Unit 6 Beyond Earth 2026-2027学年九年级上册英语以读促写训练案（新教材人教版）

该初中英语导学案是九年级上册Unit 6“Beyond Earth”的以读促写训练案，围绕“My Dream”主题，引导学生掌握开篇点题、分点阐述优势、个人展望、结尾升华的写作结构。通过Pre-reading阅读文本铺垫话题，While-reading解构文本结构，Post-reading以“五步训练法”（原句精讲、结构拆解、仿写等）搭建学习支架，帮助学生学会分层表达观点和有序输出英语短文。 该资料亮点在于以读促写的闭环设计，通过阅读文本分析与仿写训练结合，培养学生语言能力（理解与表达）和思维品质（分析、逻辑输出）。“五步训练法”提供精准句型支架，分层论述结构训练提升有序表达能力，多个梯度写作任务（太空梦、职业规划等）助力学生从模仿到独立创作，有效发展学习能力和写作素养。

2026-2027学年九年级上册英语以读促写训练案 Unit 6 Beyond Earth Topic: My____________ Dream 写作任务：按照开篇点题 → 分点阐述优势 → 个人展望 → 结尾升华的结构，介绍自己的一个梦想（太空梦想、人生理想、未来目标等），阐述梦想内容、价值优势与个人期许，学会分层表达观点、有序输出英语短文。 【Pre-reading 话题铺垫】 【阅读文本Section B 3a 】 My Space Dream My space dream is that one day a research station will be built on the moon. I believe there are quite a few benefits. First, it will be a good place for scientists to cooperate and do space research together. New technologies can be developed, tested, and operated there. These technologies can then be used to help build stations on Mars and other planets. Second, more resources will be found. I think the moon may have some special kind of energy resource that can be useful to Earth. It will just take time for scientists to find it. Third, people may live and work there. Tourists will also be able to visit. I want to be one of the first visitors. I hope that one day we humans can spend holidays in space and explore the universe. Humans have achieved many things that were once only dreams. I hope the research station on the moon will be built in the near future, and I hope it will happen during my lifetime. 【Task 1】Read about one teenager's space dream. Then complete the chart. My Space Dream What Why Reason 1: Reason 2: Reason 3: 【While-reading 解构文本】 1.  Find out the structure of the text. Paragraph 1 开篇点题：直接点明梦想内容，总述其价值与意义 Paragraph 2-4 分层论述：用 First/Second/Third 分点阐述梦想的优势、作用与价值 Paragraph 5 个人展望+结尾升华：表达个人期待与美好祝愿，升华主题 2. Discuss the ideas about space. Which interests you the most and why? build a research station on the moon send a spacecraft to the nearest starsystem search for life in the solar system build a satellite to collect the sun's energy and send it to Earth ...... 【Post-reading 读后仿写】 【五步训练法仿写专练】 原句精讲—结构拆解—当堂仿写—核对答案 开篇点题总起句 【原句】My space dream is that one day a research station will be built on the moon. I believe there are quite a few benefits. 【句型结构拆解】My ________ dream is that one day ________. I believe there are quite a few benefits. 【基础仿写练习】我的梦想是未来能够坚持探索未知，我相信这会带来很多益处。 _________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】My dream is that one day I can keep exploring the unknown world. I believe there are quite a few benefits. 分层论述价值（First 基础句） 【原句1】First, it will be a good place for scientists to cooperate and do space research together. 【句型结构拆解】First, it will be a good place for ________ to ________ and ________ together. 【仿写练习】 首先，这将是我学习成长、提升自我的好机会。 _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】First, it will be a good chance for me to study and improve myself together. 成果延伸运用 【原句】 These technologies can then be used to help build stations on Mars and other planets. 【句型结构拆解】 These ________ can then be used to help ________. 【仿写练习】 这些收获随后可以用来帮助我实现更多人生目标。 _________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】These gains can then be used to help me achieve more life goals. 观点看法从句 【原句】I think the moon may have some special kind of energy resource that can be useful to Earth. 【句型结构拆解】 I think ________ may have ________ that can be useful to ________. 【仿写练习】 我认为坚持梦想可以带给我们力量，对我们的未来大有帮助。 _________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】I think keeping dreams may bring us strength that can be useful to our future. 结尾升华高分句 【原句】Humans have achieved many things that were once only dreams. I hope the research station on the moon will be built in the near future, and I hope it will happen during my lifetime. 【句型结构拆解】 Humans have achieved many things that were once only dreams. I hope ________ will ________ in the near future during my lifetime. 【仿写练习】 人类实现了许多曾经只是梦想的事情，我希望我的梦想能在我有生之年早日实现。 _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】Humans have achieved many things that were once only dreams. I hope my dream will come true in the near future during my lifetime. 【Writing 当堂写作】 My _____________ Dream/ My Dream 写作框架（四段式） Paragraph 1 开篇点题：清晰点明自己的梦想是什么，简单总述它的价值。 Paragraph 2 优势一：用 First 阐述梦想带来的机会、帮助与积极意义。 Paragraph 3 优势二+展望：用 Second/Third 补充价值，并写出自己的期待与行动愿景。 Paragraph 4 结尾升华：结合人类追梦的现实，表达自己的美好期许与坚定信念。 My____________ Dream __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My Dream My biggest dream is to explore the unknown world, and I believe there are quite a few benefits. First, it will be a good chance for me to learn rich knowledge and do scientific research carefully. These experiences can then be used to help me grow into a better person. Second, exploring new things can bring me courage and strength that are useful to my whole life. Humans have achieved many impossible dreams. I hope I can stick to my dream and make it come true during my lifetime. . 【Writing 写作训练】 1．题目：My Space Dream（我的太空梦） 写作要求： 1. 简单说说你的太空梦想，你想去太空做什么； 2. 选用至少1个本单元重点短语（take off / dream of / space exploration / make progress 任选）； 3. 包含一句简单被动语态（如Many space tasks will be finished...）； 4. 写出你会怎样学习，为梦想努力；词数80词左右； 5. 禁止出现真实校名、姓名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 My Space Dream I dream of travelling to space one day. I hope to visit the Moon and take photos of our Earth. Space exploration interests me a lot because I want to find the secrets of the universe. Many unknown stars will be found by humans in the future. To make progress in science, I will study math and physics hard every day. I believe my space dream will come true if I keep working hard. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般将来时为主 明确要点：我的太空梦想和想去太空做什么；如何为梦想努力 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数70-80；选用至少1个本单元重点短语；包含一句简单被动语态；禁止出现真实校名、姓名。 [第二步：构思布局] 二段式结构： 第一段：点明梦想，表达想去太空做的事 第二段：阐述如何为梦想努力 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：我的太空梦想和想去太空做的事 I dream of travelling to space one day./I hope to visit the Moon and take photos of our Earth./Space exploration interests me a lot because I want to find secrets of the universe./Many unknown stars will be found by humans in the future./My dream is to become an astronaut./I am deeply interested in the mysterious universe and want to explore it./It is my greatest wish.等 要点二：如何为梦想努力 To make progress in science, I will study math and physics hard every day./I believe my space dream will come true if I keep working hard./To achieve this dream, I will study hard at school, especially math and science./Also, reading books about space is helpful./I also need to keep fit by doing sports every day to build a strong body.等 2．为了鼓励同学们畅想未来、坚定追梦信念，你校英文论坛正在开展 “My Dream” 主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示，以My Dream为题写一篇英语短文参加征文活动，描述你的未来生活和梦想。 内容： 1. 你的梦想是什么及产生这个梦想的原因； 2. 实现梦想后，你的未来生活将会是什么样子； 3. 为了实现这个梦想，你打算怎么做？ 要求： 1. 短文需包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 不得出现真实的校名、姓名； 3. 80词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。 My Dream Everybody has a dream. My dream is to be a (an) ...__________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Dream Everybody has a dream. My dream is to be a teacher. I love children and I want to help them learn new things. If I become a teacher, I will be kind and patient. I will live a simple but happy life with my students. To make my dream come true, I will study hard at school. I will read more books and learn good teaching ways. I believe I can achieve my dream one day. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：阐述自己的梦想、产生原因、实现梦想后的生活以及实现梦想的打算 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：词数控制在70词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；内容要包括所有要点；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，直接表明自己的梦想 主体段：说明产生梦想的原因、实现梦想后的生活以及为实现梦想的打算 结尾段：总结表达相信自己能实现梦想 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：梦想及产生原因 梦想是成为老师：My dream is to be a teacher. 原因：热爱孩子且想帮助他们学习新事物：I love children and I want to help them learn new things. 要点二：实现梦想后的未来生活 善良且有耐心：I will be kind and patient. 和学生过简单快乐的生活：I will live a simple but happy life with my students. 要点三：为实现梦想的打算 在学校努力学习：I will study hard at school. 多读书并学习好的教学方法：I will read more books and learn good teaching ways. 3．每个人都有追逐梦想的权利，而健康的身心是追梦路上的坚实基础。你也一定有自己的梦想并为之努力。请以“My Dream and Healthy Growth”为题，围绕以下方面展开写作： 1. 你的成长梦想及产生原因； 2. 描述追梦经历与健康习惯； 3. 逐梦过程的感悟。 要求： 1. 文中须包含所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥；内容通顺，书写工整； 2. 文中不能出现学生的真实姓名和校名等信息； 3. 80 词左右，不得抄袭试卷原文。 My Dream and Healthy Growth ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My Dream and Healthy Growth My dream is to become a doctor because I want to help sick people and ease their pain. To achieve it, I study hard every day and read medical books in my free time. I also keep healthy by exercising for half an hour daily and eating fresh vegetables and fruits. This journey teaches me that a strong body supports a big dream. I believe with hard work and good habits, my dream will come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：需包含梦想及原因、追梦行动与健康习惯、个人感悟三方面。 [写作步骤] 第一步：首句直接点明梦想（医生）及简单原因； 第二步：描述追梦行动与健康习惯； 第三步：结尾句总结感悟，强调健康与努力的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①in my free time在我的空闲时间 ②keep healthy保持健康 ③come true实现 [高分句型] ①My dream is to become a doctor because I want to help sick people and ease their pain. (原因状语从句) ②This journey teaches me that a strong body supports a big dream. (宾语从句) 4．假如你是张华，你的学校正在开展以“我的未来我做主”为主题的职业规划活动，现在向全校同学征集职业规划的文章。请你根据以下内容，写一篇英语短文向学校报刊主编Amanda投稿。 需要包含以下信息： (1) Your dream job (2) Reasons for the job (3) Your quality (品质)/skills (4) How to realize 参考词汇：help sb. do, patient, caring, study hard, keep on… 要求： 1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数80以上。 Dear Amanda, I’m Zhang Hua. I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Zhang Hua 【答案】例文 ​​Dear Amanda,​​     I’m Zhang Hua. I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job.     My dream is to become a doctor because I want to help the sick. I believe I am suitable for this job. I am patient and caring, which are important qualities for a doctor. To achieve my goal, I will study hard to enter a good medical college. I also need to learn how to communicate with people kindly. I know that it will take a lot of effort, but I will keep on trying.     I truly hope my dream can come true in the future. Yours, Zhang Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：文章时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：向学校报刊主编Amanda投稿，描述自己的职业规划，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明投稿的目的是分享自己的职业规划，引出下文； 第二步，介绍自己的理想职业，想做这个职业的原因，自身适合该职业的品质，以及如何实现自己的职业梦想，注意用词准确，行文流畅； 第三步， 表达自己对于梦想成真的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①be suitable for…适合…… ②study hard努力学习 ③communicate with…和……交流 [高分句型] ①My dream is to become a doctor because I want to help the sick.（原因状语从句） ②I am patient and caring, which are important qualities for a doctor.（定语从句） 17 / 18 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2026-2027学年九年级上册英语以读促写训练案 Unit 6 Beyond Earth Topic: My____________ Dream 写作任务：按照开篇点题 → 分点阐述优势 → 个人展望 → 结尾升华的结构，介绍自己的一个梦想（太空梦想、人生理想、未来目标等），阐述梦想内容、价值优势与个人期许，学会分层表达观点、有序输出英语短文。 【Pre-reading 话题铺垫】 【阅读文本Section B 3a 】 My Space Dream My space dream is that one day a research station will be built on the moon. I believe there are quite a few benefits. First, it will be a good place for scientists to cooperate and do space research together. New technologies can be developed, tested, and operated there. These technologies can then be used to help build stations on Mars and other planets. Second, more resources will be found. I think the moon may have some special kind of energy resource that can be useful to Earth. It will just take time for scientists to find it. Third, people may live and work there. Tourists will also be able to visit. I want to be one of the first visitors. I hope that one day we humans can spend holidays in space and explore the universe. Humans have achieved many things that were once only dreams. I hope the research station on the moon will be built in the near future, and I hope it will happen during my lifetime. 【Task 1】Read about one teenager's space dream. Then complete the chart. My Space Dream What Why Reason 1: Reason 2: Reason 3: 【While-reading 解构文本】 1.  Find out the structure of the text. Paragraph 1 开篇点题：直接点明梦想内容，总述其价值与意义 Paragraph 2-4 分层论述：用 First/Second/Third 分点阐述梦想的优势、作用与价值 Paragraph 5 个人展望+结尾升华：表达个人期待与美好祝愿，升华主题 2. Discuss the ideas about space. Which interests you the most and why? build a research station on the moon send a spacecraft to the nearest starsystem search for life in the solar system build a satellite to collect the sun's energy and send it to Earth ...... 【Post-reading 读后仿写】 【五步训练法仿写专练】 原句精讲—结构拆解—当堂仿写—核对答案 开篇点题总起句 【原句】My space dream is that one day a research station will be built on the moon. I believe there are quite a few benefits. 【句型结构拆解】My ________ dream is that one day ________. I believe there are quite a few benefits. 【基础仿写练习】我的梦想是未来能够坚持探索未知，我相信这会带来很多益处。 _________________________________________________________________________ 分层论述价值（First 基础句） 【原句1】First, it will be a good place for scientists to cooperate and do space research together. 【句型结构拆解】First, it will be a good place for ________ to ________ and ________ together. 【仿写练习】 首先，这将是我学习成长、提升自我的好机会。 _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 成果延伸运用 【原句】 These technologies can then be used to help build stations on Mars and other planets. 【句型结构拆解】 These ________ can then be used to help ________. 【仿写练习】 这些收获随后可以用来帮助我实现更多人生目标。 _________________________________________________________________________ 观点看法从句 【原句】I think the moon may have some special kind of energy resource that can be useful to Earth. 【句型结构拆解】 I think ________ may have ________ that can be useful to ________. 【仿写练习】 我认为坚持梦想可以带给我们力量，对我们的未来大有帮助。 _________________________________________________________________________ 结尾升华高分句 【原句】Humans have achieved many things that were once only dreams. I hope the research station on the moon will be built in the near future, and I hope it will happen during my lifetime. 【句型结构拆解】 Humans have achieved many things that were once only dreams. I hope ________ will ________ in the near future during my lifetime. 【仿写练习】 人类实现了许多曾经只是梦想的事情，我希望我的梦想能在我有生之年早日实现。 _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 【Writing 当堂写作】 My _____________ Dream/ My Dream 写作框架（四段式） Paragraph 1 开篇点题：清晰点明自己的梦想是什么，简单总述它的价值。 Paragraph 2 优势一：用 First 阐述梦想带来的机会、帮助与积极意义。 Paragraph 3 优势二+展望：用 Second/Third 补充价值，并写出自己的期待与行动愿景。 Paragraph 4 结尾升华：结合人类追梦的现实，表达自己的美好期许与坚定信念。 My____________ Dream __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ . 【Writing 写作训练】 1．题目：My Space Dream（我的太空梦） 写作要求： 1. 简单说说你的太空梦想，你想去太空做什么； 2. 选用至少1个本单元重点短语（take off / dream of / space exploration / make progress 任选）； 3. 包含一句简单被动语态（如Many space tasks will be finished...）； 4. 写出你会怎样学习，为梦想努力；词数80词左右； 5. 禁止出现真实校名、姓名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．为了鼓励同学们畅想未来、坚定追梦信念，你校英文论坛正在开展 “My Dream” 主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示，以My Dream为题写一篇英语短文参加征文活动，描述你的未来生活和梦想。 内容： 1. 你的梦想是什么及产生这个梦想的原因； 2. 实现梦想后，你的未来生活将会是什么样子； 3. 为了实现这个梦想，你打算怎么做？ 要求：1. 短文需包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 不得出现真实的校名、姓名； 3. 80词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。 My Dream Everybody has a dream. My dream is to be a (an) ...__________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．每个人都有追逐梦想的权利，而健康的身心是追梦路上的坚实基础。你也一定有自己的梦想并为之努力。请以“My Dream and Healthy Growth”为题，围绕以下方面展开写作： 1. 你的成长梦想及产生原因； 2. 描述追梦经历与健康习惯； 3. 逐梦过程的感悟。 要求：1. 文中须包含所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥；内容通顺，书写工整； 2. 文中不能出现学生的真实姓名和校名等信息； 3. 80 词左右，不得抄袭试卷原文。 My Dream and Healthy Growth ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是张华，你的学校正在开展以“我的未来我做主”为主题的职业规划活动，现在向全校同学征集职业规划的文章。请你根据以下内容，写一篇英语短文向学校报刊主编Amanda投稿。需要包含以下信息： (1) Your dream job (2) Reasons for the job (3) Your quality (品质)/skills (4) How to realize 参考词汇：help sb. do, patient, caring, study hard, keep on… 要求：1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数80以上。 Dear Amanda, I’m Zhang Hua. 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