Unit 1 Period 5 Writing（配套教参Word）-【步步高】2025-2026学年高二英语选择性必修第二册学习笔记（外研版·新教材）

本讲义聚焦高中英语书评写作与读后续写微技能，系统梳理书评结构模板（开头、主体、结尾）、写作四步骤（审题谋篇、遣词造句、句式升级、组句成篇）及《圣诞颂歌》《简·爱》范文，同时涵盖读后续写动作链描写（连动谓语、Having done结构）、语料积累（情感、动作、人物词汇及句型）与即时演练，构建从基础模板到实际应用的学习支架。 该资料以语言能力培养为核心，通过结构化模板（如书评开头句式）和精准语料（如动作链公式）提升表达准确性，结合思维品质训练（审题分析、句式升级）。实例中分步写作指导与范文对比，助力教师高效授课，课后练习（如续写语料填空）帮助学生自主巩固，落实学习能力培养。

Period 5　Writing 写作一　应用文写作——书评 本单元的写作任务是写一篇书评。书评是应用文写作的一种，是对某文学作品的介绍和评论。书评旨在表达自己对文学作品的理解和认识，启发和帮助读者提高阅读水平，对作品的作者提出正确而有益的建议。 1．开头 ...is a novel written by...and first published on... ……是一部由……写的小说，首次发表于…… ...was written and illustrated by the writer...during... ……是由作家……在……期间创作和绘制的。 Of all the countless books I have ever read，...written by the famous writer...impressed me most. 在我所读过的不计其数的书中，由知名作家……所写的……给我留下了最深刻的印象。 The masterpiece of...turned out to be one of the most impressive books of the 21st century，which inspires worldwide readers to seek the truth of life and pursue a colorful life. ……的代表作最终成为21世纪最伟大的作品之一，激励全世界的读者去寻找生活的真谛，追求多彩的生活。 2．主体 Set in...，...captured readers’ mind upon its first appearance. 以……为背景的……一出版就引起了读者的关注。 Published in...，the book is popular among... 出版于……年，这本书很受……欢迎。 This is a story about an amazing woman who... 这是一个关于一个传奇女人的故事，她…… It broke the record of bookselling，becoming the best-seller for the whole year. 它打破了图书销售纪录，成为一整年最畅销的书籍。 The novel enjoyed great popularity with readers with... 这部小说因……在读者中大受欢迎。 The novel is very popular with...throughout the world because...Furthermore，it is recognised as the...work of modern literature. 这本小说在全世界广受……的欢迎，因为……并且它被认为是……的当代文学作品。 3．结尾 In fact，the fiction story is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it. 事实上，这部小说的故事很有意义，我可以从中学到很多东西。 I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience from it. 我想每个人都应该读一读这本书，并从中体会这种美妙的经历。 The novel played a critical role in...and has had a strong influence on us. 这本小说在……发挥了关键作用，对我们产生了很大的影响。 The story can be regarded as a symbol of... 这个故事可以看作是……的象征。 To sum up，it is the writer’s great imagination that has created a wonderful world full of...for us. 总之，是作者丰富的想象给我们创造了一个充满……的美妙世界。 In a word，the book is well worth reading. 总之，这本书很值得一读。 《圣诞颂歌》(A Christmas Carol)是英国小说家查尔斯·狄更斯(Charles Dickens)写的一部著名小说。请根据下列要点写一篇关于《圣诞颂歌》的英语书评。 1．斯克鲁奇(Scrooge)是个爱财如命的吝啬鬼，从来不关心身边的人。然而平安夜出现的三个精灵把他带到了过去、现在和未来，让他领悟到圣诞节的意义，并开始了新的生活； 2．小说以幽默的语言和深刻的含义博得了读者的喜爱； 3．该书于1843年12月19日出版后，多次再版。这本书极大地影响了西方人对圣诞节的认识和过节的方式。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 写作要求是写关于《圣诞颂歌》的英语书评。写作时应注意下列几点： 1．确定文体：这是一篇书评； 2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主； 3．主体人称：由于这是一篇书评，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：总体介绍这本书：书名、作者等； 第二段：简要介绍这本书的内容：主要人物、重要情节； 第三段：对这本书的评价与从中得到的启示。 第二步　遣词造句 核心词汇(单元写作词汇运用) 1．与……分享…… share...with... 2．出版，发行 come out 3．在平安夜 on Christmas Eve 4．值得做…… be worth doing 5．幽默的语言 humorous language 6．深刻的含义 profound meaning 7．深受读者的欢迎 enjoy great popularity with readers 8．在……中发挥作用play a role in 连词成句(教材句式仿写) 1．《圣诞颂歌》是查尔斯·狄更斯写的一部小说，于1843年12月19日首次出版。 A Christmas Carol is a novel that/which is written by Charles Dickens and was first published on December 19,1843. 2．它讲述了斯克鲁奇的故事——一个视钱如命的人。(as if...) It tells the story of Scrooge；he acts as if money were his life. 3．他知道钱不是唯一值得保留的东西。(be worth doing) He understands money is not the only thing that is worth reserving. 4．爱与关怀不只是重要；它们是必不可少的。(more than) Love and care are more than important；they are essential. 5．这部小说以它幽默的语言和深刻的含义而深受读者的欢迎。 The novel enjoys great popularity with readers with its humorous language and profound meaning. 6．因此，自出版以来，它已被重印多次。 And therefore，it has been reprinted many times ever since it came out. 7．这部小说在重新定义圣诞节的重要性方面发挥了关键作用。 The novel plays a critical role in redefining the importance of Christmas. 第三步　句式升级 1．用分词作定语改写句1。 A Christmas Carol is a novel written by Charles Dickens and first published on December 19,1843. 2．用定语从句改写句2。 It tells the story of Scrooge who acts as if money were his life. 3．用why引导的表语从句改写句6。 That is why it has been reprinted many times ever since it came out. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 参考范文 A Christmas Carol is a novel written by Charles Dickens and first published on December 19,1843. It tells the story of Scrooge who acts as if money were his life.He doesn’t believe the existence of Christmas and doesn’t want to share his happiness and money with others.On Christmas Eve，three spirits show Scrooge how happy he was in the past，how greedy he is now，and how he regrets what he has done in the future.He then understands money is not the only thing that is worth reserving.Love and care are more than important；they are essential. The novel enjoys great popularity with readers with its humorous language and profound meaning.That is why it has been reprinted many times ever since it came out.It also plays a critical role in redefining the importance of Christmas and the major sentiments associated with the holiday. 《简·爱》是英国作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特的一部著名小说。请根据下表提供的信息，写一篇书评。 书名 《简·爱》 作者 夏洛蒂·勃朗特 出版时间 1847年 地点 英国伦敦 情节 简·爱一直生活在一个艰难的环境中，却一直在为自己的理想生活而奋斗。她的父母在她很小的时候就去世了。她没有得到她一直期待的东西——仅仅是被视为一个普通人。痛苦教会了她独立。 评价 这个故事可以被看作是独立精神的象征。生活在改变，但我们的生活原则依然存在。坚定不移地坚持独立自主会给我们足够的信心和勇气。 参考词汇：《简·爱》Jane Eyre；夏洛蒂·勃朗特 Charlotte Bronte；珍惜尊严cherish dignity 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考范文 Jane Eyre is a famous novel written by the English writer Charlotte Bronte.It was first published in London，England，in 1847. This is a story about a special woman who lives in a difficult environment，but has been fighting for her ideal life.Jane Eyre’s parents died when she was very young so she didn’t get what she had been expecting—simply being regarded as an ordinary person.The sufferings taught her to be independent. The story can be regarded as a symbol of the independent spirit.Life is changing，but our living principles remain.Firmly persisting in being independent gives us enough confidence and courage. 写作二　读后续写微技能 Ⅰ.增分语料积累——动作链精准描写 动作链精准描写公式一：主语＋谓语动词1＋谓语动词2＋谓语动词3 1．我朝他的方向跑去，把他抱在怀里，轻轻地拍了拍他的背。 I ran in his direction，gathered him into my arms and patted him on the back gently. 2．他醒了，溜下床，踮着脚走到门口。 He woke up，slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the door. 动作链精准描写公式二：Having done...，主语＋谓语动词(表示先做了某事，再发生核心动 作) 1．她在街上漫无目的地逛了好几个小时，感到有点饿，想吃点东西。 She wandered aimlessly in the street for hours，then she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. →Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours，she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. 2．说出真相后，他心里轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。 After he told the truth，he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a light heart. →Having told the truth，he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a light heart. [即时演练] 根据汉语提示补全句子 1．小狗看到主人，摇着尾巴，跳起来扑到主人身上。 The little dog saw its owner，wagged its tail and jumped up to pounce on its owner. 2．看到我不舒服，爸爸站起来，走到我跟前，把我揽入怀中安慰我。 Seeing I was uncomfortable，my father rose to his feet，came up to me and gathered me into his arms to comfort me. 3．在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人逐渐变得不耐烦，然后离开了。 Having waited in line for an hour at the bank，the woman grew impatient and left. 4．做好充分的准备后，她站在窗边，期待着女儿的到来。 Having made full preparations，she stood by the window，expecting the arrival of her daughter. Ⅱ.教材语料积累 词汇 情感描写 subtle adj.难以察觉的；微妙的　bittersweet adj.苦乐参半的　disheartened adj.沮丧的，灰心的 tiresome adj.烦人的，令人厌烦的　memorable adj.难忘的　intimately adv.亲密地；密切地 动作描写 obey v．服从；遵守　tempt v．诱惑，引诱　cherish v．重视，珍视　swallow v．吞下，咽下 n．咽；吞；一口　chew v．咀嚼　digest v．消化(食物)；领会　tempt v．诱惑，引诱　behind the wheel在驾驶汽车　at a glance一瞥，看一眼　have a say 有发言权　lay aside 把……搁置一边　devote oneself to致力于，献身于 人物描写 integrity n．正直诚实　virtue n．美德　mature adj.成熟的，明白事理的　selfish adj.自私的　suitable adj.合适的　commitment n．投入，花费；承诺 句型 1.I was really surprised when a bank contacted me with a credit card offer.(情感描写) 2.Like a musical symphony，life has high and low moments，and somewhere in between are those moments we call “bittersweet”．(明喻) 3.Whatever our choices are，we should cherish and embrace these moments in life.After all，each step we take is one more step forward to becoming a stronger and better person.(结尾升华句) 续写语料运用 请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。 她告诉自己要珍惜她为减肥所做的付出。但是烤面包的味道诱惑她品尝一下。她咬了一口，嚼了嚼，咽了下去。真好吃！她心想，她遵守规则已经足够久了，所以大吃一次也没什么影响。她大口咬，快速吞，她的体型越来越大。她吓得大声叫喊。突然，她醒来了，满头大汗，心灰意冷。一个多么可怕的梦啊！ 醒来后，她意识到自己不能就这样轻易地搁置减肥的决心。她明白，只有真正全身心地投入到健康的生活方式中，她才能够实现自己的目标。此外，她坚信自己应该对自己的身体和生活有主导权，而不是让食物的诱惑战胜自己的意志力。 She told herself 1.to cherish the commitment she had made to lose weight.But the smell of the baked bread 2.tempted her to have a taste.She took a bite of it，chewed and swallowed.How delicious！3.She had obeyed the rules for long enough so it made no difference to overeat just one time，she thought to herself.She 4.took big bites and quick swallows，her size becoming bigger and bigger.She cried out in fright.Suddenly，she woke up 5.sweating and feeling disheartened.What a terrible dream! After waking up，she realized that she couldn’t just 6.lay aside her determination to lose weight like this.She knew that only by truly 7.devoting herself to a healthy lifestyle could she achieve her goal.Also，she firmly believed that she should 8.have a say in her own body and life，and not let the temptation of food overpower her willpower. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $