第19讲 诚实守信类(故事构造三部曲)2027年高考英语一轮复习读后续写高分突破

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**基本信息** 以“危机诱惑-纠结坚守-诚信抉择”三部曲为核心,构建诚实守信类故事的系统性写作方法,融合句型公式与真题模考,实现从知识到能力的迁移。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |破题式·故事骨架|主题画像+构思路线|故事构造三部曲(诱惑-坚守-抉择)|“诱惑-博弈-抉择”的良知回归逻辑链| |招式谱·句型公式|3步句型公式+12个高频例句|按步取句句型公式(起承转合)|情绪词+句型公式的语言构建逻辑| |高考场·真题拆解|1道高考真题(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)|真题线索梳理+翻译练习|真题情境迁移至写作的应用逻辑| |风向标·模考速递|3道模考题(北京海淀等二模)|模考范文与金句|从真题到模考的主题拓展逻辑|

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第19讲 诚实守信类(故事构造三部曲)(原卷版) 内容导航 01 破题式·故事骨架 故事分析 · 构思蓝图 02 招式谱·句型公式 按步取句 / 拿来即用 03 高考场·真题拆解 高考原题+技法讲解 04 风向标·模考速递 最新模考 · 同题材范文与金句 破题式·故事骨架 01 主题画像 诚实守信类故事,以“我”在道德两难面前的真实考量为轴线:往往从一个“看似两全”的捷径起笔——也许是捡到的钱包、答应的约定、考试中的诱惑、或是答应保守的秘密;随后“我”陷入内心的纠结与博弈,在利与义、情与理之间反复掂量;结尾处主人公以主动认错、守约、还钱、坦白等行动作出回答,让“言出必行”“人无信不立”的主题稳稳落住。简言之:诚实守信类故事 = 一场“由诱惑到坚守、由坚守到立信”的良知回归。 02 真题回眸 年份 卷别 故事梗概 情感落点 2024.06 新高考全国Ⅰ卷 维也纳遇司机 Gunter 帮忙赶到车站,却发现没带现金,留下电话承诺归还 守诺与感恩 2022.06 浙江卷 为完成社区服务到救助站分发晚餐,面对真实的无家可归者克服偏见 诚信与责任 2025.06 新高考全国Ⅰ卷 面对考题争议与监考提醒,坚持诚实答题、按时交卷 诚信与自律 03 构思路线 ● 危机诱惑:先写“诱”。用环境、对话或细节,把那个让人动心的“捷径”或“两难”写实——是捡到的钱包、答应的事、还是考场的诱惑,让人欲罢不能。 ● 纠结坚守:再写“守”。把内心拉扯写足——利与义、情与理、面子与良心反复交锋,让人看见主人公如何在摇摆中选择不越线。 ● 诚信抉择:最后写“立”。让主人公以主动认错、守约还钱、坦白真相等行动作出回答,用一句点睛把“言出必行、人无信不立”说出来。 心理由动到守 · 行动由赚到舍 · 立意由利到义 04 避坑提醒 ● 不要把“诚信”写成“一念之间”的灵光一闪:诚信不是顿悟,而是经过反复纠结、多次摇摆后的主动选择,没有过程的坚守毫无分量。 ● 不要把“诱惑”写成“一眼看穿”:考验之所以动人,正在于主人公也曾心动、也曾侥幸、也曾想“就这一次没事”,把动摇写足,抉择才动人。 ● 不要把升华写成“诚信是人最重要的品质”式口号:感悟要从这一次的抉择里生长出来,落到“守约让我心安”“失信让我失去的更多”这样的具体体悟上。 招式谱·句型公式 Step 1 危机诱惑 · 起笔(遭遇两难 / 心生侥幸) 【本步任务】 用环境、对话或细节把“诱惑”立住:是捡到的钱包、是答应的约定、还是考场上的机会,让读者跟着主人公一起心动、一起侥幸。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 ________ lay right before me, and no one seemed to be watching. …就在我眼前,似乎没人看着(诱惑出现) A small voice inside urged me to ________, just this once. 心里一个声音怂恿我…,就这一次(心生侥幸) I knew I should ________, but the temptation was ________. 我知道应该…,可诱惑实在…(两难立住) 【高频例句】 1. (2024 新高考Ⅰ卷·Gunter 诚信还钱)我翻遍钱包,发现里头一分现金也没有。   2. (2022.06 浙江卷·帮助无家可归的人)我还从未见过这么多等着领食物的人,男女老少、各个国籍都有。   3. (2025.6 新高考Ⅰ卷·考场诚信)邻座的同学轻轻把答案往我这边推了推,监考老师却已转过身去。   4. (2024 新高考Ⅱ卷·妈妈的钱包)那只钱包就掉在长椅底下,看上去鼓鼓的,显然装了不少东西。   5. (2025 浙江卷首考·失而复得的约定)朋友临走前随口说“明天见”,可外面已经飘起了大雪。   6. (2026·北京海淀二模·捡到的钱包)一只鼓鼓的钱包躺在长椅上,四周空无一人。   7. (2026·湖南长沙二模·迟到的电影票)朋友打来电话让我马上过去,说好位置都帮我占好了。   8. (2026·浙江杭州二模·考试作弊)前桌偷偷把写满答案的小抄压在试卷下面,眼神还朝我扫了一下。   9. (2026·山东济宁二模·多出的零钱)店员多找了我二十块钱,我走出三步才发现。   10. (2026·湖北武汉二模·守时赴约)窗外大雨如注,妈妈让我别去了,可已经答应了奶奶。   11. (2026·江苏苏州二模·替同学保密)好友红着眼圈跑来,求我千万别把她考砸的事告诉爸妈。   12. (2026·广东深圳二模·归还捡到的手机)一部最新款的手机孤零零地躺在草地上,屏幕还亮着。   【情绪小词】 tempted(心动), hesitate(犹豫), guilty(心虚), panic(慌乱), a small voice inside(内心的小声音) Step 2 纠结坚守 · 拉扯(内心博弈 / 守住底线) 【本步任务】 把内心的拉扯写足——利与义、情与理、面子与良心反复交锋;让主人公摇摆、试探、几乎想放弃,最后才在某个瞬间决定守住底线。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 On one hand, ________; on the other hand, ________. 一边是…,另一边是…(两难对峙) I tossed and turned, asking myself whether I could really ________. 我翻来覆去地问自己,真的能…吗(内心纠结) In the end, the voice of ________ won, and I decided to ________. 最终,…的声音占了上风,我决定…(守住底线) 【高频例句】 1. (2024 新高考Ⅰ卷·Gunter 诚信还钱)我向冈特苦苦求情:“能让我下次再付吗?车钱我一定还!”   2. (2022.06 浙江卷·帮助无家可归的人)我害怕极了,第一次这么近地面对这么多无家可归的人。   3. (2025.6 新高考Ⅰ卷·考场诚信)我装作没看见,把目光死死锁在自己的试卷上。   4. (2024 新高考Ⅱ卷·妈妈的钱包)我蹲下身,捡起钱包,心里飞快地盘算着该怎么办。   5. (2025 浙江卷首考·失而复得的约定)我望着窗外纷飞的雪,心里却一直想着那个随口许下的“明天见”。   6. (2026·北京海淀二模·捡到的钱包)我伸手又缩回来,反复了三次,最终还是把钱包交给了失物招领处。   7. (2026·湖南长沙二模·迟到的电影票)我穿好鞋走到门口,又停下脚步——奶奶还一个人在家等着呢。   8. (2026·浙江杭州二模·考试作弊)我握紧笔,假装没看见前桌递过来的小抄。   9. (2026·山东济宁二模·多出的零钱)我犹豫着要不要回去说明,可那二十块够买一周的早餐。   10. (2026·湖北武汉二模·守时赴约)妈妈说:“你打个电话说一声就行。”我摇了摇头,还是出了门。   11. (2026·江苏苏州二模·替同学保密)我握着她的手答应下来,心里却一直在想:这真的对吗?   12. (2026·广东深圳二模·归还捡到的手机)我差点揣进书包,但屏幕上跳出的“妈妈”两个字让我停住了。   【情绪小词】 toss and turn(辗转反侧), wrestle with(挣扎), conscience(良心), on one hand / on the other(一方面…另一方面), in the end(最终) Step 3 诚信抉择 · 立题(主动践行 / 立信升华) 【本步任务】 让主人公以主动认错、守约还钱、坦白真相等行动作出回答;再用一句点睛之语把“言出必行、人无信不立”落到具体、可感的体悟上。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 Keeping my word, I ________, because a promise is a promise. 信守承诺,我…,因为承诺就是承诺(守约践行) ________ accepted my apology, and a wave of relief washed over me. …接受了我的歉意,一股释然涌上心头(主动认错) From then on I understood: ________ is the quiet cornerstone of trust. 从那以后我懂得:…是信任的沉默基石(立信升华) 【高频例句】 1. (2024 新高考Ⅰ卷·Gunter 诚信还钱)四天后我如约打去电话,冈特在下车的地方等我。   2. (2022.06 浙江卷·帮助无家可归的人)我把围裙重新系好,微笑着递出下一份晚餐。   3. (2025.6 新高考Ⅰ卷·考场诚信)交卷铃响,我最后一个停笔,试卷干干净净。   4. (2024 新高考Ⅱ卷·妈妈的钱包)我把钱包送到了社区服务台,工作人员连声道谢。   5. (2025 浙江卷首考·失而复得的约定)我踩着没膝深的雪走完全程,远远看见朋友在路口等我。   6. (2026·北京海淀二模·捡到的钱包)失主赶来时眼眶发红,连声说“谢谢”。   7. (2026·湖南长沙二模·迟到的电影票)我挂断电话,说:“我答应过奶奶,今天哪儿也不去。”   8. (2026·浙江杭州二模·考试作弊)我悄悄把小抄推了回去,告诉自己:这是对自己负责。   9. (2026·山东济宁二模·多出的零钱)我折返回去,把多出来的二十块钱放回了柜台上。   10. (2026·湖北武汉二模·守时赴约)奶奶打开门看到我,愣了一下,眼圈便红了。   11. (2026·江苏苏州二模·替同学保密)第二天我陪她一起去找父母,把事情原原本本说清楚。   12. (2026·广东深圳二模·归还捡到的手机)失主是个大男孩,激动得连鞠了三个躬。   【情绪小词】 keep one’s word(守约), relief(释然), trustworthy(值得信赖), conscience clear(问心无愧), a quiet cornerstone(沉默的基石) 高考场·真题拆解 2024 年 6 月新高考全国Ⅰ卷(诚信回报陌生司机相助) 【真题原文】 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard, but it was rejected. Then I tried my credit card, but that didn’t work either. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry.” 【续写两段首句】 Paragraph 1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【线索梳理】 赶车遇阻 → 求助司机 → 现金告罄 → 留下承诺 → 如约归还 → 立信升华 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 冈特一脸难以置信,问我该怎么办。   2. 我恳请他宽限几日:“我一定会还钱,请相信我。”   3. 我把名片和手表一起递给他作为抵押。   4. 我向他郑重承诺:“我一定说到做到。”   第二段 1. 四天后我如约打去电话,请他来机场接我。   2. 我把往返的车费连同一笔可观的小费一起递给他。   3. 他婉拒了小费,却欣然收下了我从布拉格带回的小纪念品。   4. 我们从此成为朋友,一直保持着联系。   风向标·模考速递 模拟题一 2026·北京海淀二模(捡到的钱包) It was a quiet Saturday afternoon. After finishing my homework, I walked to the park near my home to enjoy the warm sunshine. The park was almost empty, with only a few elderly people doing tai chi in the distance. I sat down on my favorite bench by the rose garden, took out my book, and began to read. Just as I turned to the second chapter, something black caught my eye, lying at the foot of the bench. I bent down and picked it up — it was a brown leather wallet, thick and clearly stuffed with cash and several cards. A driver’s license photo showed a middle-aged woman with kind eyes; her name was Wang Lin, and her address was just three blocks away from my home. My heart skipped a beat. A thick wallet, no one in sight, and the owner only a short walk away. A small voice inside whispered, “Just put it back where you found it — someone else will turn it in.” Another voice, the one my mother always warned me about, said, “No one saw you. You could keep it. There must be at least a few hundred yuan inside.” I closed my eyes, trying to calm my racing heart. The wallet felt heavy in my hands, as if it were a stone. I thought of the time I had lost my own school ID card — how worried Mom had been until a kind stranger handed it in at the school gate. I stood up, slipped the wallet into my schoolbag, and walked quickly toward the community service desk at the entrance of the neighborhood. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: When I pushed open the door of the service desk, a young volunteer smiled at me.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: A few days later, Wang Lin came to my school to find me.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 我深吸一口气,把钱包放在柜台上。   2. 我简单描述了捡到钱包的地点和时间。   3. 志愿者仔细核对了驾照信息,连声向我道谢。   4. 我走出服务大厅,午后的阳光暖暖地照在身上。   第二段 1. 她快步走过来,眼眶发红,连声说“谢谢”。   2. 她打开钱包,发现里头的现金和证件一样不少。   3. 她从钱包里抽出一张百元钞票,硬要塞到我手里。   4. 我婉言谢绝:“这是我应该做的。”   模拟题二 2026·浙江杭州二模(考试作弊的诱惑) It was the mid-term math exam. The classroom was deadly quiet except for the scratch of pens on paper. I had studied for this exam for two whole weeks, and most of the questions looked familiar — except for the last big one. The problem seemed to twist every formula I knew into something I couldn’t recognize. Five minutes passed. Ten. Sweat began to form on my forehead. I glanced at the clock above the blackboard and felt my stomach drop. Just then, the student in front of me, Wang Qiang, slowly reached under his paper. He slid a tiny cheat sheet out and placed it under his math textbook, clearly hoping to copy from it without being noticed. I froze. He was my best friend — we had played together since primary school. If I didn’t say anything, he might get a higher score and keep his promise to treat me to hotpot. If I did say something, he might lose face in front of the whole class — and our friendship might lose face too. My fingers tightened around my pen. The proctor was walking slowly along the windows, her back turned to Wang Qiang for just a moment. I stared at the cheat sheet, then at my own blank space for the last question. A small voice whispered, “Just this once. Look at one formula. No one will know.” I bit my lip so hard I tasted blood. The clock ticked loudly. Wang Qiang turned his head slightly, his eyes meeting mine for the briefest second. He gave me the tiniest nod. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: I gripped my pen tightly and made my decision.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: When the bell rang, Wang Qiang walked up to me in silence.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 我假装没看见,把目光锁回自己的试卷。   2. 我悄悄把小抄推了回去,心里七上八下。   3. 我告诉自己:这是对自己负责。   4. 监考老师转过身,朝我的方向看了一眼,我连忙低下头。   第二段 1. 王强走到我桌旁,一句话也不说。   2. 他低下头,过了很久才轻声说:“谢谢你没让我抄。”   3. 我说:“分数可以重考,诚信丢了就难找回来了。”   4. 走出考场,他拍了拍我的肩,那一拍比任何分数都重。   模拟题三 2026·湖北武汉二模(守时赴约) It was the last Saturday of October. The wind howled outside, and rain hammered the windows in heavy sheets. Inside, the house was warm and smelled of Mom’s hot chocolate. I was curled up on the sofa with a thick novel, the perfect end to a long week. Just then, my phone buzzed. It was a message from my best friend, Lin Wei: “Hey, remember we said we’d meet at the bookstore this afternoon to pick up your order? I’m already here. Where are you?” I stared at the message, my heart skipping a beat. We had made the plan a whole week ago — but that was before this storm had been forecast. I looked out of the window. The rain was coming down so hard I could barely see the houses across the street. Mom walked over with a cup of cocoa and said gently, “Just call her and tell her you won’t go. No one would blame you in this weather.” But I knew Lin Wei. She had taken the bus across town in this weather, just to keep her promise to me. If I cancelled now, she would be standing alone at the bookstore in the cold, waiting for someone who never showed up. I thought of the time she had walked twenty minutes in the snow to return a library book I had left at her place — she hadn’t even told me until later. I put down the cocoa, walked to the hallway, and picked up my umbrella. Mom stared at me in disbelief. “You’re really going?” she asked. I nodded. “I promised her,” I said quietly. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: I stepped out into the storm, umbrella in hand.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: When I reached the bookstore, Lin Wei was waiting under the awning.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 风把伞吹得东倒西歪,我一步步顶风向前。   2. 雨水打湿了我的裤腿,可我心里却出奇地平静。   3. 我忽然想起林薇常说的那句话:答应别人的事就要做到。   4. 书报亭的灯光远远地在雨幕里亮起来。   第二段 1. 林薇踮起脚朝我挥手,脸上全是惊喜。   2. “我以为你不会来了!”她笑着说,眼眶却有点红。   3. 她递给我一杯还冒着热气的奶茶。   4. 那一刻我知道:守约,是我送给她最好的礼物。   1 / 19 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 第19讲 诚实守信类(故事构造三部曲)(解析版) 内容导航 01 破题式·故事骨架 故事分析 · 构思蓝图 02 招式谱·句型公式 按步取句 / 拿来即用 03 高考场·真题拆解 高考原题+技法讲解 04 风向标·模考速递 最新模考 · 同题材范文与金句 破题式·故事骨架 01 主题画像 诚实守信类故事,以“我”在道德两难面前的真实考量为轴线:往往从一个“看似两全”的捷径起笔——也许是捡到的钱包、答应的约定、考试中的诱惑、或是答应保守的秘密;随后“我”陷入内心的纠结与博弈,在利与义、情与理之间反复掂量;结尾处主人公以主动认错、守约、还钱、坦白等行动作出回答,让“言出必行”“人无信不立”的主题稳稳落住。简言之:诚实守信类故事 = 一场“由诱惑到坚守、由坚守到立信”的良知回归。 02 真题回眸 年份 卷别 故事梗概 情感落点 2024.06 新高考全国Ⅰ卷 维也纳遇司机 Gunter 帮忙赶到车站,却发现没带现金,留下电话承诺归还 守诺与感恩 2022.06 浙江卷 为完成社区服务到救助站分发晚餐,面对真实的无家可归者克服偏见 诚信与责任 2025.06 新高考全国Ⅰ卷 面对考题争议与监考提醒,坚持诚实答题、按时交卷 诚信与自律 03 构思路线 ● 危机诱惑:先写“诱”。用环境、对话或细节,把那个让人动心的“捷径”或“两难”写实——是捡到的钱包、答应的事、还是考场的诱惑,让人欲罢不能。 ● 纠结坚守:再写“守”。把内心拉扯写足——利与义、情与理、面子与良心反复交锋,让人看见主人公如何在摇摆中选择不越线。 ● 诚信抉择:最后写“立”。让主人公以主动认错、守约还钱、坦白真相等行动作出回答,用一句点睛把“言出必行、人无信不立”说出来。 心理由动到守 · 行动由赚到舍 · 立意由利到义 04 避坑提醒 ● 不要把“诚信”写成“一念之间”的灵光一闪:诚信不是顿悟,而是经过反复纠结、多次摇摆后的主动选择,没有过程的坚守毫无分量。 ● 不要把“诱惑”写成“一眼看穿”:考验之所以动人,正在于主人公也曾心动、也曾侥幸、也曾想“就这一次没事”,把动摇写足,抉择才动人。 ● 不要把升华写成“诚信是人最重要的品质”式口号:感悟要从这一次的抉择里生长出来,落到“守约让我心安”“失信让我失去的更多”这样的具体体悟上。 招式谱·句型公式 Step 1 危机诱惑 · 起笔(遭遇两难 / 心生侥幸) 【本步任务】 用环境、对话或细节把“诱惑”立住:是捡到的钱包、是答应的约定、还是考场上的机会,让读者跟着主人公一起心动、一起侥幸。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 ________ lay right before me, and no one seemed to be watching. …就在我眼前,似乎没人看着(诱惑出现) A small voice inside urged me to ________, just this once. 心里一个声音怂恿我…,就这一次(心生侥幸) I knew I should ________, but the temptation was ________. 我知道应该…,可诱惑实在…(两难立住) 【高频例句】 1. (2024 新高考Ⅰ卷·Gunter 诚信还钱)我翻遍钱包,发现里头一分现金也没有。 I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. 2. (2022.06 浙江卷·帮助无家可归的人)我还从未见过这么多等着领食物的人,男女老少、各个国籍都有。 I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. 3. (2025.6 新高考Ⅰ卷·考场诚信)邻座的同学轻轻把答案往我这边推了推,监考老师却已转过身去。 The student beside me slid the answer sheet my way as the proctor turned her back. 4. (2024 新高考Ⅱ卷·妈妈的钱包)那只钱包就掉在长椅底下,看上去鼓鼓的,显然装了不少东西。 The wallet had fallen under the bench, looking thick and full of cash. 5. (2025 浙江卷首考·失而复得的约定)朋友临走前随口说“明天见”,可外面已经飘起了大雪。 My friend casually said, “See you tomorrow,” as heavy snow began to fall outside. 6. (2026·北京海淀二模·捡到的钱包)一只鼓鼓的钱包躺在长椅上,四周空无一人。 A thick wallet lay on the bench, with not a soul in sight around. 7. (2026·湖南长沙二模·迟到的电影票)朋友打来电话让我马上过去,说好位置都帮我占好了。 My friend called, urging me to come at once — seats were saved for me, they said. 8. (2026·浙江杭州二模·考试作弊)前桌偷偷把写满答案的小抄压在试卷下面,眼神还朝我扫了一下。 The student in front slipped a cheat sheet under his paper and glanced my way. 9. (2026·山东济宁二模·多出的零钱)店员多找了我二十块钱,我走出三步才发现。 The cashier had given me twenty yuan too much, and I only noticed after three steps. 10. (2026·湖北武汉二模·守时赴约)窗外大雨如注,妈妈让我别去了,可已经答应了奶奶。 Rain poured down outside, and Mom urged me to stay — but I had promised Grandma. 11. (2026·江苏苏州二模·替同学保密)好友红着眼圈跑来,求我千万别把她考砸的事告诉爸妈。 My best friend came to me with red eyes, begging me not to tell her parents about her bad grade. 12. (2026·广东深圳二模·归还捡到的手机)一部最新款的手机孤零零地躺在草地上,屏幕还亮着。 A brand-new phone lay alone on the grass, its screen still glowing. 【情绪小词】 tempted(心动), hesitate(犹豫), guilty(心虚), panic(慌乱), a small voice inside(内心的小声音) Step 2 纠结坚守 · 拉扯(内心博弈 / 守住底线) 【本步任务】 把内心的拉扯写足——利与义、情与理、面子与良心反复交锋;让主人公摇摆、试探、几乎想放弃,最后才在某个瞬间决定守住底线。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 On one hand, ________; on the other hand, ________. 一边是…,另一边是…(两难对峙) I tossed and turned, asking myself whether I could really ________. 我翻来覆去地问自己,真的能…吗(内心纠结) In the end, the voice of ________ won, and I decided to ________. 最终,…的声音占了上风,我决定…(守住底线) 【高频例句】 1. (2024 新高考Ⅰ卷·Gunter 诚信还钱)我向冈特苦苦求情:“能让我下次再付吗?车钱我一定还!” I begged him for a delayed payment, promising that I would call him and return the money. 2. (2022.06 浙江卷·帮助无家可归的人)我害怕极了,第一次这么近地面对这么多无家可归的人。 I got a little scared. I’d come face to face with the homeless: how should I act? 3. (2025.6 新高考Ⅰ卷·考场诚信)我装作没看见,把目光死死锁在自己的试卷上。 I pretended not to notice, fixing my eyes firmly on my own paper. 4. (2024 新高考Ⅱ卷·妈妈的钱包)我蹲下身,捡起钱包,心里飞快地盘算着该怎么办。 I bent down and picked up the wallet, my mind racing to decide what to do. 5. (2025 浙江卷首考·失而复得的约定)我望着窗外纷飞的雪,心里却一直想着那个随口许下的“明天见”。 I stared at the swirling snow outside, but the casual “see you tomorrow” kept ringing in my mind. 6. (2026·北京海淀二模·捡到的钱包)我伸手又缩回来,反复了三次,最终还是把钱包交给了失物招领处。 I reached out and pulled my hand back three times, before finally handing the wallet to the Lost and Found. 7. (2026·湖南长沙二模·迟到的电影票)我穿好鞋走到门口,又停下脚步——奶奶还一个人在家等着呢。 I put on my shoes and reached the door, then stopped — Grandma was still waiting for me at home. 8. (2026·浙江杭州二模·考试作弊)我握紧笔,假装没看见前桌递过来的小抄。 I gripped my pen and pretended not to see the cheat sheet slid my way. 9. (2026·山东济宁二模·多出的零钱)我犹豫着要不要回去说明,可那二十块够买一周的早餐。 I hesitated whether to go back and explain — but twenty yuan was a week’s breakfast. 10. (2026·湖北武汉二模·守时赴约)妈妈说:“你打个电话说一声就行。”我摇了摇头,还是出了门。 “Just give her a call,” Mom said. I shook my head and walked out anyway. 11. (2026·江苏苏州二模·替同学保密)我握着她的手答应下来,心里却一直在想:这真的对吗? I held her hand and promised, though a small voice kept asking: is this really the right thing? 12. (2026·广东深圳二模·归还捡到的手机)我差点揣进书包,但屏幕上跳出的“妈妈”两个字让我停住了。 I almost slipped it into my bag, but the word “Mom” flashing on the screen stopped me cold. 【情绪小词】 toss and turn(辗转反侧), wrestle with(挣扎), conscience(良心), on one hand / on the other(一方面…另一方面), in the end(最终) Step 3 诚信抉择 · 立题(主动践行 / 立信升华) 【本步任务】 让主人公以主动认错、守约还钱、坦白真相等行动作出回答;再用一句点睛之语把“言出必行、人无信不立”落到具体、可感的体悟上。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 Keeping my word, I ________, because a promise is a promise. 信守承诺,我…,因为承诺就是承诺(守约践行) ________ accepted my apology, and a wave of relief washed over me. …接受了我的歉意,一股释然涌上心头(主动认错) From then on I understood: ________ is the quiet cornerstone of trust. 从那以后我懂得:…是信任的沉默基石(立信升华) 【高频例句】 1. (2024 新高考Ⅰ卷·Gunter 诚信还钱)四天后我如约打去电话,冈特在下车的地方等我。 Four days later, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off. 2. (2022.06 浙江卷·帮助无家可归的人)我把围裙重新系好,微笑着递出下一份晚餐。 I tied my apron back on, smiling as I handed out the next meal. 3. (2025.6 新高考Ⅰ卷·考场诚信)交卷铃响,我最后一个停笔,试卷干干净净。 When the bell rang, I was the last to put down my pen, with a clean paper to show. 4. (2024 新高考Ⅱ卷·妈妈的钱包)我把钱包送到了社区服务台,工作人员连声道谢。 I turned the wallet in at the community desk, where the staff thanked me again and again. 5. (2025 浙江卷首考·失而复得的约定)我踩着没膝深的雪走完全程,远远看见朋友在路口等我。 I trudged through knee-deep snow to the end, and there stood my friend waiting at the corner. 6. (2026·北京海淀二模·捡到的钱包)失主赶来时眼眶发红,连声说“谢谢”。 When the owner rushed over, her eyes were red and she kept saying, “Thank you.” 7. (2026·湖南长沙二模·迟到的电影票)我挂断电话,说:“我答应过奶奶,今天哪儿也不去。” I hung up and said, “I promised Grandma I wouldn’t go anywhere today.” 8. (2026·浙江杭州二模·考试作弊)我悄悄把小抄推了回去,告诉自己:这是对自己负责。 I quietly slid the cheat sheet back, telling myself: this is how I answer to myself. 9. (2026·山东济宁二模·多出的零钱)我折返回去,把多出来的二十块钱放回了柜台上。 I walked all the way back and put the twenty yuan on the counter. 10. (2026·湖北武汉二模·守时赴约)奶奶打开门看到我,愣了一下,眼圈便红了。 When Grandma opened the door and saw me, she paused — then her eyes went red. 11. (2026·江苏苏州二模·替同学保密)第二天我陪她一起去找父母,把事情原原本本说清楚。 The next day I went with her to face her parents, telling the whole truth from start to finish. 12. (2026·广东深圳二模·归还捡到的手机)失主是个大男孩,激动得连鞠了三个躬。 The owner was a big boy, so excited that he bowed three times in a row. 【情绪小词】 keep one’s word(守约), relief(释然), trustworthy(值得信赖), conscience clear(问心无愧), a quiet cornerstone(沉默的基石) 高考场·真题拆解 2024 年 6 月新高考全国Ⅰ卷(诚信回报陌生司机相助) 【真题原文】 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard, but it was rejected. Then I tried my credit card, but that didn’t work either. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry.” 【续写两段首句】 Paragraph 1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.     Paragraph 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.       【参考译文】诚信回报陌生司机相助 九月一个阴冷、潮湿又难忘的夜晚,我遇见了冈特。我原计划飞往维也纳,再转乘大巴去布拉格开会。因一场大风暴,航班延误了一个半小时。我落地维也纳时,离开往布拉格的末班大巴出发只剩 30 分钟。我一下飞机便疯狂地穿过航站楼,一头钻进排队里的第一辆出租车,毫不犹豫。 就这样,我遇见了冈特。我告诉他我要去哪儿,可他说没听说过那个车站。我以为是自己的发音有问题,便放慢语速再解释一遍,可他还是一脸困惑。快要放弃时,冈特掏出他的小手机,给一位朋友打了电话。一番激烈的讨论仿佛持续了一个世纪,冈特终于放下手机,发动了车子。 最后,踩着仅剩的两分钟,我们开进了车站。谢天谢地,等着上车的人还排着长长的队。冈特把车停在大巴后面,转过头对我露出大大的笑容:“我们赶上了。” 就在这时,我翻遍钱包,发现里头一分现金也没有。我朝他抱歉地笑了笑,掏出葡萄牙的银行卡,可被拒绝了;又试了信用卡,也不行。这时,冈特指了指车站的候车大厅——入口处就有一台取款机。我跳下车,狂奔过去,把卡插进去,屏幕上却跳出一行字:“故障,抱歉。” 【线索梳理】 赶车遇阻 → 求助司机 → 现金告罄 → 留下承诺 → 如约归还 → 立信升华 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 冈特一脸难以置信,问我该怎么办。 He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. 2. 我恳请他宽限几日:“我一定会还钱,请相信我。” I begged him for a delayed payment, asking him to trust that I would pay him back. 3. 我把名片和手表一起递给他作为抵押。 I handed him my business card together with my watch as a pledge. 4. 我向他郑重承诺:“我一定说到做到。” I made him a firm promise, saying I would keep my word. 第二段 1. 四天后我如约打去电话,请他来机场接我。 Four days later, I called Gunter as promised, asking him to pick me up at the airport. 2. 我把往返的车费连同一笔可观的小费一起递给他。 I paid him for the round-trip ride, along with a generous tip. 3. 他婉拒了小费,却欣然收下了我从布拉格带回的小纪念品。 He turned down the tip but happily accepted the little souvenir I had brought from Prague. 4. 我们从此成为朋友,一直保持着联系。 We became good friends from then on and have kept in touch ever since. 【范文】 Paragraph 1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference — it is so important that I cannot afford to miss it!” I explained. “May I have your phone number? I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word — or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch together with my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but politely rejected the watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Just keep your promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure. Paragraph 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I also gave him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述作者九月出差途中遇风暴延误航班,在维也纳机场匆忙上了一辆出租车,请求陌生的司机 Gunter 帮忙赶去车站;途中发现钱包里没现金,银行卡也用不了,好不容易到了车站才发现取款机故障。作者恳请司机宽限,留下电话与名片承诺归还,最终顺利登上末班车;四天后回到维也纳如约致电、还钱并致谢,两人成为好友,凸显“言出必行、人无信不立”的主题。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 提示写作者在发现取款机故障后如何向冈特致歉、恳请宽限、留下电话与承诺、并最终赶上末班车的过程。② 第二段首句 Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. 提示写作者如约致电、还钱、致谢并建立友谊的场景,落到“守诺让我心安”的感悟。 【续写线索】赶车遇阻 → 现金告罄 → 恳请宽限 → 留下承诺 → 如约归还 → 立信升华 【词汇激活】动作类:beg sb. for a delayed payment(恳请延期), hand over one’s business card(递上名片), keep one’s word(信守承诺), pay for the round-trip ride(支付往返车费);情绪类:in disbelief(难以置信地), gratitude(感激), blessed(受祝福的), delighted(欣喜的)。 【点睛】Just keep your promise, Sir. 一句收束全文:一句最朴素的叮嘱,胜过千言万语——信守承诺,是陌生人之间最珍贵的信任基石。 风向标·模考速递 模拟题一 2026·北京海淀二模(捡到的钱包) It was a quiet Saturday afternoon. After finishing my homework, I walked to the park near my home to enjoy the warm sunshine. The park was almost empty, with only a few elderly people doing tai chi in the distance. I sat down on my favorite bench by the rose garden, took out my book, and began to read. Just as I turned to the second chapter, something black caught my eye, lying at the foot of the bench. I bent down and picked it up — it was a brown leather wallet, thick and clearly stuffed with cash and several cards. A driver’s license photo showed a middle-aged woman with kind eyes; her name was Wang Lin, and her address was just three blocks away from my home. My heart skipped a beat. A thick wallet, no one in sight, and the owner only a short walk away. A small voice inside whispered, “Just put it back where you found it — someone else will turn it in.” Another voice, the one my mother always warned me about, said, “No one saw you. You could keep it. There must be at least a few hundred yuan inside.” I closed my eyes, trying to calm my racing heart. The wallet felt heavy in my hands, as if it were a stone. I thought of the time I had lost my own school ID card — how worried Mom had been until a kind stranger handed it in at the school gate. I stood up, slipped the wallet into my schoolbag, and walked quickly toward the community service desk at the entrance of the neighborhood. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: When I pushed open the door of the service desk, a young volunteer smiled at me. Paragraph 2: A few days later, Wang Lin came to my school to find me. 【参考译文】那是一个安静的周六下午。写完作业,我走到家附近的公园,享受温暖的阳光。公园里几乎没什么人,只有几位老人在远处打太极。我在玫瑰园旁最喜欢的那条长椅上坐下,拿出书开始读。 刚翻到第二章,一个黑色的东西落入我的视线——就在长椅脚下。我弯腰捡起来:是一只棕色皮钱包,鼓鼓的,显然装了不少现金和几张卡。驾照上的照片是一位眼神慈爱的中年妇女,名叫王琳,地址离我家只有三条街。 我心里咯噔一下。鼓鼓的钱包,周围没人,失主又只有几步之遥。心里一个小声音嘀咕:“把它放回原位——别人会送交的。”可另一个声音——妈妈常提醒我的那个——说:“没人看见,你可以留着,里面至少有几百块。” 我闭上眼睛,想让狂跳的心平静下来。钱包在手中沉甸甸的,仿佛一块石头。我想起自己曾丢过校园卡——一个好心人在校门口交还,妈妈才放下了心。我站起身,把钱包塞进书包,快步走向小区入口的社区服务台。 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 我深吸一口气,把钱包放在柜台上。 I took a deep breath and set the wallet down on the counter. 2. 我简单描述了捡到钱包的地点和时间。 I briefly described the place and time where I had found it. 3. 志愿者仔细核对了驾照信息,连声向我道谢。 The volunteer carefully checked the driver’s license and thanked me again and again. 4. 我走出服务大厅,午后的阳光暖暖地照在身上。 I stepped out of the service hall, the warm afternoon sunlight falling gently on my shoulders. 第二段 1. 她快步走过来,眼眶发红,连声说“谢谢”。 She hurried over, her eyes red, repeating “thank you” over and over. 2. 她打开钱包,发现里头的现金和证件一样不少。 She opened the wallet and found every bill and card still inside. 3. 她从钱包里抽出一张百元钞票,硬要塞到我手里。 She pulled out a hundred-yuan note from the wallet and insisted on pressing it into my hand. 4. 我婉言谢绝:“这是我应该做的。” I declined politely, saying, “It’s just what I should do.” 【范文】 Paragraph 1: When I pushed open the door of the service desk, a young volunteer smiled at me. I took a deep breath and set the wallet down on the counter, briefly describing the place and time where I had found it. The volunteer carefully checked the driver’s license information and thanked me again and again. Before I left, she asked for my name and my school so that the owner could thank me properly. I gave her my name, then stepped out of the service hall, the warm afternoon sunlight falling gently on my shoulders. A quiet sense of relief washed over me — a small voice inside told me I had made the right choice. Paragraph 2: A few days later, Wang Lin came to my school to find me. She hurried over, her eyes red, repeating “thank you” over and over. She opened the wallet and found every bill and card still inside. Then she pulled out a hundred-yuan note and insisted on pressing it into my hand. I declined politely, saying, “It’s just what I should do.” She looked at me for a long moment, then smiled and said, “You’ve reminded me that there are still honest people in this world.” Walking her to the school gate, I felt a quiet pride settle in my chest — the small choice I had made on that bench had come to mean so much more. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述主人公周末在公园长椅下捡到一个鼓鼓的钱包,看到驾照照片后知道失主就住在附近;面对“没人看见,可以私吞”的诱惑,主人公想起自己曾丢过校园卡、被陌生人送回的经历,最终把钱包送到了小区服务台。几天后失主王琳赶到学校道谢并要酬谢,被主人公婉拒。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 When I pushed open the door of the service desk, a young volunteer smiled at me. 提示写主人公把钱包交给志愿者、留下姓名学校的细节,并写出如释重负的感受。② 第二段首句 A few days later, Wang Lin came to my school to find me. 提示写失主登门道谢、主人公婉拒酬金、感悟升华的过程。 【续写线索】发现钱包 → 内心拉扯 → 想起自己被帮 → 送交服务台 → 如释重负 → 失主上门 → 婉拒酬金 → 立信升华 【词汇激活】动作类:set sth. down on the counter(把…放到柜台上), decline politely(婉拒), press sth. into one’s hand(把…塞到手里);情绪类:a small voice inside(内心的小声音), relief(如释重负), quiet pride(淡淡的骄傲)。 【点睛】You’ve reminded me that there are still honest people in this world. 点明主旨:诚信最动人的回报,不是酬金,而是对方重新看见这个世界的好。 模拟题二 2026·浙江杭州二模(考试作弊的诱惑) It was the mid-term math exam. The classroom was deadly quiet except for the scratch of pens on paper. I had studied for this exam for two whole weeks, and most of the questions looked familiar — except for the last big one. The problem seemed to twist every formula I knew into something I couldn’t recognize. Five minutes passed. Ten. Sweat began to form on my forehead. I glanced at the clock above the blackboard and felt my stomach drop. Just then, the student in front of me, Wang Qiang, slowly reached under his paper. He slid a tiny cheat sheet out and placed it under his math textbook, clearly hoping to copy from it without being noticed. I froze. He was my best friend — we had played together since primary school. If I didn’t say anything, he might get a higher score and keep his promise to treat me to hotpot. If I did say something, he might lose face in front of the whole class — and our friendship might lose face too. My fingers tightened around my pen. The proctor was walking slowly along the windows, her back turned to Wang Qiang for just a moment. I stared at the cheat sheet, then at my own blank space for the last question. A small voice whispered, “Just this once. Look at one formula. No one will know.” I bit my lip so hard I tasted blood. The clock ticked loudly. Wang Qiang turned his head slightly, his eyes meeting mine for the briefest second. He gave me the tiniest nod. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: I gripped my pen tightly and made my decision. Paragraph 2: When the bell rang, Wang Qiang walked up to me in silence. 【参考译文】那是期中数学考试。教室里死一般安静,只有笔尖在纸上沙沙作响。我为这次考试整整准备了两周,大部分题目看上去都很熟悉——除了最后那道大题。它似乎把我所知道的公式都拧成了一个我认不出的样子。 五分钟过去了,十分钟。我的额头开始冒汗。我抬头看了一眼黑板上方的钟,心猛地一沉。就在这时,前排的王强慢慢把手伸到试卷下面。他悄悄抽出一张小抄压在数学书下,显然想趁没人注意抄几眼。 我呆住了。他是我最好的朋友——我们从小学就一起玩。如果我什么都不说,他也许能拿更高分,兑现请我吃火锅的承诺;如果我说了,他会在全班面前丢脸——我们的友谊也可能因此尴尬。 我攥紧了手中的笔。监考老师正沿着窗户慢慢走动,背对着王强,只有这一会儿。我盯着那张小抄,又看了看自己最后一题的空白。一个小声音嘀咕着:“就这一次,看一眼公式,没人会知道。” 我狠狠咬住嘴唇,咬出了血腥味。钟滴答响着。王强微微转过头,眼睛与我只对视了不到一秒,给了我一个极轻微的点头。 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 我假装没看见,把目光锁回自己的试卷。 I pretended not to notice, fixing my eyes firmly back on my own paper. 2. 我悄悄把小抄推了回去,心里七上八下。 I quietly slid the cheat sheet back, my heart pounding with doubt. 3. 我告诉自己:这是对自己负责。 I told myself: this is how I answer to myself. 4. 监考老师转过身,朝我的方向看了一眼,我连忙低下头。 The proctor turned and glanced my way, and I quickly lowered my head. 第二段 1. 王强走到我桌旁,一句话也不说。 Wang Qiang walked up to my desk and said nothing. 2. 他低下头,过了很久才轻声说:“谢谢你没让我抄。” He lowered his head, and after a long pause said softly, “Thank you for not letting me cheat.” 3. 我说:“分数可以重考,诚信丢了就难找回来了。” I said, “You can always retake a test, but once you lose your honesty, it’s hard to get back.” 4. 走出考场,他拍了拍我的肩,那一拍比任何分数都重。 Walking out of the classroom, he patted my shoulder — and that pat meant more than any score. 【范文】 Paragraph 1: I gripped my pen tightly and made my decision. I pretended not to notice, fixing my eyes firmly back on my own paper. Then, while the proctor was still facing the window, I quietly slid the cheat sheet back to Wang Qiang’s side, my heart pounding with doubt. My fingers were trembling, but a small voice inside kept saying, this is how I answer to myself. When the proctor turned and glanced my way, I quickly lowered my head, pretending to be deep in thought over the last question. I could feel Wang Qiang staring at me from the corner of his eye, but I did not look up again. Paragraph 2: When the bell rang, Wang Qiang walked up to me in silence. He lowered his head, and after a long pause said softly, “Thank you for not letting me cheat.” I said, “You can always retake a test, but once you lose your honesty, it’s hard to get back.” Walking out of the classroom, he patted my shoulder — and that pat meant more than any score. We had kept our friendship, but more importantly, we had both kept our word to ourselves. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述主人公在期中数学考场上遇到难题时,发现好朋友王强偷偷拿出了小抄;一边是友情与面子,一边是诚信与底线,主人公经历了强烈的内心拉扯;最终他选择悄悄把小抄推回,并继续作答。交卷铃声响起后,王强主动走来感谢他的“不帮忙”,让主人公体会到“分数可重考、诚信丢了难找回”的真切体悟。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 I gripped my pen tightly and made my decision. 提示写主人公如何在小抄与自己的空白卷之间做出选择——拒绝抄、并把小抄推回。② 第二段首句 When the bell rang, Wang Qiang walked up to me in silence. 提示写王强主动走来道谢、两人关于诚信的对话,以及友情和诚信的双重升华。 【续写线索】遇到难题 → 发现小抄 → 友情与诚信两难 → 拒绝并推回 → 继续作答 → 王强道谢 → 友情与诚信双赢 【词汇激活】动作类:grip one’s pen(握紧笔), slide sth. back(把…推回), lower one’s head(低下头), pat one’s shoulder(拍肩膀);情绪类:doubt(犹豫), trembling(颤抖的), silence(沉默), gratitude(感激)。 【点睛】You can always retake a test, but once you lose your honesty, it’s hard to get back. 点明主旨:诚信不能用成绩来换,也比任何一次分数都更值得被守护。 模拟题三 2026·湖北武汉二模(守时赴约) It was the last Saturday of October. The wind howled outside, and rain hammered the windows in heavy sheets. Inside, the house was warm and smelled of Mom’s hot chocolate. I was curled up on the sofa with a thick novel, the perfect end to a long week. Just then, my phone buzzed. It was a message from my best friend, Lin Wei: “Hey, remember we said we’d meet at the bookstore this afternoon to pick up your order? I’m already here. Where are you?” I stared at the message, my heart skipping a beat. We had made the plan a whole week ago — but that was before this storm had been forecast. I looked out of the window. The rain was coming down so hard I could barely see the houses across the street. Mom walked over with a cup of cocoa and said gently, “Just call her and tell her you won’t go. No one would blame you in this weather.” But I knew Lin Wei. She had taken the bus across town in this weather, just to keep her promise to me. If I cancelled now, she would be standing alone at the bookstore in the cold, waiting for someone who never showed up. I thought of the time she had walked twenty minutes in the snow to return a library book I had left at her place — she hadn’t even told me until later. I put down the cocoa, walked to the hallway, and picked up my umbrella. Mom stared at me in disbelief. “You’re really going?” she asked. I nodded. “I promised her,” I said quietly. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: I stepped out into the storm, umbrella in hand. Paragraph 2: When I reached the bookstore, Lin Wei was waiting under the awning. 【参考译文】那是十月的最后一个周六。外面狂风呼啸,大雨如注砸在窗上。屋里却很温暖,飘着妈妈热可可的香气。我蜷在沙发上翻着一本厚厚的书,一个漫长周末的完美收尾。 就在这时,手机震了一下。是我最好的朋友林薇发来的:“嘿,还记得我们说好今天下午在书店见、帮你取预订的书吗?我已经到啦,你呢?”我盯着这条消息,心咯噔了一下。这个约定是一周前就定下的——只是那时还没预报这场暴风雨。 我望向窗外。雨下得那么大,我几乎看不清街对面的房子。她端着一杯可可轻轻劝我:“给她打个电话说不去了吧,这种天气没人会怪你的。” 可我了解林薇。她冒着这种天气坐公交穿过整个城,就是为了对我守信。如果我现在取消,她就会在大冷天独自站在书店里,等一个根本不会出现的人。我想起她曾在大雪里走了二十分钟,只为把我落在她家的那本图书馆的书还给我——她后来才告诉我这件事。 我放下可可,走进门厅,拿起伞。妈妈一脸不可思议地看着我:“你真的要去?”我点点头,轻声说:“我答应过她。” 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 风把伞吹得东倒西歪,我一步步顶风向前。 The wind turned my umbrella inside out as I pushed forward step by step. 2. 雨水打湿了我的裤腿,可我心里却出奇地平静。 The rain soaked my trouser legs, but a strange calm settled in my heart. 3. 我忽然想起林薇常说的那句话:答应别人的事就要做到。 I suddenly remembered Lin Wei’s favorite saying: if you promise, you deliver. 4. 书报亭的灯光远远地在雨幕里亮起来。 The glow of the bookstore lights appeared faintly through the sheets of rain. 第二段 1. 林薇踮起脚朝我挥手,脸上全是惊喜。 Lin Wei waved at me on tiptoe, her face full of surprise. 2. “我以为你不会来了!”她笑着说,眼眶却有点红。 “I thought you wouldn’t come!” she laughed, though her eyes were a little red. 3. 她递给我一杯还冒着热气的奶茶。 She handed me a cup of milk tea, still steaming hot. 4. 那一刻我知道:守约,是我送给她最好的礼物。 In that moment, I knew: keeping my word was the best gift I could give her. 【范文】 Paragraph 1: I stepped out into the storm, umbrella in hand. The wind turned my umbrella inside out as I pushed forward step by step, my shoes sloshing through the rising puddles. The rain soaked my trouser legs, but a strange calm settled in my heart. I suddenly remembered Lin Wei’s favorite saying: if you promise, you deliver. Halfway there, my phone buzzed again — “Forget it, just stay home,” her message read. But I knew she was the kind of friend who would never really mean that. So I kept walking. The glow of the bookstore lights appeared faintly through the sheets of rain, and I quickened my pace. Paragraph 2: When I reached the bookstore, Lin Wei was waiting under the awning. She waved at me on tiptoe, her face full of surprise. “I thought you wouldn’t come!” she laughed, though her eyes were a little red. She handed me a cup of milk tea, still steaming hot, and pulled out a thick novel from her bag — the one she had come all this way to pick up for me. We walked into the warm bookstore together, the storm still howling outside. In that moment, I knew: keeping my word was the best gift I could give her, and her patience the best gift she could give me. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述十月的最后一个周末狂风大雨,“我”本想窝在家里看书、喝热可可;可想起一周前与好朋友林薇相约去书店取书的约定,她已经冒雨赶到书店等着;妈妈劝“我”打电话取消,“我”却想起林薇曾在雪天走二十分钟只为归还图书馆的书,毅然撑伞出门。一路顶风冒雨,最终在书店与林薇相见,守约换来彼此的温暖。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 I stepped out into the storm, umbrella in hand. 提示写主人公顶风冒雨赶路的全过程——伞被吹翻、裤腿湿透、半路收到林薇“别来了”的消息、却仍坚持前行。② 第二段首句 When I reached the bookstore, Lin Wei was waiting under the awning. 提示写与林薇相见、递奶茶、一起走进书店,以及“守约是最好的礼物”的感悟升华。 【续写线索】答应之约 → 天气突变 → 妈妈劝阻 → 撑伞出门 → 顶风冒雨 → 书店相见 → 守约升华 【词汇激活】动作类:step out into the storm(冲进暴风雨), push forward(迎难而上), wave at sb.(向某人挥手), hand sb. a cup of(递一杯…给某人);情绪类:a strange calm(出奇的平静), surprise(惊喜), the best gift(最好的礼物)。 【点睛】keeping my word was the best gift I could give her, and her patience the best gift she could give me. 点明主旨:守约不是轰轰烈烈,而是在暴风雨里一步步走向那个等你的人。 1 / 19 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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