浙江省温州环大罗山联盟2025-2026学年第二学期高二期末联考英语读后续写讲义

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；递进句，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 浙江省温州环大罗山联盟2025-2026学年第二学期高二期末联考英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had been so busy with work that I had little time to spend with my nine-year-old son, Mike. Last summer, when I finally had a day off, Mike told me the school would be hosting a cookie auction (拍卖). Each student was supposed to bake cookies with their father. I'd never baked cookies, so we followed the instructions carefully. We opened a packet of instant cookie mix, added the required ingredients, shaped the dough (面团) into small rounds(动作串描写), and confidently placed them on a baking tray in the oven. Taking them out after fifteen minutes(现在分词短语做伴随动作) I was surprised that the cookies were not the golden and perfectly shaped ones I'd seen in ads. In fact, some were unevenly baked, while others had spread too much on the tray. Mike, however, cherished this opportunity to work with me and was so happy that he didn't seem to notice the problem. After letting them cool, we tried decorating the cookies with icing. As a finishing touch, I sprinkled (撒) a few chocolate chips on top, hoping to add a bit of chocolate flavor to the cookies(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that didn't look very appetizing. Mike gave me a proud grin; he thought they looked good. By then, we were already running late. When we finally hurried to the auction, I was stunned. A long table was filled with a fantastic array of exquisitely designed cookies. In contrast, ours looked embarrassing; some were misshapen, the icing had melted, and the chocolate chips were scattered everywhere(简单句并列). I felt a rush of emotion to my face, but Mike didn't seem to be ashamed of our creation. He solemnly placed our cookies at the end of the table. I gave Mike eight dollars, telling him to bid on the cookies(现在分词短语做伴随动作) he liked, hoping(现在分词短语做伴随动作) he would get some nicely made ones to make up for the embarrassment our cookies might bring him. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began.  Paragraph 2: Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. 一、文章类型分析+续写整体构思 （一）文章类型 分类维度 类型 人物关系 亲子关系（父子） 故事情节 成长感悟类（亲情成长） 情感主题 陪伴教育+爱的价值+童真治愈成年人 冲突类型 外部评价（作品不好）+内部心理（父亲羞愧） 价值导向 真正珍贵的是陪伴，而不是作品本身 高考常见母题 Family Love（家庭亲情）+ Understanding（理解）+ Growth（成长） （二）文章核心矛盾 整个故事其实只有一个核心矛盾： 父亲认为"作品不好"，而孩子认为"一起完成最重要"。 全文一直在制造两个世界： 父亲的世界：好不好看→别人怎么看→会不会丢人 Mike的世界：我和爸爸一起做→这是独一无二的→我喜欢 因此：续写一定不能写成"最后大家都夸饼干很好吃"。 真正解决的是：父亲价值观发生改变。 （三）故事发展模型 属于典型高考读后续写： 制造冲突——情节反转——主题升华 建议采用四步法： 第一段 第二段 拍卖开始 Mike花8美元 父亲继续紧张 父亲终于理解 出现竞拍反转 情感升华 为第二段埋伏笔 点题Family Love （四）两段续写布局建议 Paragraph 1 作用：完成故事高潮（Auction） 建议节奏： ① 拍卖开始↓② 精美饼干不断成交↓③ 父亲越来越紧张↓④ 终于轮到他们的饼干↓⑤ 出现一个意料之外的小高潮 例如： · 有人愿意买 · 有几个孩子举牌 · 老师介绍这是父子共同完成 · 大家鼓掌 注意：高潮不要结束。 真正高潮应该留给第二段。 Paragraph 2 开头已经给出：Mike handed over the eight dollars... 说明：Mike一定买到了某样东西。 这里其实已经暗示：Mike没有买漂亮饼干。 最符合逻辑的是：Mike买回来的，就是自己和爸爸做的那袋。为什么？ 因为：这是爸爸第一次陪他做的。 然后，父亲终于理解：真正珍贵的是陪伴。 最后：父子共享饼干。主题升华。 （五）高考阅卷最喜欢的逻辑 建议采用："外在价值→情感价值" 例如： 漂亮↓不好看↓没人买↓Mike买回↓父亲感动↓陪伴无价 这就是最经典高考价值观。 （六）续写需要承接原文的地方 原文内容 后文必须回应 父亲工作忙 为什么这一天珍贵 第一次做饼干 技术不好合理 Mike一直开心 后文继续保持童真 父亲觉得丢人 后文完成心理成长 给Mike八美元 必须使用（已在提示句出现） Cookie Auction 必须写拍卖过程 Chocolate chips 可细节回扣 作品放在最后 可以作为拍卖顺序伏笔 主题升华 最后不要写：Love is important. 要结合故事。例如：Sometimes the most imperfect cookies carry the sweetest memories. 或者 What Mike treasured was never the cookies themselves, but the precious time we spent together. 这种升华最自然。 二、故事核心脉络+关键线索梳理 1. 故事核心脉络 项目 内容 起因 父亲终于有空陪Mike参加学校Cookie Auction。 经过 父子第一次做饼干，成品不好看，但Mike很满足。 冲突 到学校后发现其他家庭作品精美，父亲感到羞愧。 高潮（待续写） Cookie Auction开始。 结局（预测） Mike买回父子共同制作的饼干，父亲理解陪伴的意义。 主题 爱与陪伴比完美更珍贵。 2. 关键线索整理 项目 内容 人物 Father、Mike、Auctioneer、Teacher、Other parents & students 核心道具 Cookie mix、Cookies、Chocolate chips、Icing、Eight dollars 情感基调 温暖、治愈、略带幽默 最大冲突 父亲的羞愧 VS Mike的自豪 最大反转 Mike花8美元买回父子共同完成的饼干。 续写伏笔 Eight dollars、Mike一直很开心、第一次一起做饼干、父亲工作忙。 三、文本细节分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Father：忙碌、责任感强、在意他人评价；Mike：单纯、珍惜陪伴。 I had been so busy with work...；Mike...was so happy... 情感层次 期待→合作→满足→羞愧→（续写）感动。 I was stunned.；I felt a rush of emotion... 关键情节点 做饼干→到拍卖现场→发现差距→拍卖开始→Mike付款。 When we finally hurried to the auction... 语言特色 生活化叙事，大量动作描写配合心理描写，语言朴实自然。 全文叙述风格一致。 关键词分析 busy、cherished、embarrassing、solemnly、auction、eight dollars。 对应全文核心信息。 心理描写 父亲紧张、自责；Mike满足、自豪。 I was stunned.；Mike gave me a proud grin. 动作描写 Opened、added、shaped、placed、sprinkled、hurried、placed。 一系列动作推动情节。 环境描写 拍卖现场摆满精美饼干，形成鲜明对比。 A long table was filled with... 隐含主题 真正珍贵的是陪伴，不是结果。 Mike始终没有嫌弃饼干。 情感转折 开心做饼干→羞愧比较→理解陪伴价值。 I felt a rush of emotion... 空间转换 家里厨房→学校拍卖现场。 When we finally hurried to the auction... 时间过渡 Last summer→After fifteen minutes→After letting them cool→When we finally hurried→Soon。 时间推进自然，为续写提供节奏。 四、苏格拉底式提问（引导学生梳理续写思路） 第一层：理解文本 1. 父亲为什么一直觉得不好意思？ 2. Mike真的在意饼干漂不漂亮吗？为什么？ 3. 作者为什么反复强调这是父子第一次一起做饼干？ 4. "Eight dollars"为什么要特意交代？ 5. 为什么作者把父亲和Mike的心理写得完全不同？ 第二层：预测情节 1. 拍卖开始后，会先拍卖哪一类饼干？ 2. 父亲此时最担心发生什么？ 3. 当轮到父子制作的饼干时，现场可能会出现哪些反应？ 4. 如果没有人竞拍，这会怎样影响故事发展？ 5. 如果有人竞拍，又该如何做到真实可信？ 第三层：分析人物 1. Mike会把8美元花在最漂亮的饼干上吗？为什么？ 2. Mike眼中的"最好"和父亲眼中的"最好"有什么不同？ 3. Mike为什么会把父子共同制作的饼干视为珍宝？ 4. 父亲需要经历怎样的心理变化，才能真正理解Mike？ 第四层：主题升华 1. 故事真正想表达的是"做出漂亮的饼干"，还是"一起做饼干的过程"？ 2. 如果你是父亲，看到Mike最后的选择，会产生怎样的感悟？ 3. 为什么有些不完美的东西反而最值得珍藏？ 4. 你认为标题如果叫 The Best Cookies，其中的 Best 真正指的是什么？ 5. 本文可以概括为哪一句价值观？例如："The sweetest memories are made together, not baked perfectly." 你还能想到哪些类似表达？ 6. 如果让你为故事设计最后一句，你会如何用一句简洁、有感染力的话点明"陪伴胜于完美"这一主题？ Part 2 读后续写语料积累 一、动作描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. Mike clutched the paper bag tightly against his chest. Mike紧紧把纸袋抱在胸前。 2. He slowly raised his hand without the slightest hesitation. 他毫不犹豫地慢慢举起了手。 3. I lowered my head, unable to meet anyone's eyes. 我低下头，不敢与任何人对视。 4. Mike gently placed the cookies back into his backpack. Mike轻轻把饼干放回书包。 5. He turned around with a bright smile lighting up his face. 他转过身，脸上绽放着灿烂的笑容。 6. My fingers tightened unconsciously around the auction card. 我的手指不由自主地攥紧了竞拍牌。 7. I watched him walk toward the table with steady steps. 我望着他迈着坚定的步伐走向桌子。 8. He carefully picked up the bag as if it were made of glass. 他小心翼翼地拿起那袋饼干，仿佛那是玻璃制品。 9. I reached out and gently rested my hand on his shoulder. 我伸出手，轻轻搭在他的肩上。 10. We broke the cookies apart and shared them quietly. 我们轻轻掰开饼干，一起静静分享。 二、心理描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. A wave of embarrassment washed over me. 一阵羞愧涌上心头。 2. My heart sank as our cookies came into view. 当我们的饼干映入眼帘时，我的心沉了下去。 3. I silently wished the auction would end soon. 我默默希望拍卖快点结束。 4. To my surprise, Mike looked perfectly calm. 令我惊讶的是，Mike显得异常平静。 5. His innocent smile eased my anxiety little by little. 他天真的笑容一点点缓解了我的焦虑。 6. I suddenly realized what truly mattered. 我突然意识到什么才是真正重要的。 7. Regret quietly crept into my heart. 悔意悄悄涌上心头。 8. Tears blurred my vision before I knew it. 不知不觉间，泪水模糊了我的视线。 9. My pride melted away in an instant. 我的自尊瞬间融化了。 10. Warmth spread through my heart like sunshine. 温暖如阳光般洒满我的心田。 三、环境描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. Laughter and cheerful chatter filled the room. 欢笑声和交谈声充满了整个教室。 2. The sweet smell of freshly baked cookies floated through the air. 新鲜饼干的香气弥漫在空气中。 3. Sunlight streamed through the classroom windows. 阳光透过教室窗户洒了进来。 4. The colorful cookie bags lined the long table. 五颜六色的饼干袋摆满了长桌。 5. The room suddenly fell silent for a moment. 房间里突然安静了一瞬间。 6. Applause broke out from every corner of the room. 教室四周响起热烈掌声。 7. Excitement buzzed around the auction table. 拍卖桌旁洋溢着兴奋的气氛。 8. Warm afternoon sunlight wrapped everything in golden light. 午后的阳光给一切披上金色光辉。 9. The cheerful atmosphere eased my nervousness. 欢乐的氛围缓解了我的紧张。 10. Happiness seemed to linger in every corner of the classroom. 幸福仿佛停留在教室的每一个角落。 四、高级替换词（按场景分类） （一）"开心"类 普通词 高级替换 happy delighted happy overjoyed happy thrilled happy joyful happy be on cloud nine （二）"紧张"类 普通词 高级替换 nervous anxious nervous uneasy nervous restless nervous tense nervous self-conscious （三）"看"类 普通词 高级替换 look glance look gaze look stare look peek look cast a look at （四）"笑"类 普通词 高级替换 smile grin smile beam smile wear a broad smile smile break into a smile smile flash a smile （五）"拿"类 普通词 高级替换 take grab take pick up take clutch take hold take lift （六）"走"类 普通词 高级替换 walk stride walk step forward walk make one's way walk approach walk head toward 五、固定搭配、词法解析及积累语料 短语/搭配 词义 近义表达 反义表达 例句① 例句② cherish the opportunity 珍惜机会 treasure, value ignore, waste Mike cherished the opportunity to bake with his father. She cherished every moment with her family. be filled with 充满 be full of, overflow with be empty of The room was filled with laughter. His heart was filled with gratitude. a wave of...washed over sb. 一阵……袭来 be overwhelmed by remain calm A wave of embarrassment washed over me. A wave of relief washed over her. can't help doing 忍不住 be unable to resist manage to stop I couldn't help smiling. She couldn't help crying. to one's surprise 令某人惊讶的是 surprisingly as expected To my surprise, Mike looked happy. To everyone's surprise, nobody laughed. break into a smile 突然笑起来 beam, grin burst into tears Mike broke into a smile. She broke into a smile immediately. in contrast 相比之下 by comparison similarly In contrast, ours looked awkward. In contrast, his work stood out. as if 仿佛 as though actually He smiled as if nothing had happened. She treated it as if it were priceless. make up for 弥补 compensate for worsen I wanted to make up for my absence. Nothing could make up for the lost time. mean the world to sb. 对某人意义重大 be priceless to mean nothing to The cookies meant the world to Mike. Your support means the world to me. 六、词法解析（高频表达） 表达 结构解析 用法 cherish doing sth. cherish+名词/V-ing 珍惜做某事 be supposed to do 被期望做…… 高考常考固定结构 add...to... add A to B 向……加入…… sprinkle...on... sprinkle A on B 撒……在……上 rush to... rush to+地点 匆忙赶往 be stunned 系表结构 感到震惊 hand over 动词短语 递交、交出 bid on 动词短语 竞拍 end up doing 固定结构 最终…… treasure sth. 动词 珍视…… 七、积累的高考语料 精品表达 中文 cherish every moment together 珍惜每一次相处 treasure imperfect memories 珍藏不完美却珍贵的回忆 what truly mattered 真正重要的是…… beyond appearances 超越表面 the sweetest memory 最甜蜜的回忆 not because..., but because... 不是因为……而是因为…… every bite carried love 每一口都承载着爱 no cookie could compare with ours 没有任何饼干能比得上我们的 it wasn't the cookie that mattered 重要的不是饼干本身 love can never be measured by perfection 爱从来不能用完美来衡量 八、本篇主题万能金句 英文表达 中文翻译 The cookies were far from perfect, but the memories they carried were priceless. 饼干并不完美，但承载的回忆无价。 Sometimes the simplest moments become the most unforgettable memories. 有时候，最平凡的时刻反而成为最难忘的回忆。 What children treasure is never perfection, but companionship. 孩子珍惜的从来不是完美，而是陪伴。 True love is measured not by what we create, but by the time we share. 真正的爱不是用成果衡量，而是用共同度过的时光衡量。 It was then that I realized the best gift I could offer my son was simply my presence. 就在那一刻，我意识到送给儿子最好的礼物，就是我的陪伴。 Part 3 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: Paragraph 1: Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began. The room instantly fell into a lively buzz, with parents and kids raising hands eagerly for those beautifully decorated cookies(with复合结构). Perfectly-shaped treats with colorful icing were sold one after another at high prices, making(现在分词短语做结果状语)our rough-looking cookies seem even more out of place. Standing beside me(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I noticed Mike staring fixedly at our humble cookies instead of the fancy ones. My heart tightened with embarrassment, fearing he would feel disappointed(现在分词短语做伴随动作). To my great surprise, when our cookie bag was finally put up for auction, Mike immediately raised his hand. No one else bid for our imperfect cookies, leaving me utterly confused about his strange choice.(现在分词短语做结果状语) Paragraph 2: Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. I could not hold back my curiosity anymore and asked him why he chose such ordinary-looking cookies while others were so perfect. Mike looked up at me with bright eyes and said gently, “These are the only cookies we made together. No fancy ones can match the time we spent.” His simple words struck me deeply(无灵主语). All my previous embarrassment and vanity faded away instantly. I realized that what my son valued was never perfect appearance but my company. I knelt down and hugged him tightly, feeling warm tears welling up in my eyes(现在分词短语做伴随动作). That day, I learned the most precious gift for children is parents’ sincere companionship rather than material perfection. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began. One beautifully decorated package after another was auctioned off, each earning cheerful applause and eager bids(独立主格). The lively atmosphere only deepened my discomfort(无灵主语句), for our unevenly baked cookies seemed painfully out of place among those picture-perfect creations. I kept praying that no one would pay much attention when our turn arrived. At last, the auctioneer picked up our humble bag. After a brief pause, the room grew unexpectedly quiet, and I could almost feel my face burning. Just as I wished the moment would pass, Mike confidently lifted his bidding card and announced, "Eight dollars!" His clear, steady voice broke the silence, and, with no competing bid, the cookies belonged to him. Paragraph 2: Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. Holding the paper bag against his chest(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he looked as delighted as if he had just won the greatest prize in the room. Confused(adj.做主语补语), I couldn't help asking why he had chosen those awkward-looking cookies instead of the beautifully decorated ones. Flashing me a bright grin(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he answered, "Because they're ours. Every chocolate chip reminds me of baking with you." His innocent words struck a chord deep within me(无灵主语句). At that very moment, I finally understood that children rarely judge happiness by perfection. What they treasure is simply the precious time spent with the people(过去分词做后置定语) they love. As we walked home together, sharing those imperfect cookies beneath the golden afternoon sun(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I knew that the sweetest memory of that summer would never fade from either of our hearts. Version3 Paragraph 1: Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began. Every successful bid was greeted with warm applause, while the table gradually emptied of its colorful cookie bags(无灵主语句). Sitting beside Mike(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I became increasingly anxious, convinced(adj做主语补语)that our homemade cookies would only invite embarrassment. When the auctioneer finally held up our bag, I instinctively lowered my eyes, unable to face the crowd(adj做主语补语). To my surprise, Mike showed not the slightest sign of hesitation. Raising his hand immediately(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he called out, "Eight dollars!" with a smile brighter than ever. His confidence seemed to fill the room with unexpected warmth(无灵主语句). Before long, the auctioneer declared the bag sold, and Mike happily stepped forward to claim the cookies we had baked together. Paragraph 2: Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. Carefully taking the bag from the auctioneer(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he hugged it tightly, afraid(adj做主语补语)that it might slip away. "Dad," he said gently, "these cookies are special because we made them together." His words instantly reminded me of the afternoon(无灵主语句) when we had laughed over sticky dough, uneven shapes and melting icing. Those imperfect cookies, which I had considered failures, had become priceless memories in my son's eyes. Suddenly, my embarrassment gave way to gratitude(无灵主语句), and the guilt I had carried quietly disappeared. Looking at Mike's glowing face(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I realized that no perfectly baked cookie could ever compare with one filled with love and companionship. It was not the cookies themselves but the precious time we had shared that deserved to be treasured forever(强调句). 浙江省温州环大罗山联盟2025-2026学年第二学期高二期末联考英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had been so busy with work that I had little time to spend with my nine-year-old son, Mike. Last summer, when I finally had a day off, Mike told me the school would be hosting a cookie auction (拍卖). Each student was supposed to bake cookies with their father. I'd never baked cookies, so we followed the instructions carefully. We opened a packet of instant cookie mix, added the required ingredients, shaped the dough (面团) into small rounds, and confidently placed them on a baking tray in the oven. Taking them out after fifteen minutes, I was surprised that the cookies were not the golden and perfectly shaped ones I'd seen in ads. In fact, some were unevenly baked, while others had spread too much on the tray. Mike, however, cherished this opportunity to work with me and was so happy that he didn't seem to notice the problem. After letting them cool, we tried decorating the cookies with icing. As a finishing touch, I sprinkled (撒) a few chocolate chips on top, hoping to add a bit of chocolate flavor to the cookies that didn't look very appetizing. Mike gave me a proud grin; he thought they looked good. By then, we were already running late. When we finally hurried to the auction, I was stunned. A long table was filled with a fantastic array of exquisitely designed cookies. In contrast, ours looked embarrassing; some were misshapen, the icing had melted, and the chocolate chips were scattered everywhere. I felt a rush of emotion to my face, but Mike didn't seem to be ashamed of our creation. He solemnly placed our cookies at the end of the table. I gave Mike eight dollars, telling him to bid on the cookies he liked, hoping he would get some nicely made ones to make up for the embarrassment our cookies might bring him. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began.  Paragraph 2: Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. 参考范文1 Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began. He described their neat shapes and colorful decorations. Children crowded forward, calling out their bids excitedly(现在分词短语做伴随动作). One bag after another was raised, described, and quickly sold(描写场景), drawing laughter or applause(现在分词短语做结果状语). I anticipated the audience reaction to ours and my heart ached for Mike. At last, the auctioneer raised our cookies. Through the clear wrapper, they looked even worse under the bright lights, misshapen and messy(adj做补语). Before the auctioneer could say a word, Mike jumped to his feet and shouted, "Eight dollars!" The room went silent. No one offered a higher bid. The auctioneer paused, then nodded. "Sold." Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. It took me a moment to understand what had just happened. He had bought them himself, without hesitation. Holding the bag carefully(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Mike walked toward me, beaming with pride(现在分词短语做伴随动作). I heard him telling his friends, "Those are my cookies! My dad and I made those cookies!" I looked again at the cookies, and for the first time, I didn't focus on their flaws. Instead, I saw the time we had spent together making them. As we left the room, Mike held the cookies close, and I realized that their true value had never been in how they looked, but in what they meant to him — and to us. 参考范文2 Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began. A parade of exquisitely designed cookies, looking like edible artworks, was snapped up by enthusiastic bidders amidst thunderous applause. Watching others' "masterpieces" fetch high prices, a surge of unease flooded my heart, making me lower my head to avoid the sympathetic glances of other parents. I was consumed by a burning sense of shame, dreading that our clumsy, misshapen creation would stand out for all the wrong reasons. Eventually, our tray was presented. As I had expected, the crowd fell into an awkward silence. Just as I was suffocating in embarrassment, Mike's hand shot up, his voice ringing out with unwavering confidence: "Eight dollars!" No one else bid, and Mike won the auction effortlessly. Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. He cradled the bag tightly in his arms, his eyes sparkling with a mixture of pride and pure joy. When I whispered, asking why he would spend his money on such imperfect cookies, he gazed up at me and replied softly, "But Dad, these are the only ones that taste like the time we spent together." Hearing this, a wave of warmth and guilt washed over me, instantly melting my previous vanity. I realized that while I was chasing professional perfection, my son was cherishing the unpolished moments of our shared life. On that day, I learned a profound lesson: it is not the flawless appearance but the sincere companionship that makes a creation truly priceless. 练习题包（默写与仿写） 第一部分：原文佳句默写（根据汉语和首字母补全） 我一直在忙工作，几乎没有时间和九岁的儿子迈克在一起。 I had been so b______ with work that I had little time to s______ with my nine-year-old son, Mike. 我们打开一包即食饼干混合料，加入所需配料，将面团揉成小圆球。 We opened a packet of instant cookie mix, a______ the required i______, shaped the d______ into small r______. 十五分钟后把它们从烤箱里拿出来，我很惊讶饼干并不是广告里那种金黄完美的形状。 T______ them out after fifteen minutes, I was s______ that the cookies were not the g______ and p______ shaped ones I'd seen in ads. 事实上，有些烤得不均匀，而另一些则在烤盘上摊得太开了。 In fact, some were u______ baked, w______ others had s______ too much on the tray. 迈克很珍惜这次和我一起合作的机会，他非常开心，似乎没有注意到问题。 Mike, however, c______ this opportunity to work with me and was so happy that he didn't s______ to n______ the problem. 作为最后的点缀，我在上面撒了一些巧克力碎，希望能给那些看起来不太诱人的饼干增加一点巧克力味。 As a f______ touch, I s______ a few chocolate chips on top, h______ to add a bit of chocolate f______ to the cookies that didn't look very a______. 迈克给了我一个得意的咧嘴笑；他觉得它们看起来不错。 Mike gave me a p______ g______; he thought they looked good. 当我们终于匆忙赶到拍卖会时，我惊呆了。 When we finally h______ to the auction, I was s______. 一张长桌上摆满了各式各样精美设计的饼干。 A long table was f______ with a f______ array of e______ designed cookies. 相比之下，我们的看起来令人尴尬：有些形状不规整，糖霜化了，巧克力碎散落各处。 In c______, ours looked e______: some were m______, the icing had m______, and the chocolate chips were s______ everywhere. 我感到一阵情绪涌上脸庞，但迈克似乎并不为我们的作品感到羞愧。 I felt a r______ of e______ to my face, but Mike didn't seem to be a______ of our c______. 他郑重地把我们的饼干放在桌子末端。 He s______ placed our cookies at the e______ of the table. 我给了迈克八美元，告诉他在他喜欢的饼干上出价。 I gave Mike eight dollars, t______ him to b______ on the cookies he liked. 希望他能得到一些做得好的饼干，来弥补我们的饼干可能给他带来的尴尬。 H______ he would get some nicely made ones to make u______ for the e______ our cookies might b______ him. 当我们最后匆忙赶到拍卖会时，我已经上气不接下气。 By the time we finally h______ to the auction, I was a______ o______ b______. 第二部分：中文句子默写（根据关键词提示写出英文句子） 拍卖师拿起第一袋饼干，清了清嗓子。（auctioneer, lift, clear throat） 一袋接一袋的精美饼干被拍出了令人惊讶的高价。（bag after bag, go for, surprising prices） 轮到我们那袋时，人群中响起一阵低语和笑声。（turn, whisper, laughter） 我脸红了，恨不得地板裂开把我吞进去。（feel blood rush, wished, swallow me up） 就在拍卖师准备把它拿走时，坐在角落里的一个老太太举起了手。（about to, remove, corner, raise hand） 她出价两美元，说："这些饼干让我想起我妈妈做的。"（bid, remind of） 当锤子落下时，我简直不敢相信自己的耳朵。（hammer, fall, couldn't believe ears） 迈克手里攥着那八美元，自信地走向付款台。（clutch, confidently, payment desk） 他把钱递过去，换回了一袋饼干——正是我们做的那一袋。（hand over, in return, exactly） 他掰下一块，塞进我嘴里，笑着说："尝尝我们的杰作。"（break off, stuff into, grin） 饼干又硬又甜得发腻，但我嚼了很久。（hard, sickly sweet, chewed for a long time） 那一刻，我意识到真正重要的不是饼干有多完美，而是我们一起做了饼干。（realize, what mattered, together） 第三部分：动作/环境/心理描写语料库默写（根据中文和英文提示完成） 父亲的内心独白：看着别人精美的饼干，我感到__________（a rush of...）涌上脸颊。 拍卖师的动作：他__________（lift）第一袋饼干，（scan）全场，然后（announce）起拍价。 人群的反应：当我们的饼干被举起时，一阵__________（whisper）__________（spread）through the crowd。 Mike的动作描写：他__________（clutch）那八美元，__________（march）to the front, __________（hold）his head high。 父亲的心理变化：我__________（expect）him to buy the fancy ones, but instead he __________（head）straight for our bag. 环境烘托（光线）：Afternoon sunlight __________（pour）through the window, __________（fall）on the long table dotted with cookies. 环境烘托（声音）：The room __________（fill）with excited chatter, but all I could hear was my own heartbeat __________（pound）in my ears. 品尝时的动作与心理：I __________（bite）into the hard cookie, __________（chew）slowly, and __________（feel）a warmth spreading in my chest. 结尾动作描写：Mike __________（wrap）his small fingers around mine and __________（whisper）,"Best cookies ever." 父亲的顿悟（动作代替说教）：I __________（put）my phone back into my pocket and __________（kneel）down to __________（hug）him tight. 第四部分：高级句式仿写 句式1：感官先行 + 主要动作 + 即时结果 原句：Taking them out after fifteen minutes, I was surprised that the cookies were not the golden ones. 仿写：___________（听到掌声响起）, I turned around and saw Mike grinning, ___________（这让我松了一口气）. 句式2：无灵主语句 + 现在分词 原句：A long table was filled with a fantastic array of exquisitely designed cookies. 仿写：A wave of silence ___________（席卷了房间）, ___________（让每个人都僵住了）. 句式3：adj. and adj., 动作链 原句：Some were unevenly baked, while others had spread too much on the tray. 仿写：___________（又累又饿）, I ___________（坐了下来）, ___________（拿起一块饼干）and ___________（咬了一口）. 句式4：独立主格 + 句子 原句：（隐含）The icing having melted, the cookies looked even worse. 仿写：___________（拍卖师敲下锤子）, the crowd ___________（爆发出掌声）. 句式5：强调句 原句：（隐含）It was Mike who gave me a proud grin. 仿写：___________（正是那时）that I realized ___________（真正重要的）was not the cookie but the time we spent together. 句式6：递进句 原句：（隐含）The cookies were not perfect, nor were they delicious, but they were ours. 仿写：The eight dollars ___________（没能买到）the fanciest cookies, ___________（也没能挽回）my face, ___________（但它换来了）the most genuine smile from Mike. 参考答案 第一部分：原文佳句默写 busy, spend added, ingredients, dough, rounds Taking, surprised, golden, perfectly unevenly, while, spread cherished, seem, notice finishing, sprinkled, hoping, flavor, appetizing proud, grin hurried, stunned filled, fantastic, exquisitely contrast, embarrassing, misshapen, melted, scattered rush, emotion, ashamed, creation solemnly, end telling, bid Hoping, up, embarrassment, bring hurried, almost, out, breath 第二部分：中文句子默写 The auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies and cleared his throat. Bag after bag of beautifully decorated cookies went for surprising prices. When it was our turn, a wave of whispers and laughter rose from the crowd. I felt the blood rush to my face and wished the floor would open and swallow me up. Just as the auctioneer was about to remove it, an old lady sitting in the corner raised her hand. She bid two dollars, saying, "These cookies remind me of my mother's." When the hammer fell, I couldn't believe my ears. Clutching the eight dollars, Mike walked confidently to the payment desk. He handed over the money and got a bag of cookies in return — exactly the ones we had made. He broke off a piece, stuffed it into my mouth, and grinned, "Try our masterpiece." The cookie was hard and sickly sweet, but I chewed for a long time. At that moment, I realized that what really mattered was not how perfect the cookies were, but that we had made them together. 第三部分：语料库默写 a rush of emotion lifted, scanned, announced whisper, spread clutched, marched, holding expected, headed poured, falling was filled, pounding bit, chewed, felt wrapped, whispered put, knelt, hug 第四部分：句式仿写 句式1：Hearing the applause, which made me feel relieved 句式2：swept through the room, freezing everyone in place 句式3：Tired and hungry, sat down, picked up a cookie, took a bite 句式4：The auctioneer having knocked his hammer, broke into applause 句式5：It was then, what really mattered 句式6：didn't buy, nor did it save, but it bought 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $