力的核心素养要求。
内容正文:
Section Ⅶ WRITING WORKSHOP & READING CLUB
1.What is the purpose of the email?( )
A.To ask advice about how to run a school speaking competition.
B.To invite Mr Jenson to take part in the school speech competition.
C.To invite Mr Jenson to serve as a judge for the school speech competition.
D.To express gratitude to Mr Jenson for his help in the speech competition.
2.Which one is NOT the judge’s duty in the final round?( )
A.Listening to 100 students’ speeches.
B.Listening to all of the 12 students’ speeches.
C.Noting down the positive and negative aspects for each competitor.
D.Discussing notes with 3 other judges and coming to a decision.
3.We can know from paragraph 4 that .( )
A.Mr Jenson needn’t attend a meeting
B.Mr Jenson will decide the standards of the competition
C.Mr Jenson hasn’t known other judges yet
D.there will be a long meeting for Mr Jenson to attend
Dear Mr Jenson,
I am writing on behalf of the school’s Student Union.As you may know, we are running a school-wide public speaking competition, and the final will take place at the lecture hall on 10 May (9 am-12 pm).I am writing to ask whether you would be willing to help us judge the final competition.
Since March, we have already had two rounds of the competition, with more than 100 students.Now we have 12 students left for the final.The topic of the final speech is “Education for Innovation”.Students have to give a five-minute speech on the topic in English.
During the final round, as a judge, you would be responsible for listening to all the speeches, noting down any positive or negative aspects for each one.Competitors should be judged on their pronunciation, clarity and fluency, and also progression of ideas and audience engagement.Then you will discuss your notes with three other judges, and come to a decision about who comes first, second and third.
Would you have time to attend a short meeting at the Student Union Room at 4 pm on 8 May so that we can introduce you to the other judges and discuss the details? We would not take up too much of your time.
I sincerely hope you can come.If you have any questions, please do let me know.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Zheng
President, Student Union
学语言
1.词汇
①第一段中使用了on behalf of和take place,显示了作者的语言功底。
②第二段中round表示“(比赛的)一轮,一个回合”,此处用这个词恰到好处; five-minute是一个合成形容词,使用give a five-minute speech 比give a speech that lasts five minutes简洁地道。
③第三段分别使用了would、should等情态动词,体现了不同的感情色彩。
④第五段第一句中使用了sincerely,表示作者的诚挚邀请。
2.句式
①第一段中定语从句As you may know的使用,突显了作者使用复杂句式的写作功底;would表达了委婉的语气;使用I am writing to ask whether ...比I am writing to invite ...更加委婉。
②第四段第一句使用了Would you have time ...这一委婉的请求。
③最后一段第二句中的do表示强调,比用be sure to更简洁,且表达了作者的强烈愿望。
3.衔接词
since,also,then等衔接词的使用,使短文过渡自然。
4.时态
该篇文章体现了时态的多样性,通篇以一般现在时为主,兼顾使用现在进行时、现在完成时及一般将来时。
学结构
1.常用开头句
①I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in ...我认为如果你能参加……将是一个非常好的主意。
②On behalf of the Student Union of the English Department, I’m writing to invite you to give us a speech on Chinese history.
我代表英语系学生会写信给你,邀请你给我们做一个关于中国历史的演讲。
③I’m writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday.I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class.
我写信是想告诉你,我们打算本周六去爬香山。我代表我们班真诚地邀请你和我们一起去。
2.常用中间句
①We’re going to have a speech at 2:30 pm this Tuesday afternoon in the Meeting Room 401.
我们打算本周二下午2:30在401会议室举行演讲。
②You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain.
你可以随身携带相机,拍摄美丽的景色;也有必要带上雨伞或雨衣,以防赶上下雨。
③There will be many activities, such as ...
将有许多活动,比如……
3.常用结尾句
①Please inform us whether you could come.请告知我们你是否会来。
②We’re looking forward to a favourable reply.
我们期待肯定的答复。
③Your participation can surely add colour to our trip and we are all looking forward to your participation.
你的参与肯定会给我们的旅行增添色彩,我们都期待着你的参与。
假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请你写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:
(1)活动时间;
(2)活动安排;
(3)欢迎他表演节目。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Dear Allen,
Yours,
Li Hua
一、合理布局,精心谋篇
第一段:邀请Allen参加音乐节。
第二段:活动时间、地点、内容等。
第三段:希望他能接受邀请。
二、遣词造句,规范得体
1.你对音乐非常感兴趣。(take interest in)
2.我写信邀请你和我一起参加音乐节。(invite sb to do, participate in)
3.根据安排,音乐节将于下周日的下午5点到8点在操场举行。(as scheduled)
4.我们将坐在草地上,享受着由赞助商提供的美味食品和饮料。 (provide)
5.我们将完全沉浸在美妙的节目中。(be absorbed in)
三、句式升级,吸睛亮点
6.用因果关系结构连接句1和句2
7.用非谓语动词连接句4和句5
四、认真誊写,赏心悦目
情感
描写
grateful adj.感激的,感谢的 upset adj.烦恼的;心烦意乱的vt.使生气,使心烦意乱 ashamed adj.羞愧的;内疚的;惭愧的 distracted adj.心神不定的,精神无法集中的 depressed adj.沮丧的,忧愁的
动作
描写
drag v.拖,拉;缓慢移动 chase v.追逐,追赶;努力赢得 chatter vi.唠叨,喋喋不休 bend v.弯腰;俯身 complain v.抱怨;不满;发牢骚 defend v.保护,保卫
环境
描写
pour vt.灌,注,倒 fuel n.燃料;刺激物 acid adj.酸(性)的 n.酸
第一步:完成句子雏形现
1.我们的地理老师正在解释为什么化石燃料导致酸雨,这时天开始下起倾盆大雨。(be doing ...when)
2.我很沮丧,因为我没有雨衣。(because)
3.我和同桌抱怨这场大雨。(complain)
4.突然,老师弯下腰,拉拉我的袖子,告诉我不要喋喋不休。(动作链)
5.我羞愧地站起来,脸变得通红。(形容词作状语;with复合结构)
6.老师告诉我不要分心。 (distracted)
7.尽管有点郁闷,但我真的很感激他提醒我。(状语从句的省略)
第二步:过渡衔接连成篇
写作词汇集释
1.on behalf of sb 代表某人
教材原句 I am writing on behalf of the school’s Student Union.我代表校学生会(给您)写信。
【用法】
(1)on one’s behalf 代表某人
(2)represent sb 代表某人
stand for 代表;象征
in the name of代表;以……的名义
【佳句】 On behalf of the Student Union, I’m writing to invite you to give us a lecture from 3:00 pm to 5:00 pm next Wednesday.(邀请信)
我代表学生会写信邀请您在下周三下午3点到5点给我们做讲座。
【练透】 语块表达
①The charity event was held (以……的名义) helping those in need.Many people came together to donate clothes and food.
②As is known to all,red (象征) happiness in traditional Chinese culture.
【写美】 翻译句子
③我谨代表我们团队全体成员,写信邀请您加入我们!(邀请信)
2.take up 占据;拿起;开始从事;接受;继续
教材原句 We would not take up too much of your time.我们不会占用您太多的时间。
【用法】
take apart 拆开
take in 欺骗;吸收;理解
take off (飞机)起飞;(事业)腾飞;脱下
take on 呈现;雇用;承担
take care 当心;留心
take place 发生,产生;进行,举行
take over 接管;占上风
take out 拿出
【佳句】 John took up volunteering at the local animal shelter, devoting his weekends to caring for abandoned pets.(人物、动作描写)
约翰开始在当地的动物收容所做志愿者,把他的周末时间用来照顾被遗弃的宠物。
【练透】 单句语法填空
①She took the story where Tim had left off.
②With our joint efforts, the campus soon took a new look.
③The majority of people take too much fat and not enough fibre,which does great harm to their health.
【写美】 完成句子
④(2025•全国二卷)I and began to sketch out characters, explaining each stroke and its significance.(动作描写)
我拿出一张纸,开始写出汉字,解释每一个笔画及其意义。
3.approval n.赞许;同意
教材原句 People who are low in confidence and unsure of themselves may be more likely to seek their peers’ approval by going along with risky suggestions or choosing the “wrong” path.
那些缺乏自信和不自信的人更有可能通过采纳有风险的建议或选择“错误”的道路来寻求同伴的认可。
【用法】
(1)give one’s approval to ...同意/批准……
win one’s approval 赢得某人的赞同
in approval 赞同地
(2)approve v. 批准;赞同
approve sth 批准/通过某事
approve of (sb/one’s) doing sth 赞同/同意(某人)做某事
【佳句】 Tom finally performed the piano piece perfectly, getting his strict father’s approval for the first time.(动作描写)
汤姆终于完美演奏了钢琴曲,首次得到严父的认可。
【练透】 单句语法填空
①I approve of your (try) to earn some money,but please don’t neglect your study.
②He tried to win his parents’ (approve) by making better decisions.
【写美】 完成句子
③如果您能批准我们的提议,我们将不胜感激。
→We would be grateful if .(approve)
→We would be grateful if .(approval)
4.defend vi.& vt.保护,保卫
教材原句 Bullies pick easy targets — people who are outside the peer group and whom the group is unlikely to defend.
欺凌者挑容易的目标——同龄群体以外的并且该团伙不太可能保护的人。
【用法】
(1)defend ...from/against ...保护……不受……;为……辩护
defend with用……进行防卫
defend oneself 自卫
(2)defence n. 防御;辩护;防卫
in defence of 为……辩护;防卫
in one’s defence 为某人辩护
(3)defensive adj. 防御的
a defensive measure 防御措施
【佳句】 In the forest, David quickly learned how to defend himself against wild animals using just a stick.(动作描写)
密林中,大卫迅速学会了如何仅用一根棍子保护自己不受野生动物的侵害。
Humour is a more effective defence than violence.
幽默是比暴力更有效的防御武器。
【练透】 单句语法填空
①It is the nature of a mother to do all she can to defend her child harm and danger.
②During the game, our team’s (defence) strategy worked perfectly.We managed to block every attack from the other side, and it felt like we were in control of the match.
【写美】 一句多译
③狼紧紧地追在他后面,他拿起棍子保护自己。
→With the wolf running closely after him,he .(defence)
→The wolf run closely after him,and he .
(defend ...with ...)重点句型解构
◇ 句型公式:so that引导目的状语从句
教材原句 Would you have time to attend a short meeting at the Student Union Room at 4 pm on 8 May so that we can introduce you to the other judges and discuss the details?
您是否有时间参加5月8日下午4点在学生会办公室举行的简短会议,以便我们向其他评委介绍您并讨论细节?
【用法】
(1)so that引导目的状语从句时,从句中常含有情态动词may/might、can/could、should、would等,so that可以和in order that互换。
(2)so that还可引导结果状语从句,意为“因此,所以”。
【佳句】 You’re required to bring notebooks and pens so that you can set down some important tips in time.
你需要带笔记本和钢笔,以便及时记下一些重要的提示。
【点津】 so ...that ...引导的是结果状语从句,意为“如此……以至于……”。
【写美】 微写作
①然后我可以抽出一些时间重新学习,这样我们就可以每天一起练习。
Then I can spare some time to learn it again, .
②我乘坐了早班公共汽车,所以及时到了那里。
I took an early bus .
③好几个月没下雨了,以至于土壤都干透了。
It hasn’t rained for a few months, .
完成课后作业 UNIT 1 Section Ⅶ
答案
Section Ⅶ WRITING WORKSHOP & READING CLUB
【速读语篇•知文意】
1-3 CAC
【演练佳作•写美文】
写作步骤
二、1.You take much interest in music.
2.I’m writing to invite you to participate in the Music Festival with me.
3.As scheduled, the Music Festival will take place on the playground from 5 pm to 8 pm next Sunday.
4.We’ll sit on the grass and enjoy the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors.
5.We’ll be fully absorbed in the fascinating performances.
三、6.Since you take much interest in music, I’m writing to invite you to participate in the Music Festival with me.
7.Sitting on the grass and enjoying the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors, we’ll be fully absorbed in the fascinating performances.
四、
Dear Allen,
You must have heard of the upcoming Music Festival to be held in our school.Since you take much interest in music, I’m writing to invite you to participate in the Music Festival with me.
As scheduled, the Music Festival will take place on the playground from 5 pm to 8 pm next Sunday.Additionally, sitting on the grass and enjoying the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors, we’ll be fully absorbed in the fascinating performances.Furthermore, you are also expected to be seen on the stage then.
I sincerely hope that you could come and share this joyful moment with me.Looking forward to your early reply.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【教材词汇•练续写】
第一步
1.Our geography teacher was explaining why fossil fuels led to acid rains when it began pouring.
2.I was upset because I didn’t have a raincoat.
3.I complained about the heavy rain with my deskmate.
4.Suddenly,the teacher bent over,pulled me on the sleeve and told me not to chatter away.
5.Ashamed,I stood up with blood rushing to my face.
6.My teacher told me not to be distracted.
7.Though a bit depressed, I was really grateful to him for reminding me.
第二步
Our geography teacher was explaining why fossil fuels led to acid rains when it began pouring.I was upset because I didn’t have a raincoat and complained about the heavy rain with my deskmate.Suddenly,the teacher bent over,pulled me on the sleeve and told me not to chatter away.Ashamed,I stood up with blood rushing to my face.My teacher told me not to be distracted.Though a bit depressed, I was really grateful to him for reminding me.
【知识要点•须拾遗】
写作词汇集释
1.①in the name of ②stands for ③On behalf of all our team members, I am writing to invite you to join us!
2.①up ②on ③in ④took out a piece of paper
3.①trying ②approval ③you could approve our proposal; you could give approval to our proposal
4.①from/against ②defensive ③took up a stick in defence of himself; defended himself with a stick
重点句型解构
①so that/in order that we can practice together every day ②so that I got there in time ③so that the soil dries out
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