Unit 4 Life is beautiful 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年英语译林版九年级上册

**基本信息** 聚焦“生命意义”主题，构建从素材积累到篇章输出的系统性写作训练，融合语言能力与文化意识培养。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|4类主题词汇、12组高频搭配、4类功能表达|主题词汇分类记忆法、功能表达情境应用法|从基础词汇到功能句型，搭建“词-搭配-表达”三级语言支架| |黄金句型库|4类基础句型、5组句型升级示例|句型升级四步法（具体事例+对比手法+细节描写+引语引用）|从基础句到复杂句，实现表达从简单到高级的进阶| |高分写作方法|1篇典例精析（含审题构思、亮点解析）|“四要素”写作结构法（人物身份-事迹-品质-影响）|以征文题为例，示范“审题-构思-表达-润色”完整写作流程| |阶梯训练|3级句子训练（汉译英/仿写/升级）、1篇篇章训练|句子升级“三增法”（增细节/增逻辑/增情感）|从单句翻译到篇章创作，形成“基础巩固-能力提升-综合应用”的训练梯度|

Unit 4 Life is beautiful 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 生命与意义相关名词 purpose 重要意义；目的；意图 meaning 意义 goal 目标 contribution 贡献 society 社会 value 价值 existence 存在 quality 品质 achievement 成就 spirit 精神 品质与美德相关名词 helpfulness 乐于助人 kindness 善良 patience 耐心 honesty 诚实 devotion 献身；投入 courage 勇气 responsibility 责任 generosity 慷慨 modesty 谦虚 gratitude 感恩 职业与身份相关名词 doctor 医生 nurse 护士 teacher 教师 dentist 牙科医生 social worker 社会工作者 volunteer 志愿者 hero 英雄 ordinary person 普通人 daughter 女儿 wife 妻子 动词与动词短语 devote ... to ... 把……奉献给…… contribute to 贡献；增进；促成 serve 服务；满足……的需要 judge 判断；认为 make up one’s mind 下定决心 bring meaning to 给……带来意义 give back to 回馈 influence 影响 encourage 鼓励 inspire 激励 2. 高频搭配 devote one’s life to 把一生奉献给…… make a contribution to 为……做贡献 live a meaningful life 过有意义的生活 give back to society 回馈社会 in need 在贫困中；在困难中 make a difference 有影响；起重要作用 have a heart full of love 有一颗充满爱的心 at all times 总是；随时 be satisfied with 对……感到满意 take pride in 以……为豪 serve the needs of 满足……的需要 fall in love with 爱上 in one’s old age 在晚年 3. 写作功能表达 描述人物奉献 ... has devoted a large part of her life to ... ……把一生中的大部分时间奉献给了…… ... spent her life protecting ... ……用一生保护…… ... worked hard to ... for over ... years. ……努力了……年去…… It was her duty to ... 她的职责是…… 表达生命意义 Life may be short, but we can make it meaningful. 生命可能短暂，但我们可以让它有意义。 To have a meaningful life, you must devote yourself to something greater than you. 要过有意义的生活，你必须把自己奉献给比你更伟大的事物。 Helping others brings meaning to life. 帮助他人给生活带来意义。 表达感悟与敬佩 I am amazed by his/her story. 我对他/她的故事感到惊讶。 I think ... has a very meaningful life. 我认为……过着非常有意义的生活。 His/Her spirit encourages me to help other people too. 他/她的精神也鼓励我去帮助他人。 表达决心与计划 I am greatly influenced by ... and have made up my mind to ... 我深受……的影响，并下定决心去…… I want to learn as much as I can from ... 我想尽可能多地向……学习。 I hope to live a life like ... 我希望过一种像……一样的生活。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 I think ... has a very meaningful life. 我认为……过着非常有意义的生活。 ... is known to many as ... because she has devoted a large part of her life to ... ……被许多人称为……，因为她把生命中的大部分时间奉献给了…… Let me share with you the story of a person who has lived a truly meaningful life. 让我和你分享一个过着真正有意义生活的人的故事。 We all hope to live a meaningful life, but how can we do that? 我们都希望过有意义的生活，但我们该怎么做呢？ 2. 主体句型 She has devoted a large part of her life to researching and protecting ... 她把生命中的大部分时间奉献给了研究和保护…… Life was difficult at first because there was no electricity or running water. 起初生活很艰难，因为没有电也没有自来水。 She fell in love with the beauty of the caves and wanted to protect them. 她爱上了这些石窟的美，并想保护它们。 He was an ordinary person with a great heart. 他是一个有着伟大心灵的普通人。 Whenever he is needed, he is always ready to lend a hand. 每当需要他的时候，他总是乐于伸出援手。 3. 结尾句型 I think any life can have meaning if we contribute in some way. 我认为如果我们以某种方式做出贡献，任何生命都有意义。 I am greatly influenced by ... and have made up my mind to ... 我深受……的影响，并下定决心去…… Her story encourages me to find purpose in my own life. 她的故事鼓励我在自己的生活中找到目标。 Let us all try to live a life that makes the world a better place. 让我们都努力过一种让世界变得更美好的生活。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 She lived a meaningful life. 她过着有意义的生活。 Fan Jinshi has devoted a large part of her life to researching and protecting the ancient Dunhuang caves. 樊锦诗把生命中的大部分时间奉献给了研究和保护古老的敦煌石窟。 Lei Feng helped others. 雷锋帮助了别人。 Lei Feng was an ordinary person with a great heart. He helped people his whole life and gave love to those around him. 雷锋是一个有着伟大心灵的普通人。他一生都在帮助别人，把爱给予身边的人。 He is a good person. 他是一个好人。 He is always ready to lend a hand whenever he is needed and never expects anything in return. 每当需要他的时候，他总是乐于伸出援手，从不期望任何回报。 Zhang Guimei started a school. 张桂梅创办了一所学校。 Zhang Guimei even started a free high school for girls in Yunnan Province and has helped thousands of girls get an education. 张桂梅甚至在云南创办了一所免费的女子高中，帮助了成千上万的女孩接受教育。 I want to help others. 我想帮助别人。 I am greatly influenced by her story and have made up my mind to devote myself to helping those in need. 我深受她故事的影响，并下定决心致力于帮助那些有需要的人。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 假设你是九年级学生李华，你校英语社团正在举办主题为“A Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文参赛，介绍一位对你影响最深的人。 内容包括： 1.这个人是谁 (家人、老师、名人等均可)； 2.他/她做过什么令你印象深刻的事； 3.你从他/她身上学到了什么品质； 4.他/她如何影响了你的人生选择。 要求： 1.90-110词； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚； 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 A Person Who Has Influenced Me Most ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出四个必须涵盖的要点：人物身份、印象深刻的事、学到的品质、对人生选择的影响。时态上，描述人物过去的事迹用一般过去时，描述人物的性格品质和影响用一般现在时。结构上分四段：第一段引出人物并简要介绍其身份，第二段详述印象深刻的事迹，第三段总结学到的品质，第四段说明对其人生选择的影响。 【例文欣赏】 A Person Who Has Influenced Me Most The person who has influenced me most is my grandmother. She used to work as a teacher in a rural primary school for more than 40 years. She never made much money, yet she helped hundreds of kids realize their dreams. She often says teaching means spreading hope rather than chasing fame. Even after retiring, she volunteers in the library and reads stories to children every weekend. I learn patience, kindness and selflessness from her. She lets me know a valuable life lies in serving others. Her spirit shapes my future choice. I hope to major in education in college and become a helpful teacher just like her. 【亮点解析】 开篇用定语从句引出人物并交代身份。 “The person who has influenced me most is my grandmother.”一句点明人物，同时暗示了“影响最深”的主线。“used to work as a teacher in a rural primary school for more than 40 years”交代了她的职业和工作地点，用“for more than 40 years”强调奉献之久，为下文写无私精神打下铺垫。 用一个对比句写出深刻的价值观。 “She never made much money, yet she helped hundreds of kids realize their dreams.”这句是全文的点睛之笔。“never made much money”和“helped hundreds of kids”形成鲜明对比，物质上的“少”与成就上的“多”形成强烈反差，短短一句勾勒出奶奶淡泊名利、专注育人的形象。这种对比手法比直接说“她很无私”更有冲击力。 引入人物的原话，增加真实感。 “teaching means spreading hope rather than chasing fame”直接引用奶奶说过的话，让奶奶的形象有了自己的声音，而不是作者单方面的描述。“spreading hope”和“chasing fame”两个并列短语的对比进一步强化了她的价值观。这种“引语”手法让文章更有说服力和感染力。 细节描写体现人物的持续奉献。 “Even after retiring, she volunteers in the library and reads stories to children every weekend.”“Even after retiring”和“every weekend”两个时间短语，强调了奶奶的奉献没有因为退休而停止，反而成为一种持续的习惯，进一步深化了她“无私奉献”的形象。 品质一词三词，精准简洁。 “patience, kindness and selflessness”三个名词并列，概括了从奶奶身上学到的最核心的品质，简短有力。紧接着“She lets me know a valuable life lies in serving others”用一句话概括了她的人生哲学，从具体品质上升到人生价值观。 结尾将影响落到具体的人生选择。 “Her spirit shapes my future choice.”直接回答了“如何影响了你的人生选择”。“I hope to major in education in college and become a helpful teacher just like her.”给出了具体的行动目标——大学主修教育、成为老师，并再次以“just like her”呼应开头，形成人物关系的闭环。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 樊锦诗被称为“敦煌女儿”，因为她把生命中的大部分时间奉献给了保护敦煌石窟。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 她带领团队经过30多年的努力，创建了“数字敦煌”网站。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 雷锋是一个有着伟大心灵的普通人，他一生都在帮助别人。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 我相信如果我们以某种方式做出贡献，任何生命都有意义。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 我深受她故事的鼓舞，并下定决心去帮助那些有需要的人。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：... has devoted a large part of her life to ...（描述奉献） 例句：Fan Jinshi has devoted a large part of her life to researching and protecting the ancient Dunhuang caves. 樊锦诗把生命中的大部分时间奉献给了研究和保护古老的敦煌石窟。 （1）张桂梅把生命中的大部分时间奉献给了帮助贫困女孩接受教育。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）他把生命中的大部分时间奉献给了为山区人民送信。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型2：... was an ordinary person with a great heart.（描述平凡中的伟大） 例句：Lei Feng was an ordinary person with a great heart. 雷锋是一个有着伟大心灵的普通人。 （1）白芳礼是一个有着伟大心灵的普通人。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我的母亲是一个有着伟大心灵的普通人。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型3：Helping others brings meaning to life.（表达生命意义） 例句：Helping others brings meaning to life. 帮助他人给生活带来意义。 （1）奉献自己给社会给生活带来意义。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）为他人做好事给生活带来快乐和满足。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型4：Whenever he is needed, he is always ready to ...（描述乐于助人） 例句：Whenever he is needed, he is always ready to lend a hand. 每当需要他的时候，他总是乐于伸出援手。 （1）每当她的学生需要帮助时，她总是乐于提供支持。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）每当他的邻居遇到困难时，他总是乐于帮助他们。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型5：I am greatly influenced by ... and have made up my mind to ...（表达影响与决心） 例句：I am greatly influenced by her story and have made up my mind to help those in need. 我深受她故事的影响，并下定决心去帮助那些有需要的人。 （1）我深受张桂梅的影响，并下定决心将来成为一名教师。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我深受我父亲的影响，并下定决心要像他一样帮助他人。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：She helped others. 她帮助了别人。 升级句：She spent her whole life helping poor children get an education and never asked for anything in return. 她一生都在帮助贫困儿童接受教育，从不要求任何回报。 1. 基础句：She lived a meaningful life. 她过着有意义的生活。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：Lei Feng helped others. 雷锋帮助了别人。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：He is a good person. 他是一个好人。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：Zhang Guimei started a school. 张桂梅创办了一所学校。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：I want to help others. 我想帮助别人。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：His story touched me. 他的故事打动了我。 升级句： ____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 写作主题：The spirit hidden in ordinary plants 要求： 1. 至少3处比较级 2. 两处动名词 -ing 作主语 3. 结合樊锦诗、张桂梅两位时代榜样 4. 结尾升华价值观。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Fan Jinshi is known to many as the “Daughter of Dunhuang” because she has devoted a large part of her life to protecting the Dunhuang caves. 2. She led her team to create the “Digital Dunhuang” website after more than 30 years of hard work. 3. Lei Feng was an ordinary person with a great heart. He helped people his whole life. 4. I believe that any life can have meaning if we contribute in some way. 5. I am greatly encouraged by her story and have made up my mind to help those in need. Level 2 句型仿写 句型1 （1）Zhang Guimei has devoted a large part of her life to helping poor girls get an education. （2）He has devoted a large part of his life to delivering mail for people in the mountain areas. 句型2 （1）Bai Fangli was an ordinary person with a great heart. （2）My mother is an ordinary person with a great heart. 句型3 （1）Devoting oneself to society brings meaning to life. （2）Doing good things for others brings happiness and satisfaction to life. 句型4 （1）Whenever her students need help, she is always ready to offer support. （2）Whenever his neighbours have difficulties, he is always ready to help them. 句型5 （1）I am greatly influenced by Zhang Guimei and have made up my mind to become a teacher in the future. （2）I am greatly influenced by my father and have made up my mind to help others like him. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：Fan Jinshi has devoted a large part of her life to researching and protecting the ancient Dunhuang caves, which are an important national treasure. 樊锦诗把生命中的大部分时间奉献给了研究和保护古老的敦煌石窟，这些石窟是国家的重要瑰宝。 2. 升级句：Lei Feng was an ordinary person with a great heart. He spent most of his spare time helping others and contributing to society. 雷锋是一个有着伟大心灵的普通人。他把大部分业余时间都用来帮助他人和为社会做贡献。 3. 升级句：He is always ready to lend a hand whenever he is needed and never expects anything in return for his kindness. 每当需要他的时候，他总是乐于伸出援手，从不期望他的善举得到任何回报。 4. 升级句：Zhang Guimei started a free high school for girls in Yunnan Province and has helped thousands of poor girls get an education and change their lives. 张桂梅在云南创办了一所免费的女子高中，帮助了成千上万的贫困女孩接受教育并改变了她们的人生。 5. 升级句：I am greatly influenced by her story and have made up my mind to devote myself to helping those in need, just like she did. 我深受她故事的影响，并下定决心像她一样致力于帮助那些有需要的人。 6. 升级句：His story touched me deeply and made me realize that even ordinary people can live a truly meaningful life. 他的故事深深地打动了我，让我意识到即使是普通人也能过真正有意义的生活。 篇章训练（参考范文） Growing bamboo and growing peanuts bring us two important life spirits. Bamboo is much stronger than beautiful roses, and peanuts are more valuable than peach blossoms with bright flowers. Growing lotus also reminds us to keep a pure heart in bad conditions. Fan Jinshi is just like lotus, who spent all years in Dunhuang’s hard environment but never changed her mind. Zhang Guimei acts like peanuts, helping poor girls quietly without any praise. We shouldn’t waste time only chasing attractive looks. Inner spirit and quiet devotion are the most precious treasure for every teenager. We should learn from these plants and great role models to live more meaningful lives. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $