Unit2 写作专题 --改善学校生活的建议信 2026-2027学年译林版 八年级英语上册

该初中英语讲义围绕“改善学校生活的建议信”主题，通过话题分析明确书信格式、时态和结构，用列表呈现7个核心短语及8个万能句型，结合范文导读框架图梳理“开头目的-正文建议+理由-结尾期盼”的写作脉络，突出should+动词原形、suggest正确句型等重难点。 讲义亮点在于分层练习设计与精准方法指导，基础巩固含短语汉译英、易错改错，能力提升有句型仿写和翻译，填空式模板助力基础薄弱学生。通过“建议+理由”段落训练培养逻辑思维与语言表达能力，错题集锦帮助规避语法错误，支持学生自主复习，便于教师实施分层教学。

8A U2写作课--关于改善学校生活的建议信 授课类型 T C T 星级 ★★ ★★★ ★★★★ 教学目的 知识目标 1. 1.掌握 7 个写作核心短语：improve our school life、make our school more beautiful、provide sth. for sb.、be more interested in studying、the importance of…、help sb.(to) do sth.、have more fun 2. 2.掌握建议信常用句型，学会使用 First/Second/Moreover 连接词分层表达建议 3. 3.掌握建议信格式：称呼、开头、正文、结尾、署名；时态一般现在时，第一人称 能力目标 1. 1.能正确写出提建议的句子，减少语法错误（主谓、should + 动词原形、宾语从句） 2. 2.能围绕 “建议 + 理由” 写段落，完成 80100 词建议信 3. 3.学会用连接词让文章条理清晰 情感目标 1.学会礼貌表达想法，关心校园生活，学会合理提出建议 重点难点 重点 1. 1.建议信写作框架：开头写信目的→正文（建议 + 理由）→结尾祝愿 2. 2.提建议句型 I think we should… / I would like to suggest that… 3. 3.连接词 First / Second / Moreover 的使用 难点 1. 1.should 后面必须用动词原形，学生容易写 should does/should doing 2. 2.suggest 相关句型不要混淆，不能说 suggest sb to do sth 3. 3.建议信中，每条建议要搭配简单理由，不能只堆句子 4. 4.书信格式完整，时态统一一般现在时 导入Let's talk! 01. Do you like your school life? What can make our school life better? 02. What can make our school life better? 知识点梳理 1、 话题分析 本单元话题是“学校生活”，整个单元内容围绕世界各地不同的学校生活和对学校生活的建议展开。 写作要求： 1. 书信格式，人称：第一人称 I /we 2. 时态：一般现在时 3. 结构：开头说明写信目的；正文礼貌写建议 + 理由；结尾希望建议有用 4. 语言精炼，条理清楚，用连接词分层 ⚠️易错提醒：写作时要符合信件格式，叙述时要做到有条理、有层次，语气要礼貌，不要用命令语气！ 二、核心素材积累 （一）✨常用写作短语（必须背诵） 1. improve our school life 改善我们的学校生活 2. provide sth. for sb. 为某人提供某物 3. make our school more beautiful 使我们的学校更加美丽 4. be more interested in studying 对学习更感兴趣 5. the importance of … …… 的重要性 6. help sb. (to) do sth. 帮助某人做某事（to 可以省略） 7. have more fun 有更多的乐趣 📝练习 1：短语汉译英（基础练习） 1. 1. 改善我们的学校生活 ________________________ 2. 2. 使我们学校更美丽 ________________________ 3. 3. 帮助我们学习 ________________________ 4. 4. 对学习更感兴趣 ________________________ 1. improve our school life 2. make our school more beautiful 3. help us (to) study 4. be more interested in studying 📝练习 2：改错，找出错误并改正 1. The flowers make our school more beautifully. ________________ 解析：make + 宾语 + 形容词，beautiful，不是副词 beautifully 1. Books help us learns new words. ________________ 解析：help sb (to) do，动词原形 learn 1. We want provide more books for students. ________________ 解析：want to do；want to provide （二）8 个基础万能句型讲解（15min） ✨常用写作句型（8 句，建议信万能句） 1. 1.I am writing (this letter) to make suggestions on… 我写这封信是为了就…… 提出建议（开头万能句） 2. 2.First, I would like to suggest … 首先，我想要建议…… 3. 3.Second/Moreover/Finally,… 第二 / 此外 / 最后，……（分层连接词） 4. 4.I think we should have more… 我认为我们应该拥有更多…… ⚠️【超级易错】should + 动词原形！！禁止 should has /should doing 1. 5.…is a good place for us to do sth. …… 是我们做某事的好地方 2. 6.I have a suggestion for … 我有一个关于…… 的建议 3. 7.I think it will be a good idea to … 我认为做…… 会是个好主意 4. 8.I hope you find my suggestions useful/helpful. 希望您觉得我的建议有用。（结尾万能句） ❗重点提醒：不能写 suggest sb to do sth！！ ✅正确：I suggest (that) we should do… 📌练习 3 句型填空（仿写练习） 1. 1.I am writing to ______ some suggestions ______ our school life.（就校园生活提建议） 2. 2.First, I think we ______ (should/shoulds) have more PE classes. 3. 3.I think it will be a good idea ______ (plant) more flowers. 4. 4.______ (此外), we can have more storytelling time.（填连接词） 1.share；on 2.should 3.to plant 4.Moreover 📌练习 4 改错练习 找出错误，划出并且改正 1. 1.First, I would like to suggest us plant more trees. 1. 2.We should plants more flowers in our garden. 1. 3.I hope you will find my suggestion usefully. 1.错误：suggest us plant → I would like to suggest (that) we plant… 2.plants→plant（should 后原形） 3.usefully→useful 📌练习 5 句子翻译（输出练习） 1. 1.我写信是想分享一些改善校园生活的建议。 1. 2.其次，学校可以为我们提供更多有趣的书。 1. 3.我希望我的建议对你有帮助。 1.I am writing to share some suggestions to improve our school life. 2.Second, our school can provide more interesting books for us. 3.I hope you find my suggestions helpful. （三）、范文导读及写作框架梳理 1. 范文导读 [教材P23] 范文精读任务 1. 把文中连接词：First / Second / Moreover 画横线 2. 找出文中用到本节课学过的短语，圈出来 3. 思考：每一条建议后面，作者写的理由是什么？ 老师点拨易错句型：I would like to suggest that we should… 宾语从句，should 后面动词原形 2. 2. 思路点拨 话题：关于改善学校生活的建议信 体裁：应用文 时态：一般现在时 人称：以第一人称为主 3. 三、经典例题 初中生活的第一年转瞬即逝。学校英语俱乐部将组织关于学校生活写建议信的征文活动，假设你是何丽，聊聊自己关于改善学校生活的建议。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。 提示：1.What suggestions do you have to make your school life better? 1. 2.Why? 2. 要求： ①词数 90 左右； ②书信格式完整； ③必须包含建议 + 理由； ④不要真实校名姓名。 Dear Mr Wang， I am writing to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， He Li 高分范文： Dear Mr Wang， I am writing to share some suggestions to improve our school life in some ways. First, I think we should have more PE classes each week. With more PE classes, we can stay fit and energetic for study. Second, our school can plant more flowers in the garden. The garden looks a bit boring now. Colourful flowers will make our school more beautiful and we can enjoy them when we walk by. Moreover, I would like to suggest that we should have more storytelling time in class. We all love listening to stories. It can help us learn new words and be more interested in studying. I hope you will think my suggestions are good and help make our school a happier place. Yours sincerely， He Li 名师点评 文章开篇直接进入主题，要点全面、条理清晰、层次分明。正文部分先提出建议内容，然后阐述原因。文中灵活地运用了所学单词和短语，如 suggestion、moreover、suggest 和 improve our school life 等，展现出作者学活用的能力，整体语言简洁易懂。 ① 文中恰当地使用了 First、Second 和 Moreover 等连接词，不仅使文章结构更加清晰，而且增强了句子之间的连贯性。 ② 此句中的 more flowers 使用了本单元语法部分数量的比较级。 ③ 句中使用形容词的比较级和 when 引导的时间状语从句，表达作者对美丽花园的期待。 ④ 句中含有 that 引导的宾语从句，句式有一定的变化，使文章更有层次。 总结： 1. 建议信三部分：开头目的 — 正文（建议 + 理由，First/Second/Moreover 分层）— 结尾期盼 2. should + 动词原形！！高频丢分点 3. suggest 正确句型：suggest (that) we should do…，不要写 suggest sb to do 4. make + 宾语 + 形容词 随堂练习 一、基础巩固练习 练习 1 短语汉译英 根据中文写出英文短语 1. 改善我们的校园生活 ________________________ 2. 为某人提供某物 ________________________ 3. 让我们的学校更美丽 ________________________ 4. 对学习更感兴趣 ________________________ 5. 帮助某人做某事 ________________________ 6. 拥有更多乐趣 ________________________ 参考答案 1. improve our school life 2. provide sth. for sb. 3. make our school more beautiful 4. be more interested in studying 5. help sb. (to) do sth. 6. have more fun 练习 2 易错句子改错（划出错误并改正） 1. 1.More trees make our school beautifully. 1. 2.We should plants more colourful flowers in the garden. 1. 3.Books help us learns lots of new words. 1. 4.I want provide more storybooks for our class. 1. 5.I suggest you to hold more story-telling classes. 参考答案 1. 1.beautifully → beautiful 2. 2.plants → plant 3. 3.learns → learn 4. 4.want provide → want to provide 5. 5.to hold → hold （正确：I suggest (that) you hold…） 练习 3 核心句型填空 1. I am writing ______ ______ some suggestions ______ our school life. （我写信是为了就校园生活提一些建议） 2. First, I think we ______ have more PE lessons every week. 3. I think it will be a good idea ______ ______ more trees. 4. ______, our school can buy more interesting storybooks.（此外） 5. I hope you ______ my suggestions ______.（希望你觉得我的建议有用） 参考答案 1. to share; on 2. should 3. to plant 4. Moreover 5. find; helpful 二、能力提升练习（中等学生重点完成） 练习 4 句型仿写 1. 例句：I am writing to share some suggestions to improve our school life. 2. 仿写：我写信想提出几条让校园生活更有趣的建议。 1. 例句：First, I think we should have more PE classes because sports keep us healthy. 2. 仿写：其次，学校应该多种花，这样校园会更漂亮。 1. 例句：I hope you will find my suggestions useful. 2. 仿写：我希望我的建议能帮助我们拥有更好的校园生活。 参考答案 1. I am writing to share some suggestions to make our school life more fun. 2. Second, our school should plant more flowers because they can make the school more beautiful. 3. I hope my suggestions can help us have better school life. 练习 5 句子翻译 1. 我们应该有更多讲故事的课堂。 1. 图书馆可以为我们提供更多课外书。 1. 多彩的花朵能让我们心情愉悦。 参考答案 1. We should have more story-telling classes. 2. The library can provide more after-school books for us. 3. Colourful flowers can make us feel happy. 三、填空式作文模板 A letter of suggestion Dear Mr Wang, I am writing to ______ some suggestions to ______ our school life. First, I think we ______ have more PE classes every week. With more PE lessons, we can stay ______ and full of energy to study. ______, our school can plant more flowers in the garden. The garden looks boring now, and flowers will ______ our school more beautiful. Moreover, I would like to suggest that we have more ______ time in class. It can help us learn new words and be more interested ______ studying. I hope you will ______ my suggestions helpful and make our school a warmer place for us. Yours sincerely， He Li 参考范文（供批改对照） Dear Mr Wang, I am writing to share some suggestions to improve our school life. First, I think we should have more PE classes every week. With more PE lessons, we can stay fit and full of energy to study. Second, our school can plant more flowers in the garden. The garden looks boring now, and flowers will make our school more beautiful. Moreover, I would like to suggest that we have more story-telling time in class. It can help us learn new words and be more interested in studying. I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and make our school a warmer place for us. Yours sincerely， He Li 四、课后写作作业 假如你是Max，你学校学生会主席想要让学生们的学校生活更加丰富多彩，现在向全校学生征集建议。 请根据下面海报要求，给学生会主席写一封建议书。 Need Your Ideas Hi，guys! Thanks for supporting our Students' Union. To make our school a better place，please write to us and talk about your ideal school life. What do you think of your school life now？ What after﹣school activities would you like？ What do you want to do with your friends？ 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.短文必须包括所有内容要点，语言顺畅，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范； 3.词数80左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chairperson， I'm a student in Grade 8_____ This is my ideal school life. I hope my ideas will be helpful to you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Max 【答案】Dear Chairperson， I'm a student in Grade 8.I will tell you about my school life now.Now I have too much homework every day.I don't have time for after﹣school activities.I think my school life is terrible. I think my ideal school life should be meaningful and colorful.I hope our after﹣school activities will be rich.I would like our school to hold some activities，such as Art Festival，sports meeting，and so on.What's more，I hope our school will have a school trip at least once a term.In this way，we will know more about the world.During my holidays，I want to join in volunteering with my friends to help others in need. This is my ideal school life.I hope my ideas will be helpful to you. Yours sincerely， Max 【分析】【高分句型一】 I think my ideal school life should be meaningful and colorful.我认为我理想中的学校生活应该是有意义和丰富多彩的。I think+宾语从句。 【高分句型二】 During my holidays，I want to join in volunteering with my friends to help others in need.在我的假期里，我想和我的朋友一起参加志愿者活动，帮助那些需要帮助的人。不定式作目的状语。 【解答】Dear Chairperson， I'm a student in Grade 8.I will tell you about my school life now.Now I have too much homework every day.I don't have time for after﹣school activities.I think my school life is terrible.（看法） I think my ideal school life should be meaningful and colorful.【高分句型一】I hope our after﹣school activities will be rich.I would like our school to hold some activities，such as Art Festival，sports meeting，and so on.What's more，I hope our school will have a school trip at least once a term.In this way，we will know more about the world.（课后活动）During my holidays，I want to join in volunteering with my friends to help others in need.【高分句型二】（和朋友做什么） This is my ideal school life.I hope my ideas will be helpful to you. 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