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Unit 2 Safety
Writing Workshop Safety Rules
北师大版 英语 八年级上册
Get Ready for Writing
Task:
You are going to put some safety rules for a sport on our school’s English bulletin board.
Q1: What sport would you choose?
Q2: What safety rules do you want to include?
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Read for Content
Read & Answer
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1. What sport are these rules for?
2. Which ones do/don’t you know?
Mark a “√” or “×” at the end of each rule.
Safe Cycling
Riding a bike is good for you. When you are on the road, you must
always follow the rules of safe cycling.
● You should check your bike before you ride, e.g. the brakes. ( )
● You must wear a helmet. ( )
● Don’t ride on the sidewalk. Use cycle paths if you can. ( )
● Don’t turn without using hand signals. ( )
● Stop at zebra crossings, and stop at red lights. ( )
● Don’t try to overtake cars, buses or trucks. ( )
● You should lock your bike when you’re not using it. ( )
Remember: Don’t take risks. Safety comes first.
Q1: What sport are these rules for?
Safe Cycling
Riding a bike is good for you. When you are on the road, you must
always follow the rules of safe cycling.
● You should check your bike before you ride, e.g. the brakes. ( )
● You must wear a helmet. ( )
● Don’t ride on the sidewalk. Use cycle paths if you can. ( )
● Don’t turn without using hand signals. ( )
● Stop at zebra crossings, and stop at red lights. ( )
● Don’t try to overtake cars, buses or trucks. ( )
● You should lock your bike when you’re not using it. ( )
Remember: Don’t take risks. Safety comes first.
Q2: Which ones do/don’t you know? Mark a “√” or “×” at the end of each rule.
Read for Structure
Read for Writing
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Write Introduction, Body and Conclusion on the lines beside the text.
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Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Safe Cycling
Riding a bike is good for you. When you are on the road, you must
always follow the rules of safe cycling.
● You should check your bike before you ride, e.g. the brakes. ( )
● You must wear a helmet. ( )
● Don’t ride on the sidewalk. Use cycle paths if you can. ( )
● Don’t turn without using hand signals. ( )
● Stop at zebra crossings, and stop at red lights. ( )
● Don’t try to overtake cars, buses or trucks. ( )
● You should lock your bike when you’re not using it. ( )
Remember: Don’t take risks. Safety comes first.
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Safe Cycling
Riding a bike is good for you. When you are on the road, you must
always follow the rules of safe cycling.
● You should check your bike before you ride, e.g. the brakes. ( )
● You must wear a helmet. ( )
● Don’t ride on the sidewalk. Use cycle paths if you can. ( )
● Don’t turn without using hand signals. ( )
● Stop at zebra crossings, and stop at red lights. ( )
● Don’t try to overtake cars, buses or trucks. ( )
● You should lock your bike when you’re not using it. ( )
Remember: Don’t take risks. Safety comes first.
What is the purpose of each part?
Introduce the topic
List the rules
Call for actions or remind readers
Work out your own outline.
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Safe Cycling
Part 1 Introduce the topic
Part 2 List the rules
Part 3 Call for actions or remind readers
Safe...
Part 1 ?
Part 2 ?
Part 3 ?
Read for Language
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Read & Underline
Underline some useful expressions for introducing the topic, for writing detailed rules and for the conclusion.
Read and underline the expressions.
Safe Cycling
Riding a bike is good for you. When you are on the road, you must
always follow the rules of safe cycling.
● You should check your bike before you ride, e.g. the brakes. ( )
● You must wear a helmet. ( )
● Don’t ride on the sidewalk. Use cycle paths if you can. ( )
● Don’t turn without using hand signals. ( )
● Stop at zebra crossings, and stop at red lights. ( )
● Don’t try to overtake cars, buses or trucks. ( )
● You should lock your bike when you’re not using it. ( )
Remember: Don’t take risks. Safety comes first.
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Sentence Builder
To write about safety rules, you can:
· use should or must to express necessity (必要性)
· use do and don’t do to express obligation (义务,责任)
You should check your bike before you ride, e.g. the brakes.
You must wear a helmet.
Don’t ride on the sidewalk.
Don’t try to overtake cars, buses or trucks.
Stop at zebra crossings.
Can you think of any other expressions?
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Write
Write 4–6 safety rules (dos and don’ts) for the sport you chose.
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Unit 2 Safety
Writing Workshop Safety Rules
Period 2
Safe Cycling
Riding a bike is good for you. When you are on the road, you must
always follow the rules of safe cycling.
● You should check your bike before you ride, e.g. the brakes. ( )
● You must wear a helmet. ( )
● Don’t ride on the sidewalk. Use cycle paths if you can. ( )
● Don’t turn without using hand signals. ( )
● Stop at zebra crossings, and stop at red lights. ( )
● Don’t try to overtake cars, buses or trucks. ( )
● You should lock your bike when you’re not using it. ( )
Remember: Don’t take risks. Safety comes first.
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Compose Your Writing
Draft
Use your outline and the Writing Help to write your first draft.
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Writing Help
When giving safety rules, you should:
· introduce the topic first about the activity;
· include a body with 4–6 safety rules for the activity;
· use the imperative or modal verbs;
· use short, simple sentences;
· have a conclusion and leave the readers with a short reminder.
Compose Your Writing
Editing and Revising
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Peer Editing Sheet
Does the writer:
1. introduce the topic first about the activity?
2. include a body with 4–6 safety rules for the activity?
3. use the imperative or modal verbs?
4. use short, simple sentences?
5. have a conclusion and leave the readers with a short reminder?
· Circle any spelling, punctuation (, / . / ?…) or grammar errors.
· Mark any unclear expressions. Give suggestions if you can.
· Underline the expressions you like.
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Compose Your Writing
Revise your work and share it in class.
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Homework
1. Finish the final writing.
2. Put your final writing into the community safety manual both in Chinese and English.
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Thank you
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