Unit 1 The Changing World 单元话题（时代变迁）写作满分范文12篇-2026-2027学年九年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（人教版）

**基本信息** 以“时代变迁”为核心主题，分基础入门、进阶拓展、能力综合实践三层次，精选12篇写作真题，构建从个人生活到社会发展的话题逻辑链，培养语言表达与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |基础入门训练|4篇|聚焦个人生活、学习、家乡基础变化，要求对比过去与现在，表达感受|从具体生活场景切入，建立“过去-现在-感受”写作框架，培养基础描述能力| |进阶拓展训练|4篇|扩展至国家发展、家乡环境/交通/建筑变化，加入变化原因及未来期待|话题从个人上升到社会层面，强化逻辑连贯与观点表达，提升思维深度| |能力综合实践|4篇|结合社会问题分析、个人成长、乡村振兴战略，要求提出建议或展望|融合跨文化意识与批判性思维，实现语言能力与核心素养的综合提升|

2026-2027学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2026-2027学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 1 The Changing World 单元话题（时代变迁）写作满分范文12篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，选题均为25-26学年最新名校或地区统考卷真题或外刊原题改编，质量较高。老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练4篇 1．时代在发展，我们的生活也发生着日新月异的变化。假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示要点，以“Changes Around Me”为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在生活和学习中发生的变化。 要点如下： 1. 你过去的生活和学习是什么样的？ 2. 你的生活和学习发生了哪些变化？ 3. 你怎样看待这些变化？ 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 词数为100词左右。 Changes Around Me Great changes have taken place in my life and study. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．请根据以下提示，写一篇短文谈谈科技给你的生活带来的变化。 提示： 1. 过去和现在的沟通方式对比； 2. 学习方式的变化； 3. 生活便利性的提升； 4. 你的感受。 要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“Changes Around Us”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“The Great Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. What great changes have taken place in your hometown? 2. What do you think caused these changes? 3. How do you feel about these changes? 要求：1. 短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥; 2. 词数100左右。 The Great Changes in My Hometown _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文介绍你家乡（或你熟悉的地方）的变化，内容需包括： • 过去是什么样（至少2点，用used to/一般过去时）； • 现在是什么样（至少2点，用现在完成时或一般现在时）； • 变化带来的感受（用感叹句或比较级）； • 你对未来的期待。 要求：语句通顺，时态正确，书写工整，可适当发挥。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练4篇 5．近几年来，我们国家在经济、文化、科技等领域快速发展，例如央视春晚的秧歌机器人，冲进全球影史票房前五名的《哪吒2》，火爆全球的人工智能DeepSeek……中国的发展速度令世界都为之震惊，也令我们感到无比自豪。请你以“China’s Great Development”为题，写一写我们国家的发展变化并谈谈自己的心得体会。 提示：1.国家近几年各方面的发展变化； 2.这些变化给我们的生活带来的影响； 3.作为青少年应该怎么做。 要求：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 China’s Great Development In recent years, China has witnessed remarkable development and changes, which have significantly influenced every aspect of people’s lives ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．这个暑假你回自己的家乡了吗?与儿时的记忆相比，你的家乡发生了哪些变化呢? 请围绕“家乡变化”的主题，根据下面的内容要点，以“The Amazing Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇80～100词的英语文章。 内容要点：1.用现在完成时描述家乡近年来在环境、交通、建筑等方面发生的变化。（至少写出3点具体变化） 2.表达自己对这些变化的感受。3.谈谈自己对家乡未来的期待。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．下周你班要举行班会，话题是“Changes in my hometown”，学校要求人人发言，请写一篇英语发言稿。 内容提示：1. 谈谈你的家乡近几年的变化。 2. 你对家乡变化的感受。 3. 作为家乡的一员，你能为家乡做的事。 注意：1. 词数80—100； 2. 短文须包括所给内容提示信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．随着时代的发展，你的家乡也发生了巨大的变化。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述这些变化，并谈谈你的感受。 提示： 过去：道路狭窄崎岖，房屋老旧，人们主要靠步行或骑自行车出行，生活节奏慢。 现在：高楼大厦，宽阔的高速公路和铁路，电子支付普及，生活便利快捷。 感受：…… 参考词汇：narrow and rough（狭窄崎岖的）, high-tech（高科技的）, e-payment（电子支付）, convenient（方便的） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践4篇 9．假设你叫李明，某中学生英文杂志正在举办题为“Great Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动。你打算向该杂志投稿，请你用英文写一篇短文，分享你家乡的变化。 内容包括： （1）你的家乡过去是什么样子； （2）你的家乡有了哪些变化（例如环境environment、交通traffic、建筑building、经济economy/business等方面）； （3）你对家乡的变化有什么感受。（60词以上） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．改革开放以来，中国已飞速发展，但同时也存在一些问题，假如你是新时代的中学生Leo，请你根据以下图表的提示写一封信给市长，简要介绍中国的发展变化，分析当前存在的社会问题，并提出你的建议。 Changes in China Amazing achievement modern, richer, convenient Problems we face traffic environment job opportunities For a better future take measures, offer, public transportation we students… 要求： 1. 内容完整，语句通顺，结构清晰； 2. 词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Dear Mayor, I’m Leo, a middle school student. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．你校将举办以“How I Have Changed”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你撰写一篇英文演讲稿，围绕学习习惯、性格品质、兴趣爱好、待人处事等方面的转变，讲述你的成长故事并抒发诚挚的内心感悟。 要求： 1．根据所给题目，写一篇演讲稿，词数不少于80; 2．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计; 4．请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．党的“十九大”提出了乡村振兴的伟大战略，假设你的家乡在政府的帮助下，坚持创建美丽新农村，近几年发生了巨大变化。请以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述你的家乡从过去到现在的变化以及你对家乡未来的期望。 （一）提示： 1. 过去：道路狭窄又泥泞，房子旧而小； 2. 现在：道路宽广干净，呈现很多新的楼房，有超市，环境变得好多了； 3. 展望：希望人们过上幸福的生活 4. with the support of… 在……支持下 （二）注意： 1. 写作内容需包含所提示信息，内容可适当发挥； 2. 表达清晰，语法正确，逻辑合理，上下文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实的姓名、校名； 4. 词数 70 左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 The Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot over the years. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $2026-2027学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2026-2027学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 1 The Changing World 单元话题（时代变迁）写作满分范文12篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，选题均为25-26学年最新名校或地区统考卷真题或外刊原题改编，质量较高。老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练4篇 1．时代在发展，我们的生活也发生着日新月异的变化。假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示要点，以“Changes Around Me”为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在生活和学习中发生的变化。 要点如下： 1. 你过去的生活和学习是什么样的？ 2. 你的生活和学习发生了哪些变化？ 3. 你怎样看待这些变化？ 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 词数为100词左右。 Changes Around Me Great changes have taken place in my life and study. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes Around Me Great changes have taken place in my life and study. In the past, my life was quite simple. I lived in a small house with my family. There were only a few old-fashioned toys. As for my studies, I had to do my homework with a pen, and there weren’t many extra-curricular books available. Now, things are different. I have moved into a large and bright apartment. There are, many modern electrical appliances, such as a smart TV and a computer. For my studies, I can use the Internet to search for information, and there are also many online courses for me to choose from. I think these changes are good. They make my life more convenient and help me learn more knowledge. I’m sure life will be even better in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，围绕“我”生活和学习中的变化展开； ②时态：时态主要为“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”，用于描述过去和现在的状态及变化； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括过去的生活和学习状态、发生的变化以及对这些变化的看法，考生需注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节使内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入主题。通过“Great changes have taken place in my life and study.”来引出下文要介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述变化。从“过去的生活和学习状态”以及“生活和学习发生的变化”两个方面进行详细描述，可适当加入细节使内容充实； 第三步，书写结语。对上述变化发表自己的看法，体现对这些变化的认知和态度； [亮点词汇] ①take place发生 ②old-fashioned老式的 ③extra-curricular课外的 ④available可获得的 ⑤electrical appliances电器 ⑥search for搜索 [高分句型] ①I lived in a small house with my family.（一般过去时描述过去状态） ②For my studies, I can use the Internet to search for information, and there are also many online courses for me to choose from.（动词不定式作目的状语） 2．请根据以下提示，写一篇短文谈谈科技给你的生活带来的变化。 提示： 1. 过去和现在的沟通方式对比； 2. 学习方式的变化； 3. 生活便利性的提升； 4. 你的感受。 要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Technology has changed my life. In the past, I communicated with my friends by writing letters. Now, I can chat with them instantly through apps like WeChat. For study, I used to look up words in dictionaries, but now online tools help me get answers. I can also take interesting online courses after school. Technology makes daily life easier—I can order food and shop online without going out. I feel lucky to live in such a world and will make good use of technology to improve myself. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般过去时、一般现在时对比为主 明确要点：沟通方式今昔对比、学习方式变化、生活便利提升、个人感受 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：词数80词左右，语句通顺，可适当拓展细节，无真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起全文，点明科技改变生活 主体段：分别从沟通、学习、日常生活三个方面对比过去与现在的变化 结尾段：表达自己对科技生活的感受与态度 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：沟通方式对比 过去方式：write letters/communicate slowly/spend much time waiting等 现在方式：chat online/use WeChat/send messages instantly/talk anytime等 要点二：学习方式变化 过去学习：look up words in dictionaries/learn only from books等 现在学习：use online tools/take online courses/get useful information quickly等 要点三：生活便利性提升 生活变化：shop online/order food at home/save time/make life easier等 要点四：个人感受 感受态度：feel lucky/live a convenient life/make good use of technology/improve myself等 3．假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“Changes Around Us”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“The Great Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. What great changes have taken place in your hometown? 2. What do you think caused these changes? 3. How do you feel about these changes? 要求：1. 短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥; 2. 词数100左右。 The Great Changes in My Hometown _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Great Changes in My Hometown My hometown is a small city in the south of China. In the past few years, great changes have taken place here. Old low houses have been replaced by tall modern buildings. Narrow dirty streets are now wide and clean, with green trees and colorful flowers on both sides. There are also new shopping malls and parks for people to relax. I think these changes come from the rapid development of our country. The government has invested a lot in building infrastructure and improving people’s lives. I feel really proud and happy about these changes. My hometown has become more beautiful and convenient. I’m looking forward to its even brighter future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以现在完成时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：家乡发生的巨大变化、产生变化的原因、自身对于变化的感受 确定人称：第一人称（My/I） 注意事项：词数100词左右；不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起，简单介绍家乡并引出家乡出现巨大变化 主体段：先描写家乡具体改变，再分析变化产生的原因 结尾段：抒发个人感受，展望家乡未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡的巨大变化 可描写房屋、道路、绿化、休闲场所等方面变化： Old low houses have been replaced by tall modern buildings./ with green trees and colorful flowers on both sides/Old houses are replaced by modern buildings./more green plants are planted along streets/new public parks attract lots of visitors等 要点二：变化产生的原因 可以围绕国家发展、政府投入基础设施建设展开：I think these changes come from the rapid development of our country./The government has invested a lot in building infrastructure and improving people’s lives./the government pays attention to city construction/people’s living conditions keep improving等 要点三：个人感受 表达自豪、开心，期待家乡更好的发展：I feel really proud and happy about these changes./be filled with pride/enjoy the convenient life/hope my hometown will develop further等 4．假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文介绍你家乡（或你熟悉的地方）的变化，内容需包括： • 过去是什么样（至少2点，用used to/一般过去时）； • 现在是什么样（至少2点，用现在完成时或一般现在时）； • 变化带来的感受（用感叹句或比较级）； • 你对未来的期待。 要求：语句通顺，时态正确，书写工整，可适当发挥。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 参考范文 My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. In the past, people used to live in low and old houses. The roads were narrow and dirty. There were few trees around. Now, many tall buildings have appeared everywhere. The roads are wide and clean. We can see green trees and flowers on both sides. How beautiful my hometown is! Life is becoming better and better than before. I hope my hometown will be more modern and convenient in the future. I love my hometown deeply. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般过去时、现在完成时和一般现在时结合 明确要点：家乡过去的样子 (used to/past)、现在的变化 (now/present)、感受 (feelings)、未来期待 (future) 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总体介绍家乡发生了巨大变化 主体段：对比过去和现在的具体变化（住房、道路、环境等） 结尾段：表达对家乡变化的感叹及对未来的期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡过去的样子 people used to live in low and old houses./The roads were narrow and dirty./small cottages/muddy paths 要点二：家乡现在的样子 many tall buildings have appeared everywhere./The roads are wide and clean./modern skyscrapers/broad avenues 要点三：变化带来的感受及未来期待 感受：How beautiful my hometown is!/Life is becoming better and better than before./What a great change!/more comfortable and convenient 期待：I hope my hometown will be more modern and convenient in the future./look forward to/brighter future 进阶拓展训练4篇 5．近几年来，我们国家在经济、文化、科技等领域快速发展，例如央视春晚的秧歌机器人，冲进全球影史票房前五名的《哪吒2》，火爆全球的人工智能DeepSeek……中国的发展速度令世界都为之震惊，也令我们感到无比自豪。请你以“China’s Great Development”为题，写一写我们国家的发展变化并谈谈自己的心得体会。 提示：1.国家近几年各方面的发展变化； 2.这些变化给我们的生活带来的影响； 3.作为青少年应该怎么做。 要求：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 China’s Great Development In recent years, China has witnessed remarkable development and changes, which have significantly influenced every aspect of people’s lives ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】   In recent years, China has witnessed remarkable development and changes, which have significantly influenced every aspect of people’s lives.   Technology develops fast. AI tools like DeepSeek make learning easier and faster. Also, Chinese movies such as Ne Zha 2 are popular worldwide. These changes make our daily life more convenient and colorful. We feel truly proud of our great motherland.   As teenagers, we should study hard to build a better future. We must love our country and spread Chinese culture to the world. Only in this way can we contribute to society. I believe China will become even stronger with our joint efforts. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，介绍国家发展+抒发观点，以一般现在时为主 明确要点： ①国家近几年各方面发展变化；②变化对生活带来的影响；③青少年应该怎么做。 确定人称：第一人称（we/our） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、学校名称；词数控制在80左右，给出开头不计入总词数。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：使用题目给出的起始句，总起全文，引出中国发展巨大变化。 主体第一段：列举科技、文化领域发展实例，对应要点 “国家发展变化”。 主体第二段 + 结尾段：先说明发展带给生活的影响，再阐述青少年的行动，最后升华情感。 [第三步：要点分层展开] 要点一：国家近几年各方面发展变化 可选素材：人工智能DeepSeek、电影《哪吒 2》、春晚机器人；也可拓展高铁、移动支付等。 句型：Technology develops fast. 要点二：变化给生活带来的影响 表达方向：生活更加便捷、丰富多彩；拓宽视野；学习方式革新 句型：These changes make our daily life more convenient and colorful. 要点三：作为青少年应该怎么做 行动方向：努力学习知识、提升自我、报效祖国 句型：As teenagers, we should study hard to build a better future. We must love our country and spread Chinese culture to the world. 6．这个暑假你回自己的家乡了吗?与儿时的记忆相比，你的家乡发生了哪些变化呢? 请围绕“家乡变化”的主题，根据下面的内容要点，以“The Amazing Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇80～100词的英语文章。 内容要点：1.用现在完成时描述家乡近年来在环境、交通、建筑等方面发生的变化。（至少写出3点具体变化） 2.表达自己对这些变化的感受。3.谈谈自己对家乡未来的期待。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 The Amazing Changes in My Hometown Many amazing changes have taken place in my hometown over the past few years. Plenty of green trees have been planted along streets, and the clean fresh air comforts every visitor. New wide roads have been built and more public buses have brought great convenience for local residents. Tall bright apartment buildings and lovely parks have taken the place of the old small houses. I feel deeply proud of its fast moving development. I sincerely hope my hometown will become greener in the coming days. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以现在完成时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：家乡三处变化（环境、交通、建筑）、内心感受、未来期许 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：字数80‑100 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，总述近几年家乡发生许多惊人改变 主体段：依次介绍环境、交通、建筑三处具体变化 结尾段：抒发内心自豪感，讲述自己对于家乡日后发展的期盼 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡多方面的具体变化 栽种绿植优化环境：plenty of green trees have been planted along streets/lots of trees are planted by roads/more flowers appear around houses 空气清新抚慰游人：the clean fresh air comforts every visitor/makes people relaxed/brings us pleasant feelings 修建宽阔崭新道路：new wide roads have been built/smooth highways appear/convenient streets are finished 公交出行带来便利：more public buses have brought great convenience/cut down our travel time/make trips much easier 楼房公园取代旧小屋：tall bright apartment buildings and lovely parks have taken the place of the old small houses/replace the old houses/have risen from the former old house areas 要点二：个人感受以及未来期待 为家乡发展倍感自豪：feel deeply proud of its fast moving development/take pride in great changes/be glad for progress 期许日后家乡更加绿意盎然：sincerely hope my hometown will become greener in the coming days/turn more beautiful/keep developing well 7．下周你班要举行班会，话题是“Changes in my hometown”，学校要求人人发言，请写一篇英语发言稿。 内容提示：1. 谈谈你的家乡近几年的变化。 2. 你对家乡变化的感受。 3. 作为家乡的一员，你能为家乡做的事。 注意：1. 词数80—100； 2. 短文须包括所给内容提示信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear classmates, now I want to talk about changes in my hometown. Years ago, there were narrow roads and small old houses. Now wide roads and tall buildings are everywhere, and we have a new beautiful park for fun. I feel so happy and proud of these great changes. As a member of the hometown, I can be a volunteer to keep the park clean on weekends. I will also study hard to make it better in the future. Thanks for your listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：班会发言稿，时态混合一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时 明确要点：家乡近些年的变化、自身对变化的感受、身为家乡一员可以为之做的事情 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数80—100，不得透露真实姓名、学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开场引入发言主题 主体段：介绍家乡变迁，抒发内心感受 结尾段：讲述自身可以为家乡做的事，致谢收尾 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡变化 旧时景象：narrow roads and small old houses/dirty rivers without green plants/little public entertainment facilities 如今景象：wide roads, tall buildings everywhere and a new beautiful park for fun/clean rivers with trees along banks/convenient shared bikes and public libraries 要点二：内心感受 心情：feel so happy and proud of these great changes/surprised by fast development/delighted that living environment becomes comfortable 要点三：个人行动 当下行动：be a volunteer to keep the park clean on weekends/sort rubbish in daily life/plant trees in community 长远行动：study hard to make it better in the future/learn useful skills to develop local tourism 8．随着时代的发展，你的家乡也发生了巨大的变化。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述这些变化，并谈谈你的感受。 提示： 过去：道路狭窄崎岖，房屋老旧，人们主要靠步行或骑自行车出行，生活节奏慢。 现在：高楼大厦，宽阔的高速公路和铁路，电子支付普及，生活便利快捷。 感受：…… 参考词汇：narrow and rough（狭窄崎岖的）, high-tech（高科技的）, e-payment（电子支付）, convenient（方便的） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, the roads were narrow and rough, and houses were old. People mainly walked or rode bikes, and life was slow. But now, everything is different. Tall buildings stand everywhere. Wide highways and modern railways connect us to the outside world. E-payment is widely used, making life incredibly convenient. Although life is faster now, I feel proud of these developments. I believe my hometown will become even better in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时（描述过去）和一般现在时（描述现在）为主 明确要点：文章需包含过去的家乡、现在的家乡及个人感受 确定人称：以第一人称（I/my）和第三人称（it/its）为主 注意事项：需包含题干中所有提示信息，词数80左右。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头：总述家乡发生了巨大变化，引出话题。 中间：按照“过去→现在”的时间顺序进行对比描述。先写过去的状况；再写现在的变化，通过今昔对比突出变化之大。 结尾：表达个人感受。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：总述变化 Great changes have taken place in.../...has changed a lot./Great changes have happened in.../My hometown is different from before./There have been great changes in... 要点二：过去的家乡 In the past/...years ago, the roads were narrow and rough./Houses were old/small./People mainly walked/rode bikes/went out on foot/by bike./Life was slow/quiet/The pace of life was slow... 要点三：现在的家乡 But now/Today, everything is different./Tall buildings stand everywhere./Wide highways and modern railways connect us to the outside world./E-payment is widely used./Life is convenient and fast./...making life convenient... 要点四：个人感受 I feel proud/happy/amazed./I am proud of these changes./I think my hometown is becoming better and better./I believe it will be even better in the future./Although life is faster/different, I... 能力综合实践4篇 9．假设你叫李明，某中学生英文杂志正在举办题为“Great Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动。你打算向该杂志投稿，请你用英文写一篇短文，分享你家乡的变化。 内容包括： （1）你的家乡过去是什么样子； （2）你的家乡有了哪些变化（例如环境environment、交通traffic、建筑building、经济economy/business等方面）； （3）你对家乡的变化有什么感受。（60词以上） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Great Changes in My Hometown My hometown used to be a poor village with narrow roads and old houses. Few people had cars and we saw few trees. Now changes come. Wide roads connect all places. Tall buildings and parks appear. Buses make travel easy. People live richer lives, and we plant trees for clean air. I am really proud of my hometown and hope it will become better soon. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，一般过去时+一般现在时结合，用一般过去时描述家乡过去面貌，用一般现在时介绍如今的家乡变化 明确要点：家乡过去是什么样子；家乡的变化（环境/交通/建筑/经济等）；对家乡变化的感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出话题，介绍家乡过去的面貌 主体段：分别介绍家乡在环境、交通、建筑、经济等方面的变化 结尾段：写出个人感受，升华主题，展望家乡的未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡过去是什么样子 场景选择：My hometown used to be a poor village / poor village / narrow roads / old houses / a small village / a quiet town / an old countryside area / small old houses / simple buildings等 环境描述：Few trees / narrow roads and old houses / poor environment / dirty roads / polluted rivers / fewer green areas / less beautiful surroundings等 生活状况：Few people had cars / people lived a simple life / life was not convenient / little entertainment / people lived a hard life等 要点二：家乡有了哪些变化 （1）环境方面 场景选择：parks appear / clean air / trees / parks / streets / rivers / hills / green areas等 变化描述：we plant trees for clean air / parks appear / plant lots of trees / build more beautiful parks / clean rivers / protect the environment等 （2）交通方面 场景选择：Wide roads / Buses / roads / shared bikes / new stations / public transport等 变化描述：Wide roads connect all places / Buses make travel easy / wider clean roads / more buses / shared bikes / more public transport等 （3）建筑方面 场景选择：Tall buildings / old houses / buildings / public squares / modern areas等 变化描述：Tall buildings appear / many tall buildings / new houses / large public squares / modern buildings等 （4）经济方面 场景选择：People live richer lives / factories / business / local shops / companies等 变化描述：People live richer lives / factories develop well / more local shops open / business grows quickly / more companies are built等 （5）生活娱乐方面 场景选择：parks appear / cinemas / community centres / sports centres / cultural places等 变化描述：parks appear / more cinemas / different community centres / more activities are available / more places for entertainment等 要点三：对家乡变化的感受 情感选择：I am really proud of my hometown / proud / happy / hopeful / excited等 表达语句：I am really proud of my hometown / I feel happy to see these great changes / I love my hometown more than before等 展望说明：I hope it will become better soon / I hope my hometown will become better and better in the future / I wish my hometown a brighter future等 10．改革开放以来，中国已飞速发展，但同时也存在一些问题，假如你是新时代的中学生Leo，请你根据以下图表的提示写一封信给市长，简要介绍中国的发展变化，分析当前存在的社会问题，并提出你的建议。 Changes in China Amazing achievement modern, richer, convenient Problems we face traffic environment job opportunities For a better future take measures, offer, public transportation we students… 要求： 1. 内容完整，语句通顺，结构清晰； 2. 词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Dear Mayor, I’m Leo, a middle school student. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Dear Mayor, I’m Leo, a middle school student. I’m writing to share my thoughts about our city. China has made amazing progress. Our life is more modern, richer and convenient. However, we also face problems like traffic jams, environmental pollution and fewer job opportunities. To build a better future, I suggest taking measures. The government can offer more public transportation to reduce traffic. Also, we students promise to protect the environment by planting trees and saving energy. I believe our city will become more beautiful if we work together. Yours sincerely, Leo 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信体应用文，写给市长的一封信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图表中关于中国的发展变化、当前存在的社会问题以及建议的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“I’m writing to share my thoughts about our city.”来引出后文重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。先介绍中国的发展变化，如生活更现代化、更富裕、更便利；接着分析当前存在的社会问题，如交通拥堵、环境污染和就业机会减少；最后提出建议，如政府提供更多公共交通、学生保护环境等； 第三步，书写结语。表达“相信城市会更美好”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①amazing progress惊人的进步 ②traffic jams交通拥堵 ③environmental pollution环境污染 ④fewer job opportunities更少的就业机会 ⑤take measures采取措施 [高分句型] ①However, we also face problems like traffic jams, environmental pollution and fewer job opportunities.（使用“like”列举问题，使句子结构清晰，易于理解。） ②I believe our city will become more beautiful if we work together.（“if”引导条件状语从句，表达对未来的美好期望。） 11．你校将举办以“How I Have Changed”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你撰写一篇英文演讲稿，围绕学习习惯、性格品质、兴趣爱好、待人处事等方面的转变，讲述你的成长故事并抒发诚挚的内心感悟。 要求： 1．根据所给题目，写一篇演讲稿，词数不少于80; 2．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计; 4．请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文     Good morning, everyone! My topic is "How I Have Changed". In the past, I was shy and often felt nervous when speaking in public. My study habits were not good, either. I seldom made plans and sometimes forgot my homework.     However, I have made great changes. I now actively take part in class discussions and have improved my study methods by making weekly plans. I also help classmates with their studies. These changes make me more confident and responsible.     I believe change brings growth. Let’s embrace change and become better ourselves! 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般过去时（过去状态）+一般现在时（现在变化） 明确要点：围绕学习习惯、性格、待人处事等方面，讲述成长转变及内心感悟 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、校名，词数不少于80词   [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：问候听众，点明演讲主题 主体段：对比过去与现在的状态（性格、学习习惯、待人处事） 结尾段：抒发对成长的感悟，发出积极呼吁   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去的状态 性格表现：shy / nervous when speaking in public等 学习习惯：bad study habits / seldom made plans / forgot homework等   要点二：现在的转变 课堂表现：actively take part in class discussions等 学习方法：make weekly plans等 待人处事：help classmates with studies等   要点三：成长感悟 状态变化：more confident and responsible等 呼吁：embrace change / become better ourselves等 12．党的“十九大”提出了乡村振兴的伟大战略，假设你的家乡在政府的帮助下，坚持创建美丽新农村，近几年发生了巨大变化。请以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述你的家乡从过去到现在的变化以及你对家乡未来的期望。 （一）提示： 1. 过去：道路狭窄又泥泞，房子旧而小； 2. 现在：道路宽广干净，呈现很多新的楼房，有超市，环境变得好多了； 3. 展望：希望人们过上幸福的生活 4. with the support of… 在……支持下 （二）注意： 1. 写作内容需包含所提示信息，内容可适当发挥； 2. 表达清晰，语法正确，逻辑合理，上下文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实的姓名、校名； 4. 词数 70 左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 The Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot over the years. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 The Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot over the years. In the past, the roads were narrow and muddy, and the houses were old and small. People lived a hard life. With the support of the government, great changes have taken place. Now the roads are wide and clean. Many new tall buildings stand everywhere, and there is a supermarket. The environment has become much greener and more beautiful. I hope my hometown will become better and better, and people will live a happier life in the future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以对比的方式描述家乡的变化，语言简洁流畅。 明确人称：第一人称（my hometown / I），贴合个人对家乡的观察与感受。 确定要点：包含 “过去家乡的面貌、现在家乡的变化、对家乡未来的展望” 三个核心要点，信息完整。 注意事项：未提及真实姓名、校名及具体地名，符合写作规范。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：用“My hometown has changed a lot over the years.”总起，点明家乡发生了巨大变化 主体段：先介绍家乡过去的面貌，再说明家乡现在的变化 结尾段：表达对家乡未来的展望，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去的家乡 时间标志：in the past/used to be/years ago等 道路状况： narrow and muddy/dirty/bumpy等 房屋状况：old and small/ made of wood/small and crowded等 生活状态：lived a hard life/lived a simple but hard life等 要点二：现在的家乡 道路变化：wide and clean/wide and smooth/paved roads 建筑变化：many new tall buildings/a supermarket/more shops and supermarkets /tall buildings line the streets等 环境变化：become much greener and more beautiful/the air is fresher/the water is cleaner /has improved a lot等 要点三：未来展望 展望表达：become better and better/live a happier life/keep developing/more beautiful/live a comfortable and happy life等 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $