上海静安区2025-2026学年高二下学期期末考试英语作文讲义

上海静安区2025-2026学年高二下学期期末考试英语 作文讲义 一、写作题目 V. Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是李华，你的学校拟建造一间专用教室（specialized classroom）。共有三个备选方案：①电子阅览室（e-library）；②心理咨询室（Psychological Counseling Room）；③舞蹈房（Dance Studio）。给校长写信，信中必须包括： 1. 你建议建造的专用教室； 2. 你的理由； 3. 你对该专用教室的设计建议。 （信中不得出现学生姓名，学校等真实信息） 二、写作思路 选定推荐方案：心理咨询室 Psychological Counseling Room 开头段：自我介绍，知悉学校计划修建一间专用教室，表明写信目的，正式提出推荐修建心理咨询室。 主体段：第一层阐述推荐理由：当下学业压力大，学生普遍存在焦虑烦躁等心理问题，缺少专业疏导渠道，心理咨询室守护心理健康；第二层给出具体室内设计建议：划分私密谈心区、轻松休闲等候区，布置柔和灯光绿植，保障隐私与温馨氛围。 结尾段：再次恳请校长考虑该提议，祝愿校园环境愈发完善。 三、写作高级表达 开头段 高级短语 · intend to construct a specialized classroom 打算修建一间专用教室 · voice my sincere recommendation 提出我真诚的建议 · learn about the school’s plan 了解学校的计划 · write to submit my suggestion 写信递交我的建议 · take three options into consideration 斟酌三个备选方案 高级句子 1.Having learned that our school plans to build a new specialized classroom, I am writing to offer my personal suggestion.得知我校打算新建一间专用教室，我写信提出个人建议。 2.Among the three choices, I strongly recommend constructing a Psychological Counseling Room.在三个方案之中，我强烈建议修建一间心理咨询室。 3.It is my great honor to share my ideas with you for your reference. 我十分荣幸分享我的想法供您参考。 主体段 高级短语 · suffer from heavy academic pressure 承受繁重的学业压力 · face emotional anxiety and depression 面临情绪焦虑低落 · lack professional psychological guidance 缺少专业心理疏导 · safeguard students’ mental health 守护学生心理健康 · divide the space into two functional areas 将空间划分为两个功能区 · guarantee personal privacy fully 充分保障个人隐私 · create a warm and relaxing atmosphere 营造温馨放松的氛围 · ease tense moods effectively 有效舒缓紧绷情绪 高级句子 1.Nowadays most students are burdened with tight study tasks and easily fall into negative emotions.如今大部分学生背负繁重学业任务，很容易陷入负面情绪。 2.A professional counseling room can provide timely psychological comfort and effective guidance for troubled students.专业心理咨询室可以为心绪烦闷的学生提供及时的心理安抚与有效疏导。 3.It is essential to separate the waiting area from the counseling area to protect students’ privacy. 等候区与咨询区进行分隔对保护学生隐私至关重要。 4.Soft lights and green plants are supposed to be arranged to soften the whole indoor environment.应当布置柔和灯光与绿植，柔和整体室内环境。 5.The quiet and cozy environment will help students open their hearts and release inner pressure. 安静舒适的环境能帮助学生敞开心扉，释放内心压力。 6.Proper layout design contributes greatly to calming students’ anxious minds. 合理的布局设计十分有助于平复学生焦躁的内心。 结尾段 高级短语 · take my proposal into careful consideration 仔细斟酌我的提议 · make continuous progress in campus construction 在校园建设上不断完善 · attach importance to mental development 重视身心成长 · build a more humanistic campus 打造更具人文关怀的校园 · appreciate your precious time 感谢您抽出宝贵时间 高级句子 1.I would highly appreciate it if you could take my practical suggestion into account. 若您能考虑我这条切实的建议，我将万分感激。 2.Equipped with this room, our school will pay more attention to students’ all-round development. 配备这间咨询室后，学校会更加重视学生的全面健康成长。 3.Wish our school a brighter future in campus infrastructure construction. 祝愿我校校园设施建设越来越好。 四、范文赏析 Dear principal, Having learned our school intends to build a new specialized classroom, I’m writing to put forward my recommendation. Among the three choices, I firmly suggest building a Psychological Counseling Room. Currently, masses of students are suffering from great academic pressure, which often leads to anxiety and bad moods. Without professional guidance, their negative feelings cannot be relieved properly. This room will effectively guard students’ mental health. As for design, the room can be divided into an independent counseling zone and a quiet waiting area to protect privacy. Besides, gentle lighting and fresh green plants should be placed to build a relaxing atmosphere for communication. I sincerely hope you can consider my suggestion. It will help our school care for students’ all-round development better. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 中文翻译 尊敬的校长： 得知我校计划新建一间专用教室，我特地写信提出我的建议。三个方案里，我坚决建议修建心理咨询室。 现阶段很多学生承受巨大学业压力，常常产生焦虑等不良情绪。缺少专业疏导的话，负面情绪无法得到妥善排解。这间咨询室可以切实守护同学们的心理健康。关于室内设计：房间可以划分独立咨询区与安静等候区，保护学生隐私。此外搭配柔和灯光与绿植，打造轻松舒心的交流环境。 衷心希望您能够采纳我的建议，这能让学校更好地关注学生的全方位健康成长。 李华 范文赏析要点： 整体结构赏析 标准三段书信结构：开篇点明事由、亮出选择；主体依次完成推荐选择、阐述理由、设计建议三大硬性答题要点，逻辑层层递进；结尾礼貌恳请校长考量，格式规范得体。词数 139 词，严格卡在 120-150 词区间。 例句逐句赏析 例句1：Having learned our school intends to build a new specialized classroom, I’m writing to put forward my recommendation. 赏析：现在分词作状语前置，摒弃基础简单句，句式高级简洁，开门见山交代写信缘由，正式贴合给校长写信的语境。 例句2：Currently, masses of students are suffering from great academic pressure, which often leads to anxiety and bad moods. 赏析：which 引导非限制性定语从句，精准解释学业压力带来的心理问题，有理有据支撑 修建心理咨询室的必要性。 例句3：Besides, gentle lighting and fresh green plants should be placed to build a relaxing atmosphere for communication. 赏析：不定式作目的状语，清晰说明布置绿植灯光的用意，对应题干第三项设计建议，内容落地不空洞。 整体得分亮点 行文正式礼貌，逻辑衔接自然；非谓语、定语从句、高分固定短语丰富多样；完整覆盖题目三项要求，理由贴合高中生现实状况，设计方案具体可行，没有模板化空话，立意积极贴合校园育人理念，属于考场高分水准。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $