专项训练（三）写作-【通成学典】2026-2027学年预备九年级英语暑期升级训练（8升9外研版）

期升级训练英语（外研版）八年级 写 】典题在线 机器人在日常生活中扮演着越来越重要的 角色。机器人有可能承担教师的工作。你愿意 选择机器人当你的老师吗？请就此话题提出你 的观点以及理由。 要求： 1.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名； 2.不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总 词数。 Recently,there has been a heated discussion on whether robots should be our teachers. 审题谋篇， “科学技术与工程，人类发明与创新”属于 义务教育课程标准中的“人与社会”范畴，主要 包括社会服务与人际沟通，文学、艺术与体育， 历史、社会与文化和科学与技术。该话题主要 谈论科技在我们日常生活中的应用。这是各地 中考英语真题中最常考的话题作文之一。 体裁 议论文 时态 一般现在时 人称 第三人称 1.首先亮明观点：是否愿意选择机器人当 老师。 要点 2.其次，阐述机器人能否担任教师的理由。 3.最后总结并说明自己的看法。 作 写作提纲 开头： 亮明 I don't think making robots 观点 our teachers is a wise decision Firstly,robots don't have feelings .. whether robots 正文： Meanwhile,we can't judge should be our 阐述 teachers 理由 things… Last but not least,robots just teach students knowledge... 结尾： ..Therefore,robots cannot do 重申 观点 this or become real teachers. 高分解码 [习作初稿] Recently,there has been a heated discussion on whether robots should be our teachers.I think making robots our teachers is not a wise decision. Firstly,robots don't have feelings.They may cause the classes boring and students can't communicate with them better.Meanwhile, we can't judge things just according to "right" or“wrong”,but robots can only define your actions as right or wrong things,so it's difficult of robots to solve some problems. Thirdly,robots just teach students knowledge and don't teach them to learn how to be a real person.We go to school not only to study skills,but also to learn to be a kind, responsible and honest person. Teaching is a long-time job and teachers' experience and skills are special and valuable. Sometimes teachers will influence students positively by teaching them knowledge and good habits.So robots cannot do this or become real teachers. [名师点评]本文采用“三段论”结构：首先表达 自己的观，点，接着分别列举三个论据来支撑自已 的观点，最后总结并阐述自己的看法。本文结构 完整，条理清晰，整体上是一篇不错的作文。 但本文在细节方面仍有一些语法错误需要 改正，如第①②③句均存在此问题。另外，本文 在句式、遣词造句方面仍有待提升。如：①句属 于中式英语；②句可改为定语从句；④句表达不 够简洁；⑤句的连接词不够高级。 [升格专练] A,单句改错：请找出并改正下列句子中唯一的 一处错误。 1.I think making robots our teachers is not a wise decision. 2.They may cause the classes boring and students can't communicate with them better. 3.so it's difficult of robots to solve some problems B.句式升级：请根据要求完成下列句子。 1.Firstly,robots don't have feelings.They may cause the classes boring and students can't communicate with them better..(合并 为一句话) 2.Thirdly,robots just teach students knowledge and don't teach them to learn how to be a real person.(用Last but not least及rather than改写) 整合提优 3.So robots cannot do this or become real teachers..(更换连接词) [高分范文] Recently,there has been a heated discussion on whether robots should be our teachers.I don't think making robots our teachers is a wise decision. Firstly,robots don't have feelings,which may cause the classes to be boring and students can't communicate with them better. Meanwhile,we can't judge things just according to“right”or“wrong”,but robots can only define your actions as right or wrong things,so it's difficult for robots to solve some problems.Last but not least,robots just teach students knowledge rather than ways of being a real person.We go to school not only to study skills,but also to learn to be a kind, responsible and honest person. Teaching is a long-time job and teachers' experience and skills are special and valuable. Sometimes teachers will influence students positively by teaching them knowledge and good habits.Therefore,robots cannot do this or become real teachers. ©@自主训练 科技发展日新月异，机器人正在走进千家 万户。假设你是李华，你家正在使用扫地机器 人和厨房机器人，但你一直担心机器人对家庭 的潜在威胁(potential danger)。请你以“My views on home robots'”为题写一篇英语短文，谈 谈你对家庭机器人的看法。 要求：1.文中不能出现真实的人名和校 名；2.词数100左右。 My views on home robots二、1.B词义猜测题。下文提及“曾参从小丧父，他非 常尊重他的母亲”，故画线单词的词意为“孝顺的”。 2.A推理判断题。由the mother grew worried可知，曾 参的母亲咬手指是因为焦虑。 3.D推理判断题。本文主要讲述了曾参因孝顺母亲，与 母亲之间有着深厚的情感联结，甚至能在母亲焦虑时有心 灵感应。这体现了父母与孩于之间可以深刻理解彼此。 三、1.On December10,1901.由第一段中的“On December 10,1901,the first Nobel Prizes were awarded. 可知答案。 2.He left more than nine million U.S.dollars.由第二 段中的“In his will,.he left more than nine million U.S. dollars to set up a foundation.”可知答案。 3.The Nobel Peace Prize.由第三段中的“Among them,only the Peace Prize can be given to organizations of more than three people..”可知答案。 4.Because the Nobel team can't find a suitable winner for that prize.由第五段中的“If the Nobel team can't find a suitable winner for a prize,it will be omitted..”可知答案。 5.I would choose a medical scientist.He/She would help save millions of lives and improve public health around the world..(答案不唯一，合理即可) 写作 【典题在线】 A 1.I don't think making robots our teachers is a wise decision. 2.They may cause the classes to be boring and students can't communicate with them better. 3.so it's difficult for robots to solve some problems B.1.Firstly,robots don't have feelings,which may cause the classes to be boring and students can't communicate with them better. 2.Last but not least,robots just teach students knowledge rather than ways of being a real person. 3.Therefore,robots cannot do this or become real teachers. 【自主训练】 One possible version: My views on home robots With the fast development of science and technology, home robots are becoming popular.In my home,a sweeping robot cleans the floor and a kitchen robot helps cook every day.They save us much time and make our life easier.But I always worry about their potential dangers.First,they may break down and cause small accidents at home.Meanwhile,if we rely on them too much,we will become lazy and lose the ability to do housework by ourselves. From my point of view,we should use home robots properly.They are good helpers,but we can never let them replace our own hands and minds. 整合提优综合检测 一、1.C根据“Creative vloggers are using AI technology to...famous people from history,like Li Bai and Du Fu, back to life’.”可知，此处想表达“让历史名人‘复活”。 2.D根据“These videos..by AI have become popular'” 可知，此处表示这些视频是由人工智能技术制作的。 3.A根据“Du Fu shares his..during the An-Shi Rebellion(755一763)”可推知，此处表示杜甫分享他在安 史之乱期间的经历。 4.B like trying to stay healthy by drinking goji berry water but still going to bed late可推知，此处表示李 时珍在开玩笑地讨论现代生活方式。 5.D根据“These videos..me a chance to learn more about important people in history”可知，此处表示视频提 供了解历史人物的机会。 6.B根据“It's a pity that I..knew much about their stories before”可知，此处表示以前几乎不知道他们的故 事，hardly几乎不，符合语境 7.A根据“These kinds of videos also make people more excited to..history and culture,”以及下文广东网友的经 历可推知，此处表示视频激发人们探索历史和文化的兴趣。 8.D根据“An online user from Guangdong..her feelings in a comment under one of the videos'”可知，l此处 表示分享感受。 9.A根据“I used not to be interested in history,but now I am...and even visit the library to search for more information when something really interests me."可知， but表示转折，以前不感兴趣，现在应该是感兴趣了，所以 是好奇的。 10.C根据“Hlowever,not everyone says yes to these videos that rebuild images of historical characters.Some people feel...”f和“That's different from their...images in history”可知，有些人认为这些视频中的历史人物与他 们的传统形象不符，所以对此感到生气。 11.B根据“That's different from their..images in history”可知，历史形象应该是“真实的”或“传统的”。real 最贴切，与视频中的形象形成对比。 12.C根据“I think the videos do harm to their images to some degree though they...focus on entertainment." 知，此处表示视频“实际上”专注于娱乐。 2