第17讲 脱离困境类（故事构造三部曲）2027年高考英语一轮复习读后续写高分突破

**基本信息** 以“故事构造三部曲”为核心，系统整合破题思路、句型公式与真题模考，构建“困境-突围-感悟”逻辑链条，提升语言表达与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |破题式·故事骨架|主题画像+3道真题回眸|提炼“困境-突围-感悟”构思路线，明确避坑要点|从主题特征到构思路线，建立故事生成逻辑| |招式谱·句型公式|3步句型公式+12句高频例句|总结突遭险境/自救互救/脱险感悟句型模板|按“陷困-突围-点题”步骤，实现语言表达结构化| |高考场·真题拆解|1道浙江卷真题|拆解真题线索与翻译练习，强化解题应用|以真题为载体，验证方法体系有效性| |风向标·模考速递|3道模考题（灰熊/海啸/鳄鱼）|提供同题材范文与金句，拓展迁移能力|从真题到模考，形成“方法-实践-拓展”闭环|

第17讲 脱离困境类（故事构造三部曲）（原卷版） 内容导航 01 破题式·故事骨架 故事分析 · 构思蓝图 02 招式谱·句型公式 按步取句 / 拿来即用 03 高考场·真题拆解 高考原题+技法讲解 04 风向标·模考速递 最新模考 · 同题材范文与金句 破题式·故事骨架 01 主题画像 脱离困境类故事，以“人在绝境中如何活下来”为轴线：主人公往往在外出游玩、探险或赶路途中遭遇突发意外——暴雪封路、洪水漫堤、地震塌方、林中迷路、猛兽逼近；紧接着雪上加霜，手电没电、食水耗尽、腿脚受伤、呼救无人应；随后靠冷静判断、就地取材、同伴合力或外援赶到迎来转机；结尾回扣“冷静、坚韧、感恩”的主题。简言之：脱离困境类故事 = 一场“由陷困到突围”的生死突围。 02 真题回眸 年份 卷别 故事梗概 情感落点 2016.10 浙江卷 Jane 与丈夫争吵后独自走进森林迷路，靠溪水浆果撑过两夜，最终以黄衬衫招停直升机 求生与亲情 2017.06 浙江卷 Mac 独自骑行赴阿拉斯加，遭野狼一路追咬，靠防熊喷雾与过路车化险为夷 冷静与互助 2020.07 浙江卷 夫妇在营地拍摄北极熊，熊撞破铁丝网步步紧逼，辣椒喷雾拖延到直升机赶到 危机与自救 03 构思路线 ● 突遭险境：先写“困”。用环境突变、意外降临和身体感受，把绝境的突发性与压迫感写足，为后文突围蓄势。 ● 自救互救：再写“搏”。冷静判断、就地取材、同伴合力或外援赶到，让转机在一连串具体行动中生长出来。 ● 脱险感悟：最后写“悟”。既要写获救瞬间的情绪释放，更要回扣主题，用一句点睛之语把“坚韧与感恩”说出来。 处境由安到险 · 行动由慌到定 · 立意由生到悟 04 避坑提醒 ● 不要把“险境”写成“灾难流水账”：危险必须落到具体感官（两米高的雪墙、身后急促的喘息、脚下开裂的冰面），而不是反复说“很危险、很害怕”。 ● 不要让主角“躺平等救援”：脱险一定要有自救动作（找水源、生火、发信号、用喷雾、辨方向），否则人物立不住、情节也没有张力。 ● 不要写成“开挂式获救”：直升机、猎人、救援队的出现要有前文伏笔（呼救声、烟柱、黄衬衫、血迹、蓝布条），不能凭空降临、一句带过。 招式谱·句型公式 Step 1 突遭险境 · 陷困（意外降临 / 陷入绝境） 【本步任务】 交代险境的起点：用环境突变、动物逼近或身体失控的细节，把“突发”与“无助”写足，让读者跟着屏住呼吸。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 Without warning, ________ struck, and I was suddenly ________. 毫无预兆地，…突然发生，我瞬间…（突发陷困） Just when I thought things couldn’t get worse, ________ happened. 就在我以为情况不可能更糟时，…发生了（雪上加霜） Before I could ________, ________ was already ________. 我还来不及…，…就已经…（危机逼近） 【高频例句】 1. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）那只饿熊循着气味找到了我们的营地，营地四周围着高高的铁丝网。   2. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）它又拉又咬铁丝网，还用后腿站起来去推木栅栏柱。   3. （2017.06 浙江卷·骑行遇狼）随后 Mac 听见身后传来急促而沉重的喘息声。   4. （2016.10 浙江卷·森林迷路的 Jane）她转过身，只看见茫茫森林，忽然意识到自己迷路了。   5. （2018.06 浙江卷·西部农场骑马）突然，一只小兔子从我的马前蹿了出来。   6. （2025·浙江温州·高三一模·荒野遇灰熊）拐过弯道他猛地刹车——一头脏兮兮的灰熊就站在窄路正中，相距三十米。   7. （2026·江苏南通·高三一模·池塘鳄鱼袭击）然后我看见了它——那可怕的鼻子和两只凶恶的眼睛。   8. （2025·福建厦门·高三质检·槟城海啸逃生）海水似乎正从岸边退去，父亲看了一眼，脸色刷地白了。   9. （2025·福建厦门·高三质检·槟城海啸逃生）远处一道灰线正朝岸边推来，而且似乎每一秒都在长高。   10. （2025·广东深圳·高三一模·异国途中车祸）砰的一声，我们撞在了一起，厢式车侧翻过去。   11. （2025·湖北武汉·高三二模·铁轨上的姐妹）接着她绊了一跤，摔倒在铁轨上，蘑菇撒了一地。   12. （2025·山东济南·高三期中·雪夜困山）一场猛烈的暴风雪席卷了这片区域，道路被一堵两米高的雪墙拦住。   【情绪小词】 terrified（惊恐的）, panic（恐慌）, freeze（僵住）, trapped（被困的）, desperate（绝望的） Step 2 自救互救 · 突围（冷静应对 / 合力脱险） 【本步任务】 写出转机：让主人公冷静判断、就地取材、发出信号，或与同伴、外援合力，把“困”一点点撬开。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 Gathering every ounce of strength, I ________ with all my might. 拼尽全身力气，我用尽全力…（自救行动） Instead of panicking, I forced myself to ________ and ________. 我没有慌乱，而是强迫自己先…再…（冷静应对） In the distance, I spotted ________, and a spark of hope lit up my heart. 远处，我望见…，心中燃起一丝希望（转机初现） 【高频例句】 1. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）我们冲着熊大喊，用力敲锅，还朝天鸣放空包弹。   2. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）于是我慢慢靠近这位不速之客，隔着铁丝网朝它脸上喷了辣椒喷雾。   3. （2017.06 浙江卷·骑行遇狼）他一手扶着车把，一手朝狼喷出防熊喷雾。   4. （2016.10 浙江卷·森林迷路的 Jane）她循着水声很快找到一条小溪，令她大喜的是还看见几丛浆果。   5. （2018.06 浙江卷·西部农场骑马）“别担心，儿子。农场附近有条河，找到河我们就能回家。”   6. （2025·浙江温州·高三一模·荒野遇灰熊）血不断涌出，Colin 忽然想起了口袋里的那把小刀。   7. （2025·浙江温州·高三一模·荒野遇灰熊）他用尽全力朝熊的脖子刺去，熊痛得咆哮着逃走了。   8. （2026·江苏南通·高三一模·池塘鳄鱼袭击）Jim 和 Syed 尖叫着朝鳄鱼扔石头，成功把它的注意力引开。   9. （2025·福建厦门·高三质检·槟城海啸逃生）父亲一把抓住我的手，把我们推向楼梯，大喊着让我们不停往上爬。   10. （2025·湖北武汉·高三二模·铁轨上的姐妹）Rose 想都没想就跳了过去，用自己的身体护住了妹妹。   11. （2025·广东深圳·高三一模·异国途中车祸）我们被卡在车里动弹不得，路人赶来帮我们爬了出来。   12. （2025·山东青岛·高一期末·沙箱识蛇）“等一等！”我大喊着，手里挥舞着那本动物图鉴。   【情绪小词】 calm（冷静的）, courage（勇气）, struggle（挣扎）, hold on（坚持住）, rescue（营救） Step 3 脱险感悟 · 点题（劫后余生 / 生命顿悟） 【本步任务】 先写获救瞬间的情绪释放（泪水、拥抱、瘫软），再把“冷静、坚韧、感恩”提炼成一句点题之语，让惊险落到哲理。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 As ________ pulled me to safety, I burst into tears, knowing I had made it. 当…把我拉到安全地带，我泪如雨下，知道自己挺过来了（获救） That experience taught me that ________ isn’t about ________ — it’s about ________. 那次经历让我明白，…不在于…，而在于…（顿悟） Never before had I realized how ________ ________ could be. 我从未如此深刻地意识到…是多么…（情感升华） 【高频例句】 1. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）“谢天谢地，我们得救了！”Elli 喊了出来。   2. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）直升机一落地，我们立刻登机，既激动又如释重负。   3. （2017.06 浙江卷·骑行遇狼）“那真是一场噩梦，我以为自己要死了。”Mac 声音发颤，眼里噙满泪水。   4. （2017.06 浙江卷·骑行遇狼）对他而言，生命从未如此美好。   5. （2016.10 浙江卷·森林迷路的 Jane）Tom 从直升机上跳下来向她跑去，她再也撑不住，放声大哭。   6. （2025·浙江温州·高三一模·荒野遇灰熊）“你太幸运了，Colin。天助自助者。”医生说。   7. （2026·江苏南通·高三一模·池塘鳄鱼袭击）妈妈提醒我，能从鳄鱼口中逃生是多么幸运——那真是死里逃生。   8. （2025·福建厦门·高三质检·槟城海啸逃生）眼前的景象让我们心头一紧，于是决定在劫后余生之后去帮助那些受灾的人。   9. （2025·湖北武汉·高三二模·铁轨上的姐妹）两姐妹紧紧相拥，喜悦的泪水顺着脸颊往下流。   10. （2025·湖北武汉·高三二模·铁轨上的姐妹）那一刻，两颗心从未如此幸福地紧紧相连。   11. （2025·广东深圳·高三一模·异国途中车祸）虽然经历了一场可怕的事故，我们却何其幸运，得到了那些热心人的帮助。   12. （2025·山东青岛·高一期末·沙箱识蛇）这次经历不仅让我见到了那条蛇，更让我懂得了人与自然和谐相处的重要。   【情绪小词】 relieved（如释重负的）, grateful（感激的）, a narrow escape（死里逃生）, resilience（坚韧）, treasure（珍惜） 高考场·真题拆解 2020 年 7 月浙江卷（营地遭遇北极熊） 【真题原文】 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside the polar bear capital of the world — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws. I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter, I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar, the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 【续写两段首句】 Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【线索梳理】 赴营拍熊 → 熊嗅香而来 → 撞栏逼近 → 驱赶无效 → 喷雾激怒 → 直升机赶到 → 脱险感悟 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 我们这才明白，喷雾只是把它惹得更愤怒了。   2. 它这一次凶猛得多，发疯似的猛撞铁丝网。   3. 我的心狂跳不止，一时不知所措。   4. 危急关头，Elli 抓起几块蒜香面包扔过了铁丝网。   第二段 1. “谢天谢地，我们得救了！”Elli 喊了出来。   2. 直升机一落地，我们立刻登机，既激动又如释重负。   3. 升到空中后，我惊讶地看到那头熊终于撞倒了铁丝网。   4. 我赶紧取出相机，拍下了这罕见的一幕。   风向标·模考速递 模拟题一　2025·浙江温州·高三一模（荒野遇灰熊·绝地反击） In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler booked off a week from his job as a maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own, finding a route he would eventually use to climb Mount Doggie Dowler. His wife Jenifer didn’t like the sound of her husband’s latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on adventures by himself, but this time he’d boat to an unknown bay, bike an unpopulated road, hike through grizzly bear country, and camp overnights alone. There was too much room for disaster. The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausage, and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel pocket knife given to him by his dad. The weather that Sunday, July 28 was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight o’clock in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm, and found a spot to tie the boat near a logging camp where he chatted with some logging workers. One of the workers, Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin took off his bike and backpack from the truck and started his hiking and route searching. In order not to lose the way back, he marked his trail with blue ribbons. As he made his seven-kilometer marker, he came around a bend and suddenly put on the brakes — a dirty grizzly bear stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin calculated his chances of turning around for a quick escape, but the bear could easily catch up and stop him before he picked up speed. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 与此同时，Colin 把背包里的香肠朝熊扔了过去，希望香味能把它引开。   2. 不幸的是，熊径直冲了过来，把他扑倒在地，咬住了他的左腿。   3. 血不断涌出，Colin 忽然想起了口袋里的那把小刀。   4. 他用最快、最狠的力道刺向熊的脖子，熊痛得咆哮着逃走了。   第二段 1. 他发现自己被伐木营地的工人围在中间，医生正在照料他。   2. 救他的正是 Vito——他开车返回时看见了那头流血的熊。   3. Vito 顺着一路的蓝布条，终于找到了 Colin。   4. “你太幸运了，Colin。天助自助者。”医生说。   模拟题二　2025·福建厦门·高三质检（槟城海啸·全家逃生） A holiday in Penang is an annual affair for my family. My parents grew up in Penang and are very fond of Penang food. In December every year, we would drive up to the island to spend three days visiting their favorite food haunts. This year, we started our journey up north on a Friday morning. It took us six hours to reach our destination. We always stayed at one of the hotels in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was just a short walk from the hotel entrance and our rooms had a lovely view of the sea. We spent our first evening playing on the beach. After dinner, we returned to our rooms to play games. My parents had a rule for our holidays which was that we were to spend time doing things together. There was to be no TV and no Internet. The next morning, we went to Bukit Bendera and then spent the rest of the afternoon in town visiting our favorite hawker stalls. As we were having tea at a coffee shop, we overheard people talking about an earthquake near Sumatera, an island in Indonesia. We headed back to the hotel and then went to the beach. We took a walk along the beach, picking up seashells along the way. Looking up, I saw the sun shining brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree trembling in the distance as it reflected the sun’s rays. It never occurred to us that something awful would take place. Suddenly, I noticed a strange thing. The sea seemed to be leaving from the shore. I called my father to look at the curious occurrence. My father took one look and went pale. We saw a grey line in the distance moving towards the shore. It seemed to grow taller by the second. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: We waited a long time before going downstairs.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 他一把抓住我的手，拉着我一起跑。   2. 刚跑到旅馆门口，我们就听见身后传来轰鸣。   3. 恐惧攫住了我们，刚到二楼就听见急流冲击和玻璃碎裂的声响。   4. 我们在四楼停下，俯看下面的水位，它已经不再上涨了。   第二段 1. 急流刚一退去，我们就看见了面目全非的旅馆大门。   2. 到处都是淤泥和破碎的家具。   3. 眼前的景象让我们心头一紧，于是决定在劫后余生后去帮助受灾的人。   4. 我从未有过如此惊心动魄却又危险的假期。   模拟题三　2026·江苏南通·高三一模（池塘鳄鱼·血泊获救） There was a huge pond just a few kilometers from where we stayed. Since moving into our new home in the countryside, my brother, Jim and I used to often sneak out to the pond where we would meet another friend. Mom had warned us not to get close to the pond, especially after a friend informed her that an alligator had been spotted there. We ignored her advice though. On this particular afternoon, the three of us had fun in the pond. As evening approached, we finished swimming. Jim and Syed were unwillingly making their way towards the place where they had left their clothes. I stayed back and was bathing in the water when I suddenly became aware of ripples forming on the surface of the water. I raised my head and looked at the ripples. My eyes caught a motion in the water. A log, I thought. Then I saw it — its scary nose and its two mean eyes. Jim… I cried. Then I screamed with all my might. Jim turned his head in my direction and immediately recognized the danger. Get out of the water, Jeff. Hurry! It’s just behind you. I waded clumsily in the water. With great effort, I reached the edge of the pond. I looked over my shoulder. Moving quickly towards me was a huge alligator. I froze. Then suddenly I felt a great pain in my leg. Meanwhile, Jim and Syed screamed and started throwing stones at the alligator and managed to distract it. The alligator went for them now. As it opened its jaws, I could see its sharp teeth. I tried to move but a pain shot through me. I was in a pool of blood. Jim and Syed were scared. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: When I woke up, I found myself in a totally unfamiliar environment, a hospital.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 我朝 Jim 和 Syed 喊：“快去找那两个猎人，他们能救我！”   2. Jim 如梦初醒，像箭一样冲了出去。   3. Syed 继续朝鳄鱼扔石头，我也继续与它周旋。   4. 其中一名猎人朝天鸣枪，鳄鱼这才扭身游走，随后我便昏了过去。   第二段 1. 妈妈守在我床前，看见她，我的眼泪一下子涌了出来。   2. 后来我从妈妈口中得知，是那两位好心的猎人把我送到了医院。   3. 我向妈妈道歉，她用手抚过我的脸，替我擦去眼泪。   4. 妈妈提醒我，能从鳄鱼口中逃生是多么幸运——那真是死里逃生。   1 / 19 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 第17讲 脱离困境类（故事构造三部曲）（解析版） 内容导航 01 破题式·故事骨架 故事分析 · 构思蓝图 02 招式谱·句型公式 按步取句 / 拿来即用 03 高考场·真题拆解 高考原题+技法讲解 04 风向标·模考速递 最新模考 · 同题材范文与金句 破题式·故事骨架 01 主题画像 脱离困境类故事，以“人在绝境中如何活下来”为轴线：主人公往往在外出游玩、探险或赶路途中遭遇突发意外——暴雪封路、洪水漫堤、地震塌方、林中迷路、猛兽逼近；紧接着雪上加霜，手电没电、食水耗尽、腿脚受伤、呼救无人应；随后靠冷静判断、就地取材、同伴合力或外援赶到迎来转机；结尾回扣“冷静、坚韧、感恩”的主题。简言之：脱离困境类故事 = 一场“由陷困到突围”的生死突围。 02 真题回眸 年份 卷别 故事梗概 情感落点 2016.10 浙江卷 Jane 与丈夫争吵后独自走进森林迷路，靠溪水浆果撑过两夜，最终以黄衬衫招停直升机 求生与亲情 2017.06 浙江卷 Mac 独自骑行赴阿拉斯加，遭野狼一路追咬，靠防熊喷雾与过路车化险为夷 冷静与互助 2020.07 浙江卷 夫妇在营地拍摄北极熊，熊撞破铁丝网步步紧逼，辣椒喷雾拖延到直升机赶到 危机与自救 03 构思路线 ● 突遭险境：先写“困”。用环境突变、意外降临和身体感受，把绝境的突发性与压迫感写足，为后文突围蓄势。 ● 自救互救：再写“搏”。冷静判断、就地取材、同伴合力或外援赶到，让转机在一连串具体行动中生长出来。 ● 脱险感悟：最后写“悟”。既要写获救瞬间的情绪释放，更要回扣主题，用一句点睛之语把“坚韧与感恩”说出来。 处境由安到险 · 行动由慌到定 · 立意由生到悟 04 避坑提醒 ● 不要把“险境”写成“灾难流水账”：危险必须落到具体感官（两米高的雪墙、身后急促的喘息、脚下开裂的冰面），而不是反复说“很危险、很害怕”。 ● 不要让主角“躺平等救援”：脱险一定要有自救动作（找水源、生火、发信号、用喷雾、辨方向），否则人物立不住、情节也没有张力。 ● 不要写成“开挂式获救”：直升机、猎人、救援队的出现要有前文伏笔（呼救声、烟柱、黄衬衫、血迹、蓝布条），不能凭空降临、一句带过。 招式谱·句型公式 Step 1 突遭险境 · 陷困（意外降临 / 陷入绝境） 【本步任务】 交代险境的起点：用环境突变、动物逼近或身体失控的细节，把“突发”与“无助”写足，让读者跟着屏住呼吸。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 Without warning, ________ struck, and I was suddenly ________. 毫无预兆地，…突然发生，我瞬间…（突发陷困） Just when I thought things couldn’t get worse, ________ happened. 就在我以为情况不可能更糟时，…发生了（雪上加霜） Before I could ________, ________ was already ________. 我还来不及…，…就已经…（危机逼近） 【高频例句】 1. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）那只饿熊循着气味找到了我们的营地，营地四周围着高高的铁丝网。 The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. 2. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）它又拉又咬铁丝网，还用后腿站起来去推木栅栏柱。 He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. 3. （2017.06 浙江卷·骑行遇狼）随后 Mac 听见身后传来急促而沉重的喘息声。 Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. 4. （2016.10 浙江卷·森林迷路的 Jane）她转过身，只看见茫茫森林，忽然意识到自己迷路了。 She turned around, and to her surprise, she saw nothing but forest. She suddenly realized that she was lost. 5. （2018.06 浙江卷·西部农场骑马）突然，一只小兔子从我的马前蹿了出来。 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 6. （2025·浙江温州·高三一模·荒野遇灰熊）拐过弯道他猛地刹车——一头脏兮兮的灰熊就站在窄路正中，相距三十米。 He came around a bend and suddenly put on the brakes — a dirty grizzly bear stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. 7. （2026·江苏南通·高三一模·池塘鳄鱼袭击）然后我看见了它——那可怕的鼻子和两只凶恶的眼睛。 Then I saw it — its scary nose and its two mean eyes. 8. （2025·福建厦门·高三质检·槟城海啸逃生）海水似乎正从岸边退去，父亲看了一眼，脸色刷地白了。 The sea seemed to be leaving from the shore. My father took one look and went pale. 9. （2025·福建厦门·高三质检·槟城海啸逃生）远处一道灰线正朝岸边推来，而且似乎每一秒都在长高。 We saw a grey line in the distance moving towards the shore. It seemed to grow taller by the second. 10. （2025·广东深圳·高三一模·异国途中车祸）砰的一声，我们撞在了一起，厢式车侧翻过去。 Then, bang, we bumped into each other. Our van overturned. 11. （2025·湖北武汉·高三二模·铁轨上的姐妹）接着她绊了一跤，摔倒在铁轨上，蘑菇撒了一地。 Then she tripped and fell on the track, scattering her mushrooms around. 12. （2025·山东济南·高三期中·雪夜困山）一场猛烈的暴风雪席卷了这片区域，道路被一堵两米高的雪墙拦住。 A fierce snowstorm had swept through the area, and the path was blocked by a two-meter-high wall of snow. 【情绪小词】 terrified（惊恐的）, panic（恐慌）, freeze（僵住）, trapped（被困的）, desperate（绝望的） Step 2 自救互救 · 突围（冷静应对 / 合力脱险） 【本步任务】 写出转机：让主人公冷静判断、就地取材、发出信号，或与同伴、外援合力，把“困”一点点撬开。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 Gathering every ounce of strength, I ________ with all my might. 拼尽全身力气，我用尽全力…（自救行动） Instead of panicking, I forced myself to ________ and ________. 我没有慌乱，而是强迫自己先…再…（冷静应对） In the distance, I spotted ________, and a spark of hope lit up my heart. 远处，我望见…，心中燃起一丝希望（转机初现） 【高频例句】 1. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）我们冲着熊大喊，用力敲锅，还朝天鸣放空包弹。 We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. 2. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）于是我慢慢靠近这位不速之客，隔着铁丝网朝它脸上喷了辣椒喷雾。 So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. 3. （2017.06 浙江卷·骑行遇狼）他一手扶着车把，一手朝狼喷出防熊喷雾。 With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. 4. （2016.10 浙江卷·森林迷路的 Jane）她循着水声很快找到一条小溪，令她大喜的是还看见几丛浆果。 Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. 5. （2018.06 浙江卷·西部农场骑马）“别担心，儿子。农场附近有条河，找到河我们就能回家。” Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home. 6. （2025·浙江温州·高三一模·荒野遇灰熊）血不断涌出，Colin 忽然想起了口袋里的那把小刀。 Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket. 7. （2025·浙江温州·高三一模·荒野遇灰熊）他用尽全力朝熊的脖子刺去，熊痛得咆哮着逃走了。 He stabbed the bear’s neck as fast and strong as possible. The bear roared with pain and ran away. 8. （2026·江苏南通·高三一模·池塘鳄鱼袭击）Jim 和 Syed 尖叫着朝鳄鱼扔石头，成功把它的注意力引开。 Jim and Syed screamed and started throwing stones at the alligator and managed to distract it. 9. （2025·福建厦门·高三质检·槟城海啸逃生）父亲一把抓住我的手，把我们推向楼梯，大喊着让我们不停往上爬。 He grabbed my hand and pushed us towards the stairs, yelling at us to keep climbing. 10. （2025·湖北武汉·高三二模·铁轨上的姐妹）Rose 想都没想就跳了过去，用自己的身体护住了妹妹。 Rose jumped over without a second thought and covered Mary’s body under hers. 11. （2025·广东深圳·高三一模·异国途中车祸）我们被卡在车里动弹不得，路人赶来帮我们爬了出来。 People came to help us get out of the van because we were blocked. 12. （2025·山东青岛·高一期末·沙箱识蛇）“等一等！”我大喊着，手里挥舞着那本动物图鉴。 Wait! I shouted, waving the guidebook in my hand. 【情绪小词】 calm（冷静的）, courage（勇气）, struggle（挣扎）, hold on（坚持住）, rescue（营救） Step 3 脱险感悟 · 点题（劫后余生 / 生命顿悟） 【本步任务】 先写获救瞬间的情绪释放（泪水、拥抱、瘫软），再把“冷静、坚韧、感恩”提炼成一句点题之语，让惊险落到哲理。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 As ________ pulled me to safety, I burst into tears, knowing I had made it. 当…把我拉到安全地带，我泪如雨下，知道自己挺过来了（获救） That experience taught me that ________ isn’t about ________ — it’s about ________. 那次经历让我明白，…不在于…，而在于…（顿悟） Never before had I realized how ________ ________ could be. 我从未如此深刻地意识到…是多么…（情感升华） 【高频例句】 1. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）“谢天谢地，我们得救了！”Elli 喊了出来。 Thank goodness we are saved! Elli cried out. 2. （2020.07 浙江卷·营地遭遇北极熊）直升机一落地，我们立刻登机，既激动又如释重负。 Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. 3. （2017.06 浙江卷·骑行遇狼）“那真是一场噩梦，我以为自己要死了。”Mac 声音发颤，眼里噙满泪水。 It was really a nightmare and I thought I was going to die, said Mac in a shaky voice, tears gathering in his eyes. 4. （2017.06 浙江卷·骑行遇狼）对他而言，生命从未如此美好。 For him, life could never be more beautiful. 5. （2016.10 浙江卷·森林迷路的 Jane）Tom 从直升机上跳下来向她跑去，她再也撑不住，放声大哭。 Tom jumped off the helicopter and ran towards Jane. She broke down and burst into tears. 6. （2025·浙江温州·高三一模·荒野遇灰熊）“你太幸运了，Colin。天助自助者。”医生说。 You are so lucky, Colin. God helps those who help themselves, said the doctor. 7. （2026·江苏南通·高三一模·池塘鳄鱼袭击）妈妈提醒我，能从鳄鱼口中逃生是多么幸运——那真是死里逃生。 Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was to have escaped from the jaws of the alligator. It was a narrow escape. 8. （2025·福建厦门·高三质检·槟城海啸逃生）眼前的景象让我们心头一紧，于是决定在劫后余生之后去帮助那些受灾的人。 What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. 9. （2025·湖北武汉·高三二模·铁轨上的姐妹）两姐妹紧紧相拥，喜悦的泪水顺着脸颊往下流。 The two sisters hugged and kissed each other, tears of joy flowing down their cheeks. 10. （2025·湖北武汉·高三二模·铁轨上的姐妹）那一刻，两颗心从未如此幸福地紧紧相连。 Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. 11. （2025·广东深圳·高三一模·异国途中车祸）虽然经历了一场可怕的事故，我们却何其幸运，得到了那些热心人的帮助。 Although we had experienced a bad accident, we were all lucky to have received help from those warm-hearted people. 12. （2025·山东青岛·高一期末·沙箱识蛇）这次经历不仅让我见到了那条蛇，更让我懂得了人与自然和谐相处的重要。 This experience not only gave me a chance to see the snake but also let me know the importance of the harmony between people and nature. 【情绪小词】 relieved（如释重负的）, grateful（感激的）, a narrow escape（死里逃生）, resilience（坚韧）, treasure（珍惜） 高考场·真题拆解 2020 年 7 月浙江卷（营地遭遇北极熊） 【真题原文】 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside the polar bear capital of the world — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws. I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter, I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar, the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 【续写两段首句】 Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.     Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.       【参考译文】那年秋天，我和妻子 Elli 只有一个目标：拍摄北极熊。我们住在“世界北极熊之都”——加拿大马尼托巴省丘吉尔镇外的一个科研营地。 拍北极熊既令人惊叹，也很危险。北极熊和所有野生动物一样，应该在安全距离外拍摄。当我与北极熊面对面时，我更愿意隔着长焦镜头。可有时候说来容易做起来难，这次就是如此。 我和 Elli 正在做晚饭时，一头在附近湖里玩耍的年轻雄性北极熊嗅了嗅，闻到了我们的蒜香面包。 这头饿熊循着气味找到了我们的营地，营地四周围着高高的铁丝网。它又拉又咬铁丝网，还用后腿站起来推木栅栏柱。 我和 Elli 吓坏了，把知道的防熊办法都试了一遍：冲它大喊、用力敲锅、朝天鸣放空包弹。有时这类巨响能把熊吓跑，可这头北极熊不吃这一套——它只是不停地用巨掌去撕扯围栏。 我用无线电向营地经理求助。他说直升机已经出发，但还要三十分钟才能到。既然近距离遭遇难得，我索性拍了几张熊的照片。 我和 Elli 都担心围栏撑不过它再折腾三十分钟。营地经理建议我使用辣椒喷雾——这种喷雾会灼痛熊的眼睛，但不会真正伤害它。于是我慢慢靠近这位不速之客，隔着铁丝网朝它脸上喷去。伴着一声愤怒的吼叫，熊跑向湖边去洗眼睛了。 【线索梳理】 赴营拍熊 → 熊嗅香而来 → 撞栏逼近 → 驱赶无效 → 喷雾激怒 → 直升机赶到 → 脱险感悟 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 我们这才明白，喷雾只是把它惹得更愤怒了。 Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more. 2. 它这一次凶猛得多，发疯似的猛撞铁丝网。 He seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. 3. 我的心狂跳不止，一时不知所措。 My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. 4. 危急关头，Elli 抓起几块蒜香面包扔过了铁丝网。 At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. 第二段 1. “谢天谢地，我们得救了！”Elli 喊了出来。 Thank goodness we are saved! Elli cried out. 2. 直升机一落地，我们立刻登机，既激动又如释重负。 Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. 3. 升到空中后，我惊讶地看到那头熊终于撞倒了铁丝网。 When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence. 4. 我赶紧取出相机，拍下了这罕见的一幕。 I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene. 【范文】 Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again. Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. Thank goodness we are saved! Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear! 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述“我”与妻子 Elli 在加拿大丘吉尔镇外的研究营地拍摄北极熊，一头饿熊循着蒜香面包的气味闯来，撞咬铁丝网、步步紧逼；夫妇俩喊叫、敲锅、鸣枪均告无效，最后用辣椒喷雾拖延时间，终于等到直升机赶到而成功脱险。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. 提示写熊被喷雾激怒后卷土重来、攻势更猛，以及“我们”如何再想办法拖住它。② 第二段首句 At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. 提示写直升机降落、登机脱险的狂喜，以及回望营地时的意外一幕与感悟。 【续写线索】赴营拍熊 → 熊嗅香而来 → 撞栏逼近 → 驱赶无效 → 喷雾激怒 → 面包引开 → 直升机赶到 → 脱险释然 【词汇激活】动作类：tear down the fence（撞倒围栏）, throw sth. over the fence（把…扔过围栏）, get onto the helicopter（登上直升机）, take out the camera（取出相机）；情绪类：terrified（惊恐的）, relieved（如释重负的）, amazed（惊讶的）, excited（激动的）。 【点睛】I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear! 以一句轻松的自嘲收束全篇，把惊魂未定化为劫后余生的幽默，点明“冷静与敬畏”的主旨。 风向标·模考速递 模拟题一　2025·浙江温州·高三一模（荒野遇灰熊·绝地反击） In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler booked off a week from his job as a maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own, finding a route he would eventually use to climb Mount Doggie Dowler. His wife Jenifer didn’t like the sound of her husband’s latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on adventures by himself, but this time he’d boat to an unknown bay, bike an unpopulated road, hike through grizzly bear country, and camp overnights alone. There was too much room for disaster. The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausage, and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel pocket knife given to him by his dad. The weather that Sunday, July 28 was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight o’clock in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm, and found a spot to tie the boat near a logging camp where he chatted with some logging workers. One of the workers, Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin took off his bike and backpack from the truck and started his hiking and route searching. In order not to lose the way back, he marked his trail with blue ribbons. As he made his seven-kilometer marker, he came around a bend and suddenly put on the brakes — a dirty grizzly bear stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin calculated his chances of turning around for a quick escape, but the bear could easily catch up and stop him before he picked up speed. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way. Paragraph 2: After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself. 【参考译文】2019 年 7 月，为庆祝 45 岁生日，Colin Dowler 从温哥华岛卫生局维修主管的岗位上请了一周假。他打算独自用两天时间，摸索出一条日后攀登 Doggie Dowler 山的路线。 妻子 Jenifer 不喜欢丈夫这个最新计划。她早已习惯他独自冒险，可这一次他要驾船前往一处陌生海湾，骑车穿过无人的道路，徒步穿越灰熊出没的地区，还要独自露营过夜——出事的可能太多了。 出发前一晚，Colin 收拾了必需品：手持 GPS、登山杖、自制香肠，以及其他一些必备物件塞满了背包剩下的口袋。他没带惯用的瑞士军刀，而是带上了父亲送他的那把三英寸不锈钢折刀。 7 月 28 日星期天天气不错。Colin 把车开进坎贝尔河港口，很快带着一辆山地车下水，驾着摩托艇出发。早上八点左右，他抵达拉姆齐湾，在一处伐木营地附近找到地方系好船，和几名伐木工人聊了几句。 其中一位工人 Vito 用卡车载了他一程，直到森林太密无法通行。Colin 从车上卸下自行车和背包，开始徒步探路。为了不迷失回程的方向，他一路系上蓝色布条做标记。 走到七公里标记处时，他拐过一个弯道猛地刹住车——一头脏兮兮的灰熊就站在狭窄道路的正中间，相距三十米。Colin 盘算着掉头逃跑的可能，可还没等他加速，熊就能轻易追上并拦住他。 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 与此同时，Colin 把背包里的香肠朝熊扔了过去，希望香味能把它引开。 Meanwhile, Colin threw the sausages in his backpack towards the bear, hoping the flavor would attract it. 2. 不幸的是，熊径直冲了过来，把他扑倒在地，咬住了他的左腿。 Unfortunately, the bear rushed to him. Colin was pushed to the ground and bit in the left leg. 3. 血不断涌出，Colin 忽然想起了口袋里的那把小刀。 Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket. 4. 他用最快、最狠的力道刺向熊的脖子，熊痛得咆哮着逃走了。 He stabbed the bear’s neck as fast and strong as possible. The bear roared with pain and ran away. 第二段 1. 他发现自己被伐木营地的工人围在中间，医生正在照料他。 He found himself surrounded by the logging workers in the camp, being cared for by a doctor. 2. 救他的正是 Vito——他开车返回时看见了那头流血的熊。 It was Vito who saved Colin. When he drove back, he spotted the bleeding bear. 3. Vito 顺着一路的蓝布条，终于找到了 Colin。 With the blue ribbons leading his way, he finally found Colin. 4. “你太幸运了，Colin。天助自助者。”医生说。 You are so lucky, Colin. God helps those who help themselves, said the doctor. 【范文】 Paragraph 1: The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way. Meanwhile, Colin threw the sausages in his backpack towards the bear, hoping the flavor would attract it. Unfortunately, the bear rushed to him. Colin was pushed to the ground and bit in the left leg. Ah! he screamed with the unbearable pain. Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket. He stabbed the bear’s neck as fast and strong as possible. The bear roared with pain and ran away. Losing much blood, Colin lost his consciousness afterwards. Paragraph 2: After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself. He found himself surrounded by the logging workers in the camp. He was being cared for by a doctor. It was Vito who saved Colin. When he drove back, he spotted the bleeding bear and sensed that something terrible must have happened. With the blue ribbons leading his way, he finally found Colin. You are so lucky, Colin. Without being noticed, you could have been killed for loss of blood. God helps those who help themselves, said the doctor. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述 Colin Dowler 为庆祝 45 岁生日独自进山探路：他驾船、骑车、徒步穿越灰熊出没的林区，途中与一头灰熊狭路相逢。搏斗中他被咬伤左腿，靠父亲留给他的小刀反击驱走灰熊，最终因沿途所系的蓝布条被伐木工 Vito 循迹找到而获救。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way. 提示写人熊搏斗的全过程——扔香肠转移注意、被扑倒咬伤、以小刀反击、失血昏迷。② 第二段首句 After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself. 提示写他苏醒后被救治的场景，并交代 Vito 是如何循着蓝布条找到他的。 【续写线索】灰熊逼近 → 扔肉引开 → 被扑咬伤 → 掏刀反击 → 熊逃人昏 → 蓝布条引路 → 获救感悟 【词汇激活】动作类：throw sth. towards（朝…扔去）, be pushed to the ground（被扑倒在地）, stab the neck（刺向脖子）, come to oneself（苏醒过来）；情绪类：unbearable pain（难忍的剧痛）, unfortunately（不幸地）, lucky（幸运的）。 【点睛】God helps those who help themselves. 点明主旨：荒野里没有奇迹，能把人从熊口中救出来的，是那把随身的小刀，和一路系下的蓝布条——自救者，天助之。 模拟题二　2025·福建厦门·高三质检（槟城海啸·全家逃生） A holiday in Penang is an annual affair for my family. My parents grew up in Penang and are very fond of Penang food. In December every year, we would drive up to the island to spend three days visiting their favorite food haunts. This year, we started our journey up north on a Friday morning. It took us six hours to reach our destination. We always stayed at one of the hotels in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was just a short walk from the hotel entrance and our rooms had a lovely view of the sea. We spent our first evening playing on the beach. After dinner, we returned to our rooms to play games. My parents had a rule for our holidays which was that we were to spend time doing things together. There was to be no TV and no Internet. The next morning, we went to Bukit Bendera and then spent the rest of the afternoon in town visiting our favorite hawker stalls. As we were having tea at a coffee shop, we overheard people talking about an earthquake near Sumatera, an island in Indonesia. We headed back to the hotel and then went to the beach. We took a walk along the beach, picking up seashells along the way. Looking up, I saw the sun shining brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree trembling in the distance as it reflected the sun’s rays. It never occurred to us that something awful would take place. Suddenly, I noticed a strange thing. The sea seemed to be leaving from the shore. I called my father to look at the curious occurrence. My father took one look and went pale. We saw a grey line in the distance moving towards the shore. It seemed to grow taller by the second. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel. Paragraph 2: We waited a long time before going downstairs. 【参考译文】到槟城度假是我们家每年的例行安排。父母都在槟城长大，特别钟情槟城美食。每年十二月，我们都会开车上岛，用三天时间去逛他们最爱的那些小吃摊。 今年我们在一个周五早上启程北上，花了六个小时抵达目的地。我们一向住在峇都丁宜的一家旅馆里：从旅馆门口走几步就是海滩，房间还能看到很美的海景。第一晚我们在沙滩上玩，晚饭后回房间做游戏。爸妈给假期定了一条规矩——我们必须一起做事，不许看电视，也不许上网。 第二天上午我们去了升旗山，下午则在镇上逛我们最爱的小贩摊。在一家咖啡店喝茶时，我们无意间听见有人谈起印尼苏门答腊附近发生了地震。我们回旅馆后又去了海滩，一路捡着贝壳散步。抬头时，我看见太阳亮得前所未有；远处一棵树在阳光的反照中微微颤动。我们万万没想到会有可怕的事发生。忽然，我注意到一个奇怪的现象：海水似乎正从岸边退去。我叫父亲来看这桩怪事，他只看了一眼，脸色就白了。我们看见远处有一道灰线正朝岸边推来，而且似乎每一秒都在长高。 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 他一把抓住我的手，拉着我一起跑。 He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. 2. 刚跑到旅馆门口，我们就听见身后传来轰鸣。 As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. 3. 恐惧攫住了我们，刚到二楼就听见急流冲击和玻璃碎裂的声响。 Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. 4. 我们在四楼停下，俯看下面的水位，它已经不再上涨了。 We stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us. It had stopped rising. 第二段 1. 急流刚一退去，我们就看见了面目全非的旅馆大门。 Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecognizable hotel gate. 2. 到处都是淤泥和破碎的家具。 There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere. 3. 眼前的景象让我们心头一紧，于是决定在劫后余生后去帮助受灾的人。 What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. 4. 我从未有过如此惊心动魄却又危险的假期。 Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. 【范文】 Paragraph 1: My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel. He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us to keep climbing. We stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us. It had stopped rising. After some minutes, it began to drop. Paragraph 2: We waited a long time before going downstairs. Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecognizable hotel gate. There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere. Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to Penang was deeply impressed in my mind. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述“我”一家每年赴槟城度假的传统。这一年，一家人在海滩散步时，“我”发现海水反常退去，父亲一看便脸色煞白——远处一道灰线正迅速逼近。海啸袭来，父亲带全家逃回旅馆、层层上楼避险；水退之后满目狼藉，一家人决定留下来帮助受灾者。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel. 提示写全家在父亲带领下奔跑、上楼、躲避洪水的紧张逃生过程。② 第二段首句 We waited a long time before going downstairs. 提示写水退后旅馆一片狼藉的景象，以及“我们”决定帮助灾民的感悟。 【续写线索】海水异常退去 → 灰线逼近 → 父亲喝令奔逃 → 楼道向上避险 → 水位停涨回落 → 满目疮痍 → 施以援手 【词汇激活】动作类：grab one’s hand（抓住某人的手）, push sb. towards the stairs（把某人推向楼梯）, keep climbing（不停往上爬）, help the victims（帮助受灾者）；情绪类：fear gripped us（恐惧攫住我们）, thrilling（惊心动魄的）, a narrow escape（死里逃生）。 【点睛】What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. 点明主旨：真正的脱险不止是自己活下来，更是从劫后余生里长出对他人的悲悯。 模拟题三　2026·江苏南通·高三一模（池塘鳄鱼·血泊获救） There was a huge pond just a few kilometers from where we stayed. Since moving into our new home in the countryside, my brother, Jim and I used to often sneak out to the pond where we would meet another friend. Mom had warned us not to get close to the pond, especially after a friend informed her that an alligator had been spotted there. We ignored her advice though. On this particular afternoon, the three of us had fun in the pond. As evening approached, we finished swimming. Jim and Syed were unwillingly making their way towards the place where they had left their clothes. I stayed back and was bathing in the water when I suddenly became aware of ripples forming on the surface of the water. I raised my head and looked at the ripples. My eyes caught a motion in the water. A log, I thought. Then I saw it — its scary nose and its two mean eyes. Jim… I cried. Then I screamed with all my might. Jim turned his head in my direction and immediately recognized the danger. Get out of the water, Jeff. Hurry! It’s just behind you. I waded clumsily in the water. With great effort, I reached the edge of the pond. I looked over my shoulder. Moving quickly towards me was a huge alligator. I froze. Then suddenly I felt a great pain in my leg. Meanwhile, Jim and Syed screamed and started throwing stones at the alligator and managed to distract it. The alligator went for them now. As it opened its jaws, I could see its sharp teeth. I tried to move but a pain shot through me. I was in a pool of blood. Jim and Syed were scared. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago. Paragraph 2: When I woke up, I found myself in a totally unfamiliar environment, a hospital. 【参考译文】离我们住处几公里远有一个大池塘。自从搬到乡下的新家，我和哥哥 Jim 就常常偷偷溜到池塘，在那儿和另一个朋友碰面。妈妈警告过我们不要靠近池塘，尤其是在一位朋友告诉她那里出现过鳄鱼之后。可我们没把她的话放在心上。 那天下午，我们三个在池塘里玩得很尽兴。傍晚将至，我们结束了游泳。Jim 和 Syed 恋恋不舍地朝放衣服的地方走去，我却留在水里泡着。忽然，我注意到水面泛起一圈圈涟漪。我抬起头看去，眼睛捕捉到水中的一阵动静。我以为是根木头。接着我看清了它——那可怕的鼻子和两只凶恶的眼睛。“Jim……”我叫了一声，随即用尽全力尖叫起来。 Jim 转头朝我这边看来，立刻意识到危险：“快上岸，Jeff，快！它就在你后面！” 我在水里笨拙地蹚着，费了很大力气才够到池塘边。我回头一看，一条巨大的鳄鱼正飞快地朝我逼近。我僵住了。紧接着，腿上传来一阵剧痛。这时 Jim 和 Syed 尖叫着朝鳄鱼扔石头，成功把它引开，鳄鱼转而扑向他们。它张开大口，我能看见那排锋利的牙齿。我想动，剧痛却让我动弹不得——我躺在一滩血里，Jim 和 Syed 吓坏了。 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 我朝 Jim 和 Syed 喊：“快去找那两个猎人，他们能救我！” I shouted to Jim and Syed, Run to the hunters quickly. They can help me. 2. Jim 如梦初醒，像箭一样冲了出去。 Waking from the dream, Jim rushed away like an arrow. 3. Syed 继续朝鳄鱼扔石头，我也继续与它周旋。 Syed continued to throw stones at the alligator and I continued to fight against it. 4. 其中一名猎人朝天鸣枪，鳄鱼这才扭身游走，随后我便昏了过去。 One of the hunters fired a shot in the air. The alligator wound its way away in the water. Then, I passed out. 第二段 1. 妈妈守在我床前，看见她，我的眼泪一下子涌了出来。 Mom stood over me. Seeing her, tears flooded down. 2. 后来我从妈妈口中得知，是那两位好心的猎人把我送到了医院。 Later I learned from my mother that I was rushed to the hospital by the kind hunters. 3. 我向妈妈道歉，她用手抚过我的脸，替我擦去眼泪。 I made an apology to Mom. She ran her fingers on my face and wiped my tears. 4. 妈妈提醒我，能从鳄鱼口中逃生是多么幸运——那真是死里逃生。 Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was to have escaped from the jaws of the alligator. It was a narrow escape. 【范文】 Paragraph 1: I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago. I shouted to Jim and Syed, Run to the hunters quickly. They can help me. Waking from the dream, Jim rushed away like an arrow. Syed continued to throw stones at the alligator and I continued to fight against it. Luckily, in a few minutes, Jim and the two hunters arrived. One of the hunters fired a shot in the air. It had the desired effect. The alligator wound its way away in the water. Then, I passed out. Paragraph 2: When I woke up, I found myself in a totally unfamiliar environment, a hospital. Mom stood over me. Seeing her, tears flooded down. Later I learned from my mother that I was rushed to the hospital by the kind hunters. My eyes began to water again. I made an apology to Mom. She ran her fingers on my face and wiped my tears. Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was to have escaped from the jaws of the alligator. It was a narrow escape. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述“我”与哥哥 Jim、朋友 Syed 无视母亲的告诫，偷偷到有鳄鱼出没的池塘游泳。傍晚时分，一条巨鳄向“我”袭来并咬伤了腿；Jim 和 Syed 扔石头引开鳄鱼，“我”想起刚刚路过的两名猎人，众人合力求援，最终“我”被送医获救，也真切懂得了母亲的叮嘱。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago. 提示写“我”让 Jim 去搬救兵、Syed 掩护、猎人鸣枪吓退鳄鱼的紧张过程。② 第二段首句 When I woke up, I found myself in a totally unfamiliar environment, a hospital. 提示写“我”苏醒后见到母亲、道歉与感恩的情感落点。 【续写线索】腿被咬伤 → 想起猎人 → 分头求援 → 石头掩护 → 鸣枪驱鳄 → 昏迷送医 → 醒来道歉感恩 【词汇激活】动作类：rush away like an arrow（像箭一样冲出去）, throw stones at（朝…扔石头）, fire a shot in the air（朝天鸣枪）, pass out（昏过去）；情绪类：scared（害怕的）, luckily（幸运地）, regretful（后悔的）, fortunate（幸运的）。 【点睛】It was a narrow escape. 一句收束全文，点明主旨：所谓“死里逃生”，逃开的是鳄鱼的血盆大口，记住的是那句被忽视的叮嘱和伸手相助的陌生人。 1 / 19 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $