第12天 写作专题(二)-【通成学典】2026-2027学年预备九年级英语暑期升级训练（8升9人教版）

第12天 】典题在线 假如你是陈刚，你校校报正在开展“中学生 做家务”的主题征文活动。请你根据以下要点 和要求并结合自己的事例和收获写一篇短文 投稿。 要点： 1.家务劳动（扫地、倒垃圾…）； 2.自己的事例。 要求： 1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等； 3.不少于80词；短文开头已给出，不计入 总词数 For middle school students,doing housework is part of life. 审题谋篇， 本文是一篇关于劳动教育的话题写作，属 于说明文范畴。根据要点提示，本文可分为三 段：第一段点明主题，阐述自己的观点；第二段 阐述叙述自己的事例；第三段总结收获并发出 倡议。此类写作的时态多以一般现在时为主。 人称以第一人称为主。 写作提纲， 点明 For middle school students. 主题 doing housework is part of life... 做家务 具体 As for me,I often...For example.. 的经历 介绍 Although I am a little tired... I have learnt a lot from... 总结 收获 More importantly,what I do... So let's do housework from now on. 高分解码 [习作初稿】 For middle school students,doing housework 复习·整合培优 写作专题（二） is part of life.We students should do some simple housework like taking out the rubbish and sweeping the floor.We are necessary to develop our independence. As for me,I often help my parents do many housework at weekends.For example, I usually clean the windows and water flowers. I even help my mother cook.I finish the housework.I can also see a tidy and comfortable home.Although I am a little tired sometimes,but I have a sense of satisfaction. I learnt a lot from doing housework.It is a good way for me to master life skills.Also, what I do brings me happiness.Housework is not a trouble,but a chance to grow.So let's do housework from now on. [名师点评]本文采用“三段论”结构：首先表达 自己的观点，接着阐述了自己做家务的事例，最 后总结并提出倡议。本文结构完整，内容充实， 多处使用亮点短语take out the rubbish、As for me、For example和相关句式，整体上是一篇不 错的作文。 但本文在细节方面仍有一些语法错误需要 改正，如第②③⑤⑥句均存在此问题。另外，本 文在句式、遣词造句方面仍有待提升。如：①句 情态动词的使用不够高级，②句属于中式英语， ④句逻辑关系不够流畅，⑦句的连接词不够高 级等。 [升格专练] A,单句改错：请找出并改正下列句子中的错误。 1.We are necessary to develop our independence. 23 窖期升级训练（®版）八年级英语 2.As for me,I often help my parents do many housework at weekends. 3.Although I am a little tired sometimes,but I have a sense of satisfaction. 4.I learnt a lot from doing housework. B.句式升级：请根据要求完成下列句子。 1.We students should do some simple housework like taking out the rubbish and sweeping the floor.(更换为动词短语) 2.I finish the housework.I can also see a tidy and comfortable home..(变为复合句) 3.Also,what I do brings me happiness.(更换 连接词) [高分范文] For middle school students,doing housework is part of life.We students are supposed to do some simple housework like taking out the rubbish and sweeping the floor. It is necessary for us to develop our independence. As for me,I often help my parents do some housework at weekends.For example,I usually clean the windows and water flowers.I even help my mother cook.Every time I finish the housework,I can see a tidy and comfortable home.Although I am a little tired sometimes,I have a sense of satisfaction. I have learnt a lot from doing housework. It is a good way for me to master life skills. More importantly,what I do brings me happiness.Housework is not a trouble,but a chance to grow.So let's do housework from now on. ©自主训练 研究表明，从小做家务的孩子长大后更容 易成功。假如你是林丹，你校英语报发起了以 “A helper of my family'”为题的征文活动。请 你根据以下要点和要求写一篇英语短文，介绍 你曾经做过的一次家务劳动及感悟。 要点： 1.What chores do you often do? 2.When and how did you do them? 3.What have you learnt from them? 要求： 1.短文须包括以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； 3.词数100左右。 A helper of my family二、A[语篇解读]本文讲述了作者参加的一次很有 意义的志愿者活动。 1.was picking由were watering可知，此处应用过 去进行时。由主语Lily可知，此处应填was picking。 2.a volunteer以辅音音素开头，用不定冠词a。 3.as as soon as表示“一…就.”，是固定 搭配。 4.has organized由标志词So far可知，本句是现 在完成时态。主语team是第三人称单数，故填has organized.。 5.since主句是现在完成时，I joined the team two months ago表示时间点，故填连词since。 6.that“so.,that..”表示“如此…以至 于…”，是固定搭配。 7.were taking此处表示正在进行的动作，即“正 在散步的老人”。故应用过去进行时。 8.am unless引导条件状语从句，其时态遵循“主 将从现”原则。主语I是第一人称，故填系动词am。 9.haven't felt由标志词yet可知，本句是现在完 成时。由主语I可知，此处应填haven't felt。 10.will join由soon及后面的will become可知， 此处应用一般将来时表达。故填will join。 B[语篇解读]本文讲述了作者一次难忘的海岸 之旅。 1.that“so..that.”意为“如此…以至 于…”，是固定搭配。 2.taking keep doing sth.意为“不断做某事”。 3.was drinking妈妈正在喝水。此处应用过去进 行时表达。 4.Unluckily根据下文可知，不幸的是，作者一家 没能找到一条好走的路。 5.had本句是一般过去时，故填动词过去式had。 6.of the top of意为“…的顶部”。 7.smiled作者一家都面带笑容。 8.have travelled由So far可知，本句是现在完成 时。由主语I可知应填have travelled。. 9.for本句是现在完成时，由时间段half a year可 知，此处应填介词for。 10.best作者认为只有勇敢地面对困难并想办法 克服，才能享受最好的风景。故填gOod的最高级形 式best。 第12天写作专题（二） 【典题在线】 A.1.It is necessary for us to develop our independence. 2.As for me,I often help my parents do some housework at weekends. 3.Although I am a little tired sometimes,I have a sense of satisfaction./I am a little tired sometimes, but I have a sense of satisfaction. 4.I have learnt a lot from doing housework. B.1.We students are supposed to do some simple housework like taking out the rubbish and sweeping the floor. 2.Every time/After I finish the housework,I can see a tidy and comfortable home. 3.More importantly/What's more,what I do brings me happiness. 【自主训练】 One possible version: A helper of my family I'm a good helper of my family.I often help my parents do some chores like washing the dishes, sweeping the floor and washing the car. Last night,my parents didn't return home by nine o'clock.Seeing some dirty dishes in the kitchen,I decided to wash them by myself.Then I entered the kitchen,put on an apron and began to wash them.Unluckily,I dropped one on the ground and broke it.When my parents came back home,I told them the truth.To my surprise,they didn't punish me at all.Instead,they praised me highly. When washing the dishes,I realized that my parents not only work hard,but also do plenty of chores every day,but they never complain.That's why I'm willing to help them do more chores and make them relax themselves after work!