冲突和解感情修复类 读后续写讲义-浙江省北斗星盟2025-2026学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；递进句，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)!【】 浙江省北斗星盟2025-2026学年高二下学期期末考试 英语 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 "Time's up! The match is over!" the official announced. "The Hawks win." Blinking back tears, Avery walked slowly off the football field. She'd just missed the decisive penalty kick (点球), costing her team the Eagles a place in the final. On the bench sat her teammate Zoey, who had messed up twice herself in the match. Though she and Avery had always got along well as teammates, anger at the team's loss and her own careless mistakes got the better of her. "Thanks," she said coldly. "Now we're not going to the finals." "That was mean, Zoey. We're a team!" another teammate protested. Turning to Avery, she added, "Don't worry — we all miss shots sometimes." At the words, Zoey's heart sank with a jolt. She knew clearly she was also to blame and had no right to blame Avery alone. Regret crept over her at once, yet pride held her back from saying sorry right away. Uncomfortable and guilty, she fell completely silent. Avery, however, was too wrapped up in her own hurt to notice Zoey's guilty look. She turned away quietly and headed to meet her dad at Subbee's for lunch. It was late afternoon, so they had the place to themselves. As the sandwich maker prepared her order, Avery's mind kept replaying the final seconds of the match and blaming herself. Standing in front of the cash register, Dad asked if she wanted to "pay it forward", a kind act they'd received before. Since then, Avery and Dad occasionally paid that kindness forward when eating out by covering the next customer's order, delighting deeply in their genuine, cheerful reactions. Though still feeling down, Avery agreed, hoping to cheer herself up, and handed over five dollars from her allowance to cover another meal. Sitting at the table, they unwrapped their sandwiches and guessed who would get the free meal. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:Just then, the door opened, and Avery froze — it was Zoey.  Paragraph 2:  At that moment, Zoey determined to say something that had been bothering her. 浙江省北斗星盟2025-2026学年高二下学期期末考试 英语 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 "Time's up! The match is over!" the official announced. "The Hawks win." Blinking back tears【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, Avery walked slowly off the football field. She'd just missed the decisive penalty kick (点球), costing her team the Eagles a place in the final【现在分词短语做结果状语】. On the bench sat her teammate Zoey【完全倒装句】, who had messed up twice herself in the match. Though she and Avery had always got along well as teammates, anger at the team's loss and her own careless mistakes got the better of her.【无灵主语句，冲突点】 "Thanks," she said coldly. "Now we're not going to the finals." "That was mean, Zoey. We're a team!" another teammate protested. Turning to Avery【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, she added, "Don't worry — we all miss shots sometimes." At the words, Zoey's heart sank with a jolt. She knew clearly she was also to blame and had no right to blame Avery alone. Regret crept over her at once, yet pride held her back from saying sorry right away. Uncomfortable and guilty【adj.做主语补语】, she fell completely silent. Avery, however, was too wrapped up in her own hurt to notice Zoey's guilty look【伏笔】. She turned away quietly and headed to meet her dad at Subbee's for lunch. It was late afternoon, so they had the place to themselves. As the sandwich maker prepared her order, Avery's mind kept replaying the final seconds of the match and blaming herself. Standing in front of the cash register【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, Dad asked if she wanted to "pay it forward", a kind act they'd received before. Since then, Avery and Dad occasionally paid that kindness forward when eating out by covering the next customer's order, delighting deeply in their genuine, cheerful reactions.【现在分词短语做伴随动作】 Though still feeling down, Avery agreed, hoping to cheer herself up【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, and handed over five dollars from her allowance to cover another meal. Sitting at the table【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, they unwrapped their sandwiches and guessed who would get the free meal. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:Just then, the door opened, and Avery froze — it was Zoey.  Paragraph 2:  At that moment, Zoey determined to say something that had been bothering her. 参考范文（作答示例） Just then, the door opened, and Avery froze—it was Zoey. Memories of Zoey's cold and hurtful words after the match rushed into her mind at once.【无灵主语句】 Filled with embarrassment and unease【过去分词短语做原因状语】, Avery tried to stay out of sight, unwilling to have a face-to-face talk with Zoey so soon【adj.短语做主语补语】. She watched silently as Zoey walked to the counter to place her order. After choosing a sandwich and a cookie, Zoey got ready to pay, but the cashier told her all her food had been paid for in advance. Shocked and delighted by the unexpected kindness【adj.短语做主语补语】, Zoey glanced around the empty shop and soon spotted Avery. A wave of embarrassment washed over her【无灵主语句】. At that moment, Zoey determined to say something that had been bothering her. She walked over to Avery and lowered her head in sincere apology. "Avery, I...I shouldn't have said【虚拟语气】 what I did." She paused, avoiding Avery's eyes for a moment before meeting them again【现在分词短语做伴随动作】. "I'm just as much to blame for the loss as you are. I'm sorry." Avery stayed quiet for a few seconds, then relaxed her look and let out a gentle sigh. "It's all right. Next time, we'll get through it together." Smiles returning to their faces【无灵主语句】, they came to understand that teamwork meant sharing both victory and failure, and true teammates should tolerate each other's faults rather than lay blame on one another. Part 1 读后续写文本分析 一、文章类型分析 分析项目 内容 主题类型 人与人（Teamwork & Forgiveness） 题材类型 校园体育比赛+成长教育 冲突类型 队友误解→内心愧疚→善意化解矛盾 情感主线 自责 → 埋怨 → 愧疚 → 善意 → 原谅 → 团队成长 价值主题 Kindness heals wounds；Forgiveness rebuilds friendship；A real team stands together in victory and defeat. 续写模式 双向救赎型（Both characters grow）+ 善意传递型（Pay It Forward） 高考考查重点 情感变化、人物心理、伏笔回收、首尾呼应、主题升华 二、这是一篇什么类型的续写？ 这是一篇典型的"误会（冲突）—善意（契机）—道歉（化解）—成长（升华）"模式。 它并不是解决一个外部困难，而是解决人物之间的情感冲突（Internal Conflict）。 因此续写重点不是写事情，而是写心理变化（Emotion Development）。 高考近年来非常喜欢这一类：比赛失败——友情修复——人物成长——主题升华 例如： · 体育比赛 · 校园活动 · 志愿服务 · 家庭矛盾 · 社区互助 三、故事核心脉络 比赛失败 →Avery罚丢点球 →Zoey情绪失控责怪Avery →Zoey马上后悔 →（伏笔①） Avery伤心离开 → 来到Subbee's→ Pay It Forward →（伏笔②）Zoey进入餐厅 → （续写开始）善意感动Zoey→ Zoey道歉→Avery原谅→ 重新成为真正的Team 四、续写布局 第一段（制造巧合+推动剧情） 主要任务：Pay It Forward → Zoey发现 → 内心震动 建议节奏： ① Zoey进入餐厅→② Avery发现竟然是Zoey→③ Zoey得知免费午餐来自Avery→④ Avery没有计较比赛→⑤ Zoey更加愧疚 第一段结束最好形成：Zoey再也无法逃避自己的错误。 这样正好衔接第二段：At that moment, Zoey determined to say something... 第二段（情感爆发+主题升华） 建议节奏：Zoey道歉→承认自己错误→Avery说自己也一直责怪自己→双方互相理解→Dad给予一句点题的话（可有可无）→重新成为队友→主题：A team wins together and loses together. 五、续写一定要回扣的原文伏笔 原文伏笔 如何回扣 Zoey后悔了 必须道歉 Avery一直自责 可以表达自己的压力 Pay It Forward 必须成为化解矛盾的重要契机 Dad在场 可以作为见证者，不宜成为主要人物 Sandwich Shop 全程地点最好不要改变 Teamwork 结尾一定回归Team精神 六、续写容易犯的错误 错误 为什么扣分 Zoey没有道歉 与第二段首句冲突 Avery主动先原谅 削弱Zoey成长 Dad说很多大道理 抢主角戏份 又写足球比赛 偏离主题 新增教练、妈妈等人物 高考续写忌讳 写未来比赛夺冠 时间跨度过大 七、高分续写设计 技巧一：善意推动剧情 不是：Zoey直接说Sorry. 而是：先发现：免费午餐竟然是Avery送的。心理冲击更大。 技巧二：情感递进 不要：生气→道歉→结束 而应该：震惊→愧疚→挣扎→鼓起勇气→真诚道歉→释怀 技巧三：双向成长 不仅Zoey成长。Avery也成长：从"I lost the game."变成"We lost together." 技巧四：回收标题伏笔 Pay It Forward不仅是付钱。更是Passing kindness forward.也是 Passing forgiveness forward. 主题瞬间升华。 八、故事核心脉络 内容 分析 起因 Avery罚丢点球，球队输球 矛盾 Zoey责怪Avery 转折 Zoey立即后悔却拉不下面子 契机 Avery支付Pay It Forward 高潮 Zoey发现免费午餐来自Avery 结局 道歉、原谅、团队重建 九、关键线索梳理 项目 内容 人物 Avery、Zoey、Dad、队友、店员 核心道具 足球、点球、五美元、Sandwich、Cash Register 核心事件 Missed penalty → Blame → Pay It Forward → Apology 情感基调 Sad → Guilty → Warm → Forgiving → Hopeful 续写伏笔 Zoey后悔、Dad提议Pay It Forward、Zoey进入餐厅 十、文本分析（表格） 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Avery善良、自责；Zoey冲动但本性善良；Dad温暖理性 Though she was still feeling down, Avery agreed... 情感层次 自责→埋怨→愧疚→善意→释怀→成长 Regret crept over her at once... 关键情节点 点球失误；Zoey责怪；Pay It Forward；Zoey进店 The match is over... / Just then, the door opened... 语言特色 心理描写丰富；动作细腻；大量情绪动词 Blinking back tears... Heart sank... 关键词分析 penalty kick；team；regret；kindness；pay it forward；allowance Pay it forward... 心理描写 Avery不断责怪自己；Zoey愧疚又放不下面子 Avery's mind kept replaying... / Pride held her back... 动作描写 walked slowly；turned away；handed over；sat；unwrapped Avery walked slowly... 环境描写 傍晚、餐厅安静、只有父女二人 It was late afternoon... 隐含主题 真正的团队一起承担失败；善意可以修复关系 We're a team! 情感转折 比赛失败→责怪→愧疚→善举→原谅 Zoey's heart sank... 空间转换 Football field → Subbee's headed to meet her dad at Subbee's 时间过渡 比赛结束→下午→Zoey进入餐厅 It was late afternoon... Just then... 十一、续写构思（苏格拉底式提问） 以下问题可循序渐进地引导学生自主完成续写。 第一层：梳理情节 1. Avery为什么会愣住（freeze）？ 2. Zoey此时为什么会来到Subbee's？ 3. Zoey是否知道Avery也在这里？ 4. 父亲有没有提前告诉Zoey是谁替她付的钱？ 5. Avery看到Zoey后的第一反应应该是什么？ 第二层：寻找伏笔 1. 文中最大的伏笔是什么？ 2. 为什么作者专门介绍了"Pay It Forward"？ 3. 五美元在续写中仅仅是钱吗？ 4. Dad为什么会提出这个建议？ 5. Zoey得知免费午餐来自Avery后，内心会发生哪些变化？ 第三层：人物心理 1. Zoey为什么一直没有立即道歉？ 2. 什么事情最终促使她鼓起勇气？ 3. Avery是否还在责怪Zoey？为什么？ 4. Avery听到道歉后，第一反应可能是什么？ 5. 两人真正需要原谅的是谁？只是彼此，还是也包括自己？ 第四层：语言描写 1. 如果不用"I'm sorry"，还能怎样表达Zoey的歉意？ 2. 如何通过动作描写表现Zoey的紧张？ 3. 如何通过眼神、停顿、沉默表现人物情绪？ 4. Avery可以用哪些细节表现她已经放下了怨气？ 5. Dad是否需要说很多话，还是一个微笑、一个眼神就足够？ 第五层：主题升华 1. "Pay It Forward"除了表示替别人付款，还象征着什么？ 2. 一支真正的球队面对失败时应该如何承担责任？ 3. 为什么善意往往比争辩更有力量？ 4. 如果你是Zoey，这次经历会让你学会什么？ 5. 如果你是Avery，这次经历会改变你对失败和队友的看法吗？ 6. 作者希望读者记住的是一场失败的比赛，还是一次关于宽容与团队精神的成长？ 十二、高分立意总结 层次 主题表达 第一层 Kindness can soften anger.（善意能够融化怨气。） 第二层 A real teammate never faces failure alone.（真正的队友不会让任何人独自承担失败。） 第三层 Forgiveness is another way of paying kindness forward.（宽恕，也是善意的传递。） 第四层（最佳立意） Winning matches is important, but rebuilding trust through kindness and forgiveness is an even greater victory.（赢得比赛固然重要，但用善意和宽恕重建信任，才是更大的胜利。） Part 2 高考英语读后续写语料积累 一、动作描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. Avery lowered her head, her fingers tightening around the sandwich wrapper. Avery低下头，手指不由自主地攥紧了三明治包装纸。 2. Zoey hesitated at the doorway, her feet refusing to move forward. Zoey犹豫地站在门口，双脚仿佛不听使唤。 3. She bit her lip and slowly walked toward Avery's table. 她咬着嘴唇，慢慢朝Avery的桌子走去。 4. Avery forced a faint smile, though her eyes still looked tired. Avery勉强挤出一丝微笑，但眼神依然疲惫。 5. Zoey lowered her eyes, twisting the corner of her shirt nervously. Zoey低着头，紧张地拧着衣角。 6. Their eyes met for a brief second before both looked away. 两人的目光短暂相遇，又同时移开。 7. Avery gave a small nod, inviting Zoey to sit beside her. Avery轻轻点头，示意Zoey坐下。 8. Zoey took a deep breath before finally speaking. Zoey深吸一口气，终于开口。 9. Avery reached out and gently patted Zoey on the shoulder. Avery伸出手，轻轻拍了拍Zoey的肩膀。 10. They exchanged a warm smile, and the tension quietly melted away. 她们相视一笑，紧张的气氛悄然消散。 二、心理描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. Guilt flooded through Zoey like a rising tide. 愧疚如潮水般涌上Zoey心头。 2. Avery blamed herself over and over again. Avery一遍遍责怪自己。 3. A lump formed in Zoey's throat. Zoey喉咙一阵发紧。 4. Regret weighed heavily on her heart. 悔意沉甸甸地压在她心头。 5. Her confidence crumbled in an instant. 她的自信瞬间崩塌。 6. Relief slowly replaced the burden in her heart. 如释重负渐渐取代了心中的沉重。 7. Tears blurred Avery's vision for a moment. 泪水一时模糊了Avery的视线。 8. Her heart skipped a beat when she recognized Zoey. 当认出Zoey时，她心跳漏了一拍。 9. She felt warmth spreading through her heart. 一股暖意缓缓流淌进她心里。 10. For the first time that day, Avery truly smiled. 那一天，Avery第一次真正露出了笑容。 三、环境描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. The restaurant was unusually quiet in the late afternoon. 傍晚的餐厅格外安静。 2. Golden sunlight streamed through the windows. 金色的阳光透过窗户洒进来。 3. Warm light softened the silent atmosphere. 温暖的灯光柔和了沉默的气氛。 4. The air was filled with the smell of freshly baked bread. 空气中弥漫着新鲜面包的香味。 5. Outside, the evening breeze gently rustled the trees. 餐厅外，晚风轻轻吹动树叶。 6. The quiet restaurant seemed to hold its breath. 安静的餐厅仿佛屏住了呼吸。 7. The setting sun painted the room in soft orange light. 落日将餐厅染成温暖的橙色。 8. Time seemed to slow as silence filled the room. 沉默笼罩整个房间，时间仿佛慢了下来。 9. Gentle music floated through the restaurant. 轻柔的音乐飘荡在餐厅里。 10. Everything felt calmer than before. 一切都比刚才平静了许多。 四、高考续写高频高级替换词 （一）表示"说" 普通词 高级表达 say remark say whisper say murmur say admit say respond 适用场景：道歉、安慰、解释 （二）表示"看" 普通词 高级表达 look glance at look stare at look gaze at look cast a look at look steal a glance at （三）表示"走" walk 高级替换 walk approach walk make one's way to walk step toward walk head for walk wander over （四）表示"高兴" happy 高级表达 delighted relieved overjoyed cheerful thrilled （五）表示"难过" sad 高级表达 heartbroken upset discouraged miserable devastated （六）表示"紧张" nervous 高级表达 uneasy anxious restless tense on edge （七）表示"愧疚" guilty 高级表达 ashamed remorseful regretful apologetic conscience-stricken 五、本篇文章固定搭配及词法解析 搭配 中文 词法解析 常见搭配 blame oneself for 因……责怪自己 blame sb. for sth. blame others for pay it forward 将善意传递下去 固定习语 kindness, favor miss a penalty kick 踢丢点球 miss + 比赛机会 miss a chance get the better of 占上风；控制 固定短语 Anger got the better of her. hold sb. back 阻止；使退缩 hold back tears/words hold back laughter replay the moment 反复回想 replay + memory replay the scene cover one's order 为别人买单 cover the cost cover expenses cheer oneself up 让自己振作 cheer up cheer sb. up freeze in surprise 愣住 freeze with fear/shock freeze at the sight break the silence 打破沉默 固定搭配 break the awkward silence 六、可积累高频短语 短语 中文 近义词 反义词 例句① 例句② blame oneself for 自责 reproach oneself; criticize oneself forgive oneself Avery blamed herself for the loss. Stop blaming yourself for every mistake. get the better of 控制；战胜 overcome; defeat lose control of Anger got the better of Zoey. Fear got the better of him. hold back 忍住；抑制 suppress; restrain let out She held back her tears. He couldn't hold back his laughter. be wrapped up in 沉浸于 be absorbed in; be lost in ignore Avery was wrapped up in guilt. He was wrapped up in his thoughts. pay it forward 传递善意 pass on kindness; return kindness ignore kindness They decided to pay it forward. Small kindnesses often pay forward. sink with guilt 愧疚不已 feel ashamed; be overwhelmed with guilt feel proud Her heart sank with guilt. He sank into silence with guilt. make up for 弥补 compensate for; redeem worsen She wanted to make up for her mistake. Hard work made up for his lack of talent. reach out 主动伸出援手 offer help; extend a hand withdraw Avery reached out to comfort Zoey. He reached out and shook her hand. let go of 放下 release; give up hold onto Avery finally let go of the disappointment. It's time to let go of the past. rebuild trust 重建信任 restore confidence destroy trust Kindness helped rebuild trust. Honest talks can rebuild trust. 七、可直接套用的高分语料 ① 道歉场景 · I'm sorry. I should never have blamed you. · Those words came from my frustration, not my heart. · I regret every word I said. · Please forgive me for being so unfair. · You didn't deserve that. ② 原谅场景 · We're teammates, and teammates don't blame each other forever. · We all make mistakes. · Let's leave the match behind us. · What matters is that we learn from it. · I'm glad you told me the truth. ③ 情感升华 · Kindness has a quiet way of healing broken hearts. · A simple act of kindness can mend what anger breaks. · Failure divides a team only when people stop caring for one another. · Real teammates share both victories and defeats. · Sometimes forgiveness is the greatest victory of all. 八、值得积累的高级表达 场景 推荐表达 愧疚 guilt washed over her; regret flooded her heart; shame burned inside her 自责 blame oneself endlessly; be consumed by guilt; replay the mistake repeatedly 紧张 take a deep breath; gather one's courage; hesitate for a moment 沉默 an awkward silence fell between them; silence hung in the air; neither spoke for several seconds 宽恕 offer a forgiving smile; let go of the hurt; accept the apology wholeheartedly 团队 stand together through victory and defeat; shoulder responsibility together; true teammates never leave each other behind 善意 a small act of kindness; pass kindness forward; kindness speaks louder than words 结尾升华 It was not the free meal but the kindness behind it that truly warmed their hearts. / In that quiet restaurant, they found something far more valuable than victory—a friendship strengthened by forgiveness and kindness. Part 3 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1 Just then, the door opened, and Avery froze—it was Zoey. The painful memories of the football field instantly came flooding back【无灵主语句】, making Avery lower her eyes unconsciously【现在分词短语做结果状语】. She was not ready to face Zoey after those sharp words, so she quietly looked down at her sandwich, pretending not to notice her teammate.【现在分词短语做伴随动作】 Meanwhile, Zoey walked to the counter with mixed feelings still weighing on her heart. As she reached for her wallet, the cashier smiled and said that someone had already paid for her meal. Confused at first【adj.做主语补语】, Zoey looked around the nearly empty restaurant until her eyes rested on Avery. At once, everything became clear. Avery, the very person she had blamed only hours before, had chosen kindness instead of resentment, even though without knowing who would be the next one to receive the kindness. Ashamed of herself, Zoey stood motionless, her heart pounding with guilt【独立主格】. At last, she realized that silence could no longer make up for the hurt she had caused. Paragraph 2 At that moment, Zoey determined to say something that had been bothering her. Walking slowly toward Avery and her Dad, she stopped beside the table and whispered, "I'm sorry." Her voice trembled as she admitted that frustration had got the better of her after the match and that blaming Avery had only been a way to escape her own disappointment. Avery looked up, surprised but calm【adj.做补语】. "I was blaming myself, too," she said softly. "But a match is never lost by one person alone." Hearing those words【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, Zoey finally felt the weight on her heart disappear. The two girls smiled at each other, and the awkwardness between them quietly melted away【无灵主语句】. As Avery asked Zoey to sit with her and her Dad, her Dad quietly exchanging a knowing smile with her【独立主格】, they understood that true teammates never let one another carry failure alone, just as kindness becomes more meaningful when it is passed on. Version 2 Paragraph 1 Just then, the door opened, and Avery froze—it was Zoey. Zoey seemed equally surprised. Their eyes met briefly before both quickly looked away. Feeling awkward【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, Avery turned back to her meal, while Zoey slowly walked toward the cashier. After placing her order, she searched her pockets for money. To her surprise, the cashier handed her the food with a smile and explained that another customer had already covered the bill. Following the cashier's glance【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, Zoey finally noticed Avery sitting quietly by the window. Instead of avoiding her, Avery simply gave a small nod, as gentle as the afternoon sunlight pouring through the glass. That simple gesture touched Zoey far more deeply than any words could have done. Paragraph 2 At that moment, Zoey determined to say something that had been bothering her. Taking a deep breath【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, she walked over with the sandwich in her hands. "I owe you an apology," she began. "After the match, I was angry with myself, but I unfairly took it out on you." Avery listened quietly before replying with a faint smile, "We both made mistakes, and that's part of being on a team." Zoey nodded, tears shining in her eyes【独立主格】. The heavy silence that had separated them since the game was finally broken. Dad watched the two girls with a satisfied smile. It dawned on Avery that a small act of kindness had achieved something far greater than paying for lunch. As they walked out together, the disappointment of losing gradually gave way to the warmth of understanding, reminding them that【现在分词短语做结果状语】 friendship is strongest when tested by failure. Version 3 Paragraph 1 Just then, the door opened, and Avery froze—it was Zoey. Avery's first instinct was to turn away, afraid【adj.做主语补语】that another uncomfortable moment would follow. Yet Zoey looked no better. With her shoulders slightly lowered, she walked silently to the counter, still haunted by the scene on the football field【过去分词短语做主语补语】. Moments later, the cashier informed her that her meal had already been paid for. Puzzled【adj.做主语补语】, Zoey looked around and immediately found Avery sitting quietly beside her father. Their eyes met once again, but instead of anger, Avery offered only a peaceful smile. The unexpected kindness struck Zoey deeply. She suddenly realized that while Avery had been trying to spread kindness despite her own sadness, she herself had been trapped in blame and regret. Paragraph 2 At that moment, Zoey determined to say something that had been bothering her. She walked over and sincerely apologized for everything she had said after the match. "Missing the penalty wasn't the only reason we lost," she admitted. "I made mistakes too, but I was too proud to admit them." Avery smiled gently and replied, "I wasn't angry with you. I only wished we could have faced it together." Those simple words immediately eased the guilt Zoey had carried all afternoon. The two girls exchanged relieved smiles, feeling as though the burden of the match had finally been lifted【现在分词短语做伴随动作】. Looking at them【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, Dad quietly realized that paying kindness forward was not merely about buying someone lunch. Sometimes, it meant offering understanding when it was hardest to do so. Together, the teammates left the restaurant, carrying with them not the memory of defeat but the lesson【现在分词短语做伴随动作】 that kindness and trust are the greatest victories of all. 练习题包（默写与仿写） 第一部分：原文佳句默写（共15句） 请根据所给中文和英文提示，补全空白处的单词或短语。 她眨着眼忍住泪水，慢慢地走下足球场。 Blinking back tears, Avery walked ______ off the football field. 她对球队失利以及自己粗心失误的愤怒让她控制不住自己。 ...anger at the team's loss and her own careless mistakes ______ ______ ______ ______ her. "那太刻薄了，Zoey。我们是一个团队！"另一个队友抗议道。 "That was ______, Zoey. We're a ______!" another teammate protested. 听到这话，Zoey的心猛地一沉。 At the words, Zoey's heart ______ ______ a jolt. 她清楚地知道自己也该被责备，无权只责怪Avery一个人。 She knew clearly she was also ______ ______ and had no right to blame Avery alone. 后悔立刻涌上心头，然而自尊心让她没能立刻道歉。 Regret ______ ______ her at once, yet ______ held her back from saying sorry right away. 她又尴尬又内疚，完全陷入了沉默。 Uncomfortable and ______, she fell completely ______. Avery沉浸在自己的伤痛中，完全没有注意到Zoey内疚的表情。 Avery, however, was too ______ ______ in her own hurt to notice Zoey's guilty look. 她静静地转身离开，去Subbee's和她爸爸见面吃午饭。 She turned ______ quietly and headed to meet her dad at Subbee's for lunch. Avery的脑海里不停地回放着比赛的最后几秒，并自责着。 Avery's mind kept ______ the final seconds of the match and ______ herself. 从那时起，Avery和爸爸在外出吃饭时偶尔会传递这份善意。 Since then, Avery and Dad occasionally ______ that kindness ______ when eating out. 她们给别人买单时，总是发自内心地享受他们真诚而开心的反应。 ...delighting deeply in their ______, ______ reactions. 虽然心情还是很低落，Avery还是同意了，希望能让自己高兴起来。 Though still feeling ______, Avery agreed, hoping to ______ herself up. 她从不多的零花钱里拿出五美元来支付另一份餐费。 ...and handed over five dollars from her ______ to ______ another meal. 坐在桌边，他们打开三明治的包装，猜谁会得到这份免费餐。 Sitting at the table, they ______ their sandwiches and ______ who would get the free meal. 第二部分：句子翻译（共12题） 根据中文意思和所给关键词，写出完整的英文句子。 她垂着眼睛，声音几乎听不见。（eyes, voice） 羞愧感像潮水一样涌遍她全身。（shame, flood） 她深吸一口气，走向Avery的桌子。（breath, make her way to） "我不应该那样说。我自己也搞砸了两次。"（shouldn't have, mess up） 听到这句话，Avery抬起头，第一次直视Zoey的眼睛。（raise, meet one's eyes） 沉默在她们之间蔓延，沉重而令人不安。（silence, spread, heavy） 她用手指不安地绕着外套拉链的绳子。（finger, nervously, zip string） 看到Zoey真诚的表情，Avery感到心头的冰在融化。（sincere expression, melt） 她嘴角浮现出一丝微笑，轻轻点了点头。（smile, corner of one's mouth, nod） "坐下吧，"她说，拍了拍旁边的座位。（take a seat, pat） 她们面对面坐着，分享着同一份炸薯条。（face to face, share） 也许输掉这场比赛，是为了让她们赢得一段更珍贵的友谊。（lose, gain, precious） 第三部分：动作·环境·心理描写语料库（共10题） 根据中文提示和所给英文开头，补全句子。 （动作描写·尴尬）Zoey站在门口，手指___________（不安地缠绕着背包带子），不敢向前走。 （动作描写·和解）Avery犹豫了一下，然后___________（朝Zoey的方向微微点了点头），示意她过来。 （心理描写·愧疚）看到Avery低头的样子，Zoey感觉___________（胸口像压了一块石头）。 （心理描写·挣扎）道歉的话到了嘴边，但___________（自尊心又一次勒住了她的喉咙）。 （心理描写·软化）看到Zoey眼里闪烁的泪光，Avery心头的怒气___________（像霜遇到太阳一样消融了）。 （环境描写·氛围）餐厅里很安静，只有___________（烤箱轻微的嗡鸣声和偶尔的盘子碰撞声）。 （环境描写·暗示）午后的阳光___________（斜斜地穿过百叶窗），在桌面上投下一道道温暖的光影。 （动作+心理·鼓起勇气）Zoey___________（握紧拳头，指甲掐进掌心），向前迈出了一步。 （动作+表情·道歉）她___________（低着头，目光落在地板上），声音颤抖着说："对不起。" （心理+动作·如释重负）当Avery说出"没关系"的那一刻，Zoey___________（整个人一下子放松了下来）。 第四部分：高级句式仿写（共6句） 句式1：感官先行 + 你的主要动作 + 即时结果 例句：Hearing Zoey's words, Avery raised her head, her eyes meeting Zoey's for the first time. 仿写：___________________（听到门口传来的声音），Avery froze, ___________________（手里的三明治差点掉下来）。 句式2：无灵主语句 + 现在分词 例句：Regret crept over her at once, leaving her speechless. 仿写：A wave of shame ___________________（席卷了她）, ___________________（让她根本不敢抬头）。 句式3：adj. and adj., 动作链 例句：Uncomfortable and guilty, she fell completely silent. 仿写：___________________（尴尬而又紧张）, she ___________________（站起身，走到Avery面前，张开了嘴却又说不出话来）。 句式4：独立主格 + 句子 例句：Her heart pounding wildly, Zoey made her way to Avery's table. 仿写：___________________（阳光透过窗户斜斜地照进来）, the quiet restaurant seemed to hold its breath for what was about to happen. 句式5：强调句（It was...that...） 例句：It was at that moment that Zoey realized how much her words had hurt Avery. 仿写：（正是在那个瞬间）（Avery明白了）that forgiveness was also a way of "paying it forward". 句式6：递进句（not only...but also...） 例句：She not only apologized for her words but also admitted her own mistakes. 仿写：That free meal ___________________（不仅填饱了Zoey的肚子）but also ___________________（修补了两颗受伤的心）. 参考答案 第一部分：原文佳句默写 slowly got the better of mean / team sank with to blame crept over / pride guilty / silent wrapped up away replaying / blaming paid / forward genuine / cheerful down / cheer allowance / cover unwrapped / guessed 第二部分：句子翻译 Her eyes dropped and her voice was almost inaudible. Shame flooded over her like a tide. She took a deep breath and made her way to Avery's table. "I shouldn't have said that. I messed up twice myself." Hearing this, Avery raised her head and met Zoey's eyes for the first time. Silence spread between them, heavy and unsettling. She nervously twisted the zip string of her jacket around her finger. Seeing Zoey's sincere expression, Avery felt the ice in her heart melting. A smile appeared at the corner of her mouth and she gave a slight nod. "Take a seat," she said, patting the seat beside her. They sat face to face, sharing the same plate of fries. Maybe losing the match was to help them gain a more precious friendship. 第三部分：动作·环境·心理描写语料库 twisting nervously around the strap of her backpack gave a slight nod in Zoey's direction as if a stone were pressing on her chest pride tightened around her throat once again melted like frost under the morning sun the faint hum of the oven and the occasional clatter of dishes slanted through the blinds clenched her fists, her nails digging into her palms lowering her head, her eyes fixed on the floor relaxed all over in an instant 第四部分：高级句式仿写 句式1： Hearing the voice from the door, / almost dropping the sandwich in her hand 句式2： washed over her / leaving her unable to lift her head at all 句式3： Embarrassed and nervous / rose to her feet, walked up to Avery and opened her mouth but no words came out 句式4： Sunlight slanting through the window 句式5： It was at that moment / that Avery realized 句式6： not only filled Zoey's stomach / mended two wounded hearts 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $