第13讲 读后续写：如何表达愤怒背默与仿写（词-句-文）（复习讲练）（通用版）2027年高考英语一轮复习读后续写高分突破

**基本信息** 以“词-句-文”分层训练为核心，系统构建“愤怒”情感表达的语料库与句式技法，通过考情分析、能力图谱、分型实训及真题临摹形成完整备考闭环。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |风向标·命题地图|考情分析+趋势预判|提炼高考心理描写高频考点|从命题规律反推能力需求| |全景图·能力图谱|10年真题表格|构建“主题-心理轨迹-能力”对应模型|通过真题归纳情感表达考查逻辑| |笔法堂·技法精修|3技法（词汇/语块/佳句）|初高阶语料分级+复杂句式（无灵主语等）|从基础词汇到高阶句式递进| |工坊间·分型实训|4题型（单句/一句多译等）|翻译训练与句式变式结合|由单句到段落综合应用技法| |高考场·真题临摹|3道真题（含2026浙江卷）|情感轨迹分析+范文评析|对接高考实战，实现方法迁移|

第13讲 读后续写：如何表达愤怒背默与仿写(词-句-文)(复习讲练) 内容导航 01 风向标·命题地图 考情分析+趋势预判 02 全景图·能力图谱 思维导图/表格+能力体系呈现 03 笔法堂·技法精修 核心技法讲解（分技法点） 技法一 “愤怒”类词汇语料 技法二 “愤怒”类语块语料 技法三 “愤怒”类佳句语料（无灵主语、非谓语、倒装句、修辞） 04 工坊间·分型实训 分型考法训练（含例题+变式） 一、单句翻译 二、一句多译(他是如此生气以至于摔上了门离开了。吉姆满腔愤怒，气得一句话也说不出来。) 三、情景翻译 四、段落翻译 05 高考场·真题临摹 高考真题精讲+范文评析 2026年浙江1月卷 故事情节：周六早晨，作者为在女儿艾玛面前树立“英雄”形象，决定去帮助一头受惊且迷路的牛。尽管牛表现出敌意让他感到恐惧，但他还是与两名警察合作，成功安抚并控制住了牛，直到农夫赶来将其领回。这次经历让作者明白英雄主义是即使害怕也要鼓起勇气去做正确的事。 心理变化：路人围观戏弄受惊奶牛心生愤慨→心生怯意想要转身逃离→主动配合警察安抚奶牛坚定守护→找到奶牛主人释然平和→领悟成长：真正的英雄主义，是心怀情绪、直面恐惧 全景图·能力图谱 卷别 主题 续写话题 心理轨迹 能力考查 2023浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者农场救下被困蜂鸟，建立默契。数周后重访，窗已修颇感欣慰，临别蜂鸟再度现身，尽显自然温情。 初见蜂鸟受困怜悯→别后时时牵挂→重访见窗修甚感宽慰→蜂鸟归来又惊又喜→珍视这份奇缘 信任建立善意回馈 2023新高考I卷 人与自我 对写作从恐惧痛苦到享受的认知转变，发现自我潜能。通过选择有趣视角、反复修改解决写作难题。 由抗拒写作到尝试→从疲惫怀疑到沉浸享受→获奖后感恩老师→立志坚持，终在写作路上收获成长 问题解决策略迁移 2024浙江1月卷 人与自我 Eva将一英里分解为小目标获教练赞赏；此法用于熟悉校园建筑领悟到分解困难、逐步前行的人生智慧。 惧跑恐慌→自我怀疑→经分段坚持获肯定而惊讶→将目标分解法认路→建立自信，领悟方法比天赋重要 心理突破认知升级 2024新课标卷 人与社会 作者航班延误赶末班巴士，出租车司机热心相助，作者无现金承诺归还，最终守信还钱并结下深厚友谊。 赶车焦急→无钱窘迫→司机信任暂缓付费而感激→履约还钱互赠礼物结为好友→展现陌生人善意与诚信 信任建立善意回馈 2025浙江1月卷 人与社会 见义勇为与可能冤枉人之间道德焦虑，并通过询问邻居、前往警局寻求真相，体现理性与善良的结合。 不安解释经过→发现手表震惊→赴警局忐忑→真相大白如释重负→获赞勇敢→悟行事需勇气亦需核实。 道德判断求证精神 2025全国一卷 人与自我 作者因聚会拒绝弟弟带狗入内致其愤然离去，后良心不安携饼干登门道歉，兄弟和解领悟亲情重于固执。 内疚自责→放下骄傲电话道歉→忐忑登门→兄弟相拥释然→围坐谈心→观Toby依偎悟治愈 情感修复关系重建 2025全国二卷 人与社会 因名字发音尴尬而回避，到主动解释名字含义、传播文化，完成从“适应者”到“传播者”的身份转变。 紧张忐忑→阐释名字渐自信→同学专注尊重而振奋→课后被围提问而温暖→教汉字中领悟文化认同价值 身份认同文化沟通 2026浙江1月卷 人与自然 送女儿途中发现受惊迷路牛被围观者嘲笑。返回救助与警察合作运用农场经验成功控制，农夫赶来领回。 自信逞强欲救牛→遇敌意恐惧→警察至镇定合作→牛获救欣慰释然→接女获崇拜自豪→悟英雄贵在勇为 心理突破认知升级 2026全国一卷 人与社会 Emily不顾暴风雪赴约途中遇险被困获夫妇救助，改火车完成行程，事后登门致谢。完成善意回馈闭环。 雪夜绝望恐慌→获救满怀感激→乘车奔赴希望→与男友团聚喜极而泣→返程致谢→悟陌生人善意暖人心 信任建立善意回馈 2026全国二卷 人与自我 以熬夜为傲的夜猫子到认识到自律才是真自由，完成从抗拒早起到享受清晨的认知转变与健康觉醒。 震惊恐惧→决心改变→深夜焦虑→靠意志坚持→晨间清醒活力恢复→见父母欣慰而自豪→悟自律即自由 心理突破认知升级 笔法堂·技法精修 技法一 “愤怒”类词汇语料 1.愤怒类形容词： 初阶 angry生气的，mad生气的，气愤的 高阶 furious狂怒的，暴怒的，annoyed恼怒的，烦恼的， annoying令人恼火的，令人烦躁的 2.愤怒类名词： 初阶 anger生气, rage盛怒，狂怒 高阶 fury暴怒, annoyance烦恼，令人恼火的事, irritation恼怒 3.愤怒类动词： 初阶 annoy使恼怒，glare怒目而视，anger 使发怒，激怒 高阶 roar/storm怒吼，irritate 使发怒 技法二 “愤怒”类语块语料 初阶 1. fuel one’s anger 使某人更加愤怒 2. tremble with anger 气得发抖 3. a burst of anger 一股怒火　 4. flush with anger 气红了脸 5. get mad/cross at sb. 生某人的气　 6. to one’s annoyance 令某人生气的是 7. explode with anger 勃然大怒 8. burst into anger 勃然大怒　 9. contain one’s anger 抑制怒火 10. set off one’s anger 让某人生气 高阶 11. lose one's temper 发脾气 12. stamp one’s feet in anger 生气地跺脚　 13. storm out of the room 气冲冲走出房间…… 14. be tongue-tied with anger 气得说不出话来 15. stamp one's foot in anger 某人气得直跺脚 16. be seized/overcome by anger 非常生气 17. feel a surge of anger/rage/fury 感到一阵愤怒 18.a fire of rage burns in one’s heart怒火在心中燃烧 技法三 “愤怒”类佳句语料 1. Anger rose in him like a tide. 怒火像潮水一样涌上他的心头。 2. He looked as if he were going to burst. 他看上去快要气炸了。 3. His face turned red with anger when he heard the lie. 听到这个谎言时，他的脸因愤怒而涨红。 4. His hands clenched into fists to control his anger. 他的手攥成了拳头，努力控制怒火。 5. He could hardly contain his fury after being cheated. 被骗后，他几乎无法抑制愤怒。 6. She felt a surge of anger as she listened to his ridiculous excuses. 听着他的荒谬的借口，她感到一阵怒火。 7. With his plan ruined by the accident，he let out a cry of anger. 这场意外毁了他的计划，他愤怒地大叫了一声。 8. Filled with fury, Jim was unable to utter a single word. Jim满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。 9. A flush of anger spread across Mr. Murdstone's cheeks. 一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。 10. So angry was he that he slammed the door and walked away. 他是如此生气以至于摔上了门离开了。 工坊间·分型实训 一、单句翻译。根据括号内所给提示翻译下列各句。 1. ____________________________________________________________________ (rise, tide) 怒火像潮水一样涌上他的心头。 2. ____________________________________________________________ (as if, burst) 他看上去快要气炸了。 3. ____________________________________________________________ (turn, anger) 听到这个谎言时，他的脸因愤怒而涨红。 4. ____________________________________________________________ (clench, fist) 他的手攥成了拳头，努力控制怒火。 5. ____________________________________________________________ (contain, fury) 被骗后，他几乎无法抑制愤怒。 6. _____________________________________________________________ (surge, fury) 听着他的荒谬的借口，她感到一阵怒火。 7. _____________________________________________________________ (let, anger) 这场意外毁了他的计划，他愤怒地大叫了一声。 8. _____________________________________________________________ (fury, utter) 吉姆满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。 9. _____________________________________________________________ (flush, spread) 一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。 10. _____________________________________________________________ (so, slam) 他是如此生气以至于摔上了门离开了。 【参考答案】 1. Anger rose in him like a tide. 2. He looked as if he were going to burst. 3. His face turned red with anger when he heard the lie. 4. His hands clenched into fists to control his anger. 5. He could hardly contain his fury after being cheated. 6. She felt a surge of anger as she listened to his ridiculous excuses. 7. With his plan ruined by the accident, he let out a cry of anger. 8. Filled with fury, Jim was unable to utter a single word. 9. A flush of anger spread across Mr. Murdstone's cheeks. 10. So angry was he that he slammed the door and walked away. 二、一句多译。注意句式多变丰富表达手段。 1. 他是如此生气以至于摔上了门离开了。 ①So angry was he that he slammed the door and walked away. (主从复合句+倒装句) ②Overwhelmed with anger, he slammed the door and stormed off. (非谓语+动作链) ③He was so angry that he slammed the door and walked away. (复合句+动作链) ④Filled with rage, he gave the door a heavy slam and departed at once. (非谓语+动作链) ⑤Anger took hold of him, so he shut the door violently and departed. (无灵主语+动作链) 2. 吉姆满腔愤怒，气得一句话也说不出来。 ①Filled with rage, Jim was too angry to utter a single word. (非谓语+夸张) ②Burning with fury, Jim was unable to utter a single word. (非谓语+夸张) ③So furious was Jim that he could not say anything at all. (复合句+倒装) ④Such was Jim’s great anger that words failed him totally. (无灵主语+倒装句) ⑤Anger overwhelmed Jim, leaving him speechless completely. (无灵主语+非谓语) 三、情景翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式补全段落。 情景一：儿子申请助学贷款时存款几乎耗尽，追问之下我怒火爆发厉声逼问真相…… One year later, our son was applying for a student loan. It was then that we discovered his savings account was almost empty. 1 (让我们忧心的是) was that he might abuse the money. Therefore, we required him to tell us where the money had gone in a very serious manner. Hesitant and wordless, he lowered his head, 2 (双手紧紧攥在一起，满脸通红). The scene that he kept so silent like a statue 3 (点燃了我的怒火). 4 (无数疑虑在脑海中翻涌), I exploded and yelled “tell me the truth now”. 一年后，儿子申请助学贷款时，我们发现他的储蓄账户几乎空空如也。让我们忧心的是，这笔钱或许被他胡乱挥霍了。于是我们严肃要求他交代钱款去向。他犹豫不决、一言不发，低下头，双手紧紧攥在一起，满脸通红。他像一尊雕塑般缄默不语的模样彻底点燃了我的怒火。无数疑虑在脑海中翻涌，我彻底爆发，大吼道：“现在就告诉我实情！” 【参考答案】 1. What disturbed us 2. with hands tightly clasped and face blushing 3. fueled my anger 4. Countless doubts roaring in my messy mind 情景二：年轻人误闯他人房间引发男子暴怒，丈夫争执后愤怒摔门离去…… The door opened and in came a young man. Shocked to see us packing things into our suitcase, the young man 1 (愤怒地大叫了一声,眼里闪烁着恼怒的光芒). 2 (他大发雷霆，跺着脚走来走去). He accused us of illegally entering his room and threatened to call the police, which scared my children to death. Just at that moment, my husband returned after his grocery shopping. Hearing the man's rude words, 3 (一股怒火在心中燃烧). It seemed that no settlement would be possible, and the situation reached a boiling point. 4 (争吵如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了). Eventually, 5 (无法控制心中的怒气，我丈夫气得冲出房间,狠狠地摔上门). 房门一开，一个年轻男子走了进来。看到我们正在往行李箱收拾物品，他大为震惊，愤怒地大吼一声，眼中满是愠怒。他怒火冲天，不停地跺着脚来回踱步，指责我们非法闯入他的房间，并扬言要报警，把孩子们吓得够呛。就在这时，买完杂货的丈夫回来了。听到男子出言不逊，丈夫怒火中烧。双方看似无法和解，事态彻底升级到白热化。争吵不断激化矛盾，丈夫如同火山般彻底爆发。最终，他再也克制不住怒气，愤然冲出房间，狠狠摔上了房门。 【参考答案】 1. let out a yell of anger, with his eyes shining with annoyance.  2. He was in a furious passion, and went stamping about. 3. a fire of rage burning in his heart. 4. Quarrels fueled his anger/wrath and he erupted like a volcano. 5. unable to contain his anger, my husband stormed out of the room, slamming the door behind him. 四、段落翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式润色文章。 ①听到这个无耻的谎言，怒火如潮水般涌上他心头。②他的脸瞬间因愤怒涨得通红。③他双手紧紧攥成拳头拼命克制情绪。④他整个人仿佛随时都会彻底崩溃。⑤屡次受骗的他再也压抑不住满腔怒火，低声怒吼起来。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 ①When he heard the shameless lie, anger rose in him like a tide. ②His face turned red with anger instantly. ③He clenched his hands into fists tightly, trying desperately to hold back his temper. ④He looked as if he were going to burst at any moment. ⑤Having been cheated repeatedly, he could hardly contain his fury any longer and let out a low roar of rage. ①当吉姆听完同伴荒唐的借口时，一股怒火瞬间涌上心头。②得知自己精心筹备的计划被一场意外彻底毁掉，吉姆愤怒地低吼了一声。③满腔怒火的他气得一句话也说不出来。④看着他这副失意模样，默德斯通先生的脸颊因愠怒涨得通红。⑤默德斯通先生怒不可遏，猛地摔上门默默离开，只留下吉姆陷入尴尬的沉默。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 ①When Jim heard his partner’s ridiculous excuses, she felt a surge of anger first. ②Learning his well-prepared plan was ruined by an unexpected accident, Jim let out a cry of anger. ③Filled with overwhelming fury, Jim was unable to utter a single word. ④Watching his frustrated reaction, Mr. Murdstone’s cheeks were covered by a flush of anger. ⑤So angry was Mr. Murdstone that he slammed the door heavily and walked away silently, leaving Jim stuck in awkward silence. 高考场·真题临摹 1.（2026·浙江1月卷）勇敢救助受惊奶牛领悟真正英雄 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a regular Saturday morning, just like any other. I was driving my nine-year-old daughter, Emma, to her weekly swimming lesson. Recently, Emma had started seeing me as a true hero who could solve any problem fairly. “You always know what’s right, Dad,” she would say. We were talking about her class when I noticed a crowd up ahead and had to slow down. People were gathered on the street, pointing and laughing. In the middle of it all was a large brown and white cow. It looked completely lost and terrified. Some kids were shouting nearby, which seemed to scare the animal even more. A strong feeling of anger rose inside me. These people were treating the poor creature’s fear as entertainment. “Dad, that cow is scared.” Emma said softly from the back seat. “What would you do?” Her question was serious. She believed I would do the right thing. “Well,” I said, trying to sound confident for her, “I would calm it down and help it find its way home.” I explained that I knew a lot about cows. I spent my childhood on a farm, and now I even worked at a beef processing plant. I was sure my experience would impress Emma. After dropping off a very impressed Emma, I turned my car around. I felt it was my duty to go back and help. When I returned, the scene was worse. I learned from a shop owner that the cow had been wandering for a while, knocking over a fruit stand and causing quite a bit of trouble. I took a slow, careful step towards the animal, speaking in a gentle voice. However, instead of calming down, the cow lowered its head and let out a threatening sound. It stared directly at me, full of hostility. My confidence faded, replaced by a sudden fear. This wasn’t going to be easy at all. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Just as I was about to turn and run, two police officers arrived on the scene. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After we managed to secure the cow to a tree, we began to discuss what to do with it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【达标版范文】 Just as I was about to turn and run, two police officers arrived on the scene. Still filled with anger at those laughing crowds, I told the officers the whole story. I shared my farm experience and volunteered to calm the frightened cow. The officers cooperated with me perfectly to distract the cow. Approaching slowly and speaking softly, I relieved its fear little by little, and it finally calmed down. After we managed to secure the cow to a tree, we began to discuss what to do with it. Soon the worried farmer came and claimed his lost cow, thanking us repeatedly. I was glad I had stood up for the poor scared animal instead of following the crowd. Later, I told Emma the story. She praised me as her hero. I learned that true courage lies in overcoming fear and anger to stick to kindness and justice. 【满分版范文】 Just as I was about to turn and run, two police officers arrived on the scene. Still burning with anger at the crowd’s cruel amusement, I was determined to protect the poor terrified cow. They stepped out of their patrol car calmly, holding a thick rope in hand. I hurried to share my childhood farm experience with them, and we made a quick plan to cooperate. One officer slowly circled the cow to distract it, keeping his movements gentle to avoid scaring it again. I seized the chance to approach from the side, whispering soft words like I used to do to calm the cows on my old farm. Little by little, the cow’s tense body relaxed, its threatening lowing faded, and it even blinked at me gently. After we managed to secure the cow to a tree, we began to discuss what to do with it. Luckily, a farmer passing by recognized the cow immediately — it was his. He thanked us profusely, explaining that the cow had broken free from the fence early that morning and gone missing. When I picked up Emma after her lesson, I told her every detail of the rescue and my anger at people’s cold teasing. Her face lit up with admiration: “Dad, you’re really my hero!” That day, I understood that heroism isn’t about being fearless, but about summoning courage to do what’s right and defend the weak even when scared or angry. 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个周六的早晨，作者为了在女儿艾玛面前树立“英雄”形象，决定去帮助一头受惊且迷路的牛。尽管牛表现出敌意让他感到恐惧，但他还是与两名警察合作，成功安抚并控制住了牛，直到农夫赶来将其领回。这次经历让作者明白，英雄主义并非无畏，而是即使害怕也要鼓起勇气去做正确的事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“就在我要转身逃跑的时候，两名警察来到了现场”可知，第一段可描写作者与两名警察合作，成功安抚并控制住了牛。 ②由第二段首句内容“我们把奶牛拴在了树上后，就开始商量如何处理它”可知，第二段可描写农夫赶来将牛领回。这次经历让作者明白，英雄主义并非无畏，而是即使害怕也要鼓起勇气去做正确 事。 2.续写线索：警察赶到——成功安抚并控制牛——商量如何处理——农夫赶来——带走牛——作者感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①急忙：hurry to/rush to ②消失：fade/vanish ③私语：whisper/murmur 情绪类 ①无畏的：fearless/bold/brave ②害怕的：scared/frightened 【点睛】[高分句型1] He thanked us profusely, explaining that the cow had broken free from the fence early that morning and gone missing.（运用了that引导宾语从句） [高分句型2] I seized the chance to approach from the side, whispering soft words like I used to do to calm the cows on my old farm. （运用了现在分词whispering作状语） 2. （25-26高一上·湖北襄阳·期中）姐弟因项链碎裂产生矛盾，弟弟用心修补终获和解 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Thompson house was always noisy before school. Every morning, twelve-year-old Mia did her hair at the kitchen table, her fingers moving quickly as she tried to ignore the regular “clang-clang-clang” beside her. Her little brother Leo, his cheeks still soft with sleep, was hitting his spoon on his bowl like a bell. “Stop it.” Mia said, throwing potato chips at him. As she did, the necklace (项链) around her neck moved a little. The necklace, made of shells (贝壳), was her most loved thing — a gift from Grandma before she passed away. Mia valued this necklace greatly. She remembered how Grandma had handpicked each shell during their last trip to the beach. “This round shell means patience,” Grandma had whispered stories while placing it around Mia’s neck. Right now, Mia needed all the patience she could get. As the days went by, Mia found herself struggling less to keep her patience. Leo’s noisy habits, though still troublesome, didn’t seem as annoying as before. There were moments when she’d catch him making funny faces or dancing around to music only she could hear. She would roll her eyes, but deep down, a part of her smiled. One afternoon, while sitting together on the sofa, Leo shyly asked about the necklace. “Why do you love it so much?” he whispered. Mia then told him the story of Grandma and the special meaning of each shell. For a moment, Leo looked thoughtful, and Mia hoped he understood how much the necklace meant to her. She wished he would be more careful — but little did she know, that wish was about to be tested. After a two-day summer camp, Mia came home and found Leo lying on her bedroom floor, her box turned over. “What are you doing?” she shouted. Leo jumped. “I — I just wanted to see…” The necklace fell from his hand, and the string(线绳) broke. The shells dropped to the floor like small white teeth, some of them broken into several parts. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para1: Seeing that, Mia was annoyed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2: The next morning, Mia was surprised to find a box on her desk. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【达标版范文】 Seeing that, Mia was annoyed. The shell necklace was a precious gift from her grandma, so it meant a lot to her. Heartbroken, she shouted at Leo. Leo was frightened and felt very guilty. He said he had no intention to break the necklace and hoped for her forgiveness. However, Mia was too sad to listen to his explanation and turned a deaf ear to his words. The next morning, Mia was surprised to find a box on her desk. She opened the box carefully and found her broken necklace inside. Leo had tried his best to repair the broken shells with new strings. A warm apology note was placed beside it. Moved by his sincerity, Mia calmed down gradually. She recalled Grandma’s words about patience. Realizing she should be more tolerant to her little brother, she forgave Leo warmly at last. 【满分版范文】 Seeing that, Mia was annoyed. She stared at the broken shells on the floor, her breath caught in her throat. “You knew this was special.” She picked up the pieces, her voice shaking. “Get out” Leo stepped back quickly. “I didn’t mean to…” he whispered, his voice shaking. “You never mean to” she screamed. Leo’s face turned pale, and he quickly bent down to pick up the pieces. Mia turned away, unable to speak. That night, she lay in bed staring at the ceiling, remembering Grandma’s warm hands and gentle voice: “Patience” She clutched her pillow, trying to forget the broken necklace. The next morning, Mia was surprised to find a box on her desk. On top was a note, written in shaky letters: “I’m sorry, Mia. I tried to fix it.” Inside, she saw the broken shells carefully glued back together, some tied with string, some placed in the shape of a heart. At the center was a new shell — small, but shining — clearly one Leo had found himself. Mia smiled through tears. It wasn’t perfect, but it was filled with love. She picked up the necklace and gently placed it around her neck, whispering, “Thank you, Leo.” 【导语】本文以 Mia的贝壳项链 为线索展开，讲述了 Mia因弟弟Leo不慎打碎奶奶留下的珍贵贝壳项链而愤怒失控，最终Leo用心修复项链，姐弟二人和解的温情故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容可知，本段可描写 Mia看到项链被打碎后情绪爆发，怒斥Leo并赶他出去，夜晚独自躺在床上回忆奶奶、辗转难眠的情景。 ②由第二段首句内容可知，本段可描写 Mia发现Leo用心修复的项链，虽不完美却充满爱意，深受感动并原谅弟弟，重新戴上项链的温暖结局。 2.续写线索：续写线索：项链珍贵意义——Leo打碎项链——Mia愤怒爆发——夜晚辗转难眠——Leo用心修复——Mia感动和解——领悟爱与耐心 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①盯着：stare/glare/gaze ②捡起：pick up/gather/collect ③弯下腰：bend down/lean over/stoop 情绪类 ①温柔的：gentle/mild ②爱：love/affection 【点睛】【高分句型1】She clutched her pillow, trying to forget the broken necklace. (运用了现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】Inside, she saw the broken shells carefully glued back together, some tied with string, some placed in the shape of a heart. (运用了独立主格结构) 3.（25-26高二下·湖南岳阳·期末）误会好友泄露成绩秘密，真相大白后致歉重修旧好 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Hannah and I have been best friends since primary school and we spend almost every day with each other, sharing everything happening in our daily life and discussing problems in our school work. Sometimes, other children say we are no fun because we are both very academic and like to study, but we like it that way. We are both very hard-working and always get good grades at school. Last Monday, we had a surprise math quiz. Thinking it was quite easy, I was not worried about the results at all. I must have sounded very proud of myself after the quiz, saying how easy it was and how I was sure to get a good grade. Unexpectedly, the next day after class, my math teacher told me that I had the lowest grade in the class! My heart sank and a great sense of shame washed over me; I must be really stupid to fail a simple math quiz! Afterwards, I pretended to be cheerful, as if nothing had happened, but Hannah sensed something was wrong. When we went to wash our hands in the girls’ washroom before lunch, Hannah tried to figure out what was the matter. Struggling to hold back my tears, I admitted I had failed the math quiz. “But you are a born math genius and you have put all your efforts in it. There must be some mistakes!” Hannah couldn’t believe her ears. “I shouldn’t have been so confident. Would you please keep it a secret for me?” I begged. Hannah nodded, promising not to tell anyone else about the secret. However, that afternoon I noticed that my classmates were staring at me as I came into math class and, when I went to sit down, I was shocked to find a piece of paper on my desk that said, “Stupid Sarah got a D!” I was so upset that I felt like crying. I thought that Hannah must have told my classmates about my grade after promising not to. Everyone must have been laughing behind my back! 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I was so angry that I went straight to Hannah. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, my math teacher came to me, apologizing for his carelessness. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 I was so angry that I went straight to Hannah. “Why didn’t you keep my grade as a secret as promised?” I shouted at Hannah, glaring at her, my eyes burning with annoyance and disappointment. Surprised and innocent, she explained that she didn’t betray me. However, I couldn’t compose myself that I covered my ears with both hands, refusing to hear even a single word from her. Hannah bit her lips nervously, trying to hold back her tears. Then, she cast an anxious look at me, dashed out of the classroom and rushed to the math teacher’s office. “What is she doing?” I thought to myself. The next morning, the math teacher approached me, apologizing for his carelessness. A sense of shock choked my words. Only then did I realize that I misunderstood my best friend Hannah. With a wave of shame and embarrassment flooding over me, I walked slowly to Hannah, sincerely expressing my apology. To my surprise, she thumbed up, spread her arms, and hugged me tightly. Since then, our friendship has been further strengthened. Actually, nothing can defeat real friendship. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了我和汉娜之间友谊经受考验的一件小事：在一次数学考试后，我被数学老师告知数学没有及格。上厕所时，我把秘密告诉了我最好的朋友汉娜，并请求她不要告诉别人。但是，那天下午我就发现有同学在我的桌子贴了一张写有羞辱话语的纸条。这让我认定是汉娜把我的秘密告诉了别人，并找到汉娜对她进行了指责。第二天早晨，数学老师找到我，并向我解释，是她弄错了成绩。我才知道自己冤枉了汉娜，因此找到汉娜进行道歉。两人重归于好，友谊得到进一步升华。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我非常生气，直接去找汉娜”可知，第一段可描写作者与汉娜发生误会的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“第二天早上，数学老师来找我，为他的粗心道歉”可知，第二段可描写数学老师为他的粗心向我道歉。从而知道自己误会了汉娜。因此，本段写我在数学老师的开导下，与汉娜解除误会的过程。并通过此事让我们的友谊得到升华。 2.续写线索：找到汉娜——爆发冲突——汉娜解释——作者拒绝接受——数学老师道歉——作者认识到错误——修复友谊——作者感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①克制：hold back /contain ②拒绝：refuse/decline ③意识到：realize /be aware of 情绪类 ①愤怒：annoyance/anger ②惊讶：surprise/astonishment 【点睛】[高分句型1] Hannah bit her lips nervously, trying to hold back her tears. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] Only then did I realize that I misunderstood my best friend Hannah. (运用了only+状语位于句首的倒装句) 1 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 第13讲 读后续写：如何表达愤怒背默与仿写(词-句-文)(复习讲练) 内容导航 01 风向标·命题地图 考情分析+趋势预判 02 全景图·能力图谱 思维导图/表格+能力体系呈现 03 笔法堂·技法精修 核心技法讲解（分技法点） 技法一 “愤怒”类词汇语料 技法二 “愤怒”类语块语料 技法三 “愤怒”类佳句语料（无灵主语、非谓语、倒装句、修辞） 04 工坊间·分型实训 分型考法训练（含例题+变式） 一、单句翻译 二、一句多译(他是如此生气以至于摔上了门离开了。吉姆满腔愤怒，气得一句话也说不出来。) 三、情景翻译 四、段落翻译 05 高考场·真题临摹 高考真题精讲+范文评析 2026年浙江1月卷 故事情节：周六早晨，作者为在女儿艾玛面前树立“英雄”形象，决定去帮助一头受惊且迷路的牛。尽管牛表现出敌意让他感到恐惧，但他还是与两名警察合作，成功安抚并控制住了牛，直到农夫赶来将其领回。这次经历让作者明白英雄主义是即使害怕也要鼓起勇气去做正确的事。 心理变化：路人围观戏弄受惊奶牛心生愤慨→心生怯意想要转身逃离→主动配合警察安抚奶牛坚定守护→找到奶牛主人释然平和→领悟成长：真正的英雄主义，是心怀情绪、直面恐惧 全景图·能力图谱 卷别 主题 续写话题 心理轨迹 能力考查 2023浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者农场救下被困蜂鸟，建立默契。数周后重访，窗已修颇感欣慰，临别蜂鸟再度现身，尽显自然温情。 初见蜂鸟受困怜悯→别后时时牵挂→重访见窗修甚感宽慰→蜂鸟归来又惊又喜→珍视这份奇缘 信任建立善意回馈 2023新高考I卷 人与自我 对写作从恐惧痛苦到享受的认知转变，发现自我潜能。通过选择有趣视角、反复修改解决写作难题。 由抗拒写作到尝试→从疲惫怀疑到沉浸享受→获奖后感恩老师→立志坚持，终在写作路上收获成长 问题解决策略迁移 2024浙江1月卷 人与自我 Eva将一英里分解为小目标获教练赞赏；此法用于熟悉校园建筑领悟到分解困难、逐步前行的人生智慧。 惧跑恐慌→自我怀疑→经分段坚持获肯定而惊讶→将目标分解法认路→建立自信，领悟方法比天赋重要 心理突破认知升级 2024新课标卷 人与社会 作者航班延误赶末班巴士，出租车司机热心相助，作者无现金承诺归还，最终守信还钱并结下深厚友谊。 赶车焦急→无钱窘迫→司机信任暂缓付费而感激→履约还钱互赠礼物结为好友→展现陌生人善意与诚信 信任建立善意回馈 2025浙江1月卷 人与社会 见义勇为与可能冤枉人之间道德焦虑，并通过询问邻居、前往警局寻求真相，体现理性与善良的结合。 不安解释经过→发现手表震惊→赴警局忐忑→真相大白如释重负→获赞勇敢→悟行事需勇气亦需核实。 道德判断求证精神 2025全国一卷 人与自我 作者因聚会拒绝弟弟带狗入内致其愤然离去，后良心不安携饼干登门道歉，兄弟和解领悟亲情重于固执。 内疚自责→放下骄傲电话道歉→忐忑登门→兄弟相拥释然→围坐谈心→观Toby依偎悟治愈 情感修复关系重建 2025全国二卷 人与社会 因名字发音尴尬而回避，到主动解释名字含义、传播文化，完成从“适应者”到“传播者”的身份转变。 紧张忐忑→阐释名字渐自信→同学专注尊重而振奋→课后被围提问而温暖→教汉字中领悟文化认同价值 身份认同文化沟通 2026浙江1月卷 人与自然 送女儿途中发现受惊迷路牛被围观者嘲笑。返回救助与警察合作运用农场经验成功控制，农夫赶来领回。 自信逞强欲救牛→遇敌意恐惧→警察至镇定合作→牛获救欣慰释然→接女获崇拜自豪→悟英雄贵在勇为 心理突破认知升级 2026全国一卷 人与社会 Emily不顾暴风雪赴约途中遇险被困获夫妇救助，改火车完成行程，事后登门致谢。完成善意回馈闭环。 雪夜绝望恐慌→获救满怀感激→乘车奔赴希望→与男友团聚喜极而泣→返程致谢→悟陌生人善意暖人心 信任建立善意回馈 2026全国二卷 人与自我 以熬夜为傲的夜猫子到认识到自律才是真自由，完成从抗拒早起到享受清晨的认知转变与健康觉醒。 震惊恐惧→决心改变→深夜焦虑→靠意志坚持→晨间清醒活力恢复→见父母欣慰而自豪→悟自律即自由 心理突破认知升级 笔法堂·技法精修 技法一 “愤怒”类词汇语料 1.愤怒类形容词： 初阶 angry生气的，mad生气的，气愤的 高阶 狂怒的，暴怒的， 恼怒的，烦恼的， 令人恼火的，令人烦躁的 2.愤怒类名词： 初阶 anger生气, rage盛怒，狂怒 高阶 暴怒, 烦恼，令人恼火的事, 恼怒 3.愤怒类动词： 初阶 annoy使恼怒，glare怒目而视，anger 使发怒，激怒 高阶 怒吼， 使发怒 技法二 “愤怒”类语块语料 初阶 1. 使某人更加愤怒 2. 气得发抖 3. 一股怒火　 4. 气红了脸 5. 生某人的气　 6. 令某人生气的是 7. 勃然大怒 8. 然大怒　 9. 抑制怒火 10. 让某人生气 高阶 11. 发脾气 12. 生气地跺脚　 13. 气冲冲走出房间…… 14. 气得说不出话来 15. 某人气得直跺脚 16. 非常生气 17. 感到一阵愤怒 18. 怒火在心中燃烧 技法三 “愤怒”类佳句语料 1. 怒火像潮水一样涌上他的心头。 2. 他看上去快要气炸了。 3. 听到这个谎言时，他的脸因愤怒而涨红。 4. 他的手攥成了拳头，努力控制怒火。 5. 被骗后，他几乎无法抑制愤怒。 6. 听着他的荒谬的借口，她感到一阵怒火。 7. 这场意外毁了他的计划，他愤怒地大叫了一声。 8. Jim满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。 9. 一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。 10. 他是如此生气以至于摔上了门离开了。 工坊间·分型实训 一、单句翻译。根据括号内所给提示翻译下列各句。 1. ____________________________________________________________________ (rise, tide) 怒火像潮水一样涌上他的心头。 2. ____________________________________________________________ (as if, burst) 他看上去快要气炸了。 3. ____________________________________________________________ (turn, anger) 听到这个谎言时，他的脸因愤怒而涨红。 4. ____________________________________________________________ (clench, fist) 他的手攥成了拳头，努力控制怒火。 5. ____________________________________________________________ (contain, fury) 被骗后，他几乎无法抑制愤怒。 6. _____________________________________________________________ (surge, fury) 听着他的荒谬的借口，她感到一阵怒火。 7. _____________________________________________________________ (let, anger) 这场意外毁了他的计划，他愤怒地大叫了一声。 8. _____________________________________________________________ (fury, utter) 吉姆满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。 9. _____________________________________________________________ (flush, spread) 一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。 10. _____________________________________________________________ (so, slam) 他是如此生气以至于摔上了门离开了。 二、一句多译。注意句式多变丰富表达手段。 1. 他是如此生气以至于摔上了门离开了。 ① (主从复合句+倒装句) ② (非谓语+动作链) ③ (复合句+动作链) ④ (非谓语+动作链) ⑤ (无灵主语+动作链) 2. 吉姆满腔愤怒，气得一句话也说不出来。 ① (非谓语+夸张) ② (非谓语+夸张) ③ (复合句+倒装) ④ (无灵主语+倒装句) ⑤ (无灵主语+非谓语) 三、情景翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式补全段落。 情景一：儿子申请助学贷款时存款几乎耗尽，追问之下我怒火爆发厉声逼问真相…… One year later, our son was applying for a student loan. It was then that we discovered his savings account was almost empty. 1 (让我们忧心的是) was that he might abuse the money. Therefore, we required him to tell us where the money had gone in a very serious manner. Hesitant and wordless, he lowered his head, 2 (双手紧紧攥在一起，满脸通红). The scene that he kept so silent like a statue 3 (点燃了我的怒火). 4 (无数疑虑在脑海中翻涌), I exploded and yelled “tell me the truth now”. 一年后，儿子申请助学贷款时，我们发现他的储蓄账户几乎空空如也。让我们忧心的是，这笔钱或许被他胡乱挥霍了。于是我们严肃要求他交代钱款去向。他犹豫不决、一言不发，低下头，双手紧紧攥在一起，满脸通红。他像一尊雕塑般缄默不语的模样彻底点燃了我的怒火。无数疑虑在脑海中翻涌，我彻底爆发，大吼道：“现在就告诉我实情！” 情景二：年轻人误闯他人房间引发男子暴怒，丈夫争执后愤怒摔门离去…… The door opened and in came a young man. Shocked to see us packing things into our suitcase, the young man 1 (愤怒地大叫了一声,眼里闪烁着恼怒的光芒). 2 (他大发雷霆，跺着脚走来走去). He accused us of illegally entering his room and threatened to call the police, which scared my children to death. Just at that moment, my husband returned after his grocery shopping. Hearing the man's rude words, 3 (一股怒火在心中燃烧). It seemed that no settlement would be possible, and the situation reached a boiling point. 4 (争吵如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了). Eventually, 5 (无法控制心中的怒气，我丈夫气得冲出房间,狠狠地摔上门). 房门一开，一个年轻男子走了进来。看到我们正在往行李箱收拾物品，他大为震惊，愤怒地大吼一声，眼中满是愠怒。他怒火冲天，不停地跺着脚来回踱步，指责我们非法闯入他的房间，并扬言要报警，把孩子们吓得够呛。就在这时，买完杂货的丈夫回来了。听到男子出言不逊，丈夫怒火中烧。双方看似无法和解，事态彻底升级到白热化。争吵不断激化矛盾，丈夫如同火山般彻底爆发。最终，他再也克制不住怒气，愤然冲出房间，狠狠摔上了房门。 四、段落翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式润色文章。 ①听到这个无耻的谎言，怒火如潮水般涌上他心头。②他的脸瞬间因愤怒涨得通红。③他双手紧紧攥成拳头拼命克制情绪。④他整个人仿佛随时都会彻底崩溃。⑤屡次受骗的他再也压抑不住满腔怒火，低声怒吼起来。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ①当吉姆听完同伴荒唐的借口时，一股怒火瞬间涌上心头。②得知自己精心筹备的计划被一场意外彻底毁掉，吉姆愤怒地低吼了一声。③满腔怒火的他气得一句话也说不出来。④看着他这副失意模样，默德斯通先生的脸颊因愠怒涨得通红。⑤默德斯通先生怒不可遏，猛地摔上门默默离开，只留下吉姆陷入尴尬的沉默。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 高考场·真题临摹 1.（2026·浙江1月卷）勇敢救助受惊奶牛领悟真正英雄 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a regular Saturday morning, just like any other. I was driving my nine-year-old daughter, Emma, to her weekly swimming lesson. Recently, Emma had started seeing me as a true hero who could solve any problem fairly. “You always know what’s right, Dad,” she would say. We were talking about her class when I noticed a crowd up ahead and had to slow down. People were gathered on the street, pointing and laughing. In the middle of it all was a large brown and white cow. It looked completely lost and terrified. Some kids were shouting nearby, which seemed to scare the animal even more. A strong feeling of anger rose inside me. These people were treating the poor creature’s fear as entertainment. “Dad, that cow is scared.” Emma said softly from the back seat. “What would you do?” Her question was serious. She believed I would do the right thing. “Well,” I said, trying to sound confident for her, “I would calm it down and help it find its way home.” I explained that I knew a lot about cows. I spent my childhood on a farm, and now I even worked at a beef processing plant. I was sure my experience would impress Emma. After dropping off a very impressed Emma, I turned my car around. I felt it was my duty to go back and help. When I returned, the scene was worse. I learned from a shop owner that the cow had been wandering for a while, knocking over a fruit stand and causing quite a bit of trouble. I took a slow, careful step towards the animal, speaking in a gentle voice. However, instead of calming down, the cow lowered its head and let out a threatening sound. It stared directly at me, full of hostility. My confidence faded, replaced by a sudden fear. This wasn’t going to be easy at all. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Just as I was about to turn and run, two police officers arrived on the scene. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After we managed to secure the cow to a tree, we began to discuss what to do with it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. （25-26高一上·湖北襄阳·期中）姐弟因项链碎裂产生矛盾，弟弟用心修补终获和解 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Thompson house was always noisy before school. Every morning, twelve-year-old Mia did her hair at the kitchen table, her fingers moving quickly as she tried to ignore the regular “clang-clang-clang” beside her. Her little brother Leo, his cheeks still soft with sleep, was hitting his spoon on his bowl like a bell. “Stop it.” Mia said, throwing potato chips at him. As she did, the necklace (项链) around her neck moved a little. The necklace, made of shells (贝壳), was her most loved thing — a gift from Grandma before she passed away. Mia valued this necklace greatly. She remembered how Grandma had handpicked each shell during their last trip to the beach. “This round shell means patience,” Grandma had whispered stories while placing it around Mia’s neck. Right now, Mia needed all the patience she could get. As the days went by, Mia found herself struggling less to keep her patience. Leo’s noisy habits, though still troublesome, didn’t seem as annoying as before. There were moments when she’d catch him making funny faces or dancing around to music only she could hear. She would roll her eyes, but deep down, a part of her smiled. One afternoon, while sitting together on the sofa, Leo shyly asked about the necklace. “Why do you love it so much?” he whispered. Mia then told him the story of Grandma and the special meaning of each shell. For a moment, Leo looked thoughtful, and Mia hoped he understood how much the necklace meant to her. She wished he would be more careful — but little did she know, that wish was about to be tested. After a two-day summer camp, Mia came home and found Leo lying on her bedroom floor, her box turned over. “What are you doing?” she shouted. Leo jumped. “I — I just wanted to see…” The necklace fell from his hand, and the string(线绳) broke. The shells dropped to the floor like small white teeth, some of them broken into several parts. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para1: Seeing that, Mia was annoyed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2: The next morning, Mia was surprised to find a box on her desk. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.（25-26高二下·湖南岳阳·期末）误会好友泄露成绩秘密，真相大白后致歉重修旧好 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Hannah and I have been best friends since primary school and we spend almost every day with each other, sharing everything happening in our daily life and discussing problems in our school work. Sometimes, other children say we are no fun because we are both very academic and like to study, but we like it that way. We are both very hard-working and always get good grades at school. Last Monday, we had a surprise math quiz. Thinking it was quite easy, I was not worried about the results at all. I must have sounded very proud of myself after the quiz, saying how easy it was and how I was sure to get a good grade. Unexpectedly, the next day after class, my math teacher told me that I had the lowest grade in the class! My heart sank and a great sense of shame washed over me; I must be really stupid to fail a simple math quiz! Afterwards, I pretended to be cheerful, as if nothing had happened, but Hannah sensed something was wrong. When we went to wash our hands in the girls’ washroom before lunch, Hannah tried to figure out what was the matter. Struggling to hold back my tears, I admitted I had failed the math quiz. “But you are a born math genius and you have put all your efforts in it. There must be some mistakes!” Hannah couldn’t believe her ears. “I shouldn’t have been so confident. Would you please keep it a secret for me?” I begged. Hannah nodded, promising not to tell anyone else about the secret. However, that afternoon I noticed that my classmates were staring at me as I came into math class and, when I went to sit down, I was shocked to find a piece of paper on my desk that said, “Stupid Sarah got a D!” I was so upset that I felt like crying. I thought that Hannah must have told my classmates about my grade after promising not to. Everyone must have been laughing behind my back! 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I was so angry that I went straight to Hannah. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, my math teacher came to me, apologizing for his carelessness. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $