第12讲 读后续写：如何表达恐惧背默与仿写（词-句-文）（复习讲练）（通用版）2027年高考英语一轮复习读后续写高分突破

该高中英语讲义聚焦读后续写“恐惧”情感表达核心考点，按词-句-文逻辑层次构建知识体系，涵盖考情分析、分层语料（初阶到高阶词汇/语块/佳句）、分型实训（单句翻译到段落翻译）及真题临摹环节，通过考点梳理、技法指导与真题训练帮助学生突破情感表达难点，体现复习教学的系统性与针对性。 资料创新采用分层语料积累与多维度句式训练，如“一句多译”通过主从复合句、非谓语等句式变换培养思维品质，结合情景翻译强化语言能力，配合真题精讲与即时反馈保障复习效果，助力学生高效掌握考点，为教师精准把控复习节奏提供有力指导。

第12讲 读后续写：如何表达恐惧背默与仿写(词-句-文)(复习讲练) 内容导航 01 风向标·命题地图 考情分析+趋势预判 02 全景图·能力图谱 思维导图/表格+能力体系呈现 03 笔法堂·技法精修 核心技法讲解（分技法点） 技法一 “恐惧”类词汇语料 技法二 “恐惧”类语块语料 技法三 “恐惧”类佳句语料 04 工坊间·分型实训 分型考法训练（含例题+变式） 一、单句翻译 二、一句多译 三、情景翻译 四、段落翻译 05 高考场·真题临摹 高考真题精讲+范文评析 2020年浙江7月卷 故事情节：夫妻赴加拿大拍摄北极熊，遇幼熊闯营撞栏，二人起初惶恐，喷雾驱熊反激化险情、愈发紧张，最终等来了救援，转危为安心生庆幸。 心理变化：期待愉悦 → 惊慌恐惧（幼熊闯营撞栏）→ 焦灼无奈（驱熊无效、救援延迟）→ 极度惶恐（喷雾激怒熊，险情升级）→ 如释重负、满心庆幸（直升机赶到成功脱险） 全景图·能力图谱 卷别 主题 续写话题 心理轨迹 能力考查 2023浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者农场救下被困蜂鸟，建立默契。数周后重访，窗已修颇感欣慰，临别蜂鸟再度现身，尽显自然温情。 初见蜂鸟受困怜悯→别后时时牵挂→重访见窗修甚感宽慰→蜂鸟归来又惊又喜→珍视这份奇缘 信任建立善意回馈 2023新高考I卷 人与自我 对写作从恐惧痛苦到享受的认知转变，发现自我潜能。通过选择有趣视角、反复修改解决写作难题。 由抗拒写作到尝试→从疲惫怀疑到沉浸享受→获奖后感恩老师→立志坚持，终在写作路上收获成长 问题解决策略迁移 2024浙江1月卷 人与自我 Eva将一英里分解为小目标获教练赞赏；此法用于熟悉校园建筑领悟到分解困难、逐步前行的人生智慧。 惧跑恐慌→自我怀疑→经分段坚持获肯定而惊讶→将目标分解法认路→建立自信，领悟方法比天赋重要 心理突破认知升级 2024新课标卷 人与社会 作者航班延误赶末班巴士，出租车司机热心相助，作者无现金承诺归还，最终守信还钱并结下深厚友谊。 赶车焦急→无钱窘迫→司机信任暂缓付费而感激→履约还钱互赠礼物结为好友→展现陌生人善意与诚信 信任建立善意回馈 2025浙江1月卷 人与社会 见义勇为与可能冤枉人之间道德焦虑，并通过询问邻居、前往警局寻求真相，体现理性与善良的结合。 不安解释经过→发现手表震惊→赴警局忐忑→真相大白如释重负→获赞勇敢→悟行事需勇气亦需核实。 道德判断求证精神 2025全国一卷 人与自我 作者因聚会拒绝弟弟带狗入内致其愤然离去，后良心不安携饼干登门道歉，兄弟和解领悟亲情重于固执。 内疚自责→放下骄傲电话道歉→忐忑登门→兄弟相拥释然→围坐谈心→观Toby依偎悟治愈 情感修复关系重建 2025全国二卷 人与社会 因名字发音尴尬而回避，到主动解释名字含义、传播文化，完成从“适应者”到“传播者”的身份转变。 紧张忐忑→阐释名字渐自信→同学专注尊重而振奋→课后被围提问而温暖→教汉字中领悟文化认同价值 身份认同文化沟通 2026浙江1月卷 人与自然 送女儿途中发现受惊迷路牛被围观者嘲笑。返回救助与警察合作运用农场经验成功控制，农夫赶来领回。 自信逞强欲救牛→遇敌意恐惧→警察至镇定合作→牛获救欣慰释然→接女获崇拜自豪→悟英雄贵在勇为 心理突破认知升级 2026全国一卷 人与社会 Emily不顾暴风雪赴约途中遇险被困获夫妇救助，改火车完成行程，事后登门致谢。完成善意回馈闭环。 雪夜绝望恐慌→获救满怀感激→乘车奔赴希望→与男友团聚喜极而泣→返程致谢→悟陌生人善意暖人心 信任建立善意回馈 2026全国二卷 人与自我 以熬夜为傲的夜猫子到认识到自律才是真自由，完成从抗拒早起到享受清晨的认知转变与健康觉醒。 震惊恐惧→决心改变→深夜焦虑→靠意志坚持→晨间清醒活力恢复→见父母欣慰而自豪→悟自律即自由 心理突破认知升级 笔法堂·技法精修 技法一 “恐惧”类词汇语料 1.恐惧类形容词： 初阶 terrible 可怕的；糟糕的horrible 使人恐惧的afraid 害怕的；担心的frightening 令人恐惧的fearful 恐惧的frightened 害怕的；受惊的pale 苍白的horrifying 令人恐惧的scared 害怕的scary 使人惊慌的  高阶 panicked 惊恐的  alarmed 惊恐的；忧虑的alarming 使人惊恐的terrified害怕的terrifying 令人害怕的panic-stricken 被惊恐袭击的 terror-stricken 被恐惧袭击的open-mouthed 张大嘴的tongue-tied 说不出话的；结舌的frozen 僵住的sweaty 出汗的speechless 无语的 2.恐惧类名词： 初阶 fear 恐惧、担心concern 担心 terror/horror 恐怖  高阶 panic 惊恐dread 恐惧fright 害怕 3.恐惧类动词： 初阶 fear 害怕frighten 使害怕shake/tremble 颤抖 scare 惊吓、害怕 高阶 dread 恐惧 frown 皱眉horrify 使震惊，使感到恐怖panic使恐惧 技法二 “恐惧”类语块语料 初阶 1.face turns pale 脸色变白 2.scare ... to death 把……吓死 3.fear creeps over sb. 感到害怕 4.be seized with panic 惊慌失措 5.in panic/ terror 害怕地、恐惧地 6.be half dead with fear吓得半死 7.heart beat violently 心跳得厉害 8.shake from head to toe全身颤抖 9.choke with fear 因为害怕而哽咽 高阶 10.freeze/be frozen with fear 吓呆/吓傻 11.shake/tremble with fear/terror 吓得发抖　 12.be scared out of one’s wits 吓得魂不附体　 13.a flood of fear wells up in sb 从心底感到害怕 14.stand rooted to the spot with fear 吓得呆若木鸡　 15.shake all over in a cold sweat 浑身发抖，冒冷汗 技法三 “恐惧”类佳句语料 1. Fear flooded over her, making her shake all over. 恐惧涌上她的心头，使她浑身发抖。 2. I trembled all over and my palms were sweating. 我浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。 3. Fear crept over her as she walked alone at night． 当她晚上独自走路时，恐惧悄然笼罩着她。 4. Her face turned pale and stood there, tongue-tied. 她的脸色变得煞白，站在那里，说不出话来。 5. Frozen with fear, he was too scared to move an inch.  他吓得僵住了,吓得寸步难行。 6. She trembled all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.  她浑身颤抖,如坐针毡。 7. Panic seized her as Lily realized she had lost her way in the forest. Lily意识到自己在森林里迷了路时，她感到恐惧了。 8. At the sight of the wolf, I felt that the blood in my body froze rapidly. 一看见狼，我感觉我的血液都凝固起来。 9. He was frozen to the spot with terror, unable to turn his head to confirm his worst fear． 他吓得僵在原地，甚至无法转头去确认自己最担忧的事情。 10. Panic surged through him as sweat trickled down his face, leaving him overwhelmed. 他顿时感到恐慌，汗水顺着他的脸颊滑落，让他感到不知所措。 工坊间·分型实训 一、单句翻译。根据括号内所给提示翻译下列各句。 1. ____________________________________________________________________ (flood, shake ) 恐惧涌上她的心头，使她浑身发抖。 2. ____________________________________________________________________ (tremble, sweat ) 我浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。 3. ____________________________________________________________________ (creep, alone ) 当她晚上独自走路时，恐惧悄然笼罩着她。 4. ____________________________________________________________________ ( pale, tongue-tied) 她的脸色变得煞白，站在那里，说不出话来。 5. ____________________________________________________________________ (freeze, scared ) 他吓得僵住了,吓得寸步难行。 6. ____________________________________________________________________ (tremble, pins ) 她浑身颤抖,如坐针毡。 7. ____________________________________________________________________ (panic, seize ) Lily意识到自己在森林里迷了路时，她感到恐惧了。 8. ____________________________________________________________________ (flood, freeze ) 一看见狼，我感觉我的血液都凝固起来。 9. ____________________________________________________________________ (freeze, terror ) 他吓得僵在原地，甚至无法转头去确认自己最担忧的事情。 10. ____________________________________________________________________ (panic, surge ) 他顿时感到恐慌，汗水顺着他的脸颊滑落，让他感到不知所措。 二、一句多译。注意句式多变丰富表达手段。 1. 走在空荡荡的街道上，一阵恐惧涌上她的心头。 ①_______________________________________________________ (主从复合句+无灵主语) ②_______________________________________________________ (非谓语+被动语态) ③_______________________________________________________ (复合句+无灵主语) ④_______________________________________________________ (无灵主语+状从) ⑤_______________________________________________________ (被动语态+状从省略) 2. 一看见蛇，我感到害怕，双腿发抖，手心出汗了。 ①_______________________________________________________ (介短前置+动作链) ②_______________________________________________________ (非谓语+独立主格结构) ③_______________________________________________________ (非谓语置+with复合结构) ④_______________________________________________________ (无灵主语+with结构) ⑤_______________________________________________________ (独立主格+with结构) 三、情景翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式补全段落。 情景一：饥肠辘辘的熊循着气味一路寻到我们的营地，营地被高高的铁丝网团团围住…… The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. 1 (一阵恐惧攫住了我，我一动也不能动). 2  (惊恐不已，我觉得两腿发抖，手心冒汗). Beside me was my wife, 3  (吓得呆若木鸡，僵立不动). At the sight of the polar bear’s bloody mouth, 4 (她吓得要死). The furry creature launched an attack on the fence, instantly leaving a narrow opening on it. 5  (我们感觉浑身血液凝固了) because of the terrible sight. 6  (我们的喉咙发紧，膝盖发软). Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. 情景二：当我正聚精会神地拍摄这惊人的景观时,我突然感觉有什么在盯着我。 As the polar bear approached, I stopped dead. 1 (恐惧万分，无灵主语句).I turned to my wife, and 2 (看见了她惊恐、煞白的脸)."Come on, run, run!" I yelled, 3 (声音里含着无法抑制的恐惧,形容词短语作状语)。I tried to pull her away, but she couldn't move, 4 (嘴巴惊恐地张得老大,独立主格) 四、段落翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式润色文章。 ①凶猛的大熊猛撞木围栏时，恐惧慢慢向我袭来。②心底翻涌阵阵惊惧，恐惧感瞬间将我淹没，紧紧攫住我的心脏。③强烈的惊悚感彻底将我裹挟，我吓得面无人色，双手因恐惧不住颤抖。④浑身止不住哆嗦，手心冷汗直流，恐惧到发不出半点声响。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ①Lucy天黑后独自在林间游荡，恐惧一点点向她袭来。②恐惧骤然将她席卷，让她浑身不停发抖。③她全身战栗，手心大汗淋漓。④她面色惨白，僵立在原地说不出一句话。⑤因恐惧浑身僵直，半步都不敢挪动，不敢发出丝毫声响。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 高考场·真题临摹 1.（2020·浙江7月卷）邂逅北极熊拍下独特画面 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside"the polar bear capital of the world”－the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals－should be photographed from a safe distance.When I'm face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子） I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇），I took some pictures or the bear. Eilt and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears' eyes,but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and.through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫），the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. Para 1. A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp. Para 2. 2.（25-26高三下·江苏南京·阶段检测）风雨相伴，协力登顶 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The mountain had called to them with the promise of crisp air and breathtaking views. Alex and Mex, filled with adventurous spirit, had begun their ascent with energetic strides. The path was steep but manageable, and the sun filtered gently through the lush canopy. For the first hour, laughter and easy conversation accompanied their climb. Then, the sky began to change. A cool wind whispered through the trees, and the first few drops of rain landed, cold and unexpected. Within minutes, a steady drizzle enveloped the mountain, transforming the once-firm path into a treacherous, muddy slide. Their enthusiasm quickly evaporated, replaced by a gnawing fear. Each step became a cautious, uncertain movement. Mex clutched a wet tree root, his knuckles white. “Maybe we should turn back,” he suggested, his voice barely a whisper against the patter of rain. Alex, equally terrified, felt a similar impulse to retreat. They stood there, paralyzed on the slippery incline, the summit feeling further away than ever. The fear of falling, of a twisted ankle or worse, was a cold knot in their stomachs. The mountain was no longer a friend but a slick, dangerous adversary. Just as despair began to set in, Alex’s eyes fell upon a gnarled, ancient branch lying by the path. An idea sparked. “We don’t need to go fast,” Alex said, his voice gaining conviction. “We just need to be smart and steady.” He picked up the branch, testing its strength. “We can use this as an anchor. One of us finds a secure foothold and plants the branch, and the other uses it for support to move up. Then we switch. Slow and steady.” 注意： 1. 写作词数150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Mex looked skeptical but saw the logic. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally, the ground began to level out. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.（2025·山东日照·一模）登山遇险，队友暖心相救 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the summer of 2019, and I was part of a team of eight climbers attempting to reach the top of Mount Rainier in Washington State. We had been training for over a year, preparing for the physical and mental challenges of the climb. Our team, composed of experienced mountaineers and a few beginners like myself, had grown close during our training sessions. We relied on each other for support, encouragement, and motivation. If someone was struggling, the rest of us would step in to help, whether it was carrying extra sports equipment or offering words of encouragement. The first two days of the climb went smoothly. We made good progress, reaching Camp Muir at 10,000 feet without any major issues. The weather was perfect, and our spirits were high. On the third day, we began our push for the peak. The plan was to start early in the morning, around 2 a.m., to take advantage of the colder, firmer snow. We roped up and began the climb, each of us focused on the task at hand. As we approached Disappointment, Cleaver, a steep and dangerous section of the climb, the weather began to change. The wind picked up, and the temperature dropped significantly. We could barely see more than a few feet in front of us because of the dense fog, and the snow underfoot became unstable. Despite the challenging conditions, we carried on, determined to reach the peak. Then, disaster struck. One of our team members, Sarah, lost her footing and slipped. The force of her fall pulled the rest of us off balance, and we all fell, sliding down the slope (斜坡). I felt a sharp pain in my leg as I hit a rock, and I knew immediately that something was wrong. The rest of the team quickly regained their footing and managed to stop our slide, but I was unable to stand. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “I think my leg is broken,” I said painfully. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The rescue team arrived finally. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.（25-26高二下·河南驻马店·期末）勇救落水母女，彰显善意 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 46-year-old Kim Wallace and her 8-year-old daughter, Olivia, had been heading home after picking up dinner from Olive Garden. On the way back home, she suddenly began feeling extremely sick while driving the SUV. The sudden wave of nausea (作呕) caused Kim to lose consciousness behind the wheel, and the SUV went out of control instantly. Sitting in the back seat, 8-year-old Olivia was jolted (颠簸) violently as soon as the car turned sharply. The peaceful mood after their dinner out disappeared in an instant. She called out in a trembling voice, “Mom! Mom! What’s up?” Yet she got no response from Kim. Panic washing over the little girl, she grabbed tightly onto the edge of the front seat. As the vehicle crashed through a fence, tore across several residential backyards, and slid rapidly toward a nearby pond, Olivia screamed, “Help! Help!” By the time the SUV threw itself into the cold pond water, she was completely overwhelmed by fear and helplessness. The violent crash made a loud sound, and it was this sudden loud crash that caught the attention of 33-year-old Yianni Sarris, who was helping his father cut down trees in the backyard of his parents’ home at that moment. Sarris witnessed the entire shocking scene of the out-of-control SUV. Realizing that there were people trapped in the sinking vehicle, Sarris rushed straight toward the pond. Noticing several neighbors drawn by the crash were rushing toward the pond, Sarris didn’t even pause to exchange a word — he just jumped in. Fortunately, the water in the pond was not all that deep. Swimming nearer, he spotted through the half-open window that in the car were a panicked girl and an unconscious lady. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Without hesitation, Sarris reached out for the vehicle door. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After swimming Kim back to the shore, Sarris collapsed from exhaustion. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 第12讲 读后续写：如何表达恐惧背默与仿写(词-句-文)(复习讲练) 内容导航 01 风向标·命题地图 考情分析+趋势预判 02 全景图·能力图谱 思维导图/表格+能力体系呈现 03 笔法堂·技法精修 核心技法讲解（分技法点） 技法一 “恐惧”类词汇语料 技法二 “恐惧”类语块语料 技法三 “恐惧”类佳句语料 04 工坊间·分型实训 分型考法训练（含例题+变式） 一、单句翻译 二、一句多译 三、情景翻译 四、段落翻译 05 高考场·真题临摹 高考真题精讲+范文评析 2020年浙江7月卷 故事情节：夫妻赴加拿大拍摄北极熊，遇幼熊闯营撞栏，二人起初惶恐，喷雾驱熊反激化险情、愈发紧张，最终等来了救援，转危为安心生庆幸。 心理变化：期待愉悦 → 惊慌恐惧（幼熊闯营撞栏）→ 焦灼无奈（驱熊无效、救援延迟）→ 极度惶恐（喷雾激怒熊，险情升级）→ 如释重负、满心庆幸（直升机赶到成功脱险） 全景图·能力图谱 卷别 主题 续写话题 心理轨迹 能力考查 2023浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者农场救下被困蜂鸟，建立默契。数周后重访，窗已修颇感欣慰，临别蜂鸟再度现身，尽显自然温情。 初见蜂鸟受困怜悯→别后时时牵挂→重访见窗修甚感宽慰→蜂鸟归来又惊又喜→珍视这份奇缘 信任建立善意回馈 2023新高考I卷 人与自我 对写作从恐惧痛苦到享受的认知转变，发现自我潜能。通过选择有趣视角、反复修改解决写作难题。 由抗拒写作到尝试→从疲惫怀疑到沉浸享受→获奖后感恩老师→立志坚持，终在写作路上收获成长 问题解决策略迁移 2024浙江1月卷 人与自我 Eva将一英里分解为小目标获教练赞赏；此法用于熟悉校园建筑领悟到分解困难、逐步前行的人生智慧。 惧跑恐慌→自我怀疑→经分段坚持获肯定而惊讶→将目标分解法认路→建立自信，领悟方法比天赋重要 心理突破认知升级 2024新课标卷 人与社会 作者航班延误赶末班巴士，出租车司机热心相助，作者无现金承诺归还，最终守信还钱并结下深厚友谊。 赶车焦急→无钱窘迫→司机信任暂缓付费而感激→履约还钱互赠礼物结为好友→展现陌生人善意与诚信 信任建立善意回馈 2025浙江1月卷 人与社会 见义勇为与可能冤枉人之间道德焦虑，并通过询问邻居、前往警局寻求真相，体现理性与善良的结合。 不安解释经过→发现手表震惊→赴警局忐忑→真相大白如释重负→获赞勇敢→悟行事需勇气亦需核实。 道德判断求证精神 2025全国一卷 人与自我 作者因聚会拒绝弟弟带狗入内致其愤然离去，后良心不安携饼干登门道歉，兄弟和解领悟亲情重于固执。 内疚自责→放下骄傲电话道歉→忐忑登门→兄弟相拥释然→围坐谈心→观Toby依偎悟治愈 情感修复关系重建 2025全国二卷 人与社会 因名字发音尴尬而回避，到主动解释名字含义、传播文化，完成从“适应者”到“传播者”的身份转变。 紧张忐忑→阐释名字渐自信→同学专注尊重而振奋→课后被围提问而温暖→教汉字中领悟文化认同价值 身份认同文化沟通 2026浙江1月卷 人与自然 送女儿途中发现受惊迷路牛被围观者嘲笑。返回救助与警察合作运用农场经验成功控制，农夫赶来领回。 自信逞强欲救牛→遇敌意恐惧→警察至镇定合作→牛获救欣慰释然→接女获崇拜自豪→悟英雄贵在勇为 心理突破认知升级 2026全国一卷 人与社会 Emily不顾暴风雪赴约途中遇险被困获夫妇救助，改火车完成行程，事后登门致谢。完成善意回馈闭环。 雪夜绝望恐慌→获救满怀感激→乘车奔赴希望→与男友团聚喜极而泣→返程致谢→悟陌生人善意暖人心 信任建立善意回馈 2026全国二卷 人与自我 以熬夜为傲的夜猫子到认识到自律才是真自由，完成从抗拒早起到享受清晨的认知转变与健康觉醒。 震惊恐惧→决心改变→深夜焦虑→靠意志坚持→晨间清醒活力恢复→见父母欣慰而自豪→悟自律即自由 心理突破认知升级 笔法堂·技法精修 技法一 “恐惧”类词汇语料 1.恐惧类形容词： 初阶 terrible 可怕的；糟糕的horrible 使人恐惧的afraid 害怕的；担心的frightening 令人恐惧的fearful 恐惧的frightened 害怕的；受惊的pale 苍白的horrifying 令人恐惧的scared 害怕的scary 使人惊慌的  高阶 panicked 惊恐的  alarmed 惊恐的；忧虑的alarming 使人惊恐的terrified害怕的terrifying 令人害怕的panic-stricken 被惊恐袭击的 terror-stricken 被恐惧袭击的open-mouthed 张大嘴的tongue-tied 说不出话的；结舌的frozen 僵住的sweaty 出汗的speechless 无语的 2.恐惧类名词： 初阶 fear 恐惧、担心concern 担心 terror/horror 恐怖  高阶 panic 惊恐dread 恐惧fright 害怕 3.恐惧类动词： 初阶 fear 害怕frighten 使害怕shake/tremble 颤抖 scare 惊吓、害怕 高阶 dread 恐惧 frown 皱眉horrify 使震惊，使感到恐怖panic使恐惧 技法二 “恐惧”类语块语料 初阶 1.face turns pale 脸色变白 2.scare ... to death 把……吓死 3.fear creeps over sb. 感到害怕 4.be seized with panic 惊慌失措 5.in panic/ terror 害怕地、恐惧地 6.be half dead with fear吓得半死 7.heart beat violently 心跳得厉害 8.shake from head to toe全身颤抖 9.choke with fear 因为害怕而哽咽 高阶 10.freeze/be frozen with fear 吓呆/吓傻 11.shake/tremble with fear/terror 吓得发抖　 12.be scared out of one’s wits 吓得魂不附体　 13.a flood of fear wells up in sb 从心底感到害怕 14.stand rooted to the spot with fear 吓得呆若木鸡　 15.shake all over in a cold sweat 浑身发抖，冒冷汗 技法三 “恐惧”类佳句语料 1. Fear flooded over her, making her shake all over. 恐惧涌上她的心头，使她浑身发抖。 2. I trembled all over and my palms were sweating. 我浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。 3. Fear crept over her as she walked alone at night． 当她晚上独自走路时，恐惧悄然笼罩着她。 4. Her face turned pale and stood there, tongue-tied. 她的脸色变得煞白，站在那里，说不出话来。 5. Frozen with fear, he was too scared to move an inch.  他吓得僵住了,吓得寸步难行。 6. She trembled all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.  她浑身颤抖,如坐针毡。 7. Panic seized her as Lily realized she had lost her way in the forest. Lily意识到自己在森林里迷了路时，她感到恐惧了。 8. At the sight of the wolf, I felt that the blood in my body froze rapidly. 一看见狼，我感觉我的血液都凝固起来。 9. He was frozen to the spot with terror, unable to turn his head to confirm his worst fear． 他吓得僵在原地，甚至无法转头去确认自己最担忧的事情。 10. Panic surged through him as sweat trickled down his face, leaving him overwhelmed. 他顿时感到恐慌，汗水顺着他的脸颊滑落，让他感到不知所措。 工坊间·分型实训 一、单句翻译。根据括号内所给提示翻译下列各句。 1. ____________________________________________________________________ (flood, shake ) 恐惧涌上她的心头，使她浑身发抖。 2. ____________________________________________________________________ (tremble, sweat ) 我浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。 3. ____________________________________________________________________ (creep, alone ) 当她晚上独自走路时，恐惧悄然笼罩着她。 4. ____________________________________________________________________ ( pale, tongue-tied) 她的脸色变得煞白，站在那里，说不出话来。 5. ____________________________________________________________________ (freeze, scared ) 他吓得僵住了,吓得寸步难行。 6. ____________________________________________________________________ (tremble, pins ) 她浑身颤抖,如坐针毡。 7. ____________________________________________________________________ (panic, seize ) Lily意识到自己在森林里迷了路时，她感到恐惧了。 8. ____________________________________________________________________ (flood, freeze ) 一看见狼，我感觉我的血液都凝固起来。 9. ____________________________________________________________________ (freeze, terror ) 他吓得僵在原地，甚至无法转头去确认自己最担忧的事情。 10. ____________________________________________________________________ (panic, surge ) 他顿时感到恐慌，汗水顺着他的脸颊滑落，让他感到不知所措。 【参考答案】 1. Fear flooded over her, making her shake all over. 2. I trembled all over and my palms were sweating. 3. Fear crept over her as she walked alone at night． 4. Her face turned pale and stood there, tongue-tied. 5. Frozen with fear, he was too scared to move an inch.  6. She trembled all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.  7. Panic seized her as Lily realized she had lost her way in the forest. 8. At the sight of the wolf, I felt that the blood in my body froze rapidly. 9. He was frozen to the spot with terror, unable to turn his head to confirm his worst fear． 10. Panic surged through him as sweat trickled down his face, leaving him overwhelmed. 二、一句多译。注意句式多变丰富表达手段。 1. 走在空荡荡的街道上，一阵恐惧涌上她的心头。 ①A flood of fear welled up in her when she walked in the empty street. (主从复合句+无灵主语) ②Walking down the vacant street, she was seized by fear. (非谓语+被动语态) ③Fear flooded her heart as she walked on the empty street. (复合句+无灵主语) ④A wave of fear crept over her when she walked on the quiet street. (无灵主语+状从) ⑤She was seized by terror while wandering the vacant street. (被动语态+状从省略) 2. 一看见蛇，我感到害怕，双腿发抖，手心出汗了。 ①At the sight of the snake, I trembled with fear and sweated. (介短前置+动作链) ②Seeing the snake, I felt scared, legs shaking and palms sweating. (非谓语+独立主格结构) ③Scared at the snake, I trembled all over with sweaty palms. (非谓语置+with复合结构) ④Fear seized me at the sight of the snake, with my legs trembling and palms sweaty. (无灵主语+with结构) ⑤Fear overwhelming me, I stood there, with my legs trembling and palms sweating. (独立主格+with结构) 三、情景翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式补全段落。 情景一：饥肠辘辘的熊循着气味一路寻到我们的营地，营地被高高的铁丝网团团围住…… The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. 1 (一阵恐惧攫住了我，我一动也不能动). 2  (惊恐不已，我觉得两腿发抖，手心冒汗). Beside me was my wife, 3  (吓得呆若木鸡，僵立不动). At the sight of the polar bear’s bloody mouth, 4 (她吓得要死). The furry creature launched an attack on the fence, instantly leaving a narrow opening on it. 5  (我们感觉浑身血液凝固了) because of the terrible sight. 6  (我们的喉咙发紧，膝盖发软). Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. 【参考答案】 1. A burst of horror swept over me, and I was unable to move an inch 2. Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating 3. who was rooted to the ground, frozen with fear 4. she was nearly dead with fright 5. We felt that the blood in our body cooled/froze 6. Our throats tightened and our knees felt weak 情景二：当我正聚精会神地拍摄这惊人的景观时,我突然感觉有什么在盯着我。 As the polar bear approached, I stopped dead. 1 (恐惧万分，无灵主语句).I turned to my wife, and 2 (看见了她惊恐、煞白的脸)."Come on, run, run!" I yelled, 3 (声音里含着无法抑制的恐惧,形容词短语作状语)。I tried to pull her away, but she couldn't move, 4 (嘴巴惊恐地张得老大,独立主格) 【参考答案】 1. Fear flooded over me 2. saw her scared white face 3. unable to keep the fear out of my voice 4. her mouth open with terror 四、段落翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式润色文章。 ①凶猛的大熊猛撞木围栏时，恐惧慢慢向我袭来。②心底翻涌阵阵惊惧，恐惧感瞬间将我淹没，紧紧攫住我的心脏。③强烈的惊悚感彻底将我裹挟，我吓得面无人色，双手因恐惧不住颤抖。④浑身止不住哆嗦，手心冷汗直流，恐惧到发不出半点声响。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】①As the fierce bear banged against the wooden fence, fear slowly crept upon me. ②A flood of fear welled up in my chest and fear flooded over me in an instant, squeezing my heart tightly. ③I was seized and overwhelmed by a strong sense of horror. My face was dead with fright, my hands shaking uncontrollably with fear. ④Trembling all over, I felt cold sweat pouring out of my palms, too terrified to make any sound. ①Lucy天黑后独自在林间游荡，恐惧一点点向她袭来。②恐惧骤然将她席卷，让她浑身不停发抖。③她全身战栗，手心大汗淋漓。④她面色惨白，僵立在原地说不出一句话。⑤因恐惧浑身僵直，半步都不敢挪动，不敢发出丝毫声响。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 ①As Lucy wandered alone in the woods after dark, fear crept over her little by little. ②Fear flooded over her suddenly, making her shake all over. ③She trembled all over and her palms were sweating terribly. ④Her face turned pale and she stood there, tongue-tied. ⑤Frozen with fear, she was too scared to move an inch, not daring to make any noise. 高考场·真题临摹 1.（2020·浙江7月卷）邂逅北极熊拍下独特画面 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside"the polar bear capital of the world”－the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals－should be photographed from a safe distance.When I'm face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子） I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇），I took some pictures or the bear. Eilt and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears' eyes,but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and.through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫），the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. Para 1. A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp. Para 2. At that very moment,the helicopter arrived. 【解析】 【分析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊。夫妻二人做饭之时，一头饥饿的雄性幼熊跟着面包的蒜香味，靠近了营地，猛烈撞击营地边上的铁丝围栏。作者和妻子使出浑身解数，想吓退这头熊，不料它“不破篱笆誓不归”。无奈之下，作者求助营地管理员，被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到，只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛，不料这使熊变得更加暴躁，在千钧一发之际直升机及时赶到，他们得救了的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： 由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，熊返回了我们的营地。”可知，第一段可描写作者夫妻二人如何再次对付熊及两人在此过程中的紧张害怕。 由第二段首句内容“就在那时，直升机赶到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者夫妻二人获救时的心情。 2.续写线索：熊返回营地——紧张害怕——用面包攻击——直升机赶到——快速登上飞机——熊把篱笆推到——拍下熊“打劫”的画面 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①激怒：anger/provoke / enrage ②抓起：grab/snatch up ③拿出：take out/fetch out 情绪类 ①疯狂的：mad/crazy ②兴奋的：excited/thrilled 【点睛】 [高分句型1] then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly.（for引导的原因状语从句） [高分句型2] My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. （现在分词作状语） [高分句型3] Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. (once引导时间状语从句和形容词作状语) 【范文达标版】 A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Angrier than before, it hit the wire fence violently again and bit the posts repeatedly. Elli and I were extremely frightened. We shouted loudly and struck pots continuously to drive it away, yet the bear refused to leave. I dared not use the pepper spray once more in case it made the bear attack the fence desperately. We held each other tightly, worrying the fence would break down before rescue came. At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. It hovered above our camp and made loud noises. The bear was startled by the huge sound and turned around to run away towards the lake quickly. We waved wildly to the helicopter to show we were safe. Later the workers on the helicopter landed and comforted us. Though we were still shaken, we felt relieved to escape from this dangerous experience finally. 【范文满分版】 A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. The noises turned Elli and I pale with horror. I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence. He roared repeatedly, shattering what was left of the silence. Elli seized this opportunity to take somepictures of the bear. The animal’s noises echoed all around us. We betrayed our feelings by huddling together, shivering with fear. After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, he trotted forward a few steps. At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved. Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time. But this time the bear became more alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger, so we throw all the food we have. He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound. 2.（25-26高三下·江苏南京·阶段检测）风雨相伴，协力登顶 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The mountain had called to them with the promise of crisp air and breathtaking views. Alex and Mex, filled with adventurous spirit, had begun their ascent with energetic strides. The path was steep but manageable, and the sun filtered gently through the lush canopy. For the first hour, laughter and easy conversation accompanied their climb. Then, the sky began to change. A cool wind whispered through the trees, and the first few drops of rain landed, cold and unexpected. Within minutes, a steady drizzle enveloped the mountain, transforming the once-firm path into a treacherous, muddy slide. Their enthusiasm quickly evaporated, replaced by a gnawing fear. Each step became a cautious, uncertain movement. Mex clutched a wet tree root, his knuckles white. “Maybe we should turn back,” he suggested, his voice barely a whisper against the patter of rain. Alex, equally terrified, felt a similar impulse to retreat. They stood there, paralyzed on the slippery incline, the summit feeling further away than ever. The fear of falling, of a twisted ankle or worse, was a cold knot in their stomachs. The mountain was no longer a friend but a slick, dangerous adversary. Just as despair began to set in, Alex’s eyes fell upon a gnarled, ancient branch lying by the path. An idea sparked. “We don’t need to go fast,” Alex said, his voice gaining conviction. “We just need to be smart and steady.” He picked up the branch, testing its strength. “We can use this as an anchor. One of us finds a secure foothold and plants the branch, and the other uses it for support to move up. Then we switch. Slow and steady.” 注意： 1. 写作词数150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Mex looked skeptical but saw the logic. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally, the ground began to level out. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【达标版范文】参考范文 Mex looked skeptical but saw the logic. He was still overcome with fear at the slippery muddy path. Nodding his head, he tried to calm his anxious heart. Alex stuck the branch firmly into the mud to make a steady support. Holding the branch tightly, Mex moved forward carefully. The two took turns moving and supporting each other. The rain continued to fall, but their fear slowly disappeared. They encouraged one another bravely, moving steadily ahead despite the tough conditions. Finally, the ground began to level out. Soon the rain stopped and bright sunlight came out, lighting up the whole mountain. Tired and breathless, they successfully reached the summit. Looking at the beautiful scenery around them, they felt greatly relieved and joyful. All the fear and tiredness during the climb vanished at once. They hugged each other happily. From this experience, they learned that teamwork and courage can help us beat fear and get through hard times. 【满分版范文】 Mex looked skeptical but saw the logic. Still haunted by lingering fear, he nodded tightly and took a deep breath to ease his tension. Alex firmly planted one end of the branch into the slippery mud to build a stable anchor. Gripping the branch tightly to fight against inner panic, Mex moved his feet cautiously step by step on the treacherous path. They took turns supporting each other and inched forward slowly. Although the cold rain kept falling and the road remained risky, their overwhelming fear faded away gradually, replaced by mutual trust and determination. They whispered encouragement, steadying each other’s trembling nerves. Finally, the ground began to level out. The rain gradually ceased, and warm sunlight pierced through the dense clouds, sweeping away the gloomy atmosphere. Sweaty and exhausted, they stepped onto the flat summit side by side, immense relief flooding over them. Gazing at the stunning misty mountain scenery, they felt all previous fear and hardship worthwhile. They hugged each other tightly, brimming with pride and joy. This unforgettable experience taught them that calm wisdom and teamwork are the most powerful weapons to defeat fear and overcome difficulties. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了Alex和Mex在爬山途中遭遇大雨，山路变得泥泞危险，他们感到恐惧想要放弃，但Alex想出用树枝作为锚点，两人互相配合，最终成功登顶的故事。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“Mex看起来有些怀疑，但还是看到了其中的逻辑”可知，第一段可描写Mex同意了Alex的办法，两人开始互相配合，缓慢前进。 ②由第二段首句内容“最后，地面开始变得平坦起来”可知，第二段可描写他们成功登顶，欣赏到了美丽的风景，并从中领悟到了人生哲理。 2. 续写线索：Mex同意——两人配合前进——成功登顶——欣赏风景——领悟哲理 3. 词汇激活 行为类： ①专注于：focus on/concentrate on ②停止：stop/cease ③拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类： ①恐惧：fear/terror ②兴奋的：excited/thrilled 【点睛】【高分句型1】Though progress was slow, they no longer felt helpless.(运用了though引导的让步状语从句) 【高分句型2】Rain still poured down, but fear faded as trust grew between them. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句) 3.（2025·山东日照·一模）登山遇险，队友暖心相救 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the summer of 2019, and I was part of a team of eight climbers attempting to reach the top of Mount Rainier in Washington State. We had been training for over a year, preparing for the physical and mental challenges of the climb. Our team, composed of experienced mountaineers and a few beginners like myself, had grown close during our training sessions. We relied on each other for support, encouragement, and motivation. If someone was struggling, the rest of us would step in to help, whether it was carrying extra sports equipment or offering words of encouragement. The first two days of the climb went smoothly. We made good progress, reaching Camp Muir at 10,000 feet without any major issues. The weather was perfect, and our spirits were high. On the third day, we began our push for the peak. The plan was to start early in the morning, around 2 a.m., to take advantage of the colder, firmer snow. We roped up and began the climb, each of us focused on the task at hand. As we approached Disappointment, Cleaver, a steep and dangerous section of the climb, the weather began to change. The wind picked up, and the temperature dropped significantly. We could barely see more than a few feet in front of us because of the dense fog, and the snow underfoot became unstable. Despite the challenging conditions, we carried on, determined to reach the peak. Then, disaster struck. One of our team members, Sarah, lost her footing and slipped. The force of her fall pulled the rest of us off balance, and we all fell, sliding down the slope (斜坡). I felt a sharp pain in my leg as I hit a rock, and I knew immediately that something was wrong. The rest of the team quickly regained their footing and managed to stop our slide, but I was unable to stand. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “I think my leg is broken,” I said painfully. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The rescue team arrived finally. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【达标版范文】 “I think my leg is broken,” I said painfully. Severe pain spread through my leg, and fear crept over me instantly. My teammates hurried to gather around me, checking my injury carefully. Sarah felt extremely guilty and blamed herself for the accident. The team leader tried to calm everyone down and radioed for rescue. However, the terrible weather delayed the rescue. Frozen with fear, I trembled a little, and my teammates stayed close to keep me warm. The rescue team arrived finally. They professionally examined my injury and fixed me on a stretcher, then carried me down the mountain slowly. My teammates accompanied me all the way, which relieved my fear. I received timely medical treatment at last. Though I suffered a broken leg, I was deeply grateful to my teammates. This terrible experience made me realize the true value of teamwork and sincere friendship. 【满分版范文】 “I think my leg is broken,” I said painfully. A wave of fear flooded over me as sharp pain tortured my leg. My teammates instantly gathered around me, wearing worried looks on their faces. Our team leader Mark hurriedly examined my injury to figure out the severity of the wound. Burdened with intense guilt, Sarah was on the verge of tears and kept blaming herself. We comforted her sincerely, telling her no one was to blame for the accident. Mark immediately radioed for rescue, yet the terrible fog and low temperature delayed the rescue. Frozen with fear and cold, I could hardly hold on, so my teammates huddled tightly around me to share body heat and calm my nerves. The rescue team arrived finally. Professional rescuers carefully strapped me onto a stretcher and carried me steadily down the steep mountain. My teammates followed closely all the way, accompanying me to ease my lingering fear. Back at the base camp, I received timely and professional medical treatment. Though I suffered a broken leg and went through a terrifying experience, I was overwhelmed with gratitude for my selfless teammates. They chose to stay with me and gave up the chance to reach the peak. This unforgettable experience made me thoroughly understand the true meaning of teamwork and precious friendship. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了2019年夏，作者参与八人团队攀登华盛顿州雷尼尔山，团队训练超一年且成员彼此支持。前两日攀登顺利，第三天接近 “失望之角” 时天气恶化，队员莎拉滑倒致众人摔倒，作者腿部受伤无法站立。队友围拢，队长查伤情，莎拉自责，因天气差救援未及时到，众人保暖。最终救援队至，作者下山接受治疗。虽骨折，但作者感激队友支持及放弃登顶的陪伴，体会到团队合作与友谊的真谛。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我想我的腿断了。我痛苦地说。”可知，第一段可描写队长马克检查了作者的伤情以及用无线电求救。 ②由第二段首句内容“救援队终于到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者接受了治疗以及对这次登山经历的感受。 2.续写线索：我想我的腿断了——队长马克检查了我的腿——用无线电求救——救援队终于到了——得到了治疗——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①评估：assessed / evaluated ②检查：examined /checked ③强调：emphasizing /stressing 情绪类 ①感激：gratitude / appreciation ②内疚的：guilty / compunctious 【点睛】[高分句型1]Sarah, who felt guilty for causing the fall, was on the verge of tears.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2]Although my leg was broken, I was filled with gratitude for my teammates.（运用了Although引导的让步状语从句） 4.（25-26高二下·河南驻马店·期末）勇救落水母女，彰显善意 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 46-year-old Kim Wallace and her 8-year-old daughter, Olivia, had been heading home after picking up dinner from Olive Garden. On the way back home, she suddenly began feeling extremely sick while driving the SUV. The sudden wave of nausea (作呕) caused Kim to lose consciousness behind the wheel, and the SUV went out of control instantly. Sitting in the back seat, 8-year-old Olivia was jolted (颠簸) violently as soon as the car turned sharply. The peaceful mood after their dinner out disappeared in an instant. She called out in a trembling voice, “Mom! Mom! What’s up?” Yet she got no response from Kim. Panic washing over the little girl, she grabbed tightly onto the edge of the front seat. As the vehicle crashed through a fence, tore across several residential backyards, and slid rapidly toward a nearby pond, Olivia screamed, “Help! Help!” By the time the SUV threw itself into the cold pond water, she was completely overwhelmed by fear and helplessness. The violent crash made a loud sound, and it was this sudden loud crash that caught the attention of 33-year-old Yianni Sarris, who was helping his father cut down trees in the backyard of his parents’ home at that moment. Sarris witnessed the entire shocking scene of the out-of-control SUV. Realizing that there were people trapped in the sinking vehicle, Sarris rushed straight toward the pond. Noticing several neighbors drawn by the crash were rushing toward the pond, Sarris didn’t even pause to exchange a word — he just jumped in. Fortunately, the water in the pond was not all that deep. Swimming nearer, he spotted through the half-open window that in the car were a panicked girl and an unconscious lady. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Without hesitation, Sarris reached out for the vehicle door. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After swimming Kim back to the shore, Sarris collapsed from exhaustion. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【达标版范文】 Without hesitation, Sarris reached out for the vehicle door. Frightened and helpless, little Olivia was shaking all over, trapped in the sinking car. Struggling in the icy water, Sarris managed to pull the door open. He gently comforted the terrified girl and carried her to the safe shallow water, leaving her in the care of neighbors. Without delay, he swam back to rescue the unconscious Kim, as rising water put her life at great risk. Using all his strength, he unfastened her seat belt and dragged her out of the car. After swimming Kim back to the shore, Sarris collapsed from exhaustion. He panted heavily, trembling with tiredness after the tough rescue. The mother and daughter were still overcome with fear. Warm blankets were offered by kind neighbors to help them recover. Shortly afterwards, the ambulance arrived and gave Kim timely treatment. Eventually, the two escaped danger safely. This experience made Sarris realize that ordinary bravery can drive away people’s deepest fear and bring hope to others. 【满分版范文】 Without hesitation, Sarris reached out for the vehicle door. Cold water was gradually creeping into the sinking car, and extreme fear had completely overwhelmed the little girl, leaving her trembling helplessly. Sarris comforted the terrified Olivia softly before pulling the door open and lifting her out of the car. He sent the scared girl to shallow water and asked a neighbor to take care of her, reminding them to call emergency services immediately. By then, half of the car was flooded, putting the unconscious Kim in mortal danger. With great effort, Sarris unbuckled Kim’s seat belt and pulled her out through the half-open window. After swimming Kim back to the shore, Sarris collapsed from exhaustion. Shivering and breathless, he could barely stand steadily after the tough rescue. Still haunted by the terrifying experience, the mother and daughter looked extremely frightened. Nearby neighbors rushed over to check their condition and covered them with warm blankets. Soon, emergency vehicles arrived. With professional treatment, Kim gradually regained consciousness. Olivia finally calmed down and thanked Sarris sincerely for saving them. It suddenly struck Sarris that ordinary kindness and courage can dispel people’s deepest fear and light up the darkness of despair. 【导语】本文以人物为线索。讲述了金姆驾车途中突发疾病昏迷，车辆失控冲入池塘，后座女儿惊恐无助。邻居萨里斯听到撞击声，毫不犹豫跳入池塘，先救出女孩，再奋力救出昏迷的母亲。他因体力透支虚脱，母女二人最终脱险，这次经历让他明白平凡的善意与勇气能驱散绝望。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容可知，本段可以写萨里斯先救出女孩，再奋力救出昏迷的母亲的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容可知，本段可以写萨里斯因体力透支虚脱，但母女二人最终脱险的过程。 2.续写线索：萨里斯伸手打开了车门——轻声安慰着女孩——先救出女孩，再奋力救出昏迷的母亲——萨里斯因极度疲惫而倒下——母女二人最终脱险——明白平凡的善意与勇气能驱散绝望 3.词汇激活 行为类 照料：care for/look after 恢复：regain/recover 感谢：thank /be grateful to 情绪类 善良：kindness/goodness 绝望：despair/hopelessness 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Just at that moment, it struck Sarris that ordinary kindness and selfless courage can become the warmest light to hold people through despair. (运用了It struck sb that…的固定句型。) [高分句型2]. Comforting the girl softly, he pulled the door open, and lifted the terrified Olivia out. (运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词Comforting作状语。) 9 / 16 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $