上海市杨浦区2025-2026学年高二下学期期末英语试题作文讲义

上海市杨浦区2025-2026学年高二下学期期末英语试题 作文讲义 一、写作题目 V. Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 结合具体事例，谈谈你对 “A smooth sea never made a skilled sailor.” 这句谚语的理解与看法。 二、写作思路 开头段：引出谚语，阐释表层含义与深层主旨：安逸顺境无法磨砺本领，困境与挑战才能锻炼人，亮出全文中心论点。 主体段：结合自身学习实例展开论证：曾经英语薄弱害怕开口，逃避练习一直没有进步；主动参加英语演讲比赛，反复打磨、克服紧张与失误，历经挫折后能力大幅提升，印证逆境磨炼能力。 结尾段：总结升华，人生主动接纳困难考验，在挫折中积累经验，不断成长蜕变。 三、写作高级表达 开头段 高级短语 · a thought-provoking proverb 引人深思的谚语 · stand for profound truth 蕴含深刻道理 · comfortable circumstances 安逸顺遂的环境 · temper one’s competence 锤炼个人能力 · face hardships head-on 直面艰难困苦 高级句子 1.“A smooth sea never made a skilled sailor” is a famous proverb conveying a meaningful life philosophy. “A smooth sea never made a skilled sailor” 是一句蕴含人生哲理的经典谚语。 2.It means one can hardly become capable without experiencing hardships and challenges. 这句话意味着不经受磨难与挑战，人很难变得优秀强大。 3.Only difficulties and setbacks can polish us into more excellent individuals. 唯有困境与挫折，才能打磨我们，让我们变得更加优秀。 主体段 高级短语 · suffer from poor oral English 英语口语薄弱 · shrink from public speaking 畏惧当众发言 · encounter countless setbacks 遭遇无数挫折 · conquer inner nervousness 克服内心紧张 · polish the speech repeatedly 反复打磨演讲稿 · accumulate precious experience 积累宝贵经验 · make remarkable progress 取得显著进步 · temper willpower and ability 磨砺意志与实力 高级句子 1.I once avoided speaking English in public, trapped in endless comfort with no improvement. 我从前逃避当众说英语，困在舒适区里始终毫无进步。 2.It was the tough training and frequent failures that helped me break through my weakness. 正是艰苦的训练与一次次失败，帮我突破了自身短板。 3.Each failure taught me to adjust my methods and become more steady-minded. 每一次失败都教会我调整方法，心态变得更加沉稳。 4.Those challenging moments gradually built up my confidence and oral competence. 那些艰难的时刻慢慢树立了我的自信，提升了口语水平。 5.Hardships act as the best trainer shaping our practical abilities. 磨难是塑造我们实战能力最好的历练。 6.We gain far more growth from struggles than staying in easy comfort. 我们在拼搏挣扎中收获的成长，远胜于安稳度日。 结尾段 高级短语 · embrace difficulties bravely 勇敢接纳困难 · gain constant self-improvement 实现持续自我提升 · go through trials and hardships 历经重重考验 · forge ourselves into stronger people 把自己锤炼得更强大 · pave the way for future success 为未来成功铺路 高级句子 1.We ought to regard difficulties as valuable chances to upgrade ourselves. 我们应当把困难看作提升自我的宝贵机遇。 2.Only by experiencing storms can we become “skilled sailors” in our life journey. 只有历经人生风浪，我们才能成为人生航程里老练的水手。 3.Challenges will finally turn into priceless wealth for our lifelong growth. 挑战最终都会化作我们终身成长中无价的财富。 四、范文赏析 Storms Shape Excellent Sailors “A smooth sea never made a skilled sailor” delivers a wise truth: easy conditions fail to sharpen people, while challenges shape our strength. I used to be poor at oral English and dared not speak in public, choosing to stay in my comfort zone all the time. Later I took part in an English speech contest. I met many difficulties: constant stumbles on lines and terrible stage fright. I kept practicing day after day, correcting mistakes bravely. Finally I won a prize and made great progress in oral English. It was those tough struggles that helped me break through my weakness. Therefore, we should welcome challenges actively instead of avoiding them. Only going through hardships can we build strong wills and grow steadily into capable people in our life voyage. 中文翻译 风浪造就优秀水手 “A smooth sea never made a skilled sailor” 蕴含着深刻道理：安逸的环境无法磨砺人，唯有挑战才能铸就自身实力。 我曾经英语口语很差，不敢当众发言，一直选择待在舒适区。后来我报名参加英语演讲比赛，一路上困难重重：频频忘词、严重怯场。我日复一日坚持练习，勇敢修正失误。最后我拿到奖项，英语口语也取得巨大进步。正是这段艰难拼搏的经历，让我突破了自身短板。 因此我们应当主动迎接挑战而非逃避。只有历经风雨磨砺，我们才能磨炼坚强意志，在人生航程中稳步成长，成为有能力的人。 范文赏析要点： 整体结构赏析 标准三段议论文结构：第一段解读谚语点明中心；第二段结合个人英语演讲真实事例论证，紧扣题干 “结合具体事例” 硬性要求；结尾总结升华主旨。全文 137 词，严格卡在 120-150 词规定区间，逻辑紧凑连贯。 例句逐句赏析 例句1：“A smooth sea never made a skilled sailor” delivers a wise truth: easy conditions fail to sharpen people, while challenges shape our strength. 赏析：冒号衔接解释内涵，while 形成对比句式，用词 sharpen、shape 生动形象，开篇简洁点明谚语内核，句式工整高级。 例句2：It was those tough struggles that helped me break through my weakness. 赏析：强调句型，突出艰难历练的重要性，强化论据说服力，摆脱基础简单句，语法亮眼。 例句3：Only going through hardships can we build strong wills and grow steadily into capable people in our life voyage. 赏析：only + 状语置于句首的部分倒装结构，契合高中高分语法考点，回扣 sailor 航海的比喻，首尾呼应主题。 整体得分亮点 句式丰富多样：倒装句、强调句、并列句灵活运用；高分词汇与固定搭配密集恰当；事例贴合高中生日常学习，真实贴切不空洞；全文紧扣谚语寓意，首尾呼应，立意积极深刻，行文流畅自然，是典型考场高分作文。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $