内容正文:
单元话题写作一
励志人物
写作话题
岁月长河静静流淌,榜样如同点点星光,照亮我们成长的道路,给予我们前行的勇气与力量。
每个人心中都有专属的榜样,他或许是名人伟人,或许是身边平凡的普通人。我校英语校刊现举办
“The Power of My Role Model(榜样的力量)”征文活动,请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容提示:
☆介绍你心中榜样的基本信息;
☆阐述你选择他/她作为榜样的原因;
☆谈谈你从他/她身上学到的品质与感悟。
写作要求:
1.短文需包含所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.词数80左右。
谋篇布局
起始句
首段:点明主题,引出
1.To me,one of the most inspiring people in modern China is...
你的榜样,并介绍基本
2.To me...stands as a truly inspiring figure in modern China.
信息
3.To me,few people in modern China are as inspiring as...
↓
中间句
中间段:阐述你选择
1....inspires me deeply because...
他/她作为榜样的原因
2.I choose her as my role model simply because of her extreme patience.
(加入具体细节)
3.What makes him my role model is his strong perseverance that I have
never seen before.Last year...
结尾句
1....is a true inspiration to all,reminding us that we should dare to dream
尾段:你从他/她身上
big.
学到的品质与感悟
2....sets a great example and we should dare to hold big dreams firmly.
3.Through his words and actions,I realize that...
4.Her spirit guides our way,and we will follow our dreams with courage
and strength.
好句积累
l.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者,事竟成。
2.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.心有所愿,无所不成。
3.Dreams come true through hard work.梦想靠努力实现。
4.Failure is the mother of success..失败是成功之母。
5.Keep on going and never give up.勇往直前,永不放弃。
6.Effort will finally pay off.努力终会得到回报。
7.Great dreams require great courage.伟大梦想需要非凡勇气。
24名校作业英语9年级上①
句子升级
l.There are many stars in my life.Wang Yaping shines the brightest.(用介词among置于句首改写)
2.She even taught a science lesson from space..It was truly amazing.(用It作为形式主语改写)
3.Her story certainly has a deep influence on me..(用There is no doubt that..替代certainly改写)
范文背通
Among all the stars in my life,Wang Yaping,a famous Chinese astronaut,shines the brightest.
She is not only the first Chinese woman to take a spacewalk but also a loving mother who sets a great
example for young people.
I choose her as my role model for several reasons.First,she has a strong dream and never gives up.
It took her years of hard training to become an astronaut,yet she never complained.Second,she is brave.
Flying into space is dangerous,but she faced the challenge with courage.It was truly amazing that she
even taught a science lesson from space,bringing the universe closer to millions of children like me.
I have learned determination and a never-say-die spirit from her.There is no doubt that her story
has a deep influence on me.From now on,I will face difficulties bravely and spare no effort to realize
my own dreams.
实战演练
请根据上面的写作话题,运用所学高级句型及谚语完成一篇佳作,不得抄袭范文!
ECSSSCSSSCSCSCSCSSECSE-SCSCSESCEESSES
Reflecting
入重难考点突破
O考点2辨析discover与discovery
O考点1辨析science,scientific与scientist
一、用括号内所给单词的适当形式填空。
根据短文,用science的适当形式填空:
1.I discovered him
(read)a book
Do you like science?1.
plays an
important role in our daily lives.It helps us
under the old tree quietly.
understand nature and change the world around us.
2.The
(discover)of oil brought great
2.
never stop exploring.They
changes to this small town
follow strict 3.
rules and do careful
3.Recent
experiments every day.They face difficulties
(discovery)in space have
bravely and never give up easily.Their 4.
excited scientists around the world.
spirit teaches us to think wisely,find out truth
二、根据中文意思完成下列句子,每空一词。
and work hard.Thanks to them,our life becomes
4.我们发现这个古老的故事在历史上竟是真
safer,easier and better.We should respect
5.
learn from great scientists and keep
实的。
curiosity in our hearts all the time.
We
the old story was
点拨:
actually true in history.
单词
词义
用法/搭配
5.探险家希望在这片森林里有重大发现。
science
n.科学
泛指学科、自然科学;不可数
scientific
ad科学的
修饰名词:科学的方法/研究
The explorer hopes to
scientist
n.科学家
指人(-ist表职业)
in the forest.
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点拨:
5.A great
(think)thinks deeply and
单词
词义
常用搭配
guides us to see the world in a better way.
6.Edison,a great
(invent),changed
discover sth
the whole world with his creations
v发现;发觉;找到
discover that...
discover
discover sb doing
点拨:
sth
后缀核心用法
含义
常见例词
make a discovery
做某事的
discovery
n.发现;被发现的事物
teach→
教师
the discovery of...
最通用
人
er
work→
动词+er
工人
从事…
drive→
。考点3辨析职业名词后缀-ian,-er与-ist
的人
司机
用括号内所给词的适当形式填空。
art→
艺术家
偏向专
专家、爱
1.The
(history)records facts and
piano→
钢琴家
-ist
业、艺术、好者、主
信仰
science→
科
helps us understand our history.
义者
学家
2.A
(research)keeps learning and
Canada
makes progress in scientific work.
偏向国
…国人加拿大人
3.This
(chemistry)studies chemical
学music→
音
ian
籍、身份、
changes and creates safe products for people.
学识
者/从业乐家
4.I want to be a
(physics)to help
者
library→
图
people know about our world.
书管理员
入阅读素养提升
一、阅读还原。(选项中有一项多余)
Have you ever wondered why so many young people admire scientists like Yuan Longping or
heroes like Huang Xuhua?1.
Great people influence us not only by what they achieved,but also
by who they are.Their stories and spirits stay with us like guiding lights.
Great people inspire us to dream big.When we learn about their life stories,we see how they turned
small dreams into great achievements.Yuan Longping dreamed of feeding more people when he was
young.2.
Their stories tell us that dreams do come true if we work hard.
3.
Behind every success,there are years of efforts and difficulties.Huang Xuhua spent
decades working on China's first nuclear submarine.He faced many failures but never gave up.His
perseverance()shows us that success is not easy,but it is always possible.
4.
They are often humble,kind and always ready to help others.They remind us that true
greatness is not about fame or money.It is about how much we can give back to society and our country.
In short,great people are like lighthouses in our lives.5.
By learning from them,we can
grow into better persons and work together to build a brighter future.That is why we will always
remember and admire them.
A.Great people guide us to be better persons.
B.Great people teach us the value of hard work.
C.This is because of the "great people effect".
D.His dream later helped solve food problems for millions.
E.Many young people want to become scientists like them.
F.They light up the way forward and show us what we can become.
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名校作业英语9年级上①
二、非连续性文本阅读。
China is known for its long history and rich ancient relics (from different dynasties.So it's
necessary to restore (the relics often.To become a restorer,one needs to have skillful hands,years
of experience and a deep understanding of history.As unknown heroes,many of them are working hard
to protect national treasures.
Zhang Juncai,born in Shanxi in 1949,has been interested in repairing broken objects since
childhood.When he was just25,he joined the Shanxi Archaeological Institute(山西考古研究院)to
learn to restore cultural relics.Four years later,he became an official member of the organization.He
also set up a cultural relic restoration workshop in 1982.Over the past years,Zhang has restored many
cultural relics.
Now,the 75-year-old is also making an effort to breathe life into the relics
Wang Jinyu,62,is an ancient book restorer at the Tianyige Museum in Zhejiang.Built in the 1500s,
Tianyige is the most ancient private library in China with a collection of more than 300,000 ancient
books.In 2018,Wang led a team to restore a set of 58 books produced around 200 years ago,of which
19 were so damaged that their pages could not be turned.It took them over two years to finish
the work successfully.The satisfying results were accepted and praised by experts in the field.
Travel guide of the Tianyige Museum
Best Seasons:All seasons available
Opening Hours:The museum will be closed every Monday morning,and open at 1:30 p.m.
Summer opening time:May 1~October 31 8:30 a.m.~5:30 p.m.(no entry after 5:00 p.m.)
Winter opening time:November 1~April 30 8:30 a.m.~5:00 p.m.(no entry after 4:30 p.m.)
Chart I
Wang is a real master in this field who sets a good example for young people.For young workers
at Tianyige,Wang is a role model they look up to.But for Wang herself,the road to perfect skills is
endless.
Facts About the Two Restorers in China
He started to learn to
①
She led a team to restore
restore cultural relics.
②
a set of 58 ancient books.
1974
1982
Year
2018
2020
Year
ChartⅡ
1.What are needed to become a restorer?
2.What did Zhang Juncai like doing as a child?
3.According to Chart I,people can't visit the Tianyige Museum on
They aren't
allowed to enter it after
in summer.
4.Please complete the facts about the two restorers in Chart II.
5.What do you think of the restorers'work?What can we learn from them?
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Unit 2 Inspiring People
弃为例,核心是告诉我们努力的价值,B选项“伟人教
会我们努力的价值”符合段落主旨。
单元话题写作一励志人物
4.A解析该段主要介绍伟人谦逊、善良、乐于助人的
句子升级
品格,告诉我们真正的伟大在于回报社会和国家,核心
1.Among all the stars in my life,Wang Yaping shines the
是伟人引导我们成为更好的人,A选项“伟人引导我们
brightest.
成为更好的人”贴合段落主旨。
2.It was truly amazing that she even taught a science
5.F解析根据前文“in short,,great people are like
lesson from space.
lighthouses in our lives.”可知,此处将伟人比作灯塔,F
3.There is no doubt that her story has a deep influence on
选项“他们照亮前进的道路,向我们展示我们能成为什
me.
么样的人”符合灯塔的比喻,与前文衔接流畅。
Reflecting
二、【文章大意】本文是一篇非连续性文本。文章主要讲
述了两位致力于修复国宝的幕后英雄。
重难考点突破
考点1
1.Skillful hands,years of experience and a deep
understanding of history..解析根据第一段中的“To
1.Science
2.Scientists 3.scientific
become a restorer,one needs to have skillful hands,
4.scientific
5.science
考点2
years of experience and a deep understanding of history."
可知答案。
1.reading
2.discovery 3.discoveries
2.He liked repairing broken objects.解析根据第二段中
4.discovered that
5.make a great discovery
"has been interested in repairing broken objects
考点3
since childhood.”可知答案。
1.historian
2.researcher 3.chemist
3.Monday mornings,5:00p.m.解析根据表一中的信
4.physicist
5.thinker
6.inventor
息可知答案。
teacher
worker
driver
artist
pianist
4.1He set up a cultural relic restoration workshop./His
scientist Canadian
musician
librarian
restoration workshop was set up
阅读素养提升
2They finished the work with satisfying results./They
一、【文章大意】本文阐述了伟人效应,说明伟人通过成就
finished the work successfully.解析通读二人的生平
与品格影响我们,激励我们追梦、坚持,并引导我们成
可知答案。
为更好的人。
5.It's meaningful.It's of great importance./...We can
L.C解析根据前文“Have you ever wondered why so
learn the spirit of hard work and selfless devotion from
many young people admire scientists like Yuan
them.(示例一)/We should be serious,.rigorous and
Longping or heroes like Huang Xuhua?”可知,此处是回
patient with our work and studies.(示例二).解析
答前文的疑问,C选项“这是因为‘伟人效应’”符合
示例一使用了高级表达the spirit of和selfless devotion;
语境。
示例二使用了that引导的宾语从句及高级词汇rigorous。.
2.D解析根据前文“Yuan Longping dreamed of feeding
more people when he was young.”可知,此处应承接袁
隆平的梦想,D选项“他的梦想后来帮助解决了数百万
人的粮食问题”与前文袁隆平的梦想相呼应。
3.B解析该段主要讲述伟人的成功离不开多年的努
力和对困难的克服,以黄旭华几十年研制潜艇、永不放