Unit 5 Wild animals（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材译林版八年级上册

本讲义聚焦“野生动物保护”主题下的求助信写作核心知识点，系统梳理从野生动物生存现状、面临危机、保护举措到求助诉求的写作脉络。通过提供动物主体、生存困境等分类词汇，开头自我介绍、中间问题描述、结尾呼吁展望的句式模板，结合思维导图、佳句仿写及范例分析，构建从素材积累到结构搭建再到实战应用的完整学习支架。 该资料特色在于以核心素养为导向，语言能力方面通过环保词汇与不定式等语法运用提升表达准确性，文化意识上渗透人与自然和谐共生价值观，如“live in harmony”等情感诉求词汇的积累。思维品质培养体现在谋篇布局的逻辑训练，如范例中“现状-原因-呼吁”的清晰结构，搭配“as a result”等衔接词强化逻辑。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后通过分层实战演练（如丹顶鹤、绿孔雀等不同动物视角写作）帮助学生巩固应用，查漏补缺。

Unit 5 Wild animals单元同步写作讲义 本单元写作要求以一种野生动物的名义，给人类写一封求助信。 本单元的主题属于“人与自然”核心范畴，聚焦野生动物保护，围绕野生动物生存现状、面临的危机、人类保护举措及未来求助诉求展开写作。 本单元旨在培养学生观察自然、关注野生动物生存困境的意识，掌握书信体裁的写作格式与规范，学会运用不定式、名词后缀等核心语法描述问题与提出建议。通过研读教材熊猫、犀牛、北极熊、蓝鲸等野生动物素材，积累环保类话题词汇与句式，锻炼英文书面表达与逻辑思辨能力。这有助于学生树立人与自然和谐共生的价值观，熟练掌握求助类书信的写作框架，应对单元写作、考场同类话题作文。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 （一）动物主体类 1. wild animal 野生动物 2. giant panda 大熊猫 3. Indian rhino 印度犀牛 4. polar bear 北极熊 5. blue whale 蓝鲸 （二）生存困境类 1. serious problems 严重的问题 2. get sick 生病 3. in the wild 在野外 4. lose living areas 失去栖息地 5. bamboo forest 竹林 6. melt 融化 7. pollution 污染 8. hunt 捕猎 （三）保护举措类 1. take action 采取行动 2. make laws 制定法律 3. nature reserve 自然保护区 4. protection 保护 5. effort 努力 6. increase 增加 （四）情感与诉求类 1. hope 希望 2. danger 危险 3. survive 生存 4. live in harmony 和谐共处 句式积累 开头句（自我介绍+写信目的） 1. I am a wild giant panda living in the forests of China. 我是一只生活在中国森林里的野生大熊猫。 2. I am writing to ask for your help to protect my family and me. 我写信是想请求你们保护我和我的家人。 3. My home and food are becoming less and less, so I need your help. 我的家园和食物越来越少，我需要你们的帮助。 中间句（现状+问题+原因，核心主体） 1. We mainly live on bamboo, but bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. 我们主要以竹子为食，但竹林正变得越来越少。 2. It is difficult for us to have babies, and baby animals may easily get sick and die. 我们很难繁育后代，幼崽也容易生病死亡。 3. Human activities make it hard for us to live a safe and happy life. 人类的活动让我们难以过上安全幸福的生活。 4. In the past, people hunted us for our fur and bones, making our number drop quickly. 过去，人们为了皮毛和骨骼捕猎我们，导致我们的数量急剧下降。 结尾句（感谢+呼吁+展望） 1. Thanks to humans’ efforts, our number is slowly increasing. 多亏了人类的努力，我们的数量正在慢慢增加。 2. Please protect us, or there may be no wild animals left in the future. 请保护我们，否则未来将不再有野生动物。 3. We believe we will live better with your protection. 我们相信有你们的保护，我们会生活得更好。 4. Thank you very much for your kindness and support. 非常感谢你们的善意与支持。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：Where there is Xiwang, there is hope. 有希望的地方，就有曙光。 仿写：有人类保护的地方，野生动物就有未来。 ________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：As a result, pandas may not have a place to live or enough food to eat. 结果，大熊猫可能没有栖息之地和充足的食物。 仿写：结果，许多北极熊失去家园，无法找到足够的食物生存。 _________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：Thanks to all the efforts, the number of giant pandas is increasing. 多亏了各方努力，大熊猫的数量正在增加。 仿写：多亏了严格的法律和人们的善意，印度犀牛的数量正在缓慢增长。 __________________________________________________________________________ 典例 野生动物俱乐部正在举办征文活动，请你以一只北极熊（polar bear）的名义，给人类写一封求助信。内容包括：1. 自身基本情况（栖息地、食物）；2. 面临的生存危机及原因；3. 感谢人类的保护举措；4. 对人类的求助呼吁。词数80-100，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：应用文（英文书信，野生动物求助信） ② 人称：第一人称（以北极熊视角，I/we） ③ 提示：需包含基本信息、生存问题、危机原因、人类保护、求助呼吁，贴合单元话题，使用不定式、核心话题词汇 谋篇布局 开头 自我介绍，说明身份、栖息地、食物，点明写信求助的目的。 中间 详细描述生存困境（冰川融化、食物短缺），说明危机成因（全球变暖、人类活动），简述人类已有的保护行动。 结尾 向人类发出保护呼吁，表达美好期许，规范书信结尾致谢。 佳作展示 Dear humans, I am a polar bear living in the Arctic. I usually feed on small sea animals and travel far to find food. Today I’m writing to ask for your help. Now we are facing serious problems. The earth is getting warmer and the Arctic ice is melting fast. As a result, we are losing our homes and can hardly find enough food to survive. Our number is dropping year by year. Thank you for trying to protect our home. I hope all of you can take action to stop global warming. Please protect us, so we can live safely on the earth forever. Yours sincerely, A Poor Polar Bear 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： 1. face serious problems 面临严重问题（单元核心短语） 2. as a result 结果（逻辑衔接高频词） 3. take action 采取行动（保护话题万能短语） 高分句型： 不定式作目的状语：I usually feed on small sea animals and travel far to find food.（熟练运用单元核心 （一） 在了解了野生动物的生存现状后，请你化身一种野生动物，以它的口吻，根据下面的提示给野生动物保护中心写一封求助信。 提示： 1) What animal are you? 2) Why do you write this letter? 3) What problems do you meet now? 4) What help do you need? 要求： 1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现真实的人名和地名； 3）词数60左右。 Dear Wildlife Protection Centre, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, A poor wild animal （二） 所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。然而，人类的活动正日益使野生动物的数量急剧下降。请你代表其中一种野生动物，给人类写一封求助信。信件内容必须包括方框中提供的内容。词数不少于80。信件开头已给出，不计入词数。 self-introduction    writing purpose    problem    cause    request Dear human friends, We are ________. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 假设你是名叫Luna的丹顶鹤（red-crowned crane），请以它的视角写一封90词左右的求助信，介绍你最喜欢的季节（任选一个季节），和当前遇到的问题，以及对人类的请求。 A red-crowned crane Home wetlands Food fish and shrimp (虾) Favourite season ... Problems no clean water to drink; no place to live... Asking for help ... 要求： 1.以丹顶鹤视角写作，人称统一为第一人称； 2.所写短文必须包括要点提示内容，并作适当发挥； 3.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 4.开头和结尾的部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear humans,   I’m a red-crowned crane named Luna. I am writing to ask for your help to protect the red-crowned cranes in the wild.   ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for helping us!   Yours sincerely, Luna, a red-crowned crane （四） 绿孔雀曾是云南当地常见的动物，如今却只有 550—600只，假如你是李萍，你希望世界自然基金会（WWF）能帮助这类濒危物种。请你根据提示内容用英语写一封电子邮件向 WWF 求助。 要求： 1.语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确； 2.包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 3.80 词左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 假设你是阳光中学的李华，在学校网站上看到一封英国交换生Peter的求助信。请你根据Peter求助信的内容，给Peter写一封邮件进行回复，向他介绍你饲养的宠物。 HELP NEEDED I’m Peter, an exchange student from the UK. I visited Sunshine Middle School this winter holiday. I’d like to have a pet but I don’t know what to do. Can you tell me something about your pet and its lifestyle? Which kind of pet is it? What does it look like? What does it like or dislike doing? How do you look after it? Which pet should I choose? Please email me at Peter2025@gmail.com. Thank you! Peter 注意事项： 1. 回复的邮件须包含所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2. 词数80左右，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I am writing to tell you something about my pet._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice is helpful to you. Yours faithfully, Li Hua （六） 假如你是李华，中国大熊猫丫丫回归中国一事引起全世界网友的热议，你的美国朋友Jack对中国大熊猫保护活动很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封信，介绍一下这方面的情况。要求如下： （1）建立自然保护区，制定好保护计划； （2）研究培育大熊猫，长大放归大自然； （3）向国际组织（如the WWF） 寻求帮助。 注意： （1）词数：80～100 左右； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）短文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 （4）文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 词汇：set…free 使……自由  international organizations国际组织 Dear Jack, How are you doing? Let me tell you something about protecting pandas in China. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to China to see the pandas. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua （七） 假设你是李华，将于今年7月4日—7月10日去英国伦敦旅行。你在浏览Trusted Housesitters 网站时，发现以下两个家庭在寻找此时间段能帮助他们照看房子和宠物的人(house sitter)。请任选一个家庭，撰写一封申请邮件，说明你的情况、申请目的和理由，并简要谈谈你的照看计划。 Cat sitting for a cute cat, in a lovely house, Mr. and Mrs. Collins Experienced sitter needed for our dog, Mr. and Mrs. Walsh 1 1 职责： ●照顾猫咪Mimi ●保持房子整洁 职责： ●照顾小狗Bell ●照顾花园里的植物 友情提示： ●Mimi很粘人，需要陪伴和玩耍 友情提示： ●Bell精力旺盛，但害怕淘气的小孩子 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 龙岩梅花山中国虎园寒假英文科普志愿者 (volunteer) 招募工作已启动。请你以华南虎爱好者李华的身份，阅读招募告示，并根据通过DeepSeek查阅到的资料，写一封英文申请信，并向园长介绍你对华南虎的了解。 Volunteer WantedLongyan Meihuashan China Tiger Park is seeking (寻找) volunteers during the winter vacation. Are you a big fan of South China tigers? Can you speak fluent (流利的) English? Come and join us! And please write to us and tell us how much you know about South China tigers. Email Mr. Lin at SouthChinaTigerPark@163.com. Information from DeepSeek South China Tiger Look black stripes (条纹), … Home forests Ability run fast, jump high Reasons for being endangered (濒危) People’s activities: ·cut down trees ·kill them for fur 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数60—80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 注意紧扣主题，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。 Dear Mr. Lin, I’m writing to apply for (申请) the volunteer job at Longyan Meihuashan China Tiger Park. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really want to help protect tigers. I will be very thankful if you give me this chance. Yours, Li Hua $Unit 5 Wild animals单元同步写作讲义 本单元写作要求以一种野生动物的名义，给人类写一封求助信。 本单元的主题属于“人与自然”核心范畴，聚焦野生动物保护，围绕野生动物生存现状、面临的危机、人类保护举措及未来求助诉求展开写作。 本单元旨在培养学生观察自然、关注野生动物生存困境的意识，掌握书信体裁的写作格式与规范，学会运用不定式、名词后缀等核心语法描述问题与提出建议。通过研读教材熊猫、犀牛、北极熊、蓝鲸等野生动物素材，积累环保类话题词汇与句式，锻炼英文书面表达与逻辑思辨能力。这有助于学生树立人与自然和谐共生的价值观，熟练掌握求助类书信的写作框架，应对单元写作、考场同类话题作文。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 （一）动物主体类 1. wild animal 野生动物 2. giant panda 大熊猫 3. Indian rhino 印度犀牛 4. polar bear 北极熊 5. blue whale 蓝鲸 （二）生存困境类 1. serious problems 严重的问题 2. get sick 生病 3. in the wild 在野外 4. lose living areas 失去栖息地 5. bamboo forest 竹林 6. melt 融化 7. pollution 污染 8. hunt 捕猎 （三）保护举措类 1. take action 采取行动 2. make laws 制定法律 3. nature reserve 自然保护区 4. protection 保护 5. effort 努力 6. increase 增加 （四）情感与诉求类 1. hope 希望 2. danger 危险 3. survive 生存 4. live in harmony 和谐共处 句式积累 开头句（自我介绍+写信目的） 1. I am a wild giant panda living in the forests of China. 我是一只生活在中国森林里的野生大熊猫。 2. I am writing to ask for your help to protect my family and me. 我写信是想请求你们保护我和我的家人。 3. My home and food are becoming less and less, so I need your help. 我的家园和食物越来越少，我需要你们的帮助。 中间句（现状+问题+原因，核心主体） 1. We mainly live on bamboo, but bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. 我们主要以竹子为食，但竹林正变得越来越少。 2. It is difficult for us to have babies, and baby animals may easily get sick and die. 我们很难繁育后代，幼崽也容易生病死亡。 3. Human activities make it hard for us to live a safe and happy life. 人类的活动让我们难以过上安全幸福的生活。 4. In the past, people hunted us for our fur and bones, making our number drop quickly. 过去，人们为了皮毛和骨骼捕猎我们，导致我们的数量急剧下降。 结尾句（感谢+呼吁+展望） 1. Thanks to humans’ efforts, our number is slowly increasing. 多亏了人类的努力，我们的数量正在慢慢增加。 2. Please protect us, or there may be no wild animals left in the future. 请保护我们，否则未来将不再有野生动物。 3. We believe we will live better with your protection. 我们相信有你们的保护，我们会生活得更好。 4. Thank you very much for your kindness and support. 非常感谢你们的善意与支持。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：Where there is Xiwang, there is hope. 有希望的地方，就有曙光。 仿写：有人类保护的地方，野生动物就有未来。 ________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Where there is human protection, there is a future for wild animals. 2. 教材原句：As a result, pandas may not have a place to live or enough food to eat. 结果，大熊猫可能没有栖息之地和充足的食物。 仿写：结果，许多北极熊失去家园，无法找到足够的食物生存。 _________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As a result, many polar bears lose their homes and cannot find enough food to survive. 3. 教材原句：Thanks to all the efforts, the number of giant pandas is increasing. 多亏了各方努力，大熊猫的数量正在增加。 仿写：多亏了严格的法律和人们的善意，印度犀牛的数量正在缓慢增长。 __________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Thanks to strict laws and people’s kindness, the number of Indian rhinos is growing slowly. 典例 野生动物俱乐部正在举办征文活动，请你以一只北极熊（polar bear）的名义，给人类写一封求助信。内容包括：1. 自身基本情况（栖息地、食物）；2. 面临的生存危机及原因；3. 感谢人类的保护举措；4. 对人类的求助呼吁。词数80-100，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：应用文（英文书信，野生动物求助信） ② 人称：第一人称（以北极熊视角，I/we） ③ 提示：需包含基本信息、生存问题、危机原因、人类保护、求助呼吁，贴合单元话题，使用不定式、核心话题词汇 谋篇布局 开头 自我介绍，说明身份、栖息地、食物，点明写信求助的目的。 中间 详细描述生存困境（冰川融化、食物短缺），说明危机成因（全球变暖、人类活动），简述人类已有的保护行动。 结尾 向人类发出保护呼吁，表达美好期许，规范书信结尾致谢。 佳作展示 Dear humans, I am a polar bear living in the Arctic. I usually feed on small sea animals and travel far to find food. Today I’m writing to ask for your help. Now we are facing serious problems. The earth is getting warmer and the Arctic ice is melting fast. As a result, we are losing our homes and can hardly find enough food to survive. Our number is dropping year by year. Thank you for trying to protect our home. I hope all of you can take action to stop global warming. Please protect us, so we can live safely on the earth forever. Yours sincerely, A Poor Polar Bear 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： 1. face serious problems 面临严重问题（单元核心短语） 2. as a result 结果（逻辑衔接高频词） 3. take action 采取行动（保护话题万能短语） 高分句型： 不定式作目的状语：I usually feed on small sea animals and travel far to find food.（熟练运用单元核心 （一） 在了解了野生动物的生存现状后，请你化身一种野生动物，以它的口吻，根据下面的提示给野生动物保护中心写一封求助信。 提示： 1) What animal are you? 2) Why do you write this letter? 3) What problems do you meet now? 4) What help do you need? 要求： 1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现真实的人名和地名； 3）词数60左右。 Dear Wildlife Protection Centre, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, A poor wild animal 【参考范文】 Dear Wildlife Protection Centre,     I am a tiger living in the forest. I write to ask for help because we are in danger.     People cut down trees and hunt us for money. We have no home or enough food. Many friends died. We feel afraid and lonely.     Please stop people hurting us and build more nature reserves. We hope to live peacefully with humans soon. Yours, A poor wild animal 【写作解析】 写作步骤           [第一步：审题立意]           确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主           明确要点：围绕动物身份、写信原因、面临困境及求助需求展开，呼吁保护野生动物 确定人称：第一人称(I/We) 注意事项：词数60左右，文中不得出现真实的人名和地名 [第二步：构思布局]           三段式结构：           开头段：自我介绍物种，点明写信目的 主体段：详细描述生存危机，遇到的各类难题 结尾段：提出具体需要的帮助，表达和平生存的愿望 [第三步：要点展开]           要点一：说明写信求助的原因 原因：ask for help/in danger/survive/emergency/threaten/suffer from等      要点二：描述生存难题 生存难题：cut down trees/hunt us for money/have no home/friends died/feel afraid and lonely/terrify/pollution等    要点三：提出需要的帮助 需要的帮助：stop people hurting/build more nature reserves/live peacefully with humans/protect/guard等 （二） 所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。然而，人类的活动正日益使野生动物的数量急剧下降。请你代表其中一种野生动物，给人类写一封求助信。信件内容必须包括方框中提供的内容。词数不少于80。信件开头已给出，不计入词数。 self-introduction    writing purpose    problem    cause    request Dear human friends, We are ________. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear human friends, We are beautiful red-crowned cranes. We have red caps on top of our heads. We are one of the largest birds in size in the world. We’re good at dancing. We are also good singers. We sing loudly and beautifully. We are good at flying as well. We live on wetlands in East Asia and feed on worms and small fish. We need water and grass to live. However, life is harder these years. We are now endangered. People take up our living areas to build farms and houses. We don’t have enough space or food for our babies. We really hope you can protect our wetlands and stop overfishing and hunting. Yours, Red-crowned cranes 【写作解析】 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主。 明确要点：自我介绍，写信目的，遇到的问题，原因，请求。 确定人称：第一人称（we） 注意事项：词数不少于80，包含所有要点，语气诚恳礼貌。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：自我介绍（丹顶鹤），点明写信目的 —— 求助。 主体段：说明生存问题（濒临灭绝），分析人类活动造成的原因。 结尾段：提出具体请求，呼吁保护，共享家园。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：自我介绍 身份：red-crowned cranes 特点：beautiful/good at dancing/live on wetlands 要点二：问题和起因 问题：endangered/don’t have enough space or food 原因：people take up living areas 要点三：请求 请求内容：protect our wetlands/stop overfishing and hunting （三） 假设你是名叫Luna的丹顶鹤（red-crowned crane），请以它的视角写一封90词左右的求助信，介绍你最喜欢的季节（任选一个季节），和当前遇到的问题，以及对人类的请求。 A red-crowned crane Home wetlands Food fish and shrimp (虾) Favourite season ... Problems no clean water to drink; no place to live... Asking for help ... 要求： 1.以丹顶鹤视角写作，人称统一为第一人称； 2.所写短文必须包括要点提示内容，并作适当发挥； 3.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 4.开头和结尾的部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear humans,   I’m a red-crowned crane named Luna. I am writing to ask for your help to protect the red-crowned cranes in the wild.   ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for helping us!   Yours sincerely, Luna, a red-crowned crane 【参考范文】 Dear humans, I’m a red-crowned crane named Luna. I am writing to ask for your help to protect the red- crowned cranes in the wild. We live in wetlands and usually eat fish and shrimp. My favourite season is Spring because the weather is warm and nature is beautiful. However, we are in danger now. There is no clean water to drink and no safe place to live due to pollution. Many of my friends are losing their homes. I hope you can stop polluting the rivers and protect the wetlands. Please give us a better living environment. Let’s work together to make the world nicer. Thank you for helping us! Yours sincerely, Luna, a red-crowned crane 【写作解析】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：丹顶鹤的居所、食物，最喜欢的季节及理由，阐述人类活动带来的生存问题，最后提出请求 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数90词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：自我介绍，引出话题 主体段：交代丹顶鹤的居所、食物，最喜欢的季节及理由，阐述人类活动带来的生存问题，提出请求 结尾段：书写结语 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：居所与食物 居所：live in wetlands/my home used to be vast wetlands等 食物：usually eat fish and shrimp/feed on fish and shrimp等 要点二：最喜欢的季节 季节：My favourite season is spring/I like Spring best等 要点三：人类活动带来的生存问题 问题：There is no clean water to drink/have no clean water to drink/have fewer places to live/no safe place to live等 要点四：求助 求助内容：can stop polluting the rivers and protect the wetlands/stop polluting the rivers/protect the wetlands等 （四） 绿孔雀曾是云南当地常见的动物，如今却只有 550—600只，假如你是李萍，你希望世界自然基金会（WWF）能帮助这类濒危物种。请你根据提示内容用英语写一封电子邮件向 WWF 求助。 要求： 1.语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确； 2.包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 3.80 词左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear WWF, My home town is in Yunnan, Southwest China. The green peafowl were once common here, but now they are in danger. The number of these beautiful birds is between 550 and 600. I hope you can help them. Firstly, I suggest setting up a foundation for the green peafowl. It can raise money to help protect them. Secondly, it’s a good idea to make programmes about them. More people can know about them by watching these programmes. Thirdly, you can also work with our government and develop some plans together. With your help, I hope we can see more of these beautiful birds in the future. Yours, Li Ping 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍孔雀现状以及写邮件的目的； 第二步，具体阐述救助的方式； 第三步，最后表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ① in danger处于危险中 ② suggest doing sth建议做某事 ③ set up建立 [高分句型] I hope we can see more of these beautiful birds in the future.（宾语从句） （五） 假设你是阳光中学的李华，在学校网站上看到一封英国交换生Peter的求助信。请你根据Peter求助信的内容，给Peter写一封邮件进行回复，向他介绍你饲养的宠物。 HELP NEEDED I’m Peter, an exchange student from the UK. I visited Sunshine Middle School this winter holiday. I’d like to have a pet but I don’t know what to do. Can you tell me something about your pet and its lifestyle? Which kind of pet is it? What does it look like? What does it like or dislike doing? How do you look after it? Which pet should I choose? Please email me at Peter2025@gmail.com. Thank you! Peter 注意事项： 1. 回复的邮件须包含所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2. 词数80左右，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I am writing to tell you something about my pet._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice is helpful to you. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I am writing to tell you something about my pet. I have a lovely cat named Mimi. She has soft white fur and big round eyes. She likes sleeping on the sofa and playing with small balls, but she dislikes loud noises. I feed her cat food twice a day and clean her bed every week. She is easy to take care of. If you want a quiet and friendly pet, a cat is a good choice. It won’t take too much of your time. I hope my advice is helpful to you. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【写作解析】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（邮件），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍宠物的种类、外貌、习性、日常照顾方式，结合自身经验给出适合Peter的宠物选择建议 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第三人称（she/it） 注意事项：语言流畅，书写规范，词数80左右，不得透露真实个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：承接邮件开头，表明写信目的，引出对自己宠物的介绍 主体段：依次介绍宠物的种类、外貌、喜好、厌恶的事物，以及自己的日常照顾方式 结尾段：结合宠物特点，给Peter提出适合的宠物选择建议，呼应求助信的需求 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍宠物的基本信息与生活习惯 基本信息：a lovely cat named Mimi/has soft white fur and big round eyes/is small and cute 生活习惯：likes sleeping on the sofa/playing with small balls/dislikes loud noises/being disturbed/loves lying in the sun/hates wet weather 要点二：介绍照顾宠物的方式 日常照顾：feed her cat food twice a day/clean her bed every week/give her fresh water/brush her fur once a week 特点总结：easy to take care of/quiet and friendly/not noisy/easy to keep indoors 要点三：给Peter的宠物选择建议 核心建议：a cat is a good choice/won’t take too much of your time 补充理由：easy to look after/good for students who don’t have much free time/can keep you company/not need too much space （六） 假如你是李华，中国大熊猫丫丫回归中国一事引起全世界网友的热议，你的美国朋友Jack对中国大熊猫保护活动很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封信，介绍一下这方面的情况。要求如下： （1）建立自然保护区，制定好保护计划； （2）研究培育大熊猫，长大放归大自然； （3）向国际组织（如the WWF） 寻求帮助。 注意： （1）词数：80～100 左右； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）短文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 （4）文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 词汇：set…free 使……自由  international organizations国际组织 Dear Jack, How are you doing? Let me tell you something about protecting pandas in China. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to China to see the pandas. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jack, How are you doing? Let me tell you something about protecting pandas in China. Firstly, we choose some places as nature reserves for pandas. We protect pandas in these areas. Then when young pandas grow up, we teach them necessary skills to live in the wild on their own. After they learn as much as possible, we set them free into the forests to live a normal life. We also try to get help from international organizations, such as the WWF. They can give us a lot of knowledge about endangered animals. Welcome to China to see the pandas. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍如何保护大熊猫； 第二步，依据要点，细节描述措施。 [亮点词汇] ①nature reserves自然保护区 ②endangered animals濒危动物 [高分句型] Then when young pandas grow up, we teach them necessary skills to live in the wild on their own.（时间状语从句） （七） 假设你是李华，将于今年7月4日—7月10日去英国伦敦旅行。你在浏览Trusted Housesitters 网站时，发现以下两个家庭在寻找此时间段能帮助他们照看房子和宠物的人(house sitter)。请任选一个家庭，撰写一封申请邮件，说明你的情况、申请目的和理由，并简要谈谈你的照看计划。 Cat sitting for a cute cat, in a lovely house, Mr. and Mrs. Collins Experienced sitter needed for our dog, Mr. and Mrs. Walsh 1 1 职责： ●照顾猫咪Mimi ●保持房子整洁 职责： ●照顾小狗Bell ●照顾花园里的植物 友情提示： ●Mimi很粘人，需要陪伴和玩耍 友情提示： ●Bell精力旺盛，但害怕淘气的小孩子 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Mr. and Mrs. Collins, I am writing to apply for the house sitting position from July 4th to July 10th. I will be visiting London during this period and would love to take care of your cat, Mimi. I have experience with cats and understand their needs. I will ensure Mimi is fed, played with, and given plenty of attention. Additionally, I will keep your house clean and tidy. I look forward to the opportunity to help you and spend time with Mimi. Best regards, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。 ③提示：材料所给的提示内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：点明自己想申请照看房屋的工作，介绍自己的情况； 第二步：介绍自己类似的经验及工作计划； 第三步：希望能得到这次和猫咪一起度过时光的机会。 [亮点词汇] ①apply for申请 ②take care of照顾 ③keep your house clean and tidy保持你的房子干净整洁 [高分句型] ①I will be visiting London during this period and would love to take care of your cat, Mimi. (并列结构) ②I will ensure Mimi is fed, played with, and given plenty of attention. (宾语从句和被动语态) （八） 龙岩梅花山中国虎园寒假英文科普志愿者 (volunteer) 招募工作已启动。请你以华南虎爱好者李华的身份，阅读招募告示，并根据通过DeepSeek查阅到的资料，写一封英文申请信，并向园长介绍你对华南虎的了解。 Volunteer WantedLongyan Meihuashan China Tiger Park is seeking (寻找) volunteers during the winter vacation. Are you a big fan of South China tigers? Can you speak fluent (流利的) English? Come and join us! And please write to us and tell us how much you know about South China tigers. Email Mr. Lin at SouthChinaTigerPark@163.com. Information from DeepSeek South China Tiger Look black stripes (条纹), … Home forests Ability run fast, jump high Reasons for being endangered (濒危) People’s activities: ·cut down trees ·kill them for fur 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数60—80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 注意紧扣主题，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。 Dear Mr. Lin, I’m writing to apply for (申请) the volunteer job at Longyan Meihuashan China Tiger Park. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really want to help protect tigers. I will be very thankful if you give me this chance. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Mr. Lin, I’m writing to apply for the volunteer job at Longyan Meihuashan China Tiger Park. I love South China tigers very much. They have black stripes and long tails. They usually live in forests. They can run fast and jump high. But sadly, they are now in great danger because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur. I can speak English fluently and share interesting facts about these tigers with visitors to let more people protect them. I’ll try my best to do well. I really want to help protect tigers. I will be very thankful if you give me this chance. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍华南虎的外貌特征、生活环境、能力以及濒危原因； 第二步，说明自己的个人能力； 第三步，表达想成为志愿者的强烈愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①in great danger处于极大的危险之中 ②cut down砍伐 ③fluently流利地 [高分句型] But sadly, they are now in great danger because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur.（because引导的原因状语从句） $