Unit 1 The Changing World单元书面表达专练-2026-2027学年九年级英语上学期考点大通关（人教版）

2026-2027学年九年级英语上学期考点大通关（人教版新教材） Unit 1 The Changing World单元书面表达专练 一、主题定位 1.单元核心话题：变迁与发展（今昔对比） 2.文体：说明文（记叙文）；中考高频，常考介绍家乡、生活发生的巨大变化。 3.核心语法：used to do（过去常常）、现在完成时（have/has done），做到过去、现在时态对比。 4.词数：不少于80词。 5.写作要点：过去是什么样子 → 现在发生哪些改变 → 个人感受/展望未来。 二、常考命题 1. 话题作文：Changes in My Hometown（最常考） 我的家乡的变化 2. 命题作文：Changes in My Life 我生活的变化 3. 书信：给外国笔友写一封信，介绍家乡近些年的巨大变化 4. 提示作文：表格/中文提示，从交通、居住、医疗、环境几个方面对比过去和现在 三、四段式考场模板（直接套用） 第一段：开篇总述，总起变化 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past ten years. Many things are quite different from before. 第二段：描写过去（用 used to /一般过去时） In the past, people used to live in small old houses. The roads were narrow. People used to travel on foot or by bike. It took a long time to go to other places. 第三段：写现在（重点使用现在完成时） However, everything has changed now. The government has built wide roads and new hospitals. Many new tall buildings have appeared. People can take buses or drive cars. Our life has become much more convenient. 第四段：结尾升华，感受+展望 I am so proud of my hometown. I hope it will become even better in the future. 四、必背高分句型（单元原句素材） 1. Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past ten years. 在过去十年，我的家乡发生了巨大变化。（take place无被动） 2. People used to travel far to see a doctor. 人们过去要走很远看病。 3. It used to be a poor small village. 它过去是一个贫穷的小村庄。 4. My hometown has changed a lot since I was a little child. 自从我小时候，我的家乡已经变化很大。 5. It took people half a day to get to the town in the past. 过去人们要花半天时间到达镇上。 五、参考范文（Changes in My Hometown） Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past ten years. In the past, it used to be a quiet small village. People used to live in old small houses. The roads were narrow. It took a long time for people to go out. But now everything has changed. The government has built wide roads and new hospitals. Lots of tall buildings have appeared. People’s life has become more convenient. They can go travelling easily. I feel very proud of my hometown. I believe it will have a better future. 六、高频易错点（扣分点） 1. 现在完成时搭配yesterday / ten years ago；有明确过去时间，用一般过去时。 2. 混淆：used to do（过去常常）、be used to doing（习惯于）。 3. take place写成被动语态：have been taken place（错误）。 4. 时态混乱：写过去一定要用 used to /一般过去时，写已经发生的变化多用现在完成时。 七、书面表达专练 1．近几年来，随着国家的快速发展，我们居住的城市发生了很大变化，人们的生活方式也相应地改变，同时也带来一些环境问题。请根据以下提示，以“Changes of My City”为题，写一篇英语作文，讲述城市的变化及人民生活水平的提高并写出你对城市未来的期望。 In the past Now Transportation buses, bikes e-bikes, e-cars, subway Life services Leisure activity shop in markets, watch TV at home, play cards.. online shopping, play in community squares, travel abroad Living environment dirty rivers, few trees clean, flowers... Problem and expectation（期望） …… 要求 1）内容完整，意思连贯语句通顺，书写规范； 2）字数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes of My City In recent years, with the rapid development of our country, great changes have taken place in the city we live in. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你叫李明，某中学生英文杂志正在举办题为“Great Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动。你打算向该杂志投稿，请你用英文写一篇短文，分享你家乡的变化。 内容包括： （1）你的家乡过去是什么样子； （2）你的家乡有了哪些变化（例如环境environment、交通traffic、建筑building、经济economy/business等方面）； （3）你对家乡的变化有什么感受。（80词以上） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．随着时代的发展，你的家乡也发生了巨大的变化。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述这些变化，并谈谈你的感受。 提示： 过去：道路狭窄崎岖，房屋老旧，人们主要靠步行或骑自行车出行，生活节奏慢。 现在：高楼大厦，宽阔的高速公路和铁路，电子支付普及，生活便利快捷。 感受：…… 参考词汇：narrow and rough（狭窄崎岖的）, high-tech（高科技的）, e-payment（电子支付）, convenient（方便的） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．这个暑假你回自己的家乡了吗?与儿时的记忆相比，你的家乡发生了哪些变化呢? 请围绕“家乡变化”的主题，根据下面的内容要点，以“The Amazing Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语文章。 内容要点：1.用现在完成时描述家乡近年来在环境、交通、建筑等方面发生的变化。（至少写出3点具体变化） 2.表达自己对这些变化的感受。3.谈谈自己对家乡未来的期待。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假定你是来自河南的李华，你的外国笔友Tom对你的家乡以及你家乡近几年的变化非常感兴趣，并且他想要在假期的时候过来旅游。Tom列出了一些他想要了解的内容，请你写一封邮件为他介绍你的家乡。 What I want to know:1. What are the famous places in Henan? 2. How has your hometown changed in the last few years? 3. What should I pay attention to if I come here? 写作要求： 1. 邮件中须包括提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3. 词数80词左右（文中已给出内容，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, I’m from Henan. I’d love to tell you about my wonderful hometown! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 6．近几年来，我们国家在经济、文化、科技等领域快速发展，例如央视春晚的秧歌机器人，冲进全球影史票房前五名的《哪吒2》，火爆全球的人工智能DeepSeek……中国的发展速度令世界都为之震惊，也令我们感到无比自豪。请你以“China’s Great Development”为题，写一写我们国家的发展变化并谈谈自己的心得体会。 提示：1.国家近几年各方面的发展变化； 2.这些变化给我们的生活带来的影响； 3.作为青少年应该怎么做。 要求：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 China’s Great Development In recent years, China has witnessed remarkable development and changes, which have significantly influenced every aspect of people’s lives _____________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文介绍你家乡（或你熟悉的地方）的变化，内容需包括： • 过去是什么样（至少2点，用used to/一般过去时）； • 现在是什么样（至少2点，用现在完成时或一般现在时）； • 变化带来的感受（用感叹句或比较级）； • 你对未来的期待。 要求：语句通顺，时态正确，书写工整，可适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“Changes Around Us”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“The Great Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. What great changes have taken place in your hometown? 2. What do you think caused these changes? 3. How do you feel about these changes? 要求：1. 短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥; 2. 词数80词左右。 The Great Changes in My Hometown __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2026-2027学年九年级英语上学期考点大通关（人教版新教材） Unit 1 The Changing World单元书面表达专练 1．例文： Changes of My City     In recent years, with the rapid development of our country, great changes have taken place in the city we live in.      In the past, people went out by buses or bikes. Now, e-bikes, e-cars and subways are common. People used to shop in markets and watch TV at home. But now they enjoy online shopping, play in community squares and even travel abroad. Besides, rivers were dirty and there were few trees. Now the city is clean with many flowers.      But pollution from traffic is still a problem. I hope our city will become greener and more beautiful. I believe everyone will live a happier life here. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 明确要点：对比过去和现在在交通、生活服务和居住环境上的变化，指出问题并表达对城市未来的期望。 确定人称：第三人称和第一人称（I） 注意事项：字数80词左右。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总述城市发生了巨大变化。 主体段：分三个方面（交通、生活服务/休闲、居住环境）进行对比描述。 结尾段：指出问题并表达期望。 [第三步，要点展开] 要点一：对比交通的变化 交通的变化：In the past, people went out by buses or bikes. Now, e-bikes, e-cars and subways are common./means of transport/convenient/It has made our travel more efficient./Smart traffic offers us more choices. 要点二：对比生活服务的变化 生活服务的变化：People used to shop in markets and watch TV at home. But now they enjoy online shopping, play in community squares and even travel abroad./online shopping and square dancing are popular today/play in community squares/travel abroad/daily life/leisure activities/People’s lifestyles have changed a lot./Online shopping has become a new trend. 要点三：对比居住环境的变化 居住环境的变化：Besides, rivers were dirty and there were few trees. Now the city is clean with many flowers./living conditions/surroundings/fresh air/The city now looks like a big garden. 要点四：指出问题并表达期望 问题：pollution from traffic is still a problem/traffic brings some environmental problems 期待：I hope our city will become greener and more beautiful. I believe everyone will live a happier life here./It is important to protect the environment./I dream of living in a city with clean and beautiful surroundings. 2．例文： Great Changes in My Hometown My hometown used to be a poor village with narrow roads and old houses. Few people had cars and we saw few trees. Now changes come. Wide roads connect all places. Tall buildings and parks appear. Buses make travel easy. People live richer lives, and we plant trees for clean air. I am really proud of my hometown and hope it will become better soon. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，一般过去时+一般现在时结合，用一般过去时描述家乡过去面貌，用一般现在时介绍如今的家乡变化 明确要点：家乡过去是什么样子；家乡的变化（环境/交通/建筑/经济等）；对家乡变化的感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出话题，介绍家乡过去的面貌 主体段：分别介绍家乡在环境、交通、建筑、经济等方面的变化 结尾段：写出个人感受，升华主题，展望家乡的未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡过去是什么样子 场景选择：My hometown used to be a poor village / poor village / narrow roads / old houses / a small village / a quiet town / an old countryside area / small old houses / simple buildings等 环境描述：Few trees / narrow roads and old houses / poor environment / dirty roads / polluted rivers / fewer green areas / less beautiful surroundings等 生活状况：Few people had cars / people lived a simple life / life was not convenient / little entertainment / people lived a hard life等 要点二：家乡有了哪些变化 （1）环境方面 场景选择：parks appear / clean air / trees / parks / streets / rivers / hills / green areas等 变化描述：we plant trees for clean air / parks appear / plant lots of trees / build more beautiful parks / clean rivers / protect the environment等 （2）交通方面 场景选择：Wide roads / Buses / roads / shared bikes / new stations / public transport等 变化描述：Wide roads connect all places / Buses make travel easy / wider clean roads / more buses / shared bikes / more public transport等 （3）建筑方面 场景选择：Tall buildings / old houses / buildings / public squares / modern areas等 变化描述：Tall buildings appear / many tall buildings / new houses / large public squares / modern buildings等 （4）经济方面 场景选择：People live richer lives / factories / business / local shops / companies等 变化描述：People live richer lives / factories develop well / more local shops open / business grows quickly / more companies are built等 （5）生活娱乐方面 场景选择：parks appear / cinemas / community centres / sports centres / cultural places等 变化描述：parks appear / more cinemas / different community centres / more activities are available / more places for entertainment等 要点三：对家乡变化的感受 情感选择：I am really proud of my hometown / proud / happy / hopeful / excited等 表达语句：I am really proud of my hometown / I feel happy to see these great changes / I love my hometown more than before等 展望说明：I hope it will become better soon / I hope my hometown will become better and better in the future / I wish my hometown a brighter future等 3．例文： Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, the roads were narrow and rough, and houses were old. People mainly walked or rode bikes, and life was slow. But now, everything is different. Tall buildings stand everywhere. Wide highways and modern railways connect us to the outside world. E-payment is widely used, making life incredibly convenient. Although life is faster now, I feel proud of these developments. I believe my hometown will become even better in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时（描述过去）和一般现在时（描述现在）为主 明确要点：文章需包含过去的家乡、现在的家乡及个人感受 确定人称：以第一人称（I/my）和第三人称（it/its）为主 注意事项：需包含题干中所有提示信息，词数80左右。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头：总述家乡发生了巨大变化，引出话题。 中间：按照“过去→现在”的时间顺序进行对比描述。先写过去的状况；再写现在的变化，通过今昔对比突出变化之大。 结尾：表达个人感受。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：总述变化 Great changes have taken place in.../...has changed a lot./Great changes have happened in.../My hometown is different from before./There have been great changes in... 要点二：过去的家乡 In the past/...years ago, the roads were narrow and rough./Houses were old/small./People mainly walked/rode bikes/went out on foot/by bike./Life was slow/quiet/The pace of life was slow... 要点三：现在的家乡 But now/Today, everything is different./Tall buildings stand everywhere./Wide highways and modern railways connect us to the outside world./E-payment is widely used./Life is convenient and fast./...making life convenient... 要点四：个人感受 I feel proud/happy/amazed./I am proud of these changes./I think my hometown is becoming better and better./I believe it will be even better in the future./Although life is faster/different, I... 4．例文： The Amazing Changes in My Hometown Many amazing changes have taken place in my hometown over the past few years. Plenty of green trees have been planted along streets, and the clean fresh air comforts every visitor. New wide roads have been built and more public buses have brought great convenience for local residents. Tall bright apartment buildings and lovely parks have taken the place of the old small houses. I feel deeply proud of its fast moving development. I sincerely hope my hometown will become greener in the coming days. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以现在完成时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：家乡三处变化（环境、交通、建筑）、内心感受、未来期许 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：80词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，总述近几年家乡发生许多惊人改变 主体段：依次介绍环境、交通、建筑三处具体变化 结尾段：抒发内心自豪感，讲述自己对于家乡日后发展的期盼 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡多方面的具体变化 栽种绿植优化环境：plenty of green trees have been planted along streets/lots of trees are planted by roads/more flowers appear around houses 空气清新抚慰游人：the clean fresh air comforts every visitor/makes people relaxed/brings us pleasant feelings 修建宽阔崭新道路：new wide roads have been built/smooth highways appear/convenient streets are finished 公交出行带来便利：more public buses have brought great convenience/cut down our travel time/make trips much easier 楼房公园取代旧小屋：tall bright apartment buildings and lovely parks have taken the place of the old small houses/replace the old houses/have risen from the former old house areas 要点二：个人感受以及未来期待 为家乡发展倍感自豪：feel deeply proud of its fast moving development/take pride in great changes/be glad for progress 期许日后家乡更加绿意盎然：sincerely hope my hometown will become greener in the coming days/turn more beautiful/keep developing well 5．例文： Dear Tom,     I’m from Henan. I’d love to tell you about my wonderful hometown!     There are many famous places in Henan, such as Shaolin Temple and Longmen Grottoes. They are famous all over the world. Many visitors come to Henan every year to enjoy the beauty of the place. In the last few years, great changes have taken place. New roads are built and the environment becomes cleaner. High-speed trains make travel easier. If you come, please wear comfortable shoes because we will walk a lot. Also, don’t miss the delicious local food like Huimian.     I hope you can come and enjoy your stay here. Welcome to Henan! Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 第一步：[审题立意]   确定文体： 应用文，一般现在时，一般将来时，现在完成时 明确要点： 著名景点；近年家乡发生的变化；来访小贴士（穿鞋、美食） 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项： 邮件中须包括提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名；词数80词左右（文中已给出内容，不计入总词数）。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段： 问候，点明身份，引出话题，告诉Tom想要介绍自己的家乡河南。 主体段： 介绍名胜古迹；讲述近几年家乡的发展变化；给出来游玩的实用提示。 结尾段： 表达期盼，发出邀请，欢迎来到河南。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一： 河南著名旅游景点 Shaolin Temple and Longmen Grottoes/Yuntai Mountain/White Horse Temple等 要点二：近几年家乡的巨大变化 New roads are built and the environment becomes cleaner/High-speed trains make travel easier/living conditions improve a lot/more places for fun and relaxation等 要点三：来访建议 wear comfortable shoes because we will walk a lot/don’t miss the delicious local food like Huimian/bring your camera/take an umbrella等 6．例文：    In recent years, China has witnessed remarkable development and changes, which have significantly influenced every aspect of people’s lives.     Technology develops fast. AI tools like DeepSeek make learning easier and faster. Also, Chinese movies such as Ne Zha 2 are popular worldwide. These changes make our daily life more convenient and colorful. We feel truly proud of our great motherland.    As teenagers, we should study hard to build a better future. We must love our country and spread Chinese culture to the world. Only in this way can we contribute to society. I believe China will become even stronger with our joint efforts. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，介绍国家发展+抒发观点，以一般现在时为主 明确要点： ①国家近几年各方面发展变化；②变化对生活带来的影响；③青少年应该怎么做。 确定人称：第一人称（we/our） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、学校名称；词数控制在80左右，给出开头不计入总词数。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：使用题目给出的起始句，总起全文，引出中国发展巨大变化。 主体第一段：列举科技、文化领域发展实例，对应要点 “国家发展变化”。 主体第二段 + 结尾段：先说明发展带给生活的影响，再阐述青少年的行动，最后升华情感。 [第三步：要点分层展开] 要点一：国家近几年各方面发展变化 可选素材：人工智能DeepSeek、电影《哪吒 2》、春晚机器人；也可拓展高铁、移动支付等。 句型：Technology develops fast. 要点二：变化给生活带来的影响 表达方向：生活更加便捷、丰富多彩；拓宽视野；学习方式革新 句型：These changes make our daily life more convenient and colorful. 要点三：作为青少年应该怎么做 行动方向：努力学习知识、提升自我、报效祖国 句型：As teenagers, we should study hard to build a better future. We must love our country and spread Chinese culture to the world. 7．例文： My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. In the past, people used to live in low and old houses. The roads were narrow and dirty. There were few trees around. Now, many tall buildings have appeared everywhere. The roads are wide and clean. We can see green trees and flowers on both sides. How beautiful my hometown is! Life is becoming better and better than before. I hope my hometown will be more modern and convenient in the future. I love my hometown deeply. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般过去时、现在完成时和一般现在时结合 明确要点：家乡过去的样子 (used to/past)、现在的变化 (now/present)、感受 (feelings)、未来期待 (future) 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总体介绍家乡发生了巨大变化 主体段：对比过去和现在的具体变化（住房、道路、环境等） 结尾段：表达对家乡变化的感叹及对未来的期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡过去的样子 people used to live in low and old houses./The roads were narrow and dirty./small cottages/muddy paths 要点二：家乡现在的样子 many tall buildings have appeared everywhere./The roads are wide and clean./modern skyscrapers/broad avenues 要点三：变化带来的感受及未来期待 感受：How beautiful my hometown is!/Life is becoming better and better than before./What a great change!/more comfortable and convenient 期待：I hope my hometown will be more modern and convenient in the future./look forward to/brighter future 8．例文： The Great Changes in My Hometown My hometown is a small city in the south of China. In the past few years, great changes have taken place here. Old low houses have been replaced by tall modern buildings. Narrow dirty streets are now wide and clean, with green trees and colorful flowers on both sides. There are also new shopping malls and parks for people to relax. I think these changes come from the rapid development of our country. The government has invested a lot in building infrastructure and improving people’s lives. I feel really proud and happy about these changes. My hometown has become more beautiful and convenient. I’m looking forward to its even brighter future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以现在完成时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：家乡发生的巨大变化、产生变化的原因、自身对于变化的感受 确定人称：第一人称（My/I） 注意事项：词数80词左右；不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起，简单介绍家乡并引出家乡出现巨大变化 主体段：先描写家乡具体改变，再分析变化产生的原因 结尾段：抒发个人感受，展望家乡未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡的巨大变化 可描写房屋、道路、绿化、休闲场所等方面变化： Old low houses have been replaced by tall modern buildings./ with green trees and colorful flowers on both sides/Old houses are replaced by modern buildings./more green plants are planted along streets/new public parks attract lots of visitors等 要点二：变化产生的原因 可以围绕国家发展、政府投入基础设施建设展开：I think these changes come from the rapid development of our country./The government has invested a lot in building infrastructure and improving people’s lives./the government pays attention to city construction/people’s living conditions keep improving等 要点三：个人感受 表达自豪、开心，期待家乡更好的发展：I feel really proud and happy about these changes./be filled with pride/enjoy the convenient life/hope my hometown will develop further等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $