Unit 8 Safe and sound 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年英语译林版八年级上册

**基本信息** 以“词-句-篇”递进逻辑构建安全主题写作训练体系，融合语言积累与思维组织，提升应急场景语言表达能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|主题词汇4类+高频搭配14组+功能表达4类|主题词汇分类与功能表达匹配|从自然灾害、紧急情况等核心概念生成词汇网络，为表达奠基| |黄金句型库|4类基础句型+5组升级示例|基础-升级句型转换技巧|通过时间、场景、心理描写拓展简单句，培养复杂表达思维| |高分写作方法|1篇典例精析|审题-构思-亮点解析三步法|以“问题-建议-感受”结构梳理写作逻辑，强化篇章组织能力| |阶梯训练|句子训练3Level+篇章训练1篇|分层句式训练与篇章应用|从汉译英、仿写、升级到完整写作，实现语言能力逐级提升|

Unit 8 Safe and sound 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 自然灾害 earthquake 地震 flood 洪水 typhoon 台风 snowstorm 雪暴；暴风雪 storm 暴风雨 thunderstorm 雷暴 forest fire 森林火灾 bush fire 山林大火 tidal wave 海啸；潮汐波 lightning 闪电 thunder 雷声 紧急情况与安全 emergency 紧急情况 accident 事故 traffic accident 交通事故 first aid 急救 danger 危险 safety 安全 risk 危险；风险 calm 镇静的 nervous 焦虑的；胆怯的 fear 恐惧；害怕 silent 安静的 weak 虚弱的 terrible 可怕的 动词与短语 shake 摇动 shake 摇动 trap 使落入险境 calm down （使）平静 shout 呼喊；喊叫 run away from 逃离 put out 扑灭；熄灭 stay low 蹲低 cover 覆盖 warn 警告 bleed 流血 press 按；压 复合名词 earthquake 地震 snowstorm 雪暴 thunderstorm 雷暴 teamwork 团队合作 snowball 雪球 passport 护照 playground 操场 driveway 车道 whiteboard 白板 homework 家庭作业 2. 高频搭配 calm down （使）平静 in fear 恐惧地；害怕地 in all directions 四处；到处 run away from 从……逃离 put out 扑灭；熄灭 right away 立即；马上 safe and sound 安然无恙 as soon as possible 尽快 stay low 蹲低 cover...with... 用……覆盖 get trapped 被困 at first 起初 so far 迄今为止 in fear 恐惧地 3. 写作功能表达 描述事件发生时正在做的事 I was working when the earthquake started. 地震开始时我正在工作。 People were running in all directions while pieces of glass were raining down. 人们在四处奔逃，玻璃碎片如雨点般落下。 As I was trying to find my way out, I heard some noise. 当我正试图找到出路时，我听到了一些声音。 描述恐惧与反应 People shouted in fear. 人们恐惧地大喊。 I felt nervous and didn’t know what to do. 我感到紧张，不知道该怎么办。 I told myself to calm down. 我告诉自己要镇定。 描述逃生与救援 I shouted for help. 我大声呼救。 They quickly moved away the bricks. 他们迅速搬开了砖块。 At last, I was safe! 最后，我安全了！ 提供安全建议 If you are in a flood, get to high ground. 如果你在洪水中，去高地。 Don’t stand near a window during an earthquake. 地震时不要站在窗户附近。 Cover your mouth with a wet piece of cloth. 用湿布捂住嘴。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 It was about two o’clock in the afternoon. I was working when the earthquake started. 大约是下午两点钟。地震发生时我正在工作。 I went to the beach with my friends last Saturday. 上周六我和朋友们去了海滩。 There was an accident near our school yesterday. 昨天我们学校附近发生了一起事故。 Let me tell you about my experience in the earthquake. 让我告诉你我在地震中的经历。 2. 主体句型 At first, I felt a slight shake. 起初，我感到一阵轻微的震动。 People were running in all directions while pieces of glass were raining down. 人们在四处奔逃，玻璃碎片如雨点般落下。 I shouted for help, but no one came for a very long time. 我大声呼救，但很久都没有人来。 We ran up the hill as fast as possible. 我们尽可能快地跑上了山。 I told myself to calm down since I was still alive. 我告诉自己要镇定下来，因为我还活着。 3. 结尾句型 At last, I was safe! 最后，我安全了！ Luckily, no one was hurt or killed. 幸运的是，没有人受伤或死亡。 We were all happy that we were safe. 我们都很高兴我们安全了。 We should learn how to protect ourselves in an emergency. 我们应该学会在紧急情况下如何保护自己。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 I was working. 我正在工作。 It was about two o’clock in the afternoon. I was working when the earthquake started. 大约是下午两点钟。地震发生时我正在工作。 People were scared. 人们很害怕。 People shouted in fear and ran in all directions while pieces of glass and bricks were raining down. 人们恐惧地大喊，四处奔逃，玻璃碎片和砖块如雨点般落下。 I shouted for help. 我大声呼救。 I shouted for help in a weak voice, and soon I heard shouts from excited people. 我用微弱的声音大声呼救，很快就听到了人们激动的大喊声。 We ran away. 我们跑了。 We ran up the hill as fast as possible when we saw the big wave coming. 当我们看到巨浪来临时，我们尽可能快地跑上了山。 I was trapped. 我被困住了。 I couldn’t see anything at all, and I didn’t know if anyone else was around me. 我什么也看不见，也不知道周围还有没有其他人。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“安全伴我行”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“Safe Tips in My Daily Life”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. What safety problems do you often meet in daily life? 2. What safe tips do you have to deal with them? 3. How do you feel about following these safe tips? 要求：1.短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥；2.词数 100 左右。 Safe Tips in My Daily Life _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出三个必须回答的问题：日常生活中常见的安全问题、应对这些问题的安全建议、遵循这些建议的感受。时态上，描述安全问题和建议用一般现在时。结构上分三段：第一段引出安全的重要性并列举常见安全问题，第二段提出具体的安全建议，第三段总结遵循建议的感受。 【例文欣赏】 Safe Tips in My Daily Life Safety is very important in our daily life. As students, we may face different kinds of safety problems. For example, traffic accidents often happen when we cross the road. Also, there are many dangers on the Internet. To keep safe, here are some tips. First, we must obey traffic rules. We should always wait for the green light before crossing the street. Second, when surfing the Internet, we shouldn’t tell strangers our personal information or meet them offline. Finally, learning some first aid skills is also helpful. I think following these tips makes me feel safe and confident. Only by protecting ourselves can we enjoy a happy life. 【亮点解析】 开篇点明主题，用“For example”和“Also”列举两类安全问题。 “traffic accidents when we cross the road”是现实生活中的交通安全问题；“dangers on the Internet”是虚拟世界中的网络安全问题。两个例子分别对应线下和线上，覆盖面广，且都与学生日常生活紧密相关。 建议与问题一一对应，结构清晰。 “obey traffic rules...wait for the green light”针对交通安全；“shouldn't tell strangers our personal information or meet them offline”针对网络安全；“learning some first aid skills”是补充扩展建议。每条建议都有明确指向，不笼统不空泛。 情态动词运用准确。 “must obey”表达交通规则的强制性；“should always wait”表达应该做的正确行为；“shouldn't tell”表达禁止行为。“must”“should”“shouldn't”三个情态动词的使用层次分明，语气得当，符合“提建议”的写作任务。 “Only by...”倒装句收尾有力。 “Only by protecting ourselves can we enjoy a happy life.”将“only by protecting ourselves”置于句首，使用部分倒装“can we”，强调“自我保护”是“享受幸福生活”的唯一途径。这个句式是初中阶段的高级句型，运用恰当能使结尾更有分量。 首尾呼应，结构完整。 结尾“enjoy a happy life”与开头的“Safety is very important”相呼应，点明了安全的意义在于保障幸福生活。从“问题”到“建议”再到“感受”，全文按照提示的三个问题顺序展开，条理清晰。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 大约是下午两点钟，地震发生时我正在工作。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 人们恐惧地大喊，四处奔逃，玻璃碎片和砖块如雨点般落下。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 我什么也看不见，也不知道周围还有没有其他人。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 我用微弱的声音大声呼救，很快就听到了人们激动的大喊声。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 最后，我安全了！ ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：I was ... when ...（描述事件发生时正在做的事） 例句：I was working when the earthquake started. 地震发生时我正在工作。 （1）我正在看电视，这时风暴来袭。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我正在过马路，这时事故发生了。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型2：People were ... while ...（描述同时发生的动作） 例句：People were running in all directions while pieces of glass were raining down. 人们在四处奔逃，玻璃碎片如雨点般落下。 （1）人们在恐惧地大喊，而房屋正在倒塌。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）消防员正在灭火，而人们正在撤离。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型3：I told myself to ...（描述心理活动） 例句：I told myself to calm down. 我告诉自己要镇定下来。 （1）我告诉自己要勇敢。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我告诉自己要保持冷静，不要惊慌。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型4：I shouted for help，but ...（描述呼救与结果） 例句：I shouted for help, but no one came for a very long time. 我大声呼救，但很久都没有人来。 （1）我大声呼救，但没有人能听见我。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我大声呼救，很快就有人来救我了。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型5：At last，...（描述最终结果） 例句：At last, I was safe! 最后，我安全了！ （1）最后，我们都安全地回家了。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）最后，火被扑灭了，没有人受伤。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：I was working. 我正在工作。 升级句：It was about two o’clock in the afternoon. I was working when the earthquake started. 大约是下午两点钟。地震发生时我正在工作。 1. 基础句：People were scared. 人们很害怕。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：I shouted for help. 我大声呼救。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：We ran away. 我们跑了。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：I was trapped. 我被困住了。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：The fire was big. 火很大。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：We were safe. 我们安全了。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“安全自救”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“My experience in an earthquake”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. What was the earthquake like when it happened? 2. What did you do to keep yourself safe? 3. What have you learned from this experience? 要求： 1. 短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥； 2. 词数100左右； 3. 不得出现真实姓名、学校名称。 My experience in an earthquake ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. It was about two o’clock in the afternoon. I was working when the earthquake started. 2. People shouted in fear and ran in all directions while pieces of glass and bricks were raining down. 3. I couldn’t see anything at all, and I didn’t know if anyone else was around me. 4. I shouted for help in a weak voice, and soon I heard shouts from excited people. 5. At last, I was safe! Level 2 句型仿写 句型1 （1）I was watching TV when the storm hit. （2）I was crossing the road when the accident happened. 句型2 （1）People were shouting in fear while the houses were falling down. （2）Firemen were putting out the fire while people were leaving. 句型3 （1）I told myself to be brave. （2）I told myself to stay calm and not to panic. 句型4 （1）I shouted for help, but no one could hear me. （2）I shouted for help, and soon someone came to save me. 句型5 （1）At last, we all got home safely. （2）At last, the fire was put out and no one was hurt. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：People shouted in fear and ran in all directions while pieces of glass and bricks were raining down from the buildings. 人们恐惧地大喊，四处奔逃，玻璃碎片和砖块如雨点般从建筑物上落下。 2. 升级句：I shouted for help in a weak voice because I was too weak to shout loudly. Soon I heard shouts from excited people. 我用微弱的声音大声呼救，因为我太虚弱了，喊不大声。很快我就听到了人们激动的大喊声。 3. 升级句：We ran up the hill as fast as possible when we saw the big wave coming towards us. When I looked back, the whole beach was under water. 当我们看到巨浪向我们袭来时，我们尽可能快地跑上了山。当我回头看时，整个海滩都在水下。 4. 升级句：I was trapped under the bricks and couldn’t move. I couldn’t see anything at all, and I didn’t know if anyone else was around me. 我被困在砖块下面，动弹不得。我什么也看不见，也不知道周围还有没有其他人。 5. 升级句：The fire got bigger and bigger, and fear ran through my mind. Some animals began to run in all directions. 火势越来越大，恐惧掠过我的脑海。一些动物开始四处奔逃。 6. 升级句：We were all happy that we were safe. Luckily, no one was hurt or killed in the disaster. 我们都很高兴我们安全了。幸运的是，没有人在这场灾害中受伤或死亡。 篇章训练（参考范文） My experience in an earthquake Last year, a small earthquake hit my hometown when I was having class. The desks and chairs shook suddenly, and some books fell off the shelves. I felt scared at first, but I remembered what my teacher told us. I quickly hid under my desk and held on to it tightly. After the shaking stopped, we walked out of the classroom in order. We stood on the playground and waited for our parents quietly. This experience taught me the importance of staying calm in danger. I also learned that knowing safety rules can help us protect ourselves better. I will never forget this useful lesson. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $