第14讲 人与动物类（故事构造三部曲）2027年高考英语一轮复习读后续写高分突破

该高中英语讲义聚焦高考读后续写中人与动物类故事写作核心考点，以“相遇遇困—施救守护—回馈升华”三部曲构建故事骨架，通过破题式分析、招式谱句型公式、高考场真题拆解及风向标模考速递四个环节，系统梳理考点逻辑，指导学生掌握细节描写与主题升华方法，实现复习的针对性与系统性。 资料创新采用“按步取句”句型公式与真题线索梳理策略，如2023浙江卷蜂鸟报恩真题拆解中，通过翻译练习强化语言能力，借助故事逻辑构建培养思维品质。分层模拟题设计保障不同水平学生有效突破难点，为教师把控复习节奏、提升学生应考能力提供实用指导。

第14讲 人与动物类（故事构造三部曲）（原卷版） 内容导航 01 破题式·故事骨架 故事分析 · 构思蓝图 02 招式谱·句型公式 按步取句 / 拿来即用 03 高考场·真题拆解 高考原题+技法讲解 04 风向标·模考速递 最新模考 · 同题材范文与金句 破题式·故事骨架 01 主题画像 人与动物类故事，以“人”与“动物”的一次相遇为轴线：或是偶遇一只受伤、受困、走失的小生灵——鸟、狐、鹤、犬、蜂；或是与野狼、北极熊这样的猛兽狭路相逢。随后，人用轻柔的双手施以援救、用耐心的陪伴换来信任，或用沉着的周旋换来脱险；结尾处动物往往以一次回望、一声轻鸣、一下蹭手作出回应，把“敬畏生命”“万物有灵”“和谐共生”的立意稳稳落住。简言之：人与动物类故事 = 一场“由遇见到守护、由守护到回馈”的双向奔赴。 02 真题回眸 年份 卷别 故事梗概 情感落点 2017.06 浙江卷 骑车穿越林区遭遇野狼追赶，同伴投喂生肉，沉着周旋后化险为夷 惊险与脱险 2020.01 浙江卷 少年离家上大学，老狗 Poppy 郁郁寡欢，父母抱回小狗给它作伴 陪伴与治愈 2023.01 浙江卷 农场救出被蛛网困住的蜂鸟，数周后蜂鸟悬停凝视，似来道别 善意与回馈 03 构思路线 ● 相遇遇困：先写“遇”。用环境与特写把初次照面写实——它的眼神、伤处、颤抖，或猛兽逼近的压迫感，把危机立住。 ● 施救守护：再写“救”。让善意落到具体动作上——轻裹、剪网、喂食、包扎，或沉着周旋、发出求援，中间允许失败与反复。 ● 回馈升华：最后写“应”。让动物以回望、轻鸣、蹭手作出回应，再用一句点睛把“敬畏生命、和谐共生”说出来。 距离由远到近 · 姿态由怕到护 · 立意由救到敬 04 避坑提醒 ● 不要把动物写成“会说话的人”：动物只能靠神态、动作、叫声传情（歪头、蹭手、轻鸣、摇尾），一旦让它开口讲道理，故事立刻失真。 ● 不要把“救助”写成“一步到位”：得分点全在过程——先靠近、再安抚、后施救，中间要有犹豫与失败；一句“我把它救了出来”等于放弃整段细节分。 ● 不要把升华写成“保护动物人人有责”式口号：感悟要从这一只动物、这一次相遇里长出来，落到“敬畏生命”“被治愈的其实是我”这样的具体体悟上。 招式谱·句型公式 Step 1 相遇遇困 · 危机（偶遇动物 / 陷入险境） 【本步任务】 交代人与动物照面的那一刻：用环境铺垫 + 特写镜头，把动物的伤处、眼神、颤抖写足，或把猛兽逼近的压迫感写透，让危机真正立住。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 There, ________ lay, clearly ________ from ________. 就在那里，…躺着，显然因…而…（发现困境） Its ________ eyes were filled with ________, as if begging for ________. 它…的眼睛里满是…，仿佛在乞求…（神态特写） Before I could ________, the ________ ________ toward me. 我还来不及…，那只…就朝我…（险境突袭） 【高频例句】 1. （2023.01 浙江卷·蜂鸟报恩）那是一只蜂鸟，正拼命想逃出去；它浑身缠满蛛网，翅膀几乎动弹不得。   2. （2020.01 浙江卷·给狗狗找伴）他们甚至让它上沙发，可这只老狗就是提不起往日的欢快劲儿。   3. （2020.07 浙江卷·北极熊遇险）那头饿熊循着气味找到了我们的营地，营地四周只围着一圈高高的铁丝网。   4. （2017.06 浙江卷·人狼大战）一想到狼那张血红的大嘴，Mac 几乎被吓死。   5. （四省联考·收养小松鼠）它抖得厉害，又瘦又弱，还饿着肚子。   6. （2026·山东泰安·二模·栅栏里的小狐狸）我看见小狐狸紧紧蜷在铁栅栏的角落里，一只前爪死死卡在冰冷的铁条之间。   7. （2026·山东烟台·二模·黑颈鹤的假肢）就在林下，躺着一只黑颈鹤——浑身泥污，左腿膝下已齐齐断去。   8. （2026·吉林长春·二诊·被困的小野鸭）在泥泞的岸边，一只小野鸭被困在一堆塑料垃圾和废旧渔网里。   9. （2026·内蒙古乌兰察布·二模·山脊上的小狗）我一靠近，它就狂吠着想逃开，可它的一条前腿已经受了伤。   10. （2026·陕西延安联考·二模·流浪猫Luna）每当我靠近，她就缩进角落，一丁点声响都能让那小小的身子发抖。   11. （2026·山西运城·二测·赛场救海鸥）那只鸟砰的一声坠地，一动不动地躺着。   12. （2026·河北枣强中学·二模·走失的小仓鼠）等他收拾完回头一看，Peanut 不见了，Alex 的心一下子沉了下去。   【情绪小词】 startled（惊住）, helpless（无助的）, tremble（颤抖）, terrified（惊恐的）, one’s heart sinks（心一沉） Step 2 施救守护 · 行动（轻柔救助 / 沉着周旋） 【本步任务】 把善意落到具体动作上：轻裹、剪网、喂食、包扎、日夜守护，或在猛兽面前沉着周旋、发出求援；允许写失败与反复，过程越细，分数越高。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 Gently, I ________, making sure not to startle the ________ animal. 我轻轻地…，小心不惊到这只…的小生灵（轻柔救助） Day after day, I ________, and slowly, the ________ began to trust me. 日复一日，我…，慢慢地，那只…开始信任我（悉心陪伴） Keeping calm, I ________ while ________, waiting for a chance to ________. 我强作镇定，一边…一边…，等待…的时机（沉着周旋） 【高频例句】 1. （2023.01 浙江卷·蜂鸟报恩）我把粘在它头上和翅膀上的蛛网一点点摘去。   2. （四省联考·收养小松鼠）她教它用奶瓶进食，夜里还爬起来给它喂奶。   3. （2020.07 浙江卷·北极熊遇险）于是我慢慢靠近这位不速之客，隔着栅栏朝它脸上喷了辣椒水。   4. （2017.06 浙江卷·人狼大战）Mac 的一个同伴挑出几块生肉，扔给了那只狼。   5. （2020.01 浙江卷·给狗狗找伴）Poppy 小心翼翼地靠近，生怕吓着那只小狗。   6. （2026·山东泰安·二模·栅栏里的小狐狸）我用软毛巾轻轻裹住狐狸的身子安抚它，格林先生则用小工具把铁条稍稍撑开。   7. （2026·山东烟台·二模·黑颈鹤的假肢）卓玛细心地为它擦净身子，洗去左腿的血迹，仔细包扎伤口。   8. （2026·吉林长春·二诊·被困的小野鸭）在父母的帮助下，Tom 小心地剪开缠绕的渔网，终于让小鸭重获自由。   9. （2026·内蒙古乌兰察布·二模·山脊上的小狗）我小心地靠近那只狗，用左臂把它整个揽住。   10. （2026·河南郑州·一模·不放弃的鸽子）我找来几块木板，为它们做了一个结实的木巢。   11. （2026·云南昆明·二诊·蜜蜂旅馆）他们迅速调了一勺糖水喂它，盼着能让小蜜蜂恢复些力气。   12. （2026·陕西延安联考·二模·流浪猫Luna）我没有伸手去碰她，只是靠着墙，轻轻哼起童年的小调。   【情绪小词】 gently（轻轻地）, cautiously（小心翼翼地）, soothe（安抚）, set free（放归）, determined（坚定的） Step 3 回馈升华 · 点题（动物回应 / 生命感悟） 【本步任务】 先让动物用回望、轻鸣、蹭手、盘旋作出无声回应，再把感悟从这一次相遇里生长出来，用一句点睛落到“敬畏生命、和谐共生”。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 With one last ________, it ________, as if to say “thank you”. 它最后…了一下，然后…，仿佛在说“谢谢”（依依惜别） That experience taught me that ________ isn’t just about ________ — it’s about ________. 那次经历让我明白，…不只是…，更是…（点题升华） From then on, I came to see that ________ and ________ share ________. 从那以后我懂得，…与…共享着…（和谐共生） 【高频例句】 1. （2023.01 浙江卷·蜂鸟报恩）它再一次直直望进我的眼睛，发出一声轻鸣，随后消失不见。   2. （2020.07 浙江卷·北极熊遇险）Elli 和我记住了这个教训：小心一头正在牙疼的熊。   3. （2020.01 浙江卷·给狗狗找伴）没过多久，两只狗就在屋里追逐嬉闹，欢快极了。   4. （四省联考·收养小松鼠）看到它平安归来，我们再欣慰不过，也为它感到骄傲。   5. （2017.06 浙江卷·人狼大战）那只狼对到手的食物很满意，转身跑进了树林。   6. （2026·山东泰安·二模·栅栏里的小狐狸）小狐狸抬头看着我们，眼里不再是恐惧，而是一丝熟稔。   7. （2026·山东烟台·二模·黑颈鹤的假肢）善意与爱在人与野生动物之间架起桥梁，守护着这片神奇的土地。   8. （2026·云南昆明·二诊·蜜蜂旅馆）它绕着阳台飞了一会儿，像是在道谢，然后飞进了花园。   9. （2026·吉林长春·二诊·被困的小野鸭）这次经历让我们明白：每一份微小的善意都算数。   10. （2026·山西运城·二测·赛场救海鸥）这次经历让他懂得：怜悯与善良比任何头衔都珍贵。   11. （2026·河南郑州·一模·不放弃的鸽子）这对鸽子教会我勇敢面对困难、继续向前。   12. （2026·陕西渭南·二测·重逢的Rusty）多年之后，童年的伙伴终于找到了回家的路。   【情绪小词】 gratitude（感激）, relief（释然）, awe（敬畏）, cherish（珍视）, harmony（和谐共处） 高考场·真题拆解 2023 年 1 月浙江卷（蜂鸟报恩） 【真题原文】 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 【续写两段首句】 Paragraph 1: A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【线索梳理】 农场救鸟 → 摘除蛛网 → 悬停凝视 → 数周再访 → 旧窗已修 → 蜂鸟重现 → 无言致谢 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 车子驶近农场时，我的思绪飘回了从蛛网中救下蜂鸟的那一刻。   2. 我快步回到那间废弃的挤奶房。   3. 令我十分欣慰的是，窗上原先的破洞已无处可寻。   4. 离开时，我忍不住想：它如今过得好吗？   第二段 1. 一道掠影攫住了我的目光。   2. 我转过身，看见那只熟悉的小生灵正悬停在空中。   3. 它那双黑亮的小眼睛锁住我的目光，仿佛要传达某种深沉而无言的感激。   4. 看着这只平安而懂得感恩的小生命，我心中涌起一阵释然与敬意。   风向标·模考速递 模拟题一　2026·山东泰安二模（栅栏里的小狐狸） After finishing my homework, I stretched slightly and glanced at the warm sunset outside the window, ready to go out for a walk to relax my tired eyes. Just as I put on my shoes, my neighbor Mr. Green called me in anxiety, his voice trembling a little over the phone. He said a small fox had been trapped in the fence of his backyard, and it was crying painfully, making his heart ache. I immediately grabbed a pair of thick cotton gloves and a soft towel from the shelf, then rushed to his house as fast as I could. When I arrived, I saw the little fox huddled (蜷缩) tightly in the corner of the iron fence, its front paw (爪子) firmly stuck between the cold iron bars. Its reddish-brown fur was messy with some dirt and dry grass, and its big eyes were filled with fear and helplessness. Mr. Green stood beside me, looking worried. He told me he had found the fox ten minutes ago while watering flowers, and he didn’t dare to move it, for fear of hurting its paw or making it more frightened. I knelt down gently, keeping my voice soft to calm the fox down. It looked at me with caution, its body trembling slightly and struggling now and then, but it couldn’t get free at all. I put on the gloves and checked its paw carefully, finding a small cut with a little blood, but no serious injury. I wanted to free it carefully, but I didn’t know the best way to avoid hurting it. Mr. Green held a flashlight to help me see clearly, his hands also a little shaky. We both felt anxious — neither of us had dealt with such a situation before, nor did we know anything about the fox’s habits. We just hoped we could free the poor little guy safely as soon as possible. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: “Why not look up the correct way to free a trapped fox online?” suggested Mr. Green.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Several days later, Mr. Green called me excitedly and asked me to go to his backyard.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 我连连点头，赶紧掏出手机搜索相关方法。   2. 我用软毛巾轻轻裹住狐狸的身子安抚它，格林先生则用小工具把铁条稍稍撑开。   3. 我一直轻声同它说话，轻抚它的皮毛，好让它别再害怕。   4. 几分钟的小心操作之后，狐狸的爪子终于自由了。   第二段 1. 我赶到时，惊讶地看见小狐狸安静地坐在草坪上，身旁还有一小束野花。   2. 它的皮毛干净整齐，爪子上的伤口似乎也愈合了。   3. 格林先生笑着说，自那次救助之后，它每天下午都会回来。   4. 小狐狸抬头看着我们，眼里不再是恐惧，而是一丝熟稔。   模拟题二　2026·内蒙古乌兰察布二模（山脊上的小狗） I was doing my regular hike up Shadow Mountain when I encountered something unexpected. Near the top, a white dog was hiding behind the rocks. When I approached, it barked and tried to get away, but one of its front legs was injured. We were high on a ridge (山脊), and every time I moved closer, the dog put itself more in danger. I couldn’t get close without putting both of us at risk. The ground was muddy underneath the loose rocks from recent rainfall, with almost no stable footing. I called my wife for help. It was getting dark, and this dog wasn’t going to make it. I reached out to Non-emergency and Animal Control, but nobody could offer immediate assistance. Meanwhile, my wife searched online and discovered a social media post about a missing white dog that had been lost five days earlier, nearly four miles away. It had to be the same one. Eventually, I called 911. As I waited for the police to call me back with a plan, the dog panicked again, sliding down the ravine (峡谷) twice. I knew I had to take action, so I carefully positioned myself down the ravine under the dog’s location, trying to prevent it sliding farther down the slope (斜坡). My phone battery was down to three percent, so I didn’t call. Instead, I used my flashlight to signal my location. After some time, several mountain rescue teams began climbing the mountain. When one rescuer finally got within shouting distance, he told me it was too dangerous to come down to me, and that a helicopter was coming. “You would need to hold onto the dog,” he said loudly to me. The surface we were on was unstable, and the ground offered no real footing. The dog shook violently and it seemed that it was about to slide again. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: I approached the dog carefully and threw my left arm around it.    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Holding the dog under my arm, I struggled to climb my way back.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 出乎我的意料，它把头往我臂弯里一埋。   2. 为了稳住我们俩，我死死抓住上方一截露出地面的小树根。   3. 头顶直升机的轰鸣盖过一切，我听不清任何指令。   4. 我知道自己不能再在原地干等救援了。   第二段 1. 救援队在那里接住了我，把小狗放进了吊篮。   2. 山脚下已经聚起一小群人，其中有我的妻子和小狗的主人。   3. 小狗一瘸一拐、欢天喜地地扑进主人怀里，尾巴摇个不停。   4. 这一夜惊心动魄，却因为运气与众人相助，有了一个圆满的结局。   模拟题三　2026·河南郑州一模（不放弃的鸽子） One day, I was sitting at the breakfast table with my five-year-old son, Mateo. I was still recovering from an operation. “Mom, let’s play,” Mateo looked at me and said. Trying hard to ignore the pain in my stomach, I shook my head and replied, “Not today, sweetie.” These days, getting out of bed was a real struggle for me. I longed for strength and happiness, yet the future seemed so hopeless. All of a sudden, Mateo jumped up from where he was sitting on the kitchen floor. He shouted, “Bird!” and then ran towards our courtyard. I looked in the direction he was looking and, sure enough, there was a white dove (鸽子) landing in a rubber tree. It stayed there for a little while and then flew away. It was quite odd because I’d never seen a white dove in our neighborhood before. The next morning, I dragged myself into the kitchen. To my surprise, the dove was back, and this time it had a mate carrying some sticks. I pointed to the tree and said to Mateo, “Look, they’re going to build a nest.” Throughout the week, the doves flew in and out of the courtyard, building their nest on top of the rubber tree. Mateo was extremely excited. Every morning, he would rush into the kitchen and stand by the sliding glass door. He would talk to the birds as they worked. His joy was influential. Although feeling sad, I couldn’t help but look forward to the doves’ visits. However, things took a turn for the worse. The courtyard seemed like a safe place for a nest, but the rubber tree’s small branches were not stable at all. One night, a strong wind blew, and the doves’ nest was blown to the ground. I heard the small branches break. I checked the damage. Nothing good ever lasts. I wouldn’t blame the doves if they never came back. But they returned. They didn’t even look at the pile of sticks that used to be their nest. They started building all over again. Unfortunately, the wind destroyed their work again. But day after day, they kept starting again as if nothing had occurred. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: I realized that I should take some measures.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: “Look! The birds have returned!” Mateo shouted.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 在我最灰暗的日子里，是这对鸽子给了我慰藉，如今该我回报它们了。   2. 我在家里仔细翻找，寻来几块木板，为它们做了一个结实的木巢。   3. 我费了好大力气爬上梯子，把巢固定在橡皮树上，又盖上一些树叶。   4. 这活儿并不轻松，但鸽子的执着给了我信心和力量。   第二段 1. 听到儿子清亮如铃的欢呼，我抬起头来。   2. 鸽子正绕着新巢欢快地盘旋，似乎对新家很满意。   3. 几周之后，四只雏鸟破壳而出。   4. 看着它们高飞、听着它们鸣唱，我心里重新有了积极与希望。 1 / 19 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 第14讲 人与动物类（故事构造三部曲）（解析版） 内容导航 01 破题式·故事骨架 故事分析 · 构思蓝图 02 招式谱·句型公式 按步取句 / 拿来即用 03 高考场·真题拆解 高考原题+技法讲解 04 风向标·模考速递 最新模考 · 同题材范文与金句 破题式·故事骨架 01 主题画像 人与动物类故事，以“人”与“动物”的一次相遇为轴线：或是偶遇一只受伤、受困、走失的小生灵——鸟、狐、鹤、犬、蜂；或是与野狼、北极熊这样的猛兽狭路相逢。随后，人用轻柔的双手施以援救、用耐心的陪伴换来信任，或用沉着的周旋换来脱险；结尾处动物往往以一次回望、一声轻鸣、一下蹭手作出回应，把“敬畏生命”“万物有灵”“和谐共生”的立意稳稳落住。简言之：人与动物类故事 = 一场“由遇见到守护、由守护到回馈”的双向奔赴。 02 真题回眸 年份 卷别 故事梗概 情感落点 2017.06 浙江卷 骑车穿越林区遭遇野狼追赶，同伴投喂生肉，沉着周旋后化险为夷 惊险与脱险 2020.01 浙江卷 少年离家上大学，老狗 Poppy 郁郁寡欢，父母抱回小狗给它作伴 陪伴与治愈 2023.01 浙江卷 农场救出被蛛网困住的蜂鸟，数周后蜂鸟悬停凝视，似来道别 善意与回馈 03 构思路线 ● 相遇遇困：先写“遇”。用环境与特写把初次照面写实——它的眼神、伤处、颤抖，或猛兽逼近的压迫感，把危机立住。 ● 施救守护：再写“救”。让善意落到具体动作上——轻裹、剪网、喂食、包扎，或沉着周旋、发出求援，中间允许失败与反复。 ● 回馈升华：最后写“应”。让动物以回望、轻鸣、蹭手作出回应，再用一句点睛把“敬畏生命、和谐共生”说出来。 距离由远到近 · 姿态由怕到护 · 立意由救到敬 04 避坑提醒 ● 不要把动物写成“会说话的人”：动物只能靠神态、动作、叫声传情（歪头、蹭手、轻鸣、摇尾），一旦让它开口，故事立刻失真。 ● 不要把“救助”写成“一步到位”：得分点全在过程——先靠近、再安抚、后施救，中间要有犹豫与失败；一句“我把它救了出来”等于放弃整段细节分。 ● 不要把升华写成“保护动物人人有责”式口号：感悟要从这一只动物、这一次相遇里长出来，落到“敬畏生命”“被治愈的其实是我”这样的具体体悟上。 招式谱·句型公式 Step 1 相遇遇困 · 危机（偶遇动物 / 陷入险境） 【本步任务】 交代人与动物照面的那一刻：用环境铺垫 + 特写镜头，把动物的伤处、眼神、颤抖写足，或把猛兽逼近的压迫感写透，让危机真正立住。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 There, ________ lay, clearly ________ from ________. 就在那里，…躺着，显然因…而…（发现困境） Its ________ eyes were filled with ________, as if begging for ________. 它…的眼睛里满是…，仿佛在乞求…（神态特写） Before I could ________, the ________ ________ toward me. 我还来不及…，那只…就朝我…（险境突袭） 【高频例句】 1. （2023.01 浙江卷·蜂鸟报恩）那是一只蜂鸟，正拼命想逃出去；它浑身缠满蛛网，翅膀几乎动弹不得。 It was a hummingbird, desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs and was barely able to move her wings. 2. （2020.01 浙江卷·给狗狗找伴）他们甚至让它上沙发，可这只老狗就是提不起往日的欢快劲儿。 They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. 3. （2020.07 浙江卷·北极熊遇险）那头饿熊循着气味找到了我们的营地，营地四周只围着一圈高高的铁丝网。 The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. 4. （2017.06 浙江卷·人狼大战）一想到狼那张血红的大嘴，Mac 几乎被吓死。 Thinking of the wolf’s bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright. 5. （四省联考·收养小松鼠）它抖得厉害，又瘦又弱，还饿着肚子。 Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. 6. （2026·山东泰安·二模·栅栏里的小狐狸）我看见小狐狸紧紧蜷在铁栅栏的角落里，一只前爪死死卡在冰冷的铁条之间。 I saw the little fox huddled tightly in the corner of the iron fence, its front paw firmly stuck between the cold iron bars. 7. （2026·山东烟台·二模·黑颈鹤的假肢）就在林下，躺着一只黑颈鹤——浑身泥污，左腿膝下已齐齐断去。 There, beneath the woods, lay a black-necked crane — its body muddled and left leg missing below the knee. 8. （2026·吉林长春·二诊·被困的小野鸭）在泥泞的岸边，一只小野鸭被困在一堆塑料垃圾和废旧渔网里。 On the muddy shore, a young wild duck was stuck in a pile of plastic waste and old fishing nets. 9. （2026·内蒙古乌兰察布·二模·山脊上的小狗）我一靠近，它就狂吠着想逃开，可它的一条前腿已经受了伤。 When I approached, it barked and tried to get away, but one of its front legs was injured. 10. （2026·陕西延安联考·二模·流浪猫Luna）每当我靠近，她就缩进角落，一丁点声响都能让那小小的身子发抖。 Whenever I approached, she would cower in the corner, her tiny body shaking at the slightest sound. 11. （2026·山西运城·二测·赛场救海鸥）那只鸟砰的一声坠地，一动不动地躺着。 The bird fell to the ground with a thud, lying motionless. 12. （2026·河北枣强中学·二模·走失的小仓鼠）等他收拾完回头一看，Peanut 不见了，Alex 的心一下子沉了下去。 When he finished and looked back, Peanut was gone. Alex’s heart sank. 【情绪小词】 startled（惊住）, helpless（无助的）, tremble（颤抖）, terrified（惊恐的）, one’s heart sinks（心一沉） Step 2 施救守护 · 行动（轻柔救助 / 沉着周旋） 【本步任务】 把善意落到具体动作上：轻裹、剪网、喂食、包扎、日夜守护，或在猛兽面前沉着周旋、发出求援；允许写失败与反复，过程越细，分数越高。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 Gently, I ________, making sure not to startle the ________ animal. 我轻轻地…，小心不惊到这只…的小生灵（轻柔救助） Day after day, I ________, and slowly, the ________ began to trust me. 日复一日，我…，慢慢地，那只…开始信任我（悉心陪伴） Keeping calm, I ________ while ________, waiting for a chance to ________. 我强作镇定，一边…一边…，等待…的时机（沉着周旋） 【高频例句】 1. （2023.01 浙江卷·蜂鸟报恩）我把粘在它头上和翅膀上的蛛网一点点摘去。 I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. 2. （四省联考·收养小松鼠）她教它用奶瓶进食，夜里还爬起来给它喂奶。 She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds. 3. （2020.07 浙江卷·北极熊遇险）于是我慢慢靠近这位不速之客，隔着栅栏朝它脸上喷了辣椒水。 So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. 4. （2017.06 浙江卷·人狼大战）Mac 的一个同伴挑出几块生肉，扔给了那只狼。 One of Mac’s friends picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf. 5. （2020.01 浙江卷·给狗狗找伴）Poppy 小心翼翼地靠近，生怕吓着那只小狗。 Poppy approached with caution, trying not to scare the puppy. 6. （2026·山东泰安·二模·栅栏里的小狐狸）我用软毛巾轻轻裹住狐狸的身子安抚它，格林先生则用小工具把铁条稍稍撑开。 I gently wrapped the fox’s body with the soft towel to calm it, while Mr. Green used a small tool to slightly widen the iron bars. 7. （2026·山东烟台·二模·黑颈鹤的假肢）卓玛细心地为它擦净身子，洗去左腿的血迹，仔细包扎伤口。 Drolma gently cleaned its body with care, removed blood from its left leg and dressed its wound carefully. 8. （2026·吉林长春·二诊·被困的小野鸭）在父母的帮助下，Tom 小心地剪开缠绕的渔网，终于让小鸭重获自由。 With our parents’ help, Tom carefully cut the tangled net and finally set the duck free. 9. （2026·内蒙古乌兰察布·二模·山脊上的小狗）我小心地靠近那只狗，用左臂把它整个揽住。 I approached the dog carefully and threw my left arm around it. 10. （2026·河南郑州·一模·不放弃的鸽子）我找来几块木板，为它们做了一个结实的木巢。 I found some pieces of wood and made a solid wooden nest for them. 11. （2026·云南昆明·二诊·蜜蜂旅馆）他们迅速调了一勺糖水喂它，盼着能让小蜜蜂恢复些力气。 They quickly mixed a spoonful of sugar water to feed it, hoping to give the bee some energy. 12. （2026·陕西延安联考·二模·流浪猫Luna）我没有伸手去碰她，只是靠着墙，轻轻哼起童年的小调。 I didn’t reach out, but simply leaned against the wall, humming a soft tune from my childhood. 【情绪小词】 gently（轻轻地）, cautiously（小心翼翼地）, soothe（安抚）, set free（放归）, determined（坚定的） Step 3 回馈升华 · 点题（动物回应 / 生命感悟） 【本步任务】 先让动物用回望、轻鸣、蹭手、盘旋作出无声回应，再把感悟从这一次相遇里生长出来，用一句点睛落到“敬畏生命、和谐共生”。 【句型公式】 句型公式 译文 With one last ________, it ________, as if to say “thank you”. 它最后…了一下，然后…，仿佛在说“谢谢”（依依惜别） That experience taught me that ________ isn’t just about ________ — it’s about ________. 那次经历让我明白，…不只是…，更是…（点题升华） From then on, I came to see that ________ and ________ share ________. 从那以后我懂得，…与…共享着…（和谐共生） 【高频例句】 1. （2023.01 浙江卷·蜂鸟报恩）它再一次直直望进我的眼睛，发出一声轻鸣，随后消失不见。 She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. 2. （2020.07 浙江卷·北极熊遇险）Elli 和我记住了这个教训：小心一头正在牙疼的熊。 Elli and I learned our lesson: Be aware of a bear with a toothache. 3. （2020.01 浙江卷·给狗狗找伴）没过多久，两只狗就在屋里追逐嬉闹，欢快极了。 It didn’t take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other. 4. （四省联考·收养小松鼠）看到它平安归来，我们再欣慰不过，也为它感到骄傲。 We couldn’t be more relieved when we saw him back, and we were so proud of him. 5. （2017.06 浙江卷·人狼大战）那只狼对到手的食物很满意，转身跑进了树林。 Satisfied with what he got, the wolf ran into the woods. 6. （2026·山东泰安·二模·栅栏里的小狐狸）小狐狸抬头看着我们，眼里不再是恐惧，而是一丝熟稔。 The fox looked up at us, its eyes no longer filled with fear, but with a trace of familiarity. 7. （2026·山东烟台·二模·黑颈鹤的假肢）善意与爱在人与野生动物之间架起桥梁，守护着这片神奇的土地。 Kindness and love bridge humans and wildlife, safeguarding this magical land. 8. （2026·云南昆明·二诊·蜜蜂旅馆）它绕着阳台飞了一会儿，像是在道谢，然后飞进了花园。 It flew around the balcony for a while, as if saying thanks, before flying off into the garden. 9. （2026·吉林长春·二诊·被困的小野鸭）这次经历让我们明白：每一份微小的善意都算数。 This experience made us realize that every small act of kindness counts. 10. （2026·山西运城·二测·赛场救海鸥）这次经历让他懂得：怜悯与善良比任何头衔都珍贵。 This experience taught him that compassion and kindness are more valuable than any title. 11. （2026·河南郑州·一模·不放弃的鸽子）这对鸽子教会我勇敢面对困难、继续向前。 The doves taught me to face difficulties bravely and keep moving forward. 12. （2026·陕西渭南·二测·重逢的Rusty）多年之后，童年的伙伴终于找到了回家的路。 After all these years, his childhood companion had found his way back home. 【情绪小词】 gratitude（感激）, relief（释然）, awe（敬畏）, cherish（珍视）, harmony（和谐共处） 高考场·真题拆解 2023 年 1 月浙江卷（蜂鸟报恩） 【真题原文】 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 【续写两段首句】 Paragraph 1: A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.     Paragraph 2: I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.       【参考译文】我受邀到华盛顿州西部一位老友的农场参加户外烧烤。我把车停在农场外，路过一间显然多年没用过的挤奶房。窗边的一点声响引起了我的注意，于是我走了进去。那是一只蜂鸟，正拼命想要逃出去。它浑身缠满蛛网，翅膀几乎动弹不得。我刚把它捧起来，它就不再挣扎了。 我把鸟捧在手心，环顾四周，想弄清它是怎么进来的。破了的窗玻璃大概就是答案。我用一块布把窟窿塞住，把它带到屋外，随手把门关严。 我摊开手掌，鸟却没有飞走；它就那样坐着，用一双明亮的眼睛看着我。我摘去粘在它头上和翅膀上的蛛网，它仍旧没有要飞的意思。也许它对着窗子挣扎得太久，太累了？还是太渴了？ 我抱着它，沿着两旁长满黑莓的小路往车子走去——车上有我的水壶。就在这时，它开始动了。我停下脚步，它很快展翅飞起，却没有立刻离开。 它悬停下来，靠近到离我的脸不足六英寸的地方。有很长一刻，这个小小的生灵望进我的眼睛，脑袋左右轻轻转动。随后，它飞快地消失在视线之外。 烧烤时我把蜂鸟的事讲给主人听，他们答应把窗子修好。临走时，朋友们送我到车旁。我正站在车边，一只蜂鸟飞到我们中间悬停下来。它一个个地转过去看，最后停在我面前，再一次直直望进我的眼睛，发出一声轻鸣，然后不见了踪影。有那么一瞬，所有人都说不出话。后来有人说：它一定是来道别的。 【线索梳理】 农场救鸟 → 摘除蛛网 → 悬停凝视 → 数周再访 → 旧窗已修 → 蜂鸟重现 → 无言致谢 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 车子驶近农场时，我的思绪飘回了从蛛网中救下蜂鸟的那一刻。 As my car neared the farm, my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider-webs. 2. 我快步回到那间废弃的挤奶房。 I rushed back to the deserted milking house. 3. 令我十分欣慰的是，窗上原先的破洞已无处可寻。 It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. 4. 离开时，我忍不住想：它如今过得好吗？ Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how she was getting on now. 第二段 1. 一道掠影攫住了我的目光。 A flash of movement caught my attention. 2. 我转过身，看见那只熟悉的小生灵正悬停在空中。 I turned around to see the same tiny creature hovering in the air. 3. 它那双黑亮的小眼睛锁住我的目光，仿佛要传达某种深沉而无言的感激。 Her beady eyes were locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. 4. 看着这只平安而懂得感恩的小生命，我心中涌起一阵释然与敬意。 I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful little life. 【范文】 Paragraph 1: A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared the farm, my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider-webs. I rushed back to the deserted milking house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found — my friends had kept their promise. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how she was getting on now. Had she managed to find her way back home, or was she still out there somewhere struggling to survive? Paragraph 2: I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same tiny creature hovering in the air, her wings humming softly in the sunlight. It seemed that she had been waiting for me. Her beady eyes were locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful little life. As I climbed into my car and drove away, I knew I would always cherish the wordless bond we had shared. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述“我”应邀到老友农场野餐，路过废弃的挤奶房时救下一只被蛛网困住的蜂鸟：摘去蛛网、把它送到户外后，蜂鸟悬停在“我”面前久久凝视才飞走；临别时它又飞回人群中央，径直望着“我”轻鸣一声，像是特意来道别。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. 提示写“我”重返农场时的回忆与牵挂——旧窗已修好，却不知那只蜂鸟是否安好。② 第二段首句 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. 提示写蜂鸟再度出现、悬停凝视，与“我”完成一次无言的重逢与致谢。 【续写线索】重返农场 → 忆起救鸟 → 查看旧窗 → 心生牵挂 → 蜂鸟重现 → 悬停凝视 → 无言致谢 【词汇激活】动作类：drift back to（思绪飘回）, rush back to（快步返回）, hover in the air（悬停空中）, be locked on（目光锁定）；情绪类：comfort（宽慰）, relief（释然）, awe（敬畏）, gratitude（感激）。 【点睛】As I climbed into my car and drove away, I knew I would always cherish the wordless bond we had shared. 一句收束全文：人与动物之间最动人的联结，往往不需要语言。 风向标·模考速递 模拟题一　2026·山东泰安二模（栅栏里的小狐狸） After finishing my homework, I stretched slightly and glanced at the warm sunset outside the window, ready to go out for a walk to relax my tired eyes. Just as I put on my shoes, my neighbor Mr. Green called me in anxiety, his voice trembling a little over the phone. He said a small fox had been trapped in the fence of his backyard, and it was crying painfully, making his heart ache. I immediately grabbed a pair of thick cotton gloves and a soft towel from the shelf, then rushed to his house as fast as I could. When I arrived, I saw the little fox huddled (蜷缩) tightly in the corner of the iron fence, its front paw (爪子) firmly stuck between the cold iron bars. Its reddish-brown fur was messy with some dirt and dry grass, and its big eyes were filled with fear and helplessness. Mr. Green stood beside me, looking worried. He told me he had found the fox ten minutes ago while watering flowers, and he didn’t dare to move it, for fear of hurting its paw or making it more frightened. I knelt down gently, keeping my voice soft to calm the fox down. It looked at me with caution, its body trembling slightly and struggling now and then, but it couldn’t get free at all. I put on the gloves and checked its paw carefully, finding a small cut with a little blood, but no serious injury. I wanted to free it carefully, but I didn’t know the best way to avoid hurting it. Mr. Green held a flashlight to help me see clearly, his hands also a little shaky. We both felt anxious — neither of us had dealt with such a situation before, nor did we know anything about the fox’s habits. We just hoped we could free the poor little guy safely as soon as possible. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: “Why not look up the correct way to free a trapped fox online?” suggested Mr. Green. Paragraph 2: Several days later, Mr. Green called me excitedly and asked me to go to his backyard. 【参考译文】写完作业，我伸了个懒腰，望向窗外温暖的夕阳，正打算出门散散步、放松一下疲惫的眼睛。刚穿好鞋，邻居格林先生就焦急地打来电话，声音在话筒里微微发颤。他说有一只小狐狸被困在他家后院的栅栏里，正痛苦地叫着，听得他心疼。我立刻从架子上抓起一副厚棉手套和一条软毛巾，用最快的速度赶去他家。 赶到时，我看见小狐狸紧紧蜷在铁栅栏的角落里，一只前爪死死卡在冰冷的铁条之间。它红棕色的皮毛沾满尘土和干草，一双大眼睛里满是恐惧与无助。格林先生站在我身旁，一脸担忧。他说十分钟前浇花时发现了它，却不敢挪动，生怕弄伤它的爪子，或让它更加受惊。 我轻轻蹲下，压低声音安抚它。它警惕地看着我，身子微微发抖，不时挣扎，却怎么也挣不脱。我戴上手套仔细查看它的爪子，发现有一道渗血的小口子，所幸伤得不重。我想小心地把它弄出来，却不知怎样做才最不伤到它。格林先生举着手电帮我照亮，手也有些发抖。我们都很紧张——我们谁都没处理过这样的情况，也全然不懂狐狸的习性。我们只盼着能尽快、安全地把这可怜的小家伙救出来。 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 我连连点头，赶紧掏出手机搜索相关方法。 I nodded eagerly, quickly taking out my phone and searching for relevant methods. 2. 我用软毛巾轻轻裹住狐狸的身子安抚它，格林先生则用小工具把铁条稍稍撑开。 I gently wrapped the fox’s body with the soft towel to calm it, while Mr. Green used a small tool to slightly widen the iron bars. 3. 我一直轻声同它说话，轻抚它的皮毛，好让它别再害怕。 I spoke softly to the fox all the time, stroking its fur gently to ease its fear. 4. 几分钟的小心操作之后，狐狸的爪子终于自由了。 After a few minutes of careful operation, the fox’s paw was finally free. 第二段 1. 我赶到时，惊讶地看见小狐狸安静地坐在草坪上，身旁还有一小束野花。 When I arrived, I was surprised to see the little fox sitting quietly on the lawn, with a small bunch of wild flowers beside it. 2. 它的皮毛干净整齐，爪子上的伤口似乎也愈合了。 Its fur was clean and tidy, and the cut on its paw seemed to have healed. 3. 格林先生笑着说，自那次救助之后，它每天下午都会回来。 Mr. Green smiled and said it had come back every afternoon since we rescued it. 4. 小狐狸抬头看着我们，眼里不再是恐惧，而是一丝熟稔。 The fox looked up at us, its eyes no longer filled with fear, but with a trace of familiarity. 【范文】 Paragraph 1: “Why not look up the correct way to free a trapped fox online?” suggested Mr. Green. I nodded eagerly, quickly taking out my phone and searching for relevant methods. We followed the steps carefully: I gently wrapped the fox’s body with the soft towel to calm it, while Mr. Green used a small tool to slightly widen the iron bars. I spoke softly to the fox all the time, stroking its fur gently to ease its fear. After a few minutes of careful operation, the fox’s paw was finally free. It jumped back a little, looked at us cautiously for a moment, then turned and ran into the nearby woods, disappearing in the blink of an eye. Paragraph 2: Several days later, Mr. Green called me excitedly and asked me to go to his backyard. When I arrived, I was surprised to see the little fox sitting quietly on the lawn, with a small bunch of wild flowers beside it. Its fur was clean and tidy, and the cut on its paw seemed to have healed. Mr. Green smiled and said it had come back every afternoon since we rescued it, sometimes bringing small gifts like wild flowers or berries. The fox looked up at us, its eyes no longer filled with fear, but with a trace of familiarity. Kindness, it seemed, could bridge the gap between humans and animals. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述“我”接到邻居格林先生的求助电话，赶去救助一只前爪被卡在铁栅栏里的小狐狸；两人起初手足无措，后来上网查到正确方法，配合着把小狐狸放归山林；数日之后，小狐狸竟带着野花回到后院，用一双不再恐惧的眼睛回望恩人。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 “Why not look up the correct way to free a trapped fox online?” suggested Mr. Green. 提示写两人按网上方法分工施救的全过程——裹毛巾、撑铁条、轻声安抚，直到小狐狸脱困跑回树林。② 第二段首句 Several days later, Mr. Green called me excitedly and asked me to go to his backyard. 提示写小狐狸带着野花归来的温暖一幕，以及“善意可以跨越物种”的感悟。 【续写线索】邻居求助 → 发现受困 → 上网查法 → 裹巾撑栏 → 脱困归林 → 数日回访 → 衔花致谢 【词汇激活】动作类：wrap sth. with a towel（用毛巾裹住）, widen the iron bars（撑开铁条）, stroke its fur（轻抚皮毛）, ease one’s fear（缓解恐惧）；情绪类：anxious（焦急的）, cautious（警惕的）, relieved（如释重负的）, familiarity（熟稔）。 【点睛】Kindness, it seemed, could bridge the gap between humans and animals. 点明主旨：善意是人与动物之间最短的一座桥。 模拟题二　2026·内蒙古乌兰察布二模（山脊上的小狗） I was doing my regular hike up Shadow Mountain when I encountered something unexpected. Near the top, a white dog was hiding behind the rocks. When I approached, it barked and tried to get away, but one of its front legs was injured. We were high on a ridge (山脊), and every time I moved closer, the dog put itself more in danger. I couldn’t get close without putting both of us at risk. The ground was muddy underneath the loose rocks from recent rainfall, with almost no stable footing. I called my wife for help. It was getting dark, and this dog wasn’t going to make it. I reached out to Non-emergency and Animal Control, but nobody could offer immediate assistance. Meanwhile, my wife searched online and discovered a social media post about a missing white dog that had been lost five days earlier, nearly four miles away. It had to be the same one. Eventually, I called 911. As I waited for the police to call me back with a plan, the dog panicked again, sliding down the ravine (峡谷) twice. I knew I had to take action, so I carefully positioned myself down the ravine under the dog’s location, trying to prevent it sliding farther down the slope (斜坡). My phone battery was down to three percent, so I didn’t call. Instead, I used my flashlight to signal my location. After some time, several mountain rescue teams began climbing the mountain. When one rescuer finally got within shouting distance, he told me it was too dangerous to come down to me, and that a helicopter was coming. “You would need to hold onto the dog,” he said loudly to me. The surface we were on was unstable, and the ground offered no real footing. The dog shook violently and it seemed that it was about to slide again. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: I approached the dog carefully and threw my left arm around it. Paragraph 2: Holding the dog under my arm, I struggled to climb my way back. 【参考译文】那天我照例去暗影山徒步，却撞见了意料之外的一幕：靠近山顶的地方，一只白色的小狗正躲在岩石后面。 我一靠近，它就狂吠着想逃开，可它的一条前腿已经受了伤。我们所在的位置是高高的山脊，我每往前一步，它就把自己置于更危险的境地。不冒着两人一起出事的风险，我根本无法靠近。刚下过雨，松动的碎石下面全是烂泥，几乎无处落脚。我打电话向妻子求助。天渐渐黑了，这只狗撑不下去了。 我联系了非紧急报警和动物管理部门，可谁都无法立刻施援。与此同时，妻子在网上查到一条寻狗启事：五天前，一只白色小狗在将近四英里之外走失。一定就是它。 最后我拨了 911。等警方回电给出方案时，小狗又惊慌起来，两次滑下峡谷。我知道必须行动了，于是小心地挪到小狗下方的谷壁上，防止它继续往下滑。手机只剩百分之三的电，我不敢再打电话，只能用手电筒发信号标示位置。 过了一阵，几支山地救援队开始上山。当一名救援人员终于走到能喊话相闻的距离时，他大声告诉我：下到我这里太危险，直升机马上就到。他冲我喊道：你得抱住那只狗。 我们脚下的地面并不稳固，根本无处借力。小狗抖得厉害，看样子马上又要滑下去了。 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 出乎我的意料，它把头往我臂弯里一埋。 Surprisingly, it pressed its head into my arm. 2. 为了稳住我们俩，我死死抓住上方一截露出地面的小树根。 To support us, I clung to a small tree root sticking out of the ground above me. 3. 头顶直升机的轰鸣盖过一切，我听不清任何指令。 I was unable to hear instructions over the noise of the helicopter overhead. 4. 我知道自己不能再在原地干等救援了。 I knew I couldn’t stay and wait for help there any longer. 第二段 1. 救援队在那里接住了我，把小狗放进了吊篮。 There, rescue crews met me and placed the dog into a basket. 2. 山脚下已经聚起一小群人，其中有我的妻子和小狗的主人。 At the base, a small crowd had gathered, including my wife and the dog’s owner. 3. 小狗一瘸一拐、欢天喜地地扑进主人怀里，尾巴摇个不停。 The dog limped happily into its owner’s arms, his tail wagging, exhausted but alive. 4. 这一夜惊心动魄，却因为运气与众人相助，有了一个圆满的结局。 The night had been terrifying and exhausting, but thanks to a lot of luck and help, it was a story with a happy ending. 【范文】 Paragraph 1: I approached the dog carefully and threw my left arm around it. Surprisingly, it pressed its head into my arm, as if it had been waiting for someone all along. To support us, I clung to a small tree root sticking out of the ground above me. I got a cramp in my leg as I grasped for footing, and I was unable to hear instructions over the noise of the helicopter overhead. We had slid probably four feet from where we started, and I kept pushing rocks down as I tried to keep my balance. I knew I couldn’t stay and wait for help there any longer; I had to move. Paragraph 2: Holding the dog under my arm, I struggled to climb my way back. Inch by inch, I pulled us up the loose slope until a beam of light swept across my face. There, rescue crews met me and placed the dog into a basket, and together we made our way to safety. At the base, a small crowd had gathered, including my wife and the dog’s owner, whom the police had contacted. The dog limped happily into its owner’s arms, his tail wagging, exhausted but alive. The night had been terrifying and exhausting, but thanks to a lot of luck and help, it was a story with a happy ending. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述“我”在暗影山例行徒步时，发现一只前腿受伤的白色小狗被困在陡峭山脊；地面湿滑、无处落脚，求助多方无果后拨打 911，并冒险挪到小狗下方防止它坠谷；救援队与直升机赶到时，“我”按指示抱住小狗，最终把它安全带下山，交还给苦寻五天的主人。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 I approached the dog carefully and threw my left arm around it. 提示写“我”抱住小狗后的极限处境——抓树根、腿抽筋、听不清指令、不断下滑，最终决定自救。② 第二段首句 Holding the dog under my arm, I struggled to climb my way back. 提示写攀爬脱险、救援队接应、山脚下与主人重逢的结局。 【续写线索】抱住小狗 → 抓根稳身 → 直升机轰鸣 → 决定自救 → 艰难攀爬 → 救援接应 → 主人重逢 【词汇激活】动作类：press its head into（把头埋进）, cling to a tree root（抓住树根）, keep one’s balance（保持平衡）, limp into one’s arms（一瘸一拐扑进怀里）；情绪类：terrifying（惊心动魄的）, exhausted（筋疲力尽的）, relieved（如释重负的）。 【点睛】The night had been terrifying and exhausting, but thanks to a lot of luck and help, it was a story with a happy ending. 点明主旨：一条陌生的小生命，值得一群陌生人拼尽全力。 模拟题三　2026·河南郑州一模（不放弃的鸽子） One day, I was sitting at the breakfast table with my five-year-old son, Mateo. I was still recovering from an operation. “Mom, let’s play,” Mateo looked at me and said. Trying hard to ignore the pain in my stomach, I shook my head and replied, “Not today, sweetie.” These days, getting out of bed was a real struggle for me. I longed for strength and happiness, yet the future seemed so hopeless. All of a sudden, Mateo jumped up from where he was sitting on the kitchen floor. He shouted, “Bird!” and then ran towards our courtyard. I looked in the direction he was looking and, sure enough, there was a white dove (鸽子) landing in a rubber tree. It stayed there for a little while and then flew away. It was quite odd because I’d never seen a white dove in our neighborhood before. The next morning, I dragged myself into the kitchen. To my surprise, the dove was back, and this time it had a mate carrying some sticks. I pointed to the tree and said to Mateo, “Look, they’re going to build a nest.” Throughout the week, the doves flew in and out of the courtyard, building their nest on top of the rubber tree. Mateo was extremely excited. Every morning, he would rush into the kitchen and stand by the sliding glass door. He would talk to the birds as they worked. His joy was influential. Although feeling sad, I couldn’t help but look forward to the doves’ visits. However, things took a turn for the worse. The courtyard seemed like a safe place for a nest, but the rubber tree’s small branches were not stable at all. One night, a strong wind blew, and the doves’ nest was blown to the ground. I heard the small branches break. I checked the damage. Nothing good ever lasts. I wouldn’t blame the doves if they never came back. But they returned. They didn’t even look at the pile of sticks that used to be their nest. They started building all over again. Unfortunately, the wind destroyed their work again. But day after day, they kept starting again as if nothing had occurred. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Paragraph 1: I realized that I should take some measures. Paragraph 2: “Look! The birds have returned!” Mateo shouted. 【参考译文】那天早上，我和五岁的儿子 Mateo 坐在早餐桌前。手术后我还在恢复期。“妈妈，我们玩会儿吧。”Mateo 抬头看着我说。我强忍着腹部的疼痛，摇摇头回答：“今天不行，宝贝。”那些日子，连起床对我来说都是一场煎熬。我渴望力气和快乐，未来却显得那样无望。 忽然，Mateo 从厨房地板上一跃而起，喊了声“鸟！”，便朝院子跑去。我顺着他的目光望过去，果然，一只白鸽正落在那棵橡皮树上。它待了一会儿就飞走了。这很奇怪——我从没在附近见过白鸽。 第二天早上，我拖着身子走进厨房。让我意外的是，白鸽又来了，这次还带来了伴侣，衔着几根树枝。我指着树对 Mateo 说：“看，它们要筑巢了。”整整一周，鸽子在院子里飞进飞出，在橡皮树顶上一点点搭起自己的家。 Mateo 兴奋极了。每天早上他都冲进厨房，站在推拉玻璃门前，一边看它们干活一边同它们说话。他的快乐是会传染的。尽管心里难过，我还是忍不住盼着鸽子的到来。 然而事情急转直下。院子看似是筑巢的安全之地，橡皮树细小的枝条却根本不稳。一天夜里狂风大作，鸽巢被吹落在地。我听见了细枝断裂的声音。 我去看了看那片狼藉。好景从来不长。就算它们再也不回来，我也不会怪它们。可它们回来了。它们看都不看那堆曾经是巢的枯枝，从头再来。不幸的是，大风又一次毁掉了它们的成果。可日复一日，它们一次次重新开始，仿佛什么都不曾发生。 【翻译练习】 第一段 1. 在我最灰暗的日子里，是这对鸽子给了我慰藉，如今该我回报它们了。 Having given me comfort in my darkest times, the doves deserved my help in return. 2. 我在家里仔细翻找，寻来几块木板，为它们做了一个结实的木巢。 I searched around the house carefully, found some pieces of wood and made a solid wooden nest for them. 3. 我费了好大力气爬上梯子，把巢固定在橡皮树上，又盖上一些树叶。 With a lot of effort and care, I managed to climb up a ladder, attached the nest to the rubber tree and covered it with some leaves. 4. 这活儿并不轻松，但鸽子的执着给了我信心和力量。 It was a challenging job, but the doves’ determination gave me the confidence and strength. 第二段 1. 听到儿子清亮如铃的欢呼，我抬起头来。 Hearing my son’s excited voice, clear as a bell, I looked up. 2. 鸽子正绕着新巢欢快地盘旋，似乎对新家很满意。 The doves were circling near the nest happily and seemed to be satisfied with the new home. 3. 几周之后，四只雏鸟破壳而出。 Several weeks later, four babies came out of the eggs. 4. 看着它们高飞、听着它们鸣唱，我心里重新有了积极与希望。 As I watched them fly high and heard them sing, I felt more positive and hopeful. 【范文】 Paragraph 1: I realized that I should take some measures. Having given me comfort in my darkest times, the doves deserved my help in return. I searched around the house carefully, found some pieces of wood and made a solid wooden nest for them. With a lot of effort and care, I managed to climb up a ladder, attached the nest to the rubber tree and covered it with some leaves. It was a challenging job, but the doves’ determination gave me the confidence and strength. After finishing the work, Mateo and I stood by the sliding glass door, waiting and watching with patience. Paragraph 2: “Look! The birds have returned!” Mateo shouted. Hearing my son’s excited voice, clear as a bell, I looked up. The doves were circling near the nest happily and seemed to be satisfied with the new home. They started to bring small branches and soft feathers right away. Several weeks later, four babies came out of the eggs. The young birds developed day by day, and around a month later, they were fully grown and could fly. As I watched them fly high and heard them sing, I felt more positive and hopeful. The doves taught me to face difficulties bravely and keep moving forward. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述“我”术后身体虚弱、情绪低落，与五岁儿子 Mateo 一起在院中发现一对白鸽筑巢；鸽巢两度被大风摧毁，鸽子却一次次从头再来。它们的执着打动了“我”，“我”亲手为它们做了一个结实的木巢，最终迎来雏鸟破壳，也重新找回了积极与希望。 【段落续写】① 第一段首句 I realized that I should take some measures. 提示写“我”决定回报这对鸽子——找木板、做木巢、爬梯子固定，写出行动与心境的转变。② 第二段首句 “Look! The birds have returned!” Mateo shouted. 提示写鸽子入住新巢、雏鸟出壳，以及“我”被治愈后的感悟。 【续写线索】决心相助 → 寻木做巢 → 爬梯固定 → 静候归来 → 鸽子入住 → 雏鸟破壳 → 重拾希望 【词汇激活】动作类：make a solid wooden nest（做结实的木巢）, climb up a ladder（爬上梯子）, circle near the nest（绕巢盘旋）, come out of the eggs（破壳而出）；情绪类：hopeless（绝望的）, determination（执着）, satisfied（满意的）, hopeful（充满希望的）。 【点睛】The doves taught me to face difficulties bravely and keep moving forward. 点明主旨：被治愈的从来不只是那对鸽子——一次次重建的勇气，也把人从低谷里托了起来。 1 / 19 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $