专项训练（一）写作-【通成学典】2026-2027学年预备九年级英语暑期升级训练（8升9外研版）

期升级训练英语（外研版）八年级 写 】典题在线 我们身边有许多优秀人物，他们不仅在自 己的工作领域取得了巨大的成就，而且关爱他 人，温暖世界。作为中学生，我们可以从自身做 起，从小事做起，让生活变得更美好。学校英文 报开展了以“Small acts mean a lot'”为题的征文 活动，请结合自身经历写一篇短文，描述你曾做 过的微小的善事。 内容包括： 1.One or two good things you once did. 2.The feelings small acts brought you. 3.Your understanding about“small acts'”, 要求：文章不少于90词。 Small acts mean a lot Great people not only make big achievements in their work,but also care about others and warm the world.As middle school students, we can also help by doing some small acts. 审题谋篇 “自我认识、自我管理、自我提升”属于义务 教育课程标准中的“人与自我”范畴，主要包括 生活与学习，做人与做事。该话题主要谈论如 何进行自我认识、自我管理及自我提升，以及通 过该主题衍生出的善意、美德等内容。这是各地 中考英语真题中最常考的话题作文之一。 体裁 记叙文 时态 一般现在时和一般过去时 人称 第一人称 1.首先提出话题：作为青少年，我们可以做 一些小事。 2.其次，讲述自己曾做过的一两件小事，以 要点 及这些小事对自己的影响 3.最后总结：这些事情虽然很小，但是对这 个世界意义非凡。 作 写作提纲 开头：利用 Great people not only... 伟人引出 but also...As middle 话题 school students,we... Last month,I helped... 正文：讲述 Though doing these is 自己曾做过 Small acts 的帮助他人 tiring,I felt happy inside mean a lot These small acts made 的小事及其 意义 me ..A simple act of help can...Small acts... 结尾：发出 So let's start with small 号召，提倡 从小事做起 acts.We should… 高分解码 [习作初稿]Small acts mean a lot Great people not only make big achieve- ments in their work,but also care about others and warm the world.As middle school students, we can also help by doing some small acts. Last month,I helped an old lady carry heavy bags upstairs.She smiled and thanked me warm.Another time,I picked up litter in our schoolyard.Doing these is tiring.I felt happy inside.These small acts made me realised that kindness spreads easily.A simple act of help can brighten someone's day.We don't need to do big things to make a difference.Small acts can create a warm world. So let's start with small acts.They mean a lot. [名师点评]本文主题明确，段落清晰明了，语 言简单易懂，使用了基础且常见的词汇和简单 句。但是短文在细节和句式方面还存在一些错 误，①④句存在语法错误，需要改正。另外，该 作文在语法、句式、用词方面还有一定的提升空 间，其中②③两个简单句可以整合为一个复合 句，更加简洁；⑤句可以修改为一个含有比较级 的句子；⑥句可以拓展为一个复合句，进而提升 语言魅力。 [升格专练] A,单句改错：请找出并改正下列句子中唯一的 一处错误。 1.She smiled and thanked me warm. 2.These small acts made me realised that kindness spreads easily. B.句式升级：请根据要求完成下列句子。 1.Doing these is tiring.I felt happy inside. though改为复合句) 2.Small acts can create a warm world.(用比较 级和f改写句子) 3.They mean a lot.(用because补充句子) [高分范文]Small acts mean a lot Great people not only make big achieve- ments in their work,but also care about others and warm the world.As middle school students, we can also help by doing some small acts. Last month,I helped an old lady carry heavy bags upstairs.She smiled and thanked me warmly.Another time,I picked up litter in our schoolyard.Though doing these is tiring,I felt happy inside.These small acts made me realise that kindness spreads easily.A simple act of help can brighten someone's day.We don't need to do big things to make a difference. Small acts can create a warmer world if everyone can do small things for others. 整合提优 So let's start with small acts.We should call on more people to do more small things because they mean a lot to others. ©@自主训练 假定你是李华，考试临近，同学们压力较 大。英语老师Mrs.White为此组织了以“A few ways to deal with stress'”为题的活动。请 根据你们小组讨论后制作的海报，写一篇英语 发言稿，代表小组在班上作总结发言。词数80 左右。提示： A few ways to deal with stress exercise listen to music every day /8 eat proper meal get enough rest express your stay positive feelings Try our best to get ourselves out of stress and grow up happily！ A few ways to deal with stress Good morning,everyone!Recently,many students have felt stressed because exams are coming. In our group,we discussed a few ways to deal with stress. Thank you for listening!8.B连接并列短语better tools和more confidence,故用 and。 9.B express thanks to sb.向某人表达感谢 10.B most importantly最重要的是。 二、1.A词义猜测题。根据后文between cities through canals可推知，deliver意为“运送”，与carry意思相近。 2.C段落大意题。第四段主要讲述运河闸门对鱼类造 成的危险，以及当地官员开发“鱼类门铃”的原因。 3.C写作意图题。作者写本文的目的是介绍“鱼类门 铃”这种帮助鱼类迁徙的创意方式。 三、1.E前文提到多数学生喜欢长暑假，后文转折说明 部分学生偏好全年制。 2.F前文提到假期会分散，这就意味着暑假会没那么 长，但会有更多短假。 3.C由“But is studying year-round better for students?” 及下文Gregory和Sarah的观点可知答案。 4.B Gregory的论述围绕“短假期可缓解疲劳、减轻返 校压力”展开，选项B符合题意」 5.A Sarah的观点是反对全年制，选项A引出下文她对 暑假的推崇。 写 作 【典题在线】 A.1.She smiled and thanked me warmly. 2.These small acts made me realise that kindness spreads easily. B.1.Though doing these is tiring,I felt happy inside. 2.Small acts can create a warmer world if everyone can do small things for others. 3.We should call on more people to do more small things because they mean a lot to others. 【自主训练】 One possible version: A few ways to deal with stress Good morning,everyone!Recently,many students have felt stressed because exams are coming.In our group,we discussed a few ways to deal with stress. First,listening to soft music can help us relax our minds.Second,we should exercise every day to keep our bodies strong and our minds sharp.Third,eating proper meals is important.Besides,getting enough rest every night is necessary for us.We should also express our feelings to friends or family when we feel worried. Most importantly,we should stay positive.Believing in ourselves can reduce stress a lot. Let's try these ways and relieve our stress to face exams with a calm mind. Thank you for listening! 专项训练（二) 语法（被动语态、情态动词） 一、A1.should有一些我们需要遵守的重要规则。 2.must首先，我们必须对父母和朋友诚实。 3.had better我们最好不要轻易放弃。 4.can我们可以向老师或同学寻求帮助。 5.have to有时我们不得不熬夜完成作业. 6.shouldn't但我们不应该养成这种习惯。 7.should我们应该参加更多的课外活动。 8.mustn't晚上一定不能独自外出。 9.need need to do sth.需要做某事。 10.have to我们迟早不得不变得独立。 B1.may此处表示“可能会面临”，可能性适中，用may 符合语境 2.might“有些地方几乎无降雨”是不确定的情况，可能 性稍小（不是所有地方都这样），故用might,突出语气的 委婉和不确定性。 3.may前文提到“有些地方可能无降雨”，由此推测植物 “可能得不到水”，可能性适中，用may符合语境。 4.must根据look so weak可知是“一定又饿又渴”，表 示肯定推测应用must。 5.can小动物能够躲在地下，表示“能力、能够”应用can。 6.can't它们不可能永远待在地下。 7.can't我们不能把自然的馈赠当作理所当然。 8.may资源可能有一天会用完。 9.must表示必须，强调责任与态度」 10.can我们能够让环境越来越好。 二、A1.by被动语态中引出动作的执行者，应用by。 2.was held talk与hold构成被动关系，由learned可知 用一般过去时。 3.are given由by可知为被动语态。 方法归纳 动词被动语态填空 判断主语与动词的关系一主语是动作执行者用 主动语态，是动作承受者用被动语态(b十过去分词)。 注意时间状语和语境，同时结合主谓一致确定be动词 的正确形式。 4.A泛指一个教师用不定冠词a。 5.but空格前后表示转折关系，故用but。 6.will be needed由by me in the future可知，用一般将 来时的被动语态。 7.will be realised主语my dream与realise构成被动关系。 8.my由classes可知，用my修饰名词。 9.are supported由by teamwork可知，为被动语态，陈 述客观事实用一般现在时。