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第14讲 读后续写：如何表达悲伤背默与仿写(词-句-文)(复习讲练) 全景图·能力图谱 卷别 主题 续写话题 心理轨迹 能力考查 2023浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者农场救下被困蜂鸟，建立默契。数周后重访，窗已修颇感欣慰，临别蜂鸟再度现身，尽显自然温情。 初见蜂鸟受困怜悯→别后时时牵挂→重访见窗修甚感宽慰→蜂鸟归来又惊又喜→珍视这份奇缘 信任建立善意回馈 2023新高考I卷 人与自我 对写作从恐惧痛苦到享受的认知转变，发现自我潜能。通过选择有趣视角、反复修改解决写作难题。 由抗拒写作到尝试→从疲惫怀疑到沉浸享受→获奖后感恩老师→立志坚持，终在写作路上收获成长 问题解决策略迁移 2024浙江1月卷 人与自我 Eva将一英里分解为小目标获教练赞赏；此法用于熟悉校园建筑领悟到分解困难、逐步前行的人生智慧。 惧跑恐慌→自我怀疑→经分段坚持获肯定而惊讶→将目标分解法认路→建立自信，领悟方法比天赋重要 心理突破认知升级 2024新课标卷 人与社会 作者航班延误赶末班巴士，出租车司机热心相助，作者无现金承诺归还，最终守信还钱并结下深厚友谊。 赶车焦急→无钱窘迫→司机信任暂缓付费而感激→履约还钱互赠礼物结为好友→展现陌生人善意与诚信 信任建立善意回馈 2025浙江1月卷 人与社会 见义勇为与可能冤枉人之间道德焦虑，并通过询问邻居、前往警局寻求真相，体现理性与善良的结合。 不安解释经过→发现手表震惊→赴警局忐忑→真相大白如释重负→获赞勇敢→悟行事需勇气亦需核实。 道德判断求证精神 2025全国一卷 人与自我 作者因聚会拒绝弟弟带狗入内致其愤然离去，后良心不安携饼干登门道歉，兄弟和解领悟亲情重于固执。 内疚自责→放下骄傲电话道歉→忐忑登门→兄弟相拥释然→围坐谈心→观Toby依偎悟治愈 情感修复关系重建 2025全国二卷 人与社会 因名字发音尴尬而回避，到主动解释名字含义、传播文化，完成从“适应者”到“传播者”的身份转变。 紧张忐忑→阐释名字渐自信→同学专注尊重而振奋→课后被围提问而温暖→教汉字中领悟文化认同价值 身份认同文化沟通 2026浙江1月卷 人与自然 送女儿途中发现受惊迷路牛被围观者嘲笑。返回救助与警察合作运用农场经验成功控制，农夫赶来领回。 自信逞强欲救牛→遇敌意恐惧→警察至镇定合作→牛获救欣慰释然→接女获崇拜自豪→悟英雄贵在勇为 心理突破认知升级 2026全国一卷 人与社会 Emily不顾暴风雪赴约途中遇险被困获夫妇救助，改火车完成行程，事后登门致谢。完成善意回馈闭环。 雪夜绝望恐慌→获救满怀感激→乘车奔赴希望→与男友团聚喜极而泣→返程致谢→悟陌生人善意暖人心 信任建立善意回馈 2026全国二卷 人与自我 以熬夜为傲的夜猫子到认识到自律才是真自由，完成从抗拒早起到享受清晨的认知转变与健康觉醒。 震惊恐惧→决心改变→深夜焦虑→靠意志坚持→晨间清醒活力恢复→见父母欣慰而自豪→悟自律即自由 心理突破认知升级 笔法堂·技法精修 技法一 “悲伤”类词汇语料 1.悲伤类形容词： 初阶 难过的,悲哀的； 痛苦的； 令人心碎的 高阶 心碎的； 悲伤的； 使痛苦的； 忧郁的； 悲惨的； 垂头丧气的； 忧郁的； 伤心的 2.悲伤类名词： 初阶 悲哀； 悲伤；伤心事； 痛苦 高阶 忧郁 悲伤，悲痛, 3.悲伤类动词： 初阶 使悲伤 高阶 使悲哀； 使悲伤，悲痛； 低声啜泣； 呜咽 技法二 “悲伤”类语块语料 初阶 1. 处于痛苦之中 2. 心情沉重　 3. 情绪低落 4. 快要哭了 5. 伤心地说 6. 情绪低落 7. 流泪 8. 伤心绝望 9. 抑制住泪水 10. 心沉下去　 11. 悲伤不已 12. 突然哭起来 高阶 13. 双手掩面 14. 泪水顺着脸颊淌下来 15. 哽咽，喉咙哽住 15. 怀着沉重/难过的心 16. 心似乎被撕裂了 17. 陷入悲伤 18. 悲痛欲绝 19. 泪水涌上眼眶 20. 眼中泪光闪烁 技法三 “悲伤”类佳句语料 微技能1：借助于无灵主语 1. A ripple of sadness welled up inside him, leaving him breathless. 一阵悲伤涌上心头，让他喘不过气来。 2. He was in low spirits, and grief came in waves, flooding over him. 他情绪低落，悲伤一波又一波地淹没了他。 微技能2：借助于非谓语短语 3. He sank onto the chair, crying his eyes out. 他倒在椅子上,悲痛欲绝。 4. He shook his head sadly, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。 5. Seized by a burst of sadness, she couldn't help sobbing bitterly. 一阵悲伤攫住了她，她忍不住啜泣起来。 6. She shook her head miserably, tears pouring down her cheeks.  她痛苦地摇了摇头,泪水顺着脸颊流下。 微技能3：借助于with复合结构 7. Jane turned to me with tears in her eyes, and begged me to help her. 珍妮眼里含着泪水，恳求我帮他。 8. I stood here with a lump in my throat and tried to fight back tears. 我站在这儿，喉咙哽咽，拼命忍住眼泪。 微技能4：借助于动作链或修辞 9. His face was cast a cloud of gloom after he heard this news. 听到这个消息后,他脸上蒙上了一层阴云。 10. She was seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help sobbing bitterly. 她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。 工坊间·分型实训 一、单句翻译。根据括号内所给提示翻译下列各句。 微技能1：借助于无灵主语 1. _________________________________________________________ (rippple, welll) 一阵悲伤涌上心头，让他喘不过气来。 2. _________________________________________________________ (grief, flood) 他情绪低落，悲伤一波又一波地淹没了他。 微技能2：借助于非谓语短语 3. _________________________________________________________ (sink, cry) 他倒在椅子上,悲痛欲绝。 4. _________________________________________________________ (shake,roll ) 他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。 5. _________________________________________________________ (seize, sob) 一阵悲伤攫住了她，她忍不住啜泣起来。 6. _________________________________________________________ (shake, pour) 她痛苦地摇了摇头,泪水顺着脸颊流下。 微技能3：借助于with复合结构 7. _________________________________________________________ (blur, beg) 珍妮眼里含着泪水，恳求我帮他。 8. _________________________________________________________ (lump, fight) 我站在这儿，喉咙哽咽，拼命忍住眼泪。 微技能4：借助于动作链或修辞 9. _________________________________________________________ (cast, gloom) 听到这个消息后,他脸上蒙上了一层阴云。 10. _________________________________________________________ (sieze, sob) 她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。 二、一句多译。注意句式多变丰富表达手段。 1. 她很伤心, 不知不觉哭了, 眼泪止不住。 ① (主从复合句+非谓语) ② (倒装句+with复合结构) ③ (动作链+非谓语) ④ (无灵主语+动作链) ⑤ (无灵主语+动作链) 2. 一想到奶奶的善良，他泪流满面。 ① (无灵主语+复合句) ② (介词短语+简单句) ③ (无灵主语+非谓语) ④ (非谓语+独立主格) ⑤ (倒装句+复合句) 三、情景翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式补全段落。 情景一：他因篮球赛最后时刻失误导致球队输球，独自坐在空荡的球场…… A careless mistake in the final minutes made all the team’s efforts in vain, and they lost the game with great regret. All the audience had left, 1 (只留他一人默默坐着) on the empty court. He slowly lowered his head, staring at the cold basket without a word, 2 (内心满是深深的悲伤). A soft evening wind wandered over the deserted court, 3 (空气里弥漫着孤寂). Heavy disappointment pressed on his heart. He was consumed by guilt for his bad decision and 4 (久久无法放下这份难过). 最后时刻一次无心的失误让全队所有努力付诸东流，球队遗憾落败。观众尽数离场，只留他独自一人默默坐在空旷的球场上。他缓缓低下头，一言不发地凝望着冰冷的篮筐，内心满是深深的悲伤。柔和的晚风掠过冷清的球场，四处弥漫着孤寂。浓重的失落感沉甸甸压在心头。他满心都为自己这次失误懊悔不已，久久无法放下这份难过。 情景二：我因骄傲疏于备赛，比赛怯场失利，长久深陷失落与自责之中…… I was selected to represent my school in the upcoming contest this year. But I was so proud that I neglected the importance of practicing for the contest. On the day of the contest, I began to lose confidence in myself and suffered from stage fright. In the end I walked off the stage, 1 (眼里饱含泪水). Finally, results were announced after the contest. I did not win any prizes. I bit my lower lip 2 (心里充满悲伤). I dragged my heavy legs 3 (心情沉重) and moved out of the lecture hall. 4 (我伤心地垂着头，巨大的悲伤笼罩着我的双眼). On entering the classroom, 5 (悲伤如潮涌，泪水从脸颊滑落). In the following days, I felt like she was 6 . (我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里), not wanting to do anything. 今年我获选代表学校参加这场即将举办的比赛。可我太过自负，忽视了赛前刻苦练习的重要性。 比赛当天，我渐渐丧失信心，还产生了严重的怯场心理。最终我走下舞台，眼里噙满泪水。比赛结束后成绩公布，我一无所获，没有拿到任何奖项。我紧咬下唇，满心充斥着难过。内心沉甸甸的我拖着沉重的步子走出报告厅。我沮丧地耷拉着脑袋，浓重的悲伤蒙上了双眼。一走进教室，失望与悲伤如潮水般席卷而来，泪水顺着脸颊不停滑落。在之后的好些日子里，我仿佛漂泊在悲伤的汪洋里，对任何事情都提不起半点兴致。 四、段落翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式润色文章。 ①这次致命失误让队伍错失最终胜利，他的心瞬间一沉。②他心情沉重地独自走到空旷球场，全程情绪低落。③悲伤席卷全身，他眼眶泛红快要落泪，拼命强忍泪水。④巨大的挫败几乎让他心碎。⑤最终情绪彻底失控，潸然落泪，险些失声大哭，用悲伤的口吻喃喃自语，满心都是悔恨。⑥独自静坐的他郁郁寡欢，沉浸在无尽的痛苦里。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ①得知自己呕心沥血创作的画作未能入围比赛，我怀着破碎的心独自徘徊在冷清的画室。②浓烈的悲伤瞬间将我裹挟，喉咙猛地一阵哽咽。③泪水夺眶而出，眼眸里泪光闪闪。④沉甸甸的失望几乎将我的心撕裂。⑤我双手捂住脸庞，任由滚烫的泪水不断顺着脸颊滑落。⑥无尽的懊悔压得我近乎崩溃，险些痛哭到虚脱，整个人沉溺在铺天盖地的难过里无法释怀。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 高考场·真题临摹 1.（2025·八省联考卷）作者赴费城参会，因忌惮门外骑手仍入场观看流浪狗救助筹款纪录片 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night. I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off. It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers. I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. （25-26·河北邢台·二模）复活节帮妹寻礼，礼盒遭老鼠损毁 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had a younger sister, Michelle. But as a big brother, I rarely cared for her. On a Sunday in March when I was 8, Easter (复活节) came. As usual, my sister and I would search for the hidden baskets full of candy and other things prepared for us. On that Easter morning, I got up early. “Michelle!” I whispered to my sister, who was still sleeping in her bedroom. “Wake up. It’s Easter. We have to go and find our baskets.” She rolled over in bed and finally got up. “Mom and Dad are still sleeping,” I warned her as we walked out into the kitchen. “If we’re quiet, we can find our baskets without waking them up.” It didn’t take long for me to find my basket, which had candy, toys, etc. This basket was obviously mine because it contained the latest issue of my favorite magazine. My sister continued searching in every room while I dropped my basket off at the kitchen table and started separating candy into different categories. 20 minutes later, my sister told me, “I can’t find it. I looked all over. Can you help me?” I decided to help her not because I felt sorry for her, but because I thought it was fun to find the missing basket. We started searching through the cabinets (贮藏柜). Later, our parents were awake. Dad headed straight for the bathroom, while Mom walked out to make coffee. “Mom, I’ve found my basket,” I told her. She smiled and asked, “Where’s yours, Michelle?” That’s when my six-year-old sister started to cry. “Let’s keep looking,” Mom said, taking hold of my sister’s hand. After searching the living room they went to the closet (贮藏室). There Michelle finally found her basket. But when she picked up her basket, we found everything in it had all been bitten and damaged by mice. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Michelle dropped her basket on the floor, looking upset. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then I walked slowly into my sister’s room with my basket. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.（25-26高二下·四川成都·期中）家人独居奶奶惊喜不慎损毁其珍贵回忆物件后尽力修复 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Grandma lived alone in the old house ever since her children moved away for work and life. Years passed, and the house seemed quieter and quieter. To fill her days, she carefully decorated a memory wall in the living room, covered with old photos, handwritten letters, children’s drawings, and small souvenirs from every family gathering. She also kept a precious old photo album, filled with faded pictures from her youth, her children’s childhood, and every happy moment the family had shared. For Grandma, these things were not just objects — they were her whole world. One weekend, her children and grandchildren decided to give her a big surprise. They arrived early in the morning, talking and laughing excitedly, wanting to clean the house, prepare a big meal, and make Grandma happy. But in their hurry and carelessness, things went wrong. While moving a chair to reach the ceiling, they accidentally knocked things off the memory wall — photos fell off, letters were torn, and small decorations lay broken on the floor. Worse, someone stepped on the old album by mistake. The cover split open, and some pages came loose, with several precious photos bent and damaged. The whole family froze in horror, exchanging nervous looks. A heavy, awkward silence fell over the room. No one dared to speak or even move, waiting for Grandma’s reaction. Heart sinking and cheeks burning, they could only stand there helplessly, staring at the mess they had created. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Seeing the damaged photo album, Grandma’s eyes were filled with sadness. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, the kids gathered in the kitchen, determined to make things right. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.（25-26高一下·贵州铜仁·期末）冷战后悟母爱，心生愧疚懂感恩 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had been feeling upset ever since my family moved to a small town in Oregon last year. Leaving behind my old friends and all the familiar places around me made me feel lonely every single day. My mom worked full-time at a local cafe to cover our daily costs, so she was always very tired after a long day’s work. We rarely had a chance to sit down and chat peacefully at home, and I gradually felt she never truly understood my true feelings. Things came to a head one Saturday afternoon. We argued heatedly because I complained she cared far more about work than me. Hurt by my unkind words, Mom fell silent and walked away without saying a single word. For the whole day, we stayed away from each other and never talked. I shut myself in my bedroom, stuck to my phone the whole time and refused to come out to join her for meals. At nearly eleven o’clock that night, I woke up with a dry throat and headed downstairs for some water. To my surprise, the kitchen light was still on. Glancing through the half-open door, I spotted Mom sitting alone at the table. She was looking through my old photo album, with tears rolling down her cheeks quietly. Beside her lay a plate of freshly baked cookies, my favorite snack. A half-finished note also caught my eye: “I wish I could take away your sadness... Please know my love is always with you.” A wave of regret swept over me at once. 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A ripple of sadness welled up inside him, leaving him breathless. 一阵悲伤涌上心头，让他喘不过气来。 2. He was in low spirits, and grief came in waves, flooding over him. 他情绪低落，悲伤一波又一波地淹没了他。 微技能2：借助于非谓语短语 3. He sank onto the chair, crying his eyes out. 他倒在椅子上,悲痛欲绝。 4. He shook his head sadly, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。 5. Seized by a burst of sadness, she couldn't help sobbing bitterly. 一阵悲伤攫住了她，她忍不住啜泣起来。 6. She shook her head miserably, tears pouring down her cheeks.  她痛苦地摇了摇头,泪水顺着脸颊流下。 微技能3：借助于with复合结构 7. Jane turned to me with tears in her eyes, and begged me to help her. 珍妮眼里含着泪水，恳求我帮他。 8. I stood here with a lump in my throat and tried to fight back tears. 我站在这儿，喉咙哽咽，拼命忍住眼泪。 微技能4：借助于动作链或修辞 9. His face was cast a cloud of gloom after he heard this news. 听到这个消息后,他脸上蒙上了一层阴云。 10. She was seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help sobbing bitterly. 她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。 工坊间·分型实训 一、单句翻译。根据括号内所给提示翻译下列各句。 微技能1：借助于无灵主语 1. _________________________________________________________ (rippple, welll) 一阵悲伤涌上心头，让他喘不过气来。 2. _________________________________________________________ (grief, flood) 他情绪低落，悲伤一波又一波地淹没了他。 微技能2：借助于非谓语短语 3. _________________________________________________________ (sink, cry) 他倒在椅子上,悲痛欲绝。 4. _________________________________________________________ (shake,roll ) 他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。 5. _________________________________________________________ (seize, sob) 一阵悲伤攫住了她，她忍不住啜泣起来。 6. _________________________________________________________ (shake, pour) 她痛苦地摇了摇头,泪水顺着脸颊流下。 微技能3：借助于with复合结构 7. _________________________________________________________ (blur, beg) 珍妮眼里含着泪水，恳求我帮他。 8. _________________________________________________________ (lump, fight) 我站在这儿，喉咙哽咽，拼命忍住眼泪。 微技能4：借助于动作链或修辞 9. _________________________________________________________ (cast, gloom) 听到这个消息后,他脸上蒙上了一层阴云。 10. _________________________________________________________ (sieze, sob) 她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。 【参考答案】 1. A ripple of sadness welled up inside him, leaving him breathless. 2. He was in low spirits, and grief came in waves, flooding over him. 3. He sank onto the chair, crying his eyes out. 4. He shook his head sadly, tears rolling down his cheeks. 5. Seized by a burst of sadness, she couldn't help sobbing bitterly. 6. She shook her head miserably, tears pouring down her cheeks.  7. Jane turned to me with tears in her eyes, and begged me to help her. 8. I stood here with a lump in my throat and tried to fight back tears. 9. His face was cast a cloud of gloom after he heard this news. 10. She was seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help sobbing bitterly. 二、一句多译。注意句式多变丰富表达手段。 1. 她很伤心, 不知不觉哭了, 眼泪止不住。 ①She felt so sad that she found herself weeping, unable to hold back her tears. (主从复合句+非谓语) ②So heartbroken was she that she wept, with tears streaming down her cheeks. (倒装句+with复合结构) ③She was overcome with sorrow and burst into tears, unable to fight back her tears. (动作链+非谓语) ④Great sadness seized her and tears slipped down her cheeks beyond her control. (无灵主语+动作链) ⑤A flood of sadness swept over her and tears spilled from her eyes uncontrollably. (无灵主语+动作链) 2. 一想到奶奶的善良，他泪流满面。 ①Tears streamed down his cheeks as he thought of his grandma’s kindness. (无灵主语+复合句) ②At the thought of Grandma’s kindness, he burst into floods of tears. (介词短语+简单句) ③The thought of Grandma’s kindness brought tears rolling down his cheeks. (无灵主语+非谓语) ④Thinking of Grandma’s great kindness, he choked up, tears blurring her eyes. (非谓语+独立主格) ⑤Hardly had he recalled Grandma’s kindness when he burst into tears. (倒装句+复合句) 三、情景翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式补全段落。 情景一：他因篮球赛最后时刻失误导致球队输球，独自坐在空荡的球场…… A careless mistake in the final minutes made all the team’s efforts in vain, and they lost the game with great regret. All the audience had left, 1 (只留他一人默默坐着) on the empty court. He slowly lowered his head, staring at the cold basket without a word, 2 (内心满是深深的悲伤). A soft evening wind wandered over the deserted court, 3 (空气里弥漫着孤寂). Heavy disappointment pressed on his heart. He was consumed by guilt for his bad decision and 4 (久久无法放下这份难过). 最后时刻一次无心的失误让全队所有努力付诸东流，球队遗憾落败。观众尽数离场，只留他独自一人默默坐在空旷的球场上。他缓缓低下头，一言不发地凝望着冰冷的篮筐，内心满是深深的悲伤。柔和的晚风掠过冷清的球场，四处弥漫着孤寂。浓重的失落感沉甸甸压在心头。他满心都为自己这次失误懊悔不已，久久无法放下这份难过。 【参考答案】 1. leaving him sitting alone and silently 2. his heart filled with deep sadness 3. filling the air with loneliness 4. the sorrow that he could hardly let go 情景二：我因骄傲疏于备赛，比赛怯场失利，长久深陷失落与自责之中…… I was selected to represent my school in the upcoming contest this year. But I was so proud that I neglected the importance of practicing for the contest. On the day of the contest, I began to lose confidence in myself and suffered from stage fright. In the end I walked off the stage, 1 (眼里饱含泪水). Finally, results were announced after the contest. I did not win any prizes. I bit my lower lip 2 (心里充满悲伤). I dragged my heavy legs 3 (心情沉重) and moved out of the lecture hall. 4 (我伤心地垂着头，巨大的悲伤笼罩着我的双眼). On entering the classroom, 5 (悲伤如潮涌，泪水从脸颊滑落). In the following days, I felt like she was 6 . (我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里), not wanting to do anything. 今年我获选代表学校参加这场即将举办的比赛。可我太过自负，忽视了赛前刻苦练习的重要性。 比赛当天，我渐渐丧失信心，还产生了严重的怯场心理。最终我走下舞台，眼里噙满泪水。比赛结束后成绩公布，我一无所获，没有拿到任何奖项。我紧咬下唇，满心充斥着难过。内心沉甸甸的我拖着沉重的步子走出报告厅。我沮丧地耷拉着脑袋，浓重的悲伤蒙上了双眼。一走进教室，失望与悲伤如潮水般席卷而来，泪水顺着脸颊不停滑落。在之后的好些日子里，我仿佛漂泊在悲伤的汪洋里，对任何事情都提不起半点兴致。 【参考答案】 1.my eyes filled with tears 2.with sadness filling my heart 3.with a sinking heart 4.I hung my head in sadness, great sorrow clouding my eyes. 5.disappointment and sadness came in waves and tears streamed down my cheeks 6.floating in an ocean of sadness 四、段落翻译。注意运用高级词汇或复杂句式润色文章。 ①这次致命失误让队伍错失最终胜利，他的心瞬间一沉。②他心情沉重地独自走到空旷球场，全程情绪低落。③悲伤席卷全身，他眼眶泛红快要落泪，拼命强忍泪水。④巨大的挫败几乎让他心碎。⑤最终情绪彻底失控，潸然落泪，险些失声大哭，用悲伤的口吻喃喃自语，满心都是悔恨。⑥独自静坐的他郁郁寡欢，沉浸在无尽的痛苦里。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 ①After his costly mistake cost the team the final victory, his heart sank instantly. ②With a sinking heart, he wandered to the empty court alone and was in low spirits the whole time. ③Overcome with sorrow, he was on the verge of tears and tried hard to fight back tears. ④The heavy disappointment almost broke his heart. ⑤Unable to hold back his emotions any longer, he was reduced to tears and nearly burst into tears, murmuring in a sorrowful tone how regretful he was. ⑥Sitting there alone, he truly felt blue, trapped in endless pain. ①得知自己呕心沥血创作的画作未能入围比赛，我怀着破碎的心独自徘徊在冷清的画室。②浓烈的悲伤瞬间将我裹挟，喉咙猛地一阵哽咽。③泪水夺眶而出，眼眸里泪光闪闪。④沉甸甸的失望几乎将我的心撕裂。⑤我双手捂住脸庞，任由滚烫的泪水不断顺着脸颊滑落。⑥无尽的懊悔压得我近乎崩溃，险些痛哭到虚脱，整个人沉溺在铺天盖地的难过里无法释怀。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 ①With a broken heart, I lingered alone in the quiet art studio after being informed that my painstakingly-prepared painting had failed the competition. ②Seized with intense grief, I instantly had a lump in my throat. ③Tears welled up in my eyes, which glistened brightly with sorrow. ④Disappointment was so heavy that my heart felt as if it were torn apart. ⑤I buried my face in my palms, allowing hot tears to roll down my cheeks nonstop. ⑥Burdened by endless regret, I was on the verge of crying my heart out, drowning in overwhelming sadness with no way to cheer myself up. 高考场·真题临摹 1.（2025·八省联考卷）作者赴费城参会，因忌惮门外骑手仍入场观看流浪狗救助筹款纪录片 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night. I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off. It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers. I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【达标版范文】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. My heart sank even further. I seated myself quietly at the back, trying not to be noticed. Nervous and sad, I held my bag tight and looked around anxiously. I feared these bikers would cause trouble. The heavy tension made me regret coming here alone. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They had come to support the fundraiser for the local animal shelters. The documentary showed the miserable lives of abandoned dogs, filling my heart with sorrow. Many tough-looking bikers also cried for those poor animals. Their kind acts made me ashamed of my prejudice. I felt grateful and discussed ways to help stray animals with them. 【满分版范文】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They chatted loudly, their voices echoing across the hall and occupying nearly every corner. My heart sank even further into unease and gloom. I rushed to take a back-row seat, attempting to stay as unnoticed as possible. Gripping my bag firmly, I glanced around repeatedly, silently begging for peace. I could not help suspecting their intentions, fearing they might disrupt the event. The thick tension weighed heavily on me, leaving me lonely and regretful for attending alone. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They had come to support the fundraiser for the local animal shelters. The documentary vividly displayed the miserable plight of abandoned dogs, whose sufferings filled my heart with deep sadness. To my surprise, these rough-looking bikers were also moved to tears by the pitiful yet warm stories. During the break, they approached me with gentle smiles. Touched by their kind inner hearts, I felt ashamed of my previous prejudice and sincerely cherished this precious chance to join them to share feelings and explore ways to help stray animals. 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间，看到酒店附近剧院有一场关于动物救助站救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动，作者因喜爱动物想去参加，却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托骑手，犹豫后还是进入剧院，希望电影结束时骑手们已离开。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句 “我匆匆走进剧院，却发现里面有更多的骑手。” 可知，第一段可描写作者进入剧院后，面对更多骑手时内心的忐忑、不安，以及所采取的试图让自己安全、不引人注意的行动，比如找角落座位、紧紧抓包、频繁观察骑手等，展现当时紧张氛围。 ②由第二段首句“电影开始时，我意识到这些骑手是一个动物救援组织。” 可知，第二段可描写电影播放过程中作者看到骑手们被纪录片触动的表现，以及中场休息时骑手们与作者友好互动的情景，体现出骑手们外表与内心的反差，突显温暖主题。 2. 续写线索：进入剧院，遇到更多骑手——内心恐惧找座躲避——电影开场，知晓骑手身份——观影中骑手真情流露——中场休息友好交流 3. 词汇激活： 行为类： ①紧握：clutch/grab/grasp/seize ②偷看：peek at/steal a look at/glance at ③支持：support/back/uphold/advocate 情绪类： ①感动：moved/touched/affected ②羞愧：ashamed/embarrassed 【点睛】【高分句型1】Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和what引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语和宾语补足语) 2. （25-26·河北邢台·二模）复活节帮妹寻礼，礼盒遭老鼠损毁 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had a younger sister, Michelle. But as a big brother, I rarely cared for her. On a Sunday in March when I was 8, Easter (复活节) came. As usual, my sister and I would search for the hidden baskets full of candy and other things prepared for us. On that Easter morning, I got up early. “Michelle!” I whispered to my sister, who was still sleeping in her bedroom. “Wake up. It’s Easter. We have to go and find our baskets.” She rolled over in bed and finally got up. “Mom and Dad are still sleeping,” I warned her as we walked out into the kitchen. “If we’re quiet, we can find our baskets without waking them up.” It didn’t take long for me to find my basket, which had candy, toys, etc. This basket was obviously mine because it contained the latest issue of my favorite magazine. My sister continued searching in every room while I dropped my basket off at the kitchen table and started separating candy into different categories. 20 minutes later, my sister told me, “I can’t find it. I looked all over. Can you help me?” I decided to help her not because I felt sorry for her, but because I thought it was fun to find the missing basket. We started searching through the cabinets (贮藏柜). Later, our parents were awake. Dad headed straight for the bathroom, while Mom walked out to make coffee. “Mom, I’ve found my basket,” I told her. She smiled and asked, “Where’s yours, Michelle?” That’s when my six-year-old sister started to cry. “Let’s keep looking,” Mom said, taking hold of my sister’s hand. After searching the living room they went to the closet (贮藏室). There Michelle finally found her basket. But when she picked up her basket, we found everything in it had all been bitten and damaged by mice. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Michelle dropped her basket on the floor, looking upset. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then I walked slowly into my sister’s room with my basket. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Michelle dropped her basket on the floor, looking upset. Without saying anything, my sister rushed to her bedroom and slammed the door. I was lost in thought. On the one hand, I wanted to enjoy my candy and toys alone. On the other hand, I could feel my sister’s sorrow when I put myself in her shoes. It was such a dilemma. Leaving my sister floating in an ocean of sadness, would I still enjoy my gifts? Having struggled for a while, I decided to cheer her up by sharing what I had with her. Then I walked slowly into my sister’s room with my basket. She lied on her bed silently, tears rolling down her cheeks. “Cheer up, my dear sister. Forget about the damaged basket. You can have mine.” I said in a cheerful tone. When she heard this, her eyes twinkled with pleasure. The moment I saw her smiling face again, joy welled up inside me. Laughter lingered around the room. That was the first time that I had learned the meaning of sharing. It made me happier when I was able to bring joy to others. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者虽然是哥哥，但是很少关心自己的妹妹Michelle。在作者八岁那年的复活节，作者早早地起床，叫醒妹妹，两人一同寻找为他们准备的隐藏的礼物。作者很快找到了属于自己的礼物，开心地整理里面的糖果，但是妹妹一直没有找到，在妹妹的请求下，作者开始帮助妹妹找她的礼物。后来，妈妈也来帮妹妹找礼物，最终找到的时候，大家却发现礼物篮子空了，里面的东西都被老鼠破坏了。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“Michelle把篮子扔在地上，看上去很沮丧”可知，第一段可描写作者作为哥哥内心挣扎是否用自己的礼物篮子来安慰沮丧的妹妹，以及作者最终做出决定。 ②由第二段首句内容“然后我提着我的篮子慢慢地走进妹妹的房间”可知，第二段可描写作者作为哥哥安慰妹妹，分享自己的礼物篮子，以及看到妹妹开心起来后作者的感悟。 2. 续写线索：Michelle很沮丧——作者内心挣扎——作者做出决定——作者进入妹妹的房间——作者分享礼物——作者的感悟 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①奔：rush/run/dash ②感觉到：feel/perceive/sense ③决定：decide/make a decision/make a choice ④认识到：learn/understand/realize/be aware of 情绪类 ①难过：sorrow/sadness/unhappiness ②高兴的：cheerful/joyous/happy/joyful 【点睛】[高分句型1] On the other hand, I could feel my sister’s sorrow when I put myself in her shoes. (when引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] Having struggled for a while, I decided to cheer her up by sharing what I had with her. (现在分词短语Having struggled…作状语、what引导宾语从句) 3.（25-26高二下·四川成都·期中）家人独居奶奶惊喜不慎损毁其珍贵回忆物件后尽力修复 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Grandma lived alone in the old house ever since her children moved away for work and life. Years passed, and the house seemed quieter and quieter. To fill her days, she carefully decorated a memory wall in the living room, covered with old photos, handwritten letters, children’s drawings, and small souvenirs from every family gathering. She also kept a precious old photo album, filled with faded pictures from her youth, her children’s childhood, and every happy moment the family had shared. For Grandma, these things were not just objects — they were her whole world. One weekend, her children and grandchildren decided to give her a big surprise. They arrived early in the morning, talking and laughing excitedly, wanting to clean the house, prepare a big meal, and make Grandma happy. But in their hurry and carelessness, things went wrong. While moving a chair to reach the ceiling, they accidentally knocked things off the memory wall — photos fell off, letters were torn, and small decorations lay broken on the floor. Worse, someone stepped on the old album by mistake. The cover split open, and some pages came loose, with several precious photos bent and damaged. The whole family froze in horror, exchanging nervous looks. A heavy, awkward silence fell over the room. No one dared to speak or even move, waiting for Grandma’s reaction. Heart sinking and cheeks burning, they could only stand there helplessly, staring at the mess they had created. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Seeing the damaged photo album, Grandma’s eyes were filled with sadness. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, the kids gathered in the kitchen, determined to make things right. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Seeing the damaged photo album, Grandma’s eyes were filled with sadness. She froze for a moment, then stepped forward slowly and held the worn album in her trembling hands, as if cherishing the lost days with her family. Her throat tightened and tears shone in her eyes, but she soon calmed herself, patting the children’s hands to ease their worry. Though painful to see her memories broken, she valued their love and company more than anything else. The next morning, the kids gathered in the kitchen, determined to make things right. They worked together to glue the torn photos, rearrange the memory wall carefully, and add new photos from this gathering. They also prepared a simple but heartfelt meal for Grandma. When she saw the neatly restored album and the lively wall, tears of joy rolled down her cheeks. The old house was filled with laughter again, making everyone realize that compared with cold objects like photos or distant phone calls, the warm presence of family members is what truly matters. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了奶奶独自居住在老房子里，她的孩子们和孙子们为了给她惊喜，在打扫房子时不小心弄坏了她珍贵的记忆墙和相册，随后孩子们努力修复这些回忆并重新营造温馨氛围的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句可知，第一段可描写奶奶看到损坏的相册后的反应，既要体现她的难过，也要突出她对家人的包容，缓解家人的愧疚。 ②由第二段首句可知，第二段可描写孩子们为弥补过错所做的具体行动，以及奶奶看到修复后的物品和孩子们的心意时的感动，点明家人陪伴的重要性。 2.续写线索：奶奶看到损坏的相册伤心——冷静下来安慰孩子们——孩子们决定修复——一起努力修复——奶奶看到修复后的相册和记忆墙感到开心——再次充满欢声笑语——家人的陪伴比物质更重要 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①走上前：step forward/move ahead ②轻拍：pat/tap gently 情绪类 ①痛苦的：painful/sorrowful ②喜悦：joy/delight 【点睛】【高分句型1】When she saw the neatly restored album and the lively wall, tears of joy rolled down her cheeks. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】The old house was filled with laughter again, making everyone realize that compared with cold objects like photos or distant phone calls, the warm presence of family members is what truly matters. (运用了现在分词短语making...作状语、that引导的宾语从句和what引导的表语从句) 4.（25-26高一下·贵州铜仁·期末）冷战后悟母爱，心生愧疚懂感恩 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had been feeling upset ever since my family moved to a small town in Oregon last year. Leaving behind my old friends and all the familiar places around me made me feel lonely every single day. My mom worked full-time at a local cafe to cover our daily costs, so she was always very tired after a long day’s work. We rarely had a chance to sit down and chat peacefully at home, and I gradually felt she never truly understood my true feelings. Things came to a head one Saturday afternoon. We argued heatedly because I complained she cared far more about work than me. Hurt by my unkind words, Mom fell silent and walked away without saying a single word. For the whole day, we stayed away from each other and never talked. I shut myself in my bedroom, stuck to my phone the whole time and refused to come out to join her for meals. At nearly eleven o’clock that night, I woke up with a dry throat and headed downstairs for some water. To my surprise, the kitchen light was still on. Glancing through the half-open door, I spotted Mom sitting alone at the table. She was looking through my old photo album, with tears rolling down her cheeks quietly. Beside her lay a plate of freshly baked cookies, my favorite snack. A half-finished note also caught my eye: “I wish I could take away your sadness... Please know my love is always with you.” A wave of regret swept over me at once. I finally saw how selfish and unthankful I had been during all these days. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2. 开头已给出，请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 I stood outside the door, my eyes filled with tears. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ From that night on, our life slowly changed for the better. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: I stood outside the door, my eyes filled with tears. The moment I spotted Mom’s sad look, my anger disappeared at once. I walked indoors and sincerely apologized for my cruel remarks and selfishness over the past months. I admitted I had ignored her constant efforts and boundless love too long. My mom was overwhelmed with emotion. She dried her tears and held me in a tender, firm hug. She explained she worked endlessly only to provide a better life for me, and my feelings were always her top priority. From that night on, our life slowly changed for the better. We broke our cold silence and started talking about our joys and troubles frequently. In our free time, we chatted or made delicious snacks together. Gradually, I adapted to the new life and never complained again. I realized constant complaints would only burden us both. Now I value this precious mother-daughter bond. I believe our future days will be filled with warmth and mutual comfort. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。作者随家人搬到小镇后感到孤独，因母亲忙于工作而心生不满，在一次争吵后冷战。深夜发现母亲翻看相册落泪并为自己准备饼干和留言，作者顿感愧疚，意识到自己自私不知感恩。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段句首可知，第一段可以描写作者看到母亲落泪后的自责与后悔，推门向母亲道歉，承认自己忽略了母亲的付出，母亲感动落泪并拥抱作者，解释她努力工作是为了给作者更好的生活。 ②由第二段句首可知，第二段可以描写母女关系修复后的日常变化：两人不再冷战，开始分享喜怒哀乐，一起聊天、做零食。作者逐渐适应新环境，不再抱怨，感悟到搬家对双方都是挑战，决心珍惜亲情、永远陪伴母亲。 2.续写线索：自责后悔——推门道歉——母亲谅解拥抱——关系修复——分享交流——感悟成长 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①道歉：make an apology/apologize ②承认：admit/acknowledge 情绪类 ①感动：moved/touched ②快乐：happily/joyfully 【点睛】【高分句型1】Regret flooded my mind the moment I saw her sad face. (运用了the moment引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】I admitted I had long ignored all her painstaking efforts and silent selfless love over these months. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句) 1 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $