摘要:
**基本信息**
以“变化”主题写作为核心,构建“词汇-句型-方法-训练”四层体系,系统培养语言表达与逻辑构建能力,契合语言能力与思维品质素养发展。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作素材库|4类主题词汇、13个高频搭配、4类功能表达|按主题与功能分类整理,强化词汇精准运用|从基础词汇到功能表达,构建“词-搭配-句式”基础链|
|黄金句型库|3类基础句型、6组升级对比|提供开头-主体-结尾框架,通过基础/升级句对比提升表达|句型按写作结构分层,实现从简单句到复杂句的逻辑递进|
|高分写作方法|5步成文法(审题-结构-内容-语言-检查)|明确“今昔对比+不变事物”写作框架,强调细节与感受融入|以“审题定位-结构搭建-内容丰富”为逻辑主线,形成完整写作流程|
|阶梯训练|句子训练(3级)、篇章训练(3篇)|通过汉译英、仿写、升级实现句子层面突破,篇章训练覆盖不同“变化”场景|从句子到篇章,由易到难分层进阶,巩固“词汇-句型-方法”综合运用|
内容正文:
Unit 1 The Changing World
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
学校与学习
primary school 小学
junior high school 初中
classroom 教室
subject 学科
teacher 老师
classmate 同学
homework 家庭作业
exam 考试
grade 年级
group discussion 小组讨论
confidence 信心
家庭与生活
flat 公寓
house 房子
neighbourhood 社区
transport 交通
bus 公共汽车
bike 自行车
road 道路
bridge 桥
environment 环境
facility 设施
变化与发展的动词
change 改变
develop 发展
improve 改善
build 建造
grow 增长
increase 增加
reduce 减少
move 搬家
open 开放
complete 完成
描述变化的副词
greatly 大大地
gradually 逐渐地
quickly 快速地
slowly 缓慢地
sharply 急剧地
dramatically 显著地
2. 高频搭配
used to do sth 过去常常做某事
get used to 习惯于
be different from 与……不同
in the past 在过去
at present 目前
over the years 多年来
take place 发生
bring about 带来
be covered with 被……覆盖
cut down 砍倒
benefit from 从……受益
as a result 结果
with the help of 在……的帮助下
3. 写作功能表达
描述过去的状态
I used to ... 我过去常常……
There used to be ... 过去有……
When I was in primary school,... 当我上小学时……
描述现在的状态
Now I ... 现在我……
I have become ... 我已经变得……
My life has changed a lot. 我的生活改变了很多。
There are more ... now. 现在有更多的……
描述变化过程
Over the past few years,... 在过去的几年里……
Great changes have taken place. 巨大的变化已经发生。
... has improved a lot. ……已经改善了很多。
表达不变的事物
One thing stays the same. 有一件事没有变。
... remains unchanged. ……保持不变。
I still ... 我仍然……
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
Now that I am older,my life is different from when I was in primary school.
现在我已经长大了,我的生活和小时候不同了。
Great changes have taken place in my life over the past few years.
在过去的几年里,我的生活发生了巨大的变化。
Let me share with you how my life has changed.
让我和你分享我的生活是如何变化的。
2. 主体句型
My primary school was near my home,so I used to walk to school with my parents.
我的小学在我家附近,所以我过去常常和父母一起走路去上学。
Now my junior high school is farther from home. I take a bus every day.
现在我的初中离家更远了。我每天坐公交车上学。
My family used to live in a small flat,but now we have moved to a much larger one.
我的家人过去住在一个小公寓里,但现在我们搬到了一个更大的房子里。
I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions.
我在学习上变得更有信心了,经常参加小组讨论。
3. 结尾句型
My life has changed in many ways,but one thing stays the same: ...
我的生活在很多方面都发生了变化,但有一件事没有变:……
I am really happy with the changes in my life.
我对生活中的变化感到非常高兴。
These changes have made my life better and more colorful.
这些变化让我的生活变得更好、更多彩。
I believe more great changes will come in the future.
我相信未来会有更多好的变化。
4. 句型升级
基础句
升级句
I used to walk to school. 我过去走路上学。
I used to walk to school with my parents because my primary school was near my home. 我过去和父母一起走路上学,因为我的小学在我家附近。
I take a bus now. 我现在坐公交车。
Now my junior high school is farther from home,so I take a bus with my friends every day. 现在我的初中离家更远了,所以我每天和朋友一起坐公交车。
My family moved to a new flat. 我家搬到了新公寓。
My family used to live in a small flat,but now we have moved to a much larger one with a beautiful view. 我家过去住在一个小公寓里,但现在我们搬到了一个更大的、视野很好的房子里。
I study better now. 我现在学习更好了。
I have become more confident in my studies and I often enjoy studying with my friends in group discussions. 我在学习上变得更有信心了,而且我经常喜欢和朋友们一起进行小组讨论。
My life has changed. 我的生活变了。
My life has changed in many ways,but one thing stays the same: the love and happiness shared by my family. 我的生活在很多方面都发生了变化,但有一件事没有变:家人之间的爱与幸福。
四、高分写作方法
Step 1 审题定位
明确写作任务为“写一篇短文,介绍自己从小学以来生活中的变化”。写作内容应选择自己生活中的3个方面(如学校、家庭、学习、社区、交通、环境等),对比过去和现在的不同,最后写一件不变的事情。
写作形式: 短文(Short Passage)
写作对象: 同学、老师或班级分享
时态要求: 一般过去时(描述过去状态)和现在完成时(描述已发生的变化)并用
Step 2 搭建结构
第一段:引出主题
点明自己的生活和小学时相比已经发生了很多变化。
第二段:具体对比
选择三个方面,逐一进行今昔对比。每个方面先写过去的情况(used to.../There used to be...),再写现在的变化(Now.../...has changed...)。
第三段:总结升华
总结自己的感受,写一件保持不变的事情(如家人的爱、对学习的热爱等),表达对未来的期待。
Step 3 丰富内容
不要只罗列变化,要加入具体细节和感受。例如不只写“I used to walk to school.”,还要写“My primary school was near my home,so I used to walk to school with my parents. It was a happy time.”
Step 4 提升语言
使用used to结构、一般过去时和现在完成时进行对比,使用连接词(so,because,but,however,although)和频率副词(always,usually,often),使文章逻辑清晰、内容丰富。
Step 5 检查修改
检查内容是否完整、结构是否清晰(三段式)、时态是否正确(一般过去时与现在完成时的对比)、used to 结构是否正确、拼写和标点是否有误。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 现在我已经长大了,我的生活和小时候不同了。
____________________________________________________________
2. 我过去常常和父母一起走路去上学。
____________________________________________________________
3. 我家过去住在一个小公寓里,但现在我们搬到了一个更大的房子里。
____________________________________________________________
4. 我在学习上变得更有信心了。
____________________________________________________________
5. 我的生活在很多方面都发生了变化,但有一件事没有变。
____________________________________________________________
Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型 1:I used to...(描述过去的习惯)
例句: I used to walk to school with my parents.
(1)我过去常常骑自行车去上学。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我过去常常在晚上和我的家人一起看电视。
____________________________________________________________
句型 2:Now I...(描述现在的变化)
例句: Now I take a bus to school with my friends.
(1)现在我每天和朋友一起坐公交车上学。
____________________________________________________________
(2)现在我通常用手机和我的朋友联系。
____________________________________________________________
句型 3:My life has changed a lot.(描述整体变化)
例句: My life has changed a lot since I started junior high school.
(1)自从我上了初中,我的学习习惯改变了很多。
____________________________________________________________
(2)在过去的几年里,我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。
____________________________________________________________
句型 4:I have become...(描述自身变化)
例句: I have become more confident in my studies.
(1)我变得更加独立和负责了。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我对学习英语变得更加有兴趣了。
____________________________________________________________
句型 5:... used to be... but now...(对比过去与现在)
例句: My family used to live in a small flat,but now we have moved to a larger one.
(1)这条路过去很窄,但现在很宽。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我的学校过去很小,但现在很大很漂亮。
____________________________________________________________
句型 6:One thing stays the same.(描述不变的事物)
例句: My life has changed in many ways,but one thing stays the same: the love and happiness shared by my family.
(1)我的生活在很多方面都发生了变化,但有一件事没有变:我对阅读的热爱。
____________________________________________________________
(2)一切都在变化,但有一件事始终如一:我父母对我的爱。
____________________________________________________________
Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:I used to walk to school.
升级句:I used to walk to school with my parents because my primary school was near my home.
1. 基础句:I take a bus now.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:My family moved to a new flat.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:I study better now.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:My life has changed.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:I like my new school.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:I have become a better student.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
1.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike想了解你家乡的变化。请你根据下面的提示,给他写一封邮件,介绍你家乡的变化,并谈谈你的感受。
提示:
过去:道路狭窄、脏乱;没有医院,看病难;年轻人外出打工。
现在:新修了宽阔的马路;建了新医院和学校;年轻人返乡创业,生活变好。
感受:为家乡的变化感到骄傲,对未来充满希望。
要求:
包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
词数80~100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about the changes in my hometown. Now let me tell you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
2.请以 Changes in My Family 为题写一篇80–100词的短文,包含以下要点:
1. 过去家庭的生活状态;
2. 如今的变化;
3. 你自身的感受。
4. 词数80–100词。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.某英文报社正在举办以“Changes in My Hometown”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你家乡的变化。要点提示:
1. 家乡过去的样子(交通、环境、生活条件等);
2. 家乡现在的样子(发生了哪些变化);
3. 你对这些变化的感受和看法。
要求:
1. 包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2. 注意使用本单元核心句型(used to、现在完成时等);
3. 词数100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:
narrow 狭窄的;convenient 方便的;environment 环境;development 发展;proud 自豪的
开头:
My hometown has changed a lot over the past few years. When I was young, it was very different from what it is now._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. Now that I am older,my life is different from when I was in primary school.
2. I used to walk to school with my parents.
3. My family used to live in a small flat,but now we have moved to a much larger one.
4. I have become more confident in my studies.
5. My life has changed in many ways,but one thing stays the same.
Level 2 句型仿写
句型 1
(1)I used to go to school by bike.
(2)I used to watch TV with my family in the evening.
句型 2
(1)Now I take a bus to school with my friends every day.
(2)Now I usually keep in touch with my friends by mobile phone.
句型 3
(1)My study habits have changed a lot since I started junior high school.
(2)Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past few years.
句型 4
(1)I have become more independent and responsible.
(2)I have become more interested in learning English.
句型 5
(1)The road used to be very narrow,but now it is very wide.
(2)My school used to be very small,but now it is big and beautiful.
句型 6
(1)My life has changed in many ways,but one thing stays the same: my love for reading.
(2)Everything has changed,but one thing stays the same: my parents’ love for me.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:Now my junior high school is farther from home,so I take a bus with my friends every day.
2. 升级句:My family used to live in a small flat,but now we have moved to a much larger one with a beautiful garden.
3. 升级句:I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions with my classmates.
4. 升级句:My life has changed in many ways,but one thing stays the same: the love and happiness shared by my family.
5. 升级句:I like my new school not only because it is big and beautiful,but also because the teachers are kind and the classes are interesting.
6. 升级句:I have become a better student because I have learned how to manage my time and study more efficiently.
篇章训练(参考范文)
1.例文:
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about the changes in my hometown. Now let me tell you.
In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty. There was no hospital, so people had trouble in seeing doctors. Most young people went to cities to work.
Things are quite different now. Wide new roads have been built. We have a new hospital and a new school. Many young people come back to their hometown to start their own businesses. People’s lives are getting better and better.
I feel proud of these great changes and I am hopeful for its future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
2.例文
Changes in My Family
Great changes have taken place in my family. Years ago, we lived in a small old house. There was only one small TV inside our bedroom.
Now we move into a bright flat. There is a big study next to the living room. Across from the study, there is a tall bookshelf filled with different books. We also have computers and smart home machines now.
These changes make our daily life far more comfortable. I really feel thankful for social progress.
3.例文
My hometown has changed a lot over the past few years. When I was young, it was very different from what it is now.
In the past, it was a small village with narrow dirty roads. People used to walk or ride bikes to the nearest town, with no supermarkets or hospitals. The hills used to be bare and the river was polluted.
Now great changes have taken place. New wide clean roads have appeared, many people have bought cars for easier travel. The government has built a new hospital and several supermarkets. Green trees cover the hills and the river is clean again.
I feel proud of my hometown. I hope we can protect the environment while developing, to make it a better place to live.
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